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2670055 No.2670055 [Reply] [Original]

With the release of KS's demo just a month ago, I was wondering if we /jp/edos can do something similar. We could work together to create something better than KS. Who's up for it?

>> No.2670057

That would take effort... lot's of it. You're not going to get that out of us unless you come up with a VERY good idea and concept.

>> No.2670058

I don't have any artistic or writing talent, sorry.

>> No.2670060

lol, /a/ wannabe...

>> No.2670062

>>2670057
Perhaps this single page from the back of some porn with some rough character designs. Where did I put that...

>> No.2670064
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2670064

If it was a girls love game, I would gladly pour my heart and soul into it. Too bad the only skill I have is proofreading and editing.

>> No.2670090

>>2670055
A techno-fantasy genre VN.

>> No.2670098

>>2670090
A steampunk zombie apocalypse VN.

>> No.2670099

In the off chance this isn't a troll thread, here:
http://jpproject.2ksite.com/

>> No.2670103

/jp/ project XD

>> No.2670131

/jp/ - Touhou VN

All girls get raped by faceless men - plot and best end.

>> No.2670132
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2670132

If you're serious I'd do the art as long as the story was appealing. Here is a crappy character sheet I did for one of the failed /jp/ project VNs. The other guy working on it with me disappeared before I could get anything concrete down.

>> No.2670138

>>2670132
That really looks great. What type of story were you looking to do?

>> No.2670154

Whatever happened to those guys who wanted to make an anime?

>> No.2670155

>>2670138
By this, I mean what kinds of stories were you interesting in drawing for?

>> No.2670158
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2670158

>>2670138
Nothing special really. I'm just looking for something that I find at least a little interesting.

>> No.2670161

OP, can you draw?

>> No.2670166

>>2670158
I really like your style, would you mind giving me your email? I won't bother you if I can't develope something concrete, but I have a few ideas.

>> No.2670170

>>2670155
Horror, adventure, mystery, generic fluff VN/H-game. I'm up for anything really as long as you can present it to me as interesting.

>> No.2670172 [DELETED] 

I have this script ready in case I ever manage to take over an anime studio in the future... thinking about it it could work as a VN, so I'll post it here. Maybe crop out some of the male characters and it could actually work. Here goes:

Some guy on a journey stumbles into a town that appears to be completely isolated from the rest of the world. No one that ever sets foot into the town ever leaves since they lose all will to do so. So even our hero is now stuck in the town, encountering it's eccentric citiecens and digging after it's evil secret.

The people he encounters (and eventually start to live with) include:

- an eccentric doctor that lives in a place that used to be an inn, offers him to stay at his place
- the above guy's slutty sister that repeadeatly seduces the protagonsit
- death, wich is actually a cute introverted girl
- a motorcycle champion who longs for revenge at the doctor for taking her title last year, also is a trap
- two gay samurai that set out to defeat their clan's enemy, only to never find it
- the ancient king of britain, who is actually a woman
- a centuries old loli who is lesbian and in a relationship with the king of britain
- an old small man that has mastered the arts of battle tayloring
- a tall broud shouldered nordic God that talks in an odd way

Also lots of ridiculous but unforseen plot twists ensure.

>> No.2670177

>>2670099
OP here. nice i didnt knew such a site exist. when was this started? the site seems kinda dead though.

>> No.2670185

>>2670166
There you go, and anyone else with an idea can mail me. Going to nap since I got a health screening in a few hours.

>> No.2670190

>>2670185
Thank you, I will contact you later on. Have a nice nap.

>> No.2670193

>>2670177
Back in November or so?

>> No.2670204

>>2670177
A few months ago there were a series of threads with basically the same idea. "Why don't we ever make anything?". They brainstormed ideas for games, VNs, and arrange albums and made that site. They're working on Dandelion Girl (VN adaptation of a book) and En Bloc, an original idea, or at least were the last time I checked.

More recently there were the Original Material threads which were dedicated to "get off your ass and do something", rather than jpproject's "get off your ass and actually make something". Then those got trolled by retards who can't stand the idea of anonymous actually producing anything

>> No.2670207

>>2670172
Please tell me this is a troll. Oh god it probably isn't a troll oh god oh god oh god

>> No.2670214

I am willing to help but only wish to make Rape VN's

>> No.2670217

>>2670204
Just checked the forum. En Bloc looks like they stumbled on some road block, but Dandelion Girl seems to be progressing so-so. They seem to be getting trolled there though.

>> No.2670221

This thread will get 100+ replies, maybe even a continuation thread, and then amount to nothing.

You don't think it's been attempted before?

>> No.2670222

>>2670207
wtf? the post got removed

>> No.2670246

>>2670214
Rape VN's - only legal in US, banned in Japan.

>> No.2670252

Ah shit.
Just realized that realistic rape is pretty much the whole point of a whole route in my game.

Fuck it, I'm not changing it.

>> No.2670254
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2670254

What's this? Original content on my /jp/?

>> No.2670258

KS became ours when the board was created. No one that was into it back then would stick to /a/ after the split.

>> No.2670274

>>2670158
Nice artwork Justin.

>> No.2670275

>>2670258
That said, there are threads in the archive that prove that we disliked KS even way back then.

>> No.2670284

English is not my first language and I can't hold a pencil to save my life, I guess that limits my usefulness.
But I can troll your forum if the position's open, I guess?

>> No.2670295
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2670295

Impossible! Such an act of trying to be productive is the very cancer that is killing /jp/! I must make things right again!

>> No.2670303
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2670303

Look at that baka. KS-scum has already infiltrated our stronghold and we still argue about making new VNs.

>> No.2670304
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2670304

For the NEET gods! LEEEEEEEEEEEEROOOOYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY------

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2670310

......

>> No.2670317

here, I'll prove it's easy to make a VN, and so can you!

http://www.pyweek.org/e/1/

it's about 5 minutes long, but the point here is just get off your asses and make shit and it'll happen.

>> No.2670321
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2670321

That is the fate of all who oppose the NEET gods. Remember this well, young ones. For I am here not to punish you, but to show you that being productive is actually counter-productive, and trying to go against this will only result in epic fails and /b/-gets. You may hate me now, but know that what I do, I do for the Greater Good.

For I am someone /jp/ needs. Not someone who /jp/ wants. For I am...

Avatar of /jp/!

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>>2670325

>> No.2670340

so who else is willing to draw something here that contributes to the creation of a vn, album, or artbook? Besides this anon... >>2670254
>>2670295
>>2670303
>>2670304
>>2670310
>>2670321
>>2670325

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2670344

anyone still alive?

>> No.2670348

>>2670344
yea but not for long. its bedtime for we kids.

>> No.2670350

>>2670348
Pussy, it's 4am and I have to 'get up' to go to lectures in 3 hours, yet I'm still here.

>> No.2670376
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2670376

The problem faced by most botched attempts to create stuff is due to the lack of any dedicated artists. I recommend any aspiring project starters to first secure at least one/a few artists who will stay throughout the project. Many failures are often due to lack of artists/artist go MIA.

>> No.2670401

considering VNs are half novel and half visual, that's kind of obvious.
wonder why no one's just gone the ryukishi007/ZUN route and bet on the strength on the story.

>> No.2670413

The best route is probably just to practice drawing, etc and just do a project yourself.

>> No.2670417

>>2670401
Wait... I could even admit that the strength of 07th expansion is the story, but ZUN? His stories are weak, flimsy pretextes for flying lolis solving 'crises' that end with tea parties and/or booze. And I say this as a touhoufag.

>> No.2670418

>>2670376
No, the problem faced by most botched attempts is that THEY HAVE FUCKING NOTHING.

Get a real working game, have fucking mspaint characters for all I care just make sure it's a working game with dialog and story worked out. It doesn't have to be perfect, just proof that something exists. Then go ask an artist, this way he'll actually be able to see if it isn't complete vaporware by a bunch of "writers" circlejerking and he might be willing to invest his time into it.

>> No.2670428

i am willing to help out if it's about lesbians

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>>2670417
well, gameplay/atmosphere in his case then, horrible art was then point anyways

>>2670418
I guess people expect a project to grow, rather than suddenly 90% done and just needs art. In which case the problem then becomes leadership, some hapless guy who's willing to stick in there for the long run, breaking up circlejerking, make sure new stuff gets done incrementally, all without being overbearing.

pic related, well, to a point.

>> No.2670447

Tamao end fucking where?

>> No.2670451

>>2670447
in the visual novel. imo chiyo end is cuter.

>> No.2670476

>>2670451
I still haven't played the Strawberry Panic VN but that one CG I saw of Tamao and Chiyo huddling under the blankets was adorable.

>> No.2670482

>>2670418
Second. I recommend the approach of doing everything you can yourself, and then asking for help. Maybe not the best way to approach such a project anywhere else, but anon of /jp/ really doesn't seem too interesting in joining a project despite the few that have talent to help, so existing work could help change their mind. I could be wrong since I don't believe this has happened, but more importantly, if you keep waiting for other people you won't get anything done yourself.

>> No.2670510

>>2670476
Wait, I thought strawberry panic was based on manga?

>> No.2670568

>>2670510
It is. The visual novel isn't the base work this time.
It contains hot lesbian sex. Not. It's a PS2 game.

>> No.2670621

>>2670476
best part is how nagisa ditches shizuma right before that scene

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>> No.2672531

I want incest VN I have a story

>> No.2672547

If your main motivation is just to one-up another visual novel project then you'll never accomplish anything.

>> No.2672557
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2672557

There's already an OELVN better than KS

>> No.2672577

>>2672557
lol so randum xD

>> No.2672593

I want to make a VN. I've come up with a few ideas, and I'm trying to find a way to combine them into one story. But, they're all so different, that might not work.

Either way, my only problem is music.

>> No.2672601

>>2672577
There's actually a pretty good plot hiding behind the parody front.

>> No.2672604

Most of my ideas are shitty rehashes of other plots and settings. I never realize this until months after I start building them.

>> No.2672610

>>2672601
>>2672557

Same dev promoting their shit.

>> No.2672617

>>2672610
>>2672577
Same KS dev butthurt about their precious game being mocked.

>> No.2672632

A Visual Novel where you uhh

Fall in love with girl in post apocalyptic Tokyo
Girl turns into zombie
Choose whether to still love her or kill her.

Her being a zombie has no impact on her mental health, only her physical health.

tl;dr I duno lol

>> No.2672705

It'd be nice if my hobo VN came to fruition. I don't care who picks it up and takes the credit, I just want to see it made someday lol

>> No.2672781

>>2672705

can you repost your idea? Maybe I'll try it.

>> No.2672948

>>2672781
its somewhere on the forums

>> No.2672976

>>2672632
Her jaw would drop off so she could only communicate to you by using her mobile phone (with what little fingers she has left)

>> No.2673002

loli zombie. now that's a new one. anyone up for necrophile?

>> No.2673037

>>2672604
Don't mind with this. Anything you can come up with, Japan already done 10 times.
Just write whatever you find interesting. Then show us.

>> No.2673048

Now that it's summer and I have free time, I might work on the hopital vn. Probably not though, too lazy.

>> No.2673053
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2673053

Since this is a /jp/ users make shit thread, I thought it would be a good time to post an update. Our (L^2 Productions) unnamed pirate VN now has a title, "El Pecho de Diablo." If progress continues as planned, we're hoping to release a demo on Thanksgiving.

VN concept:
1665 Somewhere in the Caribbean.
You're Captain Robert Collaart, pirate, and during your last raid on a merchant ship have captured an unusual prize. A heavily armored chest with a sophisticated locking mechanism. You and your crew have tried to open the chest and have failed. Due to the poor take on the raid, the crew gives you this ultimatum, retrieve the key to the chest in thirty days or you can find yourself a new ship and crew. Luckily, the ports of call for the merchant ship are known, which narrows it down to five ports... and five governesses.

>> No.2673064

>>2673053
That's silly.

You're silly.

>> No.2673072

The one thing I really want to see in an English VN is a moe religous/fundamentalist loli. And she thinks everything is all sinful until you "train" her. Maybe she'd be homeschooled.

>> No.2673073

>>2673053
link

>> No.2673078

>>2673002
Japan already done that 30 times. Not new.

>> No.2673093

>>2673053
Correct spanish would be "El Pecho del Diablo"

>> No.2673107 [DELETED] 

>>2673073

We don't have a website at this point. It might happen after we actually have a game out. Then again, it might not.

>> No.2673115

>>2673073

We don't have a website at this point. It might happen after we actually have a game out. Then again, it might not.

>>2673093

Ack, thanks. It's been too long since I've used any Spanish and have become somewhat rusty.

>> No.2673115,1 [INTERNAL] 

Posting this here because I can't post on /jp/. If someone can post it in the real topic, that would be much appreciated.

En Bloc project lead here.

/jp/ project started February 2009.

En Bloc isn't dead, it's just making progress reaaaally slowly.

Dandelion Girl project is also still making progress, although it's a bit faster than En Bloc.

I still have plenty of plot ideas, but I don't feel like posting them when nobody's going to do anything with them anyways.

>>2670132
Which of the /jp/ projects was this, actually?

>> No.2673117,1 [INTERNAL] 

>>2673117
Wait, what? How did that...ah well. Yay.

>> No.2673117

En Bloc project lead here.

/jp/ project started February 2009.

En Bloc isn't dead, it's just making progress reaaaally slowly.

Dandelion Girl project is also still making progress, although it's a bit faster than En Bloc.

I still have plenty of plot ideas, but I don't feel like posting them when nobody's going to do anything with them anyways.

>>2670132
Which of the /jp/ projects was this, actually?

>> No.2673117,2 [INTERNAL] 

>>2673117,1
There's a delay. At first I didn't think my comment went through, but after I came back, it was posted.

>> No.2673117,3 [INTERNAL] 

>>2673115,1
I think that was project #2. The one with a underworld society.
Loved that one, reminded me of both City of Ember and that one shot manga, Island.

>> No.2673134

>>2673117
lol I remember when I renamed everything on the wiki from Dandelion Girl to Butt Girl.

>> No.2673166
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2673166

I voluntereed to do the art for that science VN idea, but I never heard from its original poster...

if you guys ever get serious about anything and this thread is still up until morning, I'll volunteer. My art is not hugely weeaboo, but since I'm an architecture stundent I'll be available to draw the backgrounds, if anything.

>> No.2673170

>>2673117
If you're doing anything at all, you really ought to have some sort of permanent website or blog, even if it's just a Wordpress account with some concept art.

>> No.2673192

>>2673117
the underworld inside core of the earth of the underbelly of the internet

>> No.2673352

seems like theres 2 threads on this similar topic

>> No.2673441

>>2673352
Yeah, but the other is a tripfag trollfest

>> No.2673477

>>2673441
But with mugen "lol arrow and epilepsis" in there, things should really be interesting.

>> No.2673701

>>2673441
everytime there's a "lets make some shit" thread, tripfags will gather to make a damn fuckin name for themselves

>> No.2673720

Sorry, I like visual novels, but in terms of storytelling they aren't very good, the VN engine limits the story to mostly dialogue, and action is also limited in a big way (even if FSN did use some interesting techniques to keep battles entertaining).

>> No.2673731

>>2673720
Bullshit. VNs have at the very least as much freedom as novels.

>> No.2673782

>>2673720
Visual novels = novels. Do you expect flashy moves when you read a wall-o-text novel? Don't bullshit on the lack of freedom in novels when you don't have any imagination

>> No.2674194

Well, this thread was quick to die.

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>>2673720
>in terms of storytelling they aren't very good
WHAAAAAAA-
10/10 would rage again

>> No.2674219

>>2674194
Try again tomorroww

>> No.2674259

>>2674194
Weekend /jp/ is here

>> No.2674284

>>2670055
Rather than "something like KS", something on the lines of a VN in the mood of Demonophobia would be closer to /jp/'s heart, I'd wager. Evil bastards. Just look at mugenjohnciel or whatshisface.

>> No.2674292

>>2674284

That hack isn't representative of /jp/ as a whole.

>> No.2675203

FREE BUMP ALSO GOES TO THIS THREAD TO PISS KATAWA SHOUJO DEVELOPERS!

>> No.2675266

ANOTHER FREE BUMP FOR A WELL DESERVING THREAD. BETTER THIS THAN THAT KATAWAS SHOUJO WANNABE CRAP!

>> No.2675279

>>2675266
>BETTER THIS THAN THAT KATAWAS SHOUJO WANNABE CRAP!
>With the release of KS's demo just a month ago, I was wondering if we /jp/edos can do something similar.

>> No.2675304

>>2675279
FUCK YOU! STOP SAGING THIS THREAD! YOURE NOT ONE OF THOSE KATAWA SHOUJO DEVS ARE YOU? HUH?

>> No.2675409

I'm working on Lovejustice, a /jp/ VN. Alone. I'm in the process of writing the entire script on /jp/ and letting you guys see all the work, instead of hiding it in my secret fort like the KS crew does.

Yeah, I'm doing it alone. ZUN-STYLE
No artists.
No writers.
MSPaint only.

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>>2672557
original artwork dont steal

>> No.2675551

>>2670055
KS is /jp/edos getting something constructive. As much as the devs don't like people equating them with 4chan, getting your name off 4chan once you're attached to it is about as easy as getting your name off the sex offender registry. They used up all the talent and determination Anonymous has for at least a good 5 years and there's not a whole lot we can do about that.

>> No.2675574

Reading VNs does not impart talent or ability to create them.
At best you will produce an imitation.
Enjoy your unfounded arrogance, VN Experts (Has harshly critiqued more than 500 VNs.)

>> No.2676326

fuck yeah ks bump

>> No.2676362

>>2675409
FINAL DESTINATION

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