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What do u think

>> No.3674666
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3674666

>>3674642
ET looking ass hands

>> No.3674668

did your dump thread get deleted?

>> No.3674700

>>3674642
Previous piece was better. Don't like this one much at all.

>> No.3674757

>>3674642
Why do you waste oil paints for a loose approache?

>> No.3674794

>>3674642
I like the way you paint faces but you need to use more vibrant colours

>> No.3674795

>>3674642
get the fuck out from this board please

>> No.3674828

>>3674700
This.

Also, why does illastrat only draw nogs?

>> No.3674830

>>3674828
He is in KKK. Ilustard hate blacks, that's why he is making them look so ugly.

>> No.3674836

>>3674642
>>3674666
Feck me, just when I thought the hands couldn't get any worse.

>> No.3674869

I'm glad you're not forgetting the so?????? like before. That said, fuck off dumb ape.

>> No.3674885

Looks great, OP, keep going, it is a good sign that people on this board are hating your work. This is exactly what art is supposed to be. Most of the people who draw here will never come close to you.

>> No.3674900
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>> No.3674933

>>3674830
Makes sense to me, thanks for the info!

>> No.3674949
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3674949

Finally finished?

>> No.3674959

>>3674949
You should've just started a new painting. Also, do you not sketch your work out before you start adding value? Seems like a waste of oils

>> No.3674963

That bad?

>> No.3675047

Love the colors m8

>> No.3675057

>zero continuity
>banal composition
>human waste color palate
>muddy values
>distorted anatomy
>exposed canvas
It's about "par for the course." Needs more trite use of numberology, though.

>> No.3675067

>>3675057

You wouldn’t like it regardless

>> No.3675072

>>3675067
that's super presumptuous and frankly, pretentious of you..regardless of what, exactly? whether it was good or not?

>> No.3675081

>>3675072
Half of y’all are charged by racism and the other half are turnt off by my perceived ego.

>> No.3675095

>>3674642
Learn to draw before you paint ffs

>> No.3675115

>>3675081
what does
>>zero continuity
>>banal composition
>>human waste color palate
>>muddy values
>>distorted anatomy
>>exposed canvas
have to do with racism or your "perceived ego?" it's a bad painting due to aforementioned reasons. if you produced something that looks good, it'll be complimented. this isn't good. take the criticism, learn from it and move on. otherwise you're just trolling outside of /b/ which is a bannable offense.

>> No.3675119

>>3675115
you are right anon. ignore him. he is just baiting and bumping his shitty thread as he always do

>> No.3675122

>>3675115
To prove my point. Let me see your art.

>> No.3675154

>>3675122
i wouldn't be caught dead posting my art on this godforsaken site. no respectable artist would. even if i did, how would that prove that
>Half of y’all are charged by racism and the other half are turnt off by my perceived ego
? if the only people that are allowed to make comments on your art are people with more impressive works than you, why do you ask what people think on /ic/? furthermore, it isn't necessary for art critics to produce art; so why do you only allow criticisms from, not only people who produce art, but produce art at a more skillful level than yourself? this is clearly nor the best way to improve yourself, or your artwork.

answer my initial question; what does
>zero continuity
>banal composition
>human waste color palate
>muddy values
>distorted anatomy
>exposed canvas
have to do with your race, or "perceived ego?"

>> No.3675161

>>3675081
>>3675122
I can disproove your point easily, a lot of us(including me) complimented you on your last painting and I am one of these ebil wacists ( >>3674828 )

>> No.3675403

>>3675161
So stupid

>> No.3675424

>>3675403
What an articulate and well thought out response. Care to answer my (>>3675154)
question now?

>> No.3675433

honestly, it looks like you use just about the same brush the whole time and color pick randomly. try to experiment with lighter colors and tones before drowning it in heavy, darker colors

>> No.3675437
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3675437

very handsy tbphwyf

>> No.3675442

>>3675433
Have you ever painted a black person before? Be honest?

>> No.3675447

>>3675442
yes i have; browns and tans still have lighter hues that can be used

>> No.3675451

>>3674828
I like his blacktivist vibe to be honest. I wish I had some sort of theme or identity.

>> No.3675462

>>3675447
Not with darkskin people.

>> No.3675463

>>3675451
It’s not blacktvist. I am just painting my people. Why would I paint white people?

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3675464

>>3675462
you're asking for people's feedback but discredit it. can't help ya dude

>> No.3675472

>>3675464
I asked him a serious question. Not trying to be a dick. But tell me. How can you paint dark people light? Never seen art like that.

>> No.3675481

>>3675463
>It’s not blacktvist
awww, I was hoping there was some edginess

>> No.3675483

>>3675481
Just niggaz

>> No.3675679

please man, please just stop posting your art it's disgusting

>> No.3675680

God, it's really time to hide illashit threads, I can't stand this guy anymore and it's not because of his art.

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>>3675472
maybe the skin oils can shine if the light hits it just right and the women will deliberately apply makeup that is reflective

>> No.3675695
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3675695

>>3675472
Dark skin is much more reflective than light skin, that’s where you can introduce value and hue variation. Look at pic related, it clearly reads as a black person but has a good value and tonal range. Look at the warm red reflected light and the cool blue in the shadows. Some of the values are also very light but only in relation to the other values. Due to its arrangement it still reads as a black person. You shouldn’t limit your values and tonal range just because you’re painting someone with dark skin, instead you should ask yourself how to put together a full range of values and colors and make it still read as a dark skinned person. It’s more about the relationships of the colors/values and less about the actual colors/values. You could paint a white person with very dark colors/values and a black person with very light colors/value.

>> No.3676032
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3676032

Working on values

>> No.3676066

I listened. How am I looking

>> No.3676214

>>3676032
Actual worse.
Looks like vanilla ice cream smeared on her face.

>> No.3676226

I love it, can I hire you for a commission??

>> No.3676288

>>3676226
Sure

>> No.3676312

>>3676288
You forgot to put your name in the name field after you deleted it to post this >>3676226
lol so here's the proof that Illastrat samefags in all of his threads to compliment himself.

>> No.3676351

>>3676312
You are deluded to think I have no fans.

>> No.3676376
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3676376

Illushit BTFO'd yet again.

>> No.3676580

Inb4 Illastrat makes a new thread completely ignoring having been BTFO'd

>> No.3676621

>>3676032
>Working on values
Are you really, though?

>> No.3676628

>>3676621
I am

>> No.3676637
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3676637

>>3676312

>> No.3676727

>>3676376
Holy shit this is exactly what I was thinking. Maybe i'm getting better after all

>> No.3676752

>>3676628
How? By painting the same randomly colored symbols over and over again?

>> No.3677002

>>3675081
>artist who has way to high an opinion of himself for his level of art
>also happens to be black
>gets called out for maintaining issues in his art, refusing to change them and getting defensive
>y-you guys are just racist
Really bro?

>> No.3677004

>>3677002
he's joking because he's actually white, are you behind the times or what, 'the black artist' is a persona, the paintings are i guess a bizarre kaufmanest type of performance art

>> No.3677047

>>3674830
>making bla pipo look uglier than they actually are
impressive

>> No.3677061

>>3677047
Only a /pol/fag could be deluded enough to miss such an obvious joke.

>> No.3677064

>>3677004
So that Facebook page really isn’t him?

>> No.3677074

>>3677061
Only a shitlib could be autistic enough to miss that the guy got the joke

>> No.3677092

>>3677064
Nah, he's a white liberal. A trans black, if you like.

>> No.3677108

>>3677092
He has a tattoo of "da black kween."

>> No.3677473

WE HAVE TO SETTLE THIS ONCE AND FOR ALL!!!!!!!!!!!
Chauncey....
YOU GOTTA POST THE PAINTING IN OP WITH YOUR BLACK HAND HOLDING IT!!!!!!!

>> No.3677519

>>3677473
This pls

>> No.3677522

>>3677473
Impossible

>> No.3677523

>>3677473
if he doesn't put a pic of his black hand holding a painting (with timestamp) within a week, it's 200% confirmed Illastrat is white. It would make a lot of sense if he were.

>> No.3677535

>>3677523
Are you saying niggers can’t make art of my caliber. Maybe I am white?

>> No.3677542

>>3677535
kek confirmed he's white
Also actual black artists are way better, you just suck, and no amount of race baiting will improve your stuff. You gotta improve from within and get your head out your ass.

>> No.3677547
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3677547

>>3677542
So u r sayin this sucks...pic related

>> No.3677578

>>3677547
Yeah kinda
>ugly painting technique (you've heard this in other threads before though)
>why are her eyes so gigantic
>chains mostly look awful
>that cross
>the fucking background altogether
>kindergarten birds, buildings, sun, clouds, and mountains
You've got some experience painting people, but your coloring always looks so smear heavy, and everything except the people look terrible. To compound that, a lot of your people have fudnamental issues (just ITT we had giant hands and disporportionate eyes) and end up looking terrible in the long run with a variety of various issues. I didn't save any of your other art so I can't critique it, but man, like your stuff might look good from a distance, but as soon as you get close it turns really bad really fast.

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3677586

>>3676312
fucking kek

>> No.3677696

>>3677578
Sounds like you don’t know art

>> No.3677732
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3677732

So???????? What do you think? (Unless it’s criticism)

>> No.3677743

>>3675695
Only good post in this thread and no replies. The absolute stare of /ic/

>> No.3677761

>>3677743
I think people know it's right, there's no need to reply to a post that's already good

>> No.3677775
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3677775

>>3677522
Why?
You really are a wigger, ain't cha?

>> No.3677789

>>3677732
That’s horrible

>> No.3677793

Illastrat, remove your name and go into /beg/ and start from the ground up on basics like anatomy, scale, and fine detail. Your shit's got some flair sometimes, but it's marred with really big fundamental issues. Also your larping has been exposed multiple times, and honestly it's kinda racist and it makes me cringe to think about.
Fuck off and start over. You shouldn't be making full threads dedicated to your art all the goddamn time, when they end up equating to the same shit.

>> No.3677836
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3677836

>>3677793
You sound like a fucking moron.

>> No.3677859

>>3677836
>BTFO once again
>durr ur dumb
You might not be black, but you're sure acting dumber than any black person I've ever known

>> No.3677874

>>3677859
Not only are you a moron. U r a racist moron. I am complete in my studies. I don’t want to rigorously learn anything new. Realism is not my aim.

>> No.3677889

>>3677874
>I am the racist one for calling out a white dude who’s pretending to be black to gain favor for his drawings, while he assumes things about black people, and gives them a worse name by acting like a crybaby bitch
Okay now THIS is epic
>I don’t want to learn anything new
Well, you got that right.

Dude I said your style has some flair to it from far away, but your problem is your fundies.
If you’re digging a hole with an axe, and someone points out where the shovel is, to help you, don’t fucking keep digging with the axe, go get the goddamn shovel. Fix your shit dude.

>> No.3677892

>>3677874
To continue
>>3677836
LOOK at her right eye
How do you not see anything wrong with it? That’s what people are talking about.

>> No.3677901

>>3677889
Again...idiot. All my favorite painters paint like me (degenerates). I have learned enough fundamentals. I will never and don’t want to be a classical artist. Realism is not my aim. Stop trying to put me in a box. I know about styles you never knew existed.

>> No.3677905

>>3677892
I know it’s not an eyes length a part. I rushed. It’s call not being perfect. I dare you post your art...thought so

>> No.3677913

>>3677901
I didn’t tell you to become a classical artist, holy hell you’re defensive. I told you to lrn2draw
>>3677905
>calling someone out and then finishing for them
You’re some other level of delusional. Kys whitey.

>> No.3677916

>>3677913
I know how to draw. Most of my mistakes is either intentional or because I rushed.

What I am saying to u is that I like my art. If you don’t, whatever. I doubt you could do better you would have posted

>> No.3677919

>>3677916
>>3677732
My work is better, it’s right here. I learned from you ;^)

>> No.3677920

>>3677919
Shits horrible.

>> No.3677922

>>3677920
Case closed

>> No.3677923

>>3674949
unironically better b4

>> No.3677934

>>3677916
>I know how to draw.
You've yet to prove that.
>I doubt you could do better you would have posted
Again, if the only people that are allowed to make comments on your art are people with more impressive works than you, why do you ask what people think on /ic/? furthermore, it isn't necessary for art critics to produce art; so why do you only allow criticisms from, not only people who produce art, but produce art at a more skillful level than yourself? this is clearly not the best way to improve yourself, or your artwork.

>>3677920
It literally looks exactly like one of your pieces.

>>3677905
>I know how to observational draw
>I'm not going for realism
>So what if I can only draw symbols?
>The values aren't muddy
>It's just my style
>Yeah, I samefag to compliment myself, but some people like me
>Y'all just don't understand art
>I was rushing
If only you were as good at painting as you are at being delusional.
Inb4 he deflects to something completely unrelated to anything itt (e.g. post your work, my girl better than y'all, etc...)

>> No.3677944

>>3677934
Yeah but you don’t understand, he’s a real cool, city black guy, who’s just ahead of you, so he’s worrying about other things. He’s already got his doctorate in pop paintings of black people and has written three books. He’s accomplished all he wants to do.

No need to improve when fucked anatomy is his style, not a mistake.

>> No.3677945

>>3677916
>I know how to draw. Most of my mistakes is either intentional or because I rushed.
Mistakes by definition are not intentional, you dumb piece of shit.
>What I am saying to u is that I like my art.
Cool. Since you're satisfied with your art, you don't need to ask what others think.

>> No.3677950

>>3677945
No illastrat can do whatever he pleases with his art. He can ask for opinions and I definitely encourage him to come back here for a long time into the future. He's a star.

>> No.3677954

>>3677793
>Illastrat, remove your name and go into /beg/ and start from the ground up on basics like anatomy, scale, and fine detail.

Best advice this faggot is going to get. Trouble is, he's gotten it literally hundreds of times now. The chances that he stops spamming the board with his shit-tier art are about the same as his chances of improving said shit-tier art.

>Also your larping has been exposed multiple times, and honestly it's kinda racist and it makes me cringe to think about.

For real. He's a white guy pretending to be black, for anyone who didn't already know.

>> No.3677956

>>3677836

I opened this pic and it literally made me laugh out loud. Oof.

>> No.3677963
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3677963

>worship me
-Illastrat, 2018

>> No.3677966

>>3677963
I like that painting actually
My professor said illastrat's art is good

>> No.3677969

>>3677966
okay Illastrat, calm down. I guarantee no art professor said that that eye is okay.
Did you do it freehand too?

>> No.3677970

>>3674642
lmao wtf are those gorilla hands

>> No.3677989

I actually love you Illastrat. You're like the DarkSydePhil or LowTierGod of /ic/.

>> No.3677993

>>3677969
I am not illastrat. I go to art school and I showed illastrat's art to my professor. He said illastrat's art was good

>> No.3677996

>>3677993
Even if you somehow aren't him, why on Earth would you be showing his stuff to a college art professor? Legitimately, please break it down for me the reasons why it's so good, that you randomly showed it to your professor and had him critique it.

>> No.3678008

>>3677996
Because his art is highly original and authentic. And you guys hate on him.

Well my professor disagrees with you guys. He thinks illastrat's art is brilliant. He referred to a bunch of famous artists who painted in a similar way to illastrat.

>> No.3678010

>>3678008
>Well my professor disagrees with you guys. He thinks illastrat's art is brilliant.

You have to be trolling. This is too funny not be a troll post.

I mean, on the off-chance you're not trolling, you realize how bad this is for you, right?

>> No.3678012

>>3678008

hahaha. ask him to teach you to paint like ilistrat. maybe one day you too can spam this board with your shit-tier woke nigger paintings.

>> No.3678014

>>3678008
Illastrat, you're not even TRYING to hide that it's you.
By chance though, what artists did your professor mention?

>> No.3678015

>>3674885
>>3674963
>>3675067
>>3675081
>>3675122
>>3675403
>>3675442
>>3675462
>>3675463
>>3675472
>>3675483
>>3676032
>>3676066
>>3676226
>>3676288
>>3676351
>>3676628
>>3677522
>>3677535
>>3677547
>>3677696
>>3677789
>>3677836
>>3677874
>>3677901
>>3677905
>>3677916
>>3677920
>>3677950
>>3677966
>>3677989
>>3677993
>>3678008
Samefag

>> No.3678018

>>3678014
I did not pay attention to the exact names but I have class tomorrow so I will ask my professor again.

>> No.3678019

>>3678015
you're off by one post
>>3677989 is me. Both of those guys are jokes of the fighting game community who do really similar shit to Illastrat (think too highly of self, can't handle criticism, really shit at what they do, etc)

>> No.3678022

>>3678019
Shoot, well we'll replace that one with this >>3678018 one.

>> No.3678049

Thread theme
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tXsxvdF481I
>WHEN YOU BELIEVE IN THINGS
>THAT YOU DON'T UNDERSTAND THEN YOU SUFFER
>SUPERSTITION AIN'T THE WAYYY

>> No.3678062

>>3677963
that one is pretty good

>> No.3678067
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3678067

>>3675695
dark skin isn't really much more reflective than light skin, light skin just transitions more softly into the highlights because it's lighter.

>> No.3678097

https://forum.deviantart.com/community/complaints/1864471/?offset=0#comments
Just reading through this gives me some keks. Dude, you've been samefagging for 5 fucking years? At least?

>> No.3678105

>>3677963
Hit and miss ain’t the way to go.
Now having said that... dude, you kinda hit it with this one.
There is an expression in the eyes that conveys something.
I do like this one.
But listen dude.
You obviously have the drive.
Just please please keep refining fundamentals.
PLEASE!
I’m sure most people here would gladly eat their words to see you master some things and make some exceptional art.

>> No.3678106

>>3678105
And if the whole of the fundamentals seem overwhelming, then just focus on face proportions and expressions.
Remember, more subtle expression = more powerful.
The viewer has to fill in the blanks, and that draws the viewer in.

>> No.3678110

>>3678106
And on that note... please hear me on this...
Stop making marks on your canvas that imitate marks of art.
Just make marks that fit what you are painting...form,value,contour,anatomy etc.

>> No.3678129

>>3677732
looks like a character from kaiji

>> No.3678133

>>3678129
>zawa zawa

>> No.3678421

>>3678008
>professor disagrees with you guys.
post his work.

i don't mean to break your childhish fantasies, but there are also shit professors in this world.

>> No.3678454

>>3678421
Lol
My professor was friends with basquiat
He appeared in a recent documentary about basquiat on tv

Basquiat painted a portrait of him which he sold to buy a house several years ago

>> No.3678468

You paint too many niggers 2bh.

>> No.3678528

My professor said his style reminds him of Walter Robinson

>> No.3678553

>>3678454
Basquiat, the junkie gaylord. Only famous to fuck over the goys and their history of beauty in the arts.
Is this your argument?

>> No.3678612

>>3678553
I can't understand what you are saying

>> No.3678730

>>3678612
Then I suggest you swap studying art, and study something more useful in understanding linguistics.

>> No.3678784

>>3678454
Illastrat chill out, you used Basquiat for a profile pic on one of your alt accounts. We know it's you lmao

>> No.3678786

>>3678784
I am not illastrat. I am illastrat 's online acquaintance

>> No.3678865

>>3678786
then why did mr Illastrat's manager get banned from DA, especially considering your intimate knowledge of him and his works and beliefs, and his history of samefagging.

>> No.3678937

>>3678865
I have no idea on what you are talking about. I am not illastrat

>> No.3679074

>>3678937
Take your meds and learn to draw, Illastrat.