/lit/ - Literature

>>13965151
Alright here's what I have so far. What do you ya'll think? Excuse the retard format. I'm too poor to buy Photoshop, and too lazy to pirate and get good at it, but it's a first draft and I expect it to go through several drafts over several anons.
>>13964358
>>13964505
I think The Mail chapter in ATTC is one of my favorite examples of an author setting a stage. His description of the place and atmosphere was so on point that the illustration a few pages later was a near exact match of the picture in my head. That's something no other author has done for me.
>>13964483
The way he lets a scene play out feels borderline surreal at times (at least until it is explained later). Like the three Jacques in the beginning of ATTC.