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4291051 No.4291051 [Reply] [Original]

Post a shitty piece of art made by a pro, because we arent perfect.

>> No.4291062
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>>4291051
https://youtu.be/4h4-2HRHaHI

>> No.4291063

>>4291062
OP said weak pieces made by a PRO.

>> No.4291084

>>4291063
he is

a pro ko

>> No.4291089

>>4291084
Beautiful

>> No.4291115

>>4291084
Very nice save.

>> No.4291118
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4291118

I love peter han and shill his teachings all over /ic/ but some of his figures and faces are awful.

>> No.4291157

>>4291118
I think I just realized how much I dislike all of his art. He draws everyone so odd looking and dwarf-ish, and it all looks so itchy what the fuck

>> No.4291162

>>4291118
Looks asian.

>> No.4291165

>>4291157
Everyone shits on drawabox yet we all have to remember that drawabox came from Peter Han's dynamic sketching.

>> No.4291167
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>> No.4291176
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>>4291157
all of his students have that same shit dwarf mong face and play doh anatomy
>pic related

>> No.4291182

>>4291118
Wow I just realized I never saw him draw a human up to this point.

>> No.4291248

>>4291118
oh no no no

>> No.4291261

>>4291176
Why do I hate this so much?

>> No.4291272

>>4291167
Soul.

>> No.4291285

>>4291261
it's because not a single element on the pic has been executed well enough to be good but it has too much work put in it to be dismissed as /beg/.
basically, it's uncanny.
>Composition
It's very bad, with no real point of interest or eye-leading. It's crowded but with no punch or contrast.
>perspective
Every single ellipse is in wrong perspective, and i mean every single one, you can check for yourself. The sense of scale and object placement is all wrong!
>figure drawing
Incorrect noodle-like anatomy, all the figures in the painting look flat except the orc in the right. Very unappealing proportions.
>design
It's all generic fantasy garbage in avery unappealing way. The shapes are very weak, the characters are only memorable because of their very odd flatness.
>rendering
all mud-shit with very inconsistent values. Wood, glass stone and skin all look like the same material.
>Story-telling
WTF is even going on with that retarded girl pouring beer on herself. The only touch of world building is that ugly weird thing in the poorly drawn jar.

>> No.4291292

>>4291167
OP said pro, your beloved shink is not a pro, just famous.
>>4291118
This is your brain in years and years of drawing dwarves.

>> No.4291300

>>4291285
Still better than you, plus most surely this artist will overcome thoose failiures, for what I have seen it only takes 2 years por so to jump from this to professional level of you put the effort.

>> No.4291303

>>4291261
got to be the composition more than anything

composition is baaaddddd

>> No.4291311

>>4291300
lol not really. this guy's been at it since forever, studied under peter han paying god knows how much per hour for his credits and has been stuck on this bootleg-phone-app tier level ever since.
He calls himself a teacher and is shilled here so he probably won't try to improve.

>> No.4291322

>>4291285
I looked over it again after reading your post, and lmao your right. It all looks fucked now that I'm looking for shit. Why the fuck is drawabox so shilled for when the guy making it isn't even professional or semi-pro himself?

>> No.4291332

>>4291311
>>4291322
He's still above /beg/ tier and the material is still solid. You can't go wrong with telling beginners to draw boxes, learn perspective and apply construction.

>> No.4291405

>>4291167

I think this is the time when he broke one of his arm and refuse to hire assistant for whatever reason.

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>>4291405
I thought it was backpain, but at least it was redone for the volume release.

>> No.4291483

>>4291477
Composition gets you far

>> No.4291537

>>4291167
he did this with a broken arm

>> No.4291540

>>4291311
name of the guy? maybe this is just a bad piece, everybody has done a bad piece.

>> No.4291542

>>4291477
Killua is so fucking cute

>> No.4291544

>>4291537
so what, who cares, anime sucks ass.

>> No.4291546

>>4291544
>i suck
>therefore everyone else must suck as bad as me
lol

>> No.4291554

>>4291546
>pppproyecting?

still, hxh's artist is solid and it shows.
Peter han is also good but lacks any sort of appeal

>> No.4291615

>>4291165
which came from Norm Schureman

>> No.4291685

>>4291540
http://irshadkarim.com/

>> No.4291871

>>4291554
English not your first language?

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>>4291546

>> No.4291936
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hahahha

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>>4291089
>>4291115
>Very nice save.
>Beautiful

>> No.4292035

>>4292009
Okay Proko.

>> No.4292056

>>4292009
>HAVING FUN AND NOT BEING A CUNT WHENEVER YOU CAN IS FUCKING CRINGE BRO
>U POSTED CRINGE

>> No.4292298

>>4291300
>S..Ss.St-ill b-b-bet...er, than YOU!
Not a valid counterargument, fuckwad. That composition is the most uninspired, flat, unpolished, mundane and /beg/ tier shit I have ever had the displeasure to look at, and if you don't see and at least attempt to understand what is so mortifying about it instead of getting asshurt, then you are the very definition of NGMI, retard.

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4292300

Literally anything by Ruan Jia. I used to think people were shilling him as a joke here, but then I found out there are people here who actually idolize this guy's polished turds.

>> No.4292309

>>4292300
Why does he look like hes in the middle of transitioning.

>> No.4292315

>>4292300
So you post a 2 min sketch as his worst piece.
Oh man you retards crack me up.

>> No.4292320

>>4292300
he'd make a hot trap desu

>> No.4292331

>>4292309
Low testosterone probably

>> No.4292337

>>4292309
He takes care of his skin

>> No.4292390

>>4292315
So you don't know what polishing turds means.
Oh man you retards crack me up.

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>>4291176
>>4291685
This is weird because pic related is another of his work and it looks way better than the garbage tavern you posted. How can someone's appeal vary this much in so little time?

>> No.4292488

>>4292424
it's the box limitation that helps him not be a complete nonce with designing shapes but these aren't great either

>> No.4292506

>>4292488
>nonce
I don’t think that word means what you think it means

>> No.4292509

>>4291118
Han is a good artist and teacher but he really needed to use a ref and do an underdrawing on this one if thats supposed to be Luke.

This is where direct drawing from imagination is the weakest... capturing a likeness.

>> No.4292534

>>4291118
>>4292509
yeah this is bad but honestly I’d like to see someone draw a better Luke from imagination with no ref

>> No.4292735

>>4291084
ay

>> No.4292846

>>4292390
You're the one who doesn't know what polishing a turd means, it's when you spend too much time rendering on a drawing with bad fundamental construction, but ruan has a pretty good eye for correcting himself, and having a very precise lineart is not that important when having a painterly style, having the standard that complete and flawless drawings must just fall out of your hands in order to be a great artist is misplaced and naive

>> No.4292932

>>4292846
> it's when you spend too much time rendering on a drawing with bad fundamental construction,

correct

>> No.4292952

>>4292390

drawing/painting process is all about problem fixing. you don't do perfect sketch in the first few minutes and paint perfectly in the next couple hours.

also there are artist that paint better than they draw Ruan Jia is one. lets see KJG paint something at his level. im sure there's someone out there than can draw like KJG and paint like Ruan Jia.

>> No.4293043

>>4292952
Maybe to your beginner “understand” and blind eyes lol

>> No.4293058

>>4292952
Ja, you fix your major problems before you start rendering.

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>>4293043

you sound like someone who browse art in social then come here to shitpost. what are you doing here?

>>4293058

there's different workflow for different artist. we are not made in a factory programmed to follow the same workflow.

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>>4292300
You're parroting an argument you don't even understand just because you've seen other people make it. It's already been refuted numerous times.

>> No.4293150

>>4291477
Are you sure this isn't a rough thumbnail drawing an then the finished inks??
Was the prior really published?

>> No.4293179

>>4293150
Yeah it was published in the weekly serialization of Shonen Jump.

>> No.4293182

>>4293114
As a student,you are to follow the concept of working large to small, ensuring everything is proportionally and structurally sound before you start rendering, get all the “hard” work out of the way before render in details and waste time redoing the eye 5 times. This is what every artist does, if someone can “skip” a step or do a couple steps at the same time it’s not because the never followed the logic of working large to small it’s because they’ve done it thousands of times they can take shortcuts. There’s “different” workflows but both comparative measurement/construction, and sight size follow this simple rule.

>> No.4293196

>>4291084
gmi

>> No.4293253

>>4292390
The thread is about a pros weak piece not a 2 min sketch that hes literally only using for measuring where things go. You would know if you actually painted. Its a process every fucking painter goes through.

>> No.4293258

>>4292390
Absolute retard

>> No.4295834

>>4291118
Its not even about likeness you dumb faggots, its even more worrying that there is no actual structure, the dude obvipusly does not know how to draw humans and what planes and shapes comprise a human face, let alone hands. Its all fucking terrible

>> No.4295843

>>4293182
Post your art and back up your bullshit opinions. I dont adhere to your rigid robot work flow, not everyone has to have some teacher cuck shit some kind of system into their head. Painting isnt some kind of fucking algebraic formula, everyone experiences it their own way and if Ruan Jia wants to paint his animu trash girls with a shitty sketch then so be it.

>> No.4295846

>>4295843
imagine being this mad that there's an efficient way to do things

>> No.4295913

>>4295834
Nothing is on this picture is anatomically incorrect, you just want to sell your dislike for the unappealling character design as having more merit than it actually has, he obviously knows how to draw humans he just doesn't know how or doesn't care to make them pretty. It's pretty ugly but dont throw around words you dont understand and pretend they are criticism.

>> No.4295949

>>4295843
>likes ron julia
>is a brainless little artcuck that doesn't believe in loomis

every time

>> No.4295960

>>4295846
>>4295949
>Being efficient in art
If its a soulless drone job and your boss is up your ass, then that might be an important criterion, but as long as youre just doing what you love doing, and having fun at it, there is absolutely no fucking point in being *efficient* (you can fill in any meme capitalist words you like here).

I dont even like Loljon Rya but the fact remains: art is your own and subjective expression of living life, while others choose to live it, you just draw/paint/sculpt it. Youre an observer and you can observe any way you damn well please. If art is just a job for you from the outset, then go ahead and be a depressed soulless loser, but it might even be better to become a teacher turd because those guys rarely develop their art but make more money with it than most fulltime """"artists"""".

To close this statement with a heartfelt expression: fuck you, ngmi shitters.

>> No.4295964

>>4295960
man your head is up your ass
don't you have a "modern art abstraction appreciator's club" to go jerk off in or something

>> No.4295965

>>4295960
Are you stupid? There is a point in being efficient because you can do more art that you love doing. If you can do a piece that would normally take 20 hours in 2, you can do far more in the rest of the time. Why do you think pros are so fast? You're going to die, there is only a limited amount of drawings you can do in your life, and that amount decreases every single day. If you do not realize this you are the one who is NGMI

>> No.4295972

>>4295965
>Are you stupid?
sounds like the kind of stupid that people develop by getting an art degree, desu

>> No.4295975

>>4295960
Ruan jia still made sure the proportions and everything else was reading well before painting. You’re always free to do what you want but you shouldn’t ignore what’s been proven to work well for the past few centuries since at least the Renaissance times. I would also add none of the greatest artists would be nearly as great without their teachers. There are very few if any artist who never had a teacher or mentor and did well. No need to get upset when someone’s trying to help you but know you’ll never create consistently good work or any good work at all if you refuse to educate yourself.

>> No.4295978

>>4295913
this, im really confused why someone questioned anatomy or construction in that one? its just the unappealing face, if face was „pretty” then everyone would love this piece. im genuinely confused here. if he drew the face and hands incorrectly then maybe someone do a redline? because i really dont see anything wrong here besides the ugly face

>> No.4295989

>>4295964
>>4295965
Post your work you fucking soulless animu shitters. I guarantee you that its shit and that your appeal to muh efficiency and technical prowess is just a coping mechanism because you can pretend to yourself that your lack of love for the actual process itself is just due to you being too slow and too inefficient and that as long as you keep grinding to git gud, you will one day be able to be a good artist.
>>4295975
Learning from actual painters and masters is entirely different from what we have nowadays, where actual pleb tier chinks and russian jews are feeding you useless drivel information that you in turn cling to like it is some kind of truth.
An actual artist would make sure that he doesnt invest his time in some random idiot and this is exactly the problem with modern internet courses, the teachers leech off of the useless lazy retards. But as long as you parrot efficiency and other buzzwords, there will always be some youtube tutorial on how to get more efficient. How about you just read a goddamn book and actually study the old masters?

>> No.4295996

>>4295989
>he says without posting his work
yikes!!!

>> No.4296003

>>4295996
So this is just about shitposting then huh? Even if I post my work we both know you'll never show yours because youre an insecure faggot who either doesnt even paint or who does so like an utter beg bitch

>> No.4296007

>>4296003
You have such a naive, romantic, self absorbed I AM THE PAINED ARTIST / ARTISTS MUST BARE THEIR SOULLLLLLLLLL bullshit view of everything that I think anything resembling an understanding of drawing is just beyond you, to be honest. Your wishy washy art school bullshittery combined with your baseless projections are just fucking embarrassing to read, so it's just amusing to see you try to point out things that you think are fallacies with no fucking self awareness of any of the shit you're saying.
p.funny desu lol

>> No.4296010

>>4296007
>Projection and more projection
Where is your fucking artwork you little bitch?

>> No.4296015

>>4296010
paying my rent and bills, mostly
unlike your art degree backed "artwork" lol

>> No.4296018

>>4295989
Take a couple deep breaths my man, your brain needs some oxygen.

>> No.4296020

>>4296015
kek. Show us feggit, we all wanna know what a study from an actual "academically" but not really academically artist looks like. I promise, my post will be follow yours.

>> No.4296021

>>4296020
>what a study from an actual "academically" but not really academically artist looks like
literally what

>> No.4296025

>>4296021
you act as if an art degree is worthless but still propagate classical art training, so I dont really get where youre coming from

>> No.4296027

>>4296015
do you post on /pol/?

>> No.4296030

>>4296025
that's because you're fucking /beg/ tier, dude
those two things (actual constructive drawing principals and an art degree) have nooooo fucking thiiiiiiing related to each other

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>>4291176
>just draw boxes, they said
>you can learn color and composition and shape design and how to not be a soulless hack later, they said

>> No.4296035

>>4296030
post a study of yours and show us where your incredible knowledge derives from.

>> No.4296037
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>>4295989

>> No.4296042

>>4296037
aside from the subject matter thats probably way better than what youre capable of.

>> No.4296044

>>4296042
Way better than what you can produce

>> No.4296049

>>4296035
you're gonna have to break down your beginner reasoning a bit more before you start making sense
I'm sure it makes sense to you somehow, but it sounds like you're just non-sequitoring

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>>4296044

>> No.4296052

>>4296049
you're gonna have to break down your beginner reasoning a bit more before you start making sense I'm sure it makes sense to you somehow, but it sounds like you're just non-sequitoring

>> No.4296058

>>4296052
cute post and all, but really you need to break down your arguments without using words like "style" or "classical" or "academically" if you want people to understand what you're trying to say

>> No.4296066

>>4296058
cute post and all, but really you need to break down your arguments without using words like "style" or "classical" or "academically" if you want people to understand what you're trying to say

>> No.4296072

>>4296066
>>4296052
please see
>>4296018

>> No.4296082

>>4296058
>>4296049
please see
>>4296015

>> No.4296101

breathe dude lol

>> No.4296287

>thread designed to remind us even our heroes fail sometimes
>thread immediately turns into "your heroes are faaaaakes fucking KILL yourself FAGGOT"
oh 4chan

>> No.4297254

>>4296287
motherfuckers on this board are so bitter and resentful about their own inadequacies. It's so pathetic.

>> No.4297280

>>4296050
no soul

>> No.4297304

>>4296050
lol at the soulless ref study posted as some kind of good art, do you have a portfolio full of skulls and bottles painted in b&w from refs? keep telling urself you're great

>> No.4297308

>>4297254
Truly, what is this thread even? I dont even know what these retards are talking about anymore, this board has been really hostile for past few months

>> No.4297320
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The time noah decided to draw mangu.

>> No.4297321
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It was glorious.

>> No.4297539

>>4297320
>>4297321
kek, you sure this wasnt an aprils fools event?

>> No.4297914

>>4297308
>>4297304
>this is considered criticism on ic nowadays
Fuck this place is just pol 2.0, literally race baiting losers everywhere who dont have shit going on in their lives and who then resort to spending their days on an art forum because its funnier when you get a backlash reaction out of some people.

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>End thread

This man is paid a wage to make 10 comics per year.

>> No.4298149

>>4292534
>draw a better Luke from imagination
??
Whats the point of this? The dude was using ref

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>>4297938
Holy fucking kek

>> No.4298327

>>4297539
Sadly not, it was hilarious though. First he deleted the few comments that said anything bad about them and there was 1-2 white knight defending him that they are "just sketches".

Eventually some people got to him I guess since he took down the posts after 2 days.