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>>45656993
Thanks
No, I wrote it myself, you could probably find some goofs. I tried to run it through chatgpt after I was done writing to see if there are any mistakes but it straight up refused to do anything with the text.
As for the story i had fantasies of Alice shagging her bf in front of Marisa to make her feel jealous, or being so madly horny and in love that she shags her bf even before the guest leaves. I thought it would be a good plot so I put my thoughts to the keyboard
I'm trying to improve, whenever I write anything I realise it is just a mix and match or who said what/thought about what, and a brief description of things.