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>>8568569
The only problem was that it was too long.

Most of the bit at Shizune's house could have been cut. All we needed from that segment was to learn about Shizune's relationship with Jigoro. Shortening that section of the story, and pruning some of the irrelevant scenes from all over the story would have let it get to the real meat of the story, Misha's confession, a lot sooner and not get so much flak for being boring.