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Would you still like it if the character weren't Japanese?

>> No.8351287

>>8351284
I don't read trash.

>> No.8351292

Get the fuck back to whatever whole you crawled out from.

>> No.8351294
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8351294

>Japanese
>handshakes with teacher and nurse

>> No.8351295

Hello, first time in /jp/?

>> No.8351329

>>8351294

Okay, so I wasn't the only one who noticed that. Good.

>> No.8351333

it's shit already, so I wouldn't even care in first place.

also get the fuck out of /jp/
>>>/a/
>>>/v/

>> No.8351339 [DELETED] 

>>8351294
It's a Western-influenced school. It reflects the real world status of KS as a Japanese-influenced Western game. I'm sure that imagery like this went straight over your head though.

>> No.8351350

>>8351339

I sincerely doubt that. If that was what they were going for and they didn't want to get called on their shit they could've added a quick half-sentence to point that out. Stop trying to cover their asses.

It could've been something as simple as,

>He reached out to shake my hand. .... Oh, right, handshakes. This is... a western thing, right?

Stop trying to defend them. The game is passable, but medicore and full of holes where the devs didn't do research.

>> No.8351368 [DELETED] 

>>8351350
I was actually (very poorly) trying to flamebait. I'm not sure whether your post means I was successful, but I do agree with you. They could have at least read up on Japanese customs first.

>> No.8351377

So what's the status on Girls Are Chefs or whatever? It'd be nice to have something to fill the void with now that KS is over with. ;_;

>> No.8351381

>>8351377
>>Girls Are Chefs

Oh boy, here we go again.

>> No.8351388

>>8351377

But that's not a VN, why would you care?

>> No.8351401

>>8351388

>not a VN

Dropped like a fucking rock. I feel cheated.

>> No.8351409

>Japanese
>>backgrounds not drawn
>>>language is pretty crude
>>>>jokes are crude
>>>>>gestures are professional instead of polite

Screams western all over it. I'm quoting myself because my voice can't be heard through they keyboard.

>> No.8351417

>>8351377

It's "Girls Are Cooking," and the pilot chapter is almost done I think. A lot of the girls are already illustrated. Waiting patiently.

It's funny, because I was about to say "This isn't a sequel to KS," but then remembered that the illustrator did all the early KS drawings way back when. So I guess it really is sort of a "spiritual successor," even though there's just one writefag and he had absolutely nothing to do with KS.

Not sure if this is /jp/ relevant, since it's a light novel and not a VN/manga.

>> No.8351425

>>8351417

Girls cooking food? Sounds retarded.

Then again, so did the concept of KS when /a/ pitched it.

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>> No.8351450 [DELETED] 

Western VNs are always doomed to fail.
I want Touhou Moon.

>> No.8351498

>>8351450
Would it help if it did or didn't follow typical VN/Anime cliches? I mean the setting being in Japan is one of the complaints here.

>> No.8351503 [DELETED] 

>>8351498
It would help if they tried to start it outside of a predominantly anime-based community like 4chan.

>> No.8351518

>>8351498
>the setting being in Japan is one of the complaints here
the complaint is actually the setting being in Japan while everything except the language in the background pictures and the names follows pseudo-american customs and way of living, it's called bad writing around here

>> No.8351535

Not sure if I'm just paranoid or schizo, but I've noticed one anon who's in most KS threads, who always jumps when people say "go back to /a/", claiming that the 4channers who were working on this project quit years ago and it was mostly taken over by outsiders, which would explain all the circlejerking, attenwhoring, viralling, etc.

Anon, if you're reading this thread, could you elaborate a little bit? Were you in the original team? What happened?

Do you think the story would have been better if none of that had happened?

>> No.8351538

What futaba think about this game?

>> No.8351560

Get out ks devs

>> No.8351563

>>8351535
>go back to /a/
That's just /jp/ being /jp/
>claiming that the 4channers who were working on this project quit years ago and it was mostly taken over by outsiders
This was admitted by them in a blogpost. They did it to sort of distance themselves from 4chan and try and make their own name.

>> No.8351568

>>8351563
so why did the original team quit?

>> No.8351579

>>8351563

The KS devs themselves are pretty vocal about how much they dislike 4chan. A few people on the project even hide their interests from the others.

Theres a few reasons why KS took so long. Mostly lack of cohesion. Certain people did not get along or outright hated each other. Namely delta, who's always acted like a self entitled child, and will throw temper tantrums when things don't go his way. This forced many people to say "fuck it" Including artists. Requiring the art assets to be redone multiple times. Writers too. With all of it's staff KS could have been done in less than a single year. But there was no cohesion, trust or comradeship in the team.

>> No.8351588

>>8351579
> A few people on the project even hide their interests from the others.
/jp/ bros.

>> No.8351595

The only important thing to take away from this is that /jp/ should work on their fucking projects again. Do I have to bring up those pictures of that brown nun?

>> No.8351603

get out ksdevs

>> No.8351601

What happened to that jp projects site PRINNY was making?

>> No.8351610

Um, if they wanted to distance themselves from 4chan then why the hell did they call themselves 4 lEaf Studios?

>> No.8351614

>>8351610

That started when they were still apart of 4chan. If you ever talked to them, and mentioned being from 4chan. You'd often get banned.

>> No.8351621

The only reason Team 4chan is promoting it is because it just creates more positive publicity for the site and that is' not just a reddit goldmine.

If it wasn't for the 4chan connection that every other site is giving it they would have never embraced it.

>> No.8351617

As someone who's never played VNs before, I'd say it's ok. Could be a nice introduction to the genre.

Also, FUCK I DON'T CARE ABOUT DATING ANY OF THEM I JUST WANT TO TEACH SHIZUNE AND HANAKO AND LILLY TO GET ALONG AND BE FRIENDS

>> No.8351618

>Would you still like
>implying I like it

>> No.8351639

>>8351601
It died along with that shitty e-zine, hopefully. Good riddance to both, I say.

>> No.8351642

>>8351377

It doesn't help that you can't start a /jp/ project without people bitching about viral.

It's like going to someone's house with a cake you baked for them, and they take a baseball bat to your favorite dick and balls.

>> No.8351662

4chan staff and KS devs combine forces to create the worlds first true VN made for reddit for reddit. Now the mainstream can experience it's downright shitty writing and premise.

>> No.8351654

>>8351614
what are the original members of the team doing now?
what's their opinion on the finished product? are they have any other projects planned?

>> No.8351659

>>8351642
/jp/ projects are more about how you keep saying you'll make a cake and you don't even have something to mix with, let alone any ingredients or utensils like a mixing bowl.

>> No.8351673

>>8351642
Which is funny, because the devs could have used adfly links or some shitty filehost for KS and gotten a little bit of money out of it, but they didn't.

The Broquest devs, on the other hand...

>> No.8351677

>>8351642
It helps if you shut up about what you're doing, no need to viral your shit.

>> No.8351684

>>8351659

That's never the argument though. Even when it is true. It's always "OLEVN A SHIT" type comments. Some people want to gain a following, discuss it. Have an audience so they have someone to release it to. No one to beta test it, and no one to tell you what's wrong or not.

Doing games like this without a studio, on your own is almost impossible to do solo, because you will realize that there's no point if no one is even going to play it. It's vastly different from professional VN studios who have credibility, a paid team and press they can get support in. I really think for OLEVNs to become a viable medium. They need 4chan

>> No.8351686

KS is shit.

>> No.8351689

Are there any /jp/ projects going right now anyway?

>> No.8351700

FUQ KS

>> No.8351702

>>8351689

Meme School 2012. You wake up horrible morning and find out that you are a meme and are being forced to attended a school for others kids who are memes. There you meet all kinds of other meme kids and date them.

4chan and reddit will love it for it's randomness and lols. XD

>> No.8351709

>>8351579
That's pretty interesting, thanks for posting. It'd be nice to know more, even, I've had problems with project cohesion myself so...

>> No.8351710

It's true that the writimg isn't great but so is the writing for every other work in this medium. Failing to acknowledge this is just blind Japan worship.

>> No.8351711

>>8351702
omg le voldemort face route do want!

>> No.8351715

>>8351711
> le
...


Fuck, now I'm buttangery.

>> No.8351717

>>8351689

Not really, I posted in the OC thread. I've been writing a story for a year, and then turning that into a VN for the better part of a year. But it's really niche. And i'm going to be doing redesigns of the characters once the writing is finished.

>>8329935

>> No.8351718

>>8351710

Doesn't matter that it was made by a western dev that piggybacked their game on a successful and highly popular website. KS is shit and uses a gimmick to hide it's shallow writing and characters.

>> No.8351724

>>8351710
Right, I bet all these VN you read in Japanese were just as badly written as KS.
Oh wait.

>> No.8351726

Are you talking about the DizzyHearts thing?
Because that got amazing criticism from one guy.

>> No.8351729

>call KS shitty
>gulp down shallower, generic as fuck vns

never change, /jp/

>> No.8351734

>>8351729
>>gulp down shallower, generic as fuck vns
such as?

>> No.8351740

>>8351538

They thought about it as much as Megatokyo's Japanese translation.

>> No.8351737

>>8351718
But all VNs have shallow writing and characters regardless of if they're hiding behind a gimmick.

>> No.8351738

How appropriate is this though. Team 4chan helping to market a shitty VN that will satisfy the majority of it's shitty users. Looking forward to the reddit coverage, maybe a few interviews and then it will fall off the face of the earth completely forgotten.

Nothing more than a gimmicky, shitty and downright painfully bad VN that managed to grasp a huge audience due to some brilliant viral marketing on a popular website.

>> No.8351746

>>8351738
I agree it's not THAT good, but your buttfrustration is quite apparent and you seem to exaggerate the negative points.

>> No.8351747

>>8351729
What is shallower than katawa shoujo?

>> No.8351748

>>8351729
>>gulp down shallower, generic as fuck vns

Sounds like /a/ or /v/ with their adoration of Wanko or YMK.

>> No.8351750

>>8351726

Yea I took a lot of that to heart. I talked with a few of my friends about it too. The story is written, it's just the dialogue and interactions that i'm polishing. It was very ambitious of me to do 4 routes. So i've been seriously considering making it a linear story, and having only one character path, and using the other characters to build her up. (the loli)

>> No.8351753

bump for butthurt jaypegs

>> No.8351756

You faggots better stop talking shit about my shallow VNs.
At least they manage to be, you know, fun.

>> No.8351759

>>8351748
I agree they're retards for thinking G-Senjou like has the best plot of all time and shit, however you just started to argue about opinion and you should know how retarded that is.

>> No.8351762

>>8351734
Practically any VN with a high school / childhood friend setting.

>> No.8351766

Can we talk about something else?

I was reading the OC thread... and only a couple of people posted stories.
Is there any place where I can read short stories written by /jp/ers? there's a creepypasta database for /x/ but I've already read pretty much everything there...

>> No.8351769

>>8351762
Hahahahaha
ahaHAHAHAhaha
haha
Oh wow.

>> No.8351778

>>8351762
oh god, what's sad is that you probably believe that

>> No.8351781

>>8351762
Weren't you just saying "all VNs" before in this post, but now it's just one setting?
>>8351724
Backpedaling, huh...

>> No.8351785

>>8351738
Didn't it catch attention because it was free?

Not that many people here actually pay for their games but still it's something.

>> No.8351792

KS is so awesome and unique because it has girls! Girls that have physical deformities! We are clearly looking at the masterpiece of our time and don't let anyone tell you the difference.

>> No.8351804

Everyone on this thread is breaking /jp/'s golden rule of taking it easy.

>> No.8351805

>>8351762
Confirmed for only reading entry level shit.

>> No.8351802 [DELETED] 

>>8351785

It got a lot of attention because it was viral marketed to hell on 4chan and several other forums. Now it's gaining popularity again only because team 4chan is promoting it.

>> No.8351812

>>8351785

It got a lot of attention because it was viral marketed to hell on 4chan and several forums. Now it's gaining popularity again only because team 4chan is promoting it.

>> No.8351816

As of now, more than 4000 people have downloaded Katawa Shoujo

>> No.8351833

Is there any way we can turn thread this into something positive?

Why don't you guys share something you've written, we could all read it and discuss and have fun

>> No.8351836

>>8351762
>childhood friend as a setting

That besides, VNs /jp/ likes, or at least accepts:
Muv Luv Alternative
Sengoku Rance
Infinity series
YU-NO
Liarsoft, Innocent Grey, Nitroplus

VNs /jp/ dislikes/hates:
Muv Luv Extra
Wind
Da Capo etc. (most Mangagamer stuff)
Cosplay Fetish Academy etc. (most JAST USA stuff)
Disability Girls

Notice anything? You would if you knew anything about VNs...

>> No.8351837

>>8351833

Suck my cock dude.

>> No.8351844

Good thing the JP translation team - which is composed of, you know, Japanese people? Living in Japan? Told us that wasn't really an issue, and that we had captured the ambience of certain sleepy small towns quite well.

>> No.8351847

>>8351816

All of them from 4chan!

>> No.8351853

Signs of new /jp/ denizens:

-Appears constantly irritated, sometimes even enraged
-Tries to act as a board police, but fails
-Hates doubles
-Has a "waifu" and posts about it
-Part of sion botnet
-Will post greentext stories/blogs
-Incorrectly uses greentext, posts image macros, and spams board with /v/b/a/ "memes"
-Complains about established /jp/ content, usually Touhou
-Tends to overuse the terms "summer", "shitpost(er)", "newfag", and "samefag"
-On that note, they will almost invariably call two people who disagree with them "samefag"
-Thinks being gay, liking cocks, traps = cool
-Tries too hard to seem clever, but appears to be not
-Usually is an immigrant or an overstaying tourist from /a/v/cgl/ who tries too hard to fit in

>> No.8351854

>>8351844
Reported.

>> No.8351872

>>8351847
http://www.reddit.com/r/visualnovels/comments/o24qa/katawa_shoujo_is_released/

nope

>> No.8351871

>>8351836
>That besides, VNs /jp/ likes, or at least accepts:
>Muv Luv Alternative

Babby's first GRIMDARK, you mean? The fact that you have to read the other, incredibly shitty entries in the series to get a full grasp of what's going on doesn't help.

>Sengoku Rance

Mainstream garbage that's beloved of /a/ and /v/ users.

>Infinity series

Entry level shit. Furthermore, a handful of decent scenes doesn't redeem hours and hours of dry dialogue and boring exposition.

>YU-NO

Going the way of Steins;gayte--people on /jp/ like it at the moment, but they'll start hating the shit out of it as soon as it becomes less obscure

>Liarsoft, Innocent Grey, Nitroplus

Innocent Grey is alright, but the other two are mediocre at best.

>> No.8351875

>>8351871
News: you aren't /jp/.

>> No.8351881

>>8351844
"wasn't really an issue" means it's pretty noticeable and they're just being nice about it

>> No.8351880

>>8351836
da capo bad.. really nigger?? at least manga gamer is trying to get more niche titles instead of jastusa.. although.. who is getting school days hq "fully uncut" when it comes out?

>> No.8351906

>>8351880
>da capo
>niche
Wait, what?

>> No.8351904

>>8351875
But I'm at least a /jp/ user, which is more than you can say.

>> No.8351918

>>8351871

get a load of this guy

>> No.8351916

>>8351906
Da Capo is far less popular with normalfags than pretentious shit like Tsukihime or FSN.

>> No.8351933

>>8351871
The english only userbase of /jp/ is so incredibly shitty.

>> No.8351937

>>8351918
Go back to /a/.

>> No.8351941

>>8351881
固くもゆるくもない握手を交わすと、先生は時計に目を落とす。
Funny how it stayed in even in translation, then.

>> No.8351943

>>8351875
>>8351918
>>8351933
Stop responding to obvious trolls.

>> No.8351957

>>8351916
And where exactly can I buy Jast's releases of F/SN and Tsukihime?

>> No.8351965

>>8351941
well that's because they are just, you know, supposed to translate what's already there regardless and not rewrite the script to make it feel more japanese

>> No.8351986

>>8351965
So let me get this straight...

Translating FROM Japanese without localizing means it's good.

But when the Japanese translate TO Japanese without localizing, and we're talking about the people who have the VN scene in their palm compared to pretty much everyone else, it's bad?

>> No.8351985

>>8351836
liarsoft, innocent grey, nitroplus, alicesoft, infinity, KEY, they're all good developers, and they all make fun games for everybody. please stop trying to start a flame war

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8351993

lulz /jp/ is bunch of le trolls
why even bother?
come, discuss it at a much better, civil place
http://www.reddit.com/r/katawashoujo/

>> No.8351995

>>8351986
What the fuck are you even on about?

>> No.8352000

>>8351986
I'm just saying just because they left it in it doesn't mean it doesn't feel unnatural, but holy shit are you frustrated about this

>> No.8352003

>>8351906
let me rephrase most people that watch anime don't even bother to look up what it's based off of. I love trolling gaia and other forums as the next person, however when you tell them "shuffle" is based off of an eroge the responses make me want to kill a loli

>> No.8352022 [DELETED] 

>>8351993
I really wish I had made this subreddit first.

>> No.8352023

It's not perfect but it's pretty enjoyable in my opinion. Deaf moe ftw.

>> No.8352027

>>8352000
Hey, just asking a simple question. I'm not the one who has a complaint. Enjoy.

>> No.8352031

>>8352027
But your "question" has absolutely fuck all to do with what he's saying, are you retarded or something?

>> No.8352032
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Knowing that it was written by a bunch of spamming retards makes it very hard to read seriously.

Not to mention the writers clearly flunked their composition classes because the writing is amateur shit.

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>>8352032
What?

This is modern Shakespeare. The non-generic opening line brought me to tears. Not too many unnecessary adjectives or anything.

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>>8352032
What?

This is modern Shakespeare. The non-generic opening line brought me to tears. Not too many unnecessary adjectives or anything.

>> No.8352046 [DELETED] 

So much upset.

I'm like an hour into it and it's okay. Not super exciting or anything but the art and abuse of Ren'Py's particle effects are nice, and the disability thing has turned out to be quite interesting instead of a gimmick.
Though I'll admit I'm scared that the H-scenes will be as cringeworthy as some of the dialogue has been.

>> No.8352049 [DELETED] 

>>8352045
Yeah, that line stood out for me too. Sort of ruined the tone for the whole next scene, which I guess was supposed to be dramatic and engaging. I wouldn't say the writing is TERRIBLE though (like some people are making it out to be). To be fair it's on par with most amateur Japanese VNs that you weeaboos love (even in the original Japanese).

>> No.8352051

I downloaded and am currently playing katawa shoujo.

I didn't read anything about it or care about it all until now.

I like the characters and the setting is an interesting twist on your typical high school slice of life. I also understand it tries to stick to conventional japanese story-telling themes but being a western-based VN its not going to have all of the cultural aspects of japan; not being japanese, this doesn't really bother me. I'm enjoying the story enough for this not to be a problem.

>> No.8352050

>>8352045
>A breeze causes the branches overhead to rattle like windchimes.

You're right, that does sound a lot better.

Fucking dropped.

>> No.8352058 [DELETED] 

>>8352050
I'm not sure if you're being sarcastic, but it actually does read a lot nicer. Maybe we should apply some rule like the Ctrl+Alt+Del Rule? Like every time there are at least three qualifying adjectives in one screen, remove all of them.

>> No.8352061

Which game is better: Katawa Shoujo or Skyrim?

>> No.8352059

>>8352049
Shitty amateur Japanese VNs don't take 5 years to complete by 20+ person teams, though.

>> No.8352060

>>8352049
Pretty much.
It's not the second coming of Jesus Christ, but it's not also the terrible shitfest that some people claim it is.

>> No.8352064 [DELETED] 

>>8352059
But that's pretty much a given for a 4chan project, and I don't see why it matters. I guess it might have been hyped, but I avoided all the threads on /a/ like the plague (and later on /jp/), and I guess KS is more enjoyable because of it.

>> No.8352066

>>8352049
I just felt like KS really lacked a narrative to be honest. What, go through the generic steps of a VN and score with cripples?
Take eroges that are much, much less "ambitious" or well marketed (Monmusu quest) and you can still find a more cohesive narrative that makes you feel like the work is at least somewhat significant. As it is KS routes feel like the routes for majikoi, except without effective comedy.

>> No.8352067 [DELETED] 

>>8352061
VNs aren't games. I bet you think anime are cartoons and manga are comics too, you westaboo.

>> No.8352068

>>8352058
I wasn't being sarcastic, I don't see why you would think so.

The most common mark of a try-hard amateur writer is excessive adjectives, which this VN is full to the brim of. It's like they were trying to reach some word count goal.

>> No.8352078 [DELETED] 

>>8352068
> I wasn't being sarcastic, I don't see why you would think so.
I figured you could have been implying it was _too_ straightforward, but that's often what makes for better writing.
I agree wholeheartedly though. It really does remind me of secondary school English classes where I would have a thesaurus at hand and try to reach the word count by prefixing every noun with an adjective or two. I'm okay for writing being colourful and interesting, but you don't have to describe everything. Especially in a medium where I can see the environment in front of me.

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>Scroll mouse wheel down
>Text does not advance

Seriously, KS devs?

>> No.8352090

>>8352067
I thought this was an eroge, not a VN?
Eroge= erotic game
>erotic game
>game
WELP what do we have here..

>> No.8352085

I couldn't help but laugh whenever EmI's sprite bounced up and down whenever she warmed up and the times where she fell over sideways

I guess that's the only reason I enjoyed the game.

>> No.8352086

>>8352031
I'm saying that the argument "the translators were just being nice" in reference to handshaking doesn't hold water, since they could have gotten things corrected BEFORE or localized AFTER translation if they felt it was wrong.

Thus, it's a little funny that non-natives nitpick what natives don't bother about.

Clearer?

>> No.8352091

>>8352066
I don't think even KS devs were going for anything near ambitious. The highest expectations anyone had for it were probably "playable" and "not shit."

>> No.8352095 [DELETED] 

>>8352085
You're not alone.
Though you probably did it in an edgy/guilty kind of way. I just thought it was kind of cute.
Cripple moe~

>> No.8352098 [DELETED] 

>>8352091
> The highest expectations anyone had for it were probably "playable" and "not shit."
tehy failed there then, amirite /jp/bros?? xD

>> No.8352100

>>8352090
VN=eroge, all ages are just a subtype.

>> No.8352108

>>8352100
No, you halfwit.

>> No.8352121

>>8352098
I'm not sure, I haven't gotten around to playing it yet.

>> No.8352114

The KS dev's amount of butthurt is hilarious...

>> No.8352116 [DELETED] 

>>8352100
That's stupid. I mean, well, like, it's...fuck.

>> No.8352117

Lily is a foreigner.

>> No.8352126 [DELETED] 

>>8352117
Half-foreigner. The MC has the uncanny ability to discover she's "half-Japanese" just by exchanging two lines of dialogue.

>>8352100
Are all movies with sex scenes "pornography"?

>>8352114
YEAH BRO, THEY MAD AS HELL.

>> No.8352125

>>8352108
Yes it is? Most all ages are just ports or implied sex happens either way.

>> No.8352136

>>8352125
First off, that's not even true. Do you have any idea how many anime/LN cash-in VNs are made at all?
Not all VNs have erotic content, therefore they are not eroge. Not all eroge have a visual novel format, therefore they are not VNs. You are fucking retarded.

>> No.8352144 [DELETED] 

>>8352136
> Not all VNs have erotic content,
Then they're not VNs. They're interactive fiction with pictures, which have been around for a lot longer (old Infocom games, for example).

>> No.8352145

I wish it were an eroge.
Instead I get intimate scenes.
I want cum in burnscars dammit

>> No.8352146

Let's call this shit galge and be done with it.

>> No.8352149
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8352149

Fuck all y'all.

Not only do I enjoy it, I think it's a milestone in free amateur storytelling.

>> No.8352154

>>8352144
Could you be any more retarded? I'm seriously curious. Do you also believe in the gold standard?

>> No.8352150 [DELETED] 

Is the "no virgins" thing true or is it just /a/ FUD/the fact they left out hymen ripping?

>> No.8352152

>VN=eroge

SINCE WHEN SEXY BEACH 3 WAS A VISUAL NOVEL?

WHO AM I QUOTING?

>> No.8352157

>>8352146
>Let's call this shit galge and be done with it
What about the yaoi then?

>> No.8352158

>>8352125
>Most all ages are just ports
How about no. Ports are pretty much only made of best-selling eroges. Best selling eroges aren't the majority, obviously, but the top couple of percent best titles (in commercial success, not necessarily quality). There are thousands of amateur and small-company productions, many of them free, that are all-ages.

>> No.8352160 [DELETED] 

>>8352154
I'm trying to troll/flamebait. It's a new experience for me. Please be gentle~

>> No.8352162

what is it with western VN fans and slice of life? It feels like such a waste of potential

>> No.8352163

It's really not any worse than the KEY VNs it's emulating.

>> No.8352165

>>8352157
Otome games.

>> No.8352166

>>8352163
Except in terms of story, characters, depth, length, creativity, and even art.

>> No.8352167
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8352167

>this thread

>> No.8352168

>>8352086
Holy fuck you are retarded.
I'm starting to understand why this project turned out the way it did.

>> No.8352176

>>8352162
The advantage of making a VN to tell your story over a comic or animation is that they are prose-heavy by their nature, but Westerners who are drawn to this medium tend to want to make a VN for the sake of making a VN because it's an eccentric Japanese thing rather than playing to their skills as creators. As such, it seems like none of the Western VN creators actually have developed their writing skills. KS has purple prose but it's still better than every other Western VN.

>> No.8352177

>>8352166
Let me start by saying that KS is an average game.

Yes, because retarded looking characters and lol magical aids is good writing, right?

No, really. Key gets more attention than it deserves, and I bet it is because they fucking sucked at CG. You want a good company? Try ELF, Alicesoft or Will (they have done a few good games).

The music is nice though.

>> No.8352180

Why is this still here?

>> No.8352181

>>8352168
Heh, wouldn't THAT lend major verisimilitude.

But no, sorry.

>> No.8352184
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8352184

>>8352180

>> No.8352185

>>8352180
VN discussion is a /jp/ related topic.

>> No.8352187

>>8352184
That's not how sage works in /jp/.

>> No.8352189
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8352189

>>8352187

>> No.8352192

Is KS classified as Disney or Real Deal?

>> No.8352201

>>8352185
It's an eyesore.

>> No.8352212

>>8352201
Take it easy and hide it, then.

>> No.8352220

>>8352192
Real deal my little pony.

>> No.8352224
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8352224

Damn that music is getting on my nerves, I'll just play while listening to loadsamoney, it makes the game a hundred times better.

>> No.8352227
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8352227

>>8352167
>this thread

>> No.8352241

>>8352163
>>8352177
Good writing is good writing.
It's not a question of setting, whether it has "magical aids or not or if it has moeblob or retarded looking characters.
It's a question of execution.

Key is famous because they do their formula really well, that's all.
Also you are fucking retarded

>> No.8352249 [DELETED] 

>>8352224
I like it. It's non-obtrusive and doesn't feel very repetitive. I fucking hate VNs like Shuffle! where it cycles through the same generic easygoing music then, "Whoops! Zany scene! Better cue the honky tonk piano!" then goes back to the same music. The character art is nice too. But that's it. The music and character art. That's like 2/5, so a good effort, KS devs!

>> No.8352258

>>8352177
>KS is an average game.
it's most certainly not, it's not that bad but it's below average in pretty much everything but the premise. Sure, free project, etc, but that's no excuse to completely deny valid criticism

>> No.8352303 [DELETED] 

>>8352258
You didn't like the art or music?
Some of the effects were nice too (except for that fucking medicine name one).

I think this would have been great if it was a Ren'Py tech demo designed to look and feel nice and show off the engine. It's just a bit iffy as an actual VN. The writers have my respect though since they're not terrible and they did try, despite everything.

>> No.8352323

>>8352258
It's at least average for a VN available in English.
It's above average for a VN in general.
I mean, it's not like I think it's good or something, but you grossly underestimate the amount of actual shit out there.

>> No.8352328

I thought the premise was a great idea. It would have been nicer if there was more cohesion within the dev team. Could have been a solid game. really.

>> No.8352344

>>8352323
It's not above average in general, most charage/moege I read are better.
And I say that as someone who actually gave KS a chance.

Unlike you compare it to your average nukige which is stupid considering these are made to fap hence the name.
KS is a charage and should be compared to other of its genre

>> No.8352360

>>8352328
ironically the premise was the one thing they didn't make themselves
thanks raita

>> No.8352356

>Complaining the characters are Japanese
>The characters were created by some fucking Japanese guy and given Japanese names by him

How retarded can people be?

>> No.8352362

can anyone not get the torrent to work? says it cant connect to openbittorrent tracker.

>> No.8352374

>>8352362
give it a minute or two and it should announce fine

>> No.8352386

>>8352362
>◖(´・ܒ・`)◗

>> No.8352383 [DELETED] 

>>8352362
You could use the magnet: link for a "trackerless" download. I believe it's on the download page in the same text file with the hashes.

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>>8352362
> ◖(´・ܒ・`)◗

>> No.8352399

>>8352303
>You didn't like the art or music?
They weren't bad, but I don't consider that average if we're talking about the genre at large, which is what everyone seems to do. And of course, no one is saying anything about the creators passion or effort whatever, but I call faults as I see them. Then again, I don't usually lower my standards just because it's amateur work. mileage, may vary, etc

>> No.8353876

Even if you adjust your standards, KS is still a garbage game.

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