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5252936 No.5252936 [Reply] [Original]

is this any better than before? I think it is but I am biased and don't know for sure. you guys were giving me tips on metals, are these metals decent? please ignore the female form I haven't studied anatomy in 4 years since I started so I know it is off. Textures OK? Critique? Thanks

>> No.5252941
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5252941

better sized so you can see whole thing

>> No.5252946

also here is the one from before

https://imgur.com/gallery/JUDmFZU

>> No.5252952
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5252952

>>5252941

this one is better sized, sorry for the reposts but I guess who cares fuck it lol

>> No.5252983

>>5252936
Its kind of weird, like, the metal shading on the legs is good, and the overall shading is fine, but the drawing isn't good.
If the chest piece was thinner at the chest it would help with the proportions.
It's a meme here, but you need to draw anatomy more.

>> No.5253024

>>5252983

thanks, I am well aware that the linework is the main culprit. I need to study proportions, I am self taught and never learned besides my a few days of anatomy drawings 4 years ago when I was newer. definitely need to work on that. but ty, I was worried about the texture I know I can fix the linework but the metals I studied for a month or so,. thanks again for the feedback

>> No.5253063

>>5252936
Lol is this bait?

>> No.5253070

>>5253063


no. seriously I have no freaking clue if my work is good or bad and need a third party to tell me. not even kidding lmao

>> No.5253074

>>5253063


plus 4chan is honest I don't want my dad telling me oh it's great I could draw a stick figure and my family would say it's great. my friends know nothing about art and the only other people that can help are christians from church and they are uber nice, not too critical. 4chan over plebbit I can't stand them so here I am

>> No.5253951

Cloud at the front looks less cloud-y than the others.

Think you ability to paint forms is promising. As the other anon said it looks like the drawing skills need more work compared. Like the proportions are way off, not sure if its intentional though.

Honestly on a personal note I quite like this painting, just because I'm big into more surreal stuff and this fits the bill. Think you should grind the fundamentals more though.

>> No.5253954

>>5252936
you're amazing anon! 100% talent