Porn Thread - Back From The Dead Edition v.2

[Anonymous No.3334761]

Can't find the old thread so I'm winging it.
Porn thread for people who like drawing porn.
Hide degeneracy you don't wish to view, etc, etc.
Post finished works and W.I.P's here.
Any questions in regards to reference materials will be answered.
Don't know where to start? Check the updated sticky- https://docs.google.com/document/d/1uwaXKU7ev6Tw_or__o8ARpUb6r2rCZYJGqwSFV9AD98/edit#
Ask off topic questions in the question thread - >>3334384 →

[Anonymous No.3334763]

Not my work.

[Anonymous No.3334770]

[Anonymous No.3334900]

>>3334770
Thanks for deleting the other one OP. Sorry for kind of spaz-ing out at you too, that wasn't called for.

[Anonymous No.3334903]

>>3334900
Oops didn't mean to reply to that one. Oh well.

[Hardstones McFlintcock No.3335082]

>>3334761
Looking for comments and critiques on the values on the latex gloves. Inexperienced with leather and latex, and a few pointers would help me out tremendously.

[Anonymous No.3335100]

My colouring work sucks.

[Anonymous No.3335102]

Just the flats here though.

[Anonymous No.3335143]

Any good tutorials on drawing sexy fat girls?
That Doxy one is shit.

[Anonymous No.3335167]

>>3335100
>>3335102
seems traced, can i see your construction?

[Anonymous No.3335171]

>>3334763
why the hell are you posting it then?

[Anonymous No.3335174]

>>3335100
Your gesture, anatomy, perspective all suck too, you know.

[Anonymous No.3335176]

>>3335167
Lol, it doesn't look traced at all. The anatomy is pretty shitty to look at.

[Anonymous No.3335179]

>>3335176
i agree, i never said it was traced well.
I still want to see some construction.

[Anonymous No.3335187]

>>3335179
This is the rough work, let me pull up the reference used in the original piece.

[Anonymous No.3335189]

>>3335167
How the fuck do you look at that and possibly think it's traced?

[Anonymous No.3335192]

>>3335143
How fat are talking about?

[Anonymous No.3335274]

>>3335187
Ok, I've been looking through all of my reference images and this is the closest I have found. I am most certain there is another angle of this that has less emphasis on perspective.

If there isn't than the whole thing is fucked as I didn't even follow through on the perspective from the reference. Luckily there is a lot of her in that pose (different arm positions) to work from.

Looks like it is back to the drawing board. That's what I get for rushing things and not going back to the reference but instead draw from the fuck up inktober piece.

[Anonymous No.3335293]

>>3335274
I was planning on drawing other things tonight, but this is bugging me too much. So here is a very rough attempt at redoing this pose from the reference.

[Anonymous No.3335307]

Is there any material out there that analyzes eroticism and the key points regarding what makes something erotic?

I feel like most of the time I'm more limited by imagination than techincal knowledge. Whenever I experiment with new stuff, the result ends up feeling kind of boring.

[Anonymous No.3335315]

>>3335293
I think you struggle way too much with drawing from references

you could try this way

vk
.com/doc366484900_456042621?hash=ad63bdc11ad6a99cd9

seems akin to your technique

[Anonymous No.3335317]

>>3335307
trough browsing nsfw pages and saving pics

kinda easy desu

just visit the hentai boards or something

[Anonymous No.3335319]

>>3335315
Will have to give it a shot

[Anonymous No.3335323]

>>3335143
Draw an skeleton and then use muscle pics as a point of reference to what to exagerate

also learn gesture

WIP related

[Anonymous No.3335336]

>>3335317
That's the data but not the analysis. I'm just curious if anyone has done a generalized study to find the exact aspects of eroticism.

There's certainly personal preference but I wouldn't be surprised if even the strangest of fetishes followed some general rule/pattern that was applicable to anything.

[Anonymous No.3335338]

>>3335336
Try analizing people favorite pics and what makes it hot

https://desuarchive.org/trash/thread/12795911/#12795911

[Anonymous No.3335356]

[Anonymous No.3335368]

>>3335356
>those sharply visible muscles
>that lack of forehead
>those noses
>that sameface
>those terrible pointy ears and hair
>those disgustingly fat forearms

Terrible

Even for yaoi hands fujoshi standards

[Anonymous No.3335372]

>>3335356
>>3335368
I agree for the most part about the bodies but the heads look good in my opinion
cum looks great though

[Anonymous No.3335388]

First time trying to draw lewd stuff and I wanted to test some ideas.

Is this appealing in any way?

[Anonymous No.3335391]

>>3335356
>>3335368
This is what regular anime looks like to normal people.

[Anonymous No.3335411]

>>3335356
anon... how is it a year has passed and you haven't improved a single bit.

[Anonymous No.3335419]

WIP. Critiques please.

[Anonymous No.3335420]

>>3335419
shouldn't the speech bubble color match the cock colors?

[Anonymous No.3335425]

>>3335420
had a few different colors. this one was the most readable. given that you brought it up I'll change the orange to a bluish or something. Thanks.

[Anonymous No.3335479]

>>3335419
No one knows how to do the fucking ribs

they should be subtle, otherwise looks like it came back from african auschwitz

[Anonymous No.3335482]

Latest thing. I'm sure there's stuff that is very off and I don't see yet. I'd appreciate any kind of critique.

[Anonymous No.3335487]

>>3335482
Why does the guy have 4 balls?

[Anonymous No.3335498]

>>3335487
I'm guessing that is his doggy knot on the penis, and not the balls?

[Anonymous No.3335525]

>>3335482
lower abdomen seems a bit disconnected

[Anonymous No.3335534]

>>3335487
evolution

[Anonymous No.3335545]

>>3335482
The knot is used by canines to "lock in" while mating, so the female can't run away mid-action.

[Hardstones McFlintcock No.3335554]

>>3335082
Update

[Anonymous No.3335556]

>>3335419
>sidemouth

[Anonymous No.3335561]

>>3335545
I know. Here they just aren't locked.

[Anonymous No.3335564]

>>3335525
Yeah, he's supposed to be lifting his butt and arching his back, but her leg is making this shitty tangent with the contour of his upper back muscles. I need to fix that somehow.

[Anonymous No.3335640]

Are there any current good western porn artists? Seems like everyone is just doing the same disney/anime style faces with small nose, big eyes, tiny mouth. Shits so boring to me, it all looks the same. People complain about artists same-facing, but it seems you can't be popular unless you do the same facial proportions that everyone else is currently doing.

[Anonymous No.3335653]

>>3335640
You mean like classic pin up girls?

I have this:
vk
.com/doc4043932_437681741?hash=f33bdd569fa368d4e9

[Anonymous No.3335659]

>>3335653
The faces are ok, but a bit cartoony. The legs however are just ridiculous and detract from anything else.

[Anonymous No.3335662]

>>3335659
Google the playboy cartoons then

is a boiling-pot of great lewd artstyles

[Anonymous No.3335665]

>>3335662

[Anonymous No.3335668]

>>3335665

[Anonymous No.3335670]

>>3335668
last

[Anonymous No.3335709]

>>3335498
Huh, today I learned about dog dicks

[Anonymous No.3335721]

>>3335662
weird how he like doesn't have a dick just a like spherical pelvis

[Anonymous No.3335731]

>>3335668
WHORE

[Anonymous No.3335748]

>>3335372
Please study heads if you think that is even remotely anatomically correct. Even for anime standards.
Not even trying to shitpost man. Draw over that picture and outline the skull and ask yourself if that looks truly correct.

[Anonymous No.3335754]

>>3335356
Dude, stop drawing this autismo trash and put some effort into actually getting better. Draw real heads and bodies using reference. Work on constructing real proportions. You've been drawing the same garbage for over a year. This is a place to progress and you aren't even trying.

[Anonymous No.3335760]

>>3335554

You should consider her areolas. Right now, with those strokes along the border, it looks as if they're made of short fur.

[Anonymous No.3335805]

>>3335174
Redline?

[Anonymous No.3335806]

>>3335554
Ash expresses himself like it was an agonizing torture scene.
Not sure if intentional...

Jessie probably should be looking at what she's stroking.

[Hardstones McFlintcock No.3335863]

>>3335760
Any artists you recommend who render areolas with pen? Or should I erase those lines and simply shade them in after the values are complete?

[Hardstones McFlintcock No.3335865]

>>3335806
Will adjust the eyebrows, though the commissioner requested one tear running from his eye. Wanted to fulfill that the best I could.

[Anonymous No.3335916]

>>3335482
God I love this artist

[Anonymous No.3335956]

>>3335554
I'm not an inker so take this for what it's worth. Generally you don't want bold dark lines in the "inside" of the body or face, only one the outside. Light low opacity hatching can work better in alot of places. Nipple form is best created with values, but if you must ink, don't use heavy lines and dont draw the entire circle of the areola. The neck was too thick, and the neck and clavicle area was too bold. She had an adams apple. There is a slight outer curve on the neck but it has to be VERY gentle or risk she looka like a man. Check out how Disney concept artists do it. Also her ear looked fucked.

[Anonymous No.3335960]

>>3335956
is her name 'deathgrip'?

[Anonymous No.3336015]

>>3335082
The perspective on the arm is bad. I imagin he she was standing full frontal with her arms down she would have a massive arm thick as a log up to her shoulder.

[Anonymous No.3336026]

AAAND done

neverlookback

[Anonymous No.3336280]

>>3335479
Aight, chill. The lines on the body were mostly a guide in the construction phase that I I left in. I'll fix it. Thanks.

>>3335556
I don't consider this a legitimate criticism.

[Anonymous No.3336330]

>>3335956
That kid looks like an adult in pain

The face looks a lit the weird because of that

[Anonymous No.3336680]

>>3335665
Nice, wouldn't it be cool if they started doing these in the new non nude playboys? Like they're just cheeky and not "pornographic" because they're cartoons so they can put them in. I know they never would, but i'd be pretty cool.

[Anonymous No.3336696]

>>3336680
>tfw we could have had a western industry like anime in japan and 2D was considered adult art
>tfw then printed media died and photographs took over
>tfw Disney stigmatized cartoon and animation by giving up in projects like Fantasia and only doing kiddie stuff

Feels bad bros

[Anonymous No.3336697]

>>3336696
anime is for children in japan too, high school kids aren't adults. the adults who watch anime are equiv. bronies in japan.

[Anonymous No.3336703]

How can I fix the legs?

[Anonymous No.3336706]

>>3335662

[Anonymous No.3336707]

>>3336697
>tfw adults watch cartoons in my country

Some taxi drivers have saint seya or dragon ball stickers or figurines inside their cars

Pathetic but Feels good

[Anonymous No.3336710]

>>3336697
That's a blatant lie.

[Hardstones McFlintcock No.3336716]

Will work the values tomorrow morning, as well as the garter-belt design. How does the perspective and anatomy feel?

[Anonymous No.3336718]

>>3336703
Be a bad boy and skip fixing them

normies won't notice

[spoiler] or just use a reference you d*ngus

[Anonymous No.3336720]

>>3336716
servisable

the eyes are a little too close though

also the benin head is too big

[Hardstones McFlintcock No.3336721]

>>3335554
Update with some of the shading done.

[Anonymous No.3336727]

>>3336718
I was using a refrence but I feel it doesnt quite read right.
And yeah I doubt normies would notice but ... I want it to look nice to non normies too ;'D

[Anonymous No.3336730]

>>3336721
Her left hand looks small or odd imo

[Anonymous No.3336733]

>>3336721
that face looks particulary chad-esque.

Square and sharp jaw

probably is the THICC neck and the size of the eyes being small makes the rest of the face look big in comparison

[Anonymous No.3336735]

>>3336730
it looks fine desu

[Anonymous No.3336740]

>>3336733
the ash one I mean

or whoever that is

[Anonymous No.3336792]

>>3335100
>>3335102
>>3335187
>>3335293

Hey anon, I'm the guy who commented on your Cavewoman works last thread. If you need some pointers I'll be around if you still are. Here's an example of my work to let you know I'm serious about helping you out if you need it.

[Anonymous No.3336868]

>>3336792
Glad to hear it, always can do with some help. Be it an observation or a evisceration of a piece to point out the problems.

Pic related is some studies I did.

[Anonymous No.3336891]

>>3336792
imo you should help yourself before you offer to help others.

[Anonymous No.3336898]

>>3336868
Mokoto guy here, let's have a look.

I'm assuming your using reference photos for all of these studies, and that's the way to go. There's no need to judge you too harshly on these either, they're just sketches. So, no need to eviscerate anything. You're practicing, and that's a great start.
>Top left
Arch of the nose could be drawn inward more. Her chin seems a bit off, even through perspective. The ear could lay a little more flat against the side of her face. The guy's hands look like they're holding her hair, and his left hand is pushing down on his right but draw in some hair being held in his fist. Give the illusion she's being forced to suck cock, and not getting hit in the back of the head.
>Top right
Good image, but watch those hands, especially on the guy's left hand. It almost looks like a claw. And the cock vein, for the lack of a better term right now, should be on the bottom of the shaft instead of the top.
>Bottom left
Watch the placement of the eyes on the face. The chick on the left has her left eye higher than her right. Also the iris is drawn in almost in the entire eye on her left as opposed to the right. You're using guidelines, which is good. try drawing your eyes in the center of your eye guidelines, rather than resting the eyes on the top of the line. See if that helps you.
>Bottom right
Don't be shy about looking up some cock photos and studying them more closely. It's a good dick drawn in, but it needs more. Watch the tilt on her face and see how placing the eyes on the top of that eye guideline made the left one, "move" up on her face? You could use some lip work too, but that comes later with your practice.

Work on your guidelines, a better presentation of a good cock and don't rush through your sketches. Take your time, and don't be afraid to look up some good cock reference photos.

I'll be around.

[Anonymous No.3336900]

>>3336891
What needs fixing? Please, show me.

[Anonymous No.3336912]

>>3336280
>I don't consider this a legitimate criticism.
NGMI

[Anonymous No.3336917]

How long should something like this take to finish for a decent arist to finish?
I'm at a similar level i would like to think... but i'm not sure if i drag it on too long.

[Anonymous No.3336929]

>>3336917
I did this sketch in like half an hour

I don't know how long would the coloring take though

how long you took?

[Anonymous No.3336936]

>>3336929
Thats not my work btw.

I really have no fucking idea how long i take. I usually just draw while i'm waiting for match qeue's.
If i had to guess how long it took me to finish a drawing like this i would say maybe a little under 3 hours? But then i also tend to come back and fuck around with them on and off as time goes by so i have no fucking clue..
The thing is i just got my first commission this week and I just am curious how many hours somebody should devote to 1 finished product before calling it finished and stopping.

[Anonymous No.3336939]

>>3336936
Begginers and pros seem take around a day for a finnished piece

definitely is going to take more time than waiting for a loading screen or fill a server or wathever

[Anonymous No.3336945]

>>3336936
>>3336939
sketches and non-important pieces do take a lot less however

hardly I ever need more than an hour to finish a piece

[Anonymous No.3336951]

>>3336945
3 hours for a full body picture of a half naked girl with color and shading sound reasonable then?
I charged 20$ USD.

[Anonymous No.3336962]

>>3336951
>begginer
>doing commissions already
No

[Anonymous No.3336973]

>>3336962
I'm not a beginner though... senpai.. I been drawing for years already.
I made a blog for my porn art a year ago and somebody just randomly asked me if I would do a comission this week is all..
I figured this might be a sort breakthrough for myself as an artist to finally get to the point where somebody wants to pay for my lewd art.
I just need to figure out how much i should charge and how much time i should devote to a customers request though..
As of right now I know I am going to take a really long time to make this one perfect though simply because it is my first commission. I don't think that is a good idea moving forward if i plan on getting multiple commissions some day.

[Anonymous No.3336980]

>>3336973
Charge as much as your skill level think is worth.

I think the regular is around 7$ to 50$, then more if its pieces that can take weeks or days, but those tend to be negotiable so it depends of the request and the client

[Anonymous No.3337075]

>>3336721
not sure if you're still asking for input, if not that's cool, do your thing. If you are, I tried to highlight a couple things that looked a little wonky IMHO.

I'm on a thinkpad with a trackpoint only, away from a drawing tab so excuse the messiness.

>left arm looks a little stiff, not super clear where the forearm starts
>fingers a little long and possibly too visible depending on your perspective
>neck muscles could be shaded for implication or ignored, up to you

you're clearly very talented though, the trainer's body has form and you nailed the tits which isn't easy, I also really like the hair and general face.

[Anonymous No.3337133]

>>3336900
mainly proportions. the hands and feet are too small and the construction is bad.
the lineart is super flat as well. basically the only good stuff is the symbols you copied from other artists.

[Anonymous No.3337135]

>>3336868
stop tracing.

[Anonymous No.3337138]

>>3335482

Dude's torso is abnormally long, try moving the legs up a bit more and decreasing the prominence of his buttocks.

Love your art btw, especially the XIV stuff.

[Anonymous No.3337162]

>>3337138
Yeah, you are absolutely correct about it. I messed up the perspective.
I have already colored it tho. I'll try to get back to it to fix that. I wish I had more time to work on these.
Thanks for the critique.

[Anonymous No.3337253]

>>3336898
All from reference, so if it is in there the reference had them., definitely agree that I should tighten things up.

[Anonymous No.3337307]

>>3335487

[Anonymous No.3337338]

>>3337162
yo bbc, for patreon do you send the high res art all at the end of the month or periodically throughout?

[Anonymous No.3337339]

>>3337253
Mokoto guy again. True, it's okay to take your reference photos down to a minute detail, but even they have mistakes, too. Be careful about that. Keep sketching, man.
>>3337133
Good call on the proportions, her right hand is a bit too small. Thanks.

[Anonymous No.3337369]

>>3337338
All in one shot between the 5th and 10th of the month.

[Anonymous No.3337565]

Why can't I fucking render? I'm sitting here trying to be all 'painterly' because I don't want to rely on outlines.. I don't understand how to do it.

All my outlines make my work look ugly because my lines are never neat and sharp. I understand the trick to use the lasso tool to get the base colors down, but I just don't know what to do from here, with shading and soft brushes.

[Anonymous No.3337576]

>>3336980
ok then thx

[Anonymous No.3337641]

>>3337565
Oh hey, looks like we did similar poses >>3337220

If anyone would like to help me or this anon on how to make the pose better, that would be fantastic.

[Anonymous No.3337643]

>>3337565

Then don't use soft brushes, especially not out the gate.

If you don't want to use linework you're going to need to understand lighting, edges and value. It's usually much better to block in values with hard edges and then soften the ones that need softening. Also, I think right now you might be better off practicing in greyscale, it removes the dimension of having to handle color and lets you focus on value, lighting, and edgework.

Also where the fuck is your light even coming from? Her face is in shadow, except for like, her lower jaw, which implies light coming from underneath. She's looking up, and the tops of her breasts are lit. There's shadows underneath her breasts / her inner thighs, implying the light is coming from above? You don't just slap shadows on willy-nilly and hope it'll make it look better, you need to consider the source of the light and how it will interact with your subject, or it'll look dumb.

Also, don't count on painting to completely make up for poor draughtsmanship, or you'll just be polishing turds.

[Anonymous No.3337664]

thoughts on this? i'm trying to get into drawing anime more often.

[Hardstones McFlintcock No.3337733]

Will focus on Ash next.

[Anonymous No.3337738]

>>3337733
hahaha ash is like

>"gg-ggo--ggot to catch em all"

[Anonymous No.3337746]

>>3337738
sit in the corner and think about what you just wrote

[Anonymous No.3337747]

>>3337733
gosh i wish that were me

[Anonymous No.3337761]

>>3337747
Find yourself a twink on Grinder, they're pretty much begging for someone to dominate them especially if you're a butch or a tomboy they love it.

[Anonymous No.3337770]

>>3337746
What? i'll never understand autistic people.

[Anonymous No.3337789]

>>3337770
The autist here is you....

[Anonymous No.3337797]

>>3337789
and no sense of humor either apparently.

another sign you must be on that spectrum disorder.

[Anonymous No.3337804]

>>3337797
or maybe you arent god's gift to comedy

[Anonymous No.3337810]

>>3337804
okay bud. don't go shoot up a school now. jesus christ chill out.

[Anonymous No.3337815]

>>3337810
you're the defensive sperg here
>"calm down buddy" tactics

[Hardstones McFlintcock No.3337817]

Not the most convincing garterbelt, but it'll do for now. Going to get some rough sketches out of the way, then try to finish the Jessie-Ash piece. Going to rough out the values before I leave on a family trip.

[Anonymous No.3338095]

[Anonymous No.3338098]

Does this count as a pantyshot

[Anonymous No.3338105]

>>3338095
blog? did you also do the 5th picture in pic related? (blonde girl with gold irises and acorn shaped eyes)

[Anonymous No.3338115]

>>3337817
ew wtf man.

[Hardstones McFlintcock No.3338150]

>>3338115
Anything particularly off about it?

[Anonymous No.3338153]

>>3337565
Take some time to develop your line work before trying to color, man. Put in a month's worth of practice and see if that helps you develop a bit more confidence to color. Don't put the cart before the horse.
>>3337641
Your line work is more solid, but your perspective work throws it all away. Both of you should look up more reference pictures on how that pose is presented. Off to /hc/ you go... --->
>>3337664
Can you draw anime at all? Care to give it a shot and post your work here for a crit?
>>3337817
Nice cock. :D
>>3338098
If you're into that, sure, why the hell not. :)

[Anonymous No.3338156]

>>3336707
Right next to the picture of Christ. Sweet.

[Hardstones McFlintcock No.3338157]

>>3338153
Thanks. I blocked in the values real quick, but I need to head off to bed. Will shape things up tomorrow morning.

[Anonymous No.3338158]

>>3338153
i'm a little hesitant to post it here anon. even if it is good, people will shit on it, then I might believe them.

[Anonymous No.3338166]

this is how I feel when I get crits on my anime. because I only just started to get into it, i've drawn for years though. it's a sensitive place.>>3338153

[Anonymous No.3338169]

Another rough study work for tonight.

[Anonymous No.3338177]

>>3338169
That deathgrip jesus.

[Anonymous No.3338183]

>>3338177
Guess he is into that sorta thing? I’m not the model.

[Anonymous No.3338184]

>>3338183
I actually meant the woman in the first panel. Did you use a reference for this? Either the woman have very long fingers, the man has a skinny cock (which doesn't seem to be the case based on panel 2), or she's squeezing the daylights out of that wiener.

[Anonymous No.3338188]

>>3337641

Haha nicee, I don't know why but I have that pose in my head, easy to draw now

>>3337643

So I redrew the whole thing, definitely wasn't happy with how it was going.

I took your advice, and definitely feel better about this version. I took your advice btw. I usually only go with black and white, but yeah I'll start next with just showing values, using gray scale.

What do you think?

[Anonymous No.3338191]

>>3338184
In the first panel she might be giving him a bit of a squeeze with him having climaxed on her face. Second panel I’m missing a bit there, but the base of the dick is a bit higher and her grip is kinda loose.

References were used for all of them. First guy isn’t exactly monster schlong, not that he cares in that moment. Or he could be losing his hard on a bit Fromm having climaxed.

[Anonymous No.3338192]

Colouring and background turned out shit but I'm rushing this one out.

>>3338105
https://twitter.com/orenjipiiru
The one in that picture isn't me, though.

[Anonymous No.3338194]

>>3338192
i want to cum in her woomy

[Anonymous No.3338196]

>>3338194
Don't lie to yourself.

[Anonymous No.3338230]

>>3338196

[Anonymous No.3338541]

Another series of studies.

[Anonymous No.3338561]

>>3338541
just mindlessly copying references will get you nowhere. pick up a book and start doing some beginner perspective studies with still life instead of trying to copy porn poses. you'll be stuck at this stage for the rest of your life if you don't take fundamental studies seriously.

[Anonymous No.3338601]

>>3338561
not true bich tits

[Anonymous No.3338625]

>>3338601
>abloobloo
I rest my case

[Anonymous No.3338841]

>>3338561
nah he's doing fine, let him draw anon

[Anonymous No.3338860]

>>3338841
oh, sure thing. let him do what he's doing. he's gonna drop the hobby eventually anyway.
>he's doing fine
kek

[Anonymous No.3338892]

>>3338860
Drawing minimum 20 minutes a day

[Anonymous No.3339089]

>>3338860
Post your work crab

[Anonymous No.3339207]

>>3335274
Danni Ashe.
Nice.

[Anonymous No.3339252]

[Anonymous No.3339287]

>>3339252
UHHH THICC

[Anonymous No.3339424]

>>3339089
kys scrub.

[Anonymous No.3339472]

>>3339424
All talk, faggot. I knew you'd bitch out.

[Anonymous No.3339555]

>>3336900

The shoulders are fucked to hell and way too narrow. Do those really look right to you?

[Anonymous No.3339626]

>>3339472
again, kill yourself, talentless faggot.
if you can't see my advice as being a legit one, you are helpless. I don't need to post anything for you, whiny little bitch. GTFO.

[Anonymous No.3339791]

>>3339252
I didn't expect the fishtail, cute character overall
also this >>3339287 but unironically.

[Anonymous No.3339873]

>>3339626
So what you're saying is your work is really shitty and you like to come on /ic/ and shit talk other artists who are actually trying, in order to make yourself feel better about your truly atrocious work.

[Anonymous No.3339880]

>>3339626
That sounds about right. He sounds triggered as fuck with his Dunning Kruger advice. You're on a porn thread kid, get over yourself.

[Anonymous No.3339884]

>>3334761

[Anonymous No.3339886]

>>3339884
post your work

[Anonymous No.3339890]

>>3338561
>pick up a book and start doing some beginner perspective studies with still life
>copying porn poses
You're contradicting your own "advice" here, champ. Copying porn poses is like picking up a book and doing beginner studies from still life, isn't it? It's not like >>3338541 had porn actors in his room posing for him. lol

[Anonymous No.3339891]

>>3338561
>just mindlessly copying references will get you nowhere
He isn't mindlessly copying. In fact he is very mindfully selecting his references. You'd know that if you knew what it was like to hold a pencil.
>>3339424
>post your work
>angry insult
Absolutely embarrassing. Leave and don't come back. Nobody wants you here.

[Anonymous No.3339892]

>>3339424
>>3339626
>>3339884
samefag

[Anonymous No.3339893]

>>3339886
it is my work. post yours. you won't.

[Anonymous No.3339894]

>>3339892
k

[Anonymous No.3339961]

>>3336716
your art looks like technimind's

[Anonymous No.3339966]

>>3339894
flawless

[Anonymous No.3340011]

WIP animation of a slime girl getting railed from behind

[Anonymous No.3340068]

>>3339873
nah. I draw for a living and I'm successful at it. I come here to put retards like you in their place.

inb4 post work abloo abloo, you liar herp derp etc etc.

>>3339880
you are probably right. there's no point to give advice to notgonnamakeiters.

>>3339891
>Nobody wants you here.
yeah. especially people that don't want to hear their current work is shit.

[Anonymous No.3340076]

>>3340011
I am not really good at animating so I could be wrong on this.

It almost looks like the breasts are immediately at peak bounce on impact. It makes it look like they pop into position and then retract faster than the body.

What would look better is imparting more drag onto the breasts as the body moves. I tried making a quick edit to illustrate this.

Other than that it looks great.

[Anonymous No.3340103]

>>3340011
Nice.

[Anonymous No.3340104]

>>3340068

[Anonymous No.3340118]

>>3340068
>larping as a successful artist

[Anonymous No.3340126]

>>3340118
On 4chan's /ic/ board, no less.
>Seems legit

[Anonymous No.3340128]

Yo, bring on the tits and asses! Stop feeding the dipshit troll and let's get this thread back on track.

[Anonymous No.3340141]

>>3335356
NOW CRUSH THAT DOUBT
UH, WITH A TON O' LUV

[Anonymous No.3340158]

>>3338561
how do you know he's "mindlessly" copying references? Studying references is key to drawing better. Also, there is nothing such as "porn poses". A pose is a pose, and as if they're complex, that's even better. These look pretty complex

[Anonymous No.3340225]

>>3340076
Good eye, I incorporated the delay and it definitely gives the tits more weight.
>>3340128
agreed

[Anonymous No.3340449]

>>3340225
What program are you using for this kind of animation, if you don't mind me asking? I'm a huge fan of the pixel/8 bit era and I've always wanted to learn how to incorporate such a program with my art.
>>3338158
No, I get you anon, sometimes it's intimidating to post work on here, but your work >>3337664
is fairly good enough to start experimenting with more anime. Give it a go, you'll never know unless you try.
>>3338188
Not the same polished turd crit, but your work still needs practice. You're showing better results, though. Keep at it.
>>3338541
Nice improvement. Keep at it, man.

[Anonymous No.3340452]

>>3340449
I use GraphicsGale, it's great. It's made specifically for pixel art.

[Anonymous No.3340465]

it's been a warm day and it's making her all sweaty

[Anonymous No.3340475]

>>3338541
studying means capturing something about the ref. since this is a porn thread I'd assume you'd want to capture what makes these hot. bottom left ass and collarbones on the bottom right kinda go the right direction.

[Anonymous No.3340485]

>>3340452
Thanks man, what's the learning curve on GraphicsGale?

[Anonymous No.3340488]

I'm having a hard time drawing cum, and semi transparent fluids in general. I tried studying them on my own but fail miserably. If someone had some directions I'd really appreciate them.

[Anonymous No.3340499]

>>3340488
have you tried lower opacity lines?

[Anonymous No.3340503]

>>3340488
Don't know much about semen but having the outline being pitch black clashes hard with it. Bordes should be really faint, if skin is colored the border should just be implied between the shapes of color

[Anonymous No.3340507]

>>3340068
>nah. I draw for a living and I'm successful at it

[Anonymous No.3340508]

Should i do hands tied behind or above head?
also do the legs look a little short?

[Anonymous No.3340513]

>>3340488
Try coloring in a value or color for the skin. That's part of your issue with drawing cum, it's transparent but you're trying to draw white stuff on white skin and you're just not going to get the slightly translucent quality down doing it that way.

[Anonymous No.3340519]

>>3340068
If you're that successful how do you even have time to shitpost on 4chan this much? Why would you even feel the need to brag or bully artists who aren't as skilled? You must not be very happy being so successful at drawing for a living.

Either art isn't for you or you're a lying little bitch. :^)

[Anonymous No.3340521]

>>3340485
It's pretty straightforward, if you just stick to the pencil and fill tool it's basically mspaint. Get into the habit of using right click eye-dropper, it's super helpful and speeds up workflow a lot. And if you're animating I find it's helpful to have next frame/previous frame mapped to easily accessible keys so you can jump around quickly.

[Anonymous No.3340563]

>>3340499
I didn't! I don't know how it didn't cross my mind before.
>>3340503
>>3340513
Thank you! You all really helped me.

[Anonymous No.3340578]

>>3340513
possibly the ugliest skin tone ive ever seen.

[Anonymous No.3340628]

>>3340521
Thanks for the tips, man. I really appreciate it.

[Anonymous No.3340633]

>>3340488
Had this on file, thought it could help you too— along with the other suggestions, of course.

[Anonymous No.3340642]

>>3340068
>I draw for a living
>but I wont post my work

Tell it to my uncle who works at nintendo. Banging out Sonic OCs to supplement your neetbux isn't a real job.

> I come here to put retards like you in their place.

You come here to put others down so that you can feel better about your amateurish work. Professionals don't shitpost, and they give constructive criticism that helps others improve because they're secure about their artistic merits. You reek of insecurity and failure.

I won't ask you to post your work, because we both know that you'd turn into the featured greentext in many YLYL threads for years to come. Instead I only ask that you seriously make an effort at becoming a better artist, instead of belittling others because you're unhappy with yourself.

[Anonymous No.3340645]

>>3340578
Yeah, I'm not fond of it either, but the man sure knows a lot about jizz.

[Anonymous No.3340651]

>>3340104
>>3340118
>>3340507
>>3340519
>>3340642

fine.

I'm not really concerned about your opinions on my work, I'm making more money than your shitty artbortions will ever amount to. I don't have to justify myself to notgonnamakeiters.

I just came to tell you how shit your art is. pic related is what faces should look like, and yet not one person here has even grasped the basics

[Anonymous No.3340652]

>>3340651
lol forgot pic

I'm a better artist then you could ever hope to be

[Anonymous No.3340655]

>>3340652
low ears

[Anonymous No.3340659]

>>3340652
>>3340651
did u think this was a good idea

[Anonymous No.3340662]

>>3340508
i like above head better
legs look alright to me

[Anonymous No.3340663]

>>3340652
Your pic is from this channel :
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LSMAGjAqGiA
So if it is really your work, you are beg tier, if it is not then keep Robert out of this !

[Anonymous No.3340665]

And another set, can never have enough practice. Fourth quarter reference was from a gif.

This is all helping to shape a few ideas I had into better pieces overall.

[Anonymous No.3340679]

>>3340652
This is like, really middle of the road quality. Not bad but not exceptionally great, just proficient. Even if you didn't want to show your work and just wanted to show something of similar skill or hell, something you think the people in these threads should be aiming for, I have to say this really doesn't measure up to how hard you've been railing on everyone here. I would expect your bar to be on the level of old masters, maybe Elvgren or at least Artgerm or Adam Hughes or someone with really high quality work like that, the way you've been carrying on. So either you're not that one crab guy who's been plaguing these threads the past couple years or we were right about you all this time, because I can't imagine someone with supposedly such discerning tastes really going that hard demanding people live up to such a relatively short measure.

[Anonymous No.3340691]

>>3340655
>>3340659
>>3340663
>>3340679
You caught me. I was actually impersonating that poster in the hopes of causing chaos. I think he left.

[Anonymous No.3340707]

>>3340691
Ah. Yeah I think he's been gone after that whole debacle of thinking that one anon was some girl he knew.

[Anonymous No.3340741]

>>3340665
This is good shit here. With a little more development each sketch could become something really good.

[Anonymous No.3340745]

>>3339890
you're either a beginner who doesn't see the problem here. he's copying without putting any thought into the construction process. he's basically just very badly copying contours. this isn't studying, this is garbage. that's why I said he should pick up a book. he needs guidance.

[Anonymous No.3340747]

>>3340118
yeah, no successful artists post here AT ALL
bbc, kyle, gabe are just constructs of your imagination.
fucking idiots.

[Anonymous No.3340748]

>>3340158
it's the same guy that said he's just tracing porn poses because he thinks he doesn't need more knowledge than that.
of course I'm not just attacking a bad artist at random.

[Anonymous No.3340753]

>>3340642
>they give constructive criticism that helps others improve because they're secure about their artistic merits.
exactly what I did in my first post to the tracing anon.
but I guess you guys here are way too insecure to accept ANY KIND of legit advice.

also, money is money. I draw smut art for a living because I like it and lucrative. say hi to your uncle I guess.

[Anonymous No.3340754]

>>3340651
>>3340652
also, this isn't me. somebody else is impersonating me. my work is better than this.
nah, not gonna post it.

[Anonymous No.3340756]

>>3340691
GTFO, absolute piece of shit.

[Anonymous No.3340758]

>>3340665
you are still just copying without thinking about the construction.

I give up.
same as you will in a matter of months.

[Anonymous No.3340759]

>>3340754
>also, this isn't me. somebody else is impersonating me. my work is better than this.
nah, not gonna post it.
Imagine your hobby is embarrassing yourself on the internet...

[Anonymous No.3340760]

>>3340707
>debacle
kek

[Anonymous No.3340761]

>>3340759
you are so good at baiting. man you almost got me.

GTFO

[Anonymous No.3340762]

>>3340754
>nah, not gonna post it.

[Anonymous No.3340766]

>>3340762
keep ruining the thread. bravo.

[Anonymous No.3340768]

>>3340758
I have been erasing the underlying construction as I went along.

[Anonymous No.3340777]

>>3340768
Just don't reply to that guy, anon. According to him everyone in these threads sucks and will never live up to his standards which is literally against the entire point of this place - that being for people who suck to come find out how to get better. He doesn't care about helping anyone improve so whether he's good or not there's no point listening to him because nothing he says is useful.
I think your studies are looking really good and I can tell you're using construction methods. Each one you've posted has shown improvement to me so I'd encourage you to keep at it.

[Anonymous No.3340781]

>>3340768
kek. I don't believe this at all. alrighty next batch you make I want to see some of that thoughtful construction.

>>3340777
oh, 99% of people in here suck big time, yes. besides a few exceptions, like kyle, gabe, bbc and some other less notorious anons, everyone here is garbage level most of the time.

[Anonymous No.3340789]

>>3340781
cont. about this
>which is literally against the entire point of this place - that being for people who suck to come find out how to get better.
my point is that people at this low level shouldn't be drawing porn at all.
basically what most people in here are doing is skipping fundamental training.
people of this skill level should be drawing fucking furniture from real life and reading books to understand the methods of work. people of this skill level aren't ready for something as advanced as organic figure drawing, especially not from memory.
you seem like somebody that knows what they're talking about, but at the same time you don't understand this simple principle. taking this kind of shortcuts in art, based solely on impatience and laziness, will never bring anything good down the road.

[Anonymous No.3340791]

>>3340789
also, I'm OFF.
this board is absolutely hopeless. I'm sorry for all the anons that show good prospective and are stuck with this NGMI environment.

[Anonymous No.3340804]

>>3340789
What I understand is that just like no two people are the same, no two artists learn the same. There's no reason people shouldn't try to draw the thing they want to draw right off the bat. It'll help them find weaknesses. There's no such thing as skipping drawing fundamentals. To learn to draw properly you have to learn all of them regardless. When you have truly learned to draw you can then draw anything because learning to draw means being able to break down literally anything into basic components to illustrate it. At that point you need only do a few studies of anything you're unfamiliar with to be able to draw it solidly if not amazingly. Getting there means crossing the same bridges no matter what you draw which you yourself pointed out by saying they should draw furniture. And most people here say they do other studies besides this.
tldr, all roads lead to Rome and the best wait to learn to do something is start doing it and find out what to improve along the way.

[Anonymous No.3340805]

I’m giving loomis a shot

[Anonymous No.3340829]

It looks cute to me

[Anonymous No.3340832]

>>3340804
If what you are saying was true, there wouldn't be any art schools all teaching the same fundamental principles of learning. There wouldn't be any books about it and everyone would be self taught.
Sure, anyone can learn their own way. The problem is that it's going to take them a lot more time while they will be struggling in the dark not knowing if what they are doing is right or wrong.

[Anonymous No.3340833]

good god this threads a nightmare

[Anonymous No.3340838]

>>3340833
NGMI

[Anonymous No.3340841]

>>3340832
That's why people come to places like this or go to school in the first place, so they can try to draw what they want and find out from other people what they're doing wrong. If it were true that there was only one way to learn to draw and one specific order everything had to be learned in, there wouldn't be people who draw all sorts of different things like mechs, landscapes, portraits, etc. Knowing your goal is integral to knowing what to study. Plein air painting lessons wouldn't be as useful to an animator as a class in Flash. That's not to say they couldn't benefit from learning painting, but it wouldn't hurt for them to learn animation principles while also studying drawing ones. It won't prevent them from improving their drawing if they want to. Animators need to learn a different kind of drawing than portraits for their work, too. Intent matters and is best developed in conjunction with the other skills for a well rounded artist.

[Anonymous No.3340842]

>>3340805
Study the upper chest region, and the neck.
Boobs are attached to the pectoral, no pecs no boobs.

[Anonymous No.3340846]

>>3340842
Thanks for the red line! It was mostly a head study the body was an after thought but this is great.
Also that’s for rolling joints

[Anonymous No.3340911]

>>3340841
>If it were true that there was only one way to learn to draw and one specific order everything had to be learned in, there wouldn't be people who draw all sorts of different things like mechs, landscapes, portraits, etc.
You make no sense. The subject matter of your art has ABSOLUTELY nothing to do with the approach to studying fundamentals.

For the rest, you are talking about specialized fields. Stuff that you learn once you have your fundamentals in check. You even know what all these fields you're mentioning have ALL in common? People that want to be successful at drawing any of that stuff, all must first have a good grasp of fundamentals. Every single one of them.
And the best way to approach fundamentals is the same. Every single time.

[Anonymous No.3340936]

insomnia sketch

[Anonymous No.3340947]

>>3340936
weird neck placement
If you used a picture reference I would be curious to see it please

[Anonymous No.3340950]

>>3340947
nah it was from imagination
attatching necks has always been my weak point, thanks for pointing it out man

[Anonymous No.3340953]

>>3340950
Yes, it is very hard to learn, because you cannot look at your own neck, think about it !

[Anonymous No.3340973]

How does this look?

[Anonymous No.3340977]

>>3340973

Concept is ok, but legs look weird and unappealing, same goes for buttcheeks. It's evident that you struggled with those legs.

Redraw a couple of times.

[Anonymous No.3340978]

>>3334761
Ugly work, crappy anatomy, unbelievably bad. you should quit.

[Anonymous No.3341005]

>>3340973
Maybe bend the leg the other side, also the blue box between the legs is very boxy, it attracts the eyes too much as it really frame the bellybutton like it is an important object in the scene. but it can be avoided with the coloring, maybe no need to change the sketch.
I changed the hand, but it is personnal preference. The thumb gives a better impression of his control on her leg, and the index is more gentle that a thumb on her puff
Also, its cute

[Anonymous No.3341032]

After a few hours of loomis heads I tried drawing without reference.

[Anonymous No.3341036]

After a few hours of loomis heads I tried to draw this one without references

[Anonymous No.3341038]

Forgot the pic

[Anonymous No.3341165]

>>3340977
I tried changing the legs

>>3341005
Thanks for this. The red line for the legs helps but I'm not sure I follow for the blue box.

[Anonymous No.3341187]

Well it not porn, but pin-ups are less, right?
This is not my own work, this is from a friend of a friend who now constantly posts his "pinup" work on Facebook. Something about it seems offputting to me and I can't put my finger on it. It's like he obsesses over the construction and form of anatomy instead of being more subtle. I guess hes trying to exaggerate the figure, but it just doesn't look good to me.

That or he has a fetish.

[Anonymous No.3341189]

>>3341187
Meant to say "pin-ups are lewd right?"

[Anonymous No.3341201]

>>3341187
First thing, the color does not flatter the form, it makes it ugly.
Second, is his fetish "afro armpits" ?

[Anonymous No.3341203]

>>3341187
Pretty much.
The muscles are pretty exaggerated, but in the same vein is likely a fetish since it gets my dick hard as well.

The colors are kinda dead though they do look weird

[Anonymous No.3341344]

>>3340832
>>3340789
>>3340781
Put more thought into the construction this time around. Way more and went and redid the first batch. The only thing that is a very glaring issue looking at it now is the on the third quarter, the right girls left eye is off in terms of perspective. That stands out to me the most.

Will have to go over this one on the value studies again.

[Anonymous No.3341348]

>>3341344
Also, I posted pic related in the last thread.

This is drawn and coloured using a Danni Ashe vid that I paused.

[Anonymous No.3341470]

These tits are bugging me.

[Anonymous No.3341482]

Where is the best place to share my work today?

DA seems dead, I've seen tons of artists there with <10k views. There are a few that got notoriety there
Instagram seems ok
Tumblr is up and running. I have one, I just don't know what else I can do besides tag, interaction and commenting to get more attention.
Pixiv is cool, but not my language.

So what else I'm not thinking?

[Anonymous No.3341498]

>>3341470
They might be sitting a little too high up

[Anonymous No.3341508]

>>3341482
For tumblr, submit shit to blogs that share other people's art. Eat Sleep Draw is a good catch all one, but their submit page is down right now for whatever reason.

A way of finding some is to just look up whatever tags apply to your art (anime, or illustration, or watercolor, whatever) and sifting through blogs until you find the ones that share artists' work. You can also add "submission" to any of those tags to narrow it down, but you could miss out on those blogs that don't actually put a submission tag on their submitted posts.

Also keep an eye out for any specific tags some posts may have. I made some stranger things fan art and tagged it with strangerthingsedit which is the tag from one of the bigger ST fanart blogs, they found it and reblogged it, which got me a few hundred notes and new followers.

Also, thefandometrics.tumblr.com tells you what's popular on tumblr week by week, at least as far as TV, web content, video games, anime, and ships. Just take what's popular and make some content related to it.

[Anonymous No.3341538]

>>3341482
Tumblr and especially Twitter are good for sharing.
Then theres the two sites made specifically for commissioners to find you: Furrafinnity and Hentai Foundry.
Furraffinity is good from what I hear, I didn't know that you could post no furr shit on it untill recently so I haven't uploaded on it.
I've tried to post on Hentai Foundry but it takes literally 5 days to a week to have a picture processed. I've only tried uploading 3 pictures but I was denied the 3rd for it being bigger then 1600px which is inconsistent because shit on the homepage was bigger then 3000px and so were other uploads I had approved.

[Anonymous No.3341540]

>>3341470
You could try wrapping the one on the left around the form of the ribcage a little more to stress the squish factor of the boob maybe.

[Anonymous No.3341619]

>>3340508
>>3340662
left leg look alright? Knee is kinda bugging me but looks alright referencing

[Anonymous No.3341640]

>>3341165
Not that anon but it looks much better!

[Anonymous No.3341644]

>>3341619
Also not that anon but it looks pretty good to me!

[Anonymous No.3341830]

[Anonymous No.3341852]

>>3341830
cute

[Anonymous No.3341895]

Meh, took longer doing these lines than I'd like but it turned out better than I thought it would. Debating if I want to render it further. Feedback welcome

[Anonymous No.3341901]

>>3341201
>afro-armpits

...what?

[Anonymous No.3341909]

>>3341901
The hair falling behind (in front) of the figure looks like it's coming from the armpits.

[Anonymous No.3341911]

>>3341187
It's exaggerated anatomy, but badly done. Good exaggeration is like how Frank Cho draws his women. You can show a character is thick and/or curvy with a nice booty without outlining every crevice and fold of the body. Especially with thick lineweight like that. Subtly is key.

[Anonymous No.3341913]

>>3341895
the two strands of heir bother me. should be pushed back, as she lifted her sweater

[Anonymous No.3341916]

>>3341911
Another example of Frank Cho's art.

[Anonymous No.3341917]

>>3341911
there are many drawing issues here. if you like the picture it's fine but don't use it as a model of good drawing.

[Anonymous No.3341919]

>>3341911
Man I love Frank Cho but I think he suffers from a case of "same-body". Like Frank, I love the thiccness too, but have some variety

[Anonymous No.3341920]

>>3341187
Found another pic of this guy's work. I'd post more but I feel bad sharing his work on this site behind his back.

Funny thing is, I remember this guy being a homeschooled holy roller born-again Christian. Doesn't seem like the type

[Anonymous No.3341921]

>>3341913
Damn, you're right, I forgot to change that. Thanks

[Anonymous No.3341922]

>>3341917
I never said he was perfect, but he draws a good booty.
>>3341919
I agree with this. I think a lot of comic artists suffer from samebody/sameface though. Like J. Scott Campbell.

[Anonymous No.3341923]

>>3341917
>thinks Frank Cho is bad

Ok

[Anonymous No.3341924]

>>3341920
Those are exactly the type. So sheltered that as soon as they get out from under their parents/church they go hog fucking wild because they don't know any better.

Citation: freshman roommate

[Anonymous No.3341929]

>>3341917
Fine, here's a better example of Frank Cho's work.

This was all inked with a ballpoint pen btw.

[Anonymous No.3341942]

>>3341913
>>3341921
Thanks. I think that makes it feel a lot more natural. Might still look like shit, I dunno but this is actually the happiest I've been with drawing hair in forever, so neat.

[Anonymous No.3341943]

>>3341924
I mean, I remember he was also a big movie buff and was fine with watching violent movies and raunchy comedies. He was a big Tarantino fan and loved a bunch of cult classic movies like Fear and Loathing in Las Vegas, Big Lebowski, Evil Dead series, etc. He seemed like a pretty cool guy, but it was a bit surprising to see him be into all this stuff and wear a promise ring and say grace before every meal.

Anyway, don't mean to derail the thread. Carry on.

[Anonymous No.3341947]

>>3341942
Shit, also realized the whole thing is skewing to the left, probably based off the thumbnail I was working from. Eh, I'll fix it in photoshop if I end up continuing to render it.

[Anonymous No.3341949]

>>3341917
Post what you think is good so we can call it shit fgt

[Anonymous No.3341954]

>>3336703
Blog?

[Anonymous No.3341983]

>>3341911
This drawing is very limp, no energy in it. Frank cho can be good, but this is bad.
>>3341949
Pic related is good. It's Gil Elvgren, I posted a sketch to compare it with your frank cho sketch. But you can check his paintings too, he's the master of pin-ups.
Also, "Brandy" is ugly af, beady eyes and big chin are not very attractive on a woman.

[Anonymous No.3341998]

>>3341922
fair enough, just a sort of general warning. lots of people like an artist, and they think that because they like the artist that means the artist is also technically skilled.

none of the other frank cho pictures here show a huge amount of technical proficiency either, they all show a fairly weak understanding of the figure actually.

he may be better than you and I, but I still caution you against using him as a guide for your own figures. if you want to understand why you want to fuck his pictures that's another thing, but it's not because of his technical skill.

[Anonymous No.3341999]

>>3341983
not enough loomis

[Anonymous No.3342030]

>>3341619
Depends on what you're referencing from. RL or other art?

[Anonymous No.3342032]

>>3341895
Stiff.

[Anonymous No.3342035]

Been looking to make hentai doujins. Here's a little sketch i made while fucking around and getting used to the format. Thoughts?

[Hardstones McFlintcock No.3342037]

Almost done. Looking for help with the anatomy for both Jessie and Ash, specifically the thighs.

[Anonymous No.3342039]

>>3341852
I just saw your Twitter on my tl and noticed the pic keep working hard anon

[Anonymous No.3342042]

>>3342037
ash eyes are too close and kinda small

[Hardstones McFlintcock No.3342055]

>>3342042
Updated.

[Anonymous No.3342069]

>>3342055
should make her smile, would be hotter

[Anonymous No.3342338]

>>3342055
Ashs chest looks like hes got tits. The arms pulled back like that would stretch the chest muscles and they would generally be smooth in the middle. I'm not great at hands but i tried to help a bit.

[Anonymous No.3342419]

>>3342338
Stop doing redlines. You aren't fixing anything, ffs.

[Anonymous No.3342439]

>>3342419
Way more useful then just saying hand looks off

[Anonymous No.3342472]

>>3342338
I think the point WAS that she was looking at the viewer

[Anonymous No.3342475]

>>3342039
thx

[Anonymous No.3342557]

>>3342439
no, it's not. are you retarded?

[Anonymous No.3342577]

>>3342557
>Hurr durr having better artists show you what to do is bad
Das u

[Anonymous No.3342596]

Eh, trying to learn some anime stylization.

[Anonymous No.3342602]

>>3342596
A good exercise for you : count your lines, stop chicken scratching and try to describe what you want to tell wth the fewest lines possible

[Anonymous No.3342619]

>>3342419
I would love it when somebody redlines my mistakes. It only ever happened once. Though.

[Hardstones McFlintcock No.3342627]

>>3342338
Once I finish inking my current workload, I will incorporate these corrections. Thank you very much for taking the time to look over my work!

P.S. I have a few more works in progress in the rough stages. Would you guys mind giving them a critique?

[Anonymous No.3342769]

just a lil something i sketched out

[Anonymous No.3342903]

[Anonymous No.3343139]

>>3342419
Salty-Kun warning. He is baiting for fights.

[Hardstones McFlintcock No.3343160]

Update

[Hardstones McFlintcock No.3343161]

Quick rough

[Anonymous No.3343168]

Very rough, already I'm seeing that I'll need to pull the guy's hips back a bit for starters.

[Anonymous No.3343170]

>>3343168
And without the opacity on the guy.

[Anonymous No.3343259]

[Anonymous No.3343260]

[Hardstones McFlintcock No.3343282]

One more tonight.

[Anonymous No.3343308]

Should've figured the frills/knots/rope were going to be a pain in the ass. have to learn clothes at some point i guess.

Just me or are the shoulders a bit broad?

[Anonymous No.3343309]

>>3343308
looks good to me

[Anonymous No.3343398]

I appreciate all the futa this time around. Especially this one >>3343260
That's hot.

[Anonymous No.3343402]

>>3343308
went ahead made the arms a touch thinner

[Anonymous No.3343437]

Hello! I've heard that drawing different creepy fetishes can be profitable. I'm ready to draw everything. Where should I start? What fetishes are more popular and where can I promote my drawings? T

[Anonymous No.3343462]

>>3343437
Furry is your best bet for price:gross ratio

but if your willing to do anything scat, inflation or vore are probably the most profitable because almost all of the people that like that sort of thing are autistic and are willing to pay anything

[Anonymous No.3343466]

>>3343308
>>3343402
I think the major thing that's wrong with this one is that her facial expression doesn't match her body language.

She's sitting quite plainly. I think to match the face, you would want to make her body much more tense and convulsed. Raise her shoulders, spread her legs a bit, make it more unbalanced symmetrically.

[Anonymous No.3343472]

>>3343437
Draw the most fetishistic stuff you yourself enjoy. The only way to get truly good is to know and understand what makes a good fetish piece. If you don't know why people like a fetish, how are you going to make something really appealing?

It also makes the whole thing a lot more enjoyable and easier to stick with. When you're thinking to yourself, "should I keep doing this?", it's easier to answer yes if you actually enjoy what you do.

[Anonymous No.3343497]

[Anonymous No.3343505]

>>3343497
Grotesque premise with an equally gross art style

[Anonymous No.3343587]

>>3343462
Thank you! I'll try to research these topics within furry fandom.

[Anonymous No.3343589]

>>3343472
Thank you for your answers! It's the best way to create any art, to love what you are drawing, but I'll try to find the fetish which I like the most.

[Anonymous No.3343595]

>>3343260
>>3343259
too fucking big. Size it down, I download with 5 mb and it still took several seconds.

[Anonymous No.3343888]

>>3338105
I need to know what artists these are desu
Whats the middle one on the right with yellow and greeen hair, and the girl with dark blue hair and red eyes? If you had sources for all the artists id fuck you with my big femanon pussy.

[Anonymous No.3343904]

>>3342030
Fucking hell every time I try to colour something it takes hours because I have no idea what I'm doing

[Hardstones McFlintcock No.3344192]

>>3343282
Update.

[Anonymous No.3344596]

here is some more

[Anonymous No.3344626]

>>3344596
Top just doesn't appeal to me.
Middle isn't really for me either, also she needs more forehead.
I like the bottom image most out of these, she has a nice facial expression, although I feel that her torso would be fucked up in a position like that.

[Anonymous No.3344660]

>>3342419
whats wrong with redlines?
Its so easy. You litteraly just need to trace.
i wish someone would redline my work every now and then...

[Anonymous No.3344762]

>>3335805
That's implying people who say this shit even know what they're talking about.

[Anonymous No.3344817]

>>3344596
Holy fuck the top one is actually degenerate taste

[Anonymous No.3344849]

>>3338561
Well that fills our daily 'obnoxious cunt' quota

At least ic's consistent.