/lit/ - Literature

Please give crit if you post, if you want critiques the thread needs to be active, and in order to foster activity people critiquing others is necessary.
>>14102410
It flows nicely, I'm bad at critiquing poetry as I don't write it. I liked it, and that's about as substantial as I can get ,as far as other things
>I heard the mewlings of a now waking cat
Feels like you're stretching to fit a rhyme scheme here.
>And delight peasants with his noble sight
Peasants? Is the nobility of the sun something you're harping on for a reason? IT wasn't really established throughout the poem.
Nitpicking though, I liked it.