/lit/ - Literature

>>22087953
Trying to put my self in her position
Both sound too try hard, nothing wrong with trying to get her "back" and obviously 99% understand some effort and thoughtfulness or preparedness is required for this but too much comes off as weird it a very high chance she get an 'ick' feeling .
I'm not sure what you means by love letters too like an actual letter? Depending on the history. But, nowadays as letters are a thing of the past(may be good or bad fore you) mostly for general communications
1. Idk what she's like the wordiness she may like but going with that it theme it still seems to come of as clingy and a little weird. But most of all it you seem possessive and I'd probably ignore you and if that doesn't work avoid you.
2. You sound like and autistic retard I have no more to say.

I understand the point you want to make and reason but perhaps break it down into smaller chunks of messages and tone down on the excessive style.
A sentence or two at a time but still get the exact same point across if you are messaging online. Also if it goes badly she cant show the entire thing to her friends and you can save some face. And so prepare say 5/6 initial statements to be used and modified as per the conversation and go from there. It may also be less sudden and natural.

But if it is an actual letter, write a few more draughts. I'd say maybe use the general gist of the second i.e i was at the shops and thought of you so on and so forth, i do kind of miss you, so on and so forth. Maybe use the gist like the previous but a toned down style of the first.

"Like you probably don't want to since I was so weird last time" don't bring this up, that brings the memory of the weirdness to light. If this weird interaction you had with her was your last it might not be the one which she remembers you by, maybe its something nice you did for her idk, something you said and maybe made some connection over. If you want to bring up a memory, make it a good one so she remembers something good and therefore possibly change her view of the letter.

HJust re-read it and put yourself almost literally in her position before sending it and while doing some drafts. How would you feel if you were her receiving this? What would it bring up? etc. Just my two cents and best of luck fren.

>>22028654
I noted it all down straight after i woke up a few weeks ago. That's also why its detailed.

I started off walking on a road to somewhere. I couldn't remember the reason or what i may have said but i needed to run. On a horse the police are chasing me, while i am riding away two other are in a car. Lovers, not on good terms with the police. As such when i next see a police car it is tipped over and damaged by me and my horse. After going further on, I am now walking. As i walk past I see the lovers again, this time in a crash, fire and debris is everywhere.

The man is searching for the woman, assuming that she is dead(burnt alive) he then in grief burns himself alive. Walking not too far on the woman is alive sitting on the ground. Feeling a compulsive need to run from the police before i was caught. I would get 10 years - resisting arrest x2, running from police, assaulting an officer etc. As i am running a somewhat sub-urban road I get a strong feeling of i must keep going fast. I come upon a right turn and i take it. Going through a sprawling sub-urban estate with small winding private roads. Very tightly packed, i run through them. I recognise this place as [-------]ton, but it is unlike anything i really remember it as. I run through it jumping over gardens fences for a while, exhilarating. As i leave the estate I am now at the top of an old [-------]ton. I proceed to walk so i am not caught running. I get a flashback(?).

I am younger, a woman i love is walking away says "It's ok you already have your own room". I go with my parents and my younger brother(I don't even have a younger brother IRL just one older), I am berated for something. I then go to a reception desk. She is a nun-up. This woman is telling me about other nun-ups and nun-up ups. She is finishing her shift and describing a nun-up says she is called the "cunt" but is actually one of the nicer ones. She hands me a bottle of vodka to drink. She walks away and i pour two shots. It smells pepperminty and tastes OK for vodka. She comes back and takes the vodka, drinks one shot.
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I have absolutely no idea what i meant by this.

>>21938667
Every reddit user should commit suicide

>>21918459
>If you must discuss such disparate and worthless subjects at least have the courtesy to take it to another board