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A story with Kasen recounting to Marisa the tale of Suika and the four devas (including her) past and how Suika became outcast, switching between Suika's perspective, the story itself (as told by Kasen) and the present/aftermath from telling someone like Marisa the story

I'm already writing it for half a year on and off and it's going to be shit. The main stumbling block being the original character do not steel fourth deva and how not to make it TOO edgy since it obviously takes a sinister turn when it gets to the part where she's cast out

Suika is a crybaby.