/jp/ - Otaku Culture

>>34704488
sorry anon but this is a Dlanor thread only

>>34683572
Tricks and locked room murders are not the most important part of a Witch's game - narrative and presentation are. You absolutely fail in the latter. The way you present your mysteries detters people from wanting to participate in them in the first place. I get that you want to put yourself as the Detective in your mysteries, so I'll give the Italianon character a pass, even though it's a bit lame, however, Omega the incel loser? Tower? Burger? What are those names? Those sound ridiculous and can't be taken seriously by most people. The second, and probably the biggest issue, is your English. I know you'll get mad at me for saying this, but the manner in which some text or a story is written resonates with how well it will be received by the readers. A well written text or a book will entice the readers and encourage them to keep on reading, whereas a poorly written book with lots of grammar issues and difficult to read text won't be consumed or enjoyed by anyone. This applies to every written medium, that's why good and bad writers exist. That's why good and bad stories exist. That's why most fanfiction is terrible, it's written by other people such as you who have bad writing skills. They might have good ideas and the right mindset, but they lack the skill to convert their thoughts into words which will be well received by other people.

I believe your mysteries could genuinely be good if the text and presentation were better, but since you've continuously failed to accept that the issue is within you, and not other people, I'm afraid people will continue to not engage with your mysteries. Nothing will change unless you change.

Hahahhahaha

Last for mommy Dlanor.

>>34465757
Need Dlanor wife.

>>34371969
As you ᴄᴏᴍᴍᴀɴᴅ.

>>34293559
What if Dlanor was no longer just a KID?

>>34193110
We were robbed of the Dlnaor + Eiserne Jungfrau office comedy data fragment where Cornelia goes postal.

Dlanor is no longer just a KID.

>>21850507
What if she were a grown UP?

>>21740287
Adult Dlanor for all your sex needs.