/jp/'s Original Content/Drawthread #47

[Anonymous No.]

>>7503831
Previous thread.

General original content/drawthread for /jp/ anons. You may use this thread to contribute your works or to share ideas related to possible projects. Anything OC is welcomed, including drawings, writings, music, and programming.

[Anonymous No.]

One day I will contribute some drawings to an OC thread...

[All day !jCOMomijIM No.]

I'll have something to post in a bit, hopefully.

All the stuff I've liked so far:
http://tindeck.com/listen/hvzi - Fires of Hokkai
http://tindeck.com/listen/twrm - Nazrin's Stage Theme

I need to re-render Yuugi's stage theme and fix up Mystery in my Town before its good

[Anonymous No.]

[Hotel Moé !PAgIEfHT7Y No.]

>>7606324
I share the dream.

[All day !jCOMomijIM No.]

>>7607217
Then do it

[Anonymous No.]

I was thinking of a Recettear like game, but based in Marisa Magic Shop, with danmaku instead of the dungeon running, and some fairies trying help but managing only to wreck shit in place of Tear. You could get other Touhous to do the fighting for you and all that nice stuff.

I thought that it would be fun to at least make. Does /jp/ like the idea?

I'm no longer a NEET, so I'll probably never do it though.

[Anonymous No.]

>>7607312
you should probably do the game in rpgmaker or some other maker if you actually want to finish it because i don't think most of jp has the skill or dedication to actually finish something

[Anonymous No.]

>>7607328
I could do everything except the art, so RPG maker wouldn't help me all that much.

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>>7606466
what

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>>7606466
I like how this kind of stuff only begin to show up after the anime adaptation is airing.

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>>7607533
I like there's always someone retarded enough to point out something obvious like that. Way to go, smartass. I bet you're mom's pride.

[Anonymous No.]

so is /jp/ still up to it ?

http://piapro.jp/content_list/?view=image&oc=1&tag=%82Q%82O%82P%82P%83A%83%81%83%8A%83J%83%7
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>>7607674
What's this about?

[Hotel Moé !PAgIEfHT7Y No.]

>>7607560
>I bet you're mom's pride.
> you're

Oh yeah. Sure is original content in here.

[Anonymous No.]

>>7607560
Looks like you are extremely frustrated for some reason.

[Anonymous No.]

So nothing at all.
Great job /jp/!

[Anonymous No.]

>>7608093
see
>>7606371

[Sakura !RAILgUnr8s No.]

I'm still trying to work on my VN, but actually writing anything is so hard. I don't think I would have a problem with any other part of it.

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>>7608109
I was hoping more from our drawfriends since they're usually the first one to act.

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>>7608143
Good things come to he who waits.

[Anonymous No.]

a Reimu

[Anonymous No.]

anyone know of a good writeup for VN creation?

or even something like a list of basic required things would be nice

not really interested in answers like "you need an artist and a programmer" because that is a great way to get nowhere fast, especially for an antisocial person like me

answers like "at least 5 unique character portraits per character, 2 backgrounds per scene" or "ratio of 10 to 1 for pages of writing to CG" would be much better

basic VN creation theory is what i'm looking for

[Kudryavka !!wEyYEw5OlKU No.]

>>7608567
You probably wanna write the entire script before you even worry about CGs and programming. When you have a completed script, it'll be a lot easier to recruit help with those aspects, too.

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>>7608567
A CG for every major scene, a face for every emotion, different body poses. Make some common areas you reuse a lot. If it's in a house, make sure the rooms look like they actually connect to each other and the house.

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ええええええええええええええええええええええ

>>7607674
I wanted to do it, but one of the entrants is really cute to the point that I'd just rather vote for it instead. I'd have probably thought of something similar to it if I entered anyway.

[Anonymous No.]

>>7607939
http://www.animenewsnetwork.com/interest/2011-07-07/contest-held-to-design-hatsune-miku-u.s-version

>>7608625
Well you can always try Collab A

[Anonymous No.]

>>7608567
VNs are a form of art. There is no formula to create art. What you're asking is like 'how many notes should I play in this part, what should the tempo be, and how far should the notes be apart?'. The answer is that it depends on what you're making. You just need to get a feel for it.
The basic things required? Plenty of experience with VNs (don't be one of the many retards who decides to create a VN before ever reading one), a good idea (not just tiny unconnected fragments), the motivation to actually create something good, and a critical stance against your own work (learn to recognize when something sucks, so you can rewrite it to be good).

There are VNs without art, there are VNs without music, there are VNs without choices -- anything is possible. Just read enough VNs to get a feel of what style would be best fitting for your story.

[Anonymous No.]

No fun allowed.

By that I mean no motivation allowed. I never can or want to finish any drawings.

[Anonymous No.]

>>7608935

[Anonymous No.]

Contributing with Fish-Eyed Girl.

[Anonymous No.]

>>7608935

Fish-eyed? what does that mean?

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>>7608951
Probably that she's going to be a deep one.

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>>7608567
Try looking at movie or tv scripts writting, it's pretty much the same. Just imagine a VN like a 1st person view movie, poorly animated, with choices on screen.

If you dont want to bother so much on the writting side, try inspiring your work on a not well known novel or movie, so that people don't label it as a fanfic. But you'd still have to write some sort of screenplay

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>>7608955

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>>7608951
To be honest, I have no idea what I was thinking with that. First it was going to be because she had fish-like eyes, but then...

I don't know. You guys figure something out.

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>>7608968
H.P Lovecraft, Cthulhu mythos, look it up some time

[Anonymous No.]

>>7608991

So her being fish-eyed means she's an Eldritch Abomination with a Dakimakura?

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>>7608971
No, if you don't want to bother so much on the writing side, find a tall tree and hang yourself. If you don't want to put any effort into writing, don't make a fucking VN. The internet is already flooded with shitty OELVNs, we don't need any more.

[Anonymous No.]

I did some shitty OC long time ago, I'm posting it for no given reason.

1/9

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[Anonymous No.]

Rate my Miku

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5/9

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>>7609068
Reminds me to something I made a while ago

[Anonymous No.]

6/9

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7/9

[Anonymous No.]

Is that you sion?

Because these are kinda amusing

[Anonymous No.]

8/9

This was dedicated to our favourite autist /jp/'s QC. Now in disuse.

[Anonymous No.]

9/9

That's all. Terrible, I know.

[Anonymous No.]

>>7609091
It'd be fine but none of it is even OC.

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>>7609073
Shouldn't it be reverse? Cause /jp/ gives it's attention to whichever shitposter it can find.

[Anonymous No.]

Taking in a quick Touhou request. 2nd suggestion gets it.

[Anonymous No.]

>>7609102
Fuck off

[Anonymous No.]

>>7609102
Stop being an attention whore please.

[Anonymous No.]

>>7609102
Suika
And "Fuck off" counts as a suggestion, so get to it ;3

[Anonymous No.]

>>7609117
>>7609102
samefag

[Anonymous No.]

>>7609118
Don't be a newfag and do the samefag test before saying that.

>>7609117
Ok.

[Anonymous No.]

>>7609134
>newfag
Oh boy the irony.

And stop posting your photoshop crap and retarded image macros. That's not OC.

>>7608546
That looks awfully familiar for some reason....
Ah, I remember now. I will just hope that it's mere similarity.

[Anonymous No.]

>>7609117
> ;3
Out.

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>>7608546
Wow, this looks damn good.

[Anonymous No.]

>>7609175
What's original content for you?

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>>7609175

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>>7609181
No it doesn't, stop praising yourself

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>>7609305
You shouldn't be so mad at the fact that you have no useful talents. I know you never got too much praise on your life, but sadly that doesn't means other people can. Stay frustrated.

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>>7609196
When people, draw, compose or create something. Not when they mess around for 5 minutes in photoshop to add text to a random image with the purpose of providing humor. Poor humor on top of that. Or when they drag parts of another image to the one they want to use, or when they make an image containing memes and other stupidity from other boards on it.

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>>7609363
Not even the guy you are replying to, but you are retarded. Basically what you're saying is "what I don't like is not original content". I agree that image macros and that sort of shit suck ass, but even so, it IS content which is original, as questionable it's originality might be.

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>>7609390
Well, at least we can both agree that things such as image macros shouldn't be here right?

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>>7609316
This is so ironic, but telling you why would ruin it.

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>>7609555
I don't enjoy repeating myself very much, but I'll make an exception this time.

Yes, image macros and such are awful and retarded, but if we don't like it that's still our own problem. Are you going to report them? Go ahead. Are you going to throw a fit or call your mom? Feel free, please. In the end, there ain't much you can do except express your own personal opinion against it.

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>>7609390
Well there should be a limit to what is considered OC, I mean, by that logic, adding a pixel to an image would be OC.

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>>7609569
I don't think that's the best way of thinking when it comes to 'invisible rules' in the board or thread. It's like a small /jp/ inside /jp/. Just like anime is also part of 'otaku culture' but it's not allowed to be posted in /jp/. So why would we tolerate image macros when they are not welcome here?

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[Anonymous No.]

>>7608696

That is such a hipster cop-out. How can you say that there is no formula for VN creation when it's obvious that Japan uses a formula to create VNs.

Just grab any three or four VNs at random and you can see that they all share similarities on many levels.

Besides even if you weren't trolling via holier-than-thou teen angst, there is always theory behind art. There's all sorts of theory such as color theory, theory for instrumental technique, musical composition, literature, and yes even VN creation which is basically the combination of four separate artforms: programming, music, visual art, and creative writing. As such, not only do you need to understand the theory behind each of the separate parts, but also the theory behind the execution of all four.

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>>7609607
As I mentioned before, "not tolerating" them is just childish and stupid. What are you going to do? E-mail moot?
Yes, it is original content, yes, it sucks, no, I don't think that shit belongs in here. But that's just my opinion.

[Anonymous No.]

If you didn't at least spend an hour working on your OC, you shouldn't post it here.

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>>7608625
This one? http://piapro.jp/t/wjEX

No panties!

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>>7609704
nice work!

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>>7609568
>>7609316
>>7609305
>>7609181
guy that posted the picture here.
I'm sorry.

[Anonymous No.]

>>7610094
Don't apologize to haters. Don't you have any backbone?

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>>7610094
You shouldn't care. I said that your picture was kick-ass and I would say it again, because I honestly thought it was. Ignore shitheads such as >>7609305 and please post more OC when you have the chance.

[Anonymous No.]

>>7610106
Good job making him NOT IMPROVE by praising mediocre works.

[Anonymous No.]

>>7610112
Good job sucking unwashed dick.

[Anonymous No.]

>>7610112
Except I don't think it's mediocre at all. In fact, I think it's pretty good. Don't like it? Tough luck. Feel free to post your art and give some actual ARTEEST CREETEECEESM, if you are so inclined.

[Anonymous No.]

>>7610131
It's like you've never been here before, it's always the same. If you follow all the drawfriends that have been on /jp/ over all this time, you'll see the same pattern, you just don't care about it, just keep being the unreasonable asshole you are.

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>>7610159
Sure, you go be the harsh leader you want, so you can coach the drawfags into success by making use of complex psychological tactics.

Meanwhile I'll keep enjoying whatever's posted here, and comment when I feel like it. Ah, if you don't like it, you can try the report button, or complain to A-san at the IRC, maybe you can get me banned for a couple of days. You can also open up a blog, or a twitter account, so that your cries for justice are heard by the Internet.

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>>7610159
Exactly what are you trying to achieve anyway? Nobody is going to improve because of your bitching. You're wasting everyone's time.

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>>7609780
I suppose you're right about the formula thing when it comes to shitty mediocre moege. But you know what? There's a reason they're shitty mediocre moege. Art created through a formula will always be bland and uninteresting.

Yes, there is theory. I never said there wasn't. What I'm saying is that these are only loose guidelines. There's no step-by-step guide on how to create art. You can take certain well-documented elements and include them in your work, but there is nobody who can tell you how to make your work as a whole. To find out more about these elements and in what situations they work and what situations they don't, as I said, you need to read VNs. For music, people have carefully documented how element A fits element B well but doesn't fit element C, but there's no such thing for VNs. The closest thing is novel writing guidelines, but VN writing is very different from novel writing.

By the way,
>As such, not only do you need to understand the theory behind each of the separate parts, but also the theory behind the execution of all four.
I strongly disagree with the notion that you absolutely need to know the theory of any art you want to execute. Depending on the artform, you can learn so much from observing that no theory is necessary at all.

Either way, if you have to ask how to make a VN, you're not ready to make one.

[Anonymous No.]

Nobody here is ready to take on any big project anyway. People should pick realistic goals, and maybe in several years you can do what you now WANT to do.

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>>7610311
We have big projects going on, we just don't bother posting about in here, what would be reason for that?

[Anonymous No.]

It's just me, or is the autism and buttpain level in this thread higher than normal?

I can't take it easy like this.

[Anonymous No.]

>>7610324
You will never finish it anyway.

Even KS, the closest to what you will get of a big project that has potential, will never be finished.

Stop thinking you're so great. There's a reason Zun has no peers.

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>>7610339
Yeah because everyone makes their projects in the name of 4chan like KS, right?

[Anonymous No.]

>>7610344
That has nothing to do with it.

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>>7609769
Thank you once again anon!

[Anonymous No.]

>>7610683

sorry missed coloring a bow

[Anonymous No.]

iM@s got one, how much longer do I have to wait for a Vocaloid anime?

>>7609924
It was this one, actually: http://piapro.jp/t/zkUn
Star-shaped hairties and denim wear like mini-jackets and such were some ideas I had going before I actually saw the entrants.

>>7610159
I'm just sayin', but people who are inclined to improve because they like what they do are going to improve no matter the input. Just sayin'. All criticism and no praise isn't going to make anybody improve anyway.

[Anonymous No.]

bump

[Anonymous No.]

You look pale. Are you OK?

[「ロリあき」 No.]

>>7615624
At first I was like "Why do they look so spaced-out?" And then I noticed the seams.
GJ

[Anonymous No.]

>>7615624
Oh nice.

[Anonymous No.]

>>7615638
and here i thought it was just because of the vibrator.

[Anonymous No.]

>>7610967
hopefully quite awhile.

an anime would probably stifle the freedom of creativity it has by making things seem official, depending on how they arranged the story/background/etc.

given that i'd never watch it i'd rather not have one anyways.

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>>7615624
So, the redhead is an actual girlr ight? Wheras the Green one is male underneath.
And with this, they will proceed with ferocious homo(straight) sex, right?

[Anonymous No.]

>>7615921
Why not two males?

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ゴーストモード

Original Content drawthread #47

Yeah, I know the thread is already 404'd. I've not had the time to waste lurking /jp/ recently, so help a bro out if you see 48.

[ZUN !barYV1VtIA No.]

>>7610802
The Anon who draws all the Irisu pics is the coolest.

Also I like the coloring on the OP pic.