/jp/ - Otaku Culture

It is finally complete. My very first attempt at writefagging anything longer than a 2 post greentext story. I present to you: Geomancer.

http://pastebin.com/kjiDcLva

Its sort of like Spice and Wolf mixed with Minecraft mixed with Dungeons and Dragons mixed with a mild Halloween theme. I know im late to the party on the Halloween stuff, it took much longer to write than I expected.

It features a werewolf and an arachne. I thought it turned out quite well for the most part. My autism bled through in just a few areas, and I apologize for that. You can probably tell ive played more than a few hours of Minecraft.

You can notice where I started out in greentext format, then slowly transitioned into a more normal writing style. I didn't do this on purpose, it just sort of happened that way. It also seemed like my writing quality improved significantly the longer the story went on. Dat spider, man. I dont want to spoil the story, but jesus christ what the fuck.

This story is unofficially set in the Shadelands mentioned in Anonymooses saga, chapter 48. Hopefully he is ok with me referencing his stuff. No need to reinvent the wheel and all that.

This story uses a main character that isn't totally powerless, which seems to be rare in the monstergirl universe. I thought it worked out quite well. The glass cannon approach seems to lend itself to this setting admirably.

If it seems shitty at first just hang in there, it gets a lot better. Especially the final 3rd of the story.