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On a nameless hill, I was laying beside the Lilies all alone, as this place was bounded by a curse of abandonment,
I myself have experienced just that, my past life was merely just to be used as a tool of entertainment and when they had grown tired of me, they left me here, besides the Lilies of the valley.

Now that I look back to it, do i truly despise those memories?
Last i remember, it was a sunny and warm day in autumn, my once beloved Father had just finished fixing my head to my body,
I was able to open my eyes for the first time, I could say that I was somewhat overwhelmed with emotions and sensations at first.
I was scrutinized and scrubbed all over and clothed up, while doing so I saw the smile on his face, at that time I wasnt able to comprehend why he was so happy, maybe he saw me as his child, but unable to feel anything or understand, unable to move I let myself be under Father's care, he then showed me around to other humans proudly and happily.

As the Sun was slowly going out in the horizon, I felt my energy drain as well, "Well enough procrastinating" i muttered to myself, as I got up, my legs shaking from laying around all day, after looking around the Lilies, I started walking towards the shack that I called Home.
After arriving at the front door, I opened my own door timidly, closing it behind me, as I immediatly headed for my futon, laying on to it, slowly shifting into a fetal position while grasping my pillow tightly.

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>>35478350
I woke up in my futon, still grasping my pillow tightly, all alone on this nameless hill, after mustering motivation to go on with my day, I got up, readying myself to watch over Su-san as I heard some commotion outside, was it raining? or was the wind picking up its pace?
Confused, I peeked outside, as I did, I found myself laying flat on the floor with a searing pain on my forehead with cheers of laughter coming from a group of fairies outside jeering insults at me "Idiot!" "You stink!" "You're ruining the smell of the flowers!" "You should stay as a shut in, no one wants to see you, idiot!"

Barely holding my composure, I let it all out, my arms started jerking, hitting agaisnt the floor, kicking the wall while I screamed and weeped, as minutes passed, the fairies were already gone by now but I weeped, screamed and ravaged trough my belongings,
exhausted I finally lied down on my teared up futon, grasping what remained of my pillow, closing my eyes, i thought of a beautiful duck, floating on the water gently as it danced around with other ducks, as the wind picked up, the raft of ducks took off one by one, only one remained it seems that its wing was broken, unable to take off it stayed put, as a dust storm was slowly encroaching.
Did it accept the fact that it was obsolete to resist? that it could never soar trough the sky like the others? I dont want to end up like that, its not my fault that I cant soar, if it werent for Father's ignorance I would of probably had someone to love, something to look up to every morning, something to truly achieve but instead I was broken, abandoned and forgotten by Su-san.
As I woke up, I realized that the wind from my dream didnt come from my imagination but from the outside, the gust of wind which usually passed trough this nameless hill was much stronger, and was carrying Su-san across the horizon, I began to chuckle as I envisioned that others would bite the dust just as I had, was this all of my doing, or was it Su-san wishing to protect me?
Then it hit me, the realization that what was happening, despite it being rightful, I knew that there would be consequences, that the so called good guys would come in to take care of me for being so selfish, agitated and scared by that thought I barricaded my shack with all I could, residing and hiding in my bedroom, beside my futon, shakingly terribly.

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>>35478399


As the time passed I grew more frustrated by each noise coming from the outside, I knew that it was just the shutters creaking, but the Hakurei Miko couldnt arrive that quickly,
could she? Then thunder broke, or was it danmaku? As it continued, I could feel everything around me shaking, as it got closer and closer, until I was able to hear voices, or were they yells, then it all stopped,

hearing the front door getting rammed open and heavy footsteps heading towards my bedroom, I started to panic, wailing loudly "Please, please! I'm sorry, I never meant it-!"
As I yelled that out the door handle started shifting feeling as if it was the end I cowarded in a corner wailing harder my mind had went blank as the footsteps got closer and closer until they stopped beside me.
"Look at me." after hearing those cold words I felt somewhat at ease but still on my guard, she repeated it once again
"Look at me, turn around." still trembling I shifted myself around, unexpectedly I came face to face with red checkered clothes and at that moment i was picked up from under my arms and brung in an embrace,
my head resting on her shoudler I wasnt able to look at her face, but in a warm and tender voice she whispered to me

"Even if no one else accepts you, from now on I will do my best to be by your side, even if Mommy and Father will never come back, I will always do what I can to keep that smile on your face."
Hearing those sweet words, I cried, my first true tears were not of sorrow, but of happiness, had I found what I was looking for? This is where my Melancholy ends, in hopes that the days to come will bring me happiness.

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35478507

>>35478481

So here's a half-baked fanfiction from a busy frenchman,I recently got motivation to write something after I got home from work as I've been talking to a few friends that a very dear to me,
this motivation also comes from another fanfiction thread that started in March it was named "Tears in Rain", it was something that I hadnt seen in a while, I've been lurking on /JP/ for a while now and that thread blew fresh air into the board,
even though I dont expect this to take off like it did, I truly hope that I can get better at writing, since I decided to take a weird approach with my text, first person and in the past, its a really pathetic attempt but I'll keep trying, love you /JP/
-Chimmy

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>>35478507
Its good. Keep up the great work :D

>> No.35480197

>>35478481
>This is where my Melancholy ends, in hopes that the days to come will bring me happiness.
Damn

>> No.35482948

Good story :)

>> No.35483010

>>35478507
That kogasa thread? Threads like that are magic, I wish they happened more. Thanks for continuing on that magic.

>> No.35486247

>>35483010
>>35482948

Thank you, i'll do my best to improve in hopes that such a thread happens once again, or maybe someone else will, in anycase, let us pray

>> No.35488470

Bumping so more people read this

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>> No.35501732

>>35501229
Cute

>> No.35507377

>>35488470
I haven't read all of it yet.

>> No.35507616 [DELETED] 

>>35478350
KILL THEM ALL

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wnjjngwsNu4

SIEGE ON YOUKAI MOUNTAIN
ROAM THE KILLING FIELDS CAMBODIAN STYLE!

>> No.35511116

I'll read it in a bit.

>> No.35511401

tl;dr
fanfiction without pictures is shit.

>> No.35511454

>>35478507
I knew it was Yuuka.
That was a good read OP.

>> No.35512920

>>35511401
Thats understandable, i rushed it a little bit too fast and didnt really have any good pictures on hand, i'll be more careful next time

>> No.35512958

>>35511401
must suck having zero attention span, huh?

>> No.35520879

>>35511401
Jesus Christ it's like a vteen

>> No.35526862

In all honesty OP, thanks for keeping the spirit of that Kogasa thread alive. It's that kind of stuff that makes it interesting to come here. And thanks for giving Medicine more attention, she deserves it.

>> No.35531634

>>35478481
I want to hug medicine

>> No.35532496

>>35531634
As do I

>> No.35541236

>>35511401
zero attention span.

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>>35532496

>> No.35550946

more like this.
first it was kogasa, then yuuka(?), now medi

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Nice thread!
I've been thinking about Medicine and Kogasa since Touhou 18 was released. What would they think about Chimata's ability to transfer ownership? Would it help them, or would it kill them if Chimata found new owners for them?

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>>35556581
I suppose that if they received the love that they wish for they would infact disappear as Youkais, and "die", but it would be a happy ending! and remember, Tenkyuu! and have a nice day!

>> No.35563008

>>35562965
>>35556581
Why would they disappear after getting "owned" again? Like, you don't become unborn if your parents stop having sex, unless it's some youkai lore I missed they don't become inanimate again if they're owned, right?

>> No.35563458

>>35563008
See it like a vengeful spirit, after it achieves a peace of mind it will go back to where it belongs thus disappearing, and what motivates Medicine and Kogasa to be conscious are their hatred and sorrow of Humans, so if thats resolved then they wont have any motivation left to manifest.

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