/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

[Anonymous No.4583372]

Hey, /ic/, what do you guys think of these redesigns for Yandere Simulator? Honest curiosity. I ask because this developer for the game has been getting talked about a lot right now and I found two Kiwifarms threads about him; one of which was about his designs. I like the school girl and nurse, but I don't like the teacher very much

[Anonymous No.4583373]

>>4583372

[Anonymous No.4583380]

>>4583372
>>4583373
All of these suck.

[Anonymous No.4583383]

>>4583372
I'm pretty /beg/ in art and having an eye for design, but I do think these look pretty good. I don't like the faces though and the teacher's new outfit looks like something a grandma would wear

[Anonymous No.4583387]

>>4583372
this belongs on /v/

[Anonymous No.4583390]

>>4583380
What do you think about these that suck? I can agree about the grandma teacher, but the nurse and school girl I think look good. To be fair though theres not much you can mess up with a schoolgirl.

The faces are ugly though

[Anonymous No.4583395]

>>4583387
why would it belong on /v/ for? I get it's a game, but i'm talking about the designs and art

[Anonymous No.4583396]

>>4583372
Why are people still giving that autist art

>>4583383
Both are good

[Anonymous No.4583409]

>>4583372
Kiwi farms is full of trannys and roasties, their opinion despite how shitty yandev is doesn't matter

[Anonymous No.4583428]

>>4583372
What annoys me most about these isn't even that they make the design worse, it's that they can't fucking draw or render and make it look worse regardless of design.

[Anonymous No.4583432]

>>4583372
>>4583373
>>4583383
Garbage.

[Anonymous No.4583550]

>>4583383
>>4583373
>>4583372

The game is a stupid fetish game, removing the stupid fetish elements defeats the whole point.

[Anonymous No.4583567]

>>4583372
I don't like the super porny outfits in the first versions, they're just too much and look silly instead
but the second ones all have weird ass faces

also, why the fuck is anyone giving free art to this crazy autist

[Anonymous No.4583572]

>>4583550
the actual fetish is the guro stuff though

[Anonymous No.4584184]

>>4583383
This looks really cute Anon. Giving her longer sleeves and a longer skirt would also make it easier for her to hide weapons compared to her normal outfit. Maybe consider changing the stockings to crew socks?

These are still characters from a shitty fetish game but kudos to you.

[Anonymous No.4584188]

>>4583572
But he wants the guro to involve big tit women with their thighs out in the open

[Anonymous No.4584214]

>>4583390
>To be fair though theres not much you can mess up with a schoolgirl.
that's some basic beg thinking

[Anonymous No.4584229]

The first ones can be a bit much, but the redesigns can go too far. The game is fun and stupid in an anime world so no need to keep everything real.

Teacher should keep hair and cleavage but have the longer skirt, tights and collar. No expression change, deletes original personality

The nurse is actually legit better. There's no real indication of any personality in the first. Your redesign is fun and informative

Yandere-chan's original design is perfect. It's actually iconic at this point. I can see what your trying to do with the face, but it's an expression she should have by default, only with her senpai

[Anonymous No.4584233]

>>4583372
>current year
>still giving money to that
How long has the "game" been in development?
10 years with all the help and money he got for basically doing nothing and outright refusing help from experienced programmers and such?

If you value your future as an artist, don't associate with the guy or the game.

[Anonymous No.4584249]

>>4583372
>>4583373
>>4583383
all trash but the rights are constantly worst.
understand the appeal of that VN or whatever that shit is, sjwtards stop inserting yourselves everywhere

[Anonymous No.4584254]

did you kiwiniggers not get the message the last time you tried to get validation on /ic/?

[Anonymous No.4584383]

The art and designs are shit and that's the wrong uniform for an "18" year old Japanese student to wear.

The idiot isn't going to finish his game, he's banking on all the money he made from his idiotic followers lmao.

[Anonymous No.4584435]

>>4583372
>>4583373
>>4583383

Did a feminist make these? Looks like something /r/mendrawingwomen would do

[Anonymous No.4584436]

>>4584383
>that's the wrong uniform for an "18" year old Japanese student to wear.
if this isn't autism it's something worse

[Anonymous No.4584457]

>>4583372
>>4583373
>>4583383
Who is this aimed for?

[Anonymous No.4584465]

I feel like all of these redesigns, while charming in their own way, miss the point of the look of the game which is Generic Japanese highschool Harem Anime. The game is supposed to look trashy because it's just like my japanese animes guiz.
Anyways even if you weregoing for a more realistic look, these haven't gone far enough.
>>4583372
The jacket looks even more weird with the red dress covering up the breasts as normally jackets like that would go up to the collarbone. The dress is still too short for formal wear and would be at least at the knees. The makeup is too heavy for school anyway.
>>4583373
This to me is the worst redesign. As why would she still be wearing a skimpy halloween nurse costume, she should either be in scrubs or have a lab coat and jumper if you wanted to do a nurse. Also, while the sock idea is nice, why would anyone put socks above tights. It just looks bad.
>>4583383
This one is the best but you basically just swapped a summer uniform for a winter one. The shirt would probably be better short sleved with a jumper or vest instead, but that's just a nitpick. The looseness is better and the skirt is nice too. Also if you were aiming for prestigious, the characters would look better wearing a white blouse and blazer.

All in all, it just looks like you redesigned it to be a less fetishtistic game but you went only half-way with it. This takes away from the tone the designs are supposed to illict, i.e. dumb harem bullshit. If you wanted to make more serious designs, then you need to change the characters clothing completely.

[Anonymous No.4584468]

>>4584436
Was that VN ever finished?

[Anonymous No.4584480]

>>4584468
it has a beginning and an end and some good content in-between, but not to the level of princess trainer, no. Also, the relative lack of CGs and the fact that you mostly stay in the headmasters office, rather than cycling through locations to encounter different side characters, hurt the immersion factor quite a bit imo.

[Anonymous No.4584502]

>>4584233
There are worse tho. Like giving money to Star Citizen devs.

[Anonymous No.4584526]

>>4583372
i hope he kill himself with a shotgun during a stream

[Anonymous No.4584558]

>>4584457
muslims.

[Anonymous No.4584721]

>>4584465
Oh, I didn't design these myself. I just found it on Kiwifarms. I saw some other stuff in there, but the posts were very old and to be honest, a lot of the submissions didn't look very good.

It was this https://kiwifarms.net/threads/fix-alexs-shit-designs.31778/

[Anonymous No.4584729]

>>4584383
Why do people keep associating the sailor collar for something only middle schoolers wear? It isn't and you should educate yourself more.

[Anonymous No.4584734]

>>4584254
I'm the OP. So wait, people from kiwifarms came on here before? What for?

[Anonymous No.4584762]

>>4583390
how can you possibly think the nurses outfit is anything but a disaster?

[Anonymous No.4584764]

>>4584436
>>4584729
It's not like he's gonna change them anytime soon. All he'll do is just keep the models like that because he paid
$5 for the pack and it saves him any volunteers who "help" him.

[Anonymous No.4584773]

>>4583372
>>4583373
>>4583383
completely tryhard trying to remove every inch of sex appeal from the characters
the nurse is by far the worse
why the fuck would she have a whole goddamn sweater on under her suit?

[Anonymous No.4584775]

>>4584762
I like both. Maybe I didn't make it clear enough, but I get that it's a fetish game with characters that are meant to be sexy and while I do like 2 of the redesigns, I don't think they would fit the game. Especially not with the way they redraw their faces. I do think the nurse needs to have a little retouches here and there to show off her personality more, but the original is okay too.

No idea why some people here think I made these though, I was just curious about some of these. And for that matter, I'm curious to know why or what Kiwifarmers spoke about on here.

[Anonymous No.4584857]

>>4583372
>>4583373
>>4583383
why does a game that has such an outlandish concept need to have realistic designs

[Anonymous No.4584881]

>>4583383
She's supposed to be emotionless.

[Anonymous No.4584899]

>>4583372
>>4583373
Silly OP, when YanSim has kidnapping people and torturing them in a basement as a mechanic, I'm hard-pressed to see it having professional looking teachers.

Also, why the fuck does Mulberry or whoever still draw for him anyway?

[Anonymous No.4584913]

>>4583373
>>4583383
>those fucking noses
American, why is it always American?

[Anonymous No.4584914]

>>4584899
She's as crazy, and lazy, as him.

[Anonymous No.4584921]

>>4584721
I agree. To be honest a lot of that thread seems to be people circlejerking about how horrible the designs are without understanding why they work in Yansim.

[Anonymous No.4584949]

>>4583372
Aren't all of these characters just generic Unity store assets? I'm surprised by how lazy this project is.

[Anonymous No.4584953]

>>4584921
I’d say the og nurse design is bad on the grounds of being too generic to remember but that’s the entirety of these designs outside of the protag hogging the search results for yandere.

[Anonymous No.4584970]

>>4584921
Yeah, I'm a /beg/ and I'm definitely no expert, but I can certainly say that they keep exaggerating and circlejerking when a lot of the resigns and edits are pretty bad. I don't think the redesigns I posted were perfect either, I don't see why they made the tits or hips smaller and the faces uglier for an anime game. But I do like 2 of the redesigns on its own, not for the game though.

[Anonymous No.4584995]

>>4584558
But I can still see her face and shins

[Anonymous No.4584997]

>>4584435
but men are good at drawing women?

[Anonymous No.4584999]

>>4583372
How does it feel to fap to your own characters, answer truthfully.

[Anonymous No.4585190]

>>4583372
>>4583373
>>4583383
Why is it that when people criticize yandev, instead of going for the real problems like insanely lazy cobbling together of stock shit and making fans pay for it, they go for something so fucking gay like the characters being too sexy. No shit it's gonna be sexualized, whether the game is shit or not you were never the target audience. Silly designs? Really? It's their stale, overdone nature that's the problem. God I fucking hate internet moralfags. Kiwifarms is forever a bunch of offended teenage girls and moms who get mad for all the wrong reasons. They are an embarassment to the online shaming movement.

[Anonymous No.4585196]

>>4584997
*men are good at drawing attractive women
girls who spend a lot of the online on forums are of the type that hates seeing people prettier than them, and hate sexualized women because it offends their unsensual selves. Even though in the west we never got quite the same faggy otaku who hate seeing any non-faggy dudes, we got the female equivalent.

[Anonymous No.4585975]

Yawn. Woke Twitter ruining everything as always. They are supposed to be sexy for Christ sake

[Anonymous No.4586068]

I've seen people who talk about this shit game and complain about the teacher being a rival because of her predatory nature and I just don't get why? She's clearly not meant to be portrayed in a good light and the variety of different sorts of rivals is fine.

Why are other people okay with fiction having student/teacher relationships but with this shit it's suddenly bad

[Anonymous No.4586078]

>>4584480
That sucks, it's actually one of the very few good looking western VNs.

[Anonymous No.4586090]

>>4586068
>watch a medium made for virgins/neets/losers
>get angry when they potray fantasies for virgins/neets/losers
I miss when anime was niche, now everyone likes generic shonen anime but hate everything that makes anime stand out from western cartoons.

[Anonymous No.4586094]

>>4584721
>https://kiwifarms.net/threads/fix-alexs-shit-designs.31778/
hahahaha, they cant be serious

[Anonymous No.4586107]

I understand changing the clothes but why change the faces at all? The characters don't look animey anymore and they lose all their sex-appeal.

[Anonymous No.4586120]

>lets add an ugly western nose to everything

[Anonymous No.4586231]

>>4586120
>mmm yes, beautiful single line noses
anime noses look like shit
actrually, anime faces in general look like shit

[Anonymous No.4586252]

>>4586231
Ok r*ddit.

[Anonymous No.4586272]

>>4586252
the word "Reddit" isn't filtered.

[Anonymous No.4587090]

>>4586231
>actrually, anime faces in general look like shit
Opinions on Araki's faces?

[Anonymous No.4587250]

>>4587090
Not him but as much as I like his art, the way he draws faces most of the time come across as a bit unappealing for me. That's just my opinion though

[Anonymous No.4590393]

>>4583373
wtf, that ugly nose