/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>4200256
You are going well Anon. I would add more saturation to make it more alive. I have chosen a light direction from the top left since that is where the boobs seemed to get one and tried to adjusted the other highlights towards it notably the hair, the clothes, the eyes the guns. Choosing a dedicated direction for the main light source (or two)will be helpful to avoid confusion on where to put shading.

Finally I couldn't resist subtly adjusting the expression to be smug as well cause she looks really cute but she had an expression that felt unsure. Yours were pretty good already so that was just a personal thing.

Please do more!