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General original content/drawthread for /jp/sies. You may use this thread to contribute your works or to share ideas related to possible projects. Anything OC is welcomed; including drawings, writings, music, and programming.

Previous thread: >>10533190

>> No.10600374

Anyone know some good practice material besides Loomis?(I'm reading all of that now)

A website is fine too.

>> No.10600384

>>10600374
Go look up pictures of naked people and draw them.

>> No.10600389
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10600389

I photoshop cum and edit cute 2hu images. It started as a playful past time but escalated into something more malicious...

>> No.10600391

>>10600384
I know I should do that but it kinda makes me uncomfortable to see nudity and I feel dirty.

>> No.10600398

>>10600391
Then look up pictures of people in tiny swimsuits.

>> No.10600402

>>10600389
Could you make a tutorial or explain how you do this?

>> No.10600405
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10600405

A little work in progress, did a rough sketch and a quick value thumb. Working on too many things so I won't finish this anytime soon. Still going about efficient ways to produce an artwork.

>> No.10600408

>>10600402
sure, give me a little while.

>> No.10600410

I want to make a 2hu roguelike but I don't have any ideas.

Does any creative person want to help me? I will do the programming.

>> No.10600424
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10600424

Bad scan, but might redo as painting.

>> No.10600426

>>10600424
If you are who I think you are you are really improving!

I feel bad that I have been drawing for years and still barely understand value.

>> No.10600429

>>10600426
Thanks, that means a lot. I'll keep giving it my all.

>> No.10600434
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10600434

Remember the Request Writefag thread from yesterday ?
Yeah that was me.
I ditched it. Writing a story from about 600-700 words and not beeing able to save it sucks hard. Dismotivation 'n such stuff.

Maybe I get to it someday. I still need to finish the Rumia story and another fanfic I've been planning.

>> No.10600435
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10600435

alternative version of marisa

>> No.10600460

>>10600434
Out of curiosity, what's the advantage of writing a fanatic over writing the exact same story with only original characters, even if they have the same powers?

>> No.10600466

>>10600460
I have no idea.
I don't use original characters except normal humans without any powers.

Is it a fanfic without original characters ? I don't fucking know man.

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>> No.10600479

>>10600466
Well I guess if it was still in gensokyo, it would still be a fanfic, but what I meant was more "why do fanfic authors write stories about established worlds and characters when they could write the same story about their own world and characters"

I mean well I guess I can understand if you want porn about a specific character, but other than porn and outright parody I don't really get it.

>> No.10600480

>>10600460
because no one's gonna read your story with original characters
but if you put sonic in there, some autist is gonna read it

>> No.10600488

>>10600480
So it's a matter of gaining attention?

Well makes sense, it's probably why people put touhou all over their shitty fangames.
Sort of feels like you're cheating yourself on creativity though. You could be becoming the next Touhou or Sonic instead.

>> No.10600489
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10600489

>>10600479
Maybe because you like a special character ? Not for the porn aspect.

I like to think of what all the 2hus do in their free time. What kind of casual clothes they wear outside their "uniforms" if might call them so.
What they do besides praying, danmaku and wild lewd double penis futanari sex.

For an example, I see Keine always as a highly respected women in the human village, yet again no man really wants her due the fact she's a half-beast. That leaves her in a state why she get really clingy to the few people who stay in contact with her. Okay this has some porn aspect, but also brings stuff for a nice romantic story.

>> No.10600535

>>10600489
I like to see the different takes people have on things. Varying interpretations and re-imaginings, and unknown things and minor details that didn't warrant much attention in the original story. When I particularly like something, I'm not always content to let it go just because there isn't more official work coming out.

>> No.10600540

>>10600489
You can draw a fish, but you can't tuna filesystem.

>> No.10600551

>>10600540
Cudder I swear to God I will hunt you down and slowly skin you and devour your flesh while you are still conscious.

>> No.10600560
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10600560

>>10600540
lel

>> No.10600572

>>10600540
I don't get it. Please explain.

>> No.10600788

Faggy bump. Let's hear more from the rest of /jp/?

>> No.10600794

>>10598732
hey, where did you get this cool starter images?

>> No.10600826

https://soundcloud.com/iluvop
I havent posted in these OC threads for a while so there should be some new awful crap on soundcloud.

>> No.10600834 [DELETED] 

>>10600389
>>10600402

A cum edit tutorial. You'll need photoshop or other similar software. Still improving on technique.

>> No.10600837
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10600837

>>10600389
>>10600402

Here's my cum edit tutorial, only on /jp/. You'll need photoshop or other similar software. Still improving on technique.

>> No.10600845

https://soundcloud.com/djcrinkles/dreaming-again

Just a chill beat

>> No.10600855

Are these threads archived? If so, where?
Yes, there is foolz but they don't archive pictures.

>> No.10600859 [SPOILER] 
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10600859

>>10600837
I also make heartless edits.

>> No.10600861

>>10600837

holy fuck mags spoil that shit

fucking lewd

>> No.10600863

>>10600855
Curious to know too.

>> No.10600867

>>10600855
>Yes, there is foolz but they don't archive pictures.

You are a literal retard. Fuuka doesn't archive images, Foolz does. Not forever but you should have them if you want them.

>> No.10600874

>>10600867
>Not forever
That means it's not archived.

>> No.10600878

>>10600837
Fuck you man.
Now I'm going to spend all my time doing this instead of drawing.

>> No.10600885

>>10600878
why not draw and do the cum edit on your drawing?

>> No.10600890

>>10600826
>>10600845
Nice to see some music~

>> No.10600914

>>10600874
That means you should save the fucking pictures and not depend on the internet to do it for you.

>> No.10600921

>>10600874
and on this day Anonymous declared there is no such thing as an archive.

>> No.10600940

>>10600837
*whips out dick*
Where can I get the final image?

>> No.10600952

>>10600940
crop it our of the image you shit

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>>10600940
here you go.

>> No.10601019
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10601019

>>10600845
very chilling, liked it.

I drew this a few weeks ago, sadly I don't have much time to draw these days..

>> No.10601063

>>10600890
Don't you mean "hear"?

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10601069

>>10601063
I'm sorry I can't "hear" music.

>> No.10601076

>>10600389
>>10600837
>>10600961
You should consider making a tumblr for all your edits. Please post the link here if you do.

>> No.10601373 [DELETED] 

>>10601076
that's a good idea,
http://cumbumpmusume.tumblr.com/

>> No.10601409

What does /jp/ thinks about firealpaca? Is like the spiritual succersor of Sai

+Set up vanishing points
+Gausian blur
+Gradient tool
+Faster than Sai in rendering and startup time
+Still getting updates
+More selection shapes
+Free
-No brush textures yet
-Can't create new brushes
-Can't assign keys
-No vector tools ye

>> No.10601461

>>10601069
>I'm deaf

I'm not

>> No.10601516

>>10600867
>Fuuka doesn't archive images, Foolz does.
lies. warosu archives them too since a while ago.

>> No.10601527

>>10600859
can you also add a regular cum without bruises version?

i wanna see her as a horny bitch who acts on her own slutty desires, not some rape victim.

>> No.10601602

>>10600837
That was very informative and educational, Anon, thank you...

>>10600389
...but I still hate you so fucking much.

>>10600855
It does for some boards. /jp/ is among them, as is /a/. You must have only used it for ones that are not, like /v/ or /vg/.

>>10600921
It just occured to me that you believe that "forever" means "from the beginning". Only it doesn't and people reading your post thought you meant to say, well, "forever".

>> No.10601613

>>10601069
I'm blind, not deaf.

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>>10600837
interesting tutorial. i tried doing something with it myself, but i don't think it came out that great.

guess i need more practice at drawing cum.

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10601638

>>10600837
Why is this image deleted? Re-posting the tutorial.

>> No.10601647

>>10601632
>>10601638
do you guys actually think anything looks better with cum on it, or are you just doing it because you have nothing better to do? im only curious because, in my opinion, ruining pictures and reposting them is a waste of time (not that i care how people waste their time).

>> No.10601654

>>10601647
it makes them better to fap to for me.

especially with the girl on >>10601632, she gives me a huge hard on, but the guy who draws her never did anything more sexual than that with her.

which is weird, cause otherwise he draws a whole lot of porn.

i guess having a 'cum on girls' face/body' thing/fetish helps.

>> No.10601667

>>10601638
Because it's not safe for work dumpass

>> No.10601674

>>10601654
oh ok. i guess i don't have that thing. im the kind of person that always wonders why some artists destroy their own work. see:
http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=list&tags=saberfish

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10601689

>>10601674
saberfish's 10 desires

>> No.10601697

>>10601689
you wrote pussy twice

>> No.10601702

>>10601697
One is in, one is on.

>>10601689
Gaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay.

>> No.10601715

>>10600374
look up that guy called matt on youtube.

>> No.10601764

>>10601674
He isn't destroying his work. He's molding it into his idea of perfection.

>> No.10601772

https://soundcloud.com/loli-grinder

>> No.10601775

>>10601647
>>10601674

I personally love semen jizzled all over my 2D's face.

>> No.10601780

>>10601775
when it also goes all over her hair, it's even better.

>> No.10602281

Wow, so now our OC is reduced to adding cum to already existing pictures?

I rather look at bad, amateur shit than people posting that kind of "OC".

>> No.10602314
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10602314

My WIP. This picture is mostly done but my scanner knocked out all the detail. Well my last steps are finishing the road and adding darks so it'll read better in the end.

>> No.10602327

>>10602281
In thread #105 I'm going to take pictures of myself unboxing something I bought. It's going to be epic.

>> No.10602398

>>10600488
It depends. Sometimes it's a matter of genuinely respecting a work and wanting to make some sort of tribute to it.
Even Touhou has some references to JoJo's.

>> No.10602423

>>10602314
cute ! I like the outfit and how you made the tree

>> No.10602458
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10602458

hey oc thread are there any good guides on how to make pixel art and sprites?

>> No.10602464

>>10602458
I'm wondering something similar, save for how to make short animated sprites.

>> No.10602471
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10602471

>>10602464
I don't know how people encapsulate animation in (small) sprites. It's not like ordinary drawing, because you have to exaggerate things so it's clear what's going on.

Pic related: one of the original Lemmings sprites. 8x8, 3 colors, and it's a walk cycle with personality. That shit's art.

>> No.10602485

>>10602471
10x10, even. The original sprite was 8x8 but it was shit.

>> No.10602486

I'll take on a drawing request if anyone has any. Please include a reference!

>> No.10602490

>>10602458
>>10602464
Deviantart is a very good place to look for drawing tutorials.

>> No.10602491
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>>10602314
Also just finished painting these sketches with my mouse. They were done within an hour. My tablet broke so this is the best I can do.

I need to practice with a mouse more. Even more so since it's good for pixel art.

>> No.10602496

>>10602486
Draw EVERYTHING

>> No.10602498
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10602498

>>10602486
Kasen pls

>> No.10602502

>>10602498
Alright! I'll see what I can do

>> No.10602518
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10602518

>>10602502
Neat, thanks!

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10602581

Just a horrible drawing to test my new screen.

Does it look distorted?

>> No.10602610

>>10602581
Cute image dude.

>> No.10602636

>>10602581
No

>> No.10602654
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>> No.10602662

>>10602654
...the guy from yugioh second series?
pretty nice, btw

>> No.10602667

>>10602654
Not draw Judith or Sheena.

>> No.10602676 [DELETED] 

>>10602654
She's from Tales of Vesperia. And thanks.

>> No.10602680

>>10602662
She's from Tales of Vesperia. And thanks.

>> No.10602682

>>10602518
Here you go!
I'm sorry for the sloppy everything.

>> No.10602688
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10602688

>>10602682
forgot my picture

>> No.10602691

>>10602682
that's pretty sloppy

>> No.10602695

>>10602688
Wow, that's really nice!

>> No.10602698

>>10602688
Not the requestee but that's pretty neat. The fact that it's hard to tell which leg is which is my only grip with it.

>> No.10602711

>>10602691
I agree
>>10602695
Thank you!
>>10602698
Thanks, feet and legs in general have always been my weak point. I think there's something funny going on with the arms also. Oh well.

I guess I'm ready for a new request, if anyone has any.

>> No.10602713

>>10602711
Are you okay with Original characters donut steel?

>> No.10602714

>>10602662
nope, Rita Mordio from Tales of vesperia

>> No.10602718

>>10602713
Yes as long as you have a good reference

>> No.10602720
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10602720

>>10602718
Alrighty, how's this? Always open to fanart of her.

>> No.10602724

>>10602720
Ahh she's cute! I'll give it a try. Did you draw that yourself also? It's really neat

>> No.10602729
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10602729

>>10602724
I didn't unfortunately, my own drawings are pretty crappy in comparison, but it was from a friend. But thank you!

>> No.10602730
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10602730

>>10602720

>> No.10602741

Whatever happened to that /jp/ game? truproject or something?

>> No.10602742

>>10602730
Remilnya.

>> No.10602762

>>10602720
Wait a second, isn't that a thing related to that /a/ drawthreads tripfags irc club or something?
smells fishy to me

>> No.10602772

>>10602741
/jp/ milk tea?

>> No.10602768

>>10602762
Nice try.

>> No.10602770

>>10602762
Sounds like you eat up everything /a/ tells you.

Mimibro's been a /jp/er since the instatement of the board.

>> No.10602775

>>10602730
Heh, good times...

>> No.10602776

>>10602772

I think he said on his twitter that he put that game on hiatus.

>> No.10602777

>>10602772

No, I don't think so. There was another one that was only in the planning stages a while ago, unless it's called milk tea now?

I don't know. What's milk tea?

>> No.10602779

>>10602777
The reboot of /jp/ mansion?

>> No.10602781

>>10602770
>>10602768
I'm just vaguely recollecting something about it, its not that I'm purposedly hiding some meaning.
if its a genuine reqest, nevermind my post

>> No.10602783

>>10602781
It is a genuine request. I wouldn't make them any other way.

>> No.10602785

>>10602688
Aw gee, that really made my (otherwise pretty bland I guess) day. Thanks again, guy! You're the coolest.

>> No.10602788

>>10602779
Oh no, that's definitely not what I'm talking about.
There was a little gang getting together from /jp/ to make an RPG game or something, but I guess it flopped out since I haven't seen a single thing about it.

>> No.10602790
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>>10598732

>> No.10602791

>>10602779
>>10602777
http://witchfutari.tumblr.com/
this one guy? or the drawfag that did a kickstarter for his vn?

>> No.10602795

>>10602788
Oh, I remember what you mean, I think. There was a huge thread on it, right? I haven't heard word of it since then.

>> No.10602797
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>>10602791


palette of my dos game

>> No.10602805

>>10602795

Yeah, the thread began as some crossboarder like "look what my board did, why doesn't /jp/ ever do anything?" and so a bunch of people decided to do something, I think.

Haven't heard a thing since either.

>> No.10602812

>>10602805
It's unfortunate. I love when people start original content like that. Though, it seems that rather often here, or on most other boards that started projects never finish.

The newest big one is /vp/'s Pokemon game, and it seems like that one may pull through considering the amount of work they're putting into it.

>> No.10602816

Hey, drawfags colleagues, why don't we partecipate in one of those pixeev contests?

>> No.10602821

>>10602816
Not skilled enough, sadly. Working on getting better so that I can join one someday!

>> No.10602830 [SPOILER] 
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10602830

I was wondering what tan lines would look like on a character that wore garter-belts

>> No.10602834

>>10602830
Tan lines are hot.

>> No.10602838

>>10602834
I also share your opinion.

>> No.10602841

>>10602834
Actually, tan lines are the bits that weren't hot!

I'll show myself out.

>> No.10602845

>>10602841
I'll give that one a 5/10.

>> No.10602851

>>10602841
I chuckled
...I'm behind you.

>> No.10602932
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10602932

>>10602720
Here you go!

I'm open for another request

>> No.10602943

>>10602932
Really cute, dude.

>> No.10602946

>>10602932
O-oh my, that's rather cute! Thank you!

>> No.10602954
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10602954

>>10602932
You're doing fanarts? Do you mind drawing this girl? The middle outfit would be really cool. I understand if you can't or don't want to.

>> No.10602960

>>10602954
Those breasts look like they're about to take off.

>> No.10602962

>>10602954
Fuck off, Magister. No one wants to see your terrible titty monsters.

>> No.10602963

>>10602954
What a disgusting character design.

>> No.10602964

>>10602960
They look ripe for the groping. Himari's tits are cute.

>> No.10602967

>>10602954
Ew.

>> No.10602969

>>10602943
>>10602946
Thank you! I'm glad you like it
>>10602954
I'll give it a go

>> No.10602977

>>10602954
I know that people are into different fetishes and preferences, but this is just absolutely horrid.
It's not remotely tasteful.

>> No.10602983

>>10602977
I'd hug her forever.

>> No.10602998

>>10602977
nah you like it and you know it :3

>> No.10603014

>>10602977
I think Himari is cute but the way Magister draws her makes her seem slutty.

If someone more talented (not to say Magister isn't talented) drew her I think she would be very pretty.

>> No.10603048

>>10603014
Request artist here, I agree. I think she has a very nice design, with the butterfly in her hair and everything

>> No.10603052
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10603052

something i'm working on, dunno what'll come out of it

>> No.10603058

Please stop samefagging guys.
seriously.

>> No.10603080

>>10603052
Well, go on and we'll see togheter. seems promising
check right knee to foot distance

>> No.10603093

>>10603080
was trying to have him sitting on his side with is right leg closer to the viewer.

...too much?

>> No.10603100

>>10603052
Weapons with holes in them are retarded also that spear is insanely blade-heavy it'd have to be used more like a mace also what is someone with zips doing with such an archaic weapon
Looks good though.

>> No.10603104

>>10603100
Those aren't even valid points save for the blade heavy bit.

>> No.10603126

>>10603100
I agree it's kind of blade heavy but if we start arguing about size of weapon vs realistic use...well then whats the point of anime i don't even

>> No.10603151

>>10603080
>>10603100
Why the heck are you spoiling that?

>> No.10603165

>>10603151
because it's a SURPRISE!

>> No.10603174

>>10600374
What's Loomis?

>> No.10603184

>>10603174
http://puu.sh/2bTB4

>> No.10603205

>>10603174
A crummy town between Auburn and Sacramento

>> No.10603329
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10603329

>>10602954
Here you go. sorry for the wait

I guess I'm up for another request

>> No.10603342

>>10603329
Oh my, that's awesome, thank you very much! I'd really like to return the favor, do you have a request yourself you'd like me to draw?

>> No.10603364
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>>10603342
I'm glad you like it.
That is awfully nice of you! If you don't mind, would you like to draw Madoka for me?

>> No.10603370

Candid upskirts of loli touhous are hot.

>> No.10603389
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>>10603329
If that request is still open, might you a Riesbyfe, please?

>> No.10603483

>>10600410
Please respond.

>> No.10603912
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>> No.10603920

>>10603912
Cute sketch. Looks lewd on that broom.

>> No.10603941 [DELETED] 

>>10603855,2
Sure, I could give it a try. But I'm still pretty broken and /jp/ has changed so it will probably turn ugly. Plus writing is the lowest of OC contributions, and it always will be.

>> No.10603959

>>10603920
Thanks. It didn't even occur to me that the broom made it look pretty lewd.

>> No.10603964

>>10603959
Have a blog or anything like that? Your art looks familiar so I'm sure you've posted here before.

>> No.10603992

>>10603964
dA in e-mail field. Sorry it's dA, but it's the only site I upload to. I post here every once in a while

>> No.10604001

>>10603992
Oh, that's why you look familiar. I've already followed you on dA. Sorry.

>> No.10604025

Where do you guys learn? ;_;

>> No.10604200

>>10603912
I love your lines and you draw amazingly well, you're art is pretty much just very pleasing to the eye, but it's also kind of bland overall, I don't know how to make it more constructive, I'm sorry. It is amazing either ways

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>> No.10604339
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>>10603329
Can you draw her please?

>> No.10604360

>>10601772

I like it.

>> No.10604372

>>10603992
>SiG keeping on using people to draw his OC
hue

>> No.10604376
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>> No.10604377

>>10604376
Those hips are really cute. Could use some more line definition though.

>> No.10604396

>>10604377
I'm still trying to practice said definition, but it never manages to come out nice. I'll try to color it anyway for a later post. And I appreciate the hips comment!

>> No.10604397

>>10603992
I'd just like to say, thanks for taking on my request!

>> No.10604455
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I finally finished this. Well that light line still needs some corrections but thats about it i was struggling with colors and nature this time.

>> No.10604463
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Practicing body anatomy

Not good at dynamic poses so I am just doing still stuff now.

>> No.10604482
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>>10604463
Also trying value but I don't think i'm good at it.

>> No.10604494
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10604494

>>10603364
Here you go, thanks again for drawing her!

>> No.10604499

>>10604494
That hair makes me cum buckets man! And dem lips. Fuck. Nice one.

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>>10604455
Also started a demon souls one. How dose the body look? anything bothering you? i tried to put some foreshortening this time to give a bit more depth but i am not sure if its done properly.

>> No.10604530

>>10604494
Magister you have the special ability to make anything you draw seem slutty

>> No.10604537

>>10604530
Modoka just wants the cock of all homusexuals, it's natural for her to be this way.

>> No.10604557
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10604557

>>10604339
Here you go.

>>10603389
I'll see if I can do your request now, sorry

>> No.10604558 [SPOILER] 
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10604558

>>10604331
Slight anatomy corrections

>> No.10604563

>>10604494
Oh my god you put so much detail into it! It makes me feel kind of bad for just scribbling your request fast haha.
Thank you very much anon! Your Madoka looks absolutely stunning

>> No.10604561

>>10604557
Oh this is lovely! Thank you drawbro!
Can I draw you anything?

>> No.10604572

>>10604455
Her body looks very broad, or maybe her head/face looks a bit small in comparison.

>> No.10604566

>>10604557
Aww man, I wish I had an OC. I can never make one I like. Anyway, nice drawings so far drawbro.

>> No.10604580

>>10604561
You're very welcome!
I can never get enough of Madoka, but only do it if you feel like it, I had enough fun drawing your request.
>>10604566
Thank you!

>> No.10604581

>>10604580
Aww thanks. I'll get to your Madoka!

>>10604566
Hmm, what do you look for in a character? Perhaps I could help...

>> No.10604584

how are you so good at drawing? is it many years of practice? if so how many? how did you get started? take lessons? also, can you take me under your wing?

you know who you are, request taking anon sama-senpai.

>> No.10604598

>>10604581
I honestly don't know. I'm more into the appealing design than any kind of story, I like all kinds of body types other than the lolis(they're cute but I don't wouldn't want a loli OC), and same with hair I like all types.

I really enjoy drawing other people's characters but I just can't come up with one I like myself.

>> No.10604596

>>10604584
If you study the basics you could actually reach their level in about a year since most people who post here are very basic (no offense).

Most people who don't improve even after years of drawing are usually stuck with bad habits that are hard to overcome.

>> No.10604612

>>10604584
I've never really studied anything which probably is very noticeable since I'm not very good at anatomy or proportions. I've just kind of drawn what I felt like for some years.
If you want to learn how to draw I'd advice you to study properly. Like this anon says >>10604596 You could go very far very fast just by studying constructively, and starting out with anime leaves you with a lot of bad habits.
/ic/ has a good sticky if you're interested.

>> No.10604634

>>10604612
This just don't talk to them unless you want to show off work or need help most of them are assholes.

>> No.10604672

>>10600410
Is anyone interested? I really want to make one but I can't on my own. I just need someone to tell me what to do.

>> No.10604755

>>10604598
>>10604581
>>10604566
What is an "OC" exactly? What makes a character an "OC" and not just a drawing? What are they used for?

I ask this because, although I never finish anything, I constantly come up with comic ideas and have like about 100 different characters I've drawn. Are they "OCs" or is it something else? Is it something you only have one of?

>> No.10604757

>>10604596
>>10604598
>>10604612
thank you, you are all too kind.

i-i hope we can become...friends one day..

>> No.10604760

>>10604598
diregard you

i meant >>10604634 since i dont even know you.

>> No.10604759

>>10604672
Make a roguelike engine and allow people to easily add things to the game. It'll come together after that. Make the general game about trying to climb youkai mountain.

>> No.10604770

>>10604755
"Original Content" and sometimes "Original character". It's basically self-explanatory and can apply to all sorts of media, and not just drawing.

>> No.10604775

>>10604755
An original character is something that one creates, be it via writing or drawing. A character they give life to and use, with backstory, a family, experiences, friends, and all that sort of garble that makes a person well...a person.

Most people who actively create original characters use them for something. Like a story, a comic, or something along those lines, rather than leaving them as some stagnant entity with nothing to them at all. It's just a fun outlet for folks to create something of their very own.

>> No.10604800

>>10604775
So all the touhou girls are ZUN's OCs? and all the Jedi are George Lucas's OCs? and all my comic characters are my OCs?

It's just I normally hear that term in conjunction with my sister's fan fiction site and deviantart that she reads. I wasn't sure if it had to be some mary sue insert character or idealized drawn representation of yourself to be considered an OC.

>> No.10604804

>>10604775
>Most people who actively create original characters use them for something.

You say that, but DeviantART.

>> No.10604805

>>10604800
Yes, those are all OCs. It means exactly what it stands for--an original character. Nobody said they had to be good, hence why it is attributed negatively to fanfictions and dA in general.

>> No.10604806

>>10604800
Yes.

OCs are frequently associated with horrible self-insert mary sues because the children who insert OCs into their fanfiction tend to make them exactly that, but no, it's very much not required that they be that way.

>> No.10604809

>>10604806
>OCs are frequently associated with horrible self-insert mary sues because the children who insert OCs into their fanfiction tend to make them exactly that, but no, it's very much not required that they be that way.

This. So much this. People fail to understand that every character every created is someone's original character, and always associate it with the dA tier fanfiction scenarios those types come up with.

>> No.10604807
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>>10604800
>So all the touhou girls are ZUN's OCs? and all the Jedi are George Lucas's OCs? and all my comic characters are my OCs?

Pretty much.

>I wasn't sure if it had to be some mary sue insert character or idealized drawn representation of yourself to be considered an OC.

People use the term sarcastically a lot. ORIGINAL CHARACTER DO NOT STEAL.

>> No.10604814

Did you ever have a character that you came up with years ago but have learned how to create even more characters with more interesting and unique stories that they muddle in? Yet you never forget that character that you liked so much for so long despite him or her being a little cliche at times.

>> No.10604819

>>10604814
Nope. Those same characters from my middle school days are still around, I've only taken them and reformed them from how they used to be into entirely better characters. I make an effort to never forget, or give up on a character concept I create.

>> No.10604830
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>>10604814
You mean like having a group of decent characters but with your self-insert among them?

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>>10604814
I used to daydream of myself beeing born as some characters kid, and beeing fully grown within minutes.

I was a weird kid.

>> No.10604835

>>10604809
Issue is too many CREATE characters. Your character should evolve from the story. The post above is a good example of too much thought. >>10604807

Only things I ever know about my characters is a rough idea of personality. Or that I need X people or people to slot into outlined personalities. 1 ponce(m/f?) 1 introvert (female) etc.
Maybe it is not the right way but it is what I do. I just irk and twitch remembering going to early cons and having to listen to some cave troll waffle on about his comic about gi-joe and starwars and all his cool characters he made up but has no story for.

>> No.10604837

>>10604830
Sort of, although he or she doesn't necessarily need to be your self insert, the character that fits my little triade is a girl who is nothing like me at all.

>> No.10604838

>>10604830
Can someone make him look more chinese, please

>> No.10604839

>>10604835
>Your character should evolve from the story. The post above is a good example of too much thought

That doesn't even make sense. The story is also your creation. These aspects generally are what is achieved during the plot itself alone.

>> No.10604844

>>10604819
This basically. Also my older characters are probably better designed than my newer ones, since I've fallen to moe and tend to design characters as "harsh girl with a ponytail and downward curving eyes who wears wa-lolita clothes" instead of "badass space pirate girl who works part time as an assassin and comes from a race of wolf people who can solidify their chi into energy weapons" and then designing their look from there. I just kinda design characters and toss them in a role nowadays.

>> No.10604875

>>10603184
I've wanted to read all this especially drawing the head, but how can I apply these in drawing aneemay faces? I don't want to draw 3dpd

>> No.10604889
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>>10604875
knowing the foundation will help you understand what you're stylizing

>> No.10604895

>>10604875
anime faces are distortions of the human head. The eyes nose and mouth still go in the same places and the head & facial features are still 3d, not a sphere with a flat face put on it, even if Japanese really do have flat, mask like faces.

>> No.10604900

>>10604889

THAT'S RIGHT

LOOMIS 1st

then you can say "my style" ( but only if it's not shit )

>> No.10605163

A little work in progress. There's a certain type of stylisation I'm aiming for. Still developing it.

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>>10605163
forgot image, fuck.

>> No.10605281

>>10605165
I remember you from...uh...
somewhere

>> No.10605295

>>10605281
oh god please don't remember, it's embarrassing ;_;

>> No.10605481 [SPOILER]  [DELETED] 
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10605481

hey magister, would you suck?
y/n

>> No.10605484

>>10604558
Why is the image hidden? What the fuck is this, people are spoiling for no reason.

>> No.10605501 [SPOILER]  [DELETED] 
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10605501

hey magister, would you?

y/n

>> No.10605557 [SPOILER]  [DELETED] 
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10605557

fuck you meido, stop deleting this. you're supposed to delete porn spam, not original art.

i'll repost a censored version with a link to uncensored one, that isn't aganst any rules.

so, magister: would you?
y/n

uncensored version here: http://i.imgur.com/LUr9WXa.png

you can also uncensor it manually with gmask's FL mask.

>> No.10605609 [DELETED] 

>>10605557
Meido left, it's janitor-kun now.

>> No.10605614 [DELETED] 

>>10605609
translation note: meido means janitor in /jp/nese.

>> No.10605650

>>10600374


figure drawing practices
http://artists.pixelovely.com/practice-tools/figure-drawing/

>> No.10605712 [DELETED] 

>>10605557
oh come the fuck on, what now? it was censored and worksafe.

oh well, fuck this. if magister's around, he should still have the thread open, so 4chan x or 4chan's extension probably saved the post and picture.

otherwise he can just check the archived one.
http://0-media-cdn.foolz.us/ffuuka/board/jp/image/1363/18/1363187560581.png

>> No.10605728 [DELETED] 

>>10605712
I think NSFW rules apply. Linking should be fine.

>> No.10605735 [DELETED] 

>>10605728
In that case the janitor should just delete the image.

That sticky said it's fine to link to NSFW content. I guess it's also a good idea to say it's NSFW.

>> No.10605740 [DELETED] 

>>10605712
I agree deleting the completely censored image was an asshole's act. There's no harm in linking to the /i/'s nsfw thread or imagehosting sites.

>> No.10605743 [DELETED] 

>>10605728
it was censored, so it wasn't nsfw.

/jp/ should have a "no 3d/booru porn dumps, but ocassional/oc is allowed" rule, not a "this is an amish settlement, porn will have you expelled".

>> No.10605754 [DELETED] 

>>10605743
People tend to take advantage and abuse privileges. Links to nsfw images are fine, but posting is not. Neither is spoilering porn images allowed.

Was the artist banned or was it just deleted?

>> No.10605764 [DELETED] 

>>10605743
>it was censored, so it wasn't nsfw.

Spoilers and mosaics apparently aren't allowed, so I guess covering up areas of the image isn't either. I don't know.

Janitors generally allow nude art in these threads, but I guess we have a new janitor or something.

Frankly I'm very glad /jp/ is a SFW board, but I think posting NSFW original content ITT should be fine.


Also there's a good chance we're all be trolled.

>> No.10605775 [DELETED] 

>>10605764
Looking at the archive it seems that maybe the censored post was deleted because of the "fuck you janitor" in it and not necessarily because of the picture itself.

>> No.10605777 [DELETED] 

>>10605712
>>10605743
>>10605735
>fuck you meido, stop deleting this. you're supposed to delete porn spam, not original art.

This certainly isn't why your post was deleted.
complain about the moderation on >>>/q/ and quit posting obviously rulebreaking content and being mad when it's removed.

>> No.10605778 [DELETED] 

>>10605775
Well let's test this:

Janitor, you're a cuntnugget.

Now we'll see how this plays out.

>> No.10605779 [DELETED] 

>>10605775
deleting posts because your pride's hurt is against the rules they have to follow though.

>> No.10605789 [DELETED] 

>>10605778
An insult isn't the same as the post in the deleted post. From what I've seen, the staff can handle being insulted. But an openly defiant "fuck you I'm gonna post what I want and you can't stop me" is different.

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10605795

>>10605789
Okay, how about this:

I'm posting NON-original content in the original content thread, and you can't do a darn thing about it, janitor!

Let's see how this goes.

>> No.10605800 [DELETED] 

>>10605795
Can you do that elsewhere? If this thread degenerates into "let's challenge the janitor", then the whole thread risks deletion.

>> No.10605809 [DELETED] 

>>10605795
But that's Mags' fanart, it's original content.

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>>10605809
But it's old and stale, and I'm not even the creator. I wouldn't say it's original content (obviously all content was original content once).

Have some classic Dan Kim.

>> No.10605832 [DELETED] 

>>10605818
>>10605795
can you please go sperg out somewhere else?

>> No.10605992 [DELETED] 

That one post had multiple reasons to be deleted by the way. I, for one, am glad seeing roots of circlejerking being destroyed.

>> No.10606404

>>10605484
He probably wanted people to open his image in full view and not to judge from the thumbnail.

>> No.10606439
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>>10605481
Yes, I would suck. Thanks for giving me so much fanart of Lily.
>>10604563
No worries, I'm glad you like it!
>>10604530
Do I? I'm not sure how to feel about that..

>> No.10606459

>>10606439
>Yes, I would suck.
Wouldn't that count as autofellatio? Requesting!

>> No.10606490
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>>10606459
here.
uncensored at: http://i.imgur.com/UOIumb5.png

>> No.10606494
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10606494

I have had no motivation to draw for almost two weeks now.

Any requests?

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>>10606494
Draw me a foot with piss on it, cute little girl.

Oh, God... I'll make you feel so good...

>> No.10606516
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10606516

do Airi
i cant get enough

i started practicing faces recently using her as a model, but i'm not any good yet.

>> No.10606724

>>10606404
That's ridiculous. People are just being dumb using spoiler for no reason as if it is some kind of new greentext.

>> No.10606902

>>10606516
I'd do Airi if you know what I mean.

>> No.10606907

>>10606494
I didn't draw anything in two weeks because school is destroying me. I hope to be able to draw something in the weekend.
damn...so tired...

>> No.10606927

>>10606902
im reading you loud and clear

>> No.10607033

>>10606494
Draw a catgirl

>> No.10607153

>>10607033
Alright. On it

>> No.10607161

>>10607033
You already got one >>10602932

>> No.10607181

>>10607179
I don't like them.

>> No.10607179

>>10607161
What's wrong with more catgirls, anon?

>> No.10607186
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10607186

Could someone please draw OC-tan if you feel like texting a request.

>> No.10607193

>>10607186
*taking

My goodness that was a mistake.

>> No.10607202

>>10607186
she's not really bad

I mean, not the ZUN level bad

>> No.10608924

I want to draw cute girls.

Where do I begin?

>> No.10608959

>>10608924
draw mai waifu

>> No.10608971

>>10608924
You must practice little girls to draw little girls.

>> No.10609001

Hey OC Thread.
I'm going to be writing a game for a school project. inb4pleaseevacuatethepremises

My general idea is that it will be a danmaku game that features a crafting system with randomized drops from bosses requiring the player to kill one boss several times to get components which can then be used to create a new shot type which is stronger than the previous one. I'll attempt to compose the music myself and I will probably rip sprites from other games.

Would any of you be interested in testing?

>> No.10609018

>>10609001
This actually sounds like a very fun game!
How much are you planning to put into it?

>> No.10609020

>>10609001
Sure, why not.

>> No.10609027

>>10609001
I don't think you understand the concept of STG.

>> No.10609029

>>10609001
If you can kill the boss then why do you need a stronger shot type? Why not have it have based on the items you collect combining in a certain way, or make it like Gradius power up buying system?

I usually play shitty comiket shoot em ups so I'd test it.

>> No.10609079

>>10606439

dat name change

gross dude...

don't expect to be called anything less than mags here though

>> No.10609132

>>10609029
Thank you for the interest. I forgot to mention, but I'm going to set the health that it is very difficult if not required to craft the better shot types in order to progress through the game.

>> No.10609171

>>10609132
>the health
dude no. Health already makes STG easy. Have them player craft like shields or bombs something to prevent themselves from taking a hit and dying.

>> No.10609202

>>10609171
I was referring to the boss' health in >>10609132 For the player they will have bombs and lives.

Pretty soon I'll post a general outline of features and some descriptions of them.

Thank you for your interest.

>> No.10609676

I can't read Loomis! I have tried reading through it 6-7 but it's so boring and I can barely get in 15 pages. I usually end up going to a web page and forgetting what I read.

>> No.10609681

>>10609676
*6-7 times

>> No.10609776

>>10609001
Please evacuate the premises.

>> No.10609779

>>10609676
print it out and read it.

>> No.10609877

>>10609779
That's not really possible for me at this time so I'll just have to tough it out .

Unrelated
I was reading tumblr and they said a new free art program is out and it's described as a mix between SAI and Photoshop.

http://firealpaca.com/

I'm going to try it~

>> No.10609903

>>10609877
I actually like the feel better than SAI but I'm still deciding whether I should switch (SAI is outdated but it has a large community)

>> No.10609934

>>10606490
My goodness! Thank you!
She looks like she's really trying to fit the head in her mouth.

>> No.10611100

>>10609877
For some reason alpaca cant recognize my two monitors and its undoing the mapping.

>> No.10612997

Up

>> No.10613007

>>10612997
We don't bump here. This isn't /a/.

>> No.10613053

>>10613007
I just wanted to save the thread....

>> No.10613069

>>10613053
That's fine, and totally justified. Saving the thread has nothing to do with /a/, what a ridiculous notion.

>> No.10613108
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Read about anatomy for the first time today and drew something cute (It's still a WIP so excuse the scribble parts)

>> No.10613186

>>10613108

It seem like you're trying to hide the arms and legs but other than that good job

>> No.10613190

>>10613186
I did hide the arms/hands but I really tried on the legs *This was originally gonna be rumia but I couldn't draw the hands correctly)

>> No.10613224
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>>10613108
More sketches

>> No.10613302

>>10613224
all of these have wrong proportions. keep at it.

>> No.10613313

>>10613302
The one on the right is fine, despite lacking arms.

>> No.10613392
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>>10613302
Okay I'll study that later today since I want to get off to a good start

>>10613313
Good to know

>> No.10614043

Hello /jp!
I feel like I want to take on a project of some sort as an artist, but I don't know how to program or write stories.
Is anyone interested in pairing up with me? I'd love to make something like a visual novel.

>> No.10614053

>>10614043
I can program. What did you have in mind?

>> No.10614063

>>10614043
I'm not good a writing stories

>> No.10614068

>>10614053
I have no idea really, I'm sorry.
preferably something I'd get to draw a lot of cute girls for

>> No.10614074 [DELETED] 

>>10614068
Please do not misuse the spoiler function.

>> No.10614097

>>10614068
How about a SHMUP? I've been wanting to program one for a while.

>> No.10614118

>>10614043
I can contribute some music

>> No.10614142

>>10614097
That's kind of unoriginal but I'm up for it.
I was maybe thinking something like yume nikki, only with a little more story and gameplay maybe, but that'd be an awful lot of work I guess.

>> No.10614164

>>10614142
I wouldn't mind doing something like that either. What do your cute girls look like?

>> No.10614175

>>10614068
Stop that.

>> No.10614198

>>10614164
I drew these:
>>10602688
>>10602932
>>10603329
>>10604557

I'm not very experienced with pixel art but I can learn.

>> No.10614225

>>10614198
It would be nice if we could do something a little higher resolution than pixel art then to make full use of your skills.

Do you have an email so we can discuss it?

>> No.10614240

>>10614225
in e-mail field.

>> No.10614262
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10614262

not really OC, but im trying to make a short manga for a competition. but i just can't get the story together.
it's like whenever i go into closer inspection the story just falls apart due to inconsistencies. i tried several times but it happens _every_ time..
it's a manga without text or dialogue by the way, so it gets even harder to create a nice story.

any /jp/ anons who have experience with writing/plotting and the process of it? i could really need some tips. just something general is fine too.

>> No.10614279

>>10614262
This is just pathetic. Sorry, I had to say it.

>> No.10614294

>>10614240
Alright, I sent you an email.

>> No.10614296

>>10614279
well, it's about time i got some help. i've come to terms with my lack of storytelling experience.
i don't write often at all. my skills just may not do it.

manga is story + illustration and the story part is constanty making me start over.

>> No.10614298

>>10614279
Aww anon that's mean
>>10614262
How short is the manga? You might be making it more complicated than it needs to be, most short stories have a very simple plot.

>> No.10614354

>>10614298
there is no official restriction but the time i have is limited. i'd say 12-17 pages.

>most short stories have a very simple plot.
the main problem is that i always come across severe inconsistencies after a day of work. the likes of
>"why would she even do that?"
>"there is no real need for any of this!"
just very stupid amateur mistakes. you could say it lacks "direction".
i have the hunch that i am trying to force random stories into certain settings. it's just not natural and after a while it always turns out like this.

after the competition is over i will write/storyboard regularly, i've learned my lesson. but right now i'm starting to doubt wether i can solve this on my own.

>> No.10614380

>>10614354
Maybe you could try to seek out some inspiration?
There are a lot of short films on youtube that might give you some sort of direction to go in, I'm sorry anon I'm not really good at this.

>> No.10614392
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>>10614354
Take a look at Hotel. It did use quite a bit of text but it had a pretty simple story and you could probably get by with some striking visuals.

Check out some of these short stories, they might give you inspiration too: http://www.voidspace.org.uk/cyberpunk/burning_chrome.shtml

>> No.10614462

>>10614392
it doesn't really fit the criteria. since all types of texts are not allowed.
no dialogue, monologue and not even expositional narration. the point is it should work with images alone, that's the rule. it would be a lot easier with narration like in hotel.
with this, it's hard to make the story good without being able to "say" anything.
also, i have a theme to follow: "love letter"

and that short story in the link is too long. a manga short story is at best one to two pages long. there isn't enough place for that much development.

>> No.10614491

>>10614462
Give Little Little a look. It's a manga with no dialogue, the only text it has are sound effects.

>> No.10614638

>>10613392
Those are pretty good actually

>>10613224

nice butt

>> No.10616296 [DELETED] 
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How do you do lineart?

I have been searching all ove rthe web but every tutorial on deviantart is by an unskilled person and I'm scared of picking up their bad habits.

Pic related is what I think of when I say good line art it's clean, thin, and with lots of line variation.

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>>10607033
>>10607153
request done

>> No.10616844

>>10602830
Someone seems to have uploaded it to gelbooru, and now using it in a /vg/ thread.

>>>/vg/29262416

>> No.10616849

>>10616385
Oh sweet, what do ya know. Thought you may have given up. Thanks, bro, it's pretty cute for a sketch. And the color choice is even cuter.

>> No.10618435

>>10616844
Is this a shortcut to the top?!

>> No.10620165

>ten hundred thousand hours later

>> No.10620175 [DELETED] 

>>10620165
Who are you quoting?

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>> No.10621529

>>10621521
Cute.

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