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Post your work, others tell you what level you are. Low medium high, beg, int, pro.

>> No.4493966
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>>4493884
what level is sanic

>> No.4493992
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o-okay.

>> No.4493998

>>4493966
high.

>> No.4494007

>>4493992
too lazy for vanishing points / 10

>> No.4494021
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>>4494007
the one roof is off on right side. correct me if im wrong, you are welcome.

>> No.4494029

>>4493966
Low beg

>> No.4494031

>>4493992
High beg

>> No.4494034

>>4494031
>>4494029
lmao

>> No.4494036

>>4493966

Either low beg or high pro. There is no in between.

>> No.4494043
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4494043

Be honest. I get enough empty compliments on Instagram.

>> No.4494045

>>4493992
I like how this is good and kinda bad at the same time. Of course the actual marks and texture are amazing, but the perspective is extremely stiff and blocky. Also what happened to the colors? Yellow/brown color thing going on with grass and houses contrasts with the beautiful blue sky and white clouds in the worst way possible. It's like two different paintings glued together.

>> No.4494051

>>4494036
I think you're confused. LOW, MED, HIGH IS HE SAME AS BEG, INT, PRO. OP is just silly.

>> No.4494055

>>4494043
Solid Intermediate. Maybe another year and you'll be pro.

>> No.4494056

>>4494051
No its low beg, med beg, high beg, low int, med int etc.

>> No.4494061
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4494061

Luckily for me, I already know that I'm mid-/beg/ since so many people tell me that I am in prior threads.

Gotta keep drawing and grinding to get better.

>> No.4494063

>>4494051

Anon, each tier has its own further breakdown of low, med, and high. So mid /int/, low /pro, high /beg/, etc.

>> No.4494068

>>4494043
Mid to high /beg/.
Can't put someone in /int/ based on floating heads alone.

>> No.4494069

>>4494063
I see now. Okay I'm retard.

>> No.4494073

>>4494061
It depends what aspect we're talking about. You're coloring technique shows some skill but your drawing is horrible. You should probably stop coloring and work on improving your drawing ability. A lot of fur fags tend to have this problem. Don't get ahead of yourself. Build up your fundies otherwise it's never gonna go beyond beg.

>> No.4494077

>>4493992
there is nothing wrong with either of the buildings being out of frame. I think this looks pretty good but it seems as though the buildings are squeezed in just so they can be in frame, either pull back or pull in next time

>> No.4494078

>>4494073

Ok, that's good to know. I'm actually a bit surprised, since I always liked my baseline drawings more than my coloring. Always felt my coloring to be absolute shit.

Is there anything in particular that makes the drawing itself horrible? Would like to fix it.

>> No.4494087

>>4494061
needs loomis. you could be really good if you studied the fuck out of anatomy for half a year.

>> No.4494146
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P sure im beg/high, hoping that ill improve more in values

>> No.4494166

threads like these are retarded

like 4channers out of all people could rate art please

but even then if the average 4channer was a good critique the rating system is retarded in itself

art can be critiqued in so many ways

maybe the coloring is good while the anatomy is not yet the rating scale in this thread only goes from bad to good

that's just retarded and the rating itself becomes meaningless

>> No.4494180

>>4494166
Stop talking.

>> No.4494303
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4494303

stat my mural ic

>> No.4494377
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4494377

>>4493884
Not happy with the face but don’t know how to fix it

>> No.4494382

>>4494377
your still working on this lol

>> No.4494390

>>4494382
No it’s done but I I wanted to roast myself before you guys could

>> No.4494400

>>4494146
Honestly the colors and rendering are pretty good but the proportions are tragic

>> No.4494501

>>4494377
beg int

>> No.4494515

>>4494087

Ok. Thanks for letting me know.

>> No.4494872

>>4494515
np fren keep drawing and then draw some more. you'll make it.

>> No.4494893
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>> No.4494897

>>4494043
Mid /beg/

>> No.4494899

>>4494377
High /beg/

>> No.4494902

>>4494893
Actually post finished work. Then I'll tell you.

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Pls rate. Worked hard, tried to get ratios/proportions/volume definition okay, still came out really airy and poor. (I mainly draw animation, but use life drawings to push myself).

Also sorry photo is shit, could not for the life of me get a better one

>> No.4494927
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>>4493884

Pls rate. Worked hard, tried to get ratios/proportions/volume definition okay, still came out really airy and poor. (I mainly draw animation, but use life drawings to push myself).

Also sorry photo is shit, could not for the life of me get a better one

>> No.4494931

>>4494927
Low /beg/

>> No.4494937

>>4494927
you should read drawing on the right side of the brain and do all the exercises to improve

>> No.4494939
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>> No.4494952

>>4494939
High /beg/

>> No.4494957

>>4494709

>> No.4494959

>>4494927
High beg

>>4494931
dude no. Those faces are not that terrible.

>> No.4494962

>>4494939
Holy shit Mattias Pilhede posts on 4chan

>> No.4494963

>>4494377
Anyone who says beg is a major crab.
Sure some things are off like the leg furthest from the viewer being longer than the other. But overall it has soul. Its def int.

>> No.4494964

>>4494939
high /beg/

>> No.4494967

>>4494959
That’s low /beg/, something like this is high /beg/ —-> >>4494939

>> No.4494971

>>4494937

Thank you! I’ve been slowly working through keys to drawing atm when I’m not committed to other stuff.

>> No.4494975
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4494975

>>4493884
Do it

>> No.4494976

>>4494967
Can't compare a cartoon to fine art to be fair

>> No.4494979

>>4494146
Looks like you dumped all your points on rendering.

>> No.4494983

>>4494963
The background is good, but the character is stiff and lifeless. Which prompts it to be high /beg/

>> No.4494986

>>4494400
this dude is right. your drawing is shit but its a good render.

>> No.4494988

>>4494927
low -med beg

>> No.4494990

>>4494377
Im confused with the scale of the character, is she supposed to be a giantess?

>> No.4494991

I think the people should always pyw if they're giving any comments or critiques...

>> No.4494992
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>> No.4494994

>>4494939
gotta go with high beg but if you shade it, this could easily be int. youre good at drawing.

>> No.4494999

>>4494377
Drawing is not shit. Long legs can be stylish in a way... besides with the foot down, the whole leg elongates and gives a moe giant look. But if he wanted to go a little more realistic, he could chop half an inch from the leg and It'd be good too.

>> No.4495007

>>4494377
med int. the composition id weird and the pose is so stiff. and the shading isnt great. im looking at the bootsfor example. but some things are great. the hair, the transpaernt part of the dress, the face, the stars. the hands look odd too. overall tho its the best thing in this thread so far by far.

>> No.4495009
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>>4494902 I don't do much finished work most is just sketches and learning things

>> No.4495011
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4495011

clean your lawbster bucko

>> No.4495015

>>4495009
mid beg

>> No.4495016

>>4494952
>>4494962
>>4494964
>>4494967
>>4494994
Thanks for the honest assessment guys. I'm actually all fired up to work even harder

>> No.4495018

>>4494976
Forget the cartoon part. It’s the colors, pose, and anatomy you should be focusing on.

>> No.4495020

>>4495018
anon it was done in pencil and it's a portrait. Yes the anatomy is kind of fucked but I wouldn't call it low beg, the rendering shows some skill and the expressions are not that bad. Lets settle for med beg

>> No.4495025

>>4493966
>>4493992
intermediate
>>4494043
post a constructed work done without copying a photo. a still life or a drawing from imagination
>>4494061
I don’t like the style but you’ve got potential to make money doing porn in the future if that’s your goal. high beg
>>4494146
bad, learn the anatomy of the skull and how hair works. stop using textures as a crutch. beg
>>4494303
based schizo furry whatever the fuck. schizo cannot be classified or rated on a normal scale
>>4494377
high int almost pro but a little juvenile. >>4494893
I really like the guy at the bottom, int
>>4494927
based soulful realism high beg
>>4494939
if you straight up “studied” or rather lifted it, high beg. if you at least did the pose on your own, int

>> No.4495028
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4495028

I don’t really want to know, but this is about as finished as anything gets around here

>> No.4495032

>>4495028
you’re a pro tablebro

>> No.4495038

>>4495028
Soulful af

>> No.4495040
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4495040

Quarantine works on oil

>> No.4495042

>>4495040
med int.

>> No.4495043

>>4495040
Mid-high /int/

>> No.4495045

>>4495040
pro and gmi

>> No.4495046
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Done both traditionally and digitally, but rate mine

>> No.4495048

>>4495043
YOU CANT DO INBETWEENS. REEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

>> No.4495049

>>4495046
med beg

>> No.4495050

>>4495040

Well done man! Putting the time to good use!

>> No.4495053

>>4495046
Low /int/

>> No.4495054

>>4495040
Good int. The lack of backgrounds and eye expressions in the middle of the red tape ones are sketchy. But the values in the face are good. What I fear is that you may be very dependant of photographs for your art. I can tell from the volume in the left ladies faces versus the black wall spikes with a very flat volume.

>> No.4495059

>>4495025
Thanks, don't think im int but it's nice when others call me it

>> No.4495061

>>4495025

Thank you for compliment on soulful, I tried to capture them as I remembered them!

>> No.4495068
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4495068

This was meant to be a quick sketch but ended up painting it.

>> No.4495077

>>4495068
Cute but those hands, I'm sorry but it's high beg

>> No.4495087
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4495087

t. /neverfinishes/

>> No.4495088

>>4494975
>>4494927
solid /beg/
>>4494992
int
>>4495009
could be int or high beg, would need to see some realism (i like it though)
>>4495028
alt
>>4495040
good
>>4495046
high beg

>> No.4495090

>>4495068
>chalk brush outline
>not resizing picture

med beg

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>>4493884
How about this, for a dtiys

>> No.4495103

>>4495087
+1 for dasha ref, very cute

>> No.4495105

>>4495101
high beg. You're still discovering yourself as an artist.

>> No.4495106
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Eternally garbage.

>> No.4495109

>>4495106
meg beg (fetish art)

>> No.4495111

>>4495101

Tbh I would say high beg or low int, love the composition and colors.

>> No.4495113

>>4495077
>>4495090
Thanks for taking the time to reply. I will be looking for further advice in beg threads and practice the fundamentals.

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>>4495106
>>4495101
>>4495068
>>4495087
>>4495068
>>4495046
>>4495028
>>4495040
>>4495011
>>4495009
>>4494975
>>4494927
>>4494939
>>4494377
>>4494303
>>4494146
>>4493884
>>4493966
>>4493992
>>4494043
>>4494061
The definitive tierlist. Subject to adjustments as more anons post.

>> No.4495140

>>4495132
We all suck lol

>> No.4495157

>>4495054
Thanks, for the compliment, yes you are true, I really rely on photographs although 2 portraits in there are pieces for friends so I used photographs. Nonetheless, I really feel like I should grind fundies

>> No.4495160

>>4494377
Grind more gesture

>> No.4495171

>>4495028

Up for debate. If you want to keep going, you are high int... but I feel I've seen actual publications with your sort of style making money out there, which I guess would make you /pro/ of some kind?

>> No.4495181
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>>4495132
Sorry man, you should really took me of the advanced tier list, and put me aroubd the low int tier.

Although oil is in did a flashy trad medium, as in illustration, im not advanced at all

Pic related

>> No.4495188

>>4495025
>>4495132

>>4494061 here. Thanks for the feedback. Glad to better know where I stand, now. Not sure why one of you feels I have what it takes to do porn, but I'll take that as a compliment lol.

>> No.4495191

>>4494043
I follow you on insta, and its funny to see that you really flourish when you draw in this style, specially compared to other works.

Keep on grinding, you are in the right way!!

>> No.4495192

>>4495181
I don't know much about /trad/ but I'd assume it's more difficult than digital so you had a bit of an incentive. I'll adjust it once more anons post.

>> No.4495193

>>4495132
My self-loathing demands that I be lower on the list.

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>>4495088
Here's part of a still life I haven't finished. I don't do much realism stuff

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>> No.4495205

>>4495181
med beg

>> No.4495208

>>4495195
low int.

>too much air brush
needs more texture. But not bad at all.

>> No.4495215

>>4495101
Looks really good in a thumbnail.
This is definitely a piece you should remake in the future when you have a bit more experience in the medium,

soul is there nonetheless

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>> No.4495220
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>> No.4495221

>>4495208
Ah I didn't use any airbrush, I used only hard round and some blending. I didn't want to get caught up in texturing it as its my first still life so I wanted to get accurate colors. Thanks tho

>> No.4495223

>>4495132
no offense dude but this is all wrong and you have shit taste

>> No.4495225

>>4495221
np. black background is soulless and the table is really bad, but your blending is amazing for a round brush, damn.

>> No.4495228

>>4495220
I see tricks but lack of fundamentals. Tricks confuse me as far as how other people consider them for ranking

>> No.4495229

>>4495223
Do you want to be included or not? Just pyw

>> No.4495230

>>4495223
so do a better one

>> No.4495232

>>4495225
Nothing you said is constructive in any way

>> No.4495241

>>4495225
Yeah it's still WIP, I see what you mean. Been drawing for a bit more than 3 months so im just on the grind

>> No.4495256

>>4495181
ive seen your stuff. its hit or miss, even in the examples you just provided. that face of the left is absolutely hideous.it screams beg. on the right is a high beg. middle is pretty nice but i remember you sucking at hands and low and behold you hid them. you are a low int. mid int on a really good day, but fuck that face on the left is ugly.

>> No.4495258

>>4495216
low beg

>> No.4495259

>>4495220
>>4495228
its a high beg

>> No.4495262

>>4495040
med or high int

>> No.4495264

>>4495028
med int

>> No.4495268

>>4495232
ThEN FUCKING JUSTIFY WHY THE LIGHT ON THE BANANA IS WHAT IT IS WHEN THE BACKGROUND IS BLACK. Fuck off lol

>> No.4495270

>>4495259
So tricks count for going mid to high in a single tier?

>> No.4495272

>>4495268
Thanks for arguing on my behalf

>> No.4495277

>>4495272
No you have no idea that is why. Just a troll.

>> No.4495281

>>4495268
theres a spotlight on the banana. what does the background have to do with it?

>> No.4495283

>>4495277
>here is some bad feedback and you have no idea why I'm giving you bad feedback

Um okay...

>> No.4495286

>>4495268
The picture was taken in golden time of sunlight and the background has some greys in it I didn't get in atm

>> No.4495289

>>4495268
Take a deep breath anon. It makes the bananas stand out more, they probably just wanted to focus on the fruit for this study and not the background

>> No.4495290
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It's my second "serious" drawing ever

>> No.4495292

>>4495290
Grind harder

>> No.4495294
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>>4495290
Beg. Go study anatomy via the skeleton and musculature.

>> No.4495297
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This is barely my 5th drawing

>> No.4495299

>>4495292
I will. This is the first time in my life I've ever been interested in drawing in my life, and I feel I can actually get ok-ish now.
>>4495294
Appreciate the tip anon, will work on it.

>> No.4495301

>>4495297
God tier

>> No.4495302
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im ngmi rn bc i havent been drawing ha ha but whats my tier boys

>> No.4495313
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Quick still life

>> No.4495336

>>4495302
Med-High beg. Don't rely so much on patterned brushes. Study composition.
>>4495313
High beg. Use more hard edges. Don't use five strokes when one will suffice. That broad light stroke on the front is perfect, whereas the highlight on the rim is over-rendered and could have been done in a single light stroke.

>> No.4495338
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a sketch of a snake

>> No.4495349

This thread is interesting to me because i don't usually think about what sort of "tier" my work is in. There are some things i'm good at and a lot that I need to improve.
I get paid to do art, and i've been at it a long time, but I guess i'm not really a "pro" in the /ic/ sense. I guess medium/high int?

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>>4495349
picture didn't attach for some reason

>> No.4495364

>>4495289
HuuUUUUUUUUUUUU HUUUUUUUUUUUUUUHHHHHHH KAY. OOO-OOOKAY..

UUUUUUUUHHHHHHUHHHUUUHH I-I IM GOING TO MAKE IT.

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>>4493884

>> No.4495902
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last digital thing i did before my computer shat itself.

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>>4493884

>> No.4495956

>>4495046
low int

>> No.4495958

>>4495106
low beg if that

>> No.4495959

>>4495902
low beg

>> No.4496061
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I'm actually pretty curious what you faggots think

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>>4495256
I wont argue woth you because I'm aware of what you are saying, but dont say that I hid hands in a painting full of them

Ps not saying that they are good hands or that I draw them well, but im not afraid of showing them in

>> No.4496078

its impossible to tier a piece of work without knowing how much time they spent on it and their reference

>> No.4496082

>>4496078
Just gauge it on how it looks, anon. No rules, only tools.

>> No.4496095

>>4496061
Low beg.

>> No.4496098

>>4496061
Lowest of the low beg

>> No.4496099
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4496099

really curious what you guys think, i consider myself between low beg and mid beg. black boxes are there to censor my username lol

>> No.4496106

>>4496078
Not necessarily. It's easy to see when someone is beginner / intermediate range in one piece of work with use of foundational skills like values, linework, lighting, form, etc. When going more intermediate / advanced, then I'd agree that more samples are needed to demonstrate whether someone has relied heavily on references and is colour picking or is successfully utilizing skills like colour mixing and using initiative with techniques like checkering instead of being a human photocopier.

>> No.4496108

>>4496099
i know you’re fishing for (you)s but you’re really good what’s your blog?

>> No.4496110
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4496110

still sitting around beginner/mid beginner probably.

>> No.4496117

>>4495941
med - high beg.

>> No.4496118

>>4496098
>>4496095
HAHA just what I thought, I'll always love this place <3

>> No.4496123

>>4496099
it's appealing enough to safely be low int

>> No.4496133
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4496133

>> No.4496135

>>4496099
I'd say mid to high beg and like everyone else on /ic/ you have floating head/body syndrome. You should NOT get called /int/ unless you can demonstrate that you can draw at least one figure in an actual setting in perspective. People are freely giving out /int/s in this thread for work that's way too simple and doesn't show off a full range of skills.

>> No.4496139

>>4496133
FIX YOUR FUCKING FACES YOU PIECE OF SHIT

>> No.4496147

>>4496099
I like your work. Can you post more? Got a blog?

>> No.4496156

>>4495338
beg

the care into the texture is neat but everything in general is way too lacking. no convincing form, lighting, or composition; shit isn't accurate to a snake; huge outline isn't doing you any favors when you could have some interesting lost edges in there and just let the red light do all the talking.

>>4495357
int

would rather see something much more polished to and maybe not too stylized but looks good enough

>> No.4496158

>>4496135
>People are freely giving out /int/s in this thread for work that's way too simple and doesn't show off a full range of skills.
it's ok anon

maybe they'll get complacent over the compliment and plateau, letting the rest of us catch up

>> No.4496159

>>4496135
>You should NOT get called /int/ unless you can demonstrate that you can draw at least one figure in an actual setting in perspective

understood! i havent done any recent pieces with that so i will give it a go soon.

also, sorry because english isn't my first language, what is floating head/body syndrome?

>> No.4496162

>>4496159
the tendency to only draw floating heads and figures that aren't grounded

>> No.4496167

>>4496159
No background, object interaction or just a face without a body (neck up)

>> No.4496172

>>4496108
i'm very shy about my work but im happy you think it's good! i would like to improve before i share my blog with /ic/

>> No.4496177

>>4496162
>>4496167
oh okay, i will try to draw more of that. thank you so much ^^

>> No.4496188
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4496188

On what tier am I?
What should I work on to get a higher tier?

>> No.4496190
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4496190

>>4495290

>> No.4496193

>>4496188
>those tits
got me.

>> No.4496196

No point in posting I already know I am beg

>> No.4496214

>>4496061

Stop chicken scratching bro

>> No.4496220

>>4496193
...I just want to get good enough to start selling furry porn. Multiple breasts seemed like a reasonable idea at the time.

>> No.4496224

>>4495290
Low beg

>> No.4496230
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4496230

just fuck my shit up senpai

>> No.4496231

>>4496230
soul tier

>> No.4496234

>>4496230
values dont read well and the structure is undisciplined. the only thing not beg tier is the color pallet

>> No.4496239

>>4496230
Nice. What >>4496234 said could be read as a compliment honestly

>> No.4496243

>>4496234
How can I improve the values? As for the structure, this was indeed kept very loose. I do have stuff were my linework is more precise

>> No.4496244

>>4496231
thanks mate! really did try to have a warm, glowy feel to it

>> No.4496259
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4496259

>>4496147
i'm a bit hesitant about sharing these ones since you can see my scratchy and unconfident lines so clearly haha

i do have a blog, but i would like to improve before i share my work with /ic/, i'm not proud of my work yet

>> No.4496277

>>4496243
>How can I improve the values?
There is not enough contrast between your light and shadow zones. Bill Perkins videos on new masters academy are good if you can obtain them.

>> No.4496279

>>4496259
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Jt6Yv7bByj4

>> No.4496315

>>4495349
>>4495357
Roll and roll motherfuckers, rock and roll

>> No.4496321

>>4496259
You like meeeeeen

>> No.4496348
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>>4495201
>check the next day
>every picture got a (You) but mine

>> No.4496356

>>4496348
I know that feeling man. It's just sad.

>> No.4496388

>>4496348
I'll give you a (you): you're a beginner. I can tell you're trying with your anatomy which is good, but you don't have enough knowledge to really make things work. You need to study muscles, how they connect and affect each other (for example, you don't understand how raising the arm affects the pecs and the breasts on top of them). Your figure is also strangely stiff for a pose that I assume is meant to be dynamic; look into line of action, push the movement more, show that in the form. The face is a lot worse than the body, flat and completely symbol-drawn. Do some studies and don't just copy anime eyes, try to understand how eyes are shaped. I suggest working on thinking of planes rather than outlines, that'll really help you make sense out of your muscles and improve your faces.
Good job trying for a dynamic pose and full body, though. You'll figure things out if you keep at it.

>> No.4496391

>>4496348
It's probably too subjective/abstract, making it hard to judge it objectively

>> No.4496395

>>4496391
Oh you actually linked your work, thought you did the chicken

>> No.4496400

>>4496133
asuka fag is 100% int.

>> No.4496402

>>4496348
u are beg

>> No.4496403

>>4495201
High beg. Anatomy is fairly good except for the hand which looks swollen. Head is a bit iffy, chin is too much to the right. Also you sketched this really lightly, I would outline it darker

>> No.4496404

>>4496190
is that missalice? fuck dude i would take 100 farts directly in the mouth for some snoosnoo

>> No.4496405

>>4496133
High beg, that woman with her tits out has such a horrible face and hands

>> No.4496407

>>4496230
high int

>> No.4496410

>>4496110
low beg

>> No.4496413

>>4496259
its good. med int. very appealing and clean.

>> No.4496414

>>4495228
What are some fundamentals to work on

>> No.4496415

>>4496133
high beg

>>4496230
med int

>> No.4496426
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4496426

tfw Satan is yo daddy.

>> No.4496492

>>4496426
Low to mid beg

>> No.4496519

Can you do me as well?
>>4496188

>> No.4496532
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>> No.4496565

>>4496388
>>4496403
thanks m8s. this seems to match up with what i've been trying to work on since.
except the shoulder raising - pec strecthing - breast moving interaction somehow hadn't entered my thoughts at all.

>> No.4496581

>>4496230
This is nice, but there's a lot going on. If you can figure out what you want to focus on and then go from there. Maybe recreating some pieces from others might help you a bit.

>> No.4496591
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4496591

AAAAAHHH

>> No.4496632

>skipped

>> No.4496642

>>4496632
>skipped but OP still put me in the chart

>> No.4496645

>>4494166
its fine its entertaining lol

>> No.4496657

>>4496519
>>4496188
I think you should work on your contrast, the figure would be more interesting with some stronger highlights and some touches of colour (like blues/purples in your shadows). Also you need to work on consistency, you render different body parts very differently: the head/neck are more loosely painted (and a bit blurry imo), the chest is more tightly blended, while your lower legs have some really nice planes and dark outlines. I assume this is due to the varying length/thickness of the fur but it doesn't read very well, the thighs look a bit lazy.

If your goal is to be good enough to sell furry porn then I think you're there in terms of skill, but are you planning to use this style or something more "porn-y"? This doesn't read as sexual to me at all, the pose, colours and ambience all point towards horror. This also won't catch people's eye when they're scrolling through social media and jerking off, they'll be looking for bright, saturated colours.

>> No.4496673

>>4496657
Thanks for the critique man, I appreciate that!

>> No.4496718

>>4496581
thanks for the critique! I am looking at some of the ghibli anime backgrounds, seeing what they did. They really strike a nice balance between detail where it needs to be, to more simple shapes

>> No.4496732
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4496732

Pretty sure I'm /beg/

>> No.4496736
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>> No.4496738

>>4494021
Sorry I forgot about this thread, try checking the sides of the houses that are facing away from the center.

>> No.4496745
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4496745

>>4496736

>> No.4496767

>>4496736
Is this crab-chan or something?

>> No.4496771

>>4495270
Yes, tricks are important.

>> No.4496785

>>4496426
What a MESS.

>> No.4496792

>>4496767
It's Nico and the original bully

>> No.4496800

>>4496732
Great self awareness

>> No.4496802

>>4495106
I can't really give solid criticism but I really like how you do the hair, and I feel like the anatomy and proportions are pretty spot on. Try some more shading maybe? Like what you do on the bottom

>> No.4496804

>>4496426
Aaaamahzin (low int)

>> No.4496812

>>4494055
>>4494068
>>4494897
You're all shit at grading that's day 1 /beg/ tier.

>> No.4496821
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>> No.4496827

>>4496812
People are overrating it for some reason, but it's also not literally day one.

>> No.4496829

>>4496827
Sigh okay maybe week 2.

>> No.4496831
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4496831

I'm pretty much lost in my own isolated island. What should I work on for me to have a chance at making money off of commissions?

>> No.4496840

>>4496831
Composition, story, color, and light. In reverse order.

>> No.4496854

>>4496591
low to mid beg

>> No.4496859

>>4496732
the ear is basically just an oval and the riht side of the face is one smooth curve. and you cut the hand off... i men yea maybe mid beg if i want to be generous.

>> No.4496867

>>4496821
low to med beg. the eyebrows are terrible. the eyes are pretty over simplified. the skull as a muzzle like a dog. the hatching is horrible, youre gettig there with the noses. but i think you should still to trad to get te hand of things.

>> No.4496871

>>4496831
the face is really nice anon. especially the lighting. youre an int of some kind for sure.

>> No.4496876
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>> No.4496884

>>4496840
>>4496871
Well at least I'm getting close. Thanks men!
I got a clearer roadmap on what I should do for now.

>> No.4496891

Crazy how somebody's /int/ if they can render monkey or draw anime

>> No.4496894

>>4496891
that's what separates ints from begs

>> No.4496916
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4496916

i have never finished a piece

>> No.4496991

>>4496891
IC standards

>> No.4496996

>>4496891
Yep

>> No.4497004

>>4496876
cool stuff. not complete enough to give you a rank im afraid. got blawg? ig?

>> No.4497006
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4497006

tfw beg for years

>> No.4497009

>>4496916
high level beg

>> No.4497016
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4497016

oki

>> No.4497022
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4497022

Courtesy to Bojack

>> No.4497024

>>4497006
Spend more time painting and polishing. The cat looks nice but you can clearly take this further

>> No.4497026

>>4497016
Low /int/

>> No.4497027

>>4497016
Beg, no amount of rendering and filters will hide your drawing skills.

>> No.4497041

>>4497006
FUCKING HELL THIS SCARED ME A BIT, I have a cat and this looks like my living room at night.
But yeah, you can take this further.
Good job spooking the shit out of me though.

>> No.4497072

>>4497041
Haha thanks, I definitely want to return to it as I get better at painting, but the main point was to be spooky. It's not an original idea, I think similar compositions float around /ic/ and elsewhere. But glad you got spooked.

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>> No.4497129

>>4496532
low pro

>> No.4497131
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>> No.4497141

>>4497118
high beg

>>4497016
low beg

>>4497022
med beg

>>4496426
high beg

>>4496591
med beg

>>4496736
high beg ( dude work on perspective and this would be great)

>>4496745
low int

>>4496821
med int

>>4496831
high beg ( stiff symmetrical figure, need to study color theory) rendering on face is actually not that bad.

>>4496916
high beg. practice drawing and anatomy. proportions are off, her head is tiny.

>> No.4497142

>>4497131
med int

>> No.4497163

>>4497118
at least low int.

>> No.4497166

>>4497131
low int.

>> No.4497171
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>> No.4497178
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4497178

Lower thirds is for text, so please mind the emptiness. I'd assess myself as high int or low pro.

>> No.4497185

>>4497171
Low intermediate. Clean line work and it looks nice at a glance. But some things are off like the table is lopsided, shape of her left shoe is unappealing, legs are stiff, her neck seems too long.

>> No.4497191

>>4497129
not even int

>> No.4497200
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4497200

>>4493884
Here's my study for today. Studying appeal and female features.

>> No.4497205

>>4497171
Somewhere in the middle of beginner. Your objects on the table are in completely different perspectives, everything is flat and your linework is very insecure, it makes it look like you traced shoddy 3D models. You might want to figure out your lines on paper for a while (it's easier to build up line confidence on paper since it feels more natural) and you should learn how to use boxes to construct your objects and figures.

>>4497178
Some of your lighting is fucky but this looks like a WIP, so I assume you'll correct it; your drawing skills seem solid and your colour palette is well chosen, but the way you've placed your light on some of the clothing (upper thigh, bandana) really flattens things by not following the form. I hope you'll reflect more light on the gun too, it'd be realistic and look really interesting.
I'd put you somewhere in between mid and high int btw, a little higher if you fix the stuff I mentioned.

>> No.4497206
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>>4493884
this s not finished though

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>>4497200

>> No.4497210

>>4497171
mid beg. nice lines. but come on how long is that neck and torso? proportions of the body need a looooooot of work.

>> No.4497233
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>> No.4497238

>>4497205
Thanks for the feedback! I'm >>4497178
I'll be honest, I already considered it finished but I'll take your suggestions and see how far I can go with it again, I might do another post to see how realistic I can get it over the summer!

>> No.4497311
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>> No.4497322

>>4497118
>>4497131
Pro

>> No.4497328
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4497328

just finished this up

>> No.4497378
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>> No.4497392
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4497392

I wouldn't even know what I'm considered, all I know is I have plenty of room to improve.

>> No.4497457

>>4495302
what up can i get uhhhhhhh more feedback or am i just a little loser

>> No.4497478
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>> No.4497482

>>4497478
low int

>> No.4497493
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4497493

Not super clean, but should be an okay gauge

>> No.4497496

>>4497478
High /beg/

>> No.4497509

>>4497493
low - mid beg

>> No.4497528

>>449683
>>4497311
>>4497328
Mid beg

>>4496532
>>4496591
>>4496732
>>4496821
High beg

>>4497378
>>4496736
>>4496916
>>4497233
>>4496745
Int

>>4497206
Pro

>> No.4497529

>>4497493
cringe and bland

>>4497233
>>4497131
>>4497118
>>4496591
>>4495181
good shit keep working

>> No.4497609

>>4497206
best

>> No.4497623

>>4497178
Looks awesome to me. Somewhere in int

>> No.4497628

>>4497206
Call me crazy I don't like the face. Looks like Corey Feldman or something.

>> No.4497631

>>4497311
Low beg but content is very good.

>> No.4497656

>>4495025
As you requested. A full body sketch with construction.

>> No.4497669

>>4497509
>>4497529
Any advice?

>> No.4497991
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4497991

i only have sketches recently, the other stuff i drew i can't show off for a few months. this one was done in under an hour or so without any refs. its kinda soulless tho!

>> No.4497993

>>4497392
med int

>> No.4498018

>>4497991
Hard to tell from sketch but looks like mid to high int

>> No.4498084

>>4497991
post your epic maymay sketches pine! xD

>> No.4498089
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4498089

>>4498084
say no more

>> No.4498094
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4498094

pls bully

>>4496259
>>4496099
cute guys! I like your work anon, Post blog bls

>> No.4498141
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4498141

>>4493884

>> No.4498151

>>4497478
Borderline int
>>4497478
int
>>4497991
high beg
>>4498094
borderline int
>>4498141
mid-high beg
>>4497328
beg
>>4497233
low int
>>4497311
beg
>>4497200
borderline int
>>4497178
int

>> No.4498163
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4498163

>>4495025
>post a constructed work done without copying a photo. a still life or a drawing from imagination

Hey m8, I have plenty of drawings from imagination.

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4498169

>>4498163
theyre not my strength i think like most people im much better with references but you asked to see these so here you go

>> No.4498175
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4498175

>>4498169
another. i

>> No.4498193

>>4498163
>>4498169
>>4498175
these are professional. definitely look into getting work in mobile games if you havent already.

>> No.4498247
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>>4498193

>> No.4498253

>>4498247
don't reply to my posts ever again. you WILL regret it.

>> No.4498303

>>4498253
shut up nigger.

>> No.4498348
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4498348

Wet on wet oil paintings

>> No.4498366

>>4498303
did you just say nigger?

>> No.4498372

>>4498303
>>4498366
daaaaamn he said the Hard R

>> No.4498730

>>4494303
would be based schizo outsider art if it weren't for the girl's 5th grade notebook doodle anime eyes

>> No.4498743
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zxczc

>> No.4498934

>>4498348
These are pretty good I'd call them intermediate

>> No.4499077

>>4498743
high beg

>> No.4499584

>>4498934
Thank you. Would you say composition is the weakest aspect or something else? I am most dissatisfied with composition and some of the foreground paints mixed too much so I lost contrast in the foreground which is a shame

>> No.4500096
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>>4493884
From imagination with no reference. 1.5 hours.

>> No.4500188

>>4498348
low int

>>4498743
mid-high beg

>>4498175
mid beg

>>4498169
high beg - low int

>>4498163
mid int

>>4498141
mid-high beg

>>4498094
high beg

>>4497991
mid beg

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>>4493884
Here's what I'm working on today. A few things unfinished.

>> No.4500439
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>>4500096

>> No.4500576

>>4494043
If you want criticism, make sure your solid lines are solid. Specifically the lips on the bottom one but elsewhere too. Any other criticism I'm not developed enough myself to comment reliably on

>> No.4500588

>>4499077
>>4500188
based ty

>> No.4500647

>>4500588
Np. Your faces are pretty good, but your bodies look wonky a lot of the time. I'd work on that.

>> No.4501430

>>4500439
int

>> No.4501444

>>4498094
don,t listen to these goobers. your pro. keep going and improving. and get into animation. it's the final form of illustrations, you can see your characters come alive.

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>>4501444