/jp/'s Original Content/Drawthread

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/jp/'s Original Content/Drawthread Anonymous Thu Apr 14 18:37:41 2016 No.15077653 [Reply] [Original]

Been some times since we didn't get one.

General original content/drawthread for /jp/sies. You may use this thread to contribute your works or to share ideas related to possible projects. Anything OC is welcomed; including drawings, writings, music, and programming.

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 14 20:37:23 2016 No.15078187 I'm making a song for practice. It's obviously a complete WIP, without repetitions or anything like that, but here it is. https://clyp.it/y1yn0bag

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 14 22:21:45 2016 No.15078593 i drew something but it's not /jp/ related.

>>	Anonymous Fri Apr 15 01:07:41 2016 No.15079083 >>15078593 Neither is op's image. Post it.

>>	Anonymous Fri Apr 15 02:07:54 2016 No.15079258 File: 206 KB, 680x775, jp-.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Fri Apr 15 02:38:18 2016 No.15079366 File: 26 KB, 626x383, sukia.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] rate my OC

>>	Anonymous Fri Apr 15 02:39:02 2016 No.15079370 File: 90 KB, 580x301, 1460080067176.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>15079258 Salacious.

>>	Anonymous Fri Apr 15 02:41:52 2016 No.15079380 >>15079258 excellent

>>	Anonymous Fri Apr 15 02:43:28 2016 No.15079382 >>15079258 I really like the /jp/ in the heart.

>>	Anonymous Fri Apr 15 02:48:51 2016 No.15079400 File: 23 KB, 515x745, jp-v.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>15079370 >>15079380 >>15079382

>>	Anonymous Fri Apr 15 02:50:54 2016 No.15079404 File: 1.37 MB, 1920x1080, landscape.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] A bit of landscape for a change, though it's already a few weeks old.

>>	Anonymous Fri Apr 15 02:58:00 2016 No.15079415 >>15079404 It looks really cool but I can't stop seeing the big rock as a poorly drawn hand.

>>	Anonymous Fri Apr 15 03:00:18 2016 No.15079420 File: 153 KB, 573x606, 1449887242439.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>15079404 I'm going plagiarize this for my class without your permission >:3

>>	Anonymous Fri Apr 15 03:13:17 2016 No.15079447 File: 2.08 MB, 2448x3264, 20160415_085322.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] random bamboo shoot soak up the japanese flavor lads also the terrible camera quality adds to the charm

>>	Anonymous Fri Apr 15 03:14:16 2016 No.15079448 File: 533 KB, 1458x1800, delia-groupci.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Finished the left character's color since the last time I posted a wip on the previous thread, can't say the same for the right one though.

>>	Anonymous Fri Apr 15 07:33:07 2016 No.15079962 >>15077653 The hero looks like the overconfident kind of character that I like that later gets smacked down to reality.

>>	Anonymous Fri Apr 15 07:52:12 2016 No.15080026 Where is Pie-girl. I forgot her name.

>>	Anonymous Fri Apr 15 09:48:14 2016 No.15080368 Starting next week when my exams over I will get back to drawing. I wonder if I keep it up this time.

>>	Anonymous Fri Apr 15 10:36:22 2016 No.15080533 >>15077653 You're way braver than me if you can post your OC characters to the internet, I'm way too scared that someone will immediately corrupt them if I ever post them.

>>	Anonymous Fri Apr 15 10:41:49 2016 No.15080552 >>15080533 You don't like corruption?

Anonymous Fri Apr 15 10:58:53 2016 No.15080590
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>>15080552
I've developed a really unhealthy attachment to some fictional characters and it ended up really messy when the creator or fanbase intentions didn't agree with my own feelings about them, so I sort of circumvented the trouble by creating my own little universe where I can feel attached to the characters without fear of seeing bad stuff happen to them.
Yeah it's sad I know.

>>	Anonymous Fri Apr 15 11:06:08 2016 No.15080597 >>15080590 please post more

>>	Anonymous Fri Apr 15 11:11:04 2016 No.15080609 File: 248 KB, 843x1675, the blank frog totally is like that on purpose.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>15080597 I don't really have anything else to post because I rarely keep sketches, sorry

Anonymous Fri Apr 15 11:38:41 2016 No.15080669

>>15077653
More heavenly Kings when?

>>15079404
Damn. Awesome. How long did that take?

>>15080590
The buildings/surroundings look amazing compared to the characters which are rather sub-par (But not bad). How do you go about drawing buidlings?

>>15078187
I like the vibe. Feels a little like a mix of an RPGs battle theme and a joyous, gag/prankster-kind of theme song.

Since I'm in a bit of an artistic slump right now and can't really get into writing own songs, I tried my hands on a videogame cover.
What does /jp/ say?

https://soundcloud.com/sinsack_agi/final-fantasy-vii-cosmo-canyon-metal-cover

>>	Anonymous Fri Apr 15 11:49:58 2016 No.15080694 >>15080669 >The buildings/surroundings look amazing compared to the characters which are rather sub-par (But not bad). How do you go about drawing buidlings? I'm guessing he traced a photo.

Anonymous Fri Apr 15 11:52:13 2016 No.15080696
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>>15080669
Buildings are easy to draw because they're literally 99% straight lines, especially if you cheat like I do and use some inspiration.
If you understand perspective for straight lines, it takes out almost all of the artistic talent and replaces it with simple mathematics.
>the characters are rather sub-par
:(
still thanks for the critique

>>	Anonymous Fri Apr 15 12:12:00 2016 No.15080714 >>15080669 I can't really comment on that because I didn't particularly liked that section of the game or the music for that matter, but I'd rather listen yours than the original. I think you should've replaced the airy lead with another guitar.

>>	Anonymous Fri Apr 15 12:16:51 2016 No.15080722 >>15080669 Did you delete the song?

>>	Anonymous Fri Apr 15 12:23:23 2016 No.15080737 >>15080722 Nevermind!

Anonymous Fri Apr 15 12:55:43 2016 No.15080835

>>15080696
Hey man, I didn't mean to discourage you. I can still see that you put thought into the scene and they are not terribly bad. Just stay motivated and you'll get better.
If it doesn't bore you out, I'd recommend focusing on faces for now, since they are the major identification point.

>>15080714
I thought about that, actually. Maybe I'll do it at some point - Not completely replacing it though, since I quite enjoy flute synths.
Thanks though, preferring a cover over an original feels like a big compliment!

Anonymous Fri Apr 15 13:04:38 2016 No.15080872
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>>15080669
>https://soundcloud.com/sinsack_agi/final-fantasy-vii-cosmo-canyon-metal-cover
Pretty cool, I'd of liked to hear abit more of the main melody played on guitar though and maybe a solo, though I dunno if solo's are very djent

I attempted to mix together a bunch of touhou arranges to make one song here
https://soundcloud.com/moon-tone/mixing-it-up

>>	Anonymous Fri Apr 15 13:16:36 2016 No.15080904 File: 450 KB, 1360x1552, I drew the pose from the official art..png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Fri Apr 15 13:17:47 2016 No.15080909 >>15080904 My comment accidentally went into the filename whoops

>>	Anonymous Fri Apr 15 13:20:32 2016 No.15080914 >>15080590 I like this

Anonymous Fri Apr 15 13:53:56 2016 No.15081015
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>>15080835
No worries, I'm aware that my lack of motivation to practice shows itself in my pictures. That pencil drawing is relatively old and I mainly just draw in photoshop these days if I ever actually do something, although I've yet to reach a stage where I don't just blatantly copy another artstyle.
I gave coloring part of that drawing a try a while ago which also allowed me to fix alot of face issues with the photoshop lasso tool, although I gave up halfway through when I realized her shoulder felt all wonky and also because I couldn't figure out how to shade clothes properly.

>>15080914
Thanks, I like you!

>>	Anonymous Fri Apr 15 14:16:25 2016 No.15081097 File: 316 KB, 900x1273, 20160415_spring_sketch.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] i tried today /jp/.

>>	Anonymous Fri Apr 15 14:18:55 2016 No.15081106 >>15081097 Pretty! Part of a bigger project or standalone?

>>	Anonymous Fri Apr 15 14:20:44 2016 No.15081109 >>15081106 thank you, it's just a standalone but I might expand on it

>>	Anonymous Fri Apr 15 14:49:54 2016 No.15081239 >>15081097 Glad to see you're still around

>>	Anonymous Fri Apr 15 19:05:23 2016 No.15082176 >>15081097 You are one of my fav artist in LAS

>>	Anonymous Fri Apr 15 20:28:52 2016 No.15082524 What did everyone start out drawing for practice?

>>	Anonymous Fri Apr 15 20:30:10 2016 No.15082535 >>15082524 dicks

>>	Anonymous Fri Apr 15 21:59:43 2016 No.15082829 File: 243 KB, 464x1000, goose attacks moose.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>15080026

>>	Anonymous Fri Apr 15 22:04:18 2016 No.15082842 >>15082829 That is an incredibly rude goose.

>>	Anonymous Fri Apr 15 22:11:44 2016 No.15082867 >>15082829 The goose is loose!

>>	Anonymous Sat Apr 16 00:25:38 2016 No.15083291 >>15082842 Geese are rude Assholes, all of them

>>	Anonymous Sat Apr 16 00:27:59 2016 No.15083298 >>15082829 There's no pie though but its okay, I missed you.

Anonymous Sat Apr 16 02:52:54 2016 No.15083732

>>15081097
Looks pretty.
Since I play Eternal Arcadia again at the moment, I end up comparing everything I see with it, your's included... for an obvious reason.
Loving it.

>>15082829
What a fearsome right!

I'm currently working on some 2hu-arranges for an EP, but... i'ts not really going anywhere.

https://soundcloud.com/sinsack/2hu-arrange-idea-update

>>	Anonymous Sat Apr 16 15:40:36 2016 No.15085680 >>15083732 The original idea got kind of lost there. Well, it's an arrange so it doesn't really matter.

>>	Anonymous Sat Apr 16 15:53:05 2016 No.15085722 File: 526 KB, 2000x2000, yellowbot.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>15077653 Does anyone care if I just dump a few of my sketches/doodles?

>>	Anonymous Sat Apr 16 15:56:19 2016 No.15085732 File: 398 KB, 797x1221, ah.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>15085722

>>	Anonymous Sat Apr 16 15:57:31 2016 No.15085734 File: 918 KB, 2602x1485, mikumiku.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>15085732

>>	Anonymous Sat Apr 16 18:18:00 2016 No.15086236 >>15085722 Fate's speed form is even faster now?

>>	Anonymous Sat Apr 16 19:10:49 2016 No.15086489 >>15077653 >>15079448 Your art reminds me of Imizu. A simpler Imizu.

>>	Anonymous Sat Apr 16 23:14:54 2016 No.15087318 File: 270 KB, 900x1209, hana.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] I feel awkward whenever I post something, but wathever

>>	Anonymous Sat Apr 16 23:38:28 2016 No.15087390 >>15082829 As a Canadian this comic triggers flashbacks to the constant threat of aerial bombardment I was under when I lived in ontario

>>	Anonymous Sat Apr 16 23:52:26 2016 No.15087418 File: 42 KB, 221x264, edea.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Critique me (I didn't draw the hand)

>>	Anonymous Sun Apr 17 01:44:38 2016 No.15087655 File: 2.93 MB, 1280x720, work.webm [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] mediocre-tier artist reporting in

>>	Anonymous Sun Apr 17 02:23:42 2016 No.15087761 >>15080590 >>15085732 Cute! >>15079366 AH HAHAAHAHA!

>>	Anonymous Sun Apr 17 03:02:16 2016 No.15087807 >>15087655 What software did you used to record this?

Anonymous Sun Apr 17 09:21:34 2016 No.15088458
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>>15077653
Continuing.

>>15080669
> More heavenly Kings

Here. Still just the faces though, I'll draw the bodies later.

> How long did that take?

Don't really remember since I did it in a few times, between 5 and 10 hours I guess.

>>	Anonymous Sun Apr 17 09:38:04 2016 No.15088492 File: 719 KB, 980x3400, c1c.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>15088458 her confident expression is cool

>>	Anonymous Sun Apr 17 09:52:04 2016 No.15088533 >>15088458 Damn, I like your style. Badass character designs are definitely your thing! And those bandaged hands look both painful as well as badass. I remember you posted her in color a while back. Looked fantastic.

>>	Anonymous Sun Apr 17 12:58:44 2016 No.15089357 >>15087807 Open Broadcssting Software to record Vegas to speed up. Ffmpeg to webm the vid.

>>	Anonymous Sun Apr 17 13:05:35 2016 No.15089407 >>15080590 late but this is great

>>	Anonymous Sun Apr 17 15:23:43 2016 No.15089957 >>15088492 Why does /v/ rely on stick figures instead of putting in any real effort? Go redraw that with actual people and make it about Ran threads.

Anonymous Sun Apr 17 15:31:21 2016 No.15089981

>>15089957
I always thought most people understood that the artists drawing those were drawing stick figures by choice, not lack of ability. The lines are too clean and deliberate, they're not total amateurs. I mean, you can see in the first panel that the artist of that comic has SOME idea of how to draw a human body, even satirically. Guys like 3-angled-blue(who drew most of the popular stick figure comics that get reposted) absolutely know how to draw whatever the hell they want--they just choose to express humor through stick figures.

>>	Anonymous Sun Apr 17 15:33:03 2016 No.15089986 >>15089957 Sticks figures fit perfectly the "anonymous" part while still being expressive. There is nothing wrong with them.

>>	Anonymous Sun Apr 17 16:02:10 2016 No.15090088 >>15088458 THICK n JUICY

>>	Anonymous Sun Apr 17 16:09:49 2016 No.15090122 >>15089981 It's just a crutch for unfunny /v/ humor.

>>	Anonymous Sun Apr 17 16:23:10 2016 No.15090164 File: 157 KB, 587x1200, heroposes2shading1.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>15088458 >>15088533 Thanks. And working on the shading.

>>	Anonymous Sun Apr 17 17:10:23 2016 No.15090338 >>15090164 The clothes are too tight, even if you want tight clothing there's no definition to them so it just looks like they're painted on.

>>	Anonymous Sun Apr 17 17:13:57 2016 No.15090346 File: 34 KB, 500x254, opmgarouback.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>15090338 > too tight Never heard of the made in Murata clothes?

>>	Anonymous Sun Apr 17 18:23:27 2016 No.15090608 >>15090346 And? That's not the same type of clothing.

>>	Anonymous Sun Apr 17 20:06:12 2016 No.15091054 >>15090164 you gonna make it I need a gallery 家族

>>	Anonymous Sun Apr 17 21:37:02 2016 No.15091386 File: 744 KB, 1440x2560, IMG_20160418_033307.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] The meiling

Anonymous Mon Apr 18 15:25:46 2016 No.15094578
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Hey /jp/! I'm not dead! (anymore)

If you don't recognize it from the changed graphics (compared to older stuff), it's the loli kidnapping/rape simulator!

Now you can even throw things to distract lolis!

I was thinking about having them pick up the item if it interests them, so I'd also want to overhaul their preferences data to figure out what they like/don't like. So far they just have a favourite colour (well actually a 0-1 scalar for each colour) and a favourite flavour-profile (I just treated sweet, sour, salty, bitter umami and spicy as a vectorspace and was planning on also maybe making a least-favourite flavour profile, then you could create a line through the space and project all other food-flavour-vectors onto that line to figure out how much the loli will like it, basing it as 1.0 for the favourite and 0 or -1.0 for the least one.

Although the problem with that is that lolis don't just like one thing, they might like sweet and they might like umami(savoury), but they might not like both combined as much as on their own...

Should I have multiple preference-points inside of the space with attached scalars to each representing the intensity of the preference, then compare a food's vector with every known point and add it's scalar multiplied by some distance-cutoff function (probably just a linear function would work best?) and then added together to form their opinion on it?

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 18 18:05:21 2016 No.15095230 >>15094578 Damn, you really are making it crazy complex.

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 18 18:10:12 2016 No.15095241 File: 36 KB, 1320x960, 5 skin genes 5x size.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>15095230 Well, the lolis have genetics (with ~20 genes so far, 5 for hair, 5 for skin tone, 4 for eyes) already, so what did you expect?

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 18 18:33:45 2016 No.15095348 File: 26 KB, 720x480, [cscentrl.com] Jetman 43.avi_snapshot_16.51_[2013.09.30_01.00.41].jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>15094578 Hurray! You didn't go to jail!

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 18 18:35:07 2016 No.15095353 File: 1.87 MB, 1000x1300, MomijiAngrySmall.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Do you guys like my angry awoo drawing?

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 18 18:36:28 2016 No.15095359 >>15095353 Very disturbing.

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 18 18:38:25 2016 No.15095364 >>15095353 >thinking about Aya.png

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 18 23:08:09 2016 No.15096522 >>15095353 Why is her nose red

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 18 23:37:56 2016 No.15096635 >>15096522 The whole left side of the image has a red outline

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 19 01:11:27 2016 No.15096905 File: 31 KB, 763x267, every flavor loli.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>15094578 >>15095241 Do brown lolis produce chocolate milk?

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 19 02:25:38 2016 No.15097188 >>15096905 lolis do not produce milk. >>15096905 >>15095241 Do red heads not exist?

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 19 04:04:23 2016 No.15097398 File: 85 KB, 805x942, capitalc.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] I stopped playing the game long before she was introduced but I like her design.

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 19 12:03:52 2016 No.15098494 File: 117 KB, 516x440, 1433468439231.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Fuck, some dude on pixiv messaged me with a rather detailed request What do I do? My japanese is terrible. I never expected this to happen

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 19 12:26:48 2016 No.15098571 >>15097398 Kancolle has some attractive designs, too bad the 'game' is shit.

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 19 12:29:06 2016 No.15098584 >>15098494 Why not answer truthfully that you have no idea what he wants and that you accidentally missed Deviantart?

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 19 13:22:55 2016 No.15098778 >>15098494 Ask here >>/int/

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 19 14:47:27 2016 No.15099054 >>15098494 Who are you?

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 19 14:55:07 2016 No.15099080 >>15098494 Post it here. Lets see what he says.

Anonymous Tue Apr 19 16:50:08 2016 No.15099471
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>>15099080
>>15098778
I mean, I get what he's saying
It's just when shit happens like this, it throws me off
I don't want to be too rude or something

>>15099054
I'm just a guy who draws anime girls

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 19 17:08:08 2016 No.15099523 >>15099471 Can't you just straight up say that you don't draw this kind of stuff? Unless what you normally do is along these lines, of course

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 19 18:27:57 2016 No.15099809 >>15099523 Yeah, I'll just go with that. Done a few but I've only posted one

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 19 19:52:11 2016 No.15100090 Where does /jp/ post writings so it's easy to read or paste?

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 19 19:58:00 2016 No.15100107 >>15100090 Pastebin should work fine.

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 19 19:59:09 2016 No.15100108 >>15100107 Thanks!

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 19 23:14:05 2016 No.15100882 >>15099471 >I don't want to be too rude or something Isn't he asking you to keep the request secret? Why'd you come post it?

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 19 23:41:34 2016 No.15100957 File: 298 KB, 900x1273, 20160419_weapon2_sketch.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] i tried today, jp.

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 19 23:43:24 2016 No.15100961 >>15100957 Are you aware that someone's going to move that text box to her butt?

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 19 23:50:25 2016 No.15100976 >>15100957 I like this, blog?

Anonymous Wed Apr 20 03:08:38 2016 No.15101582
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>>15097188

They exist. I even checked statistics for various places for the amount of redheads, blondes, etc and then used some math to figure out what the % chance of each gene being dominant/recessive for each gene pool should be, which was just a bit of combinatorics/probability to get that to match up with the observed expressed stats I had.

pic related

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 20 03:11:44 2016 No.15101590 >>15101582 Holy fugg, man. I think that game can pass as a Dissertation for a degree in applied genetics.

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 20 03:17:33 2016 No.15101600 >>15099471 Loli and piss drinking, huh. Well, that's up to you.

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 20 03:27:22 2016 No.15101631 >>15100957 So she wants to... see my mushroom? Am I interpreting this right? Anyways, nice work dude.

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 20 08:03:54 2016 No.15102016 >>15101582 Are you really okay with having a "Hispanic" group instead of a a "Latin" group, or a "Native American" group that is gene mixed with the African and European groups?

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 20 12:13:13 2016 No.15102596 >>15099471 Did you even mention that you take requests?

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 20 14:15:33 2016 No.15102975 File: 558 KB, 1000x1414, 20160420_neet_sketch.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] I tried today, /jp/. >>15100961 >>15101631 That's creative. I didn't give it much thought though...

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 20 14:58:15 2016 No.15103079 >>15102975 Damn, this is my everyday life, minus the exercise.

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 20 15:00:19 2016 No.15103088 >>15102975 I can't imagine what running with only one shoe will do to your strava times here they said that exercise will stop the tiredness...hasn't worked for me either

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 20 15:06:13 2016 No.15103105 >>15103088 >exercise will stop the tiredness I exercise everyday and it makes me even less energetic later in the day. It doesn't help in that sense, but it sure does burn the calories so that you can snack more.

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 20 15:06:41 2016 No.15103108 >>15102975 No trueNEET wakes up before the sun goes down.

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 20 15:12:57 2016 No.15103124 File: 2.35 MB, 4581x3619, shion5.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] gjbu desu

Anonymous Wed Apr 20 15:21:49 2016 No.15103149

>>15103105
I'm burning lot's of calories with cardio but it makes me so god damn hungry all the time that I actually gained some weight since I started, and I even cut all of the bad carbs like everyone told me to.

>>15103124
Looks really good, I like the coloring!

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 20 15:30:17 2016 No.15103180 >>15103124 cute feet

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 20 15:43:06 2016 No.15103233 >>15102975 I wanna fug that grill.

Anonymous Wed Apr 20 16:02:05 2016 No.15103316
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>>15102016

Spanish genes are put under the Mediterranean gene pool. The gene pools aren't visible to users of the game anyway. Native Americans are kind of obscure IMO and i don't think many people would care about them, wheras hispanics with mixed European/native genes have many millions of people in the world representing the core demographics of multiple countries, so I many players would expect to see such lolis compared to natives. If I have time later I could always add more, although adding more skin tones would involve reworking the skin-tone genes.

>>15101590

It's pretty simple, really. I just use a bitset and then bitwise OR the mother's and father's contributions to your DNA to get the expressed DNA, since 0's correspond to the recessive allele and the 1's correspond to having the dominant one. It's a very oversimplified system though since I only have like 20-30 genes, whereas there are many millions in an actual genes in human DNA with very complicated interactions involving multiple of them.

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 20 16:59:10 2016 No.15103529 File: 67 KB, 270x405, flan.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] I scribbled Flan and Remi when I was high. Happy 4/20 /jp/!

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 20 17:24:12 2016 No.15103632 >>15102975 But never too tired to masturbate I see.

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 20 19:58:37 2016 No.15104338 File: 158 KB, 500x631, christina.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>15103529 You can draw noses without being too round/flared.

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 20 23:10:31 2016 No.15105177 >>15102975 Those shoulder freckles are cute!

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 21 00:11:48 2016 No.15105384 File: 95 KB, 800x626, eugh.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] I'm not to confident in my digital art but I figured getting critique and trying to improve is better than sulking. I have the most difficult time with the face.

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 21 00:20:55 2016 No.15105411 >>15104338 I'll work on it, thanks for the tip!

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 21 09:53:10 2016 No.15106690 >>15105384 Don't hide the hands

Anonymous Thu Apr 21 11:19:25 2016 No.15106901

>>15080872
Very catchy. I very much enjoy the bassy lead and the eurosynths. Very interesting take on mashing the songs up as well, it works unexpectedly well. What kinda time signature is that even?

>>15085680
I will probably disregard most of those ideas in that little thing. It just doesn't feel right.

>>15080669
>>15080714
>>15080872
Did another cover from a song which I really, really like from one of the best games I ever played.
This time, I relied a lot less on synth-flutes and played some guitar-leads to compensate.

https://soundcloud.com/sinsack_agi/skies-of-arcadia-ixa-taka-metal-cover

Anonymous Thu Apr 21 11:43:18 2016 No.15106984
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Been really uninspired, I want out. Did a something just to force myself out of inertia, it's not even mixed.
https://soundcloud.com/ibuki-san/boppy-bgm

>>15078187
I like it. A more pumping percussion/rhythm would really add to it, I believe.

>>15079366
Nice sukia.

>>15079404
This looks nice, but a little too alien to really tell. Overall it's nice.

>>15079448
What's with this Oxado dude, I would throw it away on my first chance to.

>>15080590
Impressive perspective skills. The characters have to catch up a bit, but that actually gives me motivation, shows that more analytical approaches are feasible, and that's my way of learning things.

>>15080669
Holy shit, this guitar sounds awesome. The flute-thing and those quick kicks(?) are really washed out by it, though. Urgent mixing is required for full power!
>artistic slump
I wish my slumps were half as productive as yours.

>>15080872
Your writing hurts my eyes.
But the song/medley is pretty cool!
I'd bet a bit more of your soundscape on the lows, though. Highs take too much protagonism.

>>15081015
Ah, very comfy coloring. Shadows add no volume to it, though.

>>15081097
Yummy rendering. Best kind of rendering.

>>15082829
Woah.

>>15083732
I believe the melody is not following the progression, that's why you feel directionless. And you should either give the flute more ambiance (it sounds pretty flat, which is natural for an asian flute) or try to flatten out the rest, so they blend together.

>>15085732
How can you paint it all wrong and result in something charming instead of bad-looking? Nice.

>>15087318
Please, complete the fish's upper contour.

>>15087418
Work on your hands, then.

>>15087655
What the fuck, don't you ever zoom in?

つづく。

Anonymous Thu Apr 21 12:15:02 2016 No.15107071

>>15088458
Is it me or she's grown wider?
Also your drawings have an uncanny aspect to me, do you trace 3D models?
Either way their designs are cool, can't deny that.

>>15094578
There you are... not afraid of Hiroyuki anymore?

Not sure how complicated it is to plot, but you could turn preferences into a 3D solid. Then plot a 3D solid for the food being offered and test how much of the food solid is inside the girl's preferences solid.

The higher the % of it inside the preference zone, the better. If you really want to go the extra mile, the closer the solid is to the highest border (as opposed to the "mininum preference" border), the better. A check is needed to know whether the highes border is -1 or 1, since there are 6 axis.

Normal people would simply give each girl a favorite food (or a set of them) and put available in the stores, you know...

I don't know what you work with, but you could really be improving humanity with this kind of analytical data. Research on human senses are a joke compared to what could be done.

>>15095353
This looks really bad. Which paradoxically makes the picture interesting. I like it!

>>15097398
>>15098571
Really? I find the design pretty shitty, but this drawing is very cool, lots of well-done frilly frills.

>>15099471
>I don't want to be too rude or something
So you're doing it for free and think he's got a right to complain? Don't ever go into a relationship, anon.

>>15100957
Nice! Except for the forced buttshot, this skirt looks all wonky. Next time, try a lower angle instead (which is pretty hard, so I understand your reasons).

>>15100961
Thanks for being in this thread.

>>15102975
Nice art, but not very NEET. Cute salami pillow.

>>15103124
Work on your values. Pretty cool, nevertheless.

>>15105384
I'm afraid you've skipped some fundamentals. If nothing else, review your volumetry, the fact that you're struggling with faces is because it's the hardest part to cover up for an unpolished anatomy.

>>15106901
Yup, same advice from the FF arrange in the post above.

おしまい。

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 21 12:21:17 2016 No.15107090 >>15107071 >your drawings have an uncanny aspect to me post your birthing hips please

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 21 13:01:45 2016 No.15107201 >>15107090 I'm not sure what you mean - in case you're attacking my skills, yes, they are inferior to the artist in question. Uncanniness comes specifically from being very convincing, but not 1:1 perfect.

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 21 13:18:29 2016 No.15107250 >>15107201 Oh, I missunderstood, I thought you meant that the drawing looked like you. pls no bully

Anonymous Thu Apr 21 13:52:37 2016 No.15107393

>>15107071
>I'm afraid you've skipped some fundamentals.
Like? Don't leave me hanging.

>If nothing else, review your volumetry,
What does this even mean? I looked it up and only got L'Oreal stuff. I don't think you're thinking of the right term.

>the fact that you're struggling with faces is because it's the hardest part to cover up for an unpolished anatomy.
I can draw faces fine but applying it to digital painting is difficult for me, it's hard to get the face to fit in with the flesh. I wish I had tutorials on painting a whole person + face rather than bit by bit.

Anonymous Thu Apr 21 13:59:32 2016 No.15107418
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>>15107071
>Really? I find the design pretty shitty, but this drawing is very cool, lots of well-done frilly frills.
I don't like many of the designs but I do like Bismarck, I just like military clothing though.

Anonymous Thu Apr 21 15:43:20 2016 No.15107761

>>15106901
As has already been said, the mix is the thing hurts the most here. I'd cut the guitar a little at 2khz and leave more space for the bass.
I'm not good at this so take it with a grain of salt.

>>15106984
Sounds like something you would find in a genesis game. You might not notice since you've probably been listening to it for a while, but If I were you I'd try to make it more 'predictable'.
Thanks. Yeah you're right. What I'm lacking in the most is the percussion.

>>15080669
>I like the vibe. Feels a little like a mix of an RPGs battle theme and a joyous, gag/prankster-kind of theme song.
Thanks, I didn't see it that way, but you're right. It sounds like that.

>>15107071
>volumetry
I lurk /ic/ all the time and I haven't seen this one yet.

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 21 15:49:31 2016 No.15107787 >>15107393 Not him but I'm guessing he means form. Currently it looks pretty flat. I'm not very good at digital painting either but doing studies has helped a ton.

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 21 15:49:46 2016 No.15107791 File: 202 KB, 773x1000, sadfasdf.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] I haven't had the time to post on /jp/ lately. what could I do to improve her design?

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 21 16:17:03 2016 No.15107906 >>15107791 Color her.

Anonymous Thu Apr 21 16:47:52 2016 No.15108021

>>15107393
What I meant on the fundamentals is your forms don't have enough refinement to indicate anatomy. Calves are thick/straight, toes are a mess, knees are hanging on the borders. I don't intend to sound /ic/ here, but Loomis.

As for volumetry, forgive me, I've been studying in three different languages. I mean volumes, shading, tridimensionality, just as >>15107787 said. As is, you're basically filling the borders with darker colors and the middle with lighter ones.

And that's why I think you're struggling with the face - even if you know how to DRAW them, you might not be able to SHADE them, since you don't (seem to) have enough experience with indicating forms through values.

>>15107418
Well, in this outfit she does indeed look better.

>>15107761
Thanks for the feedback, yo. When you say more predictable, you mean those two parts where I suddenly do a lot of quick notes in succession? Didn't think much about it, but I see how it could affect the catchiness of the song.

As for your percussion, some kind of LFO could do the trick. At least I think that's the name of the effect. Listen to this snippet for a very prominent example:
https://youtu.be/D8F9XqxcCnE?t=62

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 21 17:33:58 2016 No.15108149 File: 93 KB, 627x897, tarot.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] I thought making Touhou Tarot would be cool but I'm having thinking trouble. I'm not sure about how well some of the characters fit the arcana.

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 21 17:37:12 2016 No.15108160 >>15107791 Bracelets Give her stockings, hand gloves design patterns. Very cute drawing by the way.

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 21 17:41:12 2016 No.15108175 >>15108149 >not choosing Sakuya for The World come on man

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 21 17:59:36 2016 No.15108252 >>15077653 I really hate this artist. >>15100957 >>15102975 I like this. wylee a cute

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 21 18:00:55 2016 No.15108253 >>15108252 > I really hate this artist. He killed your family and waifu?

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 21 18:03:10 2016 No.15108258 File: 2 KB, 120x80, pxl-tan.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] I did something!

Anonymous Thu Apr 21 18:06:27 2016 No.15108264

>Declare to myself that I'm finally going to become a fucking artist a month ago
>Get psyched up and practice for an hour nearly everyday
>All of a sudden flake out and never practice again

I'm going on like 3 weeks of not even touching paper.

I'm never going to get to get my webcomic idea down to paper, am I? Procrastination is fucking killing me.

Anonymous Thu Apr 21 18:15:00 2016 No.15108288

>>15108264
You could do what I've always been threatening to do and simply quit using 4chan and other time wasters on the Internet for several months.

I did it a few months back for a couple of weeks and I noticed my mood improved substantially as a result.

Anonymous Thu Apr 21 18:27:41 2016 No.15108345

>>15108288
I already am going cold turkey on a few sites I used to browse like mad for a week. Not 4chan though.

I have pretty bad ADHD and even though I have tons upon tons of time I find it difficult to get up and actually practice. My skill progresses so slowly. I know that's just something I have to deal with, but I felt like my skill wasn't even improving.

I'm using drawabox like some people a while go in a previous OC thread suggested, but I don't feel like I'm actually learning anything. I can't sketch even the simplest objects without fucking up literally everything. It's not fun. It's just work.

I'm a writer by nature (I'm becoming an artist as many of my stories need a visual medium, they just do not work at all in prose), and I already passed the equivalent writing phase in fucking grade school. In art I'm not even at the equivalent of the "shitty Pokemon fanfics" phase yet. My art "skills" are at the equivalent of the "toddler learning his first words" level. Probably lower.

And when I look at all my favorite artist they all started in fucking grade school and shit. I'm probably too late to ever gain any real skill.

sage for whiny blogshit

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 21 18:28:23 2016 No.15108349 >>15108264 Whats your idea?

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 21 18:38:57 2016 No.15108404 >>15108149 >Yuyuko isn't Death. Hanged Man = Kaguya Lovers = Miko Devil = Remilia Tower = Mokou High Priestess = Byakuren World = ZUN

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 21 18:52:23 2016 No.15108459 >>15108253 No, he's annoyingly cheeky.

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 21 18:53:48 2016 No.15108463 >>15108404 Tower is Chen. Moko is temperance.

Anonymous Thu Apr 21 18:56:45 2016 No.15108473

>>15108349
A while ago, I played Asura's Wrath on the PS3. Loved the hell out the game and its story. Being a 2hu fan I tried coming up with a fanfic that merged the two series together.

Obviously, it didn't work. But I still liked the idea, and began to formulate a new, original story that was inspired by both Touhou and Asura's Wrath. Over time, it has taken a lot of inspiration from shounen manga, especially Dragon Ball Z. Oh, and some Exalted influence as well.

As of now, it's a shounen fighting comic, as I'm a sucker for badass fights and overpowered chuuni characters beating the crap out of each other. However, the Touhou influence means that basically every member of the cast is a girl in a weird dress. It still retains the over-the-top-ness I want though--characters regularly punch each other through mountains, throw off energy attacks that create massive explosions visible from space, and all that cheesy chuuni bullshit. That's all the DBZ influence--hell, this thing has fusions and transformation power-ups too.

The setting is this Science Fantasy thing that's basically a hi-tech futuristic society--with the aesthetics and feel of Feudal Japan and Ancient China. Pagoda-skyscrapers, terracotta robot-soldiers, laser blasters that look like Chinese crossbows, fleets of battleships named after Japanese gods, all that good stuff. Think how Asura's Wrath did their whole "Hindu/Buddhist-tech" thing and replace the Indian flair for East Asian flair.

I want to draw this thing years down the line when I have decent art skills. I'll put it online and treat it like an actual serialized manga, updating with a new chapter either every week or month.

Right now it's actually TOO "Touhou Ball Z". The characters are all rip-off 2hus, I need to make them more interesting and unique; the MC's have this really bad, they are too way much like Reimu and Marisa in design though their personalities differ a lot (unfortunately, I really like their designs...) and the DBZ elements like transformations and fusions are too blatantly copied. But I have years to work on this and plan out the plot before I work on it.

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 21 18:57:12 2016 No.15108474 >>15108175 I was resisting the joke >>15108404 I think those work, but isn't death usually a grim reaper in tarot? Yuyuko works too.

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 21 18:59:02 2016 No.15108478 >>15108149 It's not very traditional but I think it would be interesting to have reversible art with two characters for each card.

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 21 18:59:37 2016 No.15108481 >>15108473 tl;dr

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 21 19:04:49 2016 No.15108492 >>15108404 >>15108463 Tower Seija already works perfectly

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 21 19:06:09 2016 No.15108497 >>15108481 Touhou Ball Z. That's pretty much what it is when boiled down. DBZ if every character was a girl in a frilly dress and less power-level pissing contests.

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 21 19:18:23 2016 No.15108519 >>15108473 Use those designs for the characters' ancestors/predecessors/something who appear only briefly, but represent what the protagonists could be at the height of their power.

Anonymous Thu Apr 21 19:47:53 2016 No.15108607

>>15107071
>Not sure how complicated it is to plot, but you could turn preferences into a 3D solid. Then plot a 3D solid for the food being offered and test how much of the food solid is inside the girl's preferences solid.

The solid thing sounds like it might just add complexity (unless shapes are assumed n-d boxes instead of arbitrary (convex?) shapes) while accomplishing less, besides giving ranges. The ranges seem like they could just be implemented by the distance cutoff function though which would make a lot of things easier (ie allowing non-uniform preference-density in the areas without necessitating the evaluation of a sextuple integral, although I guess if the functions are simple that would be easy)

Or maybe I'm misunderstanding something.

Anonymous Thu Apr 21 22:27:12 2016 No.15109290
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>>15108264
>>15108473

Just do it man. I can't into art either, but I want to make a beat'em up involving cute girls wearing military clothes based off of European mythology/nations/ideologies.

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 21 22:37:08 2016 No.15109357 File: 53 KB, 256x512, Th11Satori.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>15109290 A few points for your work. The blackhaired girls arms should be longer, atleast just beyond the waist when its dangling normally.

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 21 23:44:08 2016 No.15109588 File: 157 KB, 399x454, 042116 eggxdonut.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 21 23:57:24 2016 No.15109628 >>15109357 >just beyond the waist That's way too short. The wrist meets the bottom of the pelvic area when arms are at rest, give or take a little for varying people, but it never varies THAT much.

>>	Anonymous Fri Apr 22 00:33:24 2016 No.15109744 >>15108497 >DBZ if every character was a girl in a frilly dress and less power-level pissing contests. So, Pretty Cure

Anonymous Fri Apr 22 00:45:53 2016 No.15109776

>>15109744
Can girls in Pretty Cure blow up planets? I mean, I don't get quite as ridiculous as DBZ--blowing up a planet is pretty much the most destructive thing someone can do--but some of the cast can do it in this story.

Christ, even the fucking Fairy at the end can cause some serious geographical damage.

Funnily enough I find myself reducing the powerlevels as time goes by, as cranking up things to that level kind of fucks up everything. It's hard to write a coherent story when half the cast, including the fairy, the mouse youkai, and the two moonbunnies, are throwing around planet-busting attacks every fight. I had to create an entire separate dimension chock-full of planets just so the heroines and villains could fight later on without inadvertently fucking up the Earth (not actually the earth, but its name isn't final) and accidentally murdering billions of people.

It's also really hard to have 2hu's "everyone is friends after the battle and has tea" atmosphere work with a bunch of overpowered girls blowing holes in continents.

>>	Anonymous Fri Apr 22 00:50:17 2016 No.15109801 >>15108345 >Not 4chan though. I spend roughly 8 hours on /jp/, I think I have a problem. I probably won't get good at anything though, I'm mostly unburnable trash.

>>	Anonymous Fri Apr 22 01:46:03 2016 No.15109925 >>15109588 I love it

>>	Anonymous Fri Apr 22 01:46:53 2016 No.15109926 >>15109776 Possibly https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wy-4YMBIvs8 They can give and take high levels of damage anyway. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IABt3UL8ILE&feature=player_detailpage#t=2715

>>	Anonymous Fri Apr 22 03:52:06 2016 No.15110372 >>15109926 Man, I love how dark each season of precure gets towards the end, and how much destruction tends to happen. It really is DBZ with little girls.

Anonymous Fri Apr 22 04:36:35 2016 No.15110491

>>15107791
Remove jewelry like earrings.

>>15108258
It's very small so I can't properly make out the details, but as far as I can tell, it's nicely donw, but kinda depressing.

>>15108264
>for an hour
>nearly everyday
>nearly
You gotta step up your game. That's not enough.

>>15109588
This is disturbing.
>>15109925
Me too.

>>15106984
It's jazzy, but I can't quite seem to enjoy the saxosynth. I know it's probably meant to give off a retro-feeling, but it doesn't quite hit me.
Contrary to what has been said, I'd like it if it was less repetitive, so adding a whole other part would work maybe?

Also thanks for the input on the songs.
Yeah, I can't quite seem to make the drums and synths pop out properly. With the drums, I tried lowering the dB of the guitars, but I can't quite figure out the proper volume without making the guitar too silent.
On the other hand, I relieved the synths of some high frequencies. Adding them back might hurt your ears, letting them out makes them less prominent.
But hey, I'm learning by the day, so I hope to figure that ou sooner or later.
And thank you, yeah, I really enjoy the guitar sound as well. Using some matching to the sound of one of my favourite bands + quad tracking for thickness.

Anonymous Fri Apr 22 04:58:24 2016 No.15110618

>>15110372
You know, it's not really weird for magical girl shows to get dark, or even for characters to "die" (or die and be revived). It's one of the biggest problems I had with Madoka, not just that it tried to be "brand new first ever dark mahou shoujo," but pulled the revival shit too in the end.

>>15107791
Consider making her torso a tiny bit longer. I get the style, but her nipple bandages look strange being that high up. If they were pushed down a bit and the rest of her torso with it, it wouldn't look as strange.

Maybe change her Miku shoes too. Like into laced up type boots.

Her arms could use something too, maybe like being one of those kinds of gloves that just end in a ring around the middle finger. Maybe stockings like has been said already would match the gloves as they are now better. Depends if they're leather or cloth.

Consider making a sample sketch of her with her wings near her waist instead foo. I think her kind of style may benefit from that placement.

Anonymous Fri Apr 22 06:55:21 2016 No.15111040

>>15108607
Well, I've said 3D solids but that's because you mentioned 6 axis. Of course it can be a n-d solid, if you can mathematically check whether the food is inside the theoretical area of the preferences.

A box (hyperbox?) should be fine, too, as long as there are enough steps to achieve a good taste variety.

>>15109290
Their faces deteriorated in pixel version, get those cheeks up.
Looking good!

>>15110491
>Remove jewelry like earrings.
Agreed.

>I tried lowering the dB of the guitars
I suck at mixing, but have you tried meddling with side-chain compression? It could do the trick.
You could also try panning/delaying/chorus-ing certain layers. By giving the flute (or the guitar) a widened distribution, it dodges stuff that's in the center and sounds on its own.
Theoretically, that is. I personally always do goofed when trying.

And thanks for the feedback as well. Yeah, the thing is pretty repetitive, tried to make a loop in the molds of Gameboy stuff, but maybe went too short. There are 50 seconds masterpieces floating around:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=W1nWfLg7cv8

>>15108345
Drawabox is meant to develop your mechanical skill, not your creation. You should study 1 hour of it daily, but also make one authoral drawing whenever you can.

I believe what's keeping you down is that you have no motivation seeing only boxes and lines. Once you notice how the boxes are improving your cute girls, there's where the spark does its thing.

>>	Anonymous Fri Apr 22 07:05:48 2016 No.15111078 >>15106984 >What the fuck, don't you ever zoom in? Its an opencanvas event, so its just a playback.

>>	Anonymous Fri Apr 22 09:00:38 2016 No.15111411 File: 1.02 MB, 2547x1200, heroposes1.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>15077653 >>15088458 Guess that should do it.

>>	Anonymous Fri Apr 22 11:23:44 2016 No.15111780 File: 125 KB, 384x426, this.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>15111411 Something about this area looks really off

>>	Anonymous Fri Apr 22 11:32:38 2016 No.15111796 >>15111780 it's the shades the shades suggest that her arm is wrapped really tightly by those bandage while the lineart says otherwise

>>	Anonymous Fri Apr 22 11:34:58 2016 No.15111808 >>15111796 No I meant the torso connecting to the pelvis It seems too squished. But you raised another issue

>>	Anonymous Fri Apr 22 11:41:02 2016 No.15111829 >>15111796 > the shades suggest that her arm is wrapped really tightly Eh?

Anonymous Fri Apr 22 16:47:48 2016 No.15112896

>>15110491
>You gotta step up your game. That's not enough.
How long then? Even an hour of practicing my mechanical skill was enough to drive me crazy. I can only do the same repetitive exercises for so long...

>>15111040
>I believe what's keeping you down is that you have no motivation seeing only boxes and lines. Once you notice how the boxes are improving your cute girls, there's where the spark does its thing.

You nailed it, honestly. After drawing a circle inside two lines for the five-hundredth time it becomes REALLY hard to retain a positive outlook.

>but also make one authoral drawing whenever you can.

But my skill is nonexistent. I have no sense of perspective, I can't scale things correctly, I can't even sketch things in front of me without fucking literally everything up.

>>	Anonymous Fri Apr 22 16:48:52 2016 No.15112902 >>15110491 >Remove jewelry like earrings. What's bad about jewelry?

Anonymous Fri Apr 22 16:59:22 2016 No.15112938

>>15112896
Well, you need to remove the "nearly". You gotta sit down and exercise every single day. An hour of time is a good starting point, but breaking the circle is a problem.
You have to do it every day, at least, especially when starting out. And you'll be starting out for a whole year at least.

If it frustrates you or drives you crazy; so in the end doesn't let you have fun, I don't know if drawing is the right thing for you, to be honest. You've got to have fun doing it.

>>15112902
I would explain, but that would probably derail in a hatespeech.

Anonymous Fri Apr 22 17:17:51 2016 No.15113006

>>15112938
>>If it frustrates you or drives you crazy; so in the end doesn't let you have fun, I don't know if drawing is the right thing for you, to be honest. You've got to have fun doing it.

I do really want to have fun, but grinding out mechanical skill isn't very fun. I just really want to get past that phase so I can actually have fun drawing stuff.

Like, I'm a car guy, and driving manual can be a ton of fun. But learning how to drive manual can be an absolute nightmare. You've just got to do it so you can actually start enjoying the hobby. I hope that makes sense.

Anonymous Fri Apr 22 17:31:50 2016 No.15113057
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>>15112896
Even if you can't draw, you should.

Pic related is, on the left, the first drawing I've ever felt proud of (2006).

All the others are from 2009. I felt pretty proud about that Grim Reaper, and the chibi one isn't that bad either - even today I'd say it's got some cuteness appeal. But the baseball guy and the pigtail girl are uber shit.

Even so, they are still better than the 2006 drawing, even though I didn't know what I was doing back then. So just by trial an error, some skill is developed - by training your perspective and line control, you speed up that evolution.

Why am I showing you these? You don't know what you're capable of until you start to have some output.to judge. You won't have any fun either. I really enjoyed making that Grim Reaper.

And you will never be able to draw everything you envision, this is the curse of virtually every artist. The itch that won't let you stop despising your work is the same one that will give you the urge to keep improving.

You can either start to scratch or live with it.

Now, this is no motivational thread, start posting some stuff and we'll figure it out.
I've seen really bad shit in my life, there is nothing to be ashamed about - except for one thing: not contributing to the OC thread with OC.

>>15113006
>I do really want to speak Japanese, but grinding out kanji reading isn't very fun. I just really want to get past that phase so I can actually have fun talking stuff.
>I do really want to build robots, but grinding out theoretical physics isn't very fun. I just really want to get past that phase so I can actually have fun inventing stuff.
Understand? You should have fun creating, to counterbalance the brainless exercise.

>>	Anonymous Fri Apr 22 18:02:54 2016 No.15113205 >>15113006 You should forget about those mechanical exercises. If you have it in mind, that mechanical skill should come naturally through drawing. When you learn something you should try to apply that knowledge doing something you like.

>>	Anonymous Fri Apr 22 19:02:30 2016 No.15113517 File: 1.30 MB, 852x852, chiru.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] hello /jaypee/

>>	Anonymous Fri Apr 22 19:09:10 2016 No.15113549 >>15113517 Is this a yukkuri?

>>	Anonymous Fri Apr 22 19:22:24 2016 No.15113628 >>15113057 Thanks for the encouraging words man. I have some crippling perfectionism issues (they're why I never took up drawing as a kid) and I hope drawing might be able to break me out of them.

>>	Anonymous Fri Apr 22 19:27:44 2016 No.15113642 >>15113517 Hello, cut-out Cirno. I like you.

>>	Anonymous Fri Apr 22 20:02:15 2016 No.15113784 File: 20 KB, 480x480, ovo.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>15094578 >>15095241 >>15101582 >>15103316 What is this? Is it a game?

Anonymous Fri Apr 22 20:37:52 2016 No.15113957
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>>15113784

It's a game where you kidnap little girls and keep them in your basement dungeon and have sex with them. There's a crime system, random city gen/family gen(with genetics system so kids are actually the genetic product of their parents, and you can impregnate girls you kidnap if they're past ~12yo (plus or minus some variance, basically when they reach menarche)). The lolis go about a daily schedule (sleep -> wake up and walk to school -> play in a park at like 2:30 -> go home after a few hours of wandering the park and repeat).

Anonymous Fri Apr 22 20:41:42 2016 No.15113971
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>>15113784

Here's a pic of the dungeon expansion thing. I'm currently recoding it to use the new graphics since the new graphics moved tiles from 32x32 to 16x16 which made me switch how walls worked, since before 1 tile (32) was simply way too wide so instead I had an additional bitmask-implemented system for which of the 4 walls were around each tile, but now tiles will have an entire cell for walls, plus now I'm gonna actually have the dungeon be able to be saved instead of how ti was before, and hopefully interface with the editor stuff I used for house interiors (before they were just hardcoded).

>>	Anonymous Fri Apr 22 20:49:30 2016 No.15114007 What happened to the 2hu fangame thread? Did everyone give up already?

>>	Anonymous Fri Apr 22 20:54:22 2016 No.15114033 >>15113971 If only they were qt lolis.

Anonymous Fri Apr 22 21:12:08 2016 No.15114093
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>>15110491
>It's very small so I can't properly make out the details, but as far as I can tell, it's nicely donw, but kinda depressing.

Thanks. I forgot to resize it to 200%, so have a belated zoomed one.

Depressing is what I was going for so it's a mission accomplished I guess.

>>	Anonymous Fri Apr 22 21:15:07 2016 No.15114107 >>15114093 Is she dead?

Anonymous Sat Apr 23 03:33:44 2016 No.15115612

>>15113006
While exercise is important, sure, it can feel like a chore, but don't forget to make it fun for you. Even if you do exercises and don't have fun doing them, don't forget to actually draw stuff for fun. Maybe doing both of them, and split the hour between them?

>>15113205
This is also very good advice. I don't know about forgetting about in as a whole, but the last sentence is full of wisdom.

>>15113517
This is adorable dude. Good job.

>>15114093
She looks like a mix of Madotsuki and an Inkling.

>>	Anonymous Sat Apr 23 15:43:14 2016 No.15117598 File: 237 KB, 400x1238, moose is saved.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>15082829

>>	Anonymous Sat Apr 23 15:51:46 2016 No.15117639 File: 131 KB, 400x667, the end.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>15117598

>>	Anonymous Sat Apr 23 16:06:42 2016 No.15117711 File: 377 KB, 582x1000, sad flex.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

Anonymous Sun Apr 24 04:07:00 2016 No.15120329
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>>15111411
>>15111780
Clothes are too tight you should have just made her naked and even if jeans were that tight, the underwear line would not show.

Not even mangaka who draw make clothes look so bland like you do, make some effort to make the clothes look semi realistic. Her bandages have too many unnecessary lines. Even Guts bandages don't look like that.

What's going on with her posture? She looks like one of those girls who always purposely sticks their ass out and then have spinal problems later in life.

That kid in the picture up on the right what's going on with her hair? You should look up proper reference pictures for something like that and even if the characters hair is supposed to look wavy/curly it would not look like that mess you've got going on on top of that girl's head.

Who did you say your inspiration was again Miura? And you've obviously got some turtlefish/that other porn artist eyes going on.

You keep posting the same thing over and over again, churn out something new instead of posting the same thing repeatedly with little to no progress or change.

Did you draw that picture of the Lamia?

>>	Anonymous Sun Apr 24 04:12:21 2016 No.15120346 >>15120329 > posts the W&B drawing > posts the colored drawing > You keep posting the same thing over and over again! ?

>>	Anonymous Sun Apr 24 10:47:46 2016 No.15121358 >>15120329 where's your oc you big fat meanie

>>	Anonymous Sun Apr 24 11:01:18 2016 No.15121416 >>15121358 I agree his words were chosen a bit harshly, but his critism was at least definitely constructive. A good artist should be able to handle any sort of critism.

>>	Anonymous Sun Apr 24 15:15:33 2016 No.15122509 File: 940 KB, 900x1273, 20160424_flight_sketch.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] It's cold outside, /jp/. Would you let her in?

>>	Anonymous Sun Apr 24 15:22:15 2016 No.15122533 >>15122509 Of course! Look at those exposed organs, she must be freezing twice as much.

>>	Anonymous Sun Apr 24 15:23:25 2016 No.15122536 File: 23 KB, 765x525, hero fanart.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] tribute to the best artist in this thread...

>>	Anonymous Sun Apr 24 16:16:12 2016 No.15122852 >>15122509 Is the Wy from flipland?

>>	Anonymous Sun Apr 24 16:17:17 2016 No.15122859 >>15122509 If cuddling is still possible then yes.

>>	Anonymous Sun Apr 24 16:18:14 2016 No.15122870 >>15122509 Wy does cute comics and i'm sure she's cute too.

>>	Anonymous Sun Apr 24 16:19:30 2016 No.15122882 >>15122536 I hate it. but i still hate the original more

>>	Anonymous Sun Apr 24 16:22:28 2016 No.15122907 >>15122882 Why so much hate?

>>	Anonymous Sun Apr 24 16:26:27 2016 No.15122944 >>15122536 pls no bully

Anonymous Sun Apr 24 16:26:38 2016 No.15122948

>>15122852
The Penanggalan or 'Hantu Penanggal' is a ghost of Southeast Asian folk mythology. It is a variation of the vampire myth found in the Malay Peninsula, or as Balan-balan in Sabah. It is similar to the Manananggal, a similar creature of Filipino folklore. "Penanggal" or "Penanggalan" literally means "detach" or "remove". Both terms—Manananggal and Penanggal—may carry the same meaning due to both languages being grouped or having a common root under the Austronesian language family, though the two creatures are culturally distinct in appearance and behavior.

>>	Anonymous Sun Apr 24 16:40:42 2016 No.15123036 >>15122948 So uh, is the Wy actually a detatchables youkai?

>>	Anonymous Sun Apr 24 16:47:30 2016 No.15123072 >>15109588 The Boku does a sex molestation breakfast. its good for the health

>>	Anonymous Sun Apr 24 17:29:52 2016 No.15123295 File: 1.18 MB, 2560x1440, IMG_20160424_232108191.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Can I borrow the " i tried today" mantra even if actually was two days ago?

>>	Anonymous Sun Apr 24 17:32:11 2016 No.15123310 >>15123295 Ah, fucking phone.

>>	Anonymous Sun Apr 24 17:41:24 2016 No.15123355 >>15122536 thicc

>>	Anonymous Sun Apr 24 17:43:19 2016 No.15123364 >>15122509 I would warm her exposed womb with my seed.

>>	Anonymous Sun Apr 24 17:47:08 2016 No.15123376 >>15123310 Don't blame technology for your lack of post-processing.

>>	Anonymous Sun Apr 24 18:05:27 2016 No.15123477 >>15122948 This would mean her hollowed out body is helpless at her home right now, ripe for molestation!

>>	Anonymous Sun Apr 24 19:07:10 2016 No.15123773 File: 277 KB, 877x800, hed1.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>15122536

>>	Anonymous Sun Apr 24 19:14:52 2016 No.15123807 >>15123773 is she about to knead that pizza dough?

>>	Anonymous Sun Apr 24 19:15:23 2016 No.15123809 >>15123773 if I draw myself drawing a cheeky image of her will I also be getting an image of her almost punching me? She seems like someone I'd like to be around.

>>	Anonymous Sun Apr 24 19:19:41 2016 No.15123829 >>15123809 Ball busting

>>	Anonymous Sun Apr 24 19:24:48 2016 No.15123864 File: 274 KB, 1024x1073, vectorized_sweating_towel_guy_by_thinkaliker-d8693zh.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>15123829 oh man I would still take the chance

>>	Anonymous Sun Apr 24 19:25:10 2016 No.15123865 File: 33 KB, 780x525, pizza.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>15123807

>>	Anonymous Sun Apr 24 19:26:35 2016 No.15123872 >>15123773 What's going on with the neck area and that arm needs to be fixed it seems too small, fingers don't have any depth to them either it feels like just because she wears bandages and they have so many lines you were lazy with it.

Anonymous Sun Apr 24 19:26:46 2016 No.15123874
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What would be some better colors for her clothes?
I'm wanting them to have like a poor washed-out look. Also anything else I should change? I'm still working on the eyes, I kind of just threw down some colors so they weren't empty.

>>	Anonymous Sun Apr 24 19:28:12 2016 No.15123881 >>15123872 This isn't /ic/.

>>	Anonymous Sun Apr 24 19:30:53 2016 No.15123892 File: 7 KB, 134x112, 1461540406307.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>15123874

>>	Anonymous Sun Apr 24 19:30:54 2016 No.15123895 >>15123872 > that arm needs to be fixed it seems too small > seems If you tried to think about it a bit the proportions work though.

>>	Anonymous Sun Apr 24 19:31:57 2016 No.15123900 >>15123895 It doesn't, the arm is too small. If you were trying to go for some kind of foreshortening, you failed.

>>	Anonymous Sun Apr 24 19:33:30 2016 No.15123909 >>15123900 > the arm is too small It really isn't.

>>	Anonymous Sun Apr 24 19:35:36 2016 No.15123918 >>15123892 Nice ass.

>>	Anonymous Sun Apr 24 19:36:12 2016 No.15123922 >>15123909 That wasn't an argument. It's too small and everything connected to the torso and the torso itself looks fucked, my guess is the artist rushed to get it done so they didn't check properly.

>>	Anonymous Sun Apr 24 19:36:40 2016 No.15123924 >>15123773 Go back to /a/

>>	Anonymous Sun Apr 24 19:37:17 2016 No.15123930 >>15123922 > That wasn't an argument. saying "but it is" isn't an argument either.

>>	Anonymous Sun Apr 24 19:38:22 2016 No.15123933 >>15123930 I meant my original statement isn't up for arguments because the arm IS too small.

>>	Anonymous Sun Apr 24 19:39:37 2016 No.15123939 >>15123773 Punching a xenomorph egg isn't a great idea

>>	Anonymous Sun Apr 24 19:40:39 2016 No.15123947 >>15123865 Saved

>>	Anonymous Sun Apr 24 19:42:31 2016 No.15123956 >>15123933 > no need for my original argument for my statement because it's 100% a fact Eh?

>>	Anonymous Sun Apr 24 19:43:29 2016 No.15123967 >>15123874 Anon she dropped her poop.

>>	Anonymous Sun Apr 24 19:44:34 2016 No.15123973 >>15123956 >*no need for argument for my original statement

>>	Anonymous Sun Apr 24 19:45:32 2016 No.15123976 >>15123973 >*no need to argue against my original statement because it's 100% fact

>>	Anonymous Sun Apr 24 19:46:05 2016 No.15123978 >>15123967 ah, fuck, you're right. thought I told that bitch to keep holding it

>>	Anonymous Sun Apr 24 19:46:56 2016 No.15123981 >>15123918 it's a front butt!

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 25 03:22:31 2016 No.15125541 >>15123865 $19.95 plus tip of your penis

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 25 04:29:27 2016 No.15125699 >>15123773 Pretty good use of perspective, but her neck seems to be too thin, also her head is too big. Otherwise nice, I like the expression and the thoroughly detailed hand.

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 25 10:03:11 2016 No.15126436 File: 275 KB, 987x791, what-could-go-wrong.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>15077653 I hope you don't mind me self inserting myself next to your character but I wanna poke her cheek so much oh god please don't hurt me too much

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 25 10:05:23 2016 No.15126440 >>15126436 Is your hair that fabulous in real life?

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 25 10:16:50 2016 No.15126458 File: 35 KB, 635x447, people-fabio.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>15126440 similar to this, but sadly my facial features are neither as manly as Fabio's nor as bishounen as an anime character

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 25 10:20:12 2016 No.15126466 >>15126436 >I wanna poke her cheek Why? What are you, some sort of autistic creeper? Who does that?

Anonymous Mon Apr 25 10:45:21 2016 No.15126535
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>>15126466

In defense of anon, i must say poking a girl's cheek feels really nice.

Cheeks are made of the same type of tissue that makes boobs so it's like you're feeling her boobs but not really!

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>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 25 14:36:47 2016 No.15127253 space jin knockoff

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 25 14:45:10 2016 No.15127278 >>15127253 Not even close. probably he doesn't even know who that is. guy's all about /a/'s meme "great artists" from last year, murata and tsugumomo guy.

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 25 15:28:08 2016 No.15127403 >>15127278 > "/a/'s meme "great artists" from last year" > "Tsugumomo guy" It's Yoshikazu, and Tsugumomo began more than 8 years ago fucker, and Murata isn't anything new either.

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 25 16:02:52 2016 No.15127495 Im thinking about making a loli VN What sort of characters or situations would you like to see the game?

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 25 16:18:19 2016 No.15127535 File: 336 KB, 704x400, 135721148865.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>15127495 How about a mature-minded loli who's above all this shit, making dialogues very meta?

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 25 16:25:32 2016 No.15127563 >>15127535 I had already thought of that, it was going to be the main characters little sister and subsequently the most difficult character to fug.

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 25 18:32:13 2016 No.15128113 >>15127403 >Murata isn't anything new Not for me, but it is surely for people like you that never gave a fuck about him before one punch man.

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 25 18:34:32 2016 No.15128125 >>15127535 That's another nice animation experiment gone wrong. also /a/ is the other door down the block

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 25 18:44:47 2016 No.15128170 >>15128113 > what is E21

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 25 19:18:19 2016 No.15128344 >>15127495 Netorare please.

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 25 19:24:06 2016 No.15128365 >>15128344 What kind? MC cucking someone or someone cucking the MC?

Anonymous Mon Apr 25 20:00:21 2016 No.15128537 [DELETED]

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>>15123773
I don't normally criticize but I'm so sick of seeing you spam your chicken scratch boring art everywhere. Please just stick to one board, preferably /a/ and not here.

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 25 20:10:51 2016 No.15128592 >>15128537 lets see your artwork m8

Anonymous Mon Apr 25 20:12:50 2016 No.15128608

>>15128365
If they're a loli, make them not understand the concept of loyalty to a single person and be quickly charmed off by someone else giving them candy or a stuffed animal.

>>15127495
In fact, I suggest making it full of surprisingly easy/slutty lolis. Have like the only virg be >>15127563. While the rest have various personalities, for examples:
One like that one fad that was going around of the money obsessed girl threatening people for money, but she acts absolutely sweet, innocent, and shy in public
One who is too pure/innocent and swaps 'boyfriends' at the drop of a hat, as mentioned above, but you never realize this until you catch her because she does stuff and acts loyal with you while you're giving her presents.
One who is from a rich/dangerous/powerful family and is a nympho who likes doing risky exhibitionist style stuff, especially near them.
One who is like in that rustle comic where the girl said she loved everyone or like in those maeshima ryou with the exhibitionism live broadcasting obsessed girl.
stuff like that, instead of cute, brainless "oniichan, oniichan!" types..

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 25 20:17:31 2016 No.15128628 >>15128537 i'm not even him but holy shit nigga you triggered

Anonymous Mon Apr 25 20:25:19 2016 No.15128666 [DELETED]

>>15128113
Murata has always been fucking amazing virtually since his debut. He's done lots of Capcom and Marvel art as well for years now. I'm sure there are lots of people who already knew about his talents before he started drawing OPM.

>>15128537
While you have a handful on points here, it's also abundantly clear that you can't actually draw worth a damn yourself, and don't know what you're talking about, especially with how you assume all the hair is part of the head.

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 25 20:41:37 2016 No.15128720 >>15128537 post your art so you can wreck this clown >>15128666 >abundantly clear

Anonymous Mon Apr 25 20:43:48 2016 No.15128728 [DELETED]

>>15128666
Man you're assblasted.
It's abundantly clear.
Hair doesn't work like that. And even if you were going for some weird poofy style that sticks out 8 inches from the back then you have to draw it in a way that even people who "can't draw worth a damn" can tell that's what it is without mistaking it for something else.
Being unable to depict something for what it is is an absolute novice mistake.

Also you keep replying to everything even slightly critical with asspain and defensiveness. You have to learn to accept constructive criticism or fuck off back to the /a/ hugbox because you won't find that here with the way you're acting.

Anonymous Mon Apr 25 20:46:29 2016 No.15128738
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I drew this but I feel like it ultimately came out looking pretty weird. I don't get how to shade metal properly or where to spread out highlights to make the image pop out. The pose ended up looking kinda boring too.

I don't draw very often but I've been really trying to pick up the habit of doing it every day, so any feedback is very welcome.

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 25 20:54:16 2016 No.15128795 >>15128537 Dude, calm your tits. That anon has every right to post their art here. May not be perfect, but hell, they're learning along the way and doing a fine job.

Anonymous Mon Apr 25 20:55:37 2016 No.15128807 [DELETED]

>>15128738
do you like hearing "everything"? because everything

if you're talking about "shading metal" then learn how light works and how it reflects off different objects of varying degrees of smoothness, also know where your light sources are in your picture. you have like 3 billion light sources going on at once in your picture and your light coloring is very primitive so it looks "weird" "boring" and "flat"

try working on images with less light sources, like 1

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 25 20:57:39 2016 No.15128822 >>15128537 I have to say you're redlining is pretty shit, but I agree with you. its kind of annoying

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 25 21:08:27 2016 No.15128887 >>15128537 /ic/ pls

Anonymous Mon Apr 25 21:14:35 2016 No.15128918 [DELETED]

>>15128822
That wasn't redlining. If it was redlining I would have gone over the body and fixed the mistakes. All I did was point out some of the mistakes, I didn't fix anything.

>>15128795
>learning along the way
But that's just it. He's not. He's ignoring/denying everything critical.
>doing a fine job
Can't disagree more with you there.

Anonymous Mon Apr 25 21:22:07 2016 No.15128950
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>>15128537
I like the waterslides...

>>15128738
Just some color protips, you should either keep it iconic or go for the ambiance you were doing. Your colors are kinda going nowhere.
Also the background is too dark - even for a pure black one, a lighter gray would be better, just look at the knee joints for a good measure.

Doing something like this everyday seems like a really good idea, it's a fairly complete piece.

Anonymous Mon Apr 25 23:27:03 2016 No.15129399

>>15128807
Yeah, I went overboard on the lights sources. I'll probably stick to one source only for my next one like you suggested.

>>15128950
I really like the edit with the blue ambient light you made! I was going for that in my picture but I just realized that the blue hue I put in my picture is so scarce that it's pretty much imperceptible. I'll keep your tips in mind.

Thanks for the feedback, friends!

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 26 02:53:31 2016 No.15130027 >>15128918 How about you post your art instead of shitposting? This is the oc drawthread faggot.

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 26 03:03:59 2016 No.15130048 >>15130027 How about you post your art instead of shitposting? This is the oc drawthread faggot.

Anonymous Tue Apr 26 03:49:48 2016 No.15130118 [DELETED]

So what the fuck is wrong with you people putting on a fucking hateshow with OP?
It's not like I enjoy his stuff extraordinarily much - though I think there is a lot of talent and character found - but he posts like every other user, does he not?
He posts his stuff, ready for critique, replies like any other artist and isn't butthurt if people point out flaws, but you guys act like he's a tumor. Why's that? He's just a normal dude with a chunk more skill than average. So why? Are you jealous, are you trolling, are you just plain idiotic? What's the reasoning, man.

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 26 03:56:03 2016 No.15130133 >>15130118 Found the "artist" in question.

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 26 03:56:37 2016 No.15130135 >>15130118 They're jealous. He's one of the best artists in this thread so it's obvious he'll get the most attention, which also means negative attention. I think >>15126436 looks affectionate though.

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 26 03:59:27 2016 No.15130141 >>15130118 Its just a buttblasted retard assperging on the OP. Honestly I'm convinced he's from other another board because that's how they treat many other drawfags in their own drawthreads.

Anonymous Tue Apr 26 04:06:33 2016 No.15130150 [DELETED]

>>15130135
That's quite disrespectful to >>15109588
>>15103124
and especially >>15081097
who are obviously leagues above literallywho in every artistic regard.
I actually find it far more bewildering that there's always these people who rush to his aid as though they're groupies who've followed him from /a/. They all need to go back to be honest.

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 26 04:12:16 2016 No.15130160 File: 603 KB, 2439x806, ffbbs.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>15130150 > That's quite disrespectful to > obviously leagues above taking in account that he did >>15079404 along with bigger drawings he drew too, not really.

Anonymous Tue Apr 26 04:28:13 2016 No.15130184 [DELETED]

>>15130160
Are those polished turds supposed to be impressive? Can you not see the blatant hand hiding? Embarrassing. He (you?) has no idea how to draw clothes on a body, as always. Skin tone choice on the left is sickly and gross. Generic, stiff poses. Not pleasant to look at, that seems to be his (your?) theme.
If he spent half the time studying the basics he spends making it looks like the character has had a bucket of oil dumped on their head his drawings would be lot easier on the eyes by now.
You realize shit smeared across a larger canvas is still shit, right?

What I said still stands. By the way did you get that image from /a/? Funny, if you read the post you replied to.

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 26 04:30:35 2016 No.15130191 File: 3 KB, 160x160, AbeOik6.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>15130184 not an argument

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 26 04:30:50 2016 No.15130192 >>15130184 >By the way did you get that image from /a/? That was posted in a previous /jp/ thread.

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 26 04:35:37 2016 No.15130198 >>15130184 Nice one, post your OC so that you can put your money where your mouth is.

Anonymous Tue Apr 26 04:42:47 2016 No.15130211 [DELETED]

>>15130150
I can understand the general sentiments against OP. He's an /a/ /ic/ meme artist who doesn't frequent /jp/ until he found out about the drawthreads, of course people are going to hate on him. Also it's annoying to see "people" jump to defend him as if he's the only one immune to criticism just because he draws full tits and ass.

>>15130198
Found the /ic/ crossboarder. Fuck off with this meme already. The /ic/ rejects like OP get shat on their homeboard and they're here looking for cheap, easy compliments which they hope to find here.

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 26 04:50:33 2016 No.15130230 >>15130211 Tell me where you posted your OC so that I can give it a (you), you jealous faggot.

Anonymous Tue Apr 26 04:54:57 2016 No.15130238 [DELETED]

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>>15130211
> who doesn't frequent /jp/ until he found out about the drawthreads

I've been regularly going and posting on the WTC threads for years though. The amount of bullshit informations toward me you guys have been taking from you ass is almost hilarious at this point, I feel like I'm not me when reading all your "descriptions" and "facts".

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 26 04:59:46 2016 No.15130241 >>15130211 Jesus fuck just shut the fuck up already and do your fucking job you baka janny. You fuckers are ruining the oc thread, we don't even have these regularly.

Anonymous Tue Apr 26 05:47:36 2016 No.15130346 [DELETED]

>>15130133
Good one. No.
>>15130141
No again. I've been on /jp/ exclusively since 2011 because I can't stand the general boardculture of /a/ and everything else is not relevant to my interests.
I'm actually one of the musicfags in this thread and have been posting OC since late 2014.

>>15130150
>>15130211
Neither am I rushing to his aid nor am I jumping in to defend him. And I don't think he's immune to criticism at all. In fact, I've been criticizing his work ever since I took notice of it, and I didn't notice any unfavourable behaviour that other artists don't express themselves from time to time, still being able to go about the thread without getting verbally abused by some fuckers who don't have anything better to do than ruin the OC-threads with their butthurt rage.
Instead they spam every drawing of his with unproductive back-to-/a/-memes.
If anything is annoying, it's that.

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 26 06:06:26 2016 No.15130407 How do you guys come up with your signatures or little symbol to put on all of your artwork? I tried to make one but it seemed kind of not good.

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 26 06:45:04 2016 No.15130519 >>15130135 >He's one of the best artists in this thread Sorry but i really have to disagree here.

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 26 07:01:30 2016 No.15130549 >>15130519 You can't disagree with the truth.

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 26 07:06:06 2016 No.15130560 >>15130407 You just kinda come up with one you feel comfortable the more you draw, I think. There's nothing wrong with just your name in cursive or something at the corner of the page though.

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 26 07:08:32 2016 No.15130570 >>15130549 you can stop now. trolling is forbidden on /jaypee/

Anonymous Tue Apr 26 07:31:29 2016 No.15130654

>>15088458
>>15077653
>>15111411
>>15123773
>>15130160

one of your big problems right now is that you're drawing midgets. you kinda use the same headsizes as >>15109588, but with the wrong body type. what you did with >>15079448 is closer to how it should be.
generally your ribcages are too big, you often don't leave enough room for the stomach and your shoulders look stiff.

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 26 07:33:29 2016 No.15130658 >>15130654 > you're drawing midgets She IS a midget dude.

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 26 07:51:59 2016 No.15130689 >>15130184 Is there an argument going on? Who do I side with? I just wanna hang out, look at cool artwork and take it easy. Sometimes ask for advice on some shitty art I drew. Which side do I take here?

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 26 07:56:34 2016 No.15130700 >>15130658 ..really? then in that case, he shouldn't give her those curves and that slim waist and that shoulder width. it just looks like a normal sized girl getting vertically compressed.

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 26 08:13:01 2016 No.15130732 >>15130689 You take OUR side and drive out OP. Trust me, I've been a native of /jp/ since 2007.

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 26 08:26:38 2016 No.15130758 Kick OP OUT! Kick OP OUT!

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 26 08:55:19 2016 No.15130803 File: 165 KB, 500x750, pinkgirl.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] I drew a girl /jp/

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 26 09:01:37 2016 No.15130813 >>15130803 Souseiseki > Suiseiseki > Yakult > Kanaria > Teabitch > Hina

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 26 09:07:17 2016 No.15130832 >>15130803 Whoa blog? Pls respong!!

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 26 09:17:59 2016 No.15130850 File: 633 KB, 882x900, herol.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 26 09:22:14 2016 No.15130857 >>15130850 Looks like she's eating a turd.

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 26 09:22:22 2016 No.15130858 >>15130813 Now I look it does look like her, doesn't it?

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 26 09:35:29 2016 No.15130894 >>15130850 is that the aftermath to >>15126436 ?

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 26 09:37:21 2016 No.15130899 >>15130894 -No

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 26 09:38:15 2016 No.15130903 >>15130850 I like this

Anonymous Tue Apr 26 09:39:09 2016 No.15130910

>>15111040
>>15108345
>drawabox

I had no idea such a website even existed. Just checked it out and it seems mind-blowingly promising.
I was doing fine drawing on paper, mostly portraits, but I started computer drawing recently and I'm drawing like a fucking toddler.

Many thanks Anons, I have nothing but time on my hands lately and masturbation only gets you so far.

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 26 09:43:42 2016 No.15130925 >>15130803 So cute! I love the way this looks, it reminds me of the amazing art you sometimes see from child books. Maybe a bit of a stretch but I'm feeling nostalgic.

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 26 10:06:41 2016 No.15130984 >>15130857 delete this bullypost

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 26 10:46:00 2016 No.15131098 >>15130925 That's really kind of you to say. That's what I originally wanted to do, but it never happened.

Anonymous Tue Apr 26 11:27:21 2016 No.15131230

>>15130407

Theres a saying that goes something like "when everyone enters art school they find a class full of people practicing their signatures"

Basically means that focusing on your signature, or recognition and fame at the the early stages of learning is useless, focus on the fundamentals, on the actual drawing and making what you draw look decent before ever worrying about your signature. Because nobody will give a shit what artist drew the drawing when the drawing itself is garbage.

For me, I take the japanese approach, I never put a name on my artwork, I like my style be my identifier, and it works! You can become popular without having to write your name all over your work, and believe me you will be thanking yourself 10 years from now when youre glad you didnt sign all your shitty amateur drawings.

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 26 11:28:00 2016 No.15131232 >>15079366 Are you the guy who drew the pic "Team Reimu vs Team Sanae"?

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 26 11:28:23 2016 No.15131233 >>15130803 i like this.

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 26 12:55:08 2016 No.15131499 >>15131232 Wasn't it Team Reimu vs Team Marisa?

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 26 13:05:41 2016 No.15131524 >>15130813 ~This post is officially supported by the Society for the Preservation of /jp/Culture ~

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 26 16:01:48 2016 No.15132171 I'm already tired of seeing this hero oc

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 26 16:04:08 2016 No.15132182 >>15132171 you better watch what you say around here

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 26 16:10:34 2016 No.15132207 >>15132171 I'll tolerate it for a couple more threads if I get to see lewds Unless the artist fucks those up badly

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 26 16:15:36 2016 No.15132228 >>15132207 If he makes them they won't be great. He's not good at anatomy and always makes up excuses when he gets criticism

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 26 16:20:17 2016 No.15132239 File: 221 KB, 638x876, o9.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>15132228 Looks plenty good enough to me.

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 26 16:35:33 2016 No.15132280 >>15132239 I want hardcore rape tho

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 26 17:02:56 2016 No.15132375 File: 106 KB, 1500x1500, rum.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] I made a Rumia with illustrator.

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 26 18:38:09 2016 No.15132682 >>15132375 Cute, as expected from Rumia

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 26 18:58:17 2016 No.15132746 >>15132375 Her ankle/shoe connection looks pretty weird. Like she has chibi nubbin feet that are standing on top of the shoes.

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 26 19:03:23 2016 No.15132767 >>15132375 >>15132746 I agree if you fix that it'll be so much better. Also with the circle around it, it makes me think of it as a button. I want a button of that cute Rumia now!

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 26 21:02:57 2016 No.15133124 >>15132375 Cute rumia dude

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 26 21:43:03 2016 No.15133319 >>15132375 Crispy as fuck, well done.

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 26 21:46:27 2016 No.15133338 BUTTON the RUMIA

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 26 21:52:50 2016 No.15133358 File: 574 KB, 250x164, 1422805882368.gif [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>15128344 >Netorare

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 26 22:26:24 2016 No.15133494 File: 256 KB, 413x985, jpgrl.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>15130803

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 26 22:30:43 2016 No.15133511 >>15133494 Thats cute man. What's her name?

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 26 23:01:28 2016 No.15133626 >>15133494 Hey you're alive Cute work as always

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 27 04:48:34 2016 No.15134623 File: 941 KB, 638x674, ..png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Well, if music covers are acceptable, I've been fucking around with Famitracker and made one. https://clyp.it/kpkcjy1d

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 27 07:24:47 2016 No.15134894 >>15133494 Been a long time uh

Anonymous Wed Apr 27 09:57:50 2016 No.15135243

>>15130654
>>15130658
>>15130700
Yeah, I kinda agree. Her body looks too developed and her face too mature for her stature.
It's technically still possible because of midgets, but I don't think it's something one would normally go for if they knew better.

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 27 10:21:25 2016 No.15135315 >>15135243 She is and is intended to be a midget. You can see the difference with >>15079448 who is supposed to be tall.

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 27 10:23:25 2016 No.15135324 >>15135315 Well, being a midget is an uncanny looking deformity, but if it's intended...

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 27 10:34:16 2016 No.15135359 >>15135324 > talking about 3DPD midgets > ever Same shit as /fit/ girls, I could hardly count the amount of stuffs that are sexy in 2D and disgusting in real life.

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 27 10:36:54 2016 No.15135372 >>15135359 You almost never see midgety looking midgets in anime. They might be short, they might have similar head to body ratios, but it doesn't look weird like in here.

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 27 10:38:39 2016 No.15135378 >>15134623 This is pretty sick,senpai.

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 27 10:45:51 2016 No.15135398 >>15135359 Midgets are gross in any medium. I'm glad that other guy who draws the fat titty midgets isn't around.

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 27 12:21:59 2016 No.15135665 >>15077653 >>15079448 >>15088458 This better be porn

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 27 13:48:37 2016 No.15135978 >>15133494 Hey! Glad I inspired you to draw! You drew her much better anyhow...

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 27 14:17:11 2016 No.15136066 >>/jp/thread/S15077653 Looks like janny doesn't like it when people criticize his favorite artist.

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 27 14:22:41 2016 No.15136086 >>15136066 critique is good when it's constructive, not when it's just there to blatantly insult. I'm 100% sure meido would uphold the cleaning duty for every other artist who'd get flamed like that.

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 27 16:31:36 2016 No.15136586 >>15135398 Shortstacks and oppai lolis are my fetish though.

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 27 17:17:54 2016 No.15136803 Shit, I've been hit by a flash of sadness. I wish i was still young enough i could delude myself into thinking i had a chance becoming a professional comic maker. Damn, time is merciless. I need a drink now

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 27 18:19:03 2016 No.15137081 >>15136803 Try making a web comic, people seem to love those. Professional is a loosely held word nowadays anyway. Drinking only limits your time for greatness!

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 27 19:18:38 2016 No.15137302 >>15137081 Maybe i'll try that. thanks

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 27 21:31:30 2016 No.15137818 >>15136803 all these pathetic "oh woe is me, look at me i can't draw bawww what do?" bullshit in every draw thread is just annoying

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 27 22:27:20 2016 No.15137970 File: 335 KB, 645x850, 1461611008-0.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>15136803 You can do it, anon. It's never too late. Just be sure to have something to fall back on.

Anonymous Wed Apr 27 22:29:09 2016 No.15137976
File: 117 KB, 792x1024, 6jodci.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

I wonder how people are able to actually accomplish their goals.

I can't do anything, I just sit in front of the computer and feel empty as I browse /jp/ to pretend that I'm interacting with the world.

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 28 03:39:13 2016 No.15138885 >>15137976 Should I continue my WN or wot? http://ncode.syosetu.com/n6701cx/

Anonymous Thu Apr 28 05:59:07 2016 No.15139224
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Man, you guys that can do full pictures and speedpaints every day are awesome. I was trying to follow the advice of the two previous anons and set up a scene with just one light source, but I think I may be over-ambitious for my level, because even this, which I would consider pretty simple, took me a bunch of days to draw and I'm pretty sure I got a bunch of things wrong with it too.

I'll probably color just the lady on this one, but do you guys have a system to keep it simple when you're starting a new drawing so you can actually finish, at least the lineart, within a day or so? Or does all the speed come from experience? And whatever feedback so far is more than welcome, of course.

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 28 07:14:23 2016 No.15139387 File: 430 KB, 684x996, plantthing copy.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] a weirdo plant.

Anonymous Thu Apr 28 10:12:42 2016 No.15139836

>>15139224
speed comes with time, don't stress it. 'within a day' is too vague anyways, how many hours are you spending on average? if it's really too long then spend some time trying to learn the things you're getting caught on.
>>15139387
nice nipple plant

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 28 11:54:23 2016 No.15140057 >>15139387 I'd rub that plant.

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 28 15:04:21 2016 No.15140673 >>15139387 It really does look like those weird nipples. Still very good.

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 28 17:28:29 2016 No.15141146 Damn, autosage already?

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 28 17:45:27 2016 No.15141188 >>15141146 Don't worry, we'll have a new thread in another 3 months.

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 28 18:03:23 2016 No.15141233 >>15141188 what if i make another one straight after this one 404'd?

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 28 18:11:44 2016 No.15141255 >>15141233 That wouldn't be so bad. Usually people wait a day but so long as the thread is gone before the next one it should be fine.

Anonymous Thu Apr 28 18:41:19 2016 No.15141360

>>15139836
If I start trying to draw, it's pretty much a four to eight hour process to do anything I'd be satisfied with showing to other people for critique. You can easily rack that up quite a few more hours if you include coloring.

I am kinda obsessed with small details though, so if something doesn't feel good or right or even if a line I draw isn't exactly how I want it, I'll compulsively redo things until it seems okay with me, and this sucks up a lot of time I feel.

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 28 22:50:39 2016 No.15142150 >>15141233 Just give it a day or two for people to finish drawing, otherwise its going to be nothing but people arguing with nothing to show for it.

>>	Anonymous Fri Apr 29 04:07:25 2016 No.15143014 >>15139224 Is she looking at a watch? I can't tell from the drawing, sorry. But I really like her looks and apparent personality. If she wasn't alcoholic used goods, I'd hold hands with.

>>	Anonymous Fri Apr 29 06:45:50 2016 No.15143232 File: 6 KB, 128x128, dead.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] dead alien

>>	Anonymous Fri Apr 29 08:07:40 2016 No.15143376 >>15142150 The threads are always that way.

>>	Anonymous Fri Apr 29 14:24:51 2016 No.15144480 >>15143232 I recognize those floor tiles. What server are you on and why are you posting that here?

>>	Anonymous Fri Apr 29 16:05:32 2016 No.15144774 >>15144480 Tell us about these servers and floor tiles.

Anonymous Fri Apr 29 18:10:02 2016 No.15145278
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>>15144480

I am currently making some alien sprites for the colonial marines ss13 server. I hope to finish them in May. The current ones they use appear to be the ones everyone else uses which are ancient. They also wanted sprites that are more menacing.

I'm posting here because I've been posting art in the OC threads for 2 years now. You can't stop me!

>>	Anonymous Fri Apr 29 20:47:12 2016 No.15145843 >>15145278 I don't want to stop you. that's pretty cool

>>	Anonymous Fri Apr 29 21:04:05 2016 No.15145895 If anyone is going to make another thread, it'll be number 180 from what I can remember.

Anonymous Fri Apr 29 22:46:02 2016 No.15146259

>>15145895
These young'uns don't respect the thread OP model, it's been three editions since we had numbers and a backlink to the previous OCT, and that's because I've created it.

I'm currently just lurking and not producing, so I won't be taking the job for now. Do it right, people, c'mon.

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