/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

[Anonymous No.4131497]

Previous: >>4126508

What is /ALT/?
If you're looking for a place to post your cartooning then you've found the right general. This is /ic/s 1st and only merged hub where both Eastern and Western stylization can coexist peacefully, hence the double title. However, by community demand and long history, this is favorably an Anime general.
>Rules & Guidelines
(1) Any form of cartooning is welcome; so submit and receive feedback from others. (2) Please resize your images before posting. (3) Share your knowledge and (4) Remember to not be afraid of asking for critique. Most importantly I encourage you to keep discussion at a civil level, but you're more than welcome to share your opinions.
>I came for anime. Why does the image OP say cartoons general?
To distinguish from the anime study thread (janitor supported). Please post your studies there and personal work goes here.
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>Community Resources
Hitokaku Index
>http://www.asahi-net.or.jp/~zm5s-nkmr/
List of active livestreams
>Use twitch #art
>yoshikadu2011 https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCUx5dpO6d5gQ4KWNPc24CKw
FellowBro's Book Collection
>http://mediafire.com/?i44dwzkf9j9n8
Tutorial & Reference Collection
>http://pinterest.com/characterdesigh/
Japanese Tutorials & Documentary
>http://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?id=59317 (0033)
>http://iradukai.com/
References
>http://www.onairvideo.com/croquis-cafe-photos2.html
>http://www.eggazyoutatsu.net/eng/atarichan.html
>http://senshistock.com/sketch/

[Anonymous No.4131499]

Forgot to post this, form and perspective is broken but I had fun. Gonna move on from it now

[Anonymous No.4131517]

>>4131497
creepy asf

[Anonymous No.4131526]

posted in the ded thread.

[Anonymous No.4131533]

>>4131526

[Anonymous No.4131534]

>>4131497
I dont know what this is but it looks unsettlingly in an uncanny way.

[Anonymous No.4131547]

>>4131534
It is just some Anon doing more Kyleposting.

[Anonymous No.4131567]

How long did it take you to stop using references for poses?

[Anonymous No.4131574]

>>4131567
who is this question directed too, as there are 2 posters that have what look to be poses from imagination

[Anonymous No.4131576]

Throt gives much thought on whether to hit someone or not and with certain people throt thinks about this a lot.

[Anonymous No.4131579]

>>4131497
God what the fuck is with that face? So creepy

[Anonymous No.4131581]

>>4131567
The idea that there's a point where you just stop using references is a bad mindset. Even pros use references when they can't figure things out from imagination, or to add extra accuracy

[Anonymous No.4131584]

>>4131567
Stupid question butttttt.
A couple thousand poses from reference giver take would probably take around 2 months if you do like 35 poses everyday.

[Anonymous No.4131586]

>>4131579
Uncanny valley anon, thats why I do see some appeal but the proble is the artist probably went too much in the middle instead of finding a bias like more realistic or more animu. Thats my hot take.

[Anonymous No.4131598]

>>4131567
You don't need references for poses if you know how poses work. Learn the principles of gesture.

[Anonymous No.4131622]

>>4131586
>>4131579
>>4131534
>>4131547
Not heard of Kyle memes. Wow is it still summer? I thought you kids are supposed to be back into skull already. Damn newfaggots, get out of here.

[Anonymous No.4131625]

>>4131622
god I wish I could draw like that

[Anonymous No.4131631]

>>4131622
I been lurking here for a year and only just started shitposting recently.

[Anonymous No.4131636]

>>4131622
generic green bitch?

[Anonymous No.4131695]

Used a reference for this but I’m not satisfied, gonna do some more :0

[Anonymous No.4131696]

>>4131695

[Anonymous No.4131699]

>>4131695
cute!

[Anonymous No.4131701]

>>4131699
:) !!

[Anonymous No.4131809]

[Anonymous No.4131887]

>>4131695
now try to her draw again from another angle.

[Anonymous No.4131897]

>>4131887
not him, but isn't that super difficult

[Anonymous No.4131899]

>>4131887
Oh! I’ll try to right now, thank you anon :)

[Anonymous No.4131952]

>>4131497
odd question, but how would you get that weird metal stuff off her?

[Anonymous No.4132002]

FUCK DRAWING TREES
AAAAAAAAAAAA

[Anonymous No.4132075]

>>4131952
There's a "quick-release" latch in the back.

[Anonymous No.4132076]

adjusted face on the left what do you ya think?

[Anonymous No.4132145]

>>4132076
i like them both the same. differences are insignificant

[Anonymous No.4132150]

>>4132076
It took me a while to notice the difference, both are fine. You probably shouldn't listen to anons grilling you over the face, a lot of the posters in /alt/ can't handle any face that isn't pure animu

[Anonymous No.4132152]

posted in the dead thread.

[Anonymous No.4132154]

>>4132076
Face on the left looks far more natural.

[Anonymous No.4132158]

>>4132145
>>4132150
honestly NGMI if your eye is that crude.
>>4132076
the right isn't terrible-- it doesn't look wrong or alien to me. but the left is more conventionally attractive.

[Anonymous No.4132166]

>>4132076
Much better

[Anonymous No.4132170]

>>4132076
left is a lot better since i can actually look at her face now without vomiting

[Anonymous No.4132172]

One day I will be as good as Kyle :)

[Anonymous No.4132347]

[Anonymous No.4132370]

>>4132347
Bro what is going on with your anatomy?! This is so fucked. Do more shapes like cylinders and squares and then figure how fucked this is.

[Anonymous No.4132371]

>>4132370
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Dunning%E2%80%93Kruger_effect

[Anonymous No.4132377]

[Anonymous No.4132378]

>>4132377
H
A
C
K

[Anonymous No.4132381]

>>4132378
Hi jelly ngmi

[Anonymous No.4132383]

>>4132381
What's the original of this trace?

[Anonymous No.4132384]

>>4131499
that cute
i like it

>>4132076
left

[Anonymous No.4132388]

[Anonymous No.4132390]

>>4132388
Why do you come here if you're just gonna ignore all advice? Self-promotion threads are for this.

[Anonymous No.4132408]

>>4132388
You have great linework but that face is wonky.

She's cross-eyed and I'm not sure what expression she's trying to convey.

Here's my edit. Not sure if you'll listen to this but I feel that this piece can be saved.

[Anonymous No.4132413]

>>4132377
have you seen a good return since you started drawing lewds?

[Anonymous No.4132431]

>>4132413
Not yet, I got more NSFW gigs but it doesn't matter since my commission waiting list is always full.

I only started to seriously push my nsfw account 2 weeks ago by drawing lewd fanart non-stop, to prepare for Patreon. It's still not enough, I wish I was Nickleflick lmao. Imo there's no way to be successful on Patreon without a good amount of followers, I hope in the next few months my Patreon's income could surpass my regular.

[Anonymous No.4132444]

>>4132431
>I wish I was Nickleflick
The internet is such a fickle machine, you and many other anons deserved this instead of his garbo art. You better go draw robot breasts.

[Anonymous No.4132469]

>>4131622
The recent piece in OP is a whole different level of creepy

[Anonymous No.4132484]

>>4132408
I commend you, Anon. It's those who would help even the most stubborn that are true blessings. I wish you mad gains.

[Anonymous No.4132515]

Need to buy a scanner

[Anonymous No.4132519]

Sorry for pic quality. Decent scanner recc??

[Anonymous No.4132520]

>>4131497
I thought she have coomer's face from the preview, the fuck you're doing Kyle

[Anonymous No.4132556]

beep bop

[Anonymous No.4132568]

Progress and a few little fixes.

[Anonymous No.4132599]

Quick Blitzcrank redesign I had in my head based from his Zaun janitor bot lore.

Don't judge didn't wanna invest but felt I should at least get it out my head,

[Anonymous No.4132602]

>>4132568
If you're the original artist, she still looks RETARDED

[Anonymous No.4132633]

>>4132377
>>4132431

Anon here.
>>4132568

Given your backlog, you're making a lot more money than he is with your commissions.

Focus less on the scoreboard, and focus more on delivering the best work you are capable of.

[Anonymous No.4132639]

Just started reading OG Dragonball and its giving me great inspiration. Drawing my silly oneshot RIGHT NOW.

[Anonymous No.4132669]

Any advice on getting rid of sketch lines when rendering would be appreciated also what could help make this art better?

[Anonymous No.4132671]

>>4132669
Render over the lines

[Anonymous No.4132680]

>>4132639
fucken siiick

[Anonymous No.4132706]

>>4132384
Thank you anon :] I’m glad you do

[Anonymous No.4132711]

Designing a few characters centered around sweets/deserts/etc. I'd like to give this one a round shape with pastel colors and soft forms. Some changes I'm thinking as of right now is to add a pattern to the bottom of her shirt and sleeves and to make her hair curly instead.

[Anonymous No.4132717]

>>4131695
that's pretty good, maybe try to use the hatching to follow around the form to give more volume

[Anonymous No.4132720]

>>4132076
mouth looks kinda uncanny to me, maybe work on a more stylized one?

[Anonymous No.4132726]

>>4132639
best itt

[Anonymous No.4132732]

>>4132717
Thanks anon, I’ll try to next time but for some reason I struggle with that, I’ll have to put more intent into it.

[Anonymous No.4132738]

>>4132669
put a masked layer above the linearts and color the lineart to colors that blend on the color below, like on skin color it red. On highlighted areas color it bright on shadow areas color id darker of the color behind it.

OR just do what >>4132671 said although that is harder.

[Anonymous No.4132743]

>>4132639
Last panel seems too information full to be so small. Other small panels are just looking around, but an action like picking up and the question of what's he gonna do with it deserve more emphasis.

[Anonymous No.4132744]

[Anonymous No.4132749]

I miss when this general was for WIPS. If you're finished and everything's polished, what's the point of posting here?

[Anonymous No.4132751]

>>4132749
So you can collect YOUUUUUUUs

[Anonymous No.4132770]

>>4131622
Holy fuck I'm going to coom

[Anonymous No.4132772]

>>4132076
Left is way better, right one has down's

[Anonymous No.4132776]

>>4132377
hot asf my dude, I remember following you back on Tumblr back when you just starting doing fanart shit
hopefully you can give some pointers on my stuff, this is a WIP that I've been working on

[Anonymous No.4132796]

>>4132743
Yeah, I noticed. Fuck, i'm gonna EXPAND that.

[Anonymous No.4132798]

>>4132076
Yep, heaps better. Right side looks like you tried to force anime into realism or vice versa.

[Anonymous No.4132807]

is it dishonest to draw characters of games/anime that you never played/watched, but you know they're popular?

[Anonymous No.4132809]

>>4132807
Not if you like them visually.

[Anonymous No.4132859]

>>4131897
No, if you know how to do a manikin

[Anonymous No.4132861]

>>4132720
Mouth is perfect

[Anonymous No.4132863]

>>4132859
The mannequin method isn’t enough anon, he still need to be good at perspective to be able to do it with ease.
Just look at krenz’s examples

[Anonymous No.4132924]

wip

[Anonymous No.4132956]

Robutt

[Anonymous No.4132990]

>>4132749
Yeah, I kind of agree. I mean sure it makes sense to also want feedback on finished things to help improve your next pic, I just hate that it's gotten to the point where a lot of people who need help mid progress get ignored because their wip doesn't look impressive. Those are usually the people who need help the most, and for a place where so many anons decry polishing turds not many are willing to help people make their drawing not a turd before they polish it.

[Anonymous No.4132994]

>>4132924
>>4132990
help me then pls :(

[Anonymous No.4132997]

>>4132990
Yeah it honestly sucks. I post my wips here asking for crit sometimes but they get next to no attention, even though I usually get (you)s on the work once it's finished, and once it's at the finished stage it's so much harder to go back and make corrections.

[Anonymous No.4133005]

>>4132924
(((((you)))))

[Anonymous No.4133009]

>>4132990
>>4132994
>>4132997
Fuck you, this isn't your blog.
If people want to help you then they'll help you. All these newfags seem to have this sense that you're entitled to free critique just by posting it here, but it's always been the whim of the crowd on who gets feedback or not.

[Anonymous No.4133014]

>>4133009
im sorry i dont want any trouble sir :(

[Anonymous No.4133015]

>>4133009
How dare people discuss /alt/ threads in the /alt/ threads

[Anonymous No.4133025]

>>4133009
I agree with this faggot, the absence of feedback is feedback.

It means nobody cares enough about your work to comment on it. Draw something someone cares about if you want comments. Or ask for very specific things in the drawing that you want critiqued. This isn't art school, this is free image critique in the butthole of the internet.

[Anonymous No.4133027]

>>4133015
Complaining about how your art didn't get any you's isn't discussion. Just because you post something finished doesn't mean you'll get you's. Sure, a lot of the more popular posts have been finished work, but a lot of /beg/'s also post their work and don't get any response. Not to mention there's >>4133014 who gets responses from that one render anon all the fucking time. Your point is moot, it's just that you don't like that there is more talented people than you getting all the responses.

[Anonymous No.4133030]

>>4133027
how do you recognize me :(

[Anonymous No.4133032]

>>4133030
it's because of your faces, my dear. it's always the faces that give people's styles away.

[Anonymous No.4133034]

>>4132863
You're being redundant, ofcourse you need to understand perspective. If you don't you aren't understand the manikin

[Anonymous No.4133039]

>>4132744
Gorgeous shapes and rendering. Kinda bland compositionally though, even if characters are going on top of it.
>>4132776
Skin is super yellow, also don't shade with black.

[Anonymous No.4133040]

working on some robot designs

[Anonymous No.4133042]

>>4133039
I kinda wanted to see if I could get away with the yellow for inner glow. I guess I'll stick to coloring the skin normally
>shading with black
yeah i usually start with a value pass, I'll make sure to repaint the grayer parts.

[Anonymous No.4133055]

>>4132711
Some color and adjustment to the overall design

[Anonymous No.4133056]

>>4133042
If you're doing values by themselves anyway, just use shades of a color instead of B&W.

[Anonymous No.4133067]

uwu?

[Anonymous No.4133072]

>>4133067
You got the eyes and the back a little better but you still aren't understanding the form of the feet. Also her chin is still too far forward. You're mistaking the contour of the chin for where the middle of the chin should go.

[Anonymous No.4133077]

>>4133067
Yeh, what that Anon said, take a picture or find a reference and study it, your mistakes are fundamentals. The face is very cute tho.
>Ps: STDUY FEET

[Anonymous No.4133080]

>>4131497
how did /alt/ become /porn/

[Anonymous No.4133082]

>>4133040
finished it

[Anonymous No.4133084]

>>4133072
>>4133077
thanks yes i rushed the feet looking for references atm

[Anonymous No.4133088]

>>4133084
Bitch, don't make me redline your shit again
because i will do it :)

[Anonymous No.4133090]

>>4132776
I joined tumblr when it's dead af I thought no one know I was there.

About yours, I don't think that composition and lighting is interesting, you may try to use a more dramatic lighting? About the yellow skin tone, well yeah a bit too yellow for my taste, but it could work, like some of Genzoman's arts.

[Anonymous No.4133091]

>>4133090
Huh, that works actually. I'll try that.

[Anonymous No.4133110]

>>4132924
>>4132994
Well I suppose I'd better put my money where my mouth is and try to balance out how much these threads are about actual critique vs popularity.
I don't know how much this will help you but I hope it helps some. If you try to line it up over your original drawing, use more of the back and lower body because I moved and resized the head.

[Anonymous No.4133113]

i fugd this one pretty hard

[Anonymous No.4133123]

>>4131497
what is the name of a girl on a picrelated

[Anonymous No.4133146]

>>4133082
I can't tell if its truly humanoid or not. It's just a mess.

[Anonymous No.4133148]

>>4133082
This is kind of cool and energetic but it's so messy and rough I honestly have no idea what I'm supposed to be looking at. If you spent more time making the forms and features more clear you could porbably have a solid piece

[Anonymous No.4133155]

>>4133146
yeah im going for somewhere between different species, human, and robot

[Anonymous No.4133181]

nearly broke my legs trying to do this pose :)

>>4133110
thanks anon, but i feel like you made it super stiff and kinda unappealing :(

[Anonymous No.4133198]

>>4133181
No worries, I wasn't sure where you were going with the pose so it makes sense for you not to follow exactly what I did. I left in some construction and perspective lines in the hope of giving you an idea of how you can line things up to be in perspective, whatever the pose might be. Maybe that at least can be of use to you. Either way, good luck with finishing it.

[Anonymous No.4133230]

>>4132568
This is a good improvement, her eyes are looking towards us and you can tell that she's smiling now.

I'm also really digging the coloring of the hair, the colors are very nice. Keep going!

[Anonymous No.4133231]

anon don't look at my lines >.<

[Anonymous No.4133277]

it's far from perfect but this is the best thing I've created in my life :)
time to study now

[Anonymous No.4133314]

>>4133155
alright that's it for this one

[Anonymous No.4133317]

>>4132076
both look just the same. I see the differences, but they don't make it any better or worse
can't imagine why someone would say left (or right), unless it's just some autist samefagging. knowing /ic/, that's probably the case

[Anonymous No.4133319]

>>4132599
Blog anon?

[Anonymous No.4133327]

>>4133277
I think you overdid it on the boobs.
Personally think this looks better. Good drawing otherwise

[Anonymous No.4133341]

>>4133181
>nearly broke my legs trying to do this pose
Don't you mean your neck?

[Anonymous No.4133344]

OP pic made me want to sketch this oni too. Anatomy is all over the place but at least I drew something today.

[Anonymous No.4133347]

>>4133344
i like this alot

[Anonymous No.4133417]

>>4132956
Moar NAO

[Anonymous No.4133422]

>>4133344
Looks nice, though. Blog?

[Anonymous No.4133437]

[Anonymous No.4133438]

>>4133437
holy based

[Anonymous No.4133439]

>>4131497
WIP

[Anonymous No.4133455]

>>4133438
thanks

[Anonymous No.4133457]

>>4133437
uma delicia

[Anonymous No.4133462]

>>4132639
Amazing. Do you post your work anywhere?

[Anonymous No.4133531]

>>4131368
Thank you for the compliment anon. I wish I could take credit for his design but he's supposed to be Ken Kaneki from Tokyo Ghoul.

[Anonymous No.4133537]

sketch before sleep
god I wish I knew how to make smooth&appealing lineart, how to color, shade and render

[Anonymous No.4133546]

>>4131567
Lmao how cute

[Anonymous No.4133547]

[Anonymous No.4133561]

>>4132744
I absolutely love this. Keep up the good work anon
>>4132956
Stunning, great movement

[Anonymous No.4133565]

This was supposed to be for that "draw this witch in your own style" thread but I hated the colour scheme in the original.

[Anonymous No.4133569]

>>4133561
This is great. The muffins look a little too misshapen for my taste but overall this is wonderful.

[Anonymous No.4133570]

>>4133561
I really like this image.

[Anonymous No.4133573]

>>4133561
This is precious

[Anonymous No.4133575]

>>4133090
Messing with waifulabs

[Anonymous No.4133579]

>>4133575
here are the rando designs for comparison

[Anonymous No.4133582]

>>4132370
What book is this?

[Anonymous No.4133596]

>>4133561
Why does it look so creepy?

[Anonymous No.4133601]

>>4133582
Morpho

[Anonymous No.4133615]

>>4133579
>>4133575
Woah, anon, that's pretty good. How do I obtain your skills?

[Anonymous No.4133629]

>>4133615
Not sure if this is bait or not but:
Draw from life everyday
Use refs when starting, even if you dont think you need them
Have fun

[Anonymous No.4133630]

>>4133575
>>4133579
Blog?

[Anonymous No.4133639]

>>4133629
Is that how you got your style? It was simpler than I expected, thanks!

[Anonymous No.4133642]

>>4132599
he looks just a tad bit too stumpy lol, not digging the weird backpack also. anyways, is the smoke constantly coming from his head? if so cool design choice

[Anonymous No.4133644]

>>4133630
Huh, I kinda was dissappointed with that piece actually
Right now I am streaming on Twitch.tv @subudraws
But usually I post on insta or twitter under the same name
https:twitter.com/subudraws/

[Anonymous No.4133648]

>>4133561
Blog? and one muffin

[Anonymous No.4133649]

>>4131576
God I love your art so much

[Anonymous No.4133653]

>>4133601
Cheers duck.

[Anonymous No.4133766]

[Anonymous No.4133770]

>>4133437
fat tits are fucking disgusting, but i like your faces

[Anonymous No.4133772]

Did a fan art thing earlier today. Working out a new aesthetic.

[Anonymous No.4133775]

man, I do have some hard times with values

[Anonymous No.4133777]

>>4133772
based and crocpilled

[Anonymous No.4133784]

>>4133775
If you struggle with value contrast I find it helps to go in and darken all of your dark areas, and lighten your light areas to introduce contrast.

[Anonymous No.4133789]

>>4133784
holy, godamn, many thanks anon, you really saved me there I will follow this at point, many thanks!!!

[Anonymous No.4133824]

>>4133766
kawaii face

[Anonymous No.4133849]

>>4133437
god i wish that were me

[Anonymous No.4133872]

a quick drawing of a police girl

[Anonymous No.4133873]

help

[Anonymous No.4133877]

>>4133766
>>4133772
Oh god these are so good I feel like shit rn

[Anonymous No.4133881]

>>4133872
I really like your stuff man, keep it up!!!

[Anonymous No.4133883]

>>4133873
First thing I noticed is that the back looks deformed

[Anonymous No.4133885]

Pls critique this

[Anonymous No.4133891]

>>4133319
Thanks, don't have one
>>4133642
Thanks for the feedback anon,I agree looking at him now the legs makes him look toy-ish.

The backpack is a chemical reactor tank that transfers his kit between chem waste/purified energy so his ult could be changed depending on which gear he's in:
Chem Release: Aoe damage and silence
or
Energy Release: Aoe ally cleanse and shield
But maybe if he "were" the tank it would make him seem more special.

>pic
The start of some characters for a fightan game idea I had, don't think I'll finish this since I'll be heavily changing the art style and character designs.

[Anonymous No.4133893]

What shapes do you guys enjoy the most and why exactly?

[Anonymous No.4133895]

random old practice page from one of my notebooks, no reference.

Sloppy but these helped me escape same face and the crutch of making everyone beautiful.

[Anonymous No.4133919]

>>4133885
Cute!

[Anonymous No.4133922]

>>4133766
Is this Kyle? How come the face actually looks different for once? I'm confused.

[Anonymous No.4133923]

>>4133565
>actually has boobs this time

ruined

It's actually pretty good man, I like it. The new pallet definitely comes off as more sinister than the original if that was your intent.

[Anonymous No.4133925]

I like anon, you're style is cute

[Anonymous No.4133926]

>>4133437
I like your pieces so far (not coz of the milkies but) because of how comical they are

[Anonymous No.4133928]

>>4133531
I like it anon, your style is cute

[Anonymous No.4133961]

>>4133561
Can I save it?

[Anonymous No.4134005]

>>4132639
gimme your blog right fucking now

[Anonymous No.4134011]

>>4132776
>those arms
Are you trying to make her ripped? Cause I am liking that idea! Sorry if this ruined her.

[Anonymous No.4134037]

Some sketch block-in(?) thing
is this colors/composition good enough? Anything looking off so far?

[Anonymous No.4134045]

>>4134037
I think the datapad on the ground is inconsistent with the floor and his right side foot as well. But really good stuff otherwise!

[Anonymous No.4134047]

>>4134037
cute boy!

[Anonymous No.4134060]

>>4133090
Didn't like how grey your pieces are but I really liked your crit

[Anonymous No.4134062]

>>4133123
Shuten Douji from Fate GO

[Anonymous No.4134063]

[Anonymous No.4134073]

>>4131696
https://twitter.com/MaySakaali/
few more photos here

[Anonymous No.4134076]

>>4133766
blog?

[Anonymous No.4134082]

>>4132956
I saw Jennifer’s Body on tv yesterday - such a great movie

>>4133417
>>4133561
Thanks

[Anonymous No.4134086]

>>4134060
slightly higher res with a couple tweaks here and there...

[Anonymous No.4134088]

[Anonymous No.4134098]

>>4133766
whitebox? your faces are improving

[Anonymous No.4134108]

>>4134098
That's kyle

[Anonymous No.4134114]

>>4134108
why wouldn't he post it to his twitter then?
I check it regularly as I am his big fan

[Anonymous No.4134121]

>>4134108
oh

[Anonymous No.4134134]

>>4134063
Best autist

[Anonymous No.4134138]

>>4133766
kyle you're better than me but this my interpretation of your drawing

[Anonymous No.4134150]

i bought a scanner >-<

[Anonymous No.4134152]

ughh ahh rotated

[Anonymous No.4134156]

>>4133772
Gorgeous anon

[Anonymous No.4134159]

>>4134138
soulless

[Anonymous No.4134165]

god I wish I could draw like kyle

[Anonymous No.4134168]

>>4134088
good stuff

[Anonymous No.4134170]

I wish I could be a feet master like kyle

[Anonymous No.4134177]

i wish my dick was as big as kyle's

[Anonymous No.4134178]

I wish kyle was my dad

[Anonymous No.4134179]

>>4134168
thank you my man

[Anonymous No.4134184]

>>4131696
I like this one. Tried to draw it as well.

[Anonymous No.4134186]

>>4133347
danke
>>4133422
@ssuummaa but it's only garbage there, personally I wouldn't bother checking it out.

[Anonymous No.4134188]

>>4134184
BLOG??

[Anonymous No.4134197]

tried to draw kyle's drawing

[Anonymous No.4134208]

>>4133055
a little fat makes them cute. a lot of fat makes disgusting

[Anonymous No.4134218]

[Anonymous No.4134219]

[Anonymous No.4134220]

>>4133055
>loli
i don't understand. you might as well actually draw loli if you're going to take the controversial label.

[Anonymous No.4134252]

>>4134138
This is solid

[Anonymous No.4134262]

>>4133437
the best thing about your pics (aside from the tits) is how unreactive the characters seem towards one another.
It's like in a sitcom where everyone kinda hates each other.
In a good way :D

[Anonymous No.4134314]

>>4133437
Same stuff over and over again. You are becoming boring dude.

[Anonymous No.4134316]

>>4133437
>pic related
Holy yikes.

[Anonymous No.4134326]

>>4134316
why pay $15 to get advice from a beg when you can go to /ic/ to get it for free

[Anonymous No.4134328]

>>4134326
>/ic/
>advice
pick one.

[Anonymous No.4134331]

>>4134326
>beg
The dude's work isn't perfect but he's definitely not a beg lol

[Anonymous No.4134333]

>>4134045
aaah, you're right
I guess it was because i was basing it from his left foot, which also has a wrong perspective

[Anonymous No.4134343]

drew some hedas on better paper :>

[Anonymous No.4134361]

>>4134218
Azto, work on those hands and face...
you're way better than this

[Anonymous No.4134394]

>>4133872
Work on shading on a pelvis. It looks like she is wearing a mangled diaper.

[Anonymous No.4134427]

>>4134088
Really nice blog?

[Anonymous No.4134434]

>>4132863
Hey, anon, where are these from? I bought all his gumroads and i've never seen that picture before.

[Anonymous No.4134439]

>>4134316
is it worth paying 15 bucks for an art friend?

[Anonymous No.4134454]

does Kyle have a blog?

[Anonymous No.4134455]

[Anonymous No.4134456]

[Anonymous No.4134458]

got this version too

[Anonymous No.4134482]

>>4134454
https://twitter.com/kairunoburogu

[Anonymous No.4134488]

>>4134427
instagram.com/aca_of_maca/

[Anonymous No.4134532]

>>4132639
I'd like to see how those pages look without color

[Anonymous No.4134538]

>>4134361
I cut corner so that I could work faster, I might cut too much tho. At my level I always fuck up sth when I rush my drawing, sometimes it's anatomy, sometimes it's perspective, think I'll slow down a bit.

[Anonymous No.4134545]

>>4133181
Unless shes an owl , her neck is wrong. Also i dont think breasts , even large ones can look like that . you gotta fix this . good luck

[Anonymous No.4134549]

>>4133547
Nice forms

[Anonymous No.4134580]

>>4134545
i kinda "finished" this yesterday, so im done with this, but ill keep those things in mind, thanks
now im grinding fundies on paper

[Anonymous No.4134582]

[Anonymous No.4134636]

>>4134582
Bruh you're polishing a turd, visit the /beg/

[Anonymous No.4134651]

>>4134582
I like the idea. Perspective is a bit wonky, there's a lot of symbols going on and you should work on that lineweight.

[Anonymous No.4134663]

>>4134538
gib no censor

[Anonymous No.4134700]

>>4134532
very basic lineart
>>4132680
>>4132726
thanks!
>>4133462
>>4134005
Regular size monster, on IG

[Anonymous No.4134718]

>>4132639
Why do skies done like the ones here make me feel oddly nostalgic? Really great stuff btw, makes me think of an early 2000s manga for some reason.

[Anonymous No.4134766]

[Anonymous No.4134767]

A bonk

[Anonymous No.4134773]

>>4134766
Head is out of proportion from the rest of the figure, it is too small. It also seems as if it isn't connected to the torso I suggest moving those folds up more that helps define the neck being closer to the head.

[Anonymous No.4134795]

>>4134767
i want to hug him and all of your creations

[Anonymous No.4134817]

A flockmod doodle compilation.

[Anonymous No.4134871]

>>4133437
Meu deus você tá ganhando dinheiro pra isso. Eu sou muito trouxa mesmo.

[Anonymous No.4134877]

>>4132519
even a cheap used scanner from 5 years ago will work.

[Anonymous No.4134881]

>>4133314
just because you made a ton of strokes doesnt make it good... this reads like absolute shit

[Anonymous No.4134905]

>>4134184

[Anonymous No.4134907]

>>4134766
loomis

[Anonymous No.4134933]

Another waifu thingy, but this time for a friend.

[Anonymous No.4134951]

>>4134933
This makes me wish I could be your friend.

[Anonymous No.4134956]

>>4134817
Where do you post your shit bruv, I love it

[Anonymous No.4134957]

>>4134933
resize that shiz

[Anonymous No.4134965]

>>4134795
Me too.

[Anonymous No.4134971]

>>4134957

[Anonymous No.4134974]

>>4132076
im getting the alita movie vibes from the eyes, not a good thing, too unnatural.

[Anonymous No.4135016]

>>4134933
>>4134971
needs more loomis

hair looks like a wig
stiff clothes
stick spine
tail looks like is coming from right side of her leg

roomis

[Anonymous No.4135021]

>>4134316
will you be just my friend for free?

[Anonymous No.4135022]

>>4134907
kek

[Anonymous No.4135023]

>>4133766
congrats my dude, you peaked on this one, maybe the expression is a lil bit confusing those eyebrows don't express just a smile

[Anonymous No.4135026]

>>4132076
maybe a bit of a change on the eye angle so they match better

for me this looks more natural, idk

[Anonymous No.4135046]

hey dorks

[Anonymous No.4135073]

>>4134795
He didn't create that though, it's a bonk

[Anonymous No.4135074]

>>4134907
fuckin lol

[Anonymous No.4135079]

>>4134218
>>4134361
Wait, this artist really is on /ic/ and it's not just a fake? How do I get as good as you?

[Anonymous No.4135082]

>>4135079
You fanboys are perhaps the most cancerous bunch on here, fuck off.

[Anonymous No.4135085]

>>4135082
that's bait to get reactions so they can shill harder

thanks for giving him more attention

[Anonymous No.4135099]

>>4133928
///// y-you too...

[Anonymous No.4135130]

couple of ocs duking it out

[Anonymous No.4135228]

I was drawing this while I was out with friends, I’m pretty happy with her design, gonna correct her stare with white gel pen in a minute though

[Anonymous No.4135254]

>>4131497
I made it cuter! no need to thank me!!

[Anonymous No.4135255]

[Anonymous No.4135258]

>>4135254
why is her hair smeared with cum?

[Anonymous No.4135270]

>>4134907
Its so much worse lmao

[Anonymous No.4135274]

>>4135254
Based

[Anonymous No.4135297]

>>4135079
Yep it's me. I'm not popular, there's no reason for people to fake me.

>>4135085
Traffic from ic is like non-existence, there're better places for me to shill my works, heck, even discord is better.
ic is full of crabs, but some anons here gave me really good critique, that's why I keep posting. Sadly, social media these days, people always try to be nice, too nice, ic is the only place that can give me honest feedbacks.

[Anonymous No.4135324]

>>4134700
Nice lines.
I've been using computer for comics for two years now and the first year i made too thin lines. This year i slowly went too thick. Maybe next year i'll get it right

[Anonymous No.4135326]

>>4131497
is that Kyles art? fucking kek

[Anonymous No.4135376]

>>4135258
lel

[Anonymous No.4135378]

>>4135255
Looks like she's about to fall over the way she's standing.
Either that or her right leg is detached from the rest of her body.

[Anonymous No.4135381]

>>41349
Glad you like it, anon. It's @moisocore on instagram.

[Anonymous No.4135383]

>>4135381
The fuck. >>4134956

[Anonymous No.4135415]

[Anonymous No.4135416]

>>4135254
Why would anyone thank you. It looks like shit.

[Anonymous No.4135427]

>>4132776
Okay, ignore those other faggots, I'll give you some actually proper advice.

Learn anatomy and learn how to construct a face (loomis, reilly, whatever works for you). Have a clear goal of what you want your art to look like. Look at some good artwork that you like and for gods sake, try to distance yourself from japanese shit, also ic is not a good place, since it is infested with weebfags.

[Anonymous No.4135445]

>>4135416
ok can you thank me now? i even bothered to add the second arm!!

[Anonymous No.4135518]

>>4135445
based af

[Anonymous No.4135521]

>>4135254
>>4135445

Actually much better.
The #western faces that look like they ran away from the atrocious western porn comics are fucking terrible.

The whole sense of aesthetics is just wrong with them. The west has no sense of beauty.

If you want to render the faces out then study the actual masters of stylised painting namely As109, Nababa, and that pixiv guy who renders the lolies (you know which, the crazy good one).

Now shorten her entire torso and she's perfect.

[Anonymous No.4135530]

>>4135427
lol

[Anonymous No.4135533]

>>4135521
>The west has no sense of beauty
LMAO WHAT

[Anonymous No.4135540]

>>4135521
HAHAHAHAH delusional weebs

[Anonymous No.4135547]

>>4135533
Everything that comes out of the west looks like the mediocre real people a western character looks like a random fuck you could see if you went outside.
Probably not to offend the normal mediocre unattractive people.

Japan doesn't give a fuck and just draws their idea if perfect.
They understand that for anything real the camera is good enough, an artist is to show an image of something better than real.

See this Nero, he's basically young Dolph Lundgren who got even whiter and handsomer, their character is a white guy so they made him a perfect white guy.

Compare him to the western Dante from DmC and you will feel the difference.

[Anonymous No.4135548]

>>4135445
>>4135416
>Why would anyone thank you. It looks like shit.

[Anonymous No.4135549]

>>4135297
Ic sucks.
Even discord is better than this place.

[Anonymous No.4135572]

>>4135521
Is As109 the pixiv guy who draw lolis? Or there's another one?

[Anonymous No.4135595]

>>4135572
No i meant this devil.
His rendering is insane

https://chan.sankakucomplex.com/post/show/7063457

[Anonymous No.4135626]

>>4135324
Thanks, I actually started with lines that were too thick, it's a really hard thing to balance

[Anonymous No.4135630]

>>4134700
È piccolo internet.
Quando avevo fb ti seguivo, da prima che publicassi Storie di uomini intraprendenti e situazioni critiche.
Il tuo stile mi piace parecchio, e soprattutto sai fare fumetti, continua così.

[Anonymous No.4135662]

>Alt threads are gradually becoming filled with posters lazily editing other people's work instead of posting their own work.
Come on anons, please don't let one the few decent thread on/ic/ turn to complete shit.

[Nosebro No.4135722]

>>4135415
this is very cool. I love you bro.

[Anonymous No.4135803]

>>4135427
That looks like shit. I know what I like, but currently I'm doing some experimentation here and there. I'm looking to create a style with painterly colors and values, but yet retain clean lines that don't take away from the colors.
I think you should learn a bit before you start posting here.

[Anonymous No.4135811]

>>4134951
This is the sweetest thing I've ever seen somebody say to me on /ic/. Thank you, it means a lot coming from this place.

[Anonymous No.4135964]

>>4135228
It is I biologically invested anon! I hath returned to critique thine bear! It’s chest is to short and not broad enough! It’s body is somewhat stiff! And the paws look bent! The legs also look very weird for a bear! Good piece overall just study the anatomy a bit more on both the person and bear

[Anonymous No.4135972]

>>4135547
Have you ever bothered to look at western art instead of soulless anime girls all the time? There are plenty of good western artist just as there are plenty of good Japanese artist. To say one place is better at art than the other is completely retarded and makes you look like a fucking idiot.

[Anonymous No.4136084]

A popular Marshland hymn as follows 'Morrow we might fight but at night we make right, extra pours of bug brew! How lucky we brave few!'

[Anonymous No.4136092]

>>4135964
Thank you biologically invested anon! I hadn’t realised :0 I’ll be more careful looking at the reference next time

[Anonymous No.4136309]

>>4135254

[Anonymous No.4136749]

>>4136092
Your welcome and remember to keep drawing my friend

[Anonymous No.4136751]

>>4136084
I want to hug frog man

[Anonymous No.4136832]

>>4134037
From the thumbnail I thought it was a bukkake/gangbang set up

[Anonymous No.4136934]

>>4135803
lol