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This is incomprehensible. Good work Anon!

Reviewing it, I think the time jumps were the source of my personal confusion. To be honest the Marisa pregnancy thing slipped my mind while writing. I think I'll place the start of the Mima stuff before the crisis but right after Marisa conceives to explain the lack of signs and not have her do something like that after the Mima de-jobbering begins. As for other timeline stuff, I'd place Hana's visit to Moyira shrine before her visit to Mima, but I'm not too sure how the Mima and Okina timelines line up.

spoiler]Also, fuck me the pregnancy thing makes something I had planned way darker. I think I'll either have to drop or adjust it.