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4822391 No.4822391 [Reply] [Original]

so i am currently making this. its supposed to be pocahontas n john smith cuz i like the movie. its close to being done i guess. anything i could change to make it nicer?

>> No.4822463

It's all very airbrushed. No clear sense of light and as such, form. I'll be frank, it's a bad piece, my man, and it's not something that can be fixed with just a few alterations here and there. Move on to something new and study your fundies more.

>> No.4822471

>>4822391
Not bad friend

>> No.4822609
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4822609

It's coming along

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>>4822609

>> No.4822656

What is her expression supposed to be? Why does she look like she is being the victim of a necrophile?

>> No.4822662

pls stop painting eyebrows and hair with individual strands pls

>> No.4822665

>>4822609

It's not. You are polishing a turd.

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>>4822609
>It's coming along

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>>4822609
ah, the depraved joy of polishing the turd, i know it too well

>> No.4822688

>>4822391
post your reference so we can help more! if you dont have a ref there is a problem. Its a very hard scene\shot to pull off

>> No.4822743

>>4822391
Ew interracial sex.

>> No.4823563

>>4822656
im not great at expressions??? how do i fix it :-((

>> No.4823573

>>4822391
Needs more hard round

>> No.4823773

>>4823573
I’m gonna LOOM

>> No.4823834

It looks gross looks like sweaty meat

>> No.4823842

>>4822743
*based interracial sex
Only way it could be better is if it was a white woman being bred and having her lineage defiled, giving birth to dark and yellow skined children as a breeding pig
>>4823834
kek

>> No.4824187

>>4823842
Americans....