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Author here. It was never finished per se, but we did brainstorm possible endings in a thread a few years back.

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Thanks for all the positive feedback on the first part. Here's part 2, hope you like it.

“Don’t mess with me!”

Reacting in the split second before Shannon could pull the trigger, Gaap summoned a small portal beside her and shot a hand out into it. Reemerging behind Shannon, it grabbed her arm and wrenched it back right as she fired the gun. Gaap heard the explosion of gunpowder and felt the bullet whiz inches above her head, hitting her hat and sending it flying into the air. For a moment Gaap was unsure if she’d been hit or not. Even so, she wasn’t going to give Shannon the chance to fire another round. While Shannon was still reeling from being yanked backwards so suddenly, Gaap opened another portal directly in front of her. Sending a fist through it this time, she mercilessly punched the young girl square in the face.

“Kya!”

The shock from the blow caused Shannon to falter, dropping her rifle into the rosebushes and loosening her grip on Gaap’s leg. Feeling her foe slipping free from her grasp, Shannon clawed at her in a blind panic, managing to grab hold of the ribbon that tied both halves of the crimson dress together. However in her haste she ended up using too much force, tearing the ribbon clean off and allowing Gaap to escape into yet another portal as she called out to her mockingly.

“Nobody likes a girl who’s too clingy Shannon. Guys will just ditch you if you're like that. <See you again>”

Deciding that it’d be best to get some distance for the time being and regain her composure, Gaap reappeared in the air above the arbor, her stilettos clacking against the rooftop as she landed gracefully. She took a deep breath and calmed her hammering heart. That had been way to close. She hadn’t expected that timid little Shannon to pull such an aggressive stunt. Looking back to the where she had just come from, she saw Shannon bent over the rosebushes, both arms elbow-deep in the thorny flowers as she frantically searched for the gun she had dropped. With a snap of her fingers, Gaap opened a large portal beneath Shannon, swallowing her up in darkness. Still in a panic from her plan failing, Shannon couldn’t react in time to grab hold of the railing, and she soon found herself sprawled on the ground in front of the arbor, right back where she had started.

"Now then, let's try that one more time. From the top."

All around them, the typhoon continued to rage. As Gaap stared down at Shannon’s crumpled form, she finally took notice of the wind tugging at her dress. Glancing down, she saw how it had come undone in the struggle. Without the ribbon holding it together, the loose garment was now fluttering wildly in the wind. As the fierce gale buffeted it to and fro, the already revealing outfit could no longer fulfill even the most basic functions as clothing, exposing Gaap’s body to the harsh elements. She was lucky there were no men around, otherwise- Well, no. She probably wouldn’t have been bothered even if there had been men watching. That being said, it was making it really difficult to move around properly. Clawing at the dress, Gaap briefly tried to tie it back into place, but it proved impossible. Sighing in frustration, she decided there was nothing else for it.

As Shannon struggled to her feet once more, she looked up just in time to see Gaap pull her dress up over her head and throw it into the night sky, where it was quickly swept out of sight by the wind. Due to her habit of forgoing any undergarments, this left Gaap completely naked save for her striped socks and her stilettos. Even in this life-or-death situation, Shannon couldn’t help but take a moment to marvel at the older woman's nude form. Long legs leading to wide hips which then tapered into a thin waist. And further up, a huge pair of ripe round melons sat perched upon a heaving chest, each one capped with a rosy peak that slowly hardened in the cold night air. The rain quickly soaked her from head to toe, making the surface of her skin glisten in the pale moonlight, accentuating her figure even more.

“Ah, that’s better. It’s nice to feel the rain and wind all over your body every once in a while. Next time I should make Riiche and Lia join me. Hm?”

As Gaap turned to face Shannon once more, she noticed the way in which the young maid was staring at her body. Grinning broadly, she leaned forward and placed both hands on her knees. She then slowly rose back up, tracing her fingertips seductively along her curves as she did so until reaching her chest. Cupping the slick breasts in her hands, The demoness called out to Shannon in a teasing voice as she hefted them up and down.

“Hmm~ Like what you see? Feel free to look as much as you want, because in exchange I’m going to make you pay for ruining my favorite dress.”

Next part is where things will really start to heat up. Look forward to it.

Okay, so here's part 1 of Shannon vs. Gaap erotic fight scene. I'm currently working on Part 2. I decided to skip the actual trial and started off right when the actual fight begins.

Suddenly, beneath Shannon’s feet, a pitch-black pitfall opened its mouth wide. Shannon had no time to react. After being swallowed up, Shannon fell out of an identical hole that had opened up in the ceiling of the arbor. As she fell, Gaap hit her with a carefully timed roundhouse kick, her leg digging painfully into her flank. As Shannon was knocked away, another hole appeared where she was launched and swallowed her up again. This time, the exit appeared in front of the waiting Gaap who had already begun the windup for her next kick.

“Welcome back. *giggle*”

Once more Shannon was knocked away, this time landing in a muddy puddle with a splash. But she didn’t stay down for very long. Her breathing was ragged and her legs trembled, but she struggled to get to her feet. Her hat had long since fallen off, and that last fall had caused her garter to snap, hanging limply at her side.

Then without warning, Shannon turned away from Gaap and began running in the opposite direction. After being momentarily surprised at this display of cowardice, Gaap shrugged. It was only natural after all. Shannon was no match for her in a fight. That didn’t mean she was about to let Shannon escape though. It would be a huge pain if she made it back to the guesthouse and warned the others of lord Goldsmith’s plan after all.

“You won’t get away that easily.”

Another pitch-black portal opened up beneath Shannon’s feet, it’s pair appearing above Gaap, ready to drop Shannon into another vicious combo. But Gaap’s roundhouse kick ended up hitting nothing but air. Puzzled, she looked up at her portal, only to see a pair of pale legs dangling from the ceiling of the arbor. Turning back to where Shannon had been, Gaap saw the maid half-submerged in the ground, hanging by the railing of the rosebush she had been running alongside. Turning back around, Gaap made to grab at one of Shannon’s legs, but only succeeded in pulling off one of her stockings as they retreated back into the ceiling. Climbing along the fence and making her way back to solid land, Shannon managed to pull herself out of the hole. Not even sparing a moment to catch her breath, she immediately resumed sprinting towards the guesthouse. Gaap clicked her tongue in annoyance.

“Such an incompetent maid, not coming when you’re called. Well then, I’ll just have to go to you instead.”

Gaap summoned another portal and casually hopped into it. Reappearing in front of Shannon, she cut off her path of escape. She wagged a finger at Shannon as if admonishing a misbehaving child.

“That’s no good Shannon. You can’t leave a guest unattended in the rain. I’ll have to scold you some more for such rude behavior.”

Lunging forward, Gaap delivered another spinning roundhouse kick to Shannon’s flank. Unlike the previous times however, Gaap’s kick didn’t cause Shannon to fall over. It seemed Shannon had braced herself for the impact and had somehow managed endure the pain. Wrapping her arm around Gaap’s leg, she caught her in a desperate hold. She was probably hoping to prevent Gaap from unleashing any more kicks upon her. Gaap sneered at her efforts.

“What’s this now? If you were that interested in my legs you could have just said so. How about I give you a little peek?”

Saying this Gaap teasingly lifted the hem of her dress, showing off the full length of her leg.

Shannon ignored Gaap’s provocations. This was her chance and she knew it. She had planned ahead for just this situation, and now she had her opponent right where she wanted her. Wordlessly, she reached behind her back, sticking her free hand into the rose bush behind her. She hadn’t been running away this whole time. She had merely been luring Gaap to this spot. As her hand found what she had been searching for Shannon sighed, relieved that she hadn’t misjudged the location. With a practiced hand, she took hold of the object she had hidden there earlier, drawing it out from the roses. Upon seeing that thing Gaap’s eyes widened and her voice died in her throat. It was only natural. After all, the thing Shannon was holding was an anti-magic tool of such high caliber that even a high-ranking demon such as herself couldn’t help but be afraid of it. As Shannon saw Gaap’s expression change from shock to horror, a soft smile rose to her lips. And then, without an ounce of hesitation, she pointed the barrel of the Winchester at Gaap’s trembling face.


“It was fun playing hide and seek with you again after so long. Goodbye, my very first friend.”

-BAM!-

While thinking of ways for Shannon to actually fight Gaap, it somehow ended up geing a lot more action-packed than I'd planned. Part 2 will be more lewd though, so don't worry.