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I can understand where humiliation anon is coming from. When a girl is SUPER cute, you tend to feel like nothing about her could be anything but perfect. It's impossible to be disgusted by such a cute girl. After all, she's not just cute. She's super cute. And yet... you know. You know she's human and she's supposed to be at least somewhat disgusting. She literally shits, for god's sake. But you find her cute that even that fact doesn't quite register in your mind. You know she's not perfect, but you can't help but feel like she is. You might not even find scat/humiliation hot, but her human flaws still mean nothing to you. They don't drag her down from her pedestal even a little bit. She's 100% perfect and desirable to you.

This is where the idea of humiliation comes up. You want to challenge this contradiction that is tearing you apart, you want to know more about this crush you are obsessing over. So you try (and I emphasize "try") to find her disgusting. You imagine her shitting and farting... but nothing. Even if you don't care for it, you don't find it disgusting either. She's still perfect. So you imagine more and more humiliations to get to the bottom of this, to try an resolve this fascinating contradiction. But none of your efforts bear fuit.

In the end, humiliation is a way to admire and marvel at the Absolutely Certain™ perfection of your crush. No matter how many dirty and humiliating facts you throw at her, no matter how much you try to think of her as disgusting in some way, she resists everything and stands firm, 100% perfect in your mind.

I assume humiliation anon feels this way towards Ange, so his humiliation posts come from a place of respect and admiration. That bitch just doesn't stop being hot no matter how many disgusting and degrading situations she's put in. She's a grade S cutie.

In the end, it's just waifuposting. Except instead of saying "my waifu Cirno is so cute, she's got such a flat tummy" he says "my waifu Ange is so cute, she doesn't stop being attractive even in normally disgusting scenarios".

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Removing the structure of each page by confining all the paragraphs to a little text box makes the whole thing feel cheap and purposeless, which makes the prose as a whole very bland and makes the repetitive parts even more pointless.

I cannot stress it enough. You can't just take a novel, especially a VN (book pages can end in the middle of sentences, which isn't the case here) and strip away all the paragraphs and the way they are displayed on the screen originally. It's part of the author's writing style. Why he chooses to fill an entire page to the brim, why he advances to the next page after a single line, why some so-called repetitions actually have a purpose and look beautiful displayed as different paragraphs on the same page. You cannot remove that style and personality, which is part of an author's particular prose, without hurting the experience. Similar-sounding lines that made artistic sense as consecutive paragraphs on a wall of text make you wonder "why is he repeating this for no reason" if that wall is confined to a small box and delivered in separate fragments. And parts that were genuinely repetitive seem even MORE repetitive when you've stripped away part of the author's style (how he uses paragraphs and page turns), making his entire prose seem like it has no style or purpose. This makes those genuinely flawed repetitions come off as even worse flaws because the entire thing so far has lacked any personality in the way it's displayed on-screen. It comes off as useless drivel on top of useless drivel, instead of an occasional flaw.

And just to make it clear, I'm not referring to the choice of words or the content of the text. I'm just saying that the way an author displays it is important, influences how you perceive it and is part of his personal style.

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Chloe's embarrassing arse!

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