/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

[Anonymous No.3859795]

Why doesn't this kind of character sheet look appealing, even it seems to follow every fundamental to me?

[Anonymous No.3859798]

>>3859795
there isn't enough contrast between the background and the characters to make the characters pop out

[Anonymous No.3859891]

>>3859795
>even it seems to follow every fundamental
The anatomy is nightmare-tier.

[Anonymous No.3859896]

>>3859795
it looks pretty flat
need more contrast of light and shadow
also what with her hip

[Anonymous No.3859904]

>>3859795
>every fundamental

The proportions are off though. Her legs are too long compared to her torso and her arm pointing the gun is much shorter than her other hand at rest. On top off that the gesture is extremely stiff and works against the focal point, which I assume is supposed to be the gun. The anatomy is just slightly off here and there. Like, you wouldn't see any ass cheeks from that angle so that hump on the side of her leg doesn't make sense. The background is pretty pointless, it's too close in value to the drawing and just adds to the monotony. It would literally have been better if they left the background plain white as that could have created some contrast at least.

Overall it just looks lazy and poorly considered.

[Anonymous No.3859924]

>>3859795

Background is either too gray. It needs to be either darker or lighter. The colors looks like they're picked from the standard windows palette with linear gradients with no hue shifts.

Anatomy is horrible and the general shape design is "meh" at best. With better proportions and some color tweaks. it coulld be atleast passable.

[Anonymous No.3859931]

>>3859795
she's like 40 heads long