/jp/ - Otaku Culture

>5min playtime
With something that short, I really don't see any point to making it.

>It has to be short (5min playtime)
that's pretty short

Shut the fuck up

mugen, did you post that Flanders picture you said you were going to draw earlier? I missed it.

gtfo

>- It has to be worksafe.
Fuck this. You used to be cool mugen.

>>3072945
Here it is... >>3071764

>>3072940
Something light... the cirno copypaste is a very good example but I don't know how to contact the person who write it... and it is not worksafe...

>>3072933

keep up the good. Work. Don't let sagers keep you down.

You wake up with robotic pincers for hands.

You then attend school.

you make small talk with girls.

you go to scratch your head and accidentally clamp yourself to death, spraying blood all over girls face.

you die and are reanimated as a Frankensteinian monster by girl if you made correct choice, You live happily ever *picks up girl and throws her in lake* after.

if you didn't your corpse becomes fertilizer for a tree.

but its a nice tree.

>>3072958
Apologies... so any plot?...

>>3072941
Oh OK... maybe up to 9 to 10 minutes but it must be very short...

Reported for mugen samefagging and attention whoring

>>3072933
Almost done? Isn't it supposed to be episodic? I thought the story was more than just one small VN.

The only "five minute" VNs that I enjoyed were Crimsoness and Summer, Cicadas, and the Girl. I think the format of the latter is pretty cool. A short riddle is presented, and at the end of the story you type the answer into an input box. There are a couple of wrong answers put in there too.

Okay
Maincharacter: Mugen
Stage A Castle somewhere
People 10 random people from /jp/
Plot: Mugen gets killed in a gruesome way, which is shown in detail. End.

>>3072975
Hmm... that is very interesting... very random... I shall mark it for feasibility study later today... but how am I going to give you credit when you are using anonymous?...

I remember reading about a guy in the civil war that ran out of a trench to bring water to the wounded of both sides while dodging bullets and shit.

You could make all the soldiers lolis.

I think that'd make for a good 5 minutes.

>>3072975
This is the pinnacle of innovation, as far as VN scenarios go.

Hell, I'll fund it if you don't.

>>3072992
you think I'd want this traced back to me?

naah just kidding I forgot.

>>3072981
Oh... it is episodic... Episode one introduces humble origin of main villain in the series Madonna... this will be side project to be released as a bunus VN...

>>3072991
Already done that...

>>3072988
Yes, something like that...

>>3073009
Hmm... we are currently discussing it here and the part where you talk to the girls might present a problem...

>>3073034
I realize the dialogue for small talk with the female race is far beyond your talent as an author but........

oh wait you meant the bloodspray. Yeah just make it jello or something. It's symbolism.

/jp/ Falls for trolls every time

>>3073034
>we are currently discussing it here
>we are discussing it here
>we
WUT!?

>>3073061
No... not troll but sirious discussion...

So /jp/ anyone?... no more short plot and stories?...

>>3072975
Needs moe.

>>I will fund it!

First, how much are you willing to pay? My dignity has a price, but it isn't cheap.

Player gets gapped to Gensokyo, and has to defeat several touhoes in freestyle rap battles.

Mugen = Ronove's real life equivalent in Umineko.

do something with lesbians

>- It has to be worksafe.

Not interested
Well, to be fair, most of us were never interested.

>>3073105
Kidney quest: You wake up in a bathtub full of ice missing both kidneys. CAN YOU FIND THEM BEFORE YOU DIE OF TOXIC SHOCK.

>>3073110
Yes... Yes... It will be moe... but it really has to be really short... it could even be silly or serious but must be short...

>>3073117
Good question... but this is a free project that will be release free of charge. Production will mostly be at my expense (Artwork, Coding, Etc.) This can be treated as a hobby project so I can't give you money for this but I will give due and proper credit...

>>3073124
This.

With Patchouli as final boss.

>>3073145
Very Original concept I like this but this is better suited to be a minigame rather than a VN... but the sheer logistic of programming a mini-game under 2 days is a bit too much... but I shall mark this one... thanks...

Japanese Bird Cooking Spaghetti Mini VN perhaps?...

Is there anyone in /jp/ with good writing in english?... anymore?

>>3073185
Nope.

>>3073185
Yes. The question should have been, "is there anyone with good English skills willing to help me with my VN?" (The answer, of course, is no.)

>>3073199
hey it saved my last image post line from gurochan.

Firefox you're so silly.

Ronove's younger, carefree days.jpg

Go grab a bunch of primus Cds and put them on an mp3 player and then hit shuffle.

Base a scenario on the first song played.

>>3073200
Or rather... "our" VN... aim is to see if we could get to make a short but good looking VN within the confides of /jp/ in as little as 3 days... it has to be short, light if possibly fluffy and light on logistics... /jp/ is very talented group of people... just need a bit of push...

/r/ that pic with Remilia and Yuka

So anyone?... so far we have one candidate...

>>3072975
by Hurp

>>3073249
Here...

A vn of you committing suicide.

>>3073273
That will take more than 5 minutes... but if I'm going to do an-hero I'll choose advil overdose...

>>3073283
make it happen

>>3073295
Lol no... not yet...

So anyone?...

Thread saved... I shall do a feasibility study on what is posted here... if you got any more ideas... please post here and we might make a VN out of it... but it has to be short...

Hell /jp/ I am back... I am now bumping this thread and await more ideas and suggestions... anyone?

Hmm... email has still no replies...

>>3073460
HURPDURP

>>3073484
Oh hello... do you by any chance have a short story/scenario you would like to contribute good Sir?...

>>3073345
Eat shit and die, fucking faggot.

>>3073518
No.

So anyone else?

>>3073523
A VN where you die by massive dildo in anus.

>>3073535
No nothing like that... it has to be worksafe...

On a cold night, one of the last men on Earth huddles by a fire. The disease killed off most of the country, and there is no more means of contacting anyone.

He tends the fire. Then there is a knock at the door. He is surprised, it could be a visitor. Then he hears the coughing. The same sort of coughing that killed his friends, his family, and the rest of the world he knows.

There is a hammer nearby the door. He probably has enough strength to open the door and bash whoever it is at the door. Musn't get infected after all. But, he's been so lonely....

So, let the person in or kill them?

And that's the VN.

>>3073603
Thank you good Sir... this I now mark as option 2 and make the man a cute Loli... this is brilliant, short and awesome you are a genious... this can even be done by tonight... but how am I going to credit you... Sir Anonymous?...

>>3073632
Not >>3073603 here, but I think it shouldn't be cheapened by turning anyone into a loli.

>>3073603
I have decided!... I will go with this one!... this is very good! You get to choose weather to pummel the coughing loli or not... and... and... this is giving me a hard-on!... THIS WILL BE DONE!!!

Thank you /jp/... I shall not dissapoint you!!!

>>3073670
Oh sorry... not everyone but the one coughing...

This should make deciding harder... and I'll make it innocent looking frail loli for more impact... short, bittersweet and most importantly cute, light, fluffy and violent...

>>3073632

This is probably against my better judgement, but here you go.

Sup, /jp/. Oh, boy.

Kuchisake-tan is a shy ghost loli with self-esteem problems and a disfigured face. She meets the protagonist and they go on a date or do cute things together.

Near the end, she asks him, "Do you think I'm pretty?" He'll automatically say, "Yes." to the question at which point she removes her mask and asks the same question again. At this point there are three choices,

No, which leads to her cutting him right then and there.
Yes, which leads to her following him home and cutting him there.
So-so, which leads to happy end.

>>3073737
Thank you... this will be saved and will be subjected to feasibility study if it could be done in time... but for now, we will have to go with >>3073603

>>3073722
Confirmation Sir...

>Sup, /jp/. Oh, boy.
Is this the correct name I will use or would you like to chose another name?...

A yandere story between a little girl (Chiaki) and her onii-chan (Makoto)
onii-chan has a girlfriend, Chiaki does not like this and gets jealous. she bakes cookie for onii-chan, and then when his GF tries to take one she slams the tray on the floor, screams at her and goes batshit insane.

>>3073775

Just call me by what my Email address is: Luke5260.

Oh, Lord help me, I'm giving out my email and internet name on 4chan. I was hoping it wouldn't come to this.

>>3073795
Why didn't you just create a new email?

>>3073801

FUCK

Oh well, too late now. Sage for no relevance to the topic.

>>3073795
OK got that... email sent...

So I'll be doing the CG's and programming... but I'm not really good at writing good english... I shall post rough draft later today...

>>3073819
If you ever decide to do the other story, see email.

Mugen I am disappointed with you. I though you changed your ways after finishing "Cute, Light and Fluffy" and yet you reverted back to your old ways. Never change you creepy bastard, never change. Looking forward though.

>>3072933
Since when has it been /jp/'s wish for mugenjohncel to do anything but SHUT THE FUCK UP?

>>(Oh boy... this is definitelly like shooting myself in the foot but... might as well do this...)
It doesn't matter. Nobody here likes you anyway.

And what's all this shit about 'funding' it? We know it wouldn't cost you any actual money to make it and that once made no one would buy it. Take this shit back to your circlejerk at Lemmasoft.

sage for shit

mugen should make a vn about himself posting on /jp/. He'll get to stroke his ego and /jp/ will rage hard at the result.

>>3073145
>>3072997
I actually kind of want to read this.

>>3072997
Holy shit, that is badass. It's kind of like how during WW1 at Christmas ceasefire there was one place where both sides started playing soccer with eachother.

Ignore those jealous faggots mugen. We the majority here on /jp/ give you our blessing.

Bump.

whats this called EDing it :D

>>3074097
>ED

Get the fuck out.

>>3074008
Merely trying to imagine it already got me raging hard.

Why the fuck are there 2 mugen threads on front pate ? What the fuck /jp/ ?

>>3074174
Better this than Katawa Shoujo

>>3074174
Well, mugenjohncel posted both of those threads himself. You can hardly hold the rest of us responsible for that.

>>3074092
Same person as OP.

>>3074092
No, I can even draw better than him, and I hate the way he colors images. FUCKING HATE.

>>3074216
all talk and no show. mugen may be a gigantic faggot but he fucking delivers.

>>3074232
A gigantic faggot who delivers shit.

When he's not attention whoring /jp/.

>>3074232
Here you go, so die in a fire already.

>>3074258
That's not colored.

>>3074258
nice googled image there fag

>>3074261
>>3074263
Same person as OP.

>>3074258
>>3074273
same butthurt jealous drawfag

>>3074273
I would never use a term as fucking stupid as "butthurt", your accusation is insulting.

>>3074275
>>>/jp/3072127

>>3074273
>>3074275
>>3074287
>>3074293
Samefag OP attentionwhoring

FUCKING FAGGOTS! ALL OF YOU!! STOP THIS SHIT ALREADY! CAN'T YOU EVEN SEE MUGEN LEFT THE BUILDING HOURS AGO! HE'S PROBABLY LAUGHING AT ALL THIS ATTENTION WE GIVE HIM AS WE SPEAK! SAGE FOR MUGENJOHNCEL!!! SAGE, THREAD MINIMIZED AND FUCKING FILTERED!

>>3074258
Your'e no better than mugendrawfag, probably even worse. Your work is shitty you are shitty.

>>3074314
>SAGE SAGE SAGE
You're a fucking idiot.

>>3074287 is butthurt

>>3074314
Why thank you for all this attention you're giving me imbeciles. I didn't know you retards love me this much.

>>3074332
nice tripcode

>>3074314
I don't doubt my work sucks, but at least I don't go attention whoring all over the place. Now just fucking hide the thread and I advise other anons to do the same.

hey i started drawing... brb... will post... update... soon...

It's not like we can all do this alone in Ren'py : )

>>3074363 who is obviously the one massively butthurt in this thread please see >>3074370

>>3074332
Negative attention is better than no attention it seems.

>>3074432
That's why they are called attention whores, they don't care what kind of attention they get.

>>3074454
They must not have very much respect for themselves.