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>>5043932
The intent of the drawing is there, and the colors are well-picked. However, there's something you should think about when you go for the next version.

Her arm positioning is ambiguous. Make sure you can see the form of her limbs when you draw them. It's sort of a feeling. Once you have the orientation of the arms more clearly, it'll be easier to draw the hands.

Also, her apron is acceptable, although I think it could follow the contours of her legs a little more.

I'm looking forward to seeing the next version!