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>>16856049
The boobs would definitely be the centerpiece of the design, but there’s the matter of how best to show them off. Just high exposure on its own won’t be enough to tickle the fantasies of men. I could stick to the original’s emphasis on sideboob, or perhaps switch it up a bit and go for some underboob instead. I can’t neglect her legs or backside either. It has to be easy to move around and fight in while still fitting her impractical sense of style. I definitely want to keep the impression that the whole thing could easily fall apart at any moment.


The most frustrating thing about the story with Shannon is that I've had the entire outline for how I want it to go laid out since the start. I just keep getting hung up on putting everything into the right words. Maybe focusing on a single idea for too long is the problem. I had a bunch of spare time the other day so I decided to try writing that Shannon cleaning scenario from the last thread in my notebook. I ended up getting about a half dozen pages without much issue.

>>16624890
In that case, this might make it easier to use.