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Okay /jp/ I'm working on a little writing project about a yandere and have very little idea what I'm doing due to certain differences I am making to the formula. Therefore, I was hoping you all could help with your expertise on the subject.

Say a boy is yandere for a girl. This girl is a friend of his. Now say that this girl he's yandere for is a slut. Really sexy, kind of a tomboy, fun-loving in general, only sleeps with her male friends including him though.
What would he do?
Would he delude himself into thinking she's still pure and is only doing this to make others happy? Or simply accept she's kind of a dirty girl? Stuff like that.


I want to thank anybody in advance willing to answer.

>> No.11816282
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Yanderers are selfish so they wouldn't share. This is self explanatory.

>> No.11816288

>>11816267

it just means he'd kill everyone she bangs
possibly her too

thats the best part ofcourse

>> No.11816295

>>11816282
So what're his options. He has her happiness as his motivation so would he still go total slaughterhouse and kill all her friends?

>>11816288
There has to be some stages before the "kill everything" end doesn't there?

>> No.11816298

>>11816295
You're the writer you figure that out.

>> No.11816308

>>11816298
Mkay, just looking for other opinions and bits of advice first.

>> No.11816313

Everyone knows males can't be yandere because it's not cute when they do it.

>> No.11816315 [DELETED] 

>>11816313
Cuteness is all about looks.

>> No.11816319

I don't think you understand what a yandere is.

>> No.11816317

Boys are rapists and creeps, not yandere.

>> No.11816318
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>im writing a story guys write it for me sincerely - op

>> No.11816327

>>11816319
She (I'm assuming the writer is female because no guy is this oblivious) is probably confusing yandere with yangire.

>> No.11816334

>>11816318
I just want ideas, opinions, thoughts. I don't expect anyone to write it for me, but it's always good to hear the opinions of others.

>>11816319
For the most part I do, I just want to do something different, and thus a penny for your thoughts.

>>11816319
>>11816327
Yandere, someone who is in love with an object of their affection to an obsessive, unhealthy, and potential self destructive extreme.

>> No.11816342 [DELETED] 

>>11816334
i would kill my gf

>> No.11816364

>>11816342
I really don't doubt that. The problem is she's not dating him yet

>> No.11816367 [DELETED] 

>>11816364
i wanna kill my gf

>> No.11816372

>>11816364
He asks her out and then she says no so he frags her good with a knife to the stomach!

>> No.11816377 [DELETED] 

>>11816372
Humiliation!!!!!!

(call of duty reference)

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>>11816367
>>11816372
Is there really nothing to it other than "break out the knife?" Girls do tend to play hard-to-get.
He's yandere and wants her heart to himself, not angry and too autistic to play her flirting game.

>> No.11816395

i was in this situation once, but the girl was a prostitute. she gave up all that for me though and it worked out in the end. now she lets me wear her clothes and does lewd things to me while i sit around on the internet. true love. i detached physical relationships from emotional relationships so none of the slutting bothered me

>> No.11816397

>>11816385
You could have him manipulate her so she only spends time with him.
LIke, she is going to hang out with some male friends and he pretends to be sick and asks her to take care of him or he spreads rumors about her having std's so that no one else will fuck her. Or get her trouble with her parents so she's grounded and isolated at home

>> No.11816402 [DELETED] 

>>11816385
Will you be my gf?

>> No.11816424

Ruin their reputations (make them seem like abusive to other girls, if that fails move to something seriously stigmatized like setting them up to be caught with child porn). You don't need blood on your hands to be yandere, save the knife for when social combat fails.

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>>11816395
Legitimately not sure if true or not.
>>11816397
Makes sense, avoids unnecessary violence, and rumors can be blamed on other people. I like them.
>>11816402
Maybe, maybe not.

For the record I'm not saying "No knifing anyone ever!" but he's at least lucid enough to realize "I don't want to kill her."

>> No.11816430 [DELETED] 

>>11816426
Are you a cute girl? Are you yandere? Or are you the tomboy slut? Please respond.

>> No.11816433

>>11816397
Or gives her an STD, why risk it only being a rumor. Your matching genital sores will be a symbol of your unending connection with each other.

>> No.11816435

>>11816426
Who said knife her, knife the boys.

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>>11816430
I'm sorry, I can't lead you on anymore, anon. I can't ever be your girlfriend because I have a penis.

>>11816433
But they're both clean of those. He'd have to find a filthy girl to get those

>>11816435
Someanon said he should knife her. Knifing the other boys is probably an option, an emergency option, but an option none the less.

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>>11816443
Just when I thought I was finally going to lose my virginity...

>> No.11816446

>>11816385
>Girls do tend to play hard-to-get.
Isn't that the opposite with Yanderes? I'd think that they're the kind to -set you up- so that you will inevitably ask her out at some point.

>> No.11816455

>>11816446
This story is about a yandere guy, keep up anon.

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>>11816446
The girl is sane, slutty but sane. The guy is the yandere.
>>11816449
I'm sorry anon, had I been a girl I would've for you. Life is just unfair sometimes. Don't worry. there's a yandere, tomboy slut, or cute girl out there for you. All you have to do is find her.

>> No.11816462

whats with this normalfag setting?

>> No.11816470
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>>11816462
Explain please?

>> No.11816473

whats with all this anime spam and spoiler abuser

>> No.11816476 [DELETED] 
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Isn't op avatarfagging? That's against the rules it says right here ``13. Do not use avatars or attach signatures to your posts.''. Why are you blatantly ignoring it, jannyshit? Is this m00ts thread or something? Get to work, fagass.

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>>11816473
/jp/ - Story writing otaku

>> No.11816483
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>>11816473
>>11816476
The spoiler is for style?
The spam is because I literally cannot post without attaching a picture because the Quick Reply is reloading the last picture. If I don't change the picture it gives me the duplicate picture error.
Trying to work on it. Not trying to avatarfag, sorry.

>> No.11816488

>>11816483
This thread isn't otaku culture. Get lost.

>> No.11816487

>>11816483
Ctrl + F5

>> No.11816492

>>11816488
It's otaku culture according to the jannyshit.

>> No.11816496

>>11816487
Thank you
>>11816488
Deres of all kinds are otaku culture. Do you have anything to add to the scenario? All opinions are welcome

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>>11816496
>Deres of all kinds are otaku culture

>deres

wow FUCK off

>> No.11816557

>>11816501
You seem upset, is something wrong?

>> No.11816563
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>>11816557
i don't have a cute gf to take my frustration out on...

>> No.11816572

Another wunderb/a/r thread brought to you by subhum/a/n productions

>> No.11816575

>>11816563
You shouldn't take your frustration out on a qt girlfriend anon.
Though I understand your pain. No gf is really a sad life

>> No.11816644

>>11816267
Okay OP, the yandere archetype is appealing because it's a female character. There's no point in having a male yandere, he's just a controlling and abusive asshole. Maybe you could do a story like the one you described except replace the yandere MC guy with a lesbian yandere girl who lusts after the slutty main heroine girl. The MC could be one of the slutty girl's male friends. The slutty girl would be bisexual and also enjoy lesbian sex, but the yandere girl would want her all to herself. The MC would have sex with the main girl but also observe her interactions with the yandere girl from the sidelines, possibly getting involved in a three-way if he's lucky, but also having to watch out for his safety from yandere girl.

Slut-ko「ねぇMCくん、あたしとY子レズってるとこ、見たいでしょ?(笑)」
Yandere-ko「いやぁん…S子以外に…見られたくないですぅ…」

etc.

I think you could run with a setup like that.

>> No.11816696

>>11816644
>There's no point in having a male yandere, he's just a controlling and abusive asshole.
It depends on how you pull it off. Archdeacon Frollo is a male yandere and he's still an appealing character.

>> No.11816746

>>11816696
I tend to agree with >>11816644. If you want to cater to /jp/ the yandere HAS to be female.

>> No.11816761

>>11816746
No offense but from what I've seen everything would appeal to /jp/ better if it was female.

>>11816644
See above, but that's quite an idea.

>>11816696
Yeah, there are a few male yanderes around, though they're always either the villain or the male lead of a women's romance book.

>> No.11816793

>>11816761
If you want to keep the slutty main heroine and MC who doesn't want her to be a slut thing going, you could also just make it an NTR story. MC gets with main heroine, believing she's a virgin and that he is her first, that they'll be pure lovers forever and whatnot. Maybe MC is an otaku who hates sluts or something. After he's gotten pretty attached to the main girl, he starts to realize that she's playing around on the side... standard NTR antics ensue. The joy and sexual pleasure comes from watching MC-kun crack as he realizes that the qt3.14 gf he finally got after all these years is actually a wild slut who sleeps with his friends, affirming the misogynistic world view he'd been harboring until he met her and finally started to change... and also providing undeniably hot fap material as he spies on main heroine's activities and fantasies about busting in and whisking her away, while simultaneously being unable to stop himself from fapping to her promiscuity.

>> No.11816801

>>11816793
I'm almost positive that the knife would be coming out had she actually been dating him when she cheated.
He's fully aware she's not exactly a virgin, since she's slept with him and a few other guys.

On another note, NTR makes me laugh, like legitimately cannot take this serious laughing.

The rest of the setting makes chances of him being an otaku is pretty much impossible.

>> No.11820366

>>11816644
Hate to revive a dead thread but...what does the Japanese in this post say?

>> No.11824800

>>11816267
Damn, Yuno's thighs are delicious.

>> No.11824940

>>11824800
Yes, yes they are.
Hello, do you have anything to add to the discussion?

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>>11824940

>> No.11825474

>>11820366
It says like
Slut-ko: "Hey MC-kun, you want to watch me and Y-ko getting it on, don't you? (laugh)"
Yandere-ko: "Ew... I don't want anyone but S-ko watching me..."

>> No.11826280

>>11825474
Ah, I see, thank you.

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