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>>46133111
I used to be afraid of the Aya sex scene I wrote because I thought it was cringe. Now I realize that it probably still is cringe but the part where she calls Anon 'darling' is the one saving grace in that scene. Divine revelation, that line was.
I'll compliment each writefag/storyline since I vainly gave myself a pat on the back:
Rananon: Ran and Chen parts were a cute look at Anon's anguish and Yukari starting to split herself apart from Gensokyo for the sake of her delusions. I appreciate your cheerful energy itt.
Takaneanon: Really like Takane taking a pragmatic approach in the Gensokyo rape wonderland and the early Goro stuff was good physical suffering. The convoluted mess of quantum pregnancy was fun to read and re-read. Made my brain work for it.
Rikakoteneanon: It's refreshing to see PC-98 'hus alive. 'tene is a cute and her adventures will inspire millions of fairies to follow in her lead.
Mimanon: I love these hags jobbing and plotting like you wouldn't believe. It's nice to see a character that can recognize how absurd the situation is and choose to tackle it. Hana got a good friend.
Yuyukoanon: You stole my secret plot device early on and made it better, so I kneel before you.
Hananon: Thank you and I'm sorry.
Abusemuanon: Thank you and I'm sorry.
Patchyanon1: I will never forget you.
Patchyanon2: The SoL of being trapped inside a brothel was done great. The meta posting was peak.
Suzuanon: You did the Villager perspective great. The powerlessness she feels was conveyed perfectly.
Whoever did the first Yuuka part: It was the perfect mix of cute/sadist fandom Yuuka being integrated into HSE. Props.
Whoever made Hammer Kasen: Thank you for solving the issue of Kasen with sex.
Flowchartanon: Thank you for making my line so goddamn big and putting up with my convoluted timeline of posting. I'll maybe stop procrastinating on my writing. Possibly. Just one more extra...
Relationship chartanon: Thank you for making this glyph that I'll pay to have carved into bronze one day so it can outlive me. It genuinely helps me remember there are more than 3 gap children in this story to wreck havoc. I'm sorry for calling you flowchartanon once, I liked the Cirno storyline a lot.
Everyone who ever shitposted a suggestion or shitposted in general: Thank you for your invaluable contributions

Anyone I missed: Sorry, I appreciate your contributions. We couldn't have gotten here without you.
Anyone I complimented more than once: idgaf, you got 2 compliments.

>>45273947
>If it has penguin feet... It's a penguin.
That's the point, thoughever. Tsukasa's accomplice whom cut Aya's face is framing Kasen, but I didn't make it clear enough that the cloak was a cheap ruse in Part 49 when they encountered the accomplice. Aya's conspiracy rambling is on the track that leads to not tying the conspiracy directly into a currently-written character.
Now I have to cope with Kasenanon confirming the lewd pink beat up some poor shmuck in front of HSE. I'll pretend it was some foolish printer tengu named Byb and her serious friend Noniji. The wording was vauge enough in Kasen story, right?

It's interesting to me that out of all the bachelorettes, the pregnant ones get the least meta-discussion for how well they'd suit Anon.
Marisa had a decent chuck of "she's the closest to Anon, she can make him happy" and then she got pregnant and just stayed with Hana. I guess it's more a symptom of not having a dedicated writefag. At least she's watching his daughter become a youkai fucker.
The Myourens just want Anon as a status symbol, which I guess is them being soulless youkai. Even Byakuren is more interested in Anon as a figurehead than as a possible caretaker for the rest of the followers (or all of their children).
Aya being fluff, having 3 subplots and explicitly raping him probably isn't doing her any favors in the public eye. Perhaps her writefag needs to try harder to make her likeable instead of a birdbrain that rapes first and falls in love second.
Tewi isn't even pregnant but all her children are, jobber bnuuy is trying to get pregnant but even Kyouko is ahead of her.

>>12348413
Mokou

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