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Previous >>5054878

What is /ALT/?
If you're looking for a place to post your cartooning then you've found the right general. This is /ic/s 1st and only merged hub where both Eastern and Western stylization can coexist peacefully, hence the double title. However, by community demand and long history, this is favorably an Anime general.
>Rules & Guidelines
(1) Any form of cartooning is welcome; so submit and receive feedback from others. (2) Please resize your images before posting. (3) Share your knowledge and (4) Remember to not be afraid of asking for critique. Most importantly I encourage you to keep discussion at a civil level, but you're more than welcome to share your opinions.
>I came for anime. Why does the image OP say cartoons general?
To distinguish from the anime study thread (janitor supported). Please post your studies there and personal work goes here.
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>Community Resources
Hitokaku Index
>http://www.asahi-net.or.jp/~zm5s-nkmr/
List of active livestreams
>Use twitch #art
>yoshikadu2011 https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCUx5dpO6d5gQ4KWNPc24CKw
FellowBro's Book Collection
>http://mediafire.com/?i44dwzkf9j9n8
Tutorial & Reference Collection
>http://pinterest.com/characterdesigh/
Japanese Tutorials & Documentary
>http://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?id=59317 (0033)
>http://iradukai.com/
References
>http://www.onairvideo.com/croquis-cafe-photos2.html
>http://www.eggazyoutatsu.net/eng/atarichan.html
>http://senshistock.com/sketch/
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>> No.5074239

huh?

>> No.5074668

how come this lace is dead? everyone move on to /draw/ or something

>> No.5074687

>>5074230
I don't get it, did you just take random picture from the web for OP?

>> No.5074728

is this place always this dead. the other generals don't struggle to get people to post shit

>> No.5074749
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5074749

Can someone explain to me how exactly this kind of crosshatching is done?
I tried to replicate it but somehow failed. I assumed it would be something like this.
Grey base, black zones, bridge them by crosshatching.
Just can't seem to get it to look right though.

>> No.5074764

>>5074728
>post on /alt/
>0 replies
>post on /asg/
>at least 1-2 replies
fuck this general people here only reply to asukafag

>> No.5074775

>>5074764
Calm down, other generals are awfully slow too.

>> No.5074784

>>5074749
>Triangle shaped object
could you show just a little of what you did?
they also could have used a digital brush that replicates the kakeami look http://nekopunch.bake-neko.net/kakeami.htm

>> No.5074810
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5074810

>>5074784
Sure I guess.
My linework is also not that stable yet but I'm working on it.
Also that looks like a pretty neat brush. Maybe that is the case I don't know. Still trying to figure this whole crosshatching buisness out.

>> No.5074823

>>5074810
my bad, didn't mean to imply that was a brush. that's just the process mangaka use to get the look. this is a better link for what you need:
https://www.japanesewithanime.com/2020/03/kakeami.html

>> No.5074841

>>5074687
Look here >>5063268
Do you just wanna cause drama?

>> No.5074843

>>5074823
Ah thanks. Never heard of that before.

>> No.5074960

>>5074841
I didn't notice it.

>> No.5074963
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5074963

Would appreciate a redline or any crits on this! Trying to get better at understanding sitting poses.

>> No.5075024

>>5074810
What program are you using to draw? If you're on photoshop I can make a brush for you

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>> No.5075102
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>> No.5075116
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I posted this on another thread, but I finished it today.

>> No.5075121

>>5075116
God I want to wife her

>> No.5075213

>>5075116
Excellent taste anon

Needs more muscle though

>> No.5075224
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>> No.5075293

>>5074230
Terrible background tho

>> No.5075432
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5075432

Something I did semi-recently

>> No.5075551
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>> No.5075711
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5075711

>>5074230
Meri Kurisumasu, Mr Rawrence (2021) in 3D IMAX, directed by Andrei Tarkovsky. Visit the nearby kinoplex on your Twitter for enhanced audio experience with nice long loop without director's cuts

>> No.5075740

>>5075224
deep

>> No.5075839

>>5075024
Clip Studio but I appreciate the offer.

>> No.5076670
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5076670

A or B?
I'm liking both, and they both have a similar feeling.
>>5075839
CSP can use PS brushes now with the latest update
>>5075116
Adorable gyaru flesh-horn oni

>> No.5076689

>>5076670
definitely B

though it depends what the waifufag wants

>> No.5076705

>>5076670
delete A right now

>> No.5076768

>>5076670
B, make the torso a bit wider/defined though

>> No.5076901
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>> No.5076904

>>5076901
is this a plea for help?

>> No.5076907

>>5074230
>>5063268
Is she nopan?

>> No.5076912

>>5076904
it's a promise of vengeance

>> No.5077028
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5077028

I hope i keep improving

>> No.5077175
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>>5074230
Been trying to find artist's stuff, google image search and tinyeye don't find the original only reposts...

I've been trying to work on my rendering lately as I realised I basically put all my time into improving linework... If anyone knows how to render like him then please post detes

>> No.5077222

>>5076901
I feel your pain

>> No.5077242

>>5076901
Don't ambush the doctors.
Ambush the mothers that go out of their way to let the doctors cut their sons.
They can't just do it without consent from the parents.

>> No.5077320

>>5077242
trembling pediatrician hands typed this post

>> No.5077922
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Tried doing the piece in B&W, colorizing with a gradient map, and then overlaying the local colors on top. It looks good in the darks, but in the lights the local color gets lost completely and it all stays purple. Not sure how to fix it (besides painting a totally different way).

>> No.5078489
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5078489

I'm taking the disneypill, wish me luck

>> No.5078534

>>5078489
Anon, this is... Quite alright actually

>> No.5078554

>>5078534
Thanks, but I still hate the face and I'm too tired to fix where I think went sideways of what I intended

>> No.5078782
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5078782

posting a few pieces, some are reposts from other threads

>> No.5078783
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>>5078782

>> No.5078785
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>>5078783

>> No.5078819

>>5078782
>>5078783
>>5078785
thanks for the good food

>> No.5078849

>>5078782
>>5078783
Thanks doc.
Haven't had it for a while now

>> No.5078954
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>> No.5078971
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>>5078849
>>5078819

<3

>> No.5079184

>>5078489
this is nice. the eyes look a little creepy though. maybe you can up the disneyification and make them bigger and rounder?

>> No.5079650

>>5078489
I think the bulb of the nose could use a little more definition. The bridge just kind of looks like it goes straight down.

>> No.5079971

>>5076901
Based furfag
>>5077242
No the doctors are the real problem. They literally tell every parent with an uncut son that he has phimosis. My mom didn't get me cut, since a doctor recommended against it and refused too. Later when I was eight my parents took me in for a checkup and the doctor started lying to them that I had phimosis, since my foreskin wasn't retractable. It doesn't become retractable until puberty. He was misinformed or was purposely miss informing them. They then forced me to get cut under doctor orders against my will.

>> No.5080002

>>5076901
giga?

>> No.5080011

>>5079971
you should kill your parents for being so stupid

>> No.5080815

i subbed to twitch.tv/aagoto just because i cant watch his older vods without subbing, how i download the vods now? twitchleecher doesnt work with subscriber only content

>> No.5081114
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crit?

>> No.5081193
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5081193

>>5076670
Inks. Forgot her clothes.
Hopefully the hands don't look too bad.
>>5076689
>>5076768
thanks anons
>>5076705
>delete A right now
Anything particularly off about it?
>>5078782
def my fave of the bunch

>> No.5081204

>>5079971
You should've fought the fuck back

>> No.5081370

>>5074749
The first step is realizing that there's almost no crosshatching in that image.

>> No.5081635
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>> No.5081644

>>5081635
Those hips don't lie

>> No.5081676

>>5078782
gib blog

>> No.5081729
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5081729

Trying to get out of airbrush/cell shading and start painting. Is hard round brush a meme? I kind of like it.

>> No.5081742

>>5081193
Girls can't fight why do ppl draw them like this

>> No.5081749

>>5081729
looks AI generated

>> No.5081756
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5081756

haven't posted here in a while o_O tried to work on all of my weak spots while I was away, hope I improved somewhat.

This is a recent commission

>> No.5081760

>>5081749
It's literally hard round 1/2 opacity brush, a little airbrush, and gradient maps. What makes you think it looks like AI?

>> No.5081762
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>> No.5081788

>>5081762
shoulders too broad and the neck is off centered, the hand with the sausages is too big, and the same arm should have more foreshortening

>> No.5081793

>>5081762
AAAAAAAAAHHHHH IM GONNA COOOOOOOMMMMMMMMM

>> No.5081799

>>5081762
Go to /SALT/, you went full coomer

>> No.5081821
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5081821

>>5081762
>/ic/'s poster child has taken the coompill
bahahahahahahaha

>> No.5081827

>>5081756
Good work my dude 10/10 would gob

>> No.5081832

>>5081760
Weird core shadows and color bleed

>> No.5081835

>>5081762
UUUUUUGGGGHHHHH IM COOOOOOMMMMIIINNNNGGGGGG

>> No.5081864
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>>5081832
Well you'll have to take my word for it kek. Haven't messed with AI since briefly experimenting with it a few months ago. Anyways I removed the bleed from the forehead where it most noticeable, and softened up the expression by raising the brows. First one looked too sinister.

>> No.5081905

everyone eventually falls to the dark side...

>> No.5081913

>>5081762
AAAAWWOOOOOOOOOOOOOOGGGGGAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
ARF ARF ARRRRFFFFFFFFF AWOOOOOO AWOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO AHHHHH IT'S COOOOOOOOOOMING OUT
IT'S COOOOOOMMMIIIIIING OUTTTTTT
IT'S COOOOOOOOMMING OUT
IT'S DARE

>> No.5081927

This place rotted my brain
I remember why I intially swore to never say coomer

>> No.5081947
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>>5081927

>> No.5081955

>>5081762
you went too hardcore and that's why it's failing. from what I've seen your audience were ecchi fags rather than full coomers.

>> No.5081964

>>5081864
her twintails look like veiny dicks

>> No.5082003
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5082003

decided to draw some fan-art and I'm pretty happy with it, but every time I look at it I just see how close the lip is to the nose

>> No.5082014

>>5082003
Then I made this Asuka I like a little better, and I was planning on drawing more, but I just broke a finger in my dominant hand :(

>> No.5082016
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>>5082014
forgot to add the pic

>> No.5082113
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5082113

Komari

>> No.5082116
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>>5082113
Also uncolored Haruka that I’ll finish later

>> No.5082203

>>5081193
Is he some kind of worm based shapeshifter? Cause her index finger is scaring me.

>> No.5082470

>>5081756
Got an insta?

>> No.5082482

>>5081788
thank
>>5081955
I think I made it boring and it's not good enough technically

>> No.5082483

>>5081947
Sauce?

>> No.5082487

>>5082483
Click the google button newfriend. Your answer lies there.

>> No.5082490

>>5082487
Just tell me the anime ;—;
I’m so lonely and horny right now

>> No.5082492
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>>5082490
I'm teaching you how to fish, baka.

>> No.5082521

>>5081947
>>5082487
Not him but wait, I don't remember that happening in CotW

Is this what i get for watching the netflix adaption?

Is there a better place I can watch it again?

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>>5074230
hi.................

>> No.5082770
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>>5081827
Ah thank you :D
>>5082470
you might find it a tad disappointing cause I haven't posted anything new in a while, but it's @big.nika, used to be @beholdnika

>> No.5082772

>>5075711
woooh!

>> No.5082798

>>5082770
It's always good to see one of the old regulars. Wouldn't have guessed it was you with the style shift.

>> No.5082807
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>>5082798
Aw :D thank you anon! I still enjoy drawing generic pretty girls but I think I have an easier time straying from that style nowadays, like something finally clicked

>> No.5082881
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5082881

Practice using the anime as a ref

>> No.5082893

>>5081762
This is super unsexy

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>> No.5083156

>http://www.onairvideo.com/croquis-cafe-photos2.html
that link is dead, use this one instead
https://web.archive.org/web/20190530095232/http://www.onairvideo.com/croquis-cafe-photos2.html

>> No.5083159

>>5081788
>shoulders too broad
fag

>> No.5083255

>>5083144
Based Revanchist

>> No.5083265
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5083265

>>5081193
Lineart done, tried doing her skirt but gave up
Maybe I'll color it later
>>5081742
Miria-taichou is cool, strong, and sexy

>> No.5083329
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5083329

I tried to draw TP Zelda but it reminds me of something else..

>> No.5083334
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5083334

>>5083329
Also Mipha anatomy is funny. Doing this made me realize that 99% of Mipha fanart has incorrect crotch placement/leg length

>> No.5083371
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5083371

Feedback please? Trying to make it as a storyboard artist

>> No.5083463
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5083463

I've been working on this lately
(Apparently the sketch layer wasn't saved on the jpg tho)

>> No.5083481

>>5077028
Oh my god, you broke his neck

>> No.5083485

>>5078785
I know your artwork doesnt have shading in it but i think this would benifit a lot from a bit of shading

>> No.5083488

>>5081114
Not enough dark value. Looks flat because of that

>> No.5083493

>>5081756
Feet are to big, unless that's what youre going for

>> No.5083496

>>5082003
Yeah she looks like a who from whoville

>> No.5083570

>>5083371
You need a LOT of work on your anatomy. Colors are actually pretty nice, but you'll basically never be using color.

>> No.5083595
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5083595

Doing shitty fanarts in between commissions

>> No.5083687

i love the OP image. whoever drew it, bless you and keep going. it has so much soul that i have to open it every time im scrolling through the catalog

>> No.5083794
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>> No.5083824

>>5083463
wow. Got any more?

>> No.5083825

>>5081762
What are those, sausages??
No really, what sre those?

>> No.5084074
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>> No.5084164

>>5075116
blessed taste

>> No.5084169

可愛い

>> No.5084696
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>> No.5084726
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>> No.5084845
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Merry Christmas /ic/.

>> No.5085300
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5085300

is messy lineart like this considered a style or is this chicken scratch?

>> No.5085504
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5085504

Another request, still experimenting with my line art
>>5085300
Messy line art is 100% a style, look up Hayashida-Q and Jorge Zaffino. It still takes skill to make it work though.
IMO yours looks like chicken scratches.
>>5083463
Very nice anon love that color palette. Do you have the sketch layer hidden or are you drawing it straight on?
Also how are you coloring that line art?
That head shape (the chin, and what I think is the mouth) seem odd though, but it's a wip so I can't tell clearly.
>>5084726
Cool design anon, love that face
>>5083334
Is that official? Either way authenticity is secondary to appeal when it comes to fanart
>>5084845
To you too, anon

>> No.5085507

>>5083265
man the sketch was so cool and then the lineart ruined it. i do this too

>> No.5085608

>>5076901
simultaneously based and cringe

>> No.5085613

>>5082492
the google reverse image search turns up absolutely nothing

>> No.5085816
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5085816

What brush in CSP gives you this coloring effect?

>> No.5085863

>>5085613
It does for me, various pages gives the title of the anime.
Anyway it was the Fate Illya spin-off anime.

>> No.5085928

>>5078954
this is great, but shouldnt she be closing the other eye?

>> No.5086972
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5086972

Any and all critiques welcome, I would like input before I commit to lining

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5087047

>>5086972
Her left hand looks oversized but other than that It looks pretty nice anon. I also think you could have distorted the perspective even more towards the bottom, but that's just a personal thing.

>> No.5087063

>>5086972
>>5087047
The left hand looks good as it is, making it smaller would dull the proportions.

>> No.5087064

>>5086972
Try giving it a very basic value block-out. That clarifies proportions.

>> No.5087091

>>5083595
shogi, yo :0 nice drawing too!

>> No.5087229

Merry christmas, faggots

>> No.5087236

>>5087229
Christmas was yesterday cunt

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5087359

>> No.5087395

>>5087091
Not me, friend, but thank you

>>5087047
I was thinking something similar honestly. I'll give it a shot then post results. Also I feel like her left hand (the raised one) is awkward in general and im still open to redrawing it doing something else. Just not sure what yet

>> No.5087400

>>5087359
Neck could be a little longer or the head could be rotated downward to add more drama because she looks bored imo but its looking nice so far

>> No.5087491
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5087491

>>5082817
my christmas present for myself is treating myself to a personal drawing guilt free

>> No.5087503
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5087503

new anime face style test

cute?

>> No.5087514

>>5087503
Her outstretched hand is broken. Also the face is cute but a smidgen too big for the head

>> No.5087525
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>>5087503
different anon, edited it a tiny bit, hope this can help u

>> No.5087669
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tried doing a nice sky like OP, feel like I failed on the ground though

>> No.5087749

>>5087091
Well thank you!

>> No.5088015
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>>5085504
Colors done. For once they look decent
Not too sure about the background though, kept it dark but it looks a bit weird to me.
>>5085507
Yeah I see the issues, was a bit too precious with it and lost a lot of the forms.
I can always draw her again so it's no problem.

>> No.5088165
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>>5087047
Threw on a pinch filter and it made a world of difference

>> No.5088242

>>5085816
...
Gpen over gradients.
Have you never colored anything before?

>> No.5088425
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>> No.5088428

>>5088425
Pizza is too 2dimensional

>> No.5088462

>>5074963
It looks good for the planning stage, really want to see the follow up.

The only thing I'd consider fixing would be the lower torso and maybe the length of the arm so it lines up with the ground she's sitting on better.

The placement of the lower leg off, kind of like it's not attached at the hip.

From the thumbnail sketch to the right its clear you have a good grasp of the proportions you want so maybe consider another iteration if making edits takes a bit too long.

Hope that helps!

>> No.5088483

>>5087491
Very good present, adore the way your draw in the detail. Can't wait to see the next progress piece.

If you post elsewhere to me know so I can see your other works!!

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>> No.5088728

>>5088719
Face is looking good, but is he supposed to have tits

>> No.5088866
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>>5088483
Thank you so much anon! my insta is big.nika

>> No.5089238
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>> No.5089300

>>5089238
that would be extremely painful

>> No.5089442
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My take on a DTIYOS thing.

>> No.5089459

>>5088866
Do you have a Twitter?

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>>5089459
its @bignika_ :) im not as active there as on my insta but I'll try to post frequently

>> No.5089481

>>5089474
Sick, ty.

>> No.5089483

>>5089474
>>5089481
Oh, I'm already following you lol

>> No.5089515

>>5089474
hey, the underage's back.

>> No.5089550

>>5089515
Yeah I had a bit of a chuckle when I realised she had stopped posting in these threads shortly after she passed the ban-able age.

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>>5089515
>>5089550
Haha, I stopped posting for a bit because I felt guilty towards the helpful anons that I disappointed with repetitive mistakes, needed some time to absorb the information handed to me.

>> No.5089630

>>5088242
Nope. Mostly why I'm asking.

How do you do that?

>> No.5089632

>>5089591
Yeah they were getting pretty harsh I felt. It was hard to tell who was crabbing you and who was actually trying to help. Still though it looks like you've been branching out a bit with what you're drawing and how you're doing it so good job man.

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>>5089632
oh god I didn't realise how much I clogged the thread, thats my bad. Thank you anon! hopefully I can make them proud

>> No.5089676

>>5089669
No worries man. At least you were actually posting art unlike half the people complaining. The Hero that /alt/ needs and all that.

>> No.5089845

>>5089591
I don't think anyone was crabbing, you just had unrealized potential that was wasted on doing only front facing simple drawings. You're doing more interesting things now. You do what you like at the end of the day, but this is a critique board.

>> No.5089902
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Thoughts on my inking? I don't normally do digital stuff.....

>> No.5090183
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5090183

idk how to do backgrounds

>> No.5090728
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Needs to be cleaned up a lot but how's it so far

>> No.5090760
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>> No.5090840

>>5076901
super duper cute gib blog

>> No.5090845
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>> No.5090846

>>5082113
>>5082116
cute
>>5088425
based

>> No.5090865
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all I draw is lineart

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>> No.5091218
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I need this typography here. Is it not too distracting?

>> No.5091238

>>5091218
Oh, that's very cool. I don't think it's distracting, but maybe a less generic typeface.

>> No.5091255

>>5091218
the most distracting thing here is the convergent line with the ground and the lady's jacket is that meant to be on purpose

>> No.5091269

>>5091218
make the womans jacket longer. The one continous line destroys the sense of depth.
(unless that was your intention)

>> No.5091272

>>5091238
I'll try something else.
>>5091255
Ahh I see it now. I will fix it.

Thanks guys.

>> No.5091273

>>5089238
lookin good

>> No.5091529
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>>5090865
that's very appealing

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>> No.5091852
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more detail

>> No.5091925
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>> No.5092141

Anyone knows artists who draw stylized similar to Toni Infante?

>> No.5092167

>>5091852
This is awkward to look at, but can't explain why.

>> No.5092173

>>5092167
the positioning of the arms, try actually doing that post irl and you'll find out.

>> No.5092281

>>5090845
Charming
>>5090760
Nice rendering

>> No.5092283

>>5087669
idk what he's supposed to be doing but the limbs are too long

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>>5091529
>expect to get dabbed on
>nice reply instead

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>>5091529
>expect to get dabbed on
>get nice reply instead
/i/ has ruined me..

>> No.5092701

>>5091852
The arms and hands are a bit fucked up senpai

>> No.5092839
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>> No.5092841

>>5074749
dont try to connect the shadows, hatch away from them so the shadow fades to light

how could you not see that? just look at the shit you posted. its literally right there...

>> No.5092843

>>5075432
what is it with furry degenerates making dope art

>> No.5092871

>>5092839
Why are her clothes tattered and torn?

>> No.5092991

>>5092839
wonderful as ever renji

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>> No.5093192
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5093192

ok that 2b drawing was a failure

here is a new face style test with a different workflow

>> No.5093204

>>5093192
I like it anon! Only nitpick is the expression on the mouth looks a little strange

>> No.5093454

>>5092871
barely escaped the pedos

>> No.5093458

Altbros i need help, when painting a character, should i start the painting by choosing a midtone shadow and then adding light and darker shadows or should i already start with the lightest value and then i add all the shadows (which lots of anime style artist do, like krenz)?

>> No.5093484

>>5093192
yeah this slaps. good job

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>>5093550
nice

>> No.5093658

>>5093192
wheres the back of her head

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I hope this one will be better bros
I can't keep disappointing you like this..

>> No.5093678
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>> No.5093688

>>5093678
neck too long and the arms don't seem to be properly attached to the torso, learn some fundies first

>> No.5093707

>>5093688
I'm just enjoying myself today with chibis. It's fuck fundies day. No tryharding today. But thanks for the feedback anyway, I appreciate it.

>> No.5093831

>>5093550
good

>> No.5093833

>>5093661
nice body but weird face

>> No.5093895

I've gotten a reply already but any additional input would be greatly appreciated.
>>5093834

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>>5093833
is thi sbetter bro

>> No.5094106
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>> No.5094124

>>5092871
character gimmicks

>>5092991
thanks

>> No.5095051
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5095051

what do you think about this face style bros

>> No.5095077

>>5095051
your constant sucking up to crabs is just pathetic at this point. Grow a spine and learn to see for yourself what's good or bad ffs.

>> No.5095166

Finally back weeeeee

>> No.5095177
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>>5089442
Coloured.

>> No.5096189
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>> No.5096223
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Trying new shit for my holidays.

Keen to fuck around and maybe model/ draw more of this wench.

>> No.5096226

>>5096189
Erry nice, best girl

>> No.5096270

>>5096189
that rendered jacket looks out out of place when everything else is flat or sloppily painted.

>> No.5096274

>>5096270
I see
I'm trying to find a balance because I want some rendering, but since I can't do it properly, I have to rely more on drawing I think, which I can't slightly less I think

>> No.5096319

>>5096189
based panam poster

>> No.5096334

>>5096274
what I've seen people do is leave the skin less rendered, but render clothes and hair more.

>> No.5096384
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>>5096189
>>5096274
Hey anon, a few things.

Generally with painterly anime styles, one thing that's done a lot is fading the linework into the actual painting via a combination of overpainting on top of the linework and recoloring the lines themselves where applicable. This helps fade the lines into the surrounding colors while still keeping them as separating elements.

You've also overemphasized some of the values on the jacket and underemphasized some of those on the shirt. What you're really going to want to do is round out the forms of your work with shading and color, which isn't something that you've really done much of at present. It doesn't seem as if you've thought very heavily about the shapes present in the jacket, and have also been afraid to paint outside of your lines to provide additional volume where necessary.

As >>5096334 said, a lot of people will render the skin to a lesser degree than everything else, but you're still going to want to give things a sense of roundness via subtle shading and highlights. It's ultimately all about casting light around the rounded portions of your forms and creating divisions via color that point to a semblance of detail. Or, this is how I try to handle it, anyway.

Also, don't forget that highlights and shadows have colors based on the color of the light and the nature of the material it's being cast upon. There are some mismatched colors and values in your lighting work here that seems to stem from a lack of consideration as to the materials you want to render and the lighting that you want to portray.

I hope all this helps anon. Best of luck finishing your drawing.

>> No.5096403
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5096403

bored as fuck and on some anime shit.

>> No.5096409

>>5096403
fuck, I just noticed how dislocated the left shoulder is. Too late to fix that now though ugh

>> No.5096424

>>5096189
>coomerbrain drawing worst girl
unsurprising

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>>5074230
wip ( ̄ω ̄;)

>> No.5096552
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dorf

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wip
>>5096189
booba

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I am a simp

>> No.5096738

>>5096189
I like this one and the last one but they're doing so bad in likes. I think you're stuck with people that like waifus eating food and nothing much else.

>> No.5096754

>>5095177
nice! Update your insta with your sfw stuff.

>> No.5096758
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I gotta finish this before 2021

>> No.5096767
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why am i here

>> No.5096771

>>5096758
What am I looking at

>> No.5096783

>>5096223
Got blog? The style of the chattering mace(?) looks familiar.

>> No.5096796
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does ic/ know what this style is called and where it came from? It's popular in the danganronpa community and I really like it. Do y'all know how I can emulate it

>> No.5096824

>>5096758
>dude random and quirky lmao
I cant tell what is happening. Maybe you should reconsider what you're drawing.

>> No.5096838

>>5096796
You mean the tumblr style?..

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i want to fucking die

>> No.5096848

>>5096839
For women and children the cranium size needs to be exaggerated a bit compared to the jaw, and the jaw rounded out more. Also the eyeline contour should be slightly lower than center. Keep 1 eye distance between the eyes

>> No.5096851

>>5096838
wait- this was is the "tumblr" style? I thought that was more along the lines of sjw uggo features

>> No.5096853

>>5096796
It's called a "comic" anon, they became popular in the 20th century and you simply need to copy the way they draw details.

>> No.5096860

>>5096853
are there any sources where I can properly train myself

>> No.5096974
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>>5096848
thanks, it actually helps

>> No.5097447

>>5096783
>>5096223
haha, never mind. Just found it on my insta feed. Thought it was you. Good stuff man, can't wait to see more from you.

>> No.5097558

>>5089845
Of course, I never disagreed with that. I still have persistent bad habits but I'll keep trying to branch out, I really am grateful for the criticism given to me

>> No.5097802

i remember there used to be an artist that used to paint nice anime girls that used to post here. Forgot their name though but I remember it started with awa or awan with a bunch of numbers behind it anyone remember the actual blog of the person?

>> No.5097934

>>5095051
Is this Panam from Cyberpunk 2077?
Also, move her hairline up a bit, her forehead is too small imo.

>> No.5097938

>>5096851
Everything you don't personally like that uses lines primarily is tumblr style my dude.

>> No.5098047

>>5096587
i like your hard edges doctor

>> No.5098070

>>5097447
Oh shit, bless you, I typically refrain from posting Instagram/ artstation details on here since they have my full name attached and 4chan can be odd at times.

>> No.5098119
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Hello, I got commissioned to draw 10 stand alone inked subjects of various cartoons. It's my first official commission and I wanna make sure I'm worth my salt. Before I ink them can I get some critique?

I don't think I'll add the spring on this one but I didn't really know how to make the pose look logical with the height difference. Hoping the feet made it look like he jumped.

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>>5098119
Some are kind of rough, just needed to get it onto paper. And suggestions for the feet? I know they're wrong but I am too /beg/ to know how to fix it.

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>>5098119
Again with the legs funky legs.

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>>5098119
I don't think the perspective is quite right on this one but does pass anyway?

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>>5098119
I wanted an exaggerated standing pose buy I don't think I emulated it well. His feet look too floaty and his body seems to be in the wrong place. Any suggestions or am I just nitpicking?

>> No.5098152

>>5098126
look up disney idle poses for reference, specifically mickey mouse stuff he has pretty dynamic standing poses

>> No.5098237

>>5097802
he literally made the op image

>> No.5098405

>>5098237
yeah I just realized lol what's his blog again?

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Is her ear positioned correctly? I don't know if I should've moved it farther left and up... Also, her hand is weird, is it? I had a pretty precise idea of the gesture in my head, but guess it ended up looking like shit 'on paper'. Halp?

>> No.5098486

>>5098405
https://twitter.com/awan0918/

>> No.5098491

>>5098486
thanks!

>> No.5098493

>>5098491
np dude

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>>5083485

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>> No.5098938
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I've been learning how to mix markers and airbrush.

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>> No.5098952

>>5096758
I've figured it out after all this time. You're murakami's spiritual successor

>> No.5099114

>>5094106
This is great

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>>5096509
update. gonna the rest next year

>> No.5099428

>>5098938
>>5098939
fantastic

>> No.5099510

>>5099428
Thank you

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this girls body is so obscene even the ACLU would refuse to defend it

i will fix the issues i just noticed after ripping my cock off

fucking alphabet soup organizations

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What is /ic/'s opinion on photomanipulation? Is it cheating? I used it to do the background on pic related.

>> No.5100603
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>>5074230
Would someone redline this for me? would be much appreciated. I'm not working from reference images, just anatomy, and I don't have my anatomy model with me.

I know the eyes are a bit misaligned, hopefully, I can correct it later with digital, but really the arms and waist I need redlining.

>> No.5100819

>>5100603
What waist? You cut off the image at the ribcage. And she clearly stole her arms from t-rex.

>> No.5100971

>>5098871
eating a burger...?
Seriously? Couldnt you have drawn it doing literally anything else.

>> No.5100975

>>5100603
shoulders should be the width of around 3 heads side by side.

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getting my new yr's pic ready

>> No.5101291

>>5101257
booba...

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Not sure about the perspective around the legs

>> No.5101664
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okay this is littered with anatomy mistakes (especially with the head and hand), but that's not what i'm focused on.

how the fuck do you render clothes? i'm fine with the hair and skin but, i've looked up so many guides before, none of them work/can't follow them/they don't stick

i use clip studio paint

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>>5096758
fuggin dope

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>>5100975
That's for men. Women about 2 or 1 and a half.