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What is /ALT/?
If you're looking for a place to post your cartooning then you've found the right general. This is /ic/s 1st and only merged hub where both Eastern and Western stylization can coexist peacefully, hence the double title. However, by community demand and long history, this is favorably an Anime general.
>Rules & Guidelines
(1) Any form of cartooning is welcome; so submit and receive feedback from others. (2) Please resize your images before posting. (3) Share your knowledge and (4) Remember to not be afraid of asking for critique. Most importantly I encourage you to keep discussion at a civil level, but you're more than welcome to share your opinions.
>I came for anime. Why does the image OP say cartoons general?
To distinguish from the anime study thread (janitor supported). Please post your studies there and personal work goes here.
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>Community Resources
Hitokaku Index
>http://www.asahi-net.or.jp/~zm5s-nkmr/
List of active livestreams
>Use twitch #art
>yoshikadu2011 https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCUx5dpO6d5gQ4KWNPc24CKw
FellowBro's Book Collection
>http://mediafire.com/?i44dwzkf9j9n8
Tutorial & Reference Collection
>http://pinterest.com/characterdesigh/
Japanese Tutorials & Documentary
>http://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?id=59317 (0033)
>http://iradukai.com/
References
>http://www.onairvideo.com/croquis-cafe-photos2.html
>http://www.eggazyoutatsu.net/eng/atarichan.html
>http://senshistock.com/sketch/

>> No.4332042
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4332042

hi /ic

>> No.4332048

>>4332042
There's nothing worst on this planet than eating with people.

>> No.4332066

>>4332048
more like the best thing on this planet is eating with people

>> No.4332101

>>4332066
>the best thing on this planet is eating people
Ftfy

>> No.4332104

>>4332101
Shut up cannibal.

>> No.4332108

>>4332042
kimoi

>> No.4332112

>>4332101
based

>> No.4332115
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>>4332042

>> No.4332126 [DELETED] 
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Cartooning!

>> No.4332407

I wanna draw

>> No.4332463
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>>4332042
Moe

>> No.4332550

how do i get sick overnight so i can stay at home and draw all day

>> No.4332555
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>> No.4332558

>>4332042
looks like fucking shit but i'm sure you're really proud of it arent you you tiny little cunt

>> No.4332560

>>4332115
>he doesn't draw a cute anime girl to interact with him every day

>> No.4332609

Where is giant loli fag

>> No.4332814
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4332814

Messed with this more

>> No.4332821

>>4332609
needs clarification

>> No.4332827

>>4332821
He means Rinfag.

>> No.4332830

>>4332042
>>4332463
Bbblog?

>> No.4332836

>>4332042
why is she drinking wine for lunch

>> No.4332844

>>4332836
why not?

>> No.4332884

>>4332558
pyw

>> No.4332892

>>4332814
i like this style, you got a blog anon?

>> No.4332893

>>4332884
no.

>> No.4332920
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Im not sure if the greyscale makes it less or more shit than the lineart

>> No.4332926

>>4332920
Awful.

>> No.4333018

>>4332926
What compels you to just be a dick? Did you stumble during your job interview today or something?

>> No.4333021

>>4333018
Just said what i thought. If you can't handle people's opinions on your "art" then just leave this place, whiny faggot.

>> No.4333028

>>4333021
I'm not the artist, just expressing my opinion on your little comment there. Also only literal 14 year olds spout intentionally unhelpful, inflammatory things and then respond with "can't handle it eh, heh, pussy"

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Made a fee touch ups. May turn this one into a short comic.

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>>4333031
>>4333034

*few

Anything look off and in need of s change? I hope to get this set inked and flatted by Wednesday.

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>>4333031
Face.

>> No.4333072

>>4333028
>I'm not the artist
Then just shut the fuck up and mind your own business.

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>>4333072
>mind your own business
lmao, seek help friend

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Disgustingly edgy but I'd be lying if I said I didn't have fun

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>> No.4333295

>>4333203
cute
>>4333092
how are the buttons on the vest supposed to work..?

>> No.4333354
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I know its shit BUT I need to get shit ON to improve

>> No.4333356

>>4333354
looks like a cardboard cutout
I appreciate your attitude though

>> No.4333366

>>4333356
>cardboard cutout
Yeah I'm not good at feeling (seeing?) form. The shorts I know I kind of just called in but any tips?

>> No.4333473
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current wip, adding drones next

>> No.4333483

>>4333354
Blog?

>> No.4333485
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4333485

A study that went sideways into some mech thing

>> No.4333490

>>4333473
Very cool any guides you’ve used to learn how to paint like that?

>> No.4333500

>>4333354
What strikes me the most is that there is not much depth in the pose. She seems to be leaning forward but you can't really see it in perspective. The drapery needs a lot of work, what helps is googling a clothing part and then you see many photos of the same item and notice the pattern of how the folds will go. What will help you achieve more depth is also the lineart, when it comes to art on Pixiv etc, you notice a pattern among different artists. What I'm doing is drawing the lineart with one constant size of the brush and then slightly erasing the center of the lines and thickening the ends when they meet other lines (sorry, I can't pmw at the moment but look for WIP from good anime artists (lineart only or lineart+flat color are the best to see what's happening). It makes a huge difference

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>>4333485
A study and a monster doodle - trying to use more dark regions in drawings

New pens are sooo juicy, strokes feel so good when their wet. I was forcing it with this really dry pen and didn’t realize was resisting me until my finger started to hurt.

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some drawings

>> No.4333648
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>>4333564
Finger hurts and I’m holding the pen goofy, i guess I’m done

>> No.4333656

>>4333473
I thought she has much bigger tits

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>>4332463

>> No.4333720

>>4332555
kino

>> No.4333855
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Thoughts on this?

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>>4331887
hello... i don't know what I'm doing for the most part. i'm just trying to get some line confidence and do my gestures and draw faster... these took way too long to make.
And I have a dreaful feeling regarding the pose with her butt up.

>> No.4333965

>>4333951
stop drawing nude children

>> No.4333975

>>4333855
Cool

>> No.4333976

>>4333951
you're a disgusting degenerate

>> No.4333983

>>4333951
keep drawing nude children, you're not a degenerate

>> No.4334004

>>4333951
MOOOOOOOOODDDDDDDDSSSSSS

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>>4333951
based based based

>> No.4334018
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>>4333965
>>4333976
>>4333983
>>4334004
>>4334011
thank you for responding..... i'm portraying the r*defigs on [s4s]...
I had a difficult time working with reference because i followed things too closely and had to go retouch a few things up to have them work with anime loli proportions so i'm very insecure regarding some things... if you see anything that doesn't look quite right or could use some improvement please tell me... thank you for your time and i really hope you have a wonderful day.

>> No.4334026

>>4334018
they look pretty good, best one is the one on the bottom right in the previous post, I think that the head looks more appealing when stylized like that. Keep going anon.

>> No.4334035 [DELETED] 

>>4334026
i feel a little defeated hearing that because it's the one pose i put the lease amount of effort into but okay i'll keep the head stylized like that thank you.

>> No.4334036

>>4334026
i feel a little defeated hearing that because it's the one pose i put the least amount of effort into but okay i'll keep the head stylized like that thank you.

>> No.4334042

>>4334035
I guess it's because it flows better, I can understand trying to go for the S4S look but I'm assuming that's taking you some getting used to. stay nice

>> No.4334045

>>4334018
It's very difficult to critique something like your drawing since it seems you've got the forms down to complement the manner of style you draw. If you are looking to surpass a plateau or expand outside of your comfort zone try to refine forms more while keeping the same simplicity. The tricky part would be conveying the different planes for the head and face while keeping all forms simplified.

>> No.4334055

>>4334045
more refined forms while still keeping things simple... Like maybe I should try putting them into a 3D space more and drawing them from all sorts of challenging angles... That sounds fun! Thank you, I understand the difficulty of critiquing something like this but I'll try to work outside of my comfort zone more regarding the forms, thank you very much.

>> No.4334067

>>4334055
>Like maybe I should try putting them into a 3D space

More specifically, the face but again this is why it is difficult to critique because the flat face is what helps compliment the figure because everything else is simplified with it. Consider studying mechanical perspective to help foreshorten forms more which would allow you to open more doors for you to describe these forms in space while holding on to the simplicity of it.

>> No.4334072

>>4334067
oh.
I understand. The face. I can probably make it look not so flat in some ways... I've seen it done I'm sure I have. Mechanical perspective? Okay, I'll look into it! Thank you again!

>> No.4334209

>>4334018
holy HECKING based

>> No.4334220

>>4333626
blog???

>> No.4334372
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>>4334072
funny running into you here! here's my quick and bad take on the butt pose, moved some stuff around. i think you are thinking too orthogonally, when the hips to legs would not remain the same. the furthest away one would be more hidden. try to imagine both legs as a box

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4334379

i'm making gacha-shit fanart but Arknights have some nice designs imo

just seen her head is fuggin huge so I gotta fix that

>> No.4334382

>>4333951
MOOOOOOOOOOOODS

>> No.4334395

>>4334382
whine more

>> No.4334401

>>4332042
>>4333092
>>4333203
>>4333626
soul

>>4332920
>>4333354
>>4333473
>>4333855
>>4333893
>>4334379
work is overall stiff or *just* missing the mark. but there is skill to be uncovered within you yet. keep drawing lots and you'll learn to overcome this roadbump

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>>4333683
Lol

>> No.4334422

>>4334401
Hey anon - gacha anon here

What do you think I need to work on? Would love the feedback so that I can push forward with improving

>> No.4334455

>>4333500
Thank you for all the feedback. Yeah it's way too flat I don't even know how I managed that. I'll start studying clothes and fabric more. And yeah I've been struggling with how to make the lines look GOOD, your method is interesting maybe I'll try that.

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>>4333648
I really like fishnets now - they are very satisfying to draw

Working on wrapping stuff around forms

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4334855

Practice sketches

>> No.4334858
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4334858

>>4333951
ignore faggots, keep drawing and practicing.

>these took way too long to make
just keep at it and you'll get faster eventually

>And I have a dreaful feeling regarding the pose with her butt up.
Her arms and hair have issues but, since the focus is on the butt, I think it could use a bit more subtlety to the curves.

>> No.4334865

>>4333683
kek is that doppel

>> No.4334879
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I'm not too political just love the aesthetics of nazi Germany.
Feedback very much appreciated.

>> No.4334885

>>4334879
kill yourself nazi nigger

>> No.4334932

>>4333072
faggot, your on a public forum, I'll take a shit on your chest as long as your here.

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>>4334746
Shoe

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>> No.4335268
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>>4335200
Meh i don’t know where this study was going, trying some stuff

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>> No.4335305
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>> No.4335317

>>4334026
>>4334042
>>4334372
it looks like shit faggots

>> No.4335324
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???

>> No.4335338

>>4335255
Nice

>> No.4335344
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>> No.4335380

>>4334746
Hot

>> No.4335408

>>4335317
He's deliberately going for the /i/ vibe with it though

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>> No.4335435

>>4335422
stay in /beg/ pls i really hate seeing your balloon people

>drawing a grid after the art
yikes

>> No.4335441

>>4335422
Yikes

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>> No.4335506

>>4335408
well he cant do it right. doesnt look like /i/ just looks like shit. his old work was much better.

>> No.4335512

>>4334879
perspective is bad and composition is boring also kys nazi nigger

>> No.4335514

>>4335422
Are you open to requests

>> No.4335598

>>4335512
thnks for the critique nigger, i'll work on it and make another one even better

>> No.4335643

>>4332830
@OekakiHam
@ohheythatfisher
>>4334220
@ndrph

>> No.4335670

>>4332558
based

>> No.4335719
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>>4335435

I couldn't care less honestly. pic related.

My art may be lacking, but i have been trying to watch vilppu anatomy videos and managed to hash out >>4335324 but nobody cares about that shit.

I haven't seen a single post in this thread that isn't lacking in some degree. even the really good ones are unfinished.

instead you just single me out, feh. I don't even know why I bother posting here, when i remember how hopelessly pathetic the AVERAGE /b/ 4chan poster is, i guess mathematically 50% must be even more pathetic than that.

congratulations i hope you make it, get your dreams to come true only to lose everything and die painfully from some horrible disease. fuck you crab.

>> No.4335730
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I enjoyed drawing this :)

>> No.4335731

>>4335719
Imagine being so boring that you put everyone to sleep.

>> No.4335885

>>4335255
Nice job

>> No.4335895

>>4335730
is there anything that you haven't enjoyed drawing?

always a fan of your dark/light inking economy

>> No.4335926

>>4333295
I imagined the fabric extends outward underneath the other flap :> I thought it was an existing concept but after googling it doesn't make much sense does it lol.
>>4335895
I started off by writing out the scene I had in mind but realised no one cares aha, thank you! ^^

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>> No.4336023

>>4336020
is that angelica from rugrats

>> No.4336029

>>4336023
stole her head, yeah

>> No.4336046

>>4336029
you shouldve drawn her haid on the body of a muscular man that wouldve been cool maybe

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>>4336046
thanks for the feedback, but i drew you instead

>> No.4336071

>>4336058
Just kidding, i'll try the muscular body

>> No.4336074

>>4336058
that is extremely cute
are you this guy? >>4327637

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>>4335268
>git commit -m “saving ink before coloring”
I was doing a head study, and it turned into a drawing

>> No.4336219

>>4335730
How did you emulate that ballpoint pen aesthetic

>> No.4336222

>>4336074
hes certainly not. that other guy is legitimately autistic or something

>> No.4336226
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tried to do some soft coloring but it looks kinda messy

>> No.4336235

>>4336219
I'm pretty sure he draws with a pen. He may have done some touch ups on digital but the base was on paper.

>> No.4336253

>>4336226
i really love how you colored the dress and hair. i suggest making the skin a solid color and only adding shade to the neck. also fix that hand

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4336275

>>4336121
I knew i borked it the moment i colored something with blue

Moving on...

>> No.4336290

>>4336253
yeah hands are still quite the struggle for me. thank you for the suggestions!!

>> No.4336424

>>4336235
that makes sense, the highlights on the skirt look digital which is why I asked

>> No.4336432

>>4336219
I used G Pen 3 on Krita, I guess the scratchy lines do come off as ballpoint hehe
>>4336235
I do normally draw with pen and paper but this time it’s completely digital :]

>> No.4336504

>>4335719
This is the biggest, reddit spaced, cope I've ever read on this board. If you want actual critique, go find the discords people post on the board, they are "usually" more helpful. You need to practice anatomy, practice drawing real people instead of getting upset at low effort shitpost.

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>> No.4336622

>>4335719
No one cares about >>4335324 because it's a boring as fuck subject matter. Being able to draw a human body good enough is supposed to be like a standard here, and the fact that you think that being able to draw the human body to a well enough degree that you expected it to get some (you)s for your accomplishments truly shows that you really still belong in the /beg/ threads.

You take your knowledge and skill and apply it to more creative ends, you make creative stuff with it. Just simply drawing a naked body in a boring pose and then slap some hebrew shit behind it to make it appear more "deep" isn't really that exciting, it's about as stimulating as an instagram post of some dude's butterfly/wolf airspray artwork. It's about as captivating as some chick's facebook post about her artwork and it's just literally a single eye with big eyelashes. If you keep letting your bitterness take over your ability to activate more than a single brain cell when it comes to subject matter then all you'll end up doing is shit like >>4335422 because you appear to be under some sort of belief that coomer artwork will get you more arbitrary (you)s

>> No.4336628

>>4335719
>managed to hash out >>4335324 but nobody cares about that shit.
If you admit it then why do you act like you expect people to care about it? Why are you getting so upset? If you keep getting buttblasted because no one is giving you attention then you're only really holding yourself back from being a good artist.

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>>4336275
More color practice, the greens were a better choice

>> No.4336793

>>4336612
>red velvet
based

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4336827

>>4335730
Doing some sketches for college, have to make an animation out of this woman soon ;;
>>4336790
I love seeing you work with colours, looks nice ^^

>> No.4336864
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>>4336790
Next drawing - There is no way that i won’t fuck this sketch

>>4336827
Thanks! That woman seems like she’s going to be a bitch to animate

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>>4331887
Thanks for putting my picture up as the thread image.

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office byleth

>> No.4337000
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drew a warlord guy

>> No.4337015
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>>4336864
Not sure what to do for the background

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>> No.4337023
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i need to buy a scanner

>>4332042
>>4332814
>>4333473
>>4333626
really like these

>> No.4337119
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>>4332609
still in it, still lurking, still sad

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>>4337119
>still sad
Tell us why you're so blue fren. Hope this webm brightens up your day.
http://i.4cdn.org/wsg/1580358863608.webm

>> No.4337148

>>4337119
Why are you like this? Are you autistic, ive only ever seen you draw these weird pictures. Its a fetish thing right?

>> No.4337150

>>4337022
very appealing clothes and style and such

>> No.4337186
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>>4337119
dont give up giantess-anon

>> No.4337189
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>>4337015
Tried new marker stuff - V15 is a champ, the background was cooler with the sketch, and i thought i had more monsters...

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>>4331887
drawing this dumb meme waifu

>> No.4337204

>>4337119
her torso is really short

>> No.4337221
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>>4337133
Thanks. Just feeling like it's difficult to stay afloat with everything that's happening in both real life and online.
>>4337148
It's a fetish thing, yeah. Pretty much just commissions lately too as I've gone full time on drawing giant ladies. Attached a non fetish piece I did with the free time I had.
>>4337186
It's difficult, but I'll do my best.
>>4337204
Thank you. I think it might have been the rendering/values that made it look a lot shorter than I originally plotted it out to be; I will keep this in mind.

>> No.4337229

>>4337221
>it's difficult to stay afloat with everything that's happening in both real life and online
Say no more fren, that's why we draw and paint to have a moment of just you and your work and everything else melts away.

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I drew this a year ago.

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>>4337262
And here's the remake I made tonight.

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Can someone help me with this?

It's supposed to be a satyr-esque monster pouring water out of a vase set in a shallow outdoor bath.

>> No.4337420

>>4337200
Where can I find more of your art

>> No.4337421

>>4337119
What’s your handle?

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>>4337421
https://twitter.com/Yilxaevum

>> No.4337538

>>4337420
sorry m8, i don’t post anywhere but here

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>> No.4337596

>>4337417
>Can someone help me with this?
No.

>> No.4337849

>>4337555
real noice blog?

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4337997

I guess I'll post this here too. From the imagination thread. Not sure if I like how it turned out but I'm glad I tried it.

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>>4337189
Some ref study thing - this is going to be a pain in the ass. Let’s just get this over with

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>> No.4338221
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i have been trying to add colors to my work to make it look more soulless!

>> No.4338230
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Did a quick piece trying to capture a "spooky scary cryptid captured on night-vision camera" vibe.

>> No.4338231

>>4338221
LUV IT

>> No.4338252
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>>4338022
Not going to lie, I enjoyed the ink on the clothes more than I thought i would

>> No.4338263

>>4338252

How do you go about doing frilly clothing? Do you plan it out from the beginning, or do you just do the general shape and then organically go from there?

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>>4338263
I draw little S’s C’s and V’s next to each other along the frilly edge, but I don’t connect them. Then I fill the crannies with ink. Then I connect it

Probably not the best example, but you get the idea

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4338351

Could I get any thoughts on this?

>> No.4338361

>>4337852
cool colors
>>4338153
her butt looks fake
>>4338160
lines too thick
>>4338221
good but twitterweeblike
>>4338278
why wont you go digital
>>4338351
scary colors https://i.kym-cdn.com/photos/images/original/001/299/115/089.jpg

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>> No.4338417
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>>4338252
I spent longer coloring the background than the girl. Also tried backlit light source - non-trivial...

I think i hate backgrounds more than faces

BG75 is best marker

>>4338361
>go digital
Markers are more fun and feel impulsive, my digital always feels so calculated and overworked

>> No.4338463

>>4337997
Really cool, saved

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hi would love some critique on this

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>>4338417
This is gorgeous, I’m a fan of the colours

>> No.4338612

>>4338417
>digital always feels so calculated and overworked
I know how you feel, there's like this untold lesson everyone has to go through with digital when they want to try painterly being that you just have to stop giving a shit about your layers and not spam undo every other brush stroke

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>>4331887
I'm trying to make a donut steel version of Rosechu and I'm not sure if I should include this skin toned part on the lower part of her face. It's already pretty similar to Amy/Rosechu and I'm worried that will put it overboard but without it I feel like it doesn't look right.

>> No.4338642

>>4338361
What's wrong with twitterweeb style?
>>4338221
Can you post your blog twitterweeb-chan?

>> No.4338675

>>4338627
thats dobson rose on the left right

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>>4338675
What do I do?

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heck

>> No.4338736

>>4338642
>What's wrong with twitterweeb style?
theres nothing wrong with the style but the fans of artists like that are always awful

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my scanner arrived, thank god

>>4338221
>>4338417
really like this
>>4337555
dont get lazy, wrap those lines on the wire around as 3D contours
>>4338230
Oleg Vdovenko does a lot of cool stuff like this

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4339056

Do I get rid of this fucking tail? while you're at it what can use work?

>> No.4339196

>>4337221
wow, so how's the freelance life? is it everything you dreamed it would be like? i guess it must be hard

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>> No.4339222

>>4335502
this is awesome!

>> No.4339274

>>4339056
I think the tail is fine, it would look more weird without it

>> No.4339415

>>4339056
just give it a rounder tip. also, shade as a cylinder so it doesn't look like a cardboard cutout.

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>>4338417
Mechs are cool - you can make any scribble into a robot. Tried a bunch of coloring techniques on the different parts. Trial and error sucks, but forcing myself to color everything.

Y26 says Mustard, but it looks like gold

>>4338580
>>4339004
Thanks

>>4338612
I just redraw over and over and never commit until the pose is just boring and stiff. I guess it’s the same as doing an undo on a macro scale. I also scrub the hue sliders like a DJ

>> No.4339674

>>4337221
A lot more self-discipline required, but a lot more freedom; the money to be earned is a lot less too, but that's the price of trying to work something off on my own.

>> No.4339748

>>4339205
based

>> No.4339749

>>4338221
niiice

>> No.4339793

>>4339674
Sorry, meant to quote >>4339196

>> No.4339798

Christfag is based
Youre all retards

>> No.4339800

>>4339004

Hey man, >>4338230 here. Thanks for the recommendation, looked up the guy. A lot of his pics remind me heavily of STALKER.

I like your pic - do you have a blog?

>> No.4339829

>>4338230
https://youtu.be/l6_0UIknW-A
Reminds me of Rubber Johnny.

>> No.4340386
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4340386

Finishing these off. What needs to be fixed and what expressions would you like to see?

>> No.4340433
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Was mindlessly doodling and out came something nice. :) Now to clean it up

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back to drawing

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i'm trying to variate my line thickness but i'm not sure if some of them are too thick if i'm trying to render in a typical anime style later. is there anything else i should fix?

>>4340433
cute!

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i'm trying to variate my line thickness but i'm not sure if some of them are too thick if i'm trying to render in a typical anime style later. is there anything else i should fix?

>>4340433
cute!

>> No.4340804

>>4339004
weird question but what scanner are you using?

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>>4339425
Got derailed doing another study

>> No.4340830

>>4340820
looking mighty fine so far tableguy

>> No.4340838
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scan of another sketch as well
>>4339800
@ranforestren (someone already took @ranforrestren)
>>4340804
Epson Perfection V19, got it because it was cheap and had amazon prime 1-day
Coincidentally its the exact right size for my 9 x 12in Canson Universal Sketch

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>>4340838
oops, i attached the wrong scan of something i already posted earlier >>4337023

>> No.4340986

>>4333951
>file deleted

Not based, but your art is awesome. I am working to up my loli game as well

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>>4338417
>>4336790
>>4336275
So good T_T Love your work.
>>4335730
Such a great dynamic pose
>>4335502
This one is interesting, is it finished?

A made something rather simple tonight.

>> No.4341312
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Requesting critique.

>> No.4341353
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>>4341312
Her hand is way too small look at it compared to the heel. Her arm shouldn’t bend like that
You always post her and I’m curious as to what your process looks like. Do you do studies? Do you construct at all?

>> No.4341389

>>4341353
I'll change it once I am done with the character sheet.

>process
I usually start with a gesture sketch and construct as needed. Sometimes I am confident enough with the pose, that I ca begin right off the sketch.

>studies
As needed, or if I seek something specific (drawing hands being the main one right now, anticipation for animation, and silhouette studies in the near future).

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>> No.4341405

>>4338417
I don't usually like your art but this is really nice
tfw I have the saber alter meido fig you used for ref

>> No.4341471
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asuka new sketch plesae help

>> No.4341482

>>4341471
please never stop drawing

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guro i might come back to idk

>> No.4341512

>>4341471
Head is too big, clavicle is wrong it feels like she had car accident. I know its still mess but entire torso is fucked, especially pecks and breast.
Face futures are kinda nice imo you put too many details that makes her less appealing. Her right check should be less visible in that view. Do not focus on details for now and try make everything simple. Its gonna be easier to spot whats wrong with drawing as whole. Keep drawing anon. You can make it.

>> No.4341516

>>4341471
Wow you really improved since I last visit IC The body seems a bit small. I think you've got the face pretty well, you should practise the body more

>> No.4341518

>>4341508
nice volumes. blog?

>> No.4341582

>>4341471
Good work I started worrying you offed yourself

>> No.4341586

>>4341508
twitr/devart please

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>>4341471

>> No.4341670

>>4341662
You have a slight misinformation about the arm. The elbow is at the same level or slightly above the pelvis. You drew it way too short.

>> No.4341671

>>4341662
you fucked it up again retard

>> No.4341674

>>4341670
>>4341671
okay you're right
im gonna go back to studying
im glad what I achieved with the face though

>> No.4341681

>>4341662
Them tiddies

Anon you’re good, just think more about where the arms are. It looks like you’re trying to foreshorten her right arm a bit, but it looks like it’s bugging her rib cage. Find a way to show that the elbow is moving away from the torso, or listen to >>4341670 because he’s probably better than me.

>> No.4341725

>>4341471
Luv her face. You're definitely improving.

>> No.4341835

>>4341670

>The elbow is at the same level or slightly above the pelvis

Since when?

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wip, any feedback regarding the design ? Also contemporary art from 1900 until now is good inspo from time to time

>> No.4341874
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>>4341849

>> No.4341943

>>4341849
Nice idea! I'd like to see this piece finished.
I personally prefer the pseudo-deco style of the amsterdam school to de stijl, but it's cool nonetheless.
A whole set of personifications would be brilliant; arts & crafts, secessionist and nouveau, dada, surrealist, futurismo, deco, bauhaus, etc. It's a great era.

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>>4341939
it's the " i was a famous painter but got reincarnated as a magical girl" trope
>>4341943
thank you ! its pretty hard for me to come up with oc's and designs usually. If i have the time i most likely will post a rendered version of this, or at least the wip of the rendering ~

>> No.4341955

>>4341874

>Sup big bro
>Sup lil' bro

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>> No.4342006

>>4341992
Post blog plz

>> No.4342024
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>>4341662
Hope this helps, friend.

>> No.4342036

>>4342024
>teal line
how dare you stand where he stood

this is not only STILL wrong anatomy, but you've also completely disrespected the original by redrawing the face in your own style. i mean, op's style is ugly too.. but my point stands.

>> No.4342039

>>4341849
can i draw her, anon? its a cute idea

>> No.4342041 [DELETED] 

>>4340841
>>4340838
>>4339004
i like your stuff but please learn post-processing. most art programs have the tools for it

>> No.4342058

>>4342039
yes, go crazy

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>>4340841
>>4340838
>>4339004
i like your stuff but please learn post-processing. most art programs have the tools for it

pic related. took me all of 2 minutes in clip studio
>[edit > remove tones > delete from selected layer]
>erase some leftover dust with round brush
>color pick bg of original > fill new layer w/ color > set to multiply
>done

the last step is to keep that traditional look. otherwise it looks washed out with a white bg

>> No.4342070

>>4342036
>disrespected
Not that anon but, I think you missed the joke bud

>> No.4342077

>>4342036
It's not teal, it's blue. I didn't mean any disrespect, I just would rather draw Rei than Asuka.

Would you care to explain how the anatomy is wrong? I'm still learning, but I did my best.

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>>4342059
thanks

>> No.4342091

>>4342077
That anon is a crab. Literally not worth your time

>> No.4342126

>>4341835
Have you tried it on yourself pressing your arm to the side of your body? My elbow reaches right above where my pelvis starts like what >>4341670 said

>> No.4342129

>>4342083

Hey anon, I know you're not done yet with the piece, but you need to flesh out her military gear. Right now parts of it look super flat, such as the ammo pouches on her upper breast.

>> No.4342163
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Colonies dropping communication is nothing new. Usually it can be chalked up to asteroid interference or regime change... but this... this was something

>> No.4342181

>>4342163

Nice use of shadows, anon.

>> No.4342192
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This is my latest work, I like it but feel like it could be improved somehow.
Any critique is appreciated!

>> No.4342198
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>>4342024

>> No.4342200

>>4342163
S O U L
O
U
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>> No.4342267

>>4342198
her right shoulder is so fucked

>> No.4342310
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>>4342181
>>4342200
thank you!

>> No.4342345

>>4335255
Cool :)

>> No.4342354

>>4342267
How so? Is the shoulder joint dislocated? Is the surface form unconvincing? Is it a proportion problem? Is the perspective off? Is the gesture unnatural or stiff?

I'd like to fix it immediately whatever it is.

>> No.4342395
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>>4342310
Great stuff as always

>> No.4342521

>>4342192
>Any critique is appreciated!
The face you drew suffers from anime horse face syndrome, slightly.
Why does her nose point into the sky?

Congratulations on the nipples, though. Normally, I dislike inverted nipples and nipple piercings. You drew them nicely.

>> No.4342523

>>4342395
how did you get this loose with your drawing?

>> No.4342529

>>4342395
I think a toothless version would look better

>> No.4342544
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How can i get better with lines on paper?

>> No.4342545
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>>4342529
Wow you’re right

>> No.4342554

>>4342354
it looks abnormally high in comparison to the rest of her body, which isn't curing that way. I suggest you lower it.

>> No.4342556

>>4342554
*curving

>> No.4342560

>>4342354
>>4342554
tripfaggots >>>/soc/

>> No.4342564
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Had to stop at 7 hours

>> No.4342579 [DELETED] 

>>4342544
Can you elaborate a bit more?

>> No.4342583

>>4342544
What exactly do you mean? Less wobbly libes?

>> No.4342597

>>4342583
this and lineweight

>> No.4342630

>>4342597
In terms of less wobbly lines? Dynamic Sketching by Peter Han. The first week in particular teaches line-work training. It should be in the video thread.

>lineweight
Depends on how you want to draw. More of a cel shaded look? The lines can, but don't have to, consistent. More of a manga approach? ...

>> No.4342640

>>4342521
>The face you drew suffers from anime horse face syndrome, slightly.
I haven't heard of this, could you maybe redline to show me what face shape would be better? I think maybe the jaw is too big

>Why does her nose point into the sky?
I just think upturned noses are cute but maybe I drew it too exaggeratedly. I can try straightening it out

>Congratulations on the nipples, though.
Thanks anon! I'm glad the titties look nice. Now I just have to learn to fix the face a bit

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>>4342198
>>4342354
I agree with the other anon, her right shoulder being so high from this angle make her shoulder look dislocated.

If you just get rid of that part of her arm, it would be perfectly fine lol

I like your lines and shading btw.

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>>4342640
>I haven't heard of this, could you maybe redline to show me what face shape would be better? I think maybe the jaw is too big
I don't have my equipment with me right now, so let me demonstrate it with a well known series as an example. Pic related. It still applies (even thought not exactly the same, hence "slightly") since her nose and jaw indicate that you drew her in profile while the mouth floats somewhere. It gives off this strange looking, elongated face.

>> No.4342714

>>4342659
>since her nose and jaw indicate that you drew her in profile while the mouth floats somewhere. It gives off this strange looking, elongated face.
Yes okay I see what you mean! I was thinking that while I was drawing it, but I don't know how to draw the nose properly when the head is turned slightly...
I was having trouble finding a good ref of how to draw the head slightly turned but in an anime/stylized way
This may be asking for much but if you have a ref or if you get to your equipment I'd like to know how to draw that better.

Thanks for the critique!

>> No.4342783
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>> No.4342814
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>>4342650
How's this?

I'm determined to solve this.

>> No.4342816

>>4342129
Nah it was just a quick little sketch, i wasnt going to take it any further, but i will go back in and fix those forms, good looking out
one day i hope for my imagination sketches to reach the level of KJG, Katsuya Terada, Kopinski, Peter Han,etc.

>> No.4342868
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>>4342714
>I was having trouble finding a good ref of how to draw the head slightly turned but in an anime/stylized way
>This may be asking for much but if you have a ref
Perhaps something like pic related (from the Monogatari Series, by the way)? As with where I got the screenshot from, here's a video with an anime head tilt collection (funny how specific, eh?). The better ones are later on in the video. About the stylization part, that depends on you. From that video alone you'll see how vastly different they can be.

1/2

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>>4342714
>>4342868
Another tip for reference: (pause and) take screenshots while you watch anime. Preferably with timestamp and episode number so that you can rewatch the scene if necessary (to see it in action). I did and still do that. Personal best example? Nearly 800 screenshots from One Piece (like pic related).

Also, here's the link from the last post because I forgot it to put it in there.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_u6D7w9ETcM

2/2

>> No.4342877

>>4342783
amazing

>> No.4342878

>>4342874
...and my screenshot count (the 800) still makes me salty because I lost all my screenshots from ep400 to 585 due to an embarrassing accident over half a decade ago

>> No.4342894

>>4342814
Fuck off mate

>> No.4342930
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>>4342192
sorry if this sucks its hard to overpaint at 4 am with an erection
- eyes + mouth forward and up, ear up
- dont go overboard with skin tones, adding too many weird tones ages people up
- highlights get smaller with more reflectivity, skin usually has smooth, spread out highlights unless lubed -> avoid small speculars unless you want a greasy porno look
(i suck at drapery so take the clothes with a grain of salt)
- try to build your clothing with convincing volume
- this goes double for the shadows that define the folds
and finally some personal preference stuff:
- i like to outline (skin especially) with a darker version of the main color, it tends to look more natural
- some HSV adjustments to personal preference (Hue towards red, more saturation, slightly darker)

cute marnie though, blog?

>> No.4342938

>>4334401
I don't see the problem with the Raven and Starfire pic. It's full of life.

>> No.4342946

>>4333490
I sat through Marco Bucci's 10 min. to better painting series. It's really helpful, especially when you've had trad experience.

>> No.4342955

>>4333203
blog?

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>> No.4343039
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>> No.4343059

>>4342163
very Nausica. blog?

>> No.4343063

>>4342564
glad to see more of your comic ocs

>> No.4343065

>>4342814
the construction is great however, just like the fixed, >>4342650 I think the arm is a bit too small and short in comparison to the other arm because previously, the raised shoulder justifies the length. So I don't think it's accurate??? I'm not sure, however it looks pretty natural and pleasing so I wouldn't say anything if it's polished with the current state.

>> No.4343067

>>4342564
Really nice. Blog?

>> No.4343069

>>4342564
blog pls

>> No.4343070

>>4343067
>>4343069
@ohheythatfisher on twitter

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>> No.4343159
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headphone life

>> No.4343194

>>4342545
freaky

>> No.4343230

>>4342310
really curious as to what your main inspirations are

>> No.4343268
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>> No.4343278

>>4343159
dude spot on tyler1 portait

>> No.4343382

>>4343159
I feel called out.
It's not even (to some degree it is) funny. My head feels naked without my headphones.

>> No.4343384

>>4343268
Wow, looks cute. Blog?

>> No.4343386

>>4343382
My advice is to stop before you give yourself tinnitus

>> No.4343395

>>4343386
Yeah, I know. I'm wearing them an excessive amount of time and I have to stop with that. 8-12h daily.

>> No.4343407

>>4343382
My advice is to not stop because tinnitus is going to get you either way. Unless it doesn't.

>> No.4343448
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trying some avant garde perspective

>> No.4343457

>>4343455
>>4343455
>>4343455
New thread

>> No.4343571

>>4342868
>here's a video with an anime head tilt collection
Oh thanks! That is very specific so I never thought of it but also super helpful
>take screenshots while you watch anime. Preferably with timestamp and episode number so that you can rewatch the scene if necessary
I do pause and screenshot sometimes like especially when I see great perspective and stuff, saving the time and episode number is a great idea though.
Thanks for everything anon I will definitely use this info to improve!
>>4342930
I appreciate the time you took to critique this but I personally like the look of exaggerated semi-realistic skin shading so it is what I am trying to emulate and the clothes are shaded the way they are for contrast. If there is a way to maintain the goal of my style while improving it that is what I am looking for.
Also you are completely right on the hue adjustments, that is something I always completely forget about!
I don't have a blog right now, I am trying to get faster at pushing out work before I make one again.
Thanks for the critique!

>> No.4343586

>>4342070
yes, i realize he changed the hair to resemble rei instead. that's not what im talking about. the face is drawn in a completely different style