Alternative Art/Stylization Thread

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Alternative Art/Stylization Thread Anonymous Sun Sep 15 14:05:59 2019 No.4117202 [Reply] [Original]

Previous thread: >>4109088

What is /ALT/?
If you're looking for a place to post your cartooning then you've found the right general. This is /ic/s 1st and only merged hub where both Eastern and Western stylization can coexist peacefully, hence the double title. However, by community demand and long history, this is favorably an Anime general.
>Rules & Guidelines
(1) Any form of cartooning is welcome; so submit and receive feedback from others. (2) Please resize your images before posting. (3) Share your knowledge and (4) Remember to not be afraid of asking for critique. Most importantly I encourage you to keep discussion at a civil level, but you're more than welcome to share your opinions.
>I came for anime. Why does the image OP say cartoons general?
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>>	Anonymous Sun Sep 15 14:11:38 2019 No.4117213 File: 174 KB, 800x1000, DREWIN.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] trying a simpler style to get more things "done"

>>	Anonymous Sun Sep 15 14:19:06 2019 No.4117219 File: 331 KB, 1920x2004, 75D18557-7D21-44CE-B826-F26A3053B0A1.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Sun Sep 15 14:26:29 2019 No.4117229 File: 3.19 MB, 3502x4473, girl 2.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>4114790 Posting this here because old thread died.

>>	Anonymous Sun Sep 15 17:03:16 2019 No.4117438 File: 709 KB, 750x985, E5F45BE4-43AD-49FD-B359-7DD6DB5BBF2F.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Tried to redesign Tifa for the other thread, this was really fun, though the original is objectively better <3

>>	Anonymous Sun Sep 15 17:09:55 2019 No.4117442 File: 212 KB, 735x1000, frog prince.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Trying to work out a design for a frog prince, not sure about it yet

>>	Anonymous Sun Sep 15 17:11:12 2019 No.4117443 >>4117442 Have you looked at inspiration from real frogs in the while? You might find something interesting

>>	Anonymous Sun Sep 15 17:13:26 2019 No.4117445 File: 63 KB, 605x480, medium.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>4117443 I have, I spent my morning looking at poison darts and trying to sketch out a way to catpure their head/eye shape while still giving it a cute and youthful humanoid feel

>>	Zachfag Sun Sep 15 17:27:08 2019 No.4117461 >>4117438 That does look like a psx era style drawing somehow, pretty neat

>>	Anonymous Sun Sep 15 17:30:53 2019 No.4117463 >>4117461 Thank you zachfag :D that means a lot

Anonymous Sun Sep 15 17:45:22 2019 No.4117481
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mucking about with shapes

>>4117229
her legs are off balance and poorly shaded but the design and color palette are cute

>>4117442
head shape suggests more of a gecko than a frog, but like u said its hard to find that balance between frogginess and humanoid appeal

>>	Anonymous Sun Sep 15 17:46:31 2019 No.4117482 >>4117481 his arm monkaS

Anonymous Sun Sep 15 18:17:43 2019 No.4117524
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>>4117481
>>4117482
holy hell yea i realized that arm was horrible right when i uploaded it
did a quick fix but i think im gonna go do life studies for a while, fuck stylization

>>	Anonymous Sun Sep 15 18:37:50 2019 No.4117547 File: 100 KB, 575x1011, 3814e35513e5284b99350ff3e590c387.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Doing the Tifa thing but I really don't want to draw boots.

>>	Anonymous Sun Sep 15 18:43:45 2019 No.4117552 >>4117547 Just go digimon clown boots

>>	Zachfag Sun Sep 15 18:50:44 2019 No.4117562 File: 338 KB, 538x572, 1528497249760.gif [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>4117547 THIS IS THE POWER OF THE PS4

>>	Anonymous Sun Sep 15 19:46:17 2019 No.4117632 File: 75 KB, 493x897, Screenshot_27.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] im really having trouble drawing these angels

>>	Anonymous Sun Sep 15 19:49:12 2019 No.4117638 >>4117632 Cute! >>4117547 I feel the chest/ribcage is looking a bit too broad >>4117438 I like the fashion of her outfit a lot, it feels like a style I don't see often nowadays

>>	Anonymous Sun Sep 15 19:51:50 2019 No.4117642 >>4117638 >fashion Aw thank you anon :) I’m happy it’s notable

>>	Anonymous Sun Sep 15 19:59:17 2019 No.4117653 >>4117547 i love your lines!

>>	Anonymous Sun Sep 15 20:11:42 2019 No.4117663 File: 115 KB, 519x967, 3814e35513e5284b99350ff3e590c387.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>4117638 You're right. Thanks. I also noticed her right leg was coming out of nowhere. >>4117653 Thanks!

>>	Anonymous Sun Sep 15 21:24:54 2019 No.4117755 File: 3.09 MB, 2739x3776, 4117219.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>4117219

>>	Anonymous Sun Sep 15 21:26:50 2019 No.4117760 File: 206 KB, 547x995, 15682259765151.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>4117547 >>4117663 Guess I'm done.

Anonymous Sun Sep 15 22:11:31 2019 No.4117796
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Character design for an illustration
>>4117213
This pretty dope. Is it a vector? Would love to see more in this style.
>>4117438
Ayy you drew a Nomura design. Pretty cool.
>>4117442
Charming design. I agree with anon, he does read more like a gecko. Maybe making him more "ugly-cute" could help to reinforce his frog like qualities? Wider face, or eyes noticeably further apart, for example.
>>4117524
Damn, Peggy. I agree, the body language in the second version reads much better.
>>4117760
Neat shading, I like the exaggeration too. Although I wish you gave her a wee bit more muscle definition in her legs like her upper body. She sort of looks like she's wearing pants lol

>>	Anonymous Sun Sep 15 22:27:14 2019 No.4117810 >>4117755 I like how you mention about curving the the body in a "wave" to make it less stiff yet you basically keep the pose drawn in the same stiff way with shitty anatomy and forms

>>	Anonymous Sun Sep 15 22:58:00 2019 No.4117829 >>4117524 you fixed the feet and the arm but the spine is still broken. good gesture and expression tho

>>	Zachfag Sun Sep 15 23:40:58 2019 No.4117865 >>4117760 Actually I lied. THIS is the power of the PS4. Nice use of crosshatching btw

>>	Anonymous Sun Sep 15 23:45:22 2019 No.4117868 >>4117755 Wow, good shit, anon. Thanks for the help!

Anonymous Mon Sep 16 01:29:14 2019 No.4117960
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This is by no means perfect but I'm calling it finished for now, I'm tired of working on this. I'm not really satisfied with the end product, but I learned a lot doing this.

>>	Anonymous Mon Sep 16 02:00:52 2019 No.4117971 >>4117960 I think you’ll like it more after you see it with fresh eyes, because this is gorgeous

>>	Anonymous Mon Sep 16 02:08:25 2019 No.4117981 >>4117960 Lovely anon, blog?

>>	Anonymous Mon Sep 16 02:21:23 2019 No.4117989 File: 177 KB, 707x1000, Illustration16.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Working from imagination for this one. Could appreciate some feedback

>>	Anonymous Mon Sep 16 02:33:43 2019 No.4118000 >>4117989 Nice lineart! The eyes are really out of line though, and the closer one is taller than the further one

>>	Anonymous Mon Sep 16 02:44:08 2019 No.4118005 >>4117960 very nice

>>	Anonymous Mon Sep 16 02:54:48 2019 No.4118021 >>4117960 Cute I want to hug every single frog in there

>>	Anonymous Mon Sep 16 03:16:23 2019 No.4118041 >>4117989 I feel as though the forehead and face have been flattened and there's no brow line.

>>	Anonymous Mon Sep 16 03:32:25 2019 No.4118063 File: 151 KB, 520x671, aries.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] I made this for my girlfriend, it's really rough but I kind of like how it came out, except the shading on the left eye.

>>	Anonymous Mon Sep 16 04:19:17 2019 No.4118107 >>4118041 Yeah because the eyes are too far apart, so it looks like her face is a box.

>>	Anonymous Mon Sep 16 04:47:54 2019 No.4118126 File: 506 KB, 1200x900, Miho.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Linework + Flats

>>	Anonymous Mon Sep 16 05:02:04 2019 No.4118134 >>4117960 good job nessie chan

Anonymous Mon Sep 16 05:15:43 2019 No.4118147

>>4117760
Bro your shading style is really neat, that shit must've took forever though.
>>4117796
The folds on the clothing and the costume choice make me want to nut
>>4117960
Jesus dude this world looks really cool, you should post more if you've got more
>>4118126
Looking forward to this finished piece anon!

>>	Anonymous Mon Sep 16 07:21:33 2019 No.4118206 File: 53 KB, 360x400, 003 - madeleine.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] New style. What do you think /ic/?

>>	Anonymous Mon Sep 16 07:22:36 2019 No.4118209 >>4118206 oui oui oui

>>	Anonymous Mon Sep 16 07:23:06 2019 No.4118210 File: 33 KB, 960x1080, finnish autism lion29.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>4118206 Old style for comparison.

>>	Anonymous Mon Sep 16 07:28:58 2019 No.4118215 >>4118210 New one is mucha betto

>>	Anonymous Mon Sep 16 07:30:36 2019 No.4118218 >>4118206 >>4118210 The strokes are nice but less detailed

>>	Anonymous Mon Sep 16 07:33:57 2019 No.4118221 >>4118210 It's spelled "Denmark"

>>	Anonymous Mon Sep 16 07:36:06 2019 No.4118228 >>4118215 It feels much more comfortable to draw too. >>4118218 Yeah maybe I'll add a bit more details for future pics. >>4118221 Danmark is an inside joke on /int/.

>>	Anonymous Mon Sep 16 09:15:38 2019 No.4118311 >>4117755 are you bear the mighty by any chance?

>>	Anonymous Mon Sep 16 09:28:46 2019 No.4118318 >>4117796 Hey thanks! Yup it's vector.

>>	Anonymous Mon Sep 16 10:14:38 2019 No.4118355 >>4117989 geez anon is the clothes really from imagination? that's amazing

>>	Anonymous Mon Sep 16 10:15:44 2019 No.4118357 >>4118206 easier on the eyes, I like it.

>>	Anonymous Mon Sep 16 10:18:45 2019 No.4118359 File: 241 KB, 798x900, Nyandesuka.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>4116769 fixed it up with ref

>>	Anonymous Mon Sep 16 10:20:10 2019 No.4118362 >>4117810 Yes crab, because they didn't actually change it they're SHOWING what's wrong.

>>	Anonymous Mon Sep 16 10:33:45 2019 No.4118383 >>4118228 Is there actually a cringy twink poster in the scandi threads?

>>	Anonymous Mon Sep 16 10:54:38 2019 No.4118412 >>4118355 A little ref is used, but not in the 1:1 manner, more like a combination of multiple references I've been observing how clothes work irl for a while, and as it turns out it's been really helpful especially with the sleeves.

>>	Anonymous Mon Sep 16 11:06:25 2019 No.4118437 >>4118383 I don't browse the generals, but there are plenty of gay nords, a pair of gay spain and portugal, and couple of weeb arabs/turks on /int/.

>>	Anonymous Mon Sep 16 11:08:52 2019 No.4118442 >>4118437 I think you've just sold me on /int/ anon. Gonna start casually browsing.

>>	Anonymous Mon Sep 16 11:28:17 2019 No.4118471 >>4117219 The exact same pose, check this out https://youtu.be/JeluYdgfltY

Anonymous Mon Sep 16 11:40:02 2019 No.4118486
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>>4118412
okay phew, you got me a little worried man; actually you've just helped me out quite a bit. I'd slowly been becoming convinced people were just able to do this shit without reference at all as insane as that would be.

pic related is what I did with basically 0 reference, although I:
- still had a small degree of reference imprinted on my mind from the other day.
- luckily had a good idea of what I wanted for the head immediately.
- more or less did only the things I knew how to do.

I accidentally used my default old method for the chest instead of the newer forward chest deployment method i'd learned. Also I couldn't fix the hand nor the body without undoing it all because the program I used doesn't allow erasing, only undo (which is how i like it for lineart).

>>4118359
This here is the finished, fixed up version where I completely replaced the body with the correct method, and fixed things up with reference where necessary, especially the hands where I did it based off of photos of my own hands. Lessons reinforced:
- If something looks fundamentally off, redo it and fix it properly. Do not leave it broken as is - even if it is annoying to replace.
- Don't be hasty, stick around to bugfix.
- Lots of bugfixing.
- Don't sleep until you're done.

>>	Anonymous Mon Sep 16 11:52:00 2019 No.4118513 File: 1.06 MB, 3508x2480, 9D1DB93F-EC83-4B3F-A357-D7253AA27135.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Did a witchy drawing for Halloween.

Anonymous Mon Sep 16 12:27:15 2019 No.4118539
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>>4117796
>>4117865
>>4118147
Thanks, my dudes. Ended up following the advice of the first anon and added some curves to the legs. It does look better. Thanks again for the feedback.

>>	Anonymous Mon Sep 16 13:23:43 2019 No.4118599 File: 474 KB, 720x960, Mochi.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Mon Sep 16 13:26:19 2019 No.4118601 File: 115 KB, 750x1000, 9016F375-77A9-4CB8-8C4A-FA2774DB7836.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Is this soul?

>>	Anonymous Mon Sep 16 13:37:36 2019 No.4118611 File: 393 KB, 862x595, Capture.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] thief from towergirls thread

>>	Anonymous Mon Sep 16 13:53:32 2019 No.4118618 >>4118311 No I'm not

>>	Anonymous Mon Sep 16 14:35:24 2019 No.4118674 File: 105 KB, 750x750, girl face anime small.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] how's this style?

>>	Anonymous Mon Sep 16 15:17:12 2019 No.4118711 >>4118107 It's not just eyes. The nose is placed directly on the centerline of the face and doesn't jut out the way it should.

>>	Anonymous Mon Sep 16 15:27:17 2019 No.4118721 >>4118674 Looks unfinished.

>>	Anonymous Mon Sep 16 16:20:20 2019 No.4118778 File: 102 KB, 585x736, lines2.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] what up

>>	Anonymous Mon Sep 16 16:39:26 2019 No.4118801 >>4118311 who?

>>	Anonymous Mon Sep 16 16:41:15 2019 No.4118805 >>4118611 i rike it :3

>>	Anonymous Mon Sep 16 16:51:32 2019 No.4118828 File: 127 KB, 747x748, fsafafsafafsafa.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] ahh

>>	Zachfag Mon Sep 16 17:03:11 2019 No.4118844 >>4118828 Very mid-2000s Cartppn Network-esque

>>	Anonymous Mon Sep 16 17:38:23 2019 No.4118895 File: 270 KB, 2000x2000, mapache y pinguino 2.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Mon Sep 16 18:26:12 2019 No.4118963 File: 614 KB, 1500x1500, Hibiki.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Eyes seem wonky to me.

>>	Anonymous Mon Sep 16 18:42:55 2019 No.4118982 >>4118362 Except what they show is still wrong. Their redline is feeding them misinformation.

>>	Anonymous Mon Sep 16 18:43:24 2019 No.4118983 >>4118982 Then redline it

>>	Anonymous Mon Sep 16 18:48:44 2019 No.4118988 File: 275 KB, 1000x1000, Untitled_Artwork.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] my critique for myself is that the line weights suck but because I didn't care about the outcome at all, my overall process was successful

>>	Anonymous Mon Sep 16 18:59:14 2019 No.4118998 >>4118982 this is why stupid /beg/s should stay in their containment zone

>>	Anonymous Mon Sep 16 19:04:36 2019 No.4119003 >>4117442 how long does it take you to do these

>>	Anonymous Mon Sep 16 19:24:16 2019 No.4119021 File: 2.49 MB, 1500x1500, Hibiki.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>4118963

Anonymous Mon Sep 16 20:20:20 2019 No.4119063
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For the idea from references thread

>>4117971
>>4117981
>>4118005
>>4118021
>>4118134
>>4118147
Thanks for the kind words, anon. I'm glad other people enjoy it, at least.
>blog
https://twitter.com/NessieFynn

>>4117481
>>4117796
Yeah he does look a bit too lizard-ish. I'll try playing with the head shape some more.

>>4119003
The drawing itself takes me like an hour or two. I spend like a day or so doodling out ideas and thinking about what I want when coming up with the design, though.

>>	Anonymous Mon Sep 16 21:06:50 2019 No.4119103 File: 114 KB, 950x750, hjkl.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Is this chicken scratching

>>	Anonymous Mon Sep 16 21:15:20 2019 No.4119115 File: 46 KB, 735x960, 70218259_2406887212737940_7262115688318238720_o.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Mon Sep 16 22:06:59 2019 No.4119153 >>4119021 Very comfy >>4119103 kek Looks dirty though >>4119115 Das how you get dem followers anon. Das the way to do it

>>	Zachfag Mon Sep 16 22:12:41 2019 No.4119161 >>4119115 Blog?

>>	Anonymous Mon Sep 16 22:15:29 2019 No.4119165 >>4119161 https://www.patreon.com/augcasarin There is her naked in 7 dollar Tiers, and is pretty good i have to say. Im start today in NSFW art.

>>	Anonymous Mon Sep 16 23:41:13 2019 No.4119269 >>4119115 milkies

>>	Anonymous Mon Sep 16 23:42:14 2019 No.4119272 >>4119115 those sure are some badonkers

>>	Anonymous Tue Sep 17 00:04:54 2019 No.4119295 File: 1.35 MB, 3096x4128, 434aa274-1d6f-417b-b569-141e61638b44.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] /ic/ and /i/

>>	Anonymous Tue Sep 17 04:39:15 2019 No.4119467 File: 2.50 MB, 1728x2160, 34(Titan).png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] It's been a while.

>>	Anonymous Tue Sep 17 04:40:35 2019 No.4119470 File: 687 KB, 960x720, Nia Blade Form.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Tue Sep 17 04:41:30 2019 No.4119471 >>4119467 Nice work as always, anon

>>	Anonymous Tue Sep 17 04:54:13 2019 No.4119486 File: 209 KB, 800x720, 004 - portugal and spain trapped in another world.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] New pic, I'm gonna gradually add more colours and details to these.

>>	Anonymous Tue Sep 17 04:56:07 2019 No.4119488 >>4119486 cute!

>>	Anonymous Tue Sep 17 05:27:04 2019 No.4119508 >>4119486 d'awww

>>	Anonymous Tue Sep 17 09:26:40 2019 No.4119718 File: 106 KB, 750x750, wipdemon1.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] work in progress demon girl putting on gloves hand might be too difficult

>>	Anonymous Tue Sep 17 09:44:34 2019 No.4119736 File: 315 KB, 2000x2000, Untitled-4.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>4117202 thoughts?

>>	Anonymous Tue Sep 17 09:54:32 2019 No.4119740 File: 2.89 MB, 4268x3041, file.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] ehehehehehehehhehehehe

>>	Anonymous Tue Sep 17 09:56:43 2019 No.4119743 >>4119740 It's been a while. Nice to see you again.

Anonymous Tue Sep 17 10:18:59 2019 No.4119755

What's up with so many posters drawing more or less the same content?

It feels like some of you are trying more to appeal to general tastes of the board rather than go against convention with more unique subjects or concepts. It seems to mostly boil down to "cute" or "sexy" drawings of girls. Don't get me wrong I don't want to come off like a bitter crab, some of it is actually drawn rather well, but it's just so derivative and a bit boring. Don't let me stop you though, just my opinion.

>>	Anonymous Tue Sep 17 10:22:40 2019 No.4119762 >>4119740 Do you have a blog? I absolutely love your art.

>>	Anonymous Tue Sep 17 10:28:11 2019 No.4119772 File: 596 KB, 1101x1501, koume art trade.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Trying more animu. >>4119755 Blame Twitter.

>>	Anonymous Tue Sep 17 10:28:18 2019 No.4119773 >>4119755 What do your "unique" drawings look like?

>>	Anonymous Tue Sep 17 10:36:16 2019 No.4119782 >>4119755 It's the easiest way to get attention which is what every poster wants in this thread

>>	Anonymous Tue Sep 17 10:37:52 2019 No.4119787 File: 62 KB, 732x719, shitnieeereew.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] i cant lineart or shading so this is where i finish

>>	Anonymous Tue Sep 17 10:42:20 2019 No.4119793 >>4119755 You're on a Mongolian shadow puppet forum, of course there are going to be a lot of people here who just want to draw cute anime girls

>>	Anonymous Tue Sep 17 11:03:22 2019 No.4119817 File: 114 KB, 808x640, C62BFE36-9CA7-4488-8711-118B5192EE9D.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Drew a few things

>>	Anonymous Tue Sep 17 11:04:01 2019 No.4119818 File: 242 KB, 750x750, FA464635-0C85-4774-8D8C-380AB5B2DC30.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>4119817

>>	Anonymous Tue Sep 17 11:04:37 2019 No.4119819 File: 110 KB, 750x750, B7F7125F-9DA2-45C1-A874-3FA7838B97FA.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>4119818

>>	Anonymous Tue Sep 17 11:06:51 2019 No.4119825 File: 84 KB, 637x650, 9FB186AC-7D45-43FD-947B-1F3B294BA8EF.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>4119819 Last one. Still new to digital

>>	Anonymous Tue Sep 17 11:18:51 2019 No.4119839 File: 73 KB, 774x1032, Image2.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] N越GプM煙I

>>	Anonymous Tue Sep 17 11:52:03 2019 No.4119883 >>4119817 >>4119818 >>4119819 >>4119825 the actual absolute state of brian

>>	Anonymous Tue Sep 17 11:52:43 2019 No.4119885 >>4119883 So directionless

>>	Anonymous Tue Sep 17 12:02:50 2019 No.4119908 >>4119787 Did you do the lineart and colors on the same layer? Don't do that.

>>	Anonymous Tue Sep 17 12:04:28 2019 No.4119911 >>4119908 I did not I just gave up

>>	Anonymous Tue Sep 17 13:29:48 2019 No.4120004 File: 574 KB, 1080x1119, sketch 102_2.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Any critique on this? I don't really like how it turned out, so anything might help.

>>	Anonymous Tue Sep 17 13:31:53 2019 No.4120005 >>4119817 >>4119818 >>4119819 >>4119825 Actually like these a lot over your traditional ones.

>>	Anonymous Tue Sep 17 14:22:27 2019 No.4120061 >>4120004 foreshortening and perspective problems mostly that's what my /beg/ eyes see

>>	Anonymous Tue Sep 17 15:20:47 2019 No.4120145 File: 2.68 MB, 2905x2129, file.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>4119743 Thank you! glad some people still remember me, its just tough being a wagecuck.. >>4119762 Thank you! Yes it's @RushKyuun on twitter!

>>	Anonymous Tue Sep 17 16:02:41 2019 No.4120208 File: 2.23 MB, 2739x1625, file.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>4118983 >>4118998 not the same dude but i gave it a shot

>>	Anonymous Tue Sep 17 17:47:30 2019 No.4120387 File: 497 KB, 1200x950, september-16-2019-4.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>4119817 cleaned this up

>>	Anonymous Tue Sep 17 17:49:33 2019 No.4120390 >>4120208 >/beg/ redlining /beg/

>>	Anonymous Tue Sep 17 19:18:23 2019 No.4120565 File: 1.77 MB, 1341x1716, img409.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] When negations reach a standstill, Martian pathfinders find a way to tip the scale.

>>	Anonymous Tue Sep 17 19:21:22 2019 No.4120577 File: 135 KB, 837x841, deminwe.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] i now like to draw girls with horns

>>	Anonymous Tue Sep 17 19:25:09 2019 No.4120582 >>4120565 Is that a dong?

>>	Anonymous Tue Sep 17 19:27:32 2019 No.4120587 >>4120582 my boy is packin

>>	Anonymous Tue Sep 17 20:29:06 2019 No.4120716 File: 330 KB, 769x861, fssf.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Tue Sep 17 21:39:57 2019 No.4120828 File: 149 KB, 762x900, faeskull.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Tue Sep 17 22:04:29 2019 No.4120866 >>4117960 that's dedication

Anonymous Tue Sep 17 22:56:30 2019 No.4120919
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I'm wondering about spriteart and if I can even do it on a tablet that I have. Are there any resources on how to set up things like the canvas? Like I can't be doing something that's 2000x2000 and 300 dpi I assume. I sort of have it setup on my ipad in procreate but I'd rather be using CSP honestly.

>>	Anonymous Wed Sep 18 02:16:45 2019 No.4121091 File: 451 KB, 960x720, Miho.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Wed Sep 18 04:56:27 2019 No.4121207 File: 160 KB, 1796x2268, drawing your feeligns.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Wed Sep 18 04:57:13 2019 No.4121208 >>4121207 I love your doodles so much

>>	Anonymous Wed Sep 18 04:58:41 2019 No.4121210 File: 226 KB, 500x286, 1545964367277.gif [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>4121208 thank you very much

>>	Anonymous Wed Sep 18 05:47:55 2019 No.4121238 >>4121091 im sorry you dont get responses anon, this is really cool :(

>>	Anonymous Wed Sep 18 06:20:44 2019 No.4121263 >>4121091 >>4121238 samefag

>>	Anonymous Wed Sep 18 08:22:36 2019 No.4121338 File: 78 KB, 713x899, fsfafasf.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] ehhh

>>	Anonymous Wed Sep 18 09:05:39 2019 No.4121369 >>4121338 generic and soulless

>>	Anonymous Wed Sep 18 09:40:10 2019 No.4121394 File: 97 KB, 645x889, refddedo.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] tried redoing it a bit

>>	Anonymous Wed Sep 18 09:49:14 2019 No.4121407 File: 155 KB, 960x960, IMG_20190918_153746_254.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>4120565 Hero.

>>	Anonymous Wed Sep 18 10:10:40 2019 No.4121422 >>4121091 >>4121238 You don't get responses because you're an asshole and everyone that interacts with you hates you

>>	Anonymous Wed Sep 18 10:38:42 2019 No.4121443 >>4121422 I don't hate them, I don't even know this person. I like some of their drawings as well. Why are you speaking for everyone like this place is some sort of hivemind?

Anonymous Wed Sep 18 10:59:23 2019 No.4121463

>>4117989
As many other people here have mentioned the face is a little off. I personally have some problems with the hand holding the railing too, it seems like it should be from a slightly different angle than what it's currently drawn in. I know this is anime but what's going on with how her neck connects to her body? Maybe make some minor adjustments to that too. Very impressive though, anon!

>>	Anonymous Wed Sep 18 13:28:37 2019 No.4121630 File: 561 KB, 960x720, Nia Blade Form.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Wed Sep 18 13:29:18 2019 No.4121631 >>4121407 Blog?

>>	Anonymous Wed Sep 18 13:31:37 2019 No.4121632 >>4117989 You need more Loomis, unironically.

>>	Anonymous Wed Sep 18 14:09:49 2019 No.4121663 File: 1.74 MB, 2346x1551, img410.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Imbued with all sorts of parchment and prayer, these knights of Caldonia know no equal.

>>	Anonymous Wed Sep 18 14:44:35 2019 No.4121704 File: 205 KB, 960x960, received_383195349027622.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>4121631 Regular size monster on IG

>>	Anonymous Wed Sep 18 14:52:49 2019 No.4121715 >>4120828 this is cool, you should ink it

Anonymous Wed Sep 18 15:07:40 2019 No.4121732

>>4121422
No people only interact with those who are really /beg/ and the same hand full of artist like the underage girl that draws shit really flat and the dude that draws the gay frog people. /alt/ has become really circle jerky like a discord channel.

>>	Anonymous Wed Sep 18 15:09:57 2019 No.4121734 >>4121630 facial features are really off, especially the mouth, like its just floating in space. remap them with all basic lommis construction.

>>	Anonymous Wed Sep 18 15:17:24 2019 No.4121743 >>4119165 >Im start today in NSFW art. And another one fell to degeneracy.

>>	Anonymous Wed Sep 18 16:55:07 2019 No.4121899 File: 371 KB, 1800x1200, file.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Art Deco postcard I had to around the theme of camping

>>	Anonymous Wed Sep 18 16:56:39 2019 No.4121902 >>4121899 Any thoughts or crits on this before I finalize this?

>>	Anonymous Wed Sep 18 16:59:31 2019 No.4121907 >>4121732 I'm sorry no one is giving you feedback, anon. No need to be bitter towards others, it's a distraction, just keep practicing and bettering your art. /ic/ is just aboard, not the end all be all.

>>	Anonymous Wed Sep 18 17:13:08 2019 No.4121927 >>4121899 Colors are nice, but absolutely nothing about this says art deco. I can't really give any pointers other than look at some.

>>	Anonymous Wed Sep 18 17:14:17 2019 No.4121929 File: 91 KB, 871x825, flatqaw.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] god I wish I knew how to shade

>>	Anonymous Wed Sep 18 17:16:42 2019 No.4121932 >>4121929 Pick a lightsource or tell me where the lightsource is supposed to be coming from and I'll do a paintover for ya

>>	Anonymous Wed Sep 18 17:19:13 2019 No.4121936 >>4121932 well top left corner, in front of the face if you're willing to make any other fixes or rendering, please do

>>	Anonymous Wed Sep 18 17:22:23 2019 No.4121938 >>4117438 Your toonika right?

>>	Anonymous Wed Sep 18 17:26:46 2019 No.4121944 File: 619 KB, 750x743, 158A43FA-326A-4E44-A581-D480D667C17A.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>4121938 I... don’t think so? :0 can I have more context please

>>	Anonymous Wed Sep 18 17:27:17 2019 No.4121945 File: 476 KB, 790x1000, hed.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Wed Sep 18 17:30:26 2019 No.4121948 >>4121945 I love your rendering anon, the thumbnail seems ‘weird’ though, for lack of a better word

>>	Anonymous Wed Sep 18 17:40:57 2019 No.4121967 File: 447 KB, 871x825, file.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>4121936 Welp here you go then. I didn't know what style you were going for, so this is probably not what you wanted.

>>	Anonymous Wed Sep 18 17:43:53 2019 No.4121970 >>4121967 thank you ofc shame that you couldn't have the .sai file

>>	Anonymous Wed Sep 18 17:47:37 2019 No.4121979 >>4121944 Nvm other person they stopped drawing and deleted their shit anyways so I got excited for a second

>>	Anonymous Wed Sep 18 17:48:34 2019 No.4121981 File: 159 KB, 750x864, 1561146497309.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>4121970 >sai you should really try to pirate photoshop or clip studio if you can anon

>>	Anonymous Wed Sep 18 17:50:30 2019 No.4121984 >>4121981 i have a pirated photoshop but it lags when I paint in it :( and clip studio i never used is it that better?

>>	Anonymous Wed Sep 18 17:51:14 2019 No.4121990 >>4121979 O-oh...

Anonymous Wed Sep 18 17:59:50 2019 No.4122013

>>4121907
>No need to be bitter towards others
Not even the artist your shitting on. I don't even post in /alt/ anymore, just calling it how I see it. I've been poking my head in these threads every so often and there's not alot of critique happening, only crabbing and people going BLOG!? Thats a problem with /ic/ in general but I guess I'm just a bitter anon.

>>	Anonymous Wed Sep 18 18:02:19 2019 No.4122019 >>4121984 > It's basically Photoshop but geared towards illustration. In most areas, it's on-par or even better than PS. Also it's only $25 when it's one sale if you feel like paying for it

Anonymous Wed Sep 18 18:02:34 2019 No.4122020

>>4121984
Try to learn Photoshop hotkeys if you can, but honestly you'd be well off trying Clip Studio. Even an Photoshop illustrator like Dave Rapoza switched over to Clip studio.
Be prepared for your art to suck for a couple months while you get used to it tho, the brush engine behaves a bit differently and there isn't too many resources for copying specific brushes like there are in Photoshop or Sai.

>>	Anonymous Wed Sep 18 18:06:02 2019 No.4122027 File: 101 KB, 839x821, fsafsafafa.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>4122019 >>4122020 ok ill try it meanwhile i tried my own vers

Anonymous Wed Sep 18 18:17:55 2019 No.4122045

>>4122013
who fucking cares, dude. At the end of the day, it's just some fucking image board on a website. It's not the end all be all.

I agree it's current state is a shame. but lashing out at others won't improve the overall conduct or vibe of these threads for the better either. Complaining will only serve to fill a cathartic need for you, and after that, what then? Business a usual? All I'm fucking saying is be the change you want to see, take initiative and other like minded posters will follow suit. Being more constructive in feedback. If you have any, contribute valuable or relevant resources. Be more reluctant in feeding the crabs and giving them the reactions they so desperately crave. Stop coveting others for being asked for their "BLOG?" "BLAHG!?" "BLUGGG???".

Human beings really are social creatures, that why I don't even blame you for feeling like that. However you can either leave to find some place else that meets the higher quality and standards that you want; or you can participate in contributing to improve the general conduct and atmosphere of /ic/. Lord knows the Jannies are going to do jack shit.

>>	Anonymous Wed Sep 18 19:29:50 2019 No.4122138 File: 559 KB, 960x720, Nia Blade Form.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Wed Sep 18 19:33:14 2019 No.4122146 >>4122138 Fuck sakes give it a rest go start something else.

>>	Anonymous Wed Sep 18 19:36:38 2019 No.4122150 wtf

>>	Anonymous Wed Sep 18 21:21:07 2019 No.4122289 File: 504 KB, 1000x481, syrenka.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Can I get some advice here... I'm worried that the second one looks overdone with all the gradients, I usually do flat color only. Which one do you prefer?

Zachfag Wed Sep 18 21:26:39 2019 No.4122297

>>4122289
Personally I think the one on the right's got more depth to it. The base colors in both look good as they are but the one on the left feels less dynamic without the gradients. I would probably amp up the ones on the mermaid though but only slightly. Other than that not too bad so far anon, I especially love the gradients on the anchor!

>>	Anonymous Wed Sep 18 21:29:30 2019 No.4122303 >>4122297 Thank you! I think it'll help.

Anonymous Wed Sep 18 21:39:08 2019 No.4122312
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>>4122027
Bruh, all you had to do is copy my painting and
you goofed it up. Basically what I was trying to show you was that you needed to define the shadows in large clear shapes with only very sparse amounts of highlight within the colors of light. With painting you want to think about: good shapes> value structure> light color temperature>variety of edges
With more stylized pieces like this, merging some of the shapes in the hair and keeping the shading on the face sharp is integral for a good look.

>>	Anonymous Wed Sep 18 23:02:18 2019 No.4122430 >>4119486 Are they gay?

>>	Anonymous Wed Sep 18 23:16:12 2019 No.4122450 >>4122289 I like the textured one on the right nice work on this!

>>	Anonymous Wed Sep 18 23:19:34 2019 No.4122454 >>4122289 I think the texture and gradients help add a lot of visual interest, and isn't overdone in the slightest. Nice work

>>	Anonymous Thu Sep 19 01:03:15 2019 No.4122582 >>4121944 Can't tell if it was Icewind Dale or Baldurs Gate but either way your taste is patrician. Ever think about making art of the characters?

>>	Anonymous Thu Sep 19 01:32:18 2019 No.4122606 >>4122312 Im sorry Im gonna train and not post for a while

>>	Anonymous Thu Sep 19 02:48:04 2019 No.4122689 File: 347 KB, 1525x1000, unicorn design.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] How furry is too furry

>>	Anonymous Thu Sep 19 02:50:41 2019 No.4122692 >>4122689 I dunno but that's definitely too furry

>>	Anonymous Thu Sep 19 02:50:48 2019 No.4122693 File: 68 KB, 680x529, Furrychart.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>4122689

>>	Anonymous Thu Sep 19 02:51:27 2019 No.4122694 >>4122692 >>4122693 Thank god, I need a break from /ic/

>>	Anonymous Thu Sep 19 04:23:14 2019 No.4122766 >>4122138 looks like the same kind of expression when someone fakes a smile when their in an awkward situation.

>>	Anonymous Thu Sep 19 04:50:47 2019 No.4122785 >>4122582 I was playing Icewind Dale last night actually haha, i’d definitely do some fanart after I’m skilled enough to do them justice :0

>>	Anonymous Thu Sep 19 05:00:28 2019 No.4122792 >>4122013 Cool blog post bro.

>>	Anonymous Thu Sep 19 05:22:19 2019 No.4122809 File: 440 KB, 768x720, SPXRT.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>4122289 Dont worry anon you got a handle on restraint on the gradients. >>4121407 I dig this style, I'll take it. Just another random style shitty drawing by me.

Anonymous Thu Sep 19 06:34:49 2019 No.4122862

>>4122289
the gradients on the anchor are nice, nothing else really needs them desu. i know it's not exactly your style but you could also try doing some very slight dithering with shadows to sort of get a semi gradiated effect without getting that ios look that comes from too many gradients. mignola does this a lot, he adds little bumps and asymmetries on the edge of his blacks.

https://e-hentai.org/s/d48bdd1128/1186708-138

>>	Anonymous Thu Sep 19 09:29:33 2019 No.4122985 >>4122689 Its only 30% furry. You're fine

>>	Anonymous Thu Sep 19 09:44:19 2019 No.4123007 >>4122785 Nice You're awsome Stay awsome

>>	Anonymous Thu Sep 19 10:38:50 2019 No.4123089 File: 110 KB, 961x895, drowned.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] tried shading again im sorry

Anonymous Thu Sep 19 10:58:15 2019 No.4123135
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>>4122450
>>4122454
>>4122809
Thanks for your feedback!
>>4122862
That looks pretty cool, thank you for the suggestion. The gradients I used are actually overlayed with noise, the picture is just low quality (sorry for that).

Final version in pic rel, I kept most of the gradients (the one in the background seemed like a bit too much).

>>	Anonymous Thu Sep 19 12:35:24 2019 No.4123239 File: 81 KB, 1027x731, 77D8402B-DF9B-4E59-A951-9A93418BFE6D.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>4123007 Ty anon!

>>	Anonymous Thu Sep 19 12:40:10 2019 No.4123246 File: 2.79 MB, 2671x2543, 1568911202573.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Gotta hide

>>	Anonymous Thu Sep 19 12:56:18 2019 No.4123262 what is the key to an appealing lineart?

Anonymous Thu Sep 19 12:59:49 2019 No.4123264
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>>4121715
thanks, I probably would if it wasn't on sketchbook paper.

>>4123135
your work ethic is really impressive! nice to see a different style on ic.

>>4123089
good thing to remember with coloring is complements. putting some red in the shadows would make it look more vibrant.

>>	Anonymous Thu Sep 19 13:19:49 2019 No.4123281 >>4123264 This has a ton of charm. Is this watercolor?

>>	Anonymous Thu Sep 19 13:47:55 2019 No.4123307 File: 594 KB, 1320x1429, ghost girl.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Fixed some stuff. >>4123246 That's pretty good, I like it.

>>	Anonymous Thu Sep 19 15:16:00 2019 No.4123417 File: 73 KB, 747x793, pinkdemon.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] one day I will know how to shade and render

>>	Anonymous Thu Sep 19 15:26:19 2019 No.4123430 >>4123417 Keep working anon! I believe in you

>>	Anonymous Thu Sep 19 15:27:02 2019 No.4123432 >>4123430 thanks

Anonymous Thu Sep 19 15:31:29 2019 No.4123440

>>4118063

cute

>>4118599
underrated best in thread

>>4118601
yes

>>4118895
not furry but i like it

>>4118988
damn super good

>>4119718
cool concept

>>4119736
yes ill have a double cheeseburger miss wendy

>>4119772
unf yes<3

>>4120577
>>4120716

<3

>>4123307
<3

>>	Anonymous Thu Sep 19 15:52:30 2019 No.4123474 >>4122430 No that's a boy and a girl, but the /int/ posters who initially asked for them are.

>>	Anonymous Thu Sep 19 16:30:43 2019 No.4123527 >>4117760 Got a blog?

Anonymous Thu Sep 19 17:01:03 2019 No.4123575
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I had a funky idea of a guy being flustered after summoning a genie and finding out she comes shirtless hehe, this is supposed to be cute and funny :0

>>	Anonymous Thu Sep 19 17:09:10 2019 No.4123581 File: 55 KB, 400x467, d.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>4123575 no!

>>	Anonymous Thu Sep 19 17:10:32 2019 No.4123582 File: 603 KB, 789x1479, Tifa.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Draw this for the tifa redesing thread, I think there is something weird with her arms, but idk what.

>>	Anonymous Thu Sep 19 17:18:28 2019 No.4123589 >>4122693 2 and 3 are the only degenerate furry ones. You can get away with 5 and 6 by mentioning how you're influenced by Looney Tunes or Disney animals.

>>	Anonymous Thu Sep 19 17:22:43 2019 No.4123594 File: 25 KB, 400x400, EAA04002-66B7-46C7-A917-173BCF18196D.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>4123581 Yes

>>	Anonymous Thu Sep 19 18:08:58 2019 No.4123639 >>4123575 >this is supposed to be cute and funny :0 Less tits then and less curves

>>	Anonymous Thu Sep 19 18:12:16 2019 No.4123642 File: 176 KB, 743x746, dynamic demon sport.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] trying to be more dynamic

>>	Anonymous Thu Sep 19 18:23:51 2019 No.4123658 >>4121981 SAI is pretty good for stylized, line heavy work. I have PS and prefer SAI for cartoons.

>>	Anonymous Thu Sep 19 18:31:20 2019 No.4123666 >>4121981 Sai is great, there's no reason to switch it if it works for you

>>	Anonymous Thu Sep 19 18:48:15 2019 No.4123688 >>4123639 Would it work if I made her voluptuous deliberately to show how her sexuality but made him slightly nerdy and scrawny overall? :v

>>	Anonymous Thu Sep 19 19:07:11 2019 No.4123711 File: 2.33 MB, 3244x3943, 273.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Thu Sep 19 19:15:49 2019 No.4123718 File: 66 KB, 789x960, augcasarin.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Thu Sep 19 19:27:07 2019 No.4123730 >>4123718 based although you gave up on the doctor

>>	Anonymous Thu Sep 19 20:07:26 2019 No.4123764 >>4123575 it's weird seeing an underage trying to do lewd

>>	Anonymous Thu Sep 19 20:29:18 2019 No.4123793 >>4119772 >>4119755 >>4119782 OR, and I may be wrong, it's because people like drawing that type of stuff.

>>	Anonymous Thu Sep 19 20:48:38 2019 No.4123815 >>4123793 >it's because people like drawing that type of stuff. No fucking shit, captain obvious

>>	Anonymous Thu Sep 19 21:03:48 2019 No.4123842 File: 269 KB, 720x960, Jen Til Poses.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Just roughing out some ideas for the animation. Favorite?

>>	Anonymous Thu Sep 19 21:25:09 2019 No.4123862 File: 218 KB, 1792x2048, IMG_20190919_202806.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Thu Sep 19 21:39:39 2019 No.4123880 >>4123718 that nose holy shit hahahaha

Anonymous Thu Sep 19 21:45:07 2019 No.4123887

>>4123575
the rendering on her hair is admittedly lovely, but your complete lack of anatomical knowledge REALLY shows on a more complex pose like this. you need to take a step back and re-examine your skillset - that is, unless you're content with staying in the rut of only having one strength while the rest of your fundies fall flat.

>>	Anonymous Thu Sep 19 21:55:03 2019 No.4123898 >>4123281 it's ink, I use it in a very water-colory way though. You get way more saturation with ink, but its much less forgiving and can't be 'lifted' once applied. Thanks, btw!

>>	Anonymous Thu Sep 19 22:20:49 2019 No.4123929 >>4123862 ataruman inspired?

>>	Anonymous Thu Sep 19 22:29:34 2019 No.4123936 >>4123862 Blog?

>>	Anonymous Thu Sep 19 22:43:46 2019 No.4123951 File: 1.27 MB, 1951x1001, file.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>4123089 fuck, these quickies are kinda fun

>>	Anonymous Thu Sep 19 22:51:18 2019 No.4123964 >>4123951 >paintover >keeping dislocated jaw and ayy lmao head shape liquify anon, liquify!!

>>	Anonymous Thu Sep 19 22:53:47 2019 No.4123967 >>4123964 >>4123964 yeah i know the face is still fucked, but if I did that i would remove the """"style""" she asked for rendering advice so i gave her some

>>	Anonymous Thu Sep 19 23:08:33 2019 No.4123991 >>4123642 this has to a be troll >more dynamic >dynamic you drew the same goddamn face angle with the same generic side facing body i think you should try and do a copy from action photos instead of trying to invent things right now

Anonymous Thu Sep 19 23:11:20 2019 No.4123994
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some lazy soulless doodle messing with colors. Kinda came out a bit like watercolor in places, which i thought was cool.

i know this is subjective, but how is the "aesthetic" of the whole thing? i dont draw to make it, i just want to make some niceish looking things every once in a while.

>>	Anonymous Thu Sep 19 23:15:56 2019 No.4124001 >>4123842 Row 2 Col 3

>>	Zachfag Thu Sep 19 23:17:02 2019 No.4124004 >>4123994 Sweet Tooth's son

Anonymous Thu Sep 19 23:26:04 2019 No.4124013

>>4123994
>i know this is subjective, but how is the "aesthetic" of the whole thing? i dont draw to make it, i just want to make some niceish looking things every once in a while
While distinct, it feels a bit sloppy in my honest opinion. I feel like one of the components pf having a strong aesthetic is having every choice in the drawing being made deliberately, and every element in the drawing is done in a particular way because it was the artist's intention. With this, it feels like a lot of the aesthetic was the result of working in a rushed or unskilled way rather than due to that being the way you wanted it to look like. The lines look messy, but they're done in a way that doesn't feel like it was your *goal* to be messy, and the shading and coloring looks a bit ameteurish.
If you want to figure out a strong aesthetic for your work I feel you should either first get your technical skills down, or figure out a way to work that is more manageable for you. It may also help you to spend some time studying art with aesthetics you like so you can understand what makes them so distinctive yourself.

>>	Anonymous Thu Sep 19 23:45:44 2019 No.4124038 File: 41 KB, 779x713, 1567862209288.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>4124004 >TFW I get the reference but many on here will not.

>>	Zachfag Thu Sep 19 23:52:54 2019 No.4124046 File: 104 KB, 300x136, Rage.gif [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>4124038 >tfw no new twisted metal games ever

>>	Anonymous Fri Sep 20 00:36:33 2019 No.4124090 >>4123474 cute

Anonymous Fri Sep 20 00:45:37 2019 No.4124105

>>4124038
>>4124046
>>4124004
dude who drew that here. had no idea what you guys were talking about so looked it up. Pretty crazy how similar it looks. goes to show whatever you could come up with has already been done before.

>>4124013
Thanks for the actual critique. super rare to get a half decent one on this board, which is sad, but yours is well appreciated.
You hit the nail on the head. I honestly never practice anymore and probably never will, so a lot of the "messiness" of the drawing just came down to me being lazy and sucking. You make a really solid point about deliberate choices, and honestly I am too stupid and lack the creativity to do that with every part of the drawing. A lot of this was just accidental and fucking around. I didnt have any sort of plan going into it, just felt like drawing something and thats what i came up with. Hopefully some more motivated people read your post and can use it to benefit themselves. thanks again for a quality critique.

>>	Anonymous Fri Sep 20 03:50:55 2019 No.4124260 >>4123929 im trying to stay away from copying other styles but yes I like ataruman. >>4123936 @fumi2moe on twitter

>>	Anonymous Fri Sep 20 03:55:30 2019 No.4124264 >>4123718 Trying to look mysterious but that nose and those boobs make it look goofy.

>>	Anonymous Fri Sep 20 03:57:04 2019 No.4124267 >>4123718 I still like those milkies

>>	Anonymous Fri Sep 20 04:57:44 2019 No.4124301 File: 415 KB, 960x720, Nia Blade Form.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Fri Sep 20 05:21:05 2019 No.4124311 File: 519 KB, 593x838, phossu.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Felt like going full ham with luminosity, so it had to be gem-shit.

Anonymous Fri Sep 20 05:43:54 2019 No.4124321

>>4123764
It wasn’t in my intention to make it too lewd ;;
>>4123887
Thank you for the feedback anon, you’re completely right. I’d used a reference for her pose but I still couldn’t comprehend all the underlying structure so it’s completely disproportionate and inaccurate, don’t worry though since I’m aware of my weakness in this and am working on it. Hopefully with more practice I can be better than this :’)

>>	Anonymous Fri Sep 20 06:43:11 2019 No.4124369 >>4124321 On a less important note, ty for the compliment on her hair ^_^

>>	Anonymous Fri Sep 20 06:58:35 2019 No.4124380 >>4124301 That detailing and line work look gorgeous anon, particularly like how the hair sways.

>>	Anonymous Fri Sep 20 07:13:31 2019 No.4124394 >>4123718 blog?

>>	Anonymous Fri Sep 20 08:50:24 2019 No.4124478 >>4123718 I really like this style. I agree with others though, nose looks strange and giant breasts are comical.

>>	Anonymous Fri Sep 20 08:57:34 2019 No.4124486 >>4123718 Your style is actually kind of cool, but man your subject matter just comes off super shallow and pandering. You do this for money, so it makes sense if that's what pays the bills I guess. Everyone's got their audience.

>>	Anonymous Fri Sep 20 09:01:27 2019 No.4124493 >>4123718 this is peak br based.

>>	Anonymous Fri Sep 20 09:25:20 2019 No.4124521 >>4122693 1.5 for me.

>>	Anonymous Fri Sep 20 18:09:23 2019 No.4124994 File: 331 KB, 836x972, cop goblin.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Fri Sep 20 18:23:58 2019 No.4125005 File: 743 KB, 1000x765, september-20-2019.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] did a still life

>>	Anonymous Fri Sep 20 18:31:20 2019 No.4125023 >>4124994 >>4124994 good shit

>>	Anonymous Fri Sep 20 19:55:47 2019 No.4125082 >>4117760 @moisocore on instagram

>>	Anonymous Fri Sep 20 19:57:47 2019 No.4125085 Fug, meant to quote >>4123527

>>	Anonymous Fri Sep 20 21:27:14 2019 No.4125162 File: 904 KB, 1000x1865, file.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] messing around with posing, anything off with the figure before I go into the next detail phase?

>>	Anonymous Fri Sep 20 21:32:56 2019 No.4125174 >>4120919 unironically work in mspaint, it's rudimentary but it gets me the best results with anything binary brush related

>>	Anonymous Fri Sep 20 22:11:11 2019 No.4125197 >>4125162 Why did you ignore the perspective grid?

Anonymous Fri Sep 20 22:28:56 2019 No.4125211

>>4125197
Oh that perspective grid was just an initial lay in. It actually ended up being slightly innaccurate to what I wanted to do and I ended up just creating a perspective ruler in CSP for the rest of the buildings and such. I'm not too worried about the architecture now as the program will take care of that for me. I forgot I had it on desu

>>	Anonymous Fri Sep 20 22:35:24 2019 No.4125219 >>4123440 amazing critique anon.

>>	Anonymous Fri Sep 20 23:24:00 2019 No.4125254 File: 2.56 MB, 1652x2332, Buff.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] i like big pecs

>>	Anonymous Fri Sep 20 23:55:31 2019 No.4125280 >>4124521 Monstergirls best girls

>>	Anonymous Sat Sep 21 00:23:47 2019 No.4125295 File: 926 KB, 1000x700, fruit.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >when you shit all over your work in the last 30 minutes tell me what you think of this

>>	Anonymous Sat Sep 21 00:31:25 2019 No.4125301 >>4125295 the figure in the back is kind of wonky, and the front persons arm looks a bit too stretched out, but otherwise pretty good, nice anatomy on the torso and legs, and the lighting is really lovely.

Anonymous Sat Sep 21 00:56:50 2019 No.4125319

>>4123730
thanks. i actually spend a good amout of time on the doctor.
>>4123880
The nose of the doctor? If everyone is pretty, no one is pretty. At least this is what i think.
>>4124264
I didnt try to make this serious or mysterious at all. Its just the way i paint.
>>4124264
If everyone is pretty, no one is pretty.
>>4124267
thanks anon. i spend a good time on them.
>>4124394
https://www.patreon.com/augcasarin
>>4124478
I saw people said a lot of things about that drawing. The nsfw version is even more comical i think.
>>4124486
Im actually trying to find a new audiencie. This pandering and shallow thing that you see i start to do now. I need money, so...but i wont say that im not a little pervert.
>>4124493
thanks

>>	Anonymous Sat Sep 21 03:02:04 2019 No.4125403 File: 406 KB, 768x720, SPXRT2.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>4122809 A drawing before bed is my motto.

>>	Anonymous Sat Sep 21 04:01:41 2019 No.4125432 >>4125162 push the head a little more forward please.

>>	Anonymous Sat Sep 21 04:05:15 2019 No.4125435 >>4123307 I like those eyes

>>	Anonymous Sat Sep 21 04:06:17 2019 No.4125436 >>4120390 shitting on redliners is a punishable offense.

>>	Anonymous Sat Sep 21 04:09:24 2019 No.4125440 File: 562 KB, 560x315, Head Turn.gif [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Sat Sep 21 07:05:16 2019 No.4125532 >>4125440 Very smooth anon

>>	Anonymous Sat Sep 21 08:52:48 2019 No.4125616 >>4125432 ok, will do

>>	Anonymous Sat Sep 21 09:07:34 2019 No.4125625 >>4125254 and tumors on men apparently.

>>	Anonymous Sat Sep 21 09:12:52 2019 No.4125630 File: 47 KB, 700x700, 62220E37-1428-4BCE-AC37-AE7986EFBB1D.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] wanted to revamp an older design/character

>>	Anonymous Sat Sep 21 09:37:58 2019 No.4125657 >>4125254 Unironically look like tumors, i'm sorry you should look it up on google and compare it to your work

>>	Anonymous Sat Sep 21 09:51:14 2019 No.4125664 File: 573 KB, 1251x3587, Y3tPF.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>4125254 Reminds me of the Main Dude.

>>	Zachfag Sat Sep 21 10:16:38 2019 No.4125675 >>4125630 Aw man this makes me want to see a spinoff of Yotsuba of her as a spunky college student. Also blog?

>>	Anonymous Sat Sep 21 10:35:13 2019 No.4125696 >>4125630 I love your linework alot anon!

>>	Anonymous Sat Sep 21 10:41:57 2019 No.4125700 File: 133 KB, 575x966, 20190917_173036.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] I like my lines :P

>>	Anonymous Sat Sep 21 12:13:55 2019 No.4125812 >>4125630 big fan of Bryan Lee O'Malley, I see. Nice design.

>>	Anonymous Sat Sep 21 13:09:06 2019 No.4125874 >>4125675 >>4125696 ty sm i post at twitter.com/bongbai >>4125812 absolutely haha :) thank you !

>>	Anonymous Sat Sep 21 13:13:23 2019 No.4125880 File: 117 KB, 629x900, faunwip.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] any crit before I ink? I struggled a lot with the legs.

>>	Anonymous Sat Sep 21 13:15:38 2019 No.4125881 >>4125880 face loomis a little

Anonymous Sat Sep 21 13:30:13 2019 No.4125904
File: 241 KB, 1300x957, stylish-teenage-boy-sit-rock-nature-outdoors-34132087.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>4125880
Doesn't look like she's sitting or being supported much. Ass isn't connecting very well with the rock or whatever and neither are the legs. Looks like she's sitting in a slope and should just be sliding off.

A normal pose for relaxing on an uncomfortable plane is having one leg bent in and the other one relaxed and stretched out. Imagine how you would try to sit there.

>>	Anonymous Sat Sep 21 14:06:02 2019 No.4125943 >>4125440 It doesnt read very well to me. To me it seems like everything keeps changing size

>>	Anonymous Sat Sep 21 15:05:36 2019 No.4125997 File: 136 KB, 617x950, faunwip2.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>4125881 >>4125904 well still far from perfect, but hope this is an improvement, at least. Thanks for the crits

>>	Anonymous Sat Sep 21 17:09:56 2019 No.4126105 File: 207 KB, 600x625, Bruxinha02.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Hey guys , this one is going to be tattoo :D !! I'm still figuring out the flowers and leaves that will go around her. But is the overall anatomy and composition ok ?

>>	Anonymous Sat Sep 21 17:11:38 2019 No.4126106 File: 603 KB, 960x720, Nia Blade Form(1).png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

Anonymous Sat Sep 21 17:21:52 2019 No.4126120

>>4125997
I like your use of line and shape a lot but I think in the future you should work on keeping your anatomy and proportions correct. Right now her right upper arm is very short compared to her lower arm, though both of her arms are long in general. Usually, you'd want the arms to be long enough so that the fingertips reach mid thigh, and the elbow is about the same height as the bottom of the ribcage

>>	Anonymous Sat Sep 21 17:22:24 2019 No.4126121 >>4126106 The movement, detail and lines are all gorgeous. The mouth is the only thing that puts me off

>>	Anonymous Sat Sep 21 17:24:57 2019 No.4126125 >>4126106 I think you are overdoing it on hair. You have a simplified anime face and then every curl in the hair has its own line.

>>	Anonymous Sat Sep 21 18:03:59 2019 No.4126162 File: 294 KB, 2600x1800, 5563.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Should I change the base color of the skin or leave this one?

>>	Anonymous Sat Sep 21 19:23:21 2019 No.4126261 File: 1.34 MB, 1800x2761, Chie 2.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] My art is super stiff and not very appealing what could improve this piece?

>>	Anonymous Sat Sep 21 19:35:26 2019 No.4126268 >>4123718 I've been seeing this same girl for what feels like a year and her milkers just keep getting bigger.

>>	Anonymous Sat Sep 21 19:46:08 2019 No.4126278 File: 885 KB, 1556x1430, 1551125227781.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] sketchan

>>	Anonymous Sat Sep 21 19:49:49 2019 No.4126280 File: 552 KB, 1171x688, Screenshot_2.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Sat Sep 21 20:01:36 2019 No.4126287 >>4126261 It's your proportions. They are very off.

>>	Anonymous Sat Sep 21 20:18:43 2019 No.4126303 >>4125997 right eye too far right. Common problem. Turn it up side down.

>>	Anonymous Sat Sep 21 21:25:33 2019 No.4126362 >>4125874 Followed!

>>	Anonymous Sat Sep 21 21:27:37 2019 No.4126365 >>4126278 draw more cute boys anon kun

>>	Anonymous Sat Sep 21 23:55:26 2019 No.4126510 New thread >>4126508 >>4126508 >>4126508

>>	Anonymous Sun Sep 22 03:53:06 2019 No.4126683 >>4126280 no nails?

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