/jp/ - Otaku Culture

Done with Yuzuriha's trial, so some thoughts:
>Wdefender detected the exe as a virus
>bmg too loud, had to change those myself
>mc is already a full fledged man and op, which I'm fine with since he won't be a whiny bitch, but not much room for him to grow as far as I can see
>no big bad antagonist so far, so it might lack tension at some point
>seems like it's going the muh racism bad route, so nothing much new here
>military setting, most of the cast wears military uniform, but main heroines look like some JAV cosplaying
>might be a fine actionge if the battle scens' are at least like the prologue's one
Will read it when it releases