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IF YOU ARE A /BEG/INNER IN ART, please use this thread to post pieces for critique or ask for advice. We should not have to make new threads or post in the /draw/thread with our fundamental exercises.

Previous Thread: >>3942935

Feel free to post even the smallest exercise you have done to show you are still trying, or you literally are never going to make it

RESIZE YOUR IMAGES TO ~1000 PIXELS:
1)
>screenshot the image and post that instead
2)
>change camera capture settings to something smaller
3)
>send to computer and resize in MSPaint

READ THE STICKY if you need guidance when you haven't even started.

Sticky: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1uwaXKU7ev6Tw_or__o8ARpUb6r2rCZYJGqwSFV9AD98/edit#bookmark=id.15jx3pyuimvj

TRY TO GIVE PEOPLE SOME FEEDBACK - many studies are left unreplied, which is a bit sad and can be quite demotivating for the people that try their best to improve, but are left directionless.

REMEMBER, if you've just started out you work will not be good, it doesn't need to be, just get in to the swing of actually drawing, and learning how to study. Most of all, enjoy it.

>> No.3947895
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3947895

Well I didn’t finish that last one yet but did this in the meantime.

>> No.3947915

>>3947895
Fix the perspective

>> No.3947917

Wait, what's the difference between symbol drawing and construction/deconstruction into shapes?

>> No.3947923

Which font is usually used in mangos ?

>> No.3947933
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quick bust study ~10mins
wish i got the neck. the structure is so cool in the reference.

>> No.3947934

>>3947923
comic sans

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Shit this sucks. I don't really know what I'm doing, I'm gonna start figure drawing for all it's worth today and hopefully get on the path to making it

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>>3947801
I think I need to take a small break on drawing and
I really need a good digital rendering resource and a human body render guide
any recommend anon?

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Shit this sucks. I don't know what I'm doing. I'll start with loomis today, figure drawing for all it’s worth, and hopefully take babbys first crawl into art.

>> No.3947957

why do you people not bother feeling the form? does your internal visualization only see shit in 2-d or what?

seriously, how difficult is it for you guys to run your mind-hand over the "surface" of what it is you want to draw?

>> No.3947964

>>3947957
Can you expound on what you mean by running over the surface? I'm willing to learn but I'm not sure I have enough art education to correctly interpret your meaning.

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>>3947952
Pic related suggest Ctrl+Paint's Digital painting starter kit. I'm following the free videos. Started with Digital painting 101 (1) and jumped to Digital painting techniques (9), going back to previous videos when I can't understand something.

>> No.3948058

>>3947957
Idk why you dont just run your mind hand over my dick

>> No.3948066

>>3948058
Does it exist only in your mind as well?

>> No.3948075

Bit random but any recommendations on a pencil that feels like a charcoal pencil but is easily erasable or at least able to be drawn on top of?

I really like the feel of doing gestures with charcoal pencils on smooth newsprint, so I want something similar I can use on sketchbooks so I can start learning construction and anatomy on top of the lines.

>> No.3948195

>>3947801
I really want learn how to draw properly, I think finding this board gave me the push I needed. Tomorrow's the day I'll start practicing (would start right now, but gotta go to sleep)
I'm still a bit overwhelmed where to start though, and a little afraid that I won't improve and lose motivation. Any advice on that or other common pitfalls?

>> No.3948206

>>3948195
Godspeed Anon!
Any advice on that or other common pitfalls?
For now just settle on a goal you want to achieve, saying "draw properly" is incredibly vague and we do not know your level. General advice is to prepare for the long haul. At its core art is a grind there is no way around that.

Now go sleep!

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is this still /beg/

>> No.3948213

>>3948209
Such a question is futile anon, everyone is a /beg/ forever, the ride never ends.

>> No.3948217

If i were to draw a rectangle around the face/head, at what ratio should the sides be for an average face

>> No.3948219

>>3948213
can i get off if i kill myself

>> No.3948230

>>3948209
The more abstract and/or stylized your artwork is, the more pointless it becomes trying to determine if it's /beg/ or not. The point of art is to be observed, and what you should be asking is whether or not you've drawn something that is fun and interesting to look at.

>> No.3948241

>>3948219
p-please don't I was just kidding

>> No.3948252
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Based blood cylinder OP

>> No.3948255

>>3948219
The only thing that awaits you in the afterlife is a stack of paper and a pencil.

>> No.3948261
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3948261

decided to do 50 boxes a day for the 250 box challenge, doing it digitally since that's what I'll be using anyway and I can practice my lines in warm-ups (or just use the line tool / shift click, no roolz only tools)

after I've finished drawabox should I move onto Ctrl+Paint?
I'm a little overwhelmed with everything I'll have to learn to make what I want; construction, perspective, composition, gesture, anatomy, rendering, light and color etc it never ends
even if I use stuff like references or 3d models I'm afraid of making a 'piece' since there's so many intricacies I know I'll fuck up, like drapery and anatomy and then how light will behave on it, I have no idea where to start with all of it

>> No.3948267

>>3948206
>saying "draw properly" is incredibly vague
Yeah I'm not quite sure what exactly I want to achieve myself. I just need a creative outlet so once I got the basics I still need to decide if I want to focus on anatomy, architecture, nature or technical drawings
>and we do not know your level
I'm looking forward to finding out myself, I used to doodle a lot in Highschool and am still prowd of my extremely detailed stick-figure drawings but I doubt that'll help much.
>At its core art is a grind there is no way around that.
Yeah I'm aware of that. I used to be the "learning" how to draw manga stereotype as a teen, who didn't practice consistently and mostly copied YouTube tutorials, because he was a dumb kid who didn't understand that "I have no talent" isn't an excuse and drawing cartoons doesn't mean you don't need any basics. Anyways I hope I can power through it this time and not lose motivation from lack of visible progress.
>Now go sleep!
Okay Mom. I'll be going over the sticky tomorrow and post what I'll get done.

>> No.3948270

>>3948261
What's this whole Drawabox I see mentionned around here?

>> No.3948278
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3948278

Doing the Watts course
Jumps from boxes and spheres to a Buddha head

>> No.3948279

>>3948209
Yes, if you need drugs to put out your finest then you've already lost it.

>> No.3948280

>>3948270
art course site, starts you out drawing lines and ellipses, moves onto constructing boxes and such and then moves onto more complex things such as constructing organic shapes, moving into animals, insects and then cars and such

it's good but I find it pretty grindy and obtuse at times, especially getting you to draw 250 boxes so early on in the process, and it wants you to do it all in pen, supposedly to teach you to be careful with your lines but it barely matters in the real world when we have rulers and digital tools to make perfect lines easy as piss
I think you get more out of it by doing it however you like, as long as you're learning what it's trying to teach you

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3948281

Is there some kind of resource that specializes in portraits, it's a fuggin pain trying to find a decent 3/4 view face. Plz halp

>> No.3948282

>>3948280
Makes sense. Thanks friendo.

>> No.3948288

>>3948281
Steve head course
https://mega.nz/#F!glxFwLaa!cdBL0K-MOuZbtQYoRR4cBQ
there is another Steve advance head course
>>3948261
you should only draw like 10 each day as a warm up and free hand

>> No.3948302

>>3948278
Keep going anon

>> No.3948309

>>3948288
You misunderstand, i'm not really looking for an education in profile drawing, i'm just looking for a resource where i an access to have examples of profiles, i'm already reading a textbook, and drawing profiles is a chapter in the book (Keys to Drawing)

>> No.3948312

>>3948261
did you read the instructions? it doesn't look like you read the instructions. you're not applying any of the line extensions that are used to check for mistakes and actually improve in a meaningful way over the course of the challenge.

he didn't read the instructions.

>> No.3948315

>>3948255
sounds pretty good to me

>> No.3948319

>>3948312
I'm very aware, I've already done 30 odd traditionally and extended my lines, I'm going to do it tomorrow before I do the next 50
any advice on whether or not Ctrl+Paint would be appropriate, or what else might be?

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gonna repost yesterday's sketches. i dont have the reference on hand but I feel like i relied too much on copying for the woman. the head was done from imagination. it feels really flat/stiff and i think it has a lot of weird proportional problems

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>>3948336
lol woops.

gonna repost yesterday's sketches. i dont have the reference on hand but I feel like i relied too much on copying for the woman. the head was done from imagination. it feels really flat/stiff and i think it has a lot of weird proportional problems

>> No.3948338

>>3948336
are you blind by any chance Anon

>> No.3948360
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I'm confused, since each photo has its own horizon line, if I were to take a reference and use it in my own work with its own unique horizon line, won't that fuck it all up?
surely I can't just place a picture of a guy like pic related in my own composition and have it make sense in terms of perspective, right?

for example, if I placed the horizon line above him I'd see more of the top of his head, and if I placed it below him I'd see more of his underside
I don't know, I've got no idea

>> No.3948365

>>3948360
the goal is to learn how to take the reference and move it in your brain to a different angle to fit the perspective

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heres a bird i drew

>> No.3948376

>>3948374
something about the tail looks wrong
perspective or curve or angle or something

>> No.3948385

>>3948365
I'm a layman can you explain it more simple?

>> No.3948416
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>>3948252
Even if you stylize something you should consider certain things, for example the back of te head lifts up.

Also draw the figure, even if you'll drown it in clothing. It will help you wth proportion and direction. The dress is really messy here.

Ps.:Ignore the feet I couldn't identify how your dude was sitting.

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>>3948337
First of: watch out with the lips. Even Loomis had trouble drawing them so detailed for men without making it look weird (I think it was Loomis).

I recommend you watch Steve Houston's video on the head. Also don't be afraid to use references. Everyone does.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2T7cDY7YDsg

>> No.3948435

>>3948431
hey thanks for the help and video. Will watch. much appreciated anon

>> No.3948446

>>3948416
Nice thanks for the help, I'll save this and keep it in mind, I'm still trying to find out how to do figures

>> No.3948448

How do I start visualizing in 3D?

>> No.3948449
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So I know I'm still doing a lot wrong and still can't clearly get down how it is in my mind but I feel that I'm getting a better understanding of how things work and starting to be able to picture and rotate the forms in my mind.

I'm also being able to do these in 10-20 minutes instead of an hour plus for something worse.

I'm happy that I'm making progress but how do I go from this to drawing cute boys?

>>3947895
Keep it up anon. You continue to inspire me with the progress you've made.

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>>3948416
Any advice on this?

>> No.3948452

>>3948449
draw from ref more
apply the head to real people is better than follow you instinct

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>> No.3948463

>>3948452
>mfw that was my face
>tfw that's my face

Don't suppose you got any suitable cuteboi refs lying around?

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3948494

rough imagination sketch, coming up with quick compositions like this is pretty fun
I'm sure the anatomy and everything is fucked but still, the idea's there

>> No.3948508

>get a figure reference
>completely overwhelmed and have no idea how to start

how do I get past this feel, lads

>> No.3948538

>>3948508
>Vilppu Timed Model Demonstration
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aOtVUHgJqQk

You're welcome.

>> No.3948542
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Can someone tell me what exactly is wrong with the proportions that I'm drawing? I'm a complete beginner, and I'm trying to use the Loomis method for construction, but my faces are just so ghoulish. 1/4

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>>3948542
Sorry, trying to flip them but they aren't coming out right. 2/4

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>>3948547
3/4

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>>3948550
And 4/4, these are the faces I've made after practicing Loomis for a day, just as a comparison. I do think the three pages above this one are better, but still not by much.

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>>3948552
>>3948550
>>3948547
>>3948542
the reason why it looks off because you spread the facial features too far apart, the distance between the eyes, nose, and mouth are too far apart

also try to draw more from photo to get more of a feel of face proportion

next time resize your photos

>> No.3948565

>>3948561
Thanks, I'll try and use reference photos to practice until I get a feel on how a face looks, and I'll make sure to get the pictures resized and flipped properly next time. Would it be best to try and get the proportions down first before trying to move onto making the facial features look good?

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why does it look so fucked

>> No.3948568

>>3948567
ref?

>> No.3948573

>>3948567
he looks like he push his pelvis back too much

>> No.3948574

Would anyone know where to pick up Steve Huston's Figure Drawing?

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>>3948568
didn't use one. tryna learn without ref

>> No.3948591
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>>3948568
even with ref it still looks off

>> No.3948594

>>3948565
yea, try to put down where the features will be before the details

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3948628

how do you know when a sketch is ready to be turned into a render?
also, does anyone have videos of people's renderring process? literally anything will do, i want to observe as many people as possible so i can see which way is easiest for me. i genuinely have no clue how to learn something as complex and multi faceted as rendering, other than observing how others do it

>> No.3948631

>>3948315
Theree's also a guy they get that whispers very non-specific criticism into your ear so you never know if you're improving or not.

>> No.3948642

>>3948631
Sounds like here

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r8 my lines fellow crabs

>> No.3948662

>>3947957
Your post is the online equivalent of running into a drawing 101 class, bellowing WHY ARE YOU SO BAD?", and stomping out, slamming the door behind you.

>> No.3948669
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>>3948628
You know, from experience. For me, I'm ready to start rendering when I have enough landmarks to establish the form, and refine/adjust from there. I only do detailed renderings in pencil for roughs, or to create my own reference to work from once the paint is laid down, covering my reference points.

You have to find your own comfort zone here. If you're doing cartooning, then you need to work the line art out to a high degree of polish, but for painting, most people only need major landmarks to work off of.

Here's a good example of one way an artist works:
http://www.cgarena.com/freestuff/tutorials/photoshop/judith/judith.html

She's experienced enough, and confident enough, that she can refine the form from vague shapes, and work from there - she has years of experience in anatomy and rendering to wing it. But, not everyone works that way. Pro level illustrators like James Gurney and Michael Whelan would have more detailed drawings to start with. (See attached)
There's no right or wrong way, or a universal way. It's why you study, and experiment, to discover what works for you.

Bets advice, start simple, over a series of images, over time. Block in flat color. Start adding basic lighting and volume. Refine, adjust, refine. In later pieces, start adding texture and more complex light. Slow down, be patient, pay attention to what's happening to your image as you add too it, and learn what works, and what doesn't. That's the art process. Don't worry about failing, or if it's too simple, or not what your end goal is. Baby steps, to bigger steps, to confident steps, to running.

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Not a lot of muscles or depth in the legs chapter. Did some anyway. I still have to work on hands, feet and heads. Really liked the book.

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>>3947801
I have no idea what I should be studying/doing
I try to use the books /ic/ recommends but I always get either distracted trying to draw the examples in the books or just lose interest in them.
I have been drawing for the last two years and I feel like I'm just spinning my wheels, I do exercises such as timed gesture drawings and studies but I'm not sure if I'm doing them right or wasting my time.

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>>3947957
I get what you mean dude I don't know why they never understand it.

>>3947964
Basically, instead of just drawing in a bunch of flat lines over a cylinder, you would want to draw in your lines/values as cylinder-shaped, in perspective with the cylinder. It's like you're imagining you are literally just putting a pencil on top of an actual cylinder and coloring it in. Does that make sense?

>> No.3948678

>>3948494
Thumbnails and sketches don't have to be finished pieces that hang on a wall. I can go through dozens of thumbnails like this before I decide where to go with an idea. A lot of artists don't document their color comps and such, but some do, like Michael Whelen, in his books, where he would do multiple passes at an idea before starting more refined sketches, and vague, blobby color comps to work out the overall composition. I've done paintings where I'd do the same - work out all of the issues in studies and sketches, before starting the final.

What you posted is awesome. Get in the habit of playing with form and composition like that, not caring about perfection - you can work that out later. And you're right, it's fun!

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>>3948676

>> No.3948681

>>3948673
>I try to use the books /ic/ recommends but I always get either distracted trying to draw the examples in the books or just lose interest in them.
There's your problem. Just do it. Chain yourself down to the desk, put on a music playlist (or not if it distracts you) and only do your studies. Force yourself. It takes a lot of willpower. Just do it.

>> No.3948682

>>3948672
What book? Looks like "Michael Hampton figure drawing design and invention". Am I right?

>> No.3948683

>>3948682
look like Steve Huston one

>> No.3948691

>>3948681
But which books? which lessons? I keep becoming convinced that I'm reading something before I should be or that I'm not really understanding the information correctly.

>> No.3948694

>>3948691
Well go look at a list of the fundamentals. What do you feel you are best at, and what do you feel you are worst at?

>> No.3948696

>>3948691
The books don't matter as much as you're making them out to be. Just grab what you can find, read them, and then DRAW. The magic happens when you put a pencil to paper. If you don't understand something, work on something else until you do.

Art education is not reading books. It's trying to DO it.

>> No.3948704

How do I stop beating myself up as a beginner and think I'm total shit and I'll never be better

>> No.3948709

>>3948682
Huston's, like >>3948683 said.

I did read the gesture chapter on Hampton's book, though, haha. Thought of starting with it since it's on the sticky but I found it pretty intimidating at the time.

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I think I slightly improved my faces in only roughly a week.

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>>3948734

now be a body

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Fb_0LzBv894

>>3948704

youll be fine this is a normal feeling that comes and goes

>> No.3948754

>>3948542
Which book?

>> No.3948757

>>3948754
side question, what order should one do loomis in? Fun with a pencil feels a little juvenile.

>> No.3948761

How do I turn my half decent Loomis man heads into cute anime twinks?

>> No.3948773

>>3948694
>What do you feel you are best at
Nothing
> and what do you feel you are worst at?
Everything
>>3948696
>The books don't matter as much as you're making them out to be. Just grab what you can find, read them, and then DRAW. The magic happens when you put a pencil to paper. If you don't understand something, work on something else until you do.
I feel like this is the mentality that is causing the problem though I have been "just drawing" for two years but I still feel like I understand nothing and cannot reliably put to paper what I have in my head.

>> No.3948783

>>3948450
bring your drawing to a mirror lol.

>> No.3948786
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3948786

it's hard to art

>> No.3948788

>>3948567
gesture doesn't feel natural. upper body disconnected from lower.

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3948792

Fun with a pencil guy here.
Going back to drawabox, rate my lines please.
I don't know know drawing from the shoulder should feel, and I'm having trouble with curved lines, etc.

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>>3948783
Yeesh, I'm assuming I'm focusing too much on one side?

>> No.3948799

>>3948581
you need to learn with ref to learn without. don't worry that you won't be able to down the line - if you are analyzing things properly and not just copying, you'll internalize it all enough to draw from imagination anyway once you've spent enough time. don't force it

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3948802

Uncensored versión on my Twitter @_luchored_

>> No.3948822

>>3948792
I think they look quite good. Only bad thing is that it seems you're not starting your lines on the exact same spot. Either that, or your pen leaks too much ink. Curves are hard but yours look okayish, keep at it.

>> No.3948839
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3948839

How can i improve

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3948843

A couple of sketches from today. Feedback appreciated

>> No.3948844
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A couple of sketches from today. Feedback appreciated

>> No.3948848

>>3948844
try experimenting with different facial expressions. do some studies, and then try to really exaggerate them

>> No.3948852

>>3948848
okay, will try it, thanks!

>> No.3948858

>>3948822
Thank you so much for replying, and I'm glad to hear that they look good, I think I was rushing, as for the starting point, in some I have trouble placing my pen on the same spot (some have the same starting point, right?) perhaps anxiety or maybe I get carried away.
Thanks again.

>> No.3948874

>>3948858
The lesson says if you are fraying at the beginning you need to take your time in placing your pen down in the same spot.

>> No.3948877

>>3948676
>you can't play jazz until you learn the scales
But the best patterns and harmonies come out of chord shapes, and the most important scale is the chromatic, bad analogy.

>> No.3948882

>>3948874
I know, I guess I have to get used to that now, I have to get the speed just right.. But enough of that, I'll post more lines tomorrow, thanks for all.

>> No.3948883

>>3948874
>>3948882
And no, I'm looking where I place it, sometimes it goes to the side though, etc.

>> No.3948885
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3948885

Where do you guys find reference photos for profiles/models?

>> No.3948906
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3948906

Never have posted before, so i'm pretty much a beg. This is the only i can do from imagination without fuking up everything. I guess

>> No.3948916

>>3948906
it's not that bad Anon, do you do studies from photos?

>> No.3948931
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>>3948450

>> No.3948943

>>3948931
I think that looks better

>> No.3948951
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3948951

Any idea how I can make this character better or more interesting?

>> No.3948954

>>3948951
it depends on knowing who she is, what is she like?. A character's appearance is what onlookers use as a basis for guessing the personality, traits, quirks etc.

>> No.3948959

>>3948954
Spoiled, mid-teen mage prodigy. His families last hope at making a name for themselves so he's pretty much been raised without restrictions.

Will try and get into the pants of the 40-50 year old paladin that's been appointed to guard him.

>> No.3948967
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>>3948959
Ok well that tells his backstory but not really about his personality but it helps. Then how about giving him a more stock up and spoiled facial expression, maybe fancy and expensive clothes. That can easily imagine saying "step aside plebs!"

>> No.3948970

>>3948795
bro are you blind, ive never seen a drawing as slanted as yours. NEVER. In my 4 years of being here Ive not once someone fuck up in the same way as you have and not realize.

I'm not sure if you're trolling, but look how EGREGIOUS your ear size disparity is.

Now let me be honest and know that I'm 100% serious when I see this. But I think you may be in the early stages of some sort of dementia or mental illness. Please go see a therapist.

I swear on my life I'm not kidding, this is legitimately surreal. You don't come across as weird in text but it really is that within a sample size of a few thousand people you've presented the most odd product and by a huge margin.

Now I know what you're thinking: your work isn't that bad, theres plenty worse. And look, I agree with that. but the WAY in which its off is just absolutely stunning.

PLEASE GO SEE A PSYCHIATRIST. Just to be safe.

>> No.3949008
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3949008

>>3948906
You'e right, there is no improvement from last year.

Everything you draw seems rather flat, you only draw in outlines, but you don't describe objects, and basically everything is just a symbol.

So what can I recommend you? Well this Anon already did some homework for you:

>>3948027

Especially Michael Hampton's Figure Drawing book is solid gold. Learn to understand the human body. How does a ribcage look? Why are the eyes where they are, how can I use that knowledge to draw cute catgirls? Why do my catgirl's hands and feet look like horrible deformations? How can I draw them better?

Don't be disheartened Anon. Everyone hits plateaus - the important part is to sit on your ass and do your homework.

>> No.3949012

>>3948678
>Michael Whelan

didn't know this guy before but his art fucking rocks, thanks Anon this is exactly what I like

>> No.3949016

>>3948885
Hyper angle

>> No.3949029
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What am I doing wrong?

>> No.3949034
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3949034

Here's something I did yesterday to apply Hampton's figure drawing techniques. Poses were all taken from Line of Action.

(1/4)

>> No.3949036 [DELETED] 

>>3949034
(2/4. Feels like I'm getting the gesture down but not the volume.)

>> No.3949037

>>3948209
You're /beg/ until you "can draw". No single piece graduates you from /beg/. Leaving /beg/ is about acquiring the skills and confidence to produce a reliable stream of quality work.

>> No.3949041
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3949041

>>3949034
(2/4. Feels like I'm not grasping the form yet and I'm not sure how to.)

>> No.3949043

>>3949041
They're going okay. I think a good rule is that the better the artist, the more contour lines they can put on a figure. You should start out with angular (i.e. not rounded) shapes to make up ribcages, pelvises etc, because those are easy enough for a beginner to learn and rotate in perspective. Try learning to draw basic skeletons and stretch muscles over them when drawing figures.

>> No.3949044

>>3949029
Her right cheek is too sunken and her nose bridge too thicc. As far as values, I don't think this particular example is for good study since there's too much ambient light. Maybe something with more definable shadow?

>> No.3949045
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>>3949034
>>3949041
(3/4. Bottom right, I started rendering the body-- getting in some anatomy.)

>> No.3949050

>>3948885
Pinterest

>> No.3949054
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3949054

>>3949034
>>3949041
>>3949045
(4/4, and more rendering)

>>3949043
Thanks for the suggestions. So I should work on my torsos? (Admittedly, I have a feeling that my gesture might be adequate-- it's my anatomy that needs work.)

>> No.3949057

>>3949054
I think torsos and heads should be worked on before extending to the body but it's good to do quick full-body gestures all the time. So yeah, keep doing gestures but when learning anatomy, learn the torso and head first

>> No.3949069
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>>3949029
Here you go. You are doing fine so far, you choose a pretty hard photo for this. Try to push the darker parts just like you began on the clothes where the value are indeed dark but without resorting to color picking.

Her face while appeared as one color still has darker spot around the cheek blush area, under the lip beside the nose and eyes. Since there is no color on a greyscale image you have to add the redder cheeks as darker spots.

Another thing that can be is that your monitor has either too strong or too weak contrast that hides the delicate value changes on the reference, especially since she beside a white wall.

You can try fiddle your settings a bit but if this is the best your hardware cane do then you need to rely on your anatomy knowledge of the face to find them.

Keep on trucking!

>> No.3949096

>>3948967
You've given me a lot to think about anon. Thank you.

I have the general gist of what I want from the character but at the moment he really is just a couple dot points of ideas.

I'll need to get smashed, write a bunch of shit down and then cull what I don't like or what doesn't fit with what I do like.

But yeah his clothes were going to be pretty dapper for the sitting. Shoulder capes and big floppy springtime hats here we go!

>> No.3949120

>>3948538
>feel the form
>feel the pose
>feel the ribcage
>feel the belly

what drugs do I need to help me understand what he's talking about and apply it to drawing

>> No.3949121

>>3949120
basically he's saying you should draw with your pencil like you're running your hand over something 3D. He wants you to emphasize the shape of the figure you're drawing.

>> No.3949141

>>3947801
>have a simple idea
>can't draw it

I need to practice more don't I

>> No.3949144

>>3949141
Yep

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>>3949029
Your post gave me a flashback anon.
I forgot it was from 100 heads - went for a redraw. I did left one Jan 14 during the challenge.
Your one is sort of like mine. I think it's mainly proportions.

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3949163

going to attempt to explain what "feeling the form" is

it is a significant at a jump from geometry to calculus is for math

you will be effectively be able to convey form at a the z dimension intuitively thus opening a whole new world of not having to adhere to the rule "the figure must be eight heads tall and all body parts must be visible for a succesful drawing" it is scary at first but necessary. like anatomy, it isn't important to know anatomy, but it hella obvious when someone is drawing that does not know anatomy. same goes for feeling the form. your figures will be bendy fluid stickmen wireframes instead of choppy line by line contours.

>> No.3949171

>>3947801
I want to FUCK that cylinder

>> No.3949191

>>3949069
>>3949044
Thank you for the feedback, it's very much appreciated!

>>3949154
This challenge is kicking my ass, I know I shouldn't get hung up on it but I spend way too much time doing each one...

>> No.3949198

>>3949163
bahaha and that's exactly why the diagram attached to the thesis is ugly af

>> No.3949203
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>>3949163

>> No.3949221

I'm getting really confused between gesture and construction drawing. Should I really be trying to draw gesture when I don't know how to draw the figure to begin with?

>> No.3949244

>>3949221
>Should I really be trying to draw gesture when I don't know how to draw the figure to begin with?
Yes. Vilppu says the gesture is the most important part of figure drawing because it gives life and movement.

>Gesture
>Capturing the lifelike movement and action of the figure
>Concerned with feeling the "flow"

>Construction
>Using construction lines to illustrate the 3d volume of the figure on the paper
>Focus on using knowledge of anatomy to build the figure from the inside out
>Use constructon lines to get correct proportions
>"Feel the form"

>> No.3949247
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3949247

>>3947801
Hey guys, what do you think of this head?

>> No.3949253

>>3949244
should I be using visual measuring techniques when drawing gesture then? Cos it just feels like I'm scribbling a shitty approximation of a figure and not actually learning anything while I have to use knowledge of anatomy to finish the drawing while not knowing anything about anatomy.

Where does non-gestural observational drawing fit into all this?

>> No.3949258

>>3949253
>should I be using visual measuring techniques when drawing gesture then
You should just be using your hand-eye coordination to draw it mostly proportional.

>Where does non-gestural observational drawing fit into all this?
Its just another way of approaching drawing the figure. It may work for you to take reference photos and study/draw them as accurately as possible because you don't know enough of the patterns of the human figure to apply it to your gesture.

>> No.3949261
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>>3949203

>> No.3949276

Any real "wrong" way on learning to draw?

>> No.3949286
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3949286

Any tips on how I can make the lips look more natural? I've watched a few guides but I can't get them right for some reason...

>> No.3949296
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3949296

>>3949276

>> No.3949314
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3949314

Any free brushes for digital sketching/gesture like the one on pic related?

>> No.3949323

>>3949286
This is really good, man.
helping the lips is mostly minor subtleties, they could be a bit ore red but it works really well with the piece so far so it's good.

>> No.3949388

>>3947895
Anon, I like you okay? I really do, because you post in every new thread and keep putting it out there.

HOWEVER DUDE you NEED to start finishing your drawings, the framework is all there but from what I can see you always doing the same thing over and over. Finish them one at a time, take your time and do it slowly of you have to, each time you finish one you learn something new, never stop trying different things.

>> No.3949448
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3949448

A 30mn sketch of a random streamer

>> No.3949453

>>3949448
30 minutes?
Record it next time and post your progress, be sure to speed it up

>> No.3949458
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3949458

>>3948278
tried to do it again in digital, which I haven't touched in ages. Somehow felt more finicky than by pencil
>>3948302
I don't think I'm quite ready to fully render a complex shape like this yet, I want to do some still-life before.

>> No.3949461
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3949461

So I did 3 drawings not sure if the 2 you can see properly but I really want some advice on the big one. Somewhat of "painting"

>> No.3949462

>>3949453
My laptop is quite weak so it will lag a lot while recording

>> No.3949468

>>3949462
Just take screenshots every 5 minutes and label the order and make them into a gif

>> No.3949514

>>3949468
Thats a good idea, ill try it next time. Any criticism ?

>> No.3949515

So I'm sure each of you can relate to this. I spent some time doing more learning and exploring and finally started feeling more and more confident in my skill. Of course i then hit the wall of oh fuck i have no idea what I'm doing again after making friends that are also into art just not vocal about it. This happens all the time and it kills my motivation seeing how much infinitely better someone is and how long I've got to go and how much more there is to learn before I can even think of operating on their level consistently. How do you guys deal with this?

>> No.3949520
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3949520

I'm trying to get the eyes to match, but I feel they are weird.

>> No.3949525
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3949525

How much time should I spend on a value sketch? I kept working on last one because I really like the reference but it feels like I spend 10x as much time as I would when rendering on paper. Should I take my time to finish something or work within some time limit to do many sketches?

>> No.3949526

>>3949520
A piece of advice someone gave me that really helped is try imagining or drawing a skull underneath and it will become more clear where the eyes belong. It's much easier to use this method in digital with the use of layers though.

>> No.3949531

>>3948455
Lmao please be a troll

>> No.3949534

>>3949514
What helps with me when I'm doing life studies in doing the outlines and blocking out the forms first, use some construction to orient yourself but don't depend too much on it

>> No.3949536

>>3949534
Just to be clear when I say outline I mean the whole silhouette. not the head and the shoulders and the torso separately

>> No.3949539

>>3949526
Thanks, I have studied skulls a bit I guess the problem is with the eye sockets. Any other criticism?

>> No.3949551
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3949551

>>3949448
I just flipped the image and added some lines. Your drawing is really symbol heavy, even if you have started looking into how to draw with forms.

As for every human being on earth, for heads, I recommend this: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2T7cDY7YDsg

>> No.3949575

>>3949461
youve got lots of talent. if you stop drawing porn im willing to help you

>> No.3949578

>>3949520
leave beg

>> No.3949589
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3949589

how worthwhile is it to do stuff like this? just creative drawing with no real goal in mind, just getting the hand, arm and lines flowing
didn't take long at all, I just loved the brush since it reminded me of drawing on a whiteboard, just throwing out shapes and lines and then building on it

>> No.3949591
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3949591

I tried drawing some paws, are they shit or just bad?

>> No.3949610

>>3949589
It has its place just like everything else. It's a common technique for artists to invent ideas. But don't let it be your only focus. If you want to learn how to make these more fleshed out and grounded, study some realism.

>> No.3949638

>>3948649
long way to go/10

>> No.3949639
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3949639

>>3947801
critque pls

>> No.3949645

>>3949029
You're not a beginner and you're in the beginner thread

>> No.3949652
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3949652

I'm attempting to build a consistant weekly schedule for art studies and practice, but I'm not sure how I should go about it.
As it currently stands I need to primarily focus on head anatomy, gesture and values, but I feel like trying to shove all 3 in at one day would hinder overall progress for all 3.
Anyone have any tips on building a studying schedule around multiple topics?

>> No.3949655

>>3949121
not that guy but are you saying this whole feel the form thing was just contour lines?
that wouldve made more sense to me if people just called it that

>> No.3949658
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>>3949591
Feeling cute might delete later

>> No.3949659
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>>3949525
Also have been working on this for probably more than an hour following top image.

Please point out if it looks like I'm doing something wrong. I'll appreciate any general advice for grayscale digital painting.

>> No.3949688
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3949688

Porn thread wasn't very helpful. What's wrong with them and how do I fix them? Red line would be helpful.

>> No.3949690
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3949690

30-minute sketch they feel very stiff to me

>> No.3949694

>>3949575
Thank you :) I've been drawing for a while. but not sure if I'm still a /beg/ or an intermediate Gimmie your discord or any contact. and we'll talk

>> No.3949697
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3949697

>>3949520

draw the first one in your style, then either cover it up and draw the second guess-ingly

or lay in the second one upside down

basically the second you draw the first eye your brain goes EYE EYE LOOK ITS AN EYE
GO TO SYMBOL DRAWING NOW
and it makes it hard to draw the second one in perspective.

>> No.3949700

>>3949690
>>3949688
where are the boob masters in ic

>> No.3949704
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3949704

Started out today. Doing the Stravinsky exercise from the sticky, bit I'll call it a day now, I can barely focus and need to sleep now.
Though I already feel like I fucked myself over a bit, the little inaccuracies pile up and make the whole picture look deformed. I know it's no wonder since it's my first time and all, but it's still a little frustrating.
Where should I go next? I was thinking of picking up "Drawing with the right side of your brain" and see where that'll get me.

>> No.3949705
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>>3949694

>> No.3949706

>>3949700
You have to summon them first. you have to say "Awaken my masters!!!"

>> No.3949707

>>3949697
terrible advice that completely misunderstands what makes drawing an extending eye hard.

>> No.3949708

>>3949704
Forgot to scale the photo down, sorry

>> No.3949710

>>3949700

im pretty shit overall
but i can whip up a tutorial just gotta scan through my porn stash

>> No.3949712

>>3949700
how about you draw your fucking forms instead of begging. do contour (cunt-hour) lines and you might understand

>> No.3949714
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3949714

>>3949707

What would you suggest honestly can you link me to a better method because thats how ive been doing it

also >>3949710
>>3949710

>> No.3949719

>>3949712
ill give it a shot. don't swear at me please I'm sensitive

>> No.3949720

>>3949714
theres no better way. I'm not willing to do a write up about the issues encountered when drawing eyes.

>> No.3949721

>>3949719
are you a faggot or a femoid so I know how to insult you best?

>> No.3949724

>>3949721
I get yelled at work as enough I don't need this shit faggot

>> No.3949725

>>3949659
What guide/lessons are you following?

>> No.3949729
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Sketches today 1/2

>> No.3949730
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>>3949729
2/2 I'm going to draw for another 4 hours or so when I get home from work.

>> No.3949734
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3949734

>>3949720
k

>>3949714
I feel niggas been out of pocket
I feel niggas tappin' they pockets
I feel like debated on who the greatest can stop it
I am legend, I feel like all of y'all is peasants
I feel like all of y'all is desperate
I feel like all it take is a second to feel like
Mike Jordan whenever holdin' a real mic
I ain't feelin' your presence
Feel like I'ma learn you a lesson
Feel like only me and the music, though
I feel like your feelin' ain't mutual
I feel like the enemy you should know
Feel like the feelin' of no hope
The feelin' of bad dope
A quarter ounce manipulated from soap
The feelin', the feelin' of false freedom
I'll force-feed 'em the poison that fill 'em up in the prison
I feel like it's just me
Look, I feel like I can't breathe
Look, I feel like I can't sleep
Look, I feel heartless, often off this
Feelin' of fallin', of fallin' apart with
Darkest hours, lost it
Fillin' the void of bein' employed with ballin'
Streets is talkin', fill in the blanks with coffins
Fill up the banks with dollars
Fill up the graves with fathers
Fill up the babies with bullshit
Internet blogs and pulpit, fill 'em with gossip
I feel like this gotta be the feelin' what 'Pac was
The feelin' of an apocalypse happenin'
But nothin' is awkward, the feelin' won't prosper
The feelin' is toxic, I feel like I'm boxin' demons
Monsters, false prophets schemin'
Sponsors, industry promises
Niggas, bitches, honkies, crackers, Compton
Church, religion, token blacks, and bondage
Lawsuit visits, subpoena served in concert
Fuck your feelings, I mean this for imposters
I can feel it, the phoenix sure to watch us
I can feel it, the dream is more than process
I can put a regime that forms a Loch Ness
I can feel it, the scream that haunts our logic
I feel like say somethin', I feel like take somethin'
I feel like skatin' off, I feel like waitin' for 'em
Maybe it's too late for 'em
I feel like the whole world want me to pray for 'em
But who the fuck prayin' for me?

>> No.3949735

>>3949712
Just say you don't know how. Jeez, you don't need to be a fag about about it.

>> No.3949736

>>3949710
>>3949714
this is good anon

>> No.3949737

>>3949724
lmao maybe you get yelled at because youre as shit at your job as you are at art. Maybe you deserve to be yelled at faggot.

Seriously, how weak can you possibly be that youre expecting empathy from people on a crocodile-chiropractor forum?

>> No.3949738

>>3949735
I definitely know, ill do it for you if you draw 100 pairs and post them all within 10 hours.

>> No.3949742

>>3949705
added Though I think I remember you from /IC/ Discord server haah

>> No.3949743

>>3949737
naw everyone gets yelled at, it helps you remember stuff so you don't fuck up on the job, it's great for learning.
>>3949738
100 in 4 hours bet you fucking cant without burning yourself out, bet you don't have the discipline to either.

>> No.3949744

>>3949738
That's a bit of a tall order chief

>> No.3949745

If I draw every day for around five hours a day, how long should it take until I'm good enough to draw professionally?

>> No.3949746
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Made some sketches today, really enjoying it so far.

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>>3949736

su fucking goi mein neger

>> No.3949762

>>3949746
What resources are you using to learn?

>> No.3949764

>>3949746
nice man, I love this kinda stuff, reminds me of bagboss in a way
are these with references or just imagination?

>> No.3949768

>>3948385
https://youtu.be/4KHLmBAWFvY

>> No.3949773

>>3949744
You can easily do 100 sketches in 10 hours, that's 10 an hour.

>> No.3949774

>>3949744
its easy, 1 torso a minute and it takes 2 hours.

>> No.3949778

>>3949764
>>3949762
These are from imagination and thanks to all the war videos on youtube heh, kinda gets intuitive after a while.

>> No.3949779

>>3949745
3 years (38k), 5 years for mid-level pro(65k), 8 years for super pro (90k).

>> No.3949782

>>3949779
Can I chop that in half if I draw for 10 hours a day instead?

>> No.3949785

>>3949782
Draw every chance you get and make that your highest priority.

>> No.3949788

>>3949782
I don't think art is something you can speedrun or give an estimate on how long it will take. It's a case by case thing. Some people might learn to draw really well in a year and others might need to grind for five before getting to that point

>> No.3949795

>>3949785
I'm definitely trying, but it's hard with my other responsibilities and need for sleep. I've started bringing my sketchbook everywhere I go, though.
>>3949788
The shitty thing for me is that I've been interested in drawing for my entire life but never got serious about it until recently. I'm thinking a lot about all the time I've wasted just doodling and doing nothing to actually improve.

>> No.3949801

>>3949782
no. I don't think that would make it more than 10% faster. Gains fall really quickly when it comes to art. It's kinda like going to the gym 5 hours vs 10.

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Is this a good place to start for a literal beginner who's never drawn more than stick figures? I know there are loomis books available online but I actually havea copy of pic related and would rather work from something tactile and real, like an actual book

>> No.3949807

>>3949795
>I'm thinking a lot about all the time I've wasted just doodling and doing nothing to actually improve.
If it makes you feel any better I've felt this way about so much stuff and I'm reading St. Augustine's Confessions and even a saint from 354 AD writes about being regretful and wasting time as a youth getting into trouble and playing instead of studying like his parents and teachers told him to.

>> No.3949815

>>3949804
it's very good for learning the fundamentals of drawing what you see, but I found it's geared a little more towards someone that's in an art school environment since it asks you to use a lot of live references and models

>> No.3949819
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I want to follow Robertsons ,,How to Draw" but with digital. I'm /beg/ and want to learn digital art (I use CSP Pro) but I know that this book is mainly for traditional medium, so will I make things harder to myself by using tablet? I really want to draw machines and architecture.

>> No.3949820

>>3949815
Well, can I substitute live models with just images from the internet? Or is something lost?

>> No.3949831

>>3949820
you can, but the author says it's never quite the same, since photos usually have unrealistic lighting (equipment) and the composition and such is already decided for you, it's already a 2D image which takes a lot out of it
not only that, photos are susceptible to stuff like lens warping and fucking the perspective, that kinda thing

if you do the upside down Igor thing and it's way off, it'll absolutely help, I can speak from experience on that front, you'll start to see every single thing that someone's failed to copy

>> No.3949845

>>3949525
IMO 5 hours with 1 study is less valuable (heh) than 5 hours with 5 different studies. not to say you shouldnt spend some time on them, but at a certain point you are just polishing for the sake of polishing and not learning any more. you'll get more out of laying the base framework down over and over than spending all that time on just one study.

remember that for most studies, it's not supposed to look GOOD, it's supposed to look RIGHT.

>> No.3949863

>>3949782
NOPE
If you don't get it, you don't get it, try lots and lots of things and diversify your hobbies pertaining to anything 3d/2d etc. Just plough through and get creative with your learning, grinding is for brainlets.

>> No.3949874
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lads, how the hell do you merge two layers and make them combine on the canvas?
I want to keep the lines from one and the colors from the other but every time I merge it keeps only one

>> No.3949881

anyone got some tips for learning proportions?
I always fuck up the relations with head/torso/legs

>> No.3949907

>>3949881
Literally just read and practice from Loomis' figure drawing book. He goes through correct proportions in everything. Loomis is not a meme.

>> No.3949910

>>3949907
ima study loomis for one week and see any difference from before and after, it might be a big waste of time or it might not be.
any loomis kind books for learning color?

>> No.3949913

>>3949910
Color and Light by James Gurney, Color Starter kit by Ctrl+Paint, Color by David Hornung

>> No.3949916

>>3949874
I know for CSP and Krita its Ctrl-E, dont know if its the same on photoshop or whatever the FUCK youre using

>> No.3949918

>>3949910
You're reading a book by a professional who specialized in illustrating people - if thats similar to what you want to do then not a waste of time unless you're mindlessly reading and not putting in any effort. You should be practicing by his example as you read and taking notes, you're guaranteed get better and to learn a lot you don't know.

>> No.3949941

>>3949659
Ctrl+Paint videos, mainly section 9 (Basic Painting Techniques). Some anon posted top image on the past /draw/ thread, not sure where it's from.

>>3949845
Thanks for answering, I'll give the 1 hour limit a try. And maybe warm up with even shorter sketches.

By looking right instead of good I'm guessing you mean it should look like a well thought out wip instead of a 'here and there finished' work. Is that it?

>> No.3949948

>>3949913
thanks
>>3949918
ill do my best to

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Birb

>> No.3949956

Drawing fast is uncomfortable guys

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>>3949954
yos very good

>> No.3949979

>>3949725
>>3949941

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>>3949907
First attempt

>> No.3950006

>>3949874
Set your lineart to multiply and place it ontop of the other layer.

In the future, do lineart on a transparent layer. Place it above the colour layer. Then merge will work as you expect it to.

>> No.3950009

>>3949779
double those numbers if you're nosebro

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Anatomy critique for the brown girl pls

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>> No.3950015

>>3950011
???????????
Sweetie you're not ready for an "anatomy critique" yet.

>> No.3950017

>>3950011
what am i looking at

>> No.3950018

>>3950011
I really like this

>> No.3950019

>>3949988
I'll just take my sketchbook to bed and try until I'm too tired while listening to spongebob on my laptop

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>>3950011
>that anatomy
>taking inspiration from fucking danganronpa of all shit
I can'r even loomis hard enough senpai

>> No.3950023

>>3948455
thanks for giving me cancer

>> No.3950033

trying to transition to digital with this $100 wacom
this is giving me aids my god

>> No.3950049
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i wanna see them sketches from my sketches? very curious from >>3949690

>> No.3950050

>>3950049
I ended up mirroring it and cringed too hard. They weren’t anything special

>> No.3950067
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Someone please tell me weak spots/what to needs to be improved on the most. I think my shading lacks depth but I’d like to know what else distracts from the art. Sorry if pic is rotated, happens when I upload from phone at times

>>3949746
I like the style. There’s something to those drawings that have that scribbled and unrefined feature that make them very appealing

>> No.3950068

>>3950067
not /beg/

>> No.3950071

>>3950011
>anatomical critique please
She's brown

>> No.3950075

>>3950068
It is. It’s heavily referenced with little understanding of form

>> No.3950082

>>3950075
please explain

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>>3949948
>>3949918
Skimmed through it a little and read the first few information pages and did the drawings exercise from "fun with a pencil". Loomis is pretty good for beginners to teach them construction (if they took the time to actually read it). great refresher for the intermediate artist that's coming from a burnout holiday.

>> No.3950086

>>3950082
Xhe is photocopying, when xhe should be loomising.

>> No.3950088

>>3950068
when do u know ur not a filthy /beg/ger anymore

>> No.3950091

>>3950088
When you get told to fuck off, and people get angry when you post your work

>> No.3950094

>>3950091
that sounds like the whole board

>> No.3950095

>>3950075
When drawing I just try to get the placement of everything as right as I can. Does the little understanding of form come because something looks off or the drawing looks too static?

>> No.3950097

>>3950095
It’s the look of the strokes and the way you draw. Could you post some work from imagination?

>> No.3950098

>>3949831

So, what do can I do? Get in a class? Use another book?

Am I being over-analytical?

>> No.3950103

>>3950094
Kek, true. If you’re routinely kicked out of the thread then you’re prob not beg. It’s meaningless though

>> No.3950107
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>>3950097
Strokes? Am I pressing too hard or are the lines not fluid or both? I dot really draw from imagination. I couldn’t find anything drawn that wasn’t done from reference.

These are all referenced

>> No.3950108

>>3950082
>>3950068

youre a fucking retard dont you dare send people out again.
This guy needs to stay.

>> No.3950110

>>3950088
ill personally tell you when you've graduated.

>> No.3950113

>>3950107
Join a lifedrawing class to take your work to the next level, you’ll end up a photorealist xerox machine at this rate. Also read the STICKY.

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Ok I just started with keys to drawing. I know this is so basic and sucky there's nothing to critique and I don't expect anyone to. One thing I would like advice on though is motivation - I'm a bit worried I won't always be able to push myself to work on drawing.

>> No.3950129
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Just started sketching yesterday, whats one thing I should work on most right now?

>> No.3950135
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When do I just fucking get it? When do I just "understand" form? I felt like I did but then people told me I didn't.

Is this just some magical horseshit that doesn't exist?

>> No.3950155

>>3950135
That's the same shit I'm going through right now anon I've drawn the best drawing's this year that I'm proud of, but when I show them here they are shit to everyone else but me and it's the same shit I thought I fixed, I mean I know it's not easy but this is getting ridiculous, right now I'm practicing 100 heads a day to get those right hopefully in a few weeks I should have it nailed down. HOPEFULLY.

>> No.3950168

>>3949638
Thanks bro, I'll do it in memory of you :D

>> No.3950169

>>3949639
Stop making an ASS out of yourself

>> No.3950172
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Some Spider-Gwen. Feedback is appreciated

>> No.3950204

>>3949954
Looks nice. Don't really like the glittery contour though.

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>>3947895
Did some fanart of her but I lost the picture with the tracksuit

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>>3949941
Did two 15 minutes value sketches, thought the second reference was exactly right for practicing and decided to keep working on it. I'll try to work with images where shadows and highlights are big shapes.

I think I'm starting to get the hang of this. I might be abusing temporary layers but it feels like that's the only way to do things.

>> No.3950230

>>3950172
these a great, try working on a larger scale so you can get more face work in. something doesn't feel right with the web and body on the feel of it, the first drawing, can't put my finger on it.

>> No.3950231

>>3950230
i fucked up my sentence. sorry for the autism

>> No.3950242
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I tried to recreate a real suit of armor. I want to know a better technique for shading than just randomly scribbling all over it.

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>> No.3950249
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Did a wood cylinder this morning, I'm struggling with highlight the faces right, waste so much time on it.

>> No.3950250
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>>3950242
Draw bigger and try hatching. I first do the lineart, like the one you did.. And then select which areas are brighter and which ones are darker (in my drawing there's 6 values but do not concern yourself with that yet). Now that you did some lines to indicate the light values... Start doing focused straight lines. Very carefully and it'll look pretty, do not rush, it shows and breaks the pace. Do more lines in the dark area so it looks almost fully black, since the lines are all together, and few, way too separated lines in the bright areas. Then for the normal areas do something between that.

I think the image explains it by itself

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>>3950242
Another example. The head of the guy has some clean areas, then a bit grayer and finally black, but this isn't random scribbling it's tons of well oriented lines. It also made the leg look more 3d by remarking the muscles' shadow.

But doing this in miniature is impossible at our level, we don't control the pen well enough to show bright dark and normal values with fine lines in such a small drawing

>> No.3950253

>>3950230
Gonna switch over to digital so hopefully that will let me zoom in a bit more and get some of the facial details better. I see what you mean about the first pose being awkward. Thanks for the tips!

>> No.3950282

>>3950129
I think the most striking thing to notice is that the individual piece of the face, eyes, ears and lips notably look disconnected from the rest of the face. This is due them being slightly misplaced and having quite visibly sharper/thicker lineart than the rest of the face. For instance the two eyes should have enough space between them to fit a theoretical 3rd eye in there, this is a good rule of thumb to follow that even anime follows.

Make sure that the strength of the lines is uniform an only get thicker and darker where it actually needs to be. The places where there is really dark parts on the face, where there are shadows.

About lips, while you are not wrong that men can also have rich full manly lips, they are almost never fully contoured like you are drawing them this also goes fro women. Drawing them like this gives off the impression that they are either puffed out by plastic surgery, colored by strong lipstick or alternatively you are going for a caricaturization of them.

Ears, please DO NOT NEGLECT the ears, they are a vital landmark of the head and can help greatly in creating a 3D from. There are so many artists that always neglect the ears please do not be one of them. Learn where the ears are, how big they are, how they look like and use them, you will be grateful for that later please trust me on this.

>> No.3950285
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Any advice on this piece is appreciated!

>> No.3950297

hey /beg
i want to get into digital art but i dont know where to start. should i do traditional first or i could go straight ahead to practicing digital?

i tried ctrlpaint.com but the program(adobe photoshop) used is out dated. i have CC atm.

and what book you recommend for beginners? im aware of loomis but i prefer a physical book.

>> No.3950304

>>3949731
>>3949729
Keep it up on

Perseverance with an idea and understanding of what your aiming for is all you need.

>> No.3950313
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I'm starting at drawing, gf said that I need to use reference but I want to try my mind first

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>>3950249
And a cloth cylinder this afternoon. I'm starting to get familiar with shading now.

>> No.3950318

>>3950313
I don't know what's that supposed to be, but your drawing ability is quite good. Looks pretty organic and neat.

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I have no idea why but I'm better at drawing muscular man from imagination than skinny man and women using references.
Also, any good source to learn how to draw faces?

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>>3950339
Here's a skinny girl next to half of a buff huy just so you can see the difference.

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>>3950339
>>3950348
try using construction lines to fix your proportions ( red boxes) and try Loomis fun with a pencil.

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>>3950339
....fun with a pencil is good for face construction as well

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Am i even doing it right. I am doing Loomis body but don't know. Should I go to Hampton or am I least getting it


Sorry for big picture. I'm on vacation in 3rd world and don't know how to use anything here

>> No.3950434
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Drawing from shoulder is fucking impossible

>> No.3950436

>>3950172
Keep an eye on balance. Especially in the bottom right one, she's tilting to the left.

>> No.3950446

>>3950226
this is sick, blog?

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Any thoughts?

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Someone wanted me to draw their doggo, but I don't know how to texture fur at all. Does this look ok anyway?

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Will Drawabox help me to think in three dimensions?
Or will it just make me want to hang myself?

>> No.3950658
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I know the background is terrible, but I'm done with the lineart, going to color it now.
Anyone has a good tutorial on flames and ice/crystals?

>> No.3950670

>>3950402
fuck this krenz guy is godlike

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bump
I'm just a beginner. Bear with me. How can I improve?

>> No.3950700

>>3950694
First of all read the sticky

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>manly voice: Teehee, catch me if you can anon
I think I've reached my artistic limits.

>> No.3950703

>>3950458
Very expressive.
Might make it.

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>>3948916
Not really, every time I try to do some study I got so sick bored I lost all interest and throw my scketchbook away. Also I have little to no time so the only draws I do is when i'm at work and there's nothing else to do.
>Pic related is someting I did while filling some shitty forms

>3949008
Thanks a lot for your suggestions anon, I really appreciate it. Never took it serious until this year and i'm doing my best to practice. I'm currently reading that Drawing with the right side book and the exercises aren't that hard to do, but I'm definitely looking those too.
To be honest, I got desperate way too easy every time I try to draw seriously. Also, as I said the other anon, I usually draw the most at work, since that kind of relaxes me but when I realize i'm doing something "nice" I just can't push on. I can't do things consistently.

>> No.3950713

>>3949008
>>3950712

>> No.3950749

>>3950694
Dodson's Keys to drawing: https://mega.nz/#F!sSYAxKqb!f2gWy-eQZJNvRfiUTu1ASA?lOZ3TAxT

>> No.3950766

>>3947801
How am I actually supposed to learn anatomy?
Draw the human muscles over and over, and from different angles?
How do I line and shade better? Any techniques?

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>>3948449
Thanks anon. The proportions and form of your faces seem good, perhaps the nose on the top right face is a little too long which pushes the mouth down as well, and the eyes are too close to each other on a few instances (at least one eye should fit between the two), but other than that it’s solid. You can already start to move onto fully body figure drawings in my opinion. When it comes to drawing cute boys you need to gain a better understanding of how the facial features work together to make a face look attractive. Protruding, pointy jawline, a nose that’s not too big and a lack of unattractive details such as folds or favial hair a some elements that generally make stuff look more cute. Go study the faces you want to aim for for yourself sometime.

>>3949388
Sorry, I‘ll try to tale your advice, but I generally can only bring myself to ink things that I am genuinely happy with. Wasting less time polishing trash seems like a good idea to me, but I should probably start finishing more drawings once I reach the level where I can consistently make things not look like trash. I do need to get in more shading practice.

>>3950226
That’s pretty rad, cool stuff anon. First time somebody drew my character and it isn’t a red line.


Sorry it took me so long to respond. I should be able to finsih this by the next thread.

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>>3950793
>I should be able to finish this by the next thread.
speaking of which


NEW THREAD has arrived!

>>3950797

Used >>3948494 for new OP image

>> No.3950837

I have a really tough time drawing curly hair , any advice?

>> No.3951064

>>3950694
Someone post the image of the /beg/ recommended books, I'd suggest Keys to Drawing and then Fun with a pencil