/jp/ - Otaku Culture

>>18013372
>edition
gb2/a/

>>18014321
Wow, ganbare 2 you too, anon

>>18013372
Finished this yesterday. I'll probably draw more now that I've finished exams.

>>18013372
That's a really cool opening pic
>>18015085
I like it. The design of her hair and fists are very cool, as is her pose. Nice job, dude.

>>18016774
It's based off this enemy from KanColle which I don't play.
Also just realized I forgot the stockings.

>>18016914
Ah yes.
Don't know too much KanColle either. Nice drawing of her though.

>>18021393
Cute

>>18016774
I like this one

>>18013372
>What has everyone been working on?
nothing, feeling empty and no target feels bad

>>18013372
Yuukas in various styles, as per usual.
And a random knight that I would've posted here if I noticed this thread sooner. I actually started thinking of making a thread myself if it wasn't made until Friday.
And, of course, battling the feels described by the anon above.

This is a redpilled thread now.

Hey mods, stop deleting my shit. This is why people abandoned this board time ago.
Go fuck yourselves.

>>18032794
Mods you have my permission to keep deleting this guy's shit

>>18032807
Go and take it.

>>18032827
Hey mods can you guys delete this too, Its mine and I don't want to be related with your stupid board.

>>18032945
Assuming this isn't some sort of next level epic troll, you can file a DMCA through the site process (http://www.4chan.org/legal#dmca)) if you want to make sure nobody posts your images on 4chan ever again.

What the fuck is going on here...

>>18033526
Ah, the warosu archive explains it.

>>18013372
>What has everyone been working on?
I'm supposed to be drawing stuff for the lolige anon but I always end up procrastinating or forgetting until I'm too tired or worrying it's not nice enough... It's been like a month...
I'm so sorry, my dude. I'll try harder

>>18033850
>> the pose
Why can't I help but imagine this...

>>18033850
Cute!

>>18034026
Because you are a very, very lewd man.

>>18034071
Very, very true.
And I don't consider it to be a bad trait, too!

>>18034199
And I never said it was!

>>18034209
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Sp2hg-7KPB0

>>18034248
Damn, anime sucks.

>>18033850
What a pretty girl. Is she exhausted?
>>18034026
Dude... d-don't be so lewd

>>18034400
Russian girl?

I went on a sketching spree last night.

>>18034652
No can do. An artist needs to be honest with themselves in order to make actually engaging art, and if I excel when my dick guides me, so be it. Please look forward to New Year's. Hopefully I'll be able to make something special to commemorate my 1-year anniversary.

>>18034962
That's true I guess.

>>18015085
cute. giant forearms is definitely its own subgenre in character designs lol
>>18016774
>>18020550
these are amazing!
>>18021393
its funny how santa looks like a gothic lolita
>>18022167
thats some really fucking shiny hair!
>>18025436
>no target
I dont know what you mean by this lol. but nice head
>>18026884
cool angle

heres my wip. CAN YOU TELL WHO IT IS!?!?! I want to make manga one day.

>>18036423
Kind of looks like Suika, but as a crone.

>>18036975
>as a crone
rip

>>18036975
Ehh? Wasn't it Mokou? There aren't any horns...

>>18037887
I don't see no suspenders or marvelous long hair tied in a top ponytail with a rough origami ribbon and with multiple small ribbons at the locks, but I see Suika's gourd, moderate length hair, soft hair ribbon at the back of the head (actually, given that the face is visible, at the side of her head), and a very scary face of an alcoholic.

>>18037887
>>18039206
lmao. thanks jp. saved. And it was suika. The reason for no horns was because.... it was a WIP afterall. The perspective is fucked. But if i were to describe it: shes sitting with her back leaning back and twisted to the left relative to her torso.

I got a lot of grinding to do over christmas break

btw. i actually already drew mokou yesterday https://www.instagram.com/p/Bcpu7XUlB6Q/?taken-by=go2huprincess

>>18039519
The grotesque images that came before my vision upon opening the provided link will probably haunt my nightmares for days if not years. I shall strongly suggest you to discard this style of drawing faces as soon as possible, learning from someone like houtengeki for anime faces or Reilly for realistic heads. But basic perspective is what you have to learn first.

Wich 2hu shud I droa?

>>18039746
Suika eating suika.

>>18039761

>>18039761

>>18039899
AAAAAAAHHHHHHH
Thats not what I meant!

>>18039917
Oh, right, I see. Woopsie-daisy, hehe.

>>18039917
>>18039987
Don't worry, bros, I got you covered!

>>18039917
>>18039987
Don't worry, bros, I got you covered!

>>18036423
Thank you, friendo.

>>18039899
Very scary Onigrill, but >>18039519 looks scarier somehow.
>>18040020
This is just brilliant honestly.

I also did an Oni girl!

>>18040951
I like this one a lot nice job.

Kinda wonder if I should've gone with the original idea of hiding her right foot behind the left foot and moving the left hand there to hold it for balancing purposes.

I wish all these new shitty ``artists'' would leave and the old ones would come back except Magister

post your art

>>18046142
I haven't drawn anything in forever though, last thing I drew I already posted in the previous thread

>>18046168
Care to name it or repost it?

My stupid pen pressure isn't working today fuck Wacom tablets

>>18046191
it's nice, but you shouldn't scribble so much. Pick up the pen and make clean parallel lines rather than sawtooths.

>>18046242
I disagree honestly. I find that kind of messy sketch style way more appealing and expressive.
>>18046191
That looks really nice, man.
I dig it a lot.

>>18045467
Thanks man

>>18046189
too lazy to dig it up and take a bad picture with my phone again

take this nitori i just scribbled instead

>>18036423
no target meaning i don't have anything i want to draw

>>18047109
Ah, you're that beginner with Remi.
You know, "shitty artists" is not something that someone on your level should ever call others unless you deliberately include yourself. And I don't think many people who actually draw well tend to insult beginners. Go back to /ic/ if you want to pretend that you're in the position to do that.

>>18048105
i think you're mistaken, i didn't call anyone a shitty artist, I just saw "post your art" and decided to respond lol

>>18048122
Uh, okay. If it's like that, sorz. Although realizing the context of the thread before posting is a good habit to have.

>>18048122
You shouldn't ever respond to those kinds of posts. You're only ever going to get a
>Your art is shit too
or
>go back to /ic/. It takes time to get good and not everyone has talent like you.
or
>It's not anime, who cares? Ugly.
No one is ever going to go
>Wow your art is awesome. I'm sorry, I'll stop posting my literal garbage now.

>>18048546
This is nothing but an excuse. When people can actually prove their point, in at least half of the cases the opponent is forced to admit it. However, such people generally only care about their own work and don't just attack others, so there is no argument with them in the first place. On the other hand, people who don't draw themselves—especially those bitter fellows who tried to learn drawing but got mistaken about the means or their feelings and didn't make it—are the ones who complain most often, using only general words and personal feelings as the basis for their reasoning.

>> It's not anime, who cares? Ugly.
Oh, how much I can relate to this...

>>18047109
As always, very nice pic.
I like the simplistic, cartoonish style.

>>18047403
A slump? Same.
Nice pic, tho.

>>18048122
>>18048546
>>18048105
Yea, fellow artists never really hate on anyone, be it beginner or advanced. Some people are just dissatisfied with everything that isn't good AND "fameless". Ignore those. Most of them are not artists themselves - or failed ones, as already stated. And the only point where artist really become failed are when they give up on it.

Also, while I agree that you could have deduced who "post your art" was responding to, the post itself wasn't a reply to anything, so I can see why he wouldn't regard it as one. And it git him to post something, so that's good.

Another sketch from the sketchig spree.

>>18013372
I really dig your piece, OP.

>>18039694
Perspective is for baka na humans

>>18034026
Wew

>>18034071
Thanks

>>18034652
Nah, she's fine

>>18047403
This desu senpai. I mean, I want to draw cute girls but besides that there's not much

>>18053873
EVERYONE GET BACK. HER HEAD'S GONNA BLOW!

>>18050076
>>18051512
yeah, but im not in particular want to draw cute girls, just something fun or interesting and nothing interests me much lately

I tried today, /jp/.

>>18058460
it looks nice! I like how you combined shadow mapping (lips) with hatching.

"Otiosum was the first one to rise.
He was the first to discover Aether.
He unraveled its nature, for he was wise.
With sculpting elements one could tether.

He crafted golems and brought them to life.
They obeyed the laws of Otiosum
Which brought upon us the new gift of rife.
And so was the beginning of the thrum

Otiosum ceded into a sloth
His creation catered his every need
Atrophy, deformation from his loath,
mangled his form. Sluggish, and forced to recede.

Others looked at the brother who had drowned,
But the use of Aether was still not frowned."

>>18061304
Looks neat.

>>18033850
This is good, but I feel like you should be able to see more of her right shoulder from this angle.
>>18040951
Speaking as a person who drew on exclusively lined paper for over five years, you really, really should just spend five dollars on a sketchbook or attach some printer paper to a clipboard. You're doing a disservice to some good-ass art.
>>18050696
Eyes are the hardest part of sprite art, and you nailed them, but it looks like the chest needs a second pass.
>>18051512
Cute booty-patootie
The only issue I see with this is that there isn't a good distinction between the front and back sides of the "coronal plane" so it looks like she has a really thick torso. You might want to keep that in mind while shading it.
>>18058460
Very eye-catching. The lips are especially well done.
>>18059664
You might have an easier time drawing straight things like guns by starting with a ruler or the line tool and adding onto it from there. This picture has solid anatomy but the perspective seems a bit off around the feet and it's sketchy to the point where I'm not actually sure what's going on.
>>18061304
This is just cool as all hell.

>>18063923
>it's sketchy to the point where I'm not actually sure what's going on.
How does one crosshatch like me without it looking sketchy?

>>18064988
Practice drawing straight, parallel lines next to each other with even spacings on some paper. Try to get the ending and starting points around the same as well. Don't use lined paper for this, it'll really fuck with your head.

Bad mspaint thing incoming.

>>18066190
ill keep that in mind senpai

Hisashiburi /jp/

>>18065017
For some reason. This looks like a Latin art.

Did this one a couple months back. Got my tablet in January. I have the motivation to do full color draws every couple months.

>>18069661
Needs a lot of work..
practice practice anon.
Still it's a cute drawing.

>>18058460
Love this crosshatching

>>18065017 try neater and not so much black on the lips.

i dont know how to fix this proportion....

>>18069445
i might have gone a bit too much on the contrast. heres my wip for the face
https://www.instagram.com/p/Bc5pdmKlsW2/?taken-by=go2huprincess
i made it more red to make reimu younger...

>>18067553
whys she so smug /jp/?

>>18070930
>> i dont know how to fix this proportion....
It's simple: you only need to actually learn proportions, anatomy, and perspective. Some understanding of gestures is also a must, of course.

>>18025436
Is Bongo sensei a 2hu

Satori giving me Winter luck for applications

>>18069661
I can tell you put lots of effort into this but it isn't working. You have a lot to improve, especially your anatomy and perspective. For example, you should be drawing eyes an equal distance from the nose. In general you want to imagine your subject as a three-dimensional object that you are drawing at a specific angle.
>>18072403
I like the colors a lot. If I could change anything, I'd raise her nose somewhat, and change the legs so that they're in a more natural stance. Whenever I'm have trouble with that, I just google image search "woman standing"

I like how this turned out. "Shading" with solid white is a lot of fun.

>>18072586
anon that's called highlighting

>>18070930
Try without the clothes and then show us how your anatomy looks, work on the hands they seemed oversized, also the teacup is placed to high.

>>18069661 Eyes are too close the hair highlight is bad shading is too two dimensional collar bone is to short shading of the torso is flat I can go on.

>>18072570
>> For example, you should be drawing eyes an equal distance from the nose
Actually, in 3/4, the nose should be shifted to the outer side, and the eye on that side will be visually closer to the nose. Like in this one: >>18072586

>>18072403
Either the nose is kinda low, or she is pouting, but then the mouth line shouldn't be so flat.

Bumping before the thread's archived.

A very gay request. In both senses of the word.

>>18081641
QT, although I'd place the knees much lower and make the feet bigger so they would be realistically able to support her weight.

>>18081641
Cute

>>18082384
I think the frills should be bigger on her hair piece.
Nice job anon.

I spent 2 hours yesterday trying to figure out how to draw black pants

Do you think this nose will work...?

>>18086882
the way I do it I just leave white spots for the outlines

>>What has everyone been working on?

Well, /jp/, I am releasing the Christmas(-eve, kinda) demo. It's not what I wanted it to be. I didn't have quite enough time to QA it as hard as I wanted, and a lot of features and content that I wanted to get in I couldn't. Oh well.

There's a download over on the usual thread on 2^3-chan's /agdg/ board (id 26682). 4chan doesn't like my URL-shortener (which just redirects to a pomf clone, but I wanted to have a download counter and the ability to change the link if I need to hotfix bugs)

I'm the guy who has been making that loli kidnapping game if you're new.

There's been quite a bit of content since the

>>18033850
>>18034026

So you didn't disappear? That image looks nice though!

I got inspired with painting Hyper-realistic anime art and tried my hand with painting a 2hu, but I feel like I'm doing something wrong midway.

>>18013372
>>18091362
Keep it up! you just gotta shading it smoothly, it looks pretty great so far anon.

>>18067553
not bad, i'm taking this

>>18091362
>>18013372
Keep it up anon it looks pretty great so far.

Merry Kurukurismas

Merry Christmas jp. I drew me and my girlfriend. i really like jack hamm a lot now.
>>18088682
dont take this the wrong way since im a beginner. but. that nose is horrendus style-wise and fundie-wise. but still pretty good face.
>>18091362
if you ever feel stuck. Go back and master drawing a hyper realistic version of a small body part
I painted an eye before doing the whole face of my reimu
https://www.instagram.com/p/Bc5fQs7lMzy/?taken-by=go2huprincess
>>18091215
im not sure if i should be amazed or horrified.
>>18091362
>light blue coloring scheme instead of black and white
i never understood why this became a fad. it makes it look like construction plans for a building. but, youre pretty 4chan famous already, so good on you m80.
>>18094342
kek. very nice. if you actually used markers on that hair all on one try, thats pretty good.

>>18094342
Presents to Gensokyo
Before Midnight
NOW

merry x-mas /jp!

Gotta hop on that Boat-slut train.

>>18097148
This looks really good. Can't wait to see how it looks colored.

>>18065017
Really looks like a Latin reimu...

>>18097156

Color.

Right...

>>18094342
to ri su!

>>18097303
I can color it for you if you want.

>>18097303
just do it in black and white with tones, that looks fine too

Well I released a couple hotfixes for >>18091215 fixing a lot of the bugs.

Links at:
http://dpaste.com/1PN8HB1

>>18094856
>being horrified by that
>on /jp/

Last time I checked /jp/ was the place that was the most welcoming for this sort of game. And it's not even by a small margin. I'd say it goes:
/jp/ >> /dgg/ > /weg/ = /stg/ > /b/ >>> agdg > /hgg2d/

*/d/'s game general
*/aco/'s western erotic games
*/aco/'s slave trainer general
*/vg/'s amateur game dev general
*/vg/'s hentai game general (2d)

for the threads I've ever posted it in before.

>>18100452
Does the 2dhg thread not like it because it's western or what? They play like actual games about rape and bestiality and stuff.

>>18100528

Yeah, because it's western. Also it triggers the "lolicons" there because they think it's too "pedo" and then get defensive about it like an in-the-closest fag getting defensive about something feminine or metrosexual while secretly wanting to suck like 20 cocks. Could also be the lack of NTR, but I... fixed that for them.

>>18100567
>get defensive
Nigga, they aren't even real. The fuck is wrong with them?

>>18100567
What does "floor tiles" do?

>>18100599

Welcome to neo-4chan

>>18100452
this is impressive actually

>>18101066

>>18100849
I have to assume it's a reference to that guy on /v/ who jacks off to floor tile patterns.
>>18100452
Stay here as long as you like.
The day 4chan doesn't welcome the guy busting his ass making his own freeware video game about raping children is the day 4chan stops being 4chan, I say.

I wonder if drawing trucks is linked with artistic depression.

>>18100452
>>18101571
its pretty cool and funny. And i have enjoyed loli rape stuff in the past. But its still of sort of like playing a game that makes you glorify people like peter skully or Ariel Castro, and i never once in all my years of browsing 4chan seen any anon praising them. And its really controversial considering all the news of pedophilia thats coming out about hollywood now. I just hope no unironic pedophile actually sees it as moral justification

Made this from a /b/ request.
I guess I'll do some 2hu next

>>18058460
Everytime you try, a /jp/ gets a little more happy.

>>18061304
This is really cool. I like the supplementory lore behind it. Gods gone decadent is always a nice little tidbit to make things a little more grim.

>>18063923
You're right of course, but sadly, that's the only kind of paper I had at hand that day. I wish I would've had blank paper - and bigger sizes.

>>18067553
Tadaima my nigga
Good Tewi, great smug

>>18096318
Aye, merry belated christmas to you as well, good sir, kind sir

>>18097148
>see-through navel
T-tight

https://soundcloud.com/sinsack_agi/ideas2112/s-HEtu2
Some musical ideas. Unfinished, beware of sudden start.

requesting a 48x48 image of Shinki from Touhou
can just be her face or her whole body, which-ever

>>18100567
>option to not use imperial

wtf i love you now

>>18107709

It's always been that way. The previous demo had it too. Hell, all the numbers under the hood are in metric. It's just at the display (UI, menus, etc) that it converts from a number (say 135) to a string (135cm or 4'5")

Did this as quick stress relief. I usually don't do scratchy lines.

>>18107881
Eyes are too close, >>18107450
Your face shape seems really strange... your hatching/shading looks messy.
I would also fix the mouth.
>>18102992 wish you woudl've continued detailing the sword.
I like how she looks.

>>18109692

https://soundcloud.com/user-295122663/npnjs8ngdf2d

A Drone arrangement of 魔術師メリー. I'm aware it's shit but I've been trying to make music for almost the entirety of 2017 and always gave up somewhere in the middle of the track, so just actually finishing something before the end of the year became my top priority.

I feel like im the only person in the entire planet that makes manga in adobe flash.....

>>18111269
sounds good to me. im assuming you'd put this in a game like イヴ or something

I think this is the first time I bothered doing one of these. It's interesting to go through your work and see how lazy and productive you were in different months or how I got into KF.
Also please note that the march piece was a collab so it has some stuff from another artist as well.

>>18111814
I remember February, doesn't feel like it was that long ago.

Cute Youmu I did some time ago.

Hope you all like sexy Indians coming onto manly girls

>>18117927
neat pose. i have no idea how you made that thing so blurry though.
>>18118089
i dont like yuri,

>>18118573
oh, but besides it being yuri its a nice drawing though!

>>18118573
It's simple: I start by stroking my black background with soft touches of a white color mix brush to form very vague shapes that help me grasp how to realize my dick's demands. After that, I get these shapes neater and neater until I'm satisfied.

By the way, I strongly recommend that you read this and take note:
https://design.tutsplus.com/articles/the-differences-between-male-and-female-portraits--vector-14954

>>18102175
you got the wheel alignment backwards, you'll typically want the further wheels to be closer together due to perspective.

take this page from scott robertson's fantastic book on this stuff

>You will never be a male shoujo mangaka and waifu one of your female fans
why even live.....

>>18119395
>>18121232
thanks. ill try to keep these in mind. but i feel hopeless.....

>>18101100
how has more skill gone into a kidnapping simulator than my entire education

>>18121625
>shoujo manga
>female fans
They're like 8, dude.

>>18122530
what the fuck do 18-22 year old japanese women read then?

>>18125064
女性漫画, no?

Rare 1700s etching of Cirno i discovered in my attic

>>18125064
Shounen manga, so they can rub themselves to the little boys.

>>18126437
Shounen sports manga, so they can rub themselves to the young boys.

>>18125064
Shounen sports manga, so they can rub themselves to the young boys.

I drew this and I feel unmotivated to continue the effort in getting better.

>>18132442
Don't worry about it! Just take it easy!

>>18132455
I can't take it easy if everything I make looks like garbage.

>>18132942
Hey, realization is the first step on the path to getting good. At least you won't get depressed, bitter, envious, and confused to the point of insanity starting to gnaw at your mind (to the point of starting to doubt that you view the world as it is) when you compare the reactions to your seemingly not-that-bad-anymore art and the art of others. And I really can't help being bugged by it for the last few months. A poor photo of a literally childlike drawing seems to have way more appeal in the eyes of Pixiv users than my pictures. There are people who get praised and eagerly defended when they make the same mistakes that I was trashed for in the past. I really shouldn't be that bitter mere hours away from New Year, but I still am. Despite trying to convince myself that I draw only for the sake of myself and the virtual lady of my heart, I still get heavily depressed when I'm being ignored despite my best efforts (in my first few months I was subject to harsh critique, but there is almost none nowadays—and I'm hardly happy with it) and become moved to tears from the slightest appraisal. Although it's somewhat consoling to know that I'm not alone in this regard, although I have always regarded myself as a lone wolf, and although I enjoy making and, um, enjoying my pictures likely even more than earlier, this year is leaving me with a feeling of cold emptiness in place of my heart that was burning with passion in the very beginning. Sorry. Couldn't hold this in anymore.

Returning to you, realization is the first step on the path to getting good. If you realize that your images look bad, you figure out the way to make them look good, set out milestones, and start working towards the next one in their sequence. If you're bad at something, you look up a way to make yourself good at it, use it, and git gud. You're bad at faces? Look up construction, head models on sketchfab, Reilly's/Loomis'/Houtengeki's methods, etc., and use whichever fits your way of thinking better. Copy references. Study images. Practice, practice, practice. That's how all the kewl boiz make it.

>>18133393
Is that a copypaste?

>>18133434
No, I have typed all of this just now.

>>18133483
Aight dude.

Atleast I'm making progress. A bit. Considering I barely draw and do all this without training or references.

I rather have legit critique on my pics than just soft talking and saying "ahw it looks good :3 *nuzzles you* sort of shit.

I tried drawing after practice models and teachings, just got more dissapointed I can't even draw simply stuff as shown in the references from the books and websites. So I said "screw that all, I'm drawing shit now"

>>18133552
Apparently, the lack of Dat Eraser makes it hard to recognize your pics. That, or you simply haven't posted for too long of a while.

In any case, it's important to draw what you like to draw while wanting to draw it good. You won't get anywhere as long as you're fine with drawing poorly, but it's important to recognize and accept that it's completely normal for a beginner to fuck up most of the time. Don't polish turds, but draw a lot of different things from varying angles. "A lot" means, like, a real lot. Try to set goals for yourself, like to draw no less than 30 pictures with considerable effort put into them per month. Learn the basics of perspective and dynamic drawing first. Then build up a visual database and work from it. If you don't know how to draw something and cannot use objects stored in your database to recreate it even remotely, look up references. Here are some links from my collection. Read them in this exact order.

https://design.tutsplus.com/articles/dont-take-it-personally-how-to-make-critique-work-for-you--cms-21670
https://design.tutsplus.com/articles/7-sins-of-beginner-artists-what-keeps-you-from-being-good--cms-25302
https://design.tutsplus.com/tutorials/how-to-learn-to-draw-stage-one-manual-skills--cms-23304
https://design.tutsplus.com/tutorials/how-to-learn-to-draw-stage-two-precision--cms-23576
https://design.tutsplus.com/tutorials/how-to-learn-to-draw-stage-3-visual-database--cms-24325
https://design.tutsplus.com/articles/human-anatomy-fundamentals-basic-body-proportions--vector-18254
https://design.tutsplus.com/tutorials/human-anatomy-fundamentals-additional-tips--cms-22125
https://design.tutsplus.com/articles/human-anatomy-fundamentals-learning-to-see-and-draw-energy--vector-17027

You'll likely figure out what to do after you master these Tomorrow's lessons on your own.

In regards to proportions, there's also this post from the previous thread:
>>/jp/thread/S17778610#p17928191

>>18133832
Yeah, I usually hang out in a japanese IRC and talk with friends there and post my stuff.

But since it's mainly a 2hu chat, they never know of the girls I draw from that chinese mobage. So I started to take a pic of the drawing, of the drawing with the reference in the background and the actual reference. Dunno, guess my weak japanese knowledge makes it difficult to communicate at times. But this one is idiot proof.

Well, I guess posting it now will be easier.
Drunk Yuuka wishes you a Happy Lewd Year, jaypussies. And the link below is my progress for the first year.
https://pbs.twimg.com/media/DSTWk6nX4AAFYE9.jpg:orig
(For consistency, only the main style is tracked.)

Far from what the most optimistic two fellows expected of me at the start of the year, but does not seem to be close to the majority's opinion either. I guess I'm ok with this pace.

Hello /jp/ and OCfriends. I made some music for viewing the first sunrise of the year with bunnyhopping comfy soft friends:

https://hyperdimensionfumo.bandcamp.com/album/ohdrearywearyredeyes-e-p

Ive decided to post this. Its the closest i got to making manga quality in 2017 despite the errors. I have also written some comics earlier this year that i like, but nowhere near good quality art.

>>18132442
>>18132942
i rec just starting to master drawing eyes first. look up burne hogarth eyes and try grinding at every angle. then move onto drawing eyes with a mouth. Itlll make you feel more confident when you can master one body part.
>>18134375
i really want a gf anon, thats how i feel looking at it. Mind posting what goals you have with painting? Ive seen this style painting before, but wondering what type of rendering you hope to achieve one day.
>>18135812
pretty cool anon

>>18137262
Uh, do YOU want a gf, or do you feel that the artist wants a gf?

My only goal is to draw the best Yuuka in the world, and the way that lets me approach it closer doesn't really matter, be it black-and-white sketches/lineart like >>18082384, value-map-based paintings like >>18117927, or fully rendered pictures like the one above. Some lesser goals include background that would fit best Yuuka in the world. I look up to Asutora-sensei mainly, but the killer face for me is this one: https://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?mode=medium&illust_id=51643281
I also like Minarai Honpo's faces, which is the reason I used to draw the eyes very, very wide.

Miyakouji, Ibuki Notsu, HaBaBa, and Aminu (coincidentally, the last picture posted for this author on danbooru happens to be the pic that I color-shifted and posted on an imageboard where Hatater was once lurking) all have great render skills, and I inspect their pictures closely to try and learn from them, but these fellows are THE pros at backgrounds, probably beating Makoto Shinkai himself (though you can't really compare single pictures with full-fledged anime):
https://www.pixiv.net/member.php?id=810305
https://www.pixiv.net/member.php?id=648285

>>18138338
I like the look this shading gives.

>What has everyone been working on?

>>18139667
Forgot to say that I was deciding on the clothes so it wasn't supposed to seem so lewd.

Problem is I can't decide, any opinions?

>>18139676
Heca clothes! Duh! Else, just go crazy, like Heca obviously did, just do whatever dude!

>>18122444

Perhaps it is time to rethink your education then, Anon.

>>18122444
>how has more skill gone into a kidnapping simulator than my entire education

Perhaps it is time to rethink your education then, Anon.

Whenever i do hatching. i always feel like it looks pretty even when the lines dont follow the form.

What do i do!?

>>18142510
horizontally flip your picture.
Look more at how others are doing what you want to achieve.

>>18135812
this is nice anon, I like the feel it gives off

A shame about the face.

When you lewd Yuuka too much, Yuuka starts lewding you.

How do I get rid of these filthy western undertones in my images?
It just STINKS of a dirty gaijin trying to draw anime.

>>18145198
By emulating Japanese artists, perhaps?

>>18145198
I self-study so I don't have a good method of learning art. But personally here's what I would do.
Starting with the face, start by tracing an artist's outline.
Try to remember how they drew parts of the face, from the proportion to the style.
Then try to draw a face using the artist's style from your memory.
If things seems accurate, draw another face. This time try to mix your style into it.

>>18145198
idk man. how does my nico nico look?

>>18145198
By adding chingchong text to your art duh. Joking aside, i think you overrate nip art styles.

>>18146588
You might be on the wrong board.

>>18146230
Like a crossdressing man drawn by a person of American or Nordic origin.

(Not the guy you've asked.)

>>18146647
you only say man because the chin isnt in the shape of a triangle

>>18146653
how surprising that someone calls someone with masculine features a man.

>>18146673
baka, if someone has a triangle for a chin, their bones would be crushed and grinded

>>18139676
Keep her like that!

I tried a different method of shading/coloring.
That website on the monitor looks familiar...

>>18146653
Look at Yuukas above. Despite their varying features, they still look like women. Now look at this angular face with big ear, this hairline, awkward-looking smile right from shounen manga. This thick neck and this hair that clearly looks like a wig. These broad shoulders.

No, dude, that's a man. But don't worry! I watched 24 episodes of Apocrypha, the whole of Fate/Zero, Prisma/Illya, and UBW. I know how to turn a man into a girl! There, that's more like it.

>>18146740
Women crush and grind their bones all the time with corsets, foot binding, and neck rings. Not having deformed bones is mannish.

>>18146995
thats nice anon.

but i dont know. im getting the blues. none of ares are clean enough to look like an actual anime screencap. i wish i knew how it was done.

Is it possible that someone can draw something for me or tell me where I can get a comissiin for something?

>>18148459
Depends what you want and how much you're willing to pay.

>>18148242
>none of ares are clean enough to look like an actual anime screencap
Why would you want it to? That's retarded. Anime is meant to be relatively simple and undetailed so it's easier to animate. It will never look good because of that. That cap there is probably a blank face with her facial expressions layered over it and some flat coloring underneath the layers. I never watched it, but I'd be impressed if those stripes on her ribbon don't look like they're "sliding around" when she moves due to them being a just a layer of stripes her body is moving over.

Go copy manga. Even Japs who copy anime look like shit.

>>18148459
>comissiin

>>18149256
>Anime is meant to be relatively simple and undetailed so it's easier to animate.
Most of the times true.
>It will never look good because of that.
Wrong you fucking retard.

>>18149266
Yeah no, if you draw "anime" it will look like simplistic shit.

>>18149291
No.
If you are good, it will look like Anime. Some people like the look.
Take this screenshot for example. It looks good.

Happy new year, /jp/.

>>18111814
Damn, it's been that long already. True, no obvious progress, but good stuff anyways.
>>18135812
I like it, dude. It's not everyday I hear Touhou Post Rock - and well-made one at that.
Good job. Looking forward to more.

Here's some dude.

RIP to jellyfish-san

>>18139740
>>18146918

I tried to avoid her normal clothes and I already outlined but I still can't decide.

Happy new year!
Here's a girl I drew last year.

Let this butt, be the final adobe flash drawing i show here. From now on, i am doing my linework and coloring in sai! still too dumb to move to clip studio

>>18149571
muscles are great as always
>>18149528
wow. i thought you were a total /beg/ judging by your sketch layer, but this is pretty nice linework anon!
>>18149571
amazing style. i wish i had a color a style instead of going for plastic rendering. ill make that a goal for 2018

>>18148242
Psst, dude. I've got sum color theory for ya. Wanna take a sniff?

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9kQllLy_X4I

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-ZNZ7ln1Z90

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Nap7dwHjD9Y&index=4&list=PLLmXZMqb_9sbNLM83NrM005vRQHw1yTKn (watch the whole playlist)

But I personally think it's kinda way too early for you to try coloring unless you find painting with shapes more fitting for you than lineart.

>>18148459
I can do a request if it's interesting enough. There are other people who do it too.

>>18149528
Why did you make her fat though? Also, you chould recheck the gravity of the chain that leads to the leftmost orb.

>>18150144
Like this?
Also I'm considering to put a wet shirt that literally says wet shirt.

>>18150405
Good enough. Btw, her hair seems to have too much orange in it.

>> Also I'm considering to put a wet shirt that literally says wet shirt.
Nice one. You should do just that and preferably don't give her any more clothes.

>>18150405
>a wet shirt that literally says wet shirt

Perfect.
Hair too orange tho

Done. Don't ask why is it space.

>>18151516
Neato.

Just a personal preference though. Those sweatdrops look more like skinmarks or bodypaint.
Try white or blue to indicate sweat.

>>18151516
Aw, I hoped it would be a full shirt like in https://danbooru.donmai.us/posts/2313950 , not a crop top.
What's up with the ambient light if she's in space though? Here's a quick color fix.

>>18151516
Hey man, can I have a wank to it? That belly just hits the right spots for me.

>>18149497
Why RIP? He's still around.
>>18149661
Das a nice bum for how rough the edges are.
>>18151565
>wet shirt
Heh.
Anyways, nice job, friend.

I hate how everyone kicks my ass at shading and colors.
I worked on an old sketch today (some kinda dragon loli or something) but I just can't handle colors right even when I try to keep it simple.

>>18151565
>>18151534
>White sweat
>Full shirt
Done. Thanks!
Also adjusted the ambience.

>>18151581
I can't control your dick my friend.

>>18152012
Thanks!

>>18152027
Nice, although I prefer it when the shirt doesn't cover the hip. Btw, the cleavage looks kind of weird and sweatdrops don't work like that. And while your wish to have pretty colors is understandable, they don't really work like that. (I didn't fiddle with them here.)

Basically, the farther the surrounding colors are from any given "base" color in the image, the less saturated it should get, speaking from the POV of plausible shading. And every color gets deprived of saturation by darkness. This means you don't get saturated reds or greens in a night image with natural lighting or in a scene lit by a blue lamp.

>>18150405
>>18151516
>>18151565
>>18152027
>>18152198
Shouldn't her navel be compressed sideways if she's chubby like that?

>>18152320
Good point.

She should be thicker. Bigger breasts too.

>>18153185
What do the stars denote? Is she slapping her butt? For what?

>>18152012
>Das a nice bum for how rough the edges are.
I dont follow.

>>18153259
>>166528767

>>18153259
>>>/a/166528767

>>18153651
go back there and stay.

well /jp/sies. posted a lot in this thread, from black and white to color. ive been kicked out by 3 art communities. yet for some reason not this one, so. i guess i feel national pride for this board since youre all i have left. lets all git gud! excuse this crappy paint job, i plan on making it my nitori(s) FAP-QUALITY one day

>>18154065
The fuck is wrong with you?

>>18154087
he's too happy for this place

Started a web novel for an isekai since I've gotten hooked on that shit lately.

I haven't really come up with a proper name for it, so I'm calling it "My Isekai Strategy Game", for now.
http://lemonseedlibrary.blog.fc2.com/blog-entry-2.html

I hope anon, especially writefags still roaming around this thread can give me some feedback.

>>18154484
I would read it if it wasn't Isekai.

>>18154484
Why does the isekai have to be an mmorpg? Why not just a normal fantasy world? Or even a world without magic. Basically this >>18154569 but more narrowly, if it wasn't about an "mmorpg."

>>18154763
Uhh... well, I just thought "isn't it a cliche?" and so I made it so.

When I started writing this, I specifically put to mind that I'm making a-

"Typical otaku pandering wish-fullfilment isekai bullshit"

And so I thought it ought to touch that cliche on that basis.

Although, the way I wrote the next chapters, the fact that it's an MMORPG is hidden, (because I am one of those who utterly despise those "status windows" appearing in mid-air) and it might as well be just a straight up fantasy world.

>>18154569
Well, I also have something that is just straight fantasy, if that is less harsh for your tastebuds.

http://lemonseedlibrary.blog.fc2.com/blog-entry-3.html

I started writing it a while ago, though I recently rewrote it.

>>18154087
>>18154366
You get more than you ask for with nitori

>>18154065
>ive been kicked out by 3 art communities
How is that even possible?

I don't think /jp/s OC thread counts as an art community...

>>18155072
What is it, though?

>>18155119
A thread on the jaypay

>>18154065
>ive been kicked out by 3 art communities
I wonder why.

Doodle/WIP

>>18153325
The linework is rough and edgy, yet still manages to convey a sense of softness.
>>18153185
This is also a really nice butt.
>>18155222
Interesting style! Looking forward to the finished drawing. And am I right in suspecting she's some kind of bird/owl-girl?
>>18155352
Cozy indeed. Always liked this thick brush-kind of linework, could never pull it off myself though, sadly.

>>18155055
>>18155136
usually its people saying i dont know perspective. i admit i get perspective wrong often, but they then tell me to stop drawing the figure and spean 2 WHOLE YEARS learning to copying perspective made easy. And its just, you can tell me to work on the perspective, but no matter what, DONT tell me to stop drawing my 2hu. ill learn to make perspective flawless while drawing the 2hu. I already know what 3-point perspective is and what loomis is (i own a lot of figure drawing books).These people need to realize that perspective and construction ARENT art, they are TOOLS used to draw 2hu, like vilppu said.

the biggest insult though is when an environmental drawer, someone who did nothing but draw scenery landscapes, told me to quit figure drawing to learn perspective, when she herself she never had painted or drew any figures once. So, i hope once i feel satisfied with how i draw 2hu, im gonna start drawing scenery to utterly anally annihilate the cunt

So yeah, drawing 2hu's is fighing an up hill battle. no one takes your art seriously until you start drawing some oring landscapes with basic perspetive.

>>18155422
thanks. i still have no idea what softness is though. i just tried to imitate anime

>>18153185
Why does her butt hurt?

>>18157227
holy shit lmao you guys opened a can of worms with this one

>>18157637
...i just think youre being a fag

>>18154065
>>18157227
>>18158347
Wew, lad.
I guess the reason you've got banished from as much as three art-related communities is a rather real one. Let me give you a free advice that cost me a lot of personal pain: NEVER argue.

Do work on your everything though. Here's a fine example of how you'd apply perspective in your drawings:
https://twitter.com/rangetsu777/status/942768420713459712
https://twitter.com/rangetsu777/status/942768252446322688

>>18158490
no, i agree, but you still talk like an fag judging by your dialect. also, pyw

>>18158539
If you are >>18157227 then get the fuck out right now. Your attitude is insufferable.

>>18157227
You are shit though, part of getting better is accepting you need improvements. Even in most situations hell even Kim jong Gi or Ruan Jai can improve some level of their art.

As you are now you will NEVER improve because your mentality on this issue is just plain childish.

>>18157227
If you don't stop being a fag, you should leave this "art-community" too.

>>18157227
This is gold.

>>18157252
It's when things are squishy and don't have much resistance when touched.

>>18157227
STOP drawing touhou characters. You're doing to them a terrible disservice indeed.
Knowing what perspective and Loomis are doesn't do anything if you can't or won't apply them

Looks like that's 4 "art-communities" he got kicked out of wwww

>>18155422
Trying something different with painting liberally and using outlines as only a guide (not sure what that technique is actually called). I am also looking forward to the finished drawing; artblocked pretty badly right now. She is a friend's FF14 avatar (cat girl), angry at my friend for not signing in for a while (as of right now she does kind of look like Hakase from KF, I see where you're coming from!).

[Spoiler] I do not understand. I think your shading is fine. And your Dragon girl sketches look fine too. I think the pieces by Heca anon and Yuuka anon are just more complete?

im sorry /jp/. i guess i do see the light of day, and cried a little at the thought of me turning out like tom preston. hope i didnt ruin your thread.

im gonna bannish myself before the mods do, so if anyone here tries to impersonate me, im not them.

>>18155422
Trying something different with painting liberally and using outlines as only a guide (not sure what that technique is actually called). I am also looking forward to the finished drawing; artblocked pretty badly right now. She is a friend's FF14 avatar (cat girl), angry at my friend for not signing in for a while (as of right now she does kind of look like Hakase from KF, I see where you're coming from!).

[Spoiler] I do not understand. I think your shading is fine. And your Dragon girl sketches look fine too. I think the pieces by Heca anon and Yuuka anon are just more complete?

>>18155422
Trying something different with painting liberally and using outlines as only a guide (not sure what that technique is actually called). I am also looking forward to the finished drawing; artblocked pretty badly right now. She is a friend's FF14 avatar (cat girl), angry at my friend for not signing in for a while (as of right now she does kind of look like Hakase from KF, I see where you're coming from!).

I do not understand. I think your shading is fine. And your Dragon girl sketches look fine too. I think the pieces by Heca anon and Yuuka anon are just more complete?

>>18157227
it's only uphill because you're total shit at it and unwilling to improve.

Anyone actually capable of drawing 2hus get praised for it.

fun with a mouse

I had just finished running through Chapter 1 now and I think I'm think I'm satisfied with it enough to share it with /jp/. (the one earlier was the prologue)

It starts, as it normally does, at the very beginning, when the MC logs into the game. Little does he know, he was actually already summoned into the isekai and it's no longer just a game anymore!
http://lemonseedlibrary.blog.fc2.com/blog-entry-4.html

Please give me your feedback! I really appreciated the one above since it really made me think a bit more seriously about the work, which I think I needed.
-
So, after progressing a bit further with the story, I think I've finally come across a legit reason for this anon's question >>18154763

And it has to do with the assorted details that would seem otherwise seem anachronistic if it wasn't an MMORPG, and was just a medieval fantasy world.

For instance, cute clothing. I believe this to be very important. If it were played straight as medieval fantasy, then fantasy-style clothing, as we know it just seems completely out of place. This is because fantasy clothing isn't actually based on period tastes, but modern tastes overlaid on period style. Hell, a lot of times, it's just modern clothes, period. (I'm talking about your average japanese isekai, of course)

That was basically the most convincing (for me) reason to keep it an MMO, because yes, I did actually consider chucking the MMO bit out, when anon mentioned it. But aside from that, there's also the thing about language. Tb.h, I don't really want to faff about with a couple of chapters explaining how the MC got to speak the language in the isekai. With an MMO, it's simple - he was playing the English language version of the game. Set and done with one sentence. There are probably more things I'll discover as I run through more of the story, and indeed, some others where I'll regret setting it in an MMO, but I believe this is the path I really want to take it on going forward.

>>18160857
okay that was terrible lemme try again

drawing a mouse with a mouse

>>18160988
fuck.

Trying to once again figure out what to draw on her.
Thinking of a magical girl costume.

>>18160575
>> Anyone actually capable of drawing 2hus get praised for it.
Well, fuck.

>>18160906
From the initial description I thought you were that guy who had been making a VN about moon rabbits.

>>18160552
Thanks, I'm glad that you think so but I can't help but feel insecure about it and dislike the outcome every time, even though I'm sticking to rather simple lighting for now.

Also I get ya, Artslumps are a bane and I get into them all the time. For reference, what are your brush setting when you do, for example, the blushing and lips like in your pic?

>>18160857
>>18160993
Oi dude considering you're using a mouse, that is rock solid. Hell, it's better than most do with pencil.
I'd read a comic in that style no doubt. Super comfy. Also, cute mouse, dude.

I felt like doing something stupid, so I did.

>>18164603
That is absolutely adorable, friend.

It ended up like this.

>>18167793
The thing in Seigas cleavage is perspectively not quite right, and I feel like her face needs some symmetric adjustment.
Keep it going though, dude, looking forward to the finished product.

Another sketch and little jingle from me. Wanna make it into a full song.
https://soundcloud.com/sinsack_agi/ideas0601

>>18169372
>The thing in Seiga's cleavage
Is it the image on the thing or the thing itself?

>>18169498
The thing itself, or more specifically the part that's coming out under her breasts.

Also, forgot to use the right link.
https://soundcloud.com/sinsack_agi/ideas0601/s-pBuDp

>>18169537
>https://soundcloud.com/sinsack_agi/ideas0601/s-pBuDp
Ah, it's working now. And yes it's some nice cute shit.

> under her breasts.
Oh, I thought you meant the bottle.

>>18169551
Oh, no worries there. The bottle is rather fine as is.

I'm having quite some fun drawing this character. inb4 porn when

>>18171837
Why would anyone want porn of that uncute thing?

>>18171850
That's what I ask myself everytime I see faceless fat/old men in Doujins.

>>18172051
It's not porn of faceless fat men, it's porn of cute girls. The faceless fat guys are just carriers for dicks. You're not supposed to be looking at them in detail.

>>18172081
I find it more pleasing when the girls are adored and pleased by men deserving of the cuteness instead of undisciplined, uncivilized lard-slobs, thank you very much.
Their cuteness and purity really shines through that way.

>>18162633
Is that the joker and Harley Quinn cosplaying?
I honestly do not remember what settings were used. I drew that sketch in October, then life and artblock hit me like a truck. Will try to get back into the groove and let you know the settings.

>>18171837
This joker is alright, you might make it

if you want him to blow up he has to fuck something or get fucked.

>>18172257
>>18172288
Heh naw. OCs, not much into the likes of Harley Quinn and I didn't take Jokes as a bodybuilder.
Also I got a pure love story in mind for him.

Also damn, it really has been quite some time, then.

Here's another sketch of the Dragon Loli.

A praise of the lewd feet I drew for the New Year, coupled with a request for more, a personal question about pairing Yuukarin with Yukarin in the most recent Yuuka thread on this board, a desire to practice lewd faces, and the fact that these two are both very lewd women in my Gensokyo have led to this pic.

>>18172176
>> Their cuteness and purity really shines through that way.
Those who like old/ugly men fucking pretty girls give exactly the same reasoning, bro.
Although I share your sentiments, the reason for using faceless men is that it is easier for the general folk to associate oneself with somebody who lacks distinctive features.
E.g., draw a stickman, and people will easily associate themselves with him in a comic like xkcd, but draw a detailed realistic face of an exceptionally handsome man, and the immersion/fapability on average will decrease. Now, a POV doujin will most likely get you a lot of fans.
Of course, there's no scientific basis to all of this; just idle thoughts coming from personal observations.

a smol celestial W.I.P.

I've choosen a bad pose but it's too late to change now.

Fix some bits here and there, I think the face should be more aligned now.
Added Yoshika's outline.

>>18174418
The right shoulder is too big. But it's overall it's good.

>>18174649
>navel cutout
fan fucking tastic

>>18174771
Sahweet

Mixed feelings about this

>>18174893
She's fat, but I like that

despite the pose being relaxed she looks stiff, It's good overall I would't beatyourself up too much over it.

>>18174771
breast are too perky she's still sitting up so apply gravity, great subject though.

>>18175120
Thanks for the feedback

The unbeaten master of single player mode.

What should be on the talisman?

>>18175591
尻
神
様

>>18174418
Never too late to change when digital, I say.
>>18174649
Ripped Yoshika is best Yoshika.
>>18174771
That's one damn fine Yukari. I like the breasts, even.
>>18174893
Excellent use of shading and lighting. My biggest complaint would be that her legs seem to be too thin in comparison to her rather thicc and shapely body. They could use a bit more volume.
The style itself reminds me a great deal of Houtengeki. So far, I like it. Looking forward to the finisehd pic.

A nee character. I should change up the poses, since draeing the same pose over and over, though quicker this way, makes me a dull boy.

>>18174771
Did you lift this off the author's stream or what?
https://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?mode=medium&illust_id=66698313

Close to done!

>>18175743
is something wrong with your 'e' and 'w' keys?

>>18176453
Your colors are good, please continue. Your poses and anatomy, however, are a bit strange and stiff. Otherwise well done overall, still.

>>18176425
your next line will be "you have his sai file don't you"

>>18133832
Not the person you're talking to but thanks for those links. One of those suggestions was really interesting for me. The one where it says we actually don't know the detail of most things, we can only recognize when it looks right so we need to actually study the details of things.

I tried to study Iori a lot differently than I used to look at characters. First time I actually used points to mark details as well as noting what kind of degree angles I used. I know it's just a flat piece but it actually looks a lot better than the stuff I could do before.

>>18180691
You have his sai file, don't you, Richard?
Well, color me surprised then.

>>18180992
Np, mate. But using rulers and exact measurements to draw qt girls will (likely) not lead you anywhere. I did this early on (although to draw myself), and the result was not exactly pleasing to look at, to put it mildly. Even when you are skilled enough to pull this off, the result may not look alive and natural.

>>18180691
You have his sai file, don't you, Mr. Butt?
Well, color me surprised then.

>>18180992
Np, mate. But using rulers and exact measurements to draw qt girls will (likely) not lead you anywhere. I did this early on (although to draw myself), and the result was not exactly pleasing to look at, to put it mildly. Even when you are skilled enough to pull this off, the result may not look alive and natural.

Doneeee!!!

Beta demo out. Enjoy!

https://png.itch.io/terra-feminarum-demo-v01

I will now draw 30 tanks as cute girls
wish me luck jaybee

>>18182977
Haven't played it too much, only did up to the red girl's first chapter but seems pretty good all things considered.

I realized I didn't have any art I like of the best shounen manga protagonist ever, Tendou Rushuna, so I color remixed a panel. It ended up looking very 光を…-ish.

I realized I didn't have any art I like of the best shounen manga protagonist ever, Tendou Rushuna, so I color remixed a panel. It ended up looking very 光を…-ish.

>>18185532
You've been visited by Cirno the Handsome.
Your luck and perseverance will increase by +9 stat points, but only if you write "Thanks, Cirno The Overlord!" in this thread.

>>18180992
I scrolled past this image like three or four times and I only realized it wasn't official art until until I saw the English. So, uh, yeah, good job. If it was colored she'd look better than she does in game.

The only things I can notice is that in the in the left image her arms appear to be short and her hands small. The human elbow extends to or just above the navel, hers appears to be well above that and it gives her arms a vaguely t-rexy appearance.
I also would put more focus into drawing your shoulders. Even in a relaxed position, the human shoulder is generally level with the collarbone. Try holding your shoulders down like Iori's are. Not very comfortable, is it? If you aren't already drawing the shoulder in your rough linework, you should consider starting, as that would help a lot.
And this is more of a suggestion, but most authors prefer to draw the clavicle, not the sternum, when adding detail to the chest. I can't really describe why in concrete terms, I guess it just looks cuter. You might want to give it a shot.
Seriously though, great fucking stuff. I know guys who would sell their left nipple to draw like this.

>>18181132
Gotcha. Yeah I remember reading that if you want things to look natural you're not supposed to do exact measurements. Just do quick fixes to make it look right. The more time you spend fixing the more hard and stiff it will look. I'm interested in doing measurements just to try and learn the relation between certain spots but yeah I won't make it a normal thing.

>>18186107
Thanks. I definitely need to learn how to do shoulders and I will try what you said. Thanks for the tips.

>>18182798
Looks great! The colors are amazing

>>18185880
Thanks! The demo has currently only one playable chapter but we will release two chapter demo before the full release. I'm glad you liked it!

hey /jp/, happy new year

Might be lewd,
Cuz why not.

>>18187591
MAGISTEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEER !

>>18187591
I didn't remember flat being so THICC.

I-i'm still not done with my work! I need to thank the anons who gave feedback!

>>18189026
You've been given feedback? Hey, that's cool. I wonder how it feels.

>>18182977
For whatever reason it keeps asking me for Java Runtime Environment even though I have it installed already. It's a shame because I really want to try it out

>>18189130
Can you please give me the detailed error message? I assume you are using .exe version of the game? That version comes with bundled Java Runtime Environment and it shouldn't need any additional installations. With the error message we should be able to find out what's wrong with that executable.

Meanwhile you can try to run .jar version of the game since you have jre installed on your system. Please note that the .jre version requires Java Runtime Environment 8 or later installed on your computer. Also please make sure that you don't have multiple JRE versions installed on your system.

Thanks for informing about the issue!

>>18189390
I tried running both .exe and .jar and got different error messages in each, see image. Also when I click OK or close the .exe one it takes me to Java's download page.

>>18189080
I hope it feels good.
Mfw been giving feedback everytime I post something and people reply by pointing out my typos

Would like to know if there’s anything glaringly off before I get to coloring

>>18192491
feet

Since i made this anyway, might as well post it here

>>18192577
Good but ゴゴゴ is meant for suspense, not punching.

>>18192491
>>18192512
specifically that the heels should probably be touching the ground for the particular squat you have. Toes off the ground squatting usually has the knees much lower to the ground and a more forward weight bias. Try it.

>>18192953
Thanks for clarifying that one-word critique. Does this look a tad better?

>>18193290
Not the person from before but it just feels like if she stood up she would have tiny dwarf legs. I'm not that good at drawing though so I can't point out how to fix it.

>>18193290
>>18193437
I guess I shall do it then, beofre the thread dies.

The issue with her legs requires a lot of fixing, but basically:
1) They are closer to the viewer (the only thing that's closer is her forearm and her hand), so they appear bigger than normal.
2) You can't really put your heels on the ground in this position. When you squat like that, you can only keep your heels touching the ground until the lower legs are vertical.
3) The angle is not exactly interesting though. It would be better if you lowered the camera further, put it right under her knees, and used three-point perspective. It's up to you, of course.

>>18194556
Nice work on that. Don't see a problem anymore.

>>18195420
Yeah, but the far foot still has to be fixed, as it can't possibly appear this small.