/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

[Anonymous No.3256965]

The "I can't be fucked to make an image so here's someone's work from the last thread" edition

Last thread: >>3251034

This thread is meant for artists who might want to try to make anime works in-between their studies. It is strongly recommended that you use this thread in conjunction with learning the elements and fundamentals of art. You can also discuss the visual elements of various professional artists as well if you keep it relatively articulate and civil.

Submit your drawings, receive feedback or critique others! Share your knowledge and remember to thank those who've critiqued or red-lined your drawings.

Don't know where to start? Read the sticky.
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Hitokaku Index
>http://www.asahi-net.or.jp/~zm5s-nkmr/
List of active livestreams
>Use twitch #creative
>yoshikadu2011 (youtube, streams daily)
FellowBro's Book Collection
>http://mediafire.com/?i44dwzkf9j9n8
Tutorial & Reference Collection
>http://pinterest.com/characterdesigh/
Japanese Tutorials & Documentary
>http://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?id=59317 (0033)
>http://iradukai.com/
>https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=902YZvjz4eI&index=9&list=PL6dSbz05yTUL_zym3SiOxOgqq29XvOh48
Life Drawing Reference
>http://www.onairvideo.com/croquis-cafe-photos2.html
>http://www.eggazyoutatsu.net/eng/atarichan.html
>http://senshistock.com/sketch/

[Anonymous No.3256968]

FUCK ME I FORGOT TO PUT "Alternative Art/Stylization General"

[Anonymous No.3256972]

>>3256965

>nothing for the new year

I miss chico.

[Anonymous No.3256977]

>>3256461
I'm surprised I got no responses about the tits considering how many loli lovers there are around here.

[Anonymous No.3257004]

>>3256977
I don't understand the connection. Did you want them to tell you to make her flatchested like the lolis they love?
The breasts are a bit out of perspective. The one closest to the right side of the image is too high.

[Anonymous No.3257007]

Is this appealing to u?

I'm going to use this style for quickies

[Anonymous No.3257010]

>>3256977
I like it but you were asking a question that i couldn't answer.

[Anonymous No.3257017]

>>3256977
We don't go around saying to draw flat chests and whatnot unlike the other groups of people

[Anonymous No.3257019]

>>3257007
I like it but even though it's all simple the head feels even too simplified for the amount of detail in the body. I think giving her at least some ears might help make it more cohesive. That and giving her a proper hair line in the back.

[Anonymous No.3257027]

>>3257004
>>3257017
Guess that shows how much I know about lolis ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

Too high, gotcha. I'll see what I can do.

[Anonymous No.3257084]

>No title
Based OP starting 2018 just right

[Anonymous No.3257088]

Redrawing from three years ago. Since it's the last day of 2017

[Anonymous No.3257095]

>>3257088
aw yiss

[Anonymous No.3257097]

>>3257088
Really nice!

[Anonymous No.3257100]

>>3257088
Very nice. I think the oblique muscle on the side with the thumbs up is maybe a little too high? It's making his torso seem a little too short to me. I think that along with the line indicating the hip and leg could be moved down just a touch. The hip and leg on the other side might have to move down with it too, I'm not sure.

[Anonymous No.3257109]

>>3257007
to be honest i find it disgusting, i really don't know why.
Usually quickies done by good artists still have a solid foundation and this is what you lack most.
Also something you want to keep in mind it's that all these good artist that do amazing quick sketches know how to do an actual grounded drawing

long story short:

>before you want to be able to do something fast, master it doing it slow.

[Anonymous No.3257118]

Werewolf sketch, had a chance to try out Procreate today which is pretty cool. Next project I’m going to do for my portfolio will be werewolf based so I’m just getting into the groove again.

[Anonymous No.3257123]

>>3257118
seems like a wererat, pretty cool imo.

[Anonymous No.3257125]

>>3256965
No title
Delete. start over

[Anonymous No.3257134]

>>3257118
The mouth is out of perspective with the rest of the head. Draw a line along the front of the teeth between the top and bottom rows, then draw a line between the eyes. The angle of the two should be the same or very similar, but you'll see it's way off, in such a way that the teeth aren't headed towards the same vanishing point or horizon line as the eyes. Nice design though, I really like the feet.

[Anonymous No.3257138]

[Anonymous No.3257142]

>>3257134
Thanks anon, you’re absolutely right- I’m gonna take another shot at it tomorrow with that in mind, I struggle to get that stuff right but hopefully I’ll understand it with practice.

[Anonymous No.3257145]

>>3257138
Nice and clean, I really like it anon!

[Anonymous No.3257148]

>>3257142
Perspective is always hard. If there's any way you can, I think you should just redraw the mouth on another layer and merge it down, erasing whatever's below that you don't want. The rest of it is well done, might be hard to capture if you do it completely over. I wouldn't throw it all out especially when the only problem area is so small. Good luck with it either way.

[Anonymous No.3257152]

>>3257148
I actually really appreciate it, this is the kind of critique that helps big time. Cheers anon

[Anonymous No.3257267]

[Anonymous No.3257291]

How do you draw from imagination? How do you stylize? I've spent the last year learning observational drawing and I have absolutely no idea how to do anything other than observational drawing. When I try to draw anything from imagination, it looks just like it would have 10 years ago before I ever started practicing. What the fuck.

[Anonymous No.3257305]

>>3257291
>year
lol, try a few more fucking scrub

[Anonymous No.3257324]

>>3257148
do the eyes really have to be parallel to the mouth?

[Anonymous No.3257335]

>>3257324
not that anon, but yeah, just out of curiosity.

I know the werewolf's skull should be based on the skull of a wolf + human, so I don't know if there's a fixed rule as to how it should be or how professional artists deal with its construction.

https://images.hideandfur.com/inventory/52919973.jpg

[Anonymous No.3257342]

>>3257324
>>3257335
It doesn't matter that it's animal anatomy. If you look at a wolf from the front, its eyes go straight across and so does its mouth. This is true of every animal skull. If the skull is rotated 3/4 that doesn't change the alignment. Even if the teeth follow a curve so that they're not necessarily all the same height or length, they'll still follow the same axis as everything else on the same plane as them.

["Alternative Art/Stylization G(...) No.3257344]

>>3256968
>"Alternative Art/Stylization General"

that's ok even i was fucked looking for it lol

Alternative Art/Stylization General

EVERYBODY SCROLLING THIS IS ALTERNATIVE ART GENERAL

[Anonymous No.3257345]

G O L D M A R I N A

[Anonymous No.3257414]

>>3257118
I was gonna ask whether you were that paranoid furfag in that one thread but your typing skills are too good.

[Anonymous No.3257596]

>>3257345
fuck that game was rad, i need to play it again

[Anonymous No.3257684]

How do i chose an appropriate hairstyle for my characters? or how do i make new hairstyles?

[Anonymous No.3257689]

>>3257684
This helped me get started on drawing anime hair.

[Anonymous No.3257690]

>>3257689

[Anonymous No.3257692]

>>3257690

[Anonymous No.3257695]

>>3257684
Reference

[Anonymous No.3257698]

>>3256968
ш cщгдвтэe aштв ыeндшяфeшщт epкyфв иycфгыy щa epшы

[Anonymous No.3257699]

>>3257692
for the ladies

[Anonymous No.3257701]

>>3257699
katy coope sucked some mean dick to get this scholastic deal

[Anonymous No.3257732]

>>3257699
i've always thought this is a good lesson, showing you what people who don't anime see it as. in the end the difference between that and this is marginal

[Anonymous No.3257740]

>>3257732
Maybe if you suffer from brain damage and every face looks like some melted nightmare to you.

[Anonymous No.3257835]

>>3257740
Dont fall for the bait

[Anonymous No.3257959]

>>3256968
people can't find this thread because of you

[Anonymous No.3258017]

>>3257699
Oh man god damn

[Anonymous No.3258049]

Hello /alt/, I just wanna say I love you all and I hope you have a draw-tastic day!

[Anonymous No.3258084]

awoo

>>3257345
nice, why she gold though?
>>3258017
thanks weird pixelart posting anon

[Anonymous No.3258088]

>>3258084
meant for >>3258049 I'm dumb and sleepy

[Anonymous No.3258093]

Maan, this thing got away from me. Basically one of the first drawing for 2018.

>>3258084
Is she a werewolf? 1

[Anonymous No.3258142]

>>3257328
some kind of demon priestress/princess, nothing in particular, just a solid character concept

[Anonymous No.3258155]

What happened to the how the fuck do i draw anime study thread?

[Anonymous No.3258158]

>>3258155
Mods keep deleting it. We don't know why.

[Anonymous No.3258191]

>>3258155
anime is a controlled substance here. a class V drug.

[Anonymous No.3258325]

[Anonymous No.3258728]

>>3258155
>>3258158

Just post in this thread? anime is stylization and half of you already posted anime in every thread.

[Anonymous No.3258731]

>>3258728
We already went over this. This thread is for anons to get help fixing their drawings, not for general discussion about how to stylize anime or for doing any exercises that might help with that. Besides these threads aren't just for anime but any stylized work. It wouldn't be fair to overrun it with discussing one style in particular all the time.

[Anonymous No.3258734]

>>3258731
That's what these threads are for retard, they're half dead anyway. Instead of cluttering the catalog keep your anishit in one thread

[Anonymous No.3258746]

>>3258734
Thread is even more dead because that idiot furfag that draws shit forgot to put a title.

[Anonymous No.3258752]

let it die

[Anonymous No.3258758]

>>3257699
Haha holy shit I could not help but laugh at this shit. I hope I'm not alone in feeling this way.

[Anonymous No.3258760]

>>3258155
This is now the anime study thread, post your information and get it into the next OP.

[Anonymous No.3258825]

i just wanted to draw frills

[Anonymous No.3258844]

>>3258746
teehee

[Anonymous No.3258882]

drew this qt

[Anonymous No.3258910]

drew this qt

[Anonymous No.3259109]

>>3257145
thanks

[Anonymous No.3259167]

Presuming this is the right thread, never sure anymore.
Trying to make 2018 a more productive year.

[Anonymous No.3259171]

>>3259167
holy fuck nice work anon

if it isn't too much, can you post your linework only too (without the color)? I have a lot of trouble lineworking mechanical objects, it always comes off as stiff to me

[Anonymous No.3259177]

>>3259167
I love you and your art.

[Anonymous No.3259182]

>>3258093
She is whatever you want her to be anon
>>3259167
holy moly good job

[Anonymous No.3259195]

>>3259167
I envy people who are into mechs. It's like they see things differently.

[Anonymous No.3259197]

>>3259171
Thanks, and sure man, hope it's of some help. I'm still figuring all of this stuff out too.

[Anonymous No.3259200]

>>3259197
Thanks a lot man! Let art gains be with you throughout the year

[Anonymous No.3259213]

>>3259200
C-can you send some blessings over here too?

[Anonymous No.3259222]

>>3259213
Whooosh~
There, good luck this year anon, make it a good one!

[Anonymous No.3259243]

>>3259222
Thank you anon, I won't disappoint!

[Anonymous No.3259333]

>>3256965
Something very diffrent than my usual work style wise and subject wise. Im wondering would you like to see more of this kinda stuff?

[Anonymous No.3259334]

>>3259333
What does your process look like when doing mechs?

[Anonymous No.3259342]

>>3258084
eyes look really bad

>>3259182
i presume these are from ref, because it's a step up from your previous post

[Anonymous No.3259356]

>>3259334
I dont usually do mechs but i allways have a process i follow. it depends if the client wants me to be quick or if i can spend time. Lots of research first. moodboards for style (i will show this to the client to make sure were on the same line) and functionality research. then ill do sketches, and from there i can take the sketches to a quick painterly finish. or move into 3d to get that highly realistic feel if i have more time

[Anonymous No.3259360]

>>3259333
This reminds me of Kim Jung Gi's mole skin drawings of him in the back seat and his wife driving only not in panorama

[Anonymous No.3259376]

Garbage

[Anonymous No.3259388]

Ya'll ready for some more emo-shit?

[Anonymous No.3259394]

>>3259167
>>3259197
ooooo dam sun, thats LUSCIOUS

>>3258825
v. cute.

[Anonymous No.3259470]

fanart but what the hell
>>3259342
okay. wasn't refs though.
>>3259388
interesting, do better perspectives and it can be better.

[Anonymous No.3259471]

>>3259470
Do you think I should extend the canvas so its not so scrunched? It has to be a square format for the person I'm working for but I was wondering if it was too close. (Is that what you meant by perspective or did you mean a different angle?)

[Anonymous No.3259478]

>>3259167
Wow, beautiful stuff

[Anonymous No.3259481]

>>3259470
I like it, but what's with the left girl's forearm?

[Anonymous No.3259485]

>>3259470
Love the way you hatch and how that integrates with the rest of your lines. What show or manga is this?

[Anonymous No.3259489]

>>3259485
Not the anon who posted that but it's fanart of Va11-halla

[Anonymous No.3259513]

Hello /ic/
i got that feeling that I am so close, yet so far from my goals. Maybe I should redifine them ?
Hope that you're doing alright, see ya.

[Anonymous No.3259569]

>>3259513
I really like this drawing but the presentation is detracting from how nice it is.

[Anonymous No.3259576]

>>3259167
Man. Maybe it's because I just never bothered studying it but when I look at people draw mechanical stuff, I simply can't even comprehend how that shit is done.
I mean not from a "wow im so much worse than this guy" point of view, I literally can't imagine how mechanical stuff is put together in my mind. Whereas for organic stuff I can imagine bones, muscles etc even tho it's something that doesn't exist irl.
That make any sense to you guys?

>>3259376
Why do you say that? I like it, paint the entire thing and post it

[Anonymous No.3259599]

>>3259576
It makes sense to me anon. It's hard for me to visualize how even real machines are structured let alone making one up. I like to believe though that studying the "anatomy" of machines can help that. Once I really needed to draw a car for something and I was stumped so I took like a month and studied cars. Not just drawing studies, I read about how the engines worked and the steering systems, etc, too. At the end of it I was much better at drawing cars in a more organic way like I draw people, without having to sit there and copy a ref 1:1 just to get it to look halfway believable. I did the same thing with motorcycles. Now it feels like when I draw mechanical things that prior knowledge has helped my approach a ton. I've actually been looking for really good sci-fi mech art to look at to try and learn more and see if I can get to the point of inventing machines. I don't think I'd be drawing anything like that tank any time soon, but I think it's possible, eventually.

[Anonymous No.3259640]

>>3259569
what, you mean, the photo ?

[Anonymous No.3259700]

[Anonymous No.3259705]

>>3259700
Why do girls like ripped jeans

[Anonymous No.3259732]

>>3259705
they look cool

[Anonymous No.3259736]

>>3259732
Let's see how cool they are when you fall off a bike

[Anonymous No.3259774]

>>3259736
Don't you wear knee pads

[Anonymous No.3259790]

>>3259640
Yeah. I think a lot of simpler stuff like this works best in high contrast, plus a quick change in exposure makes it look less like a quick cellphone photo and hides your sketch lines.

But this is totally subjective. You might prefer the lower contrast, but just my two cents.

[Anonymous No.3259805]

>>3259700
you made me draw ripped jeans

[Anonymous No.3259807]

>>3259790
ow ok, thx

[Anonymous No.3259809]

>>3259774
no because I'm not a fucking dork

[Anonymous No.3259889]

This looks like a polished turd and idk how to make it nice ;_;

[Anonymous No.3259890]

>>3259889
Needs more shadows

[Anonymous No.3259974]

Going to try somehow preserve the linework since I've received feedback that it's what mainly makes my sketches look better than my final renders, but I'm not sure how I'm going to go around doing that.

Might try to keep the rendering 'simpler' too, that might help?

[Anonymous No.3259977]

>>3256965
every 'anime' thread:
>no one posts anime
>always halfbreed abortions
>a few screenshots of actual anime
sasuga /ic/.

[Anonymous No.3259980]

>>3259974
I actually like it, it looks very quite differently but good. Though it would help if you would clean that linework up. Would make it look a lot better.
The face and especially the eyes are a LOT better than you usually do. And if the body fits the simpler rendering of the face the whole image will look better. Though I cant say for sure.
Ganbatte!

[Anonymous No.3259987]

>>3259974
Did you paint that sky?

[Anonymous No.3259991]

>>3259987
Mix between painting and collage

[Anonymous No.3259995]

>>3259977
this isn't the anime thread you inbred autist. fuck off back to /a/ and next time you want to collect fresh pictures of animay girls, go comission something

[Anonymous No.3260007]

this is one of those "well atleast I did something today" paintings

[Anonymous No.3260034]

New anime thread is up. Let's try this again.

>>3260033
>>3260033
>>3260033

[Anonymous No.3260046]

[Anonymous No.3260244]

is this the draw thread?

[Anonymous No.3260253]

>>3258910
b-blog?

[Anonymous No.3260280]

[Anonymous No.3260367]

>>3260253
derbikerks.tumblr.com
>>3260034
Oh cool, best of luck to you guys.

[Anonymous No.3260813]

>>3259356
you modeled every part of that tractor ?

[Anonymous No.3260817]

>>3260280

blog? insta ?

[Anonymous No.3260879]

>>3258910
Need help with rendering before I work on background. Everything looks like gelatin.

[Anonymous No.3260883]

>>3258910
Need help with rendering before I work on background. Everything looks like gelatin.

[Anonymous No.3260933]

>>3260883
I like it desu, you improved. What are you using to study?

[Anonymous No.3261389]

>>3260933
Thanks! I'm just using lots of references of the himalayas although I haven't quite finished the background. Trying to push myself to understand lighting and shadows so I experimented a lot with the shading. You can't see from the pic but I basically redid the shading 3 different ways so I can get a feel for what's right and what's not right.

[Anonymous No.3261463]

>>3260280

the face ruins it...

[Anonymous No.3261467]

>>3260883

[Anonymous No.3261604]

Help

[Anonymous No.3261804]

Edited a characters design to make their silhouette pop more

[Anonymous No.3261842]

>>3259167
>>3259599
What specific resources did you used to study? Just look at machines? Or is there any books/articles?

[Anonymous No.3261844]

drew this qt

[Anonymous No.3261847]

>>3261844
The blushes look bad, don't do those please.

[Anonymous No.3261903]

>>3260883
Learning from mistakes, gonna do better next time.

[Anonymous No.3261957]

>>3259977
alternative art/stylization =/ anime faggot

[Anonymous No.3262510]

hope I'm on the right track by leaving outlines, still largely trying to catch the feel of it, please do tell me if i'm defaulting back to my old habits

[Anonymous No.3262561]

>>3262510
Your face and skin tones look better
But her far leg looks out of place, i would remove it

... is that photobashing i see? Did you always do that?

[Anonymous No.3262572]

>>3258882
ur qt is cute

[Anonymous No.3262577]

>>3259167
Nice work! How many hours did you put into that?

[Anonymous No.3262586]

>>3261844
I love the stirrup leggings
truly a sign of patrician taste

[Anonymous No.3262683]

trying something new

[Anonymous No.3262702]

[Anonymous No.3262718]

>>3261844
she looks a little too plump.
Kanna is a thicc loli not a fat one

[Anonymous No.3262866]

Anyone got any tips for doing lineless drawings?

[Anonymous No.3262870]

>>3262866
Do them a lot

[Anonymous No.3262900]

>>3262866
for that kind of drawing I'd suggest you make your sketch with very thin lines and paint under them, then delete the sketch layer and clean up. Alternatively you can just straight up paint over your sketch layer.

When doing lineless drawings, especially if there's little to no rendering present, you have to be mindful of how and where your colors will go in the first place. So for example if you do a complex pose you might find that when you delete the lineart you can't make out what's what anymore, so definitely think about that beforehand and don't put shapes that will be the same color next to each other. Good luck anon

[Anonymous No.3262935]

>>3262561
Remove the leg?

And yeah I've always tried it, seems quite difficult to work with in this picture though so I'll probably just use it for details

[Anonymous No.3262937]

Fresh brownies if you can guess who this is.

[Anonymous No.3262943]

>>3261842
Just to clarify, I'm not the guy who drew that >>3259167 I'm just some rando sharing my experiences of trying to get better at drawing mechanical things. When I did my car and motorcycle thing I just googled photos of them and copied them piece by piece, and looked up photos of various parts and "exploded" views to see how things fit together. It helps a lot when you're drawing some of the shapes to know what's actually there and I'm sure having an understanding of how the mechanisms actually work together is imperative for inventing believable machines.

[Anonymous No.3263337]

Some redraw.

[Anonymous No.3263339]

Thread is so dead. Not like it was before..

[Anonymous No.3263340]

>>3263339
/ic/ is dead in general.

[Anonymous No.3263342]

>>3263340
could it possibly be because it takes hours to draw something, and only takes seconds to choose a reaction image from your folder and shitpost about video games? /ic/ is fine as it is

[Anonymous No.3263354]

>>3262510
The leg is definitely not right. Judging by the angle it needs to be move either more to the left, or change completely so it would actually connect to her pelvis.

[Anonymous No.3263379]

>>3263342
>/ic/ is fine as it is
I wouldn't go that far

[Anonymous No.3263423]

Some grills.

[Anonymous No.3263427]

is this an actually useful facial muscle stylization guide or am i being baited by an elaborite artistic shitpost

[Anonymous No.3263698]

>>3263423
I love this. Blog?

[Anonymous No.3263834]

>>3262937
Fat furry guy.

[Anonymous No.3263838]

>>3263337
>redraw
is that what kids call trace now?

[Anonymous No.3263957]

>>3263834
I m-meant the person in the drawing, anon.

[Anonymous No.3263977]

haven't drawn for over a year
playing catch-up now ;_;

[Anonymous No.3264013]

[Anonymous No.3264045]

>>3263977
yeah you suck.

[Anonymous No.3264058]

>>3263354
The more I try to fix it the worse it gets, if anyone has a solid reference or redline it'd be a godsend...

[Anonymous No.3264067]

r8 my waifu

>>3264058
try this rin-chan: http://media.gettyimages.com/photos/nude-baby-with-red-hair-sitting-rear-view-picture-id78385222?s=170667a

[Anonymous No.3264137]

>>3264067
>http://media.gettyimages.com/photos/nude-baby-with-red-hair-sitting-rear-view-picture-id78385222?s=170667a
what

[Anonymous No.3264157]

>>3264045
Truly a examplar post, this is the top critique of /ic/ everyone, absolutely amazing. That guy should be sucking your dick right about now

[Anonymous No.3264811]

[Anonymous No.3264866]

>>3264811
I literally had a dream last night where I was wondering why my loli drawings were shit, and after so many hours of pondering over it I realized, "holy crap, I keep drawing the hair too poofy!"

Thanks for the reminder, Yev.

[Anonymous No.3264876]

>>3259182
Do you erase?

[Anonymous No.3264891]

>>3263977
Moved a few things for you. Hat still looks kinda wonky so idk.

[Anonymous No.3264895]

>>3264891
FFS

[Anonymous No.3264925]

>>3263423
I revisited the awoo girl. That one anon's werewolf drawing got me fired up to draw some I guess.
>>3263698
Thanks anon. Not sure if serious about blog but I don't really want to give it out since I pretty much never post on it.

[Anonymous No.3264928]

am i dead yet

[Anonymous No.3264929]

>>3264928

[Anonymous No.3264931]

>>3264929

[Anonymous No.3265401]

I bet this thread is so much slower than usual because of the missing title.

[Anonymous No.3265413]

>>3265401
It is because everyone is posting in the anime thread.

[Anonymous No.3265414]

>>3265413
You're probably right.

[Anonymous No.3265415]

I think i'm about done, the more I try to fix it the worse it seems to get

[Anonymous No.3265439]

I could really use some crit

[Anonymous No.3265442]

I think I'm done, seems to just only get worse the more I try to fix it

[Anonymous No.3265443]

>>3265415
>>3264058
I messed around with a few things: Moved her right eyebrow and her mouth closer to center of face; Scrunched the panties closer so it looks like she has a butt crack and not one long buttcheek; Made her thigh longer and thicker where it meets her trunk; Made her foot longer and her heel more pronounced; Took her back in a little so it looks like she's pushing her chest up/out and her butt juts out a little (if there's fat in the butt then in squishes out when sitting) and I didn't mess with the colors but the body seems more dull compared to the head (maybe go over a few of the lines on the body with that really dark brown you have on her face?).

[Anonymous No.3265534]

>>3265443
>messing with anatomy on a finished, colored picture
You need to stop rushing. You'd also be better off trashing this, forgetting about it, and starting a new piece with what you learned.

[Anonymous No.3265543]

[Anonymous No.3265635]

How was this thread resurrected?

[Anonymous No.3265641]

>>3265534
I'm not the OP. He asked for a redline/crits. I think he'd learn faster if people point out what's wrong because he seems like he knows something is off but can't pinpoint what.
Also, all the tweaks I did were pretty minor and I don't think redrawing the edges of where I moved things around would take that long even though it's already colored. But I agree that he shouldn't let dwelling on this piece interfere with starting something new.

[Anonymous No.3265662]

>>3262900
thanks for the advice, Mr. Dubs

[Anonymous No.3265855]

>>3263977

[Anonymous No.3265874]

>>3264067
-900furfag tier/ 10

[Anonymous No.3265899]

Guess who finally got a tablet! Her anatomy is a little wonky but I'll work on it tomorrow.

>>3265874
negative * negative = positive, huhu

[Anonymous No.3266226]

>>3265899
is that the crazy electrical outlet hoe from joejoe's wacky quest?

[Anonymous No.3266248]

current wip, less asking for the anatomy (I'll fix it) but the pose and general appeal of the drawing.
Also to which side I should tilt the head, current tilt sort of makes sense but it's the same as the shoulders which looks off at the same time

[Anonymous No.3266250]

>>3258084
Gender bent Inuyasha... I don't like it.

[Anonymous No.3266280]

>>3265899
awesome!

[Anonymous No.3266383]

Anything I should fix?

[Anonymous No.3266399]

>>3266383
I see you're working on applying form to your drawing, that's good. Take what you did to the body and do it to the head too. Right now it still looks like a cardboard cutout while the body is starting to have some sense of 3D structure. The head is also way too small in proportion to the rest of the body. You should look up some basic proportion guides like how many heads tall a body should be and how the waist aligns with the elbows and raised elbows align with the head, etc.

[Anonymous No.3266419]

>>3266248
cleaned up and fixed the face, anything look off at this point?
>>3259167
I save everything you post, great stuff
>that file name
lol

[Anonymous No.3266421]

>>3266399
I'm actually worried I made the head too big.

[Anonymous No.3266425]

>>3266421
That's because you don't have an innate sense of proportion yet. Using proportion guides and studying real anatomy will give you a sense of how to balance proportions so that they're aesthetically pleasing and believable looking, even when they're exaggerated.

[Anonymous No.3266428]

>>3265899
Hells yeah

[Anonymous No.3266429]

>>3266226
Hells yeah

[Anonymous No.3266444]

[Anonymous No.3266447]

>>3265442

Love your stuff as usual.

but maybe you could add some contrapposto to your characters poses?

[Anonymous No.3266449]

kinda difficult to find this thread, is there no way to delete it and make another with a name?

[Anonymous No.3266457]

>>3266449
Trust me, I've tried.

Love the way you render. What brush do you use?

[Anonymous No.3266461]

>>3266457
not like it's gonna help you furfag who samefags to his drawing posts.

[Anonymous No.3266464]

>>3266457
a square hard brush and the default round soft brush

[Anonymous No.3266469]

>>3266464
How do you make the texture at the top left then?

[Anonymous No.3266475]

>>3266469
square brush probably had texture anon. a textured square brush can take you a long way if you use it right

[Anonymous No.3266480]

>>3266475
Neat, thanks for the info.

[Anonymous No.3266678]

>>3263423
Cute expression, anon but I suggest you study and practice your hands. They're very scratchy or strangely sized

[Anonymous No.3266884]

>>3265442
>>3265443
Where's her right thumb?

[Anonymous No.3266893]

>>3263337
I really like your work, I remember you posted your blog here once but I forgot to save it, could you post it again please?

[Anonymous No.3266900]

If you'd like to make some friends and draw cute anime girls, consider joining! Everyone is chill!

https://discord.gg/QqaQdcd

[Anonymous No.3266906]

just some sketchbook work, no prelim sketch so it's full of mistakes but any and all feedback is welcome anyway

[Anonymous No.3266927]

>>3265442
degenerate pedophile as usual :^(

[Anonymous No.3266940]

>>3259197
That looks so good ! Just that line art is great ! Do you mind telling us how you do such clear and steady work ? I'm okay a drawing, but my line art is always a bit messy and/or irregular.

[Anonymous No.3266972]

>>3266678
Thanks anon. I'm normally better at drawing hands if I'm using erasable medium, but I suppose the fact I can't draw one confidentially does indicate I should go do some studies. There's always room for more studies.

[Anonymous No.3266973]

>>3265899
Apparently the default marker tool in Krita is absolute shite for rendering, or I'm using it wrong. Can anyone point me to some brushes/brush settings that'll let me render with better ease?

[Anonymous No.3267138]

>>3257118
Another werewolf sketch, I wanted to try a female this time.

[Anonymous No.3267144]

>>3264929
This is awesome anon!

[Anonymous No.3267162]

>>3267138
My bad, I forgot to resize.

[Anonymous No.3267198]

>>3257689
>>3257690
>>3257692
>>3257699

>katy coope

Ya know, I don't get some people. You do realize she has improved considerably and most of these images are circa 2001-2003, right?

Get over yourselves.

Pic related. Yeah, she's not the best, but she didn't give up. Stop circlejerking over a book that is almost 15 years old.

[Anonymous No.3267234]

>>3267198
listen, those images aren't even katy coope's art. if you're going to tell anons off for making fun of her at least do your research.

[Anonymous No.3267241]

>>3267198
listen, those images you quoted aren't even katy coope's art. if you're going to tell anons off for making fun of her at least do your research.

[Anonymous No.3267245]

>>3267234
>>3267241

[Anonymous No.3267251]

>>3267245

[Anonymous No.3267304]

>>3264931

[Anonymous No.3267305]

>>3267304

[Anonymous No.3267308]

>>3267305

[Anonymous No.3267343]

>>3266927
You people crack me up every time.

[Anonymous No.3267617]

>>3267305
>>3267308
I like

[Anonymous No.3267630]

>>3259182
man, what do you do to practice?

[Anonymous No.3267631]

>>3267617
Cute nekomimi, do you have a blog?

[Anonymous No.3267639]

>>3262866
Make the lines then erase the lines

[Anonymous No.3268163]

Since the How do I actually fucking draw anime thread got nuked I'm just going to post the exercise I did that was in the OP here, what do you think?

The exercise was lighting faces in different angles

[Anonymous No.3268190]

>>3268163
>>3264100 Alive and well.

[Anonymous No.3268198]

>>3268190
Ah shit thanks anon, guess I got confused

[Anonymous No.3268275]

>>3268163
Head tilts in anime are usually a no-no, but you have a couple options. You did an alright job, but you have to sharpen the features around the chin/neck area. The other option is to change the angle of the head. I wish I was kidding. Pic related is how far they usually go with a more frontal angle. There's just no good way to do it in anime.

[Anonymous No.3268286]

>>3268163
The jawline should connect to the ear/side of the head lower.

[Anonymous No.3268402]

I wanted to try and design an outfit, but the anatomy in this is bothering me to hell and back, especially the legs. I also feel like one of them doesn't properly connect to the body? Plus, I have no idea what to do with the, for the moment, non-existent arm.
Actually, I'm open to all suggestions concerning the anatomy in this.

[Anonymous No.3268562]

>>3259197
What do you use to line? Like if you use Photoshop what brush? And im sorry, but this is absolutely amazing im just in awe right now.

[Anonymous No.3268569]

>>3267308
Blog?

[Anonymous No.3268577]

Theres some amazing art in this thread! Here's some random faces i did in a rush, Im having a hard time lately with my art, idk if i want to have lineart, go linless or do rendered pieces,,

[Anonymous No.3268578]

>>3268402
The legs are too short, specifically from the top of the thigh to the knees. The shins might need to be longer as well to balance that out. The arm is also too short from the shoulder to elbow. Right now the forearm (elbow to wrist) is way longer than the upper arm which should not be the case. Once you elongate the leg you'll have room to move the arm from the elbow downward over to keep the hand on the knee and draw the rest of the upper arm. It may need to be less bent. I think it would be nice if the other arm was thrown over the back of a chair or couch or whatever they're sitting on. Lastly I'm not sure of your intentions here but I see a heeled boot and what looks like a pretty feminine pose on that foot, but the waist and hips and what chest is visible look male. You can pose your character any way you want but mismatching certain visual cues like that can cause confusion for the viewer about what they're seeing.

[Anonymous No.3268580]

>>3267617
I really like this? Please, if you have a blog i need it. And btw what brushes do you use?

[Anonymous No.3268593]

[Anonymous No.3268637]

Some /r/'s from /trash/. Further degeneracy ensues.

>>3268593
Cool stuff, I can see you're getting better with rendering. Should probably use a smaller/less opaque brush for further rendering, things are looking a little on the blocky side.

[Anonymous No.3268640]

>>3268637
What happened to your blog?

[Anonymous No.3268641]

>>3268640
You mean iscrooble? I renamed it to derbikerks because privacy issues.

[Anonymous No.3268648]

>>3268637
disgusting

[Anonymous No.3268655]

>>3268637
were you incidentally dropped on your head as a small toddler?

[Anonymous No.3268668]

>>3268637
genuinely fucking terrible

[Anonymous No.3268691]

>>3268648
>>3268655
>>3268668
Mmm, thanks for the tea. Now can I get some actual critique? Like how the bear's left leg is not properly connected to his hip:

[Anonymous No.3268693]

>>3268648
>>3268655
>>3268668
Mmm, thanks for the tea. Now can I get some actual crit? Like how the bear's left leg is not properly connected to his hips?

[Anonymous No.3268703]

>>3258084
I really like this anon, you have a blog?

[Anonymous No.3268721]

>>3268693
Do you need a furriend or something? I'll do it just for the crits and to not have either of us shitting up threads for amusement.

[Anonymous No.3268729]

>>3268721
I actually enjoy stirring shit up here, but sure, fuzzy buddies are nice. You can find me through whatever blog I constantly shill here and I'll PM my discord or something.

[Anonymous No.3268741]

>>3268729
Keep doing what you're doing, remember this golden rule if /ic/ is shit flinging at you that means you are doing something right. I'm certain by now you are aware of the Kr0n/Sakimichan threads and the buttdevastation that is ensued.

[Anonymous No.3268746]

>>3268741
Or it could maybe be that furry isn't allowed on this board.
inb4 jelly crab
I'm not one of the anons who said anything to him before. I was sympathetic until he went and said he came here looking for trouble. Getting hate for posting against board rules isn't the same as getting it for good work and shouldn't be an ego boost.

[Anonymous No.3268750]

>>3268746
He's good at what he does that much we could all agree with however he should move out of that body type and start refining more form than keeping that beer belly.

[Anonymous No.3268753]

>>3268750
I'm okay with the keg gut, it just needs more nuance, like a rubens. Male or female.

[Anonymous No.3268754]

>>3268741
I think it's just the furry thing that's bringing all the hate, but then again my non-furry stuff hardly gets crits so I dunno.

>>3268746
Furry is as much of a bannable offense as loli around here, so I got that going for me. And I was mostly kidding when I said I like to post here to get hate but I do find it an amusing side effect. Take it as you will, but at the very least there's no need to be sympathetic regardless. I find any constructive criticism that I get invaluable, and I really don't care about the shit people say about my art.

[Anonymous No.3268761]

>>3268753
Wait, can you elaborate more? I'm still learning how to draw thicker body types and I'm still picking up basic things like using a wider body frame over a narrower one. I don't know why but I always end up making my chubbies underwhelming.

[Anonymous No.3268766]

>>3268741
Seems that shitflinging is the only thing that keep these threads moderately interesting so who gives a shit.

[Anonymous No.3268775]

>>3268766
You should look into Vilppu's figure drawing stuff. It'll help you get a better understanding of how to make your people less stiff.

[boxman No.3268776]

kill me

[Anonymous No.3268777]

>>3268761
Vilppu. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pa_2rL1K1mg The first 10 minutes of this. There's more I could say on proportion and a certain plushness but it involves kemoshota because it's late and @kurokiririri is the only example I can think of.

[boxman No.3268778]

>>3268776

[Anonymous No.3268780]

>>3268776
Oh hey boxman, it's been a while. How goes it?

[Anonymous No.3268787]

>>3268777
Not trying to sound rude, but I meant explaining more on how to make the keg gut more appealing. But thanks for the resources, I'll look into them.

[Anonymous No.3268789]

>>3268778
What? Boxman is this good?

[Anonymous No.3268795]

>>3268787
It doesn't have the form of a plush torso. You have to at the very least suggest that the area around the navel is a bowl and if you're going for musclegut, keep the sides tight and muscular. Or at least suggest that there are obliques pushing the flesh out more than the area around the 10th rib.

[boxman No.3268797]

>>3268789

no not really :)

i am pic related

[Anonymous No.3268798]

>>3268778
Wait is this the guy that drew that moon language in his art? With the thicc thighs and stuff?

[boxman No.3268799]

>>3268797

i did make this pixel tho

[boxman No.3268800]

>>3268798

yes but i did not make that lol

and this!!

[Anonymous No.3268802]

>>3268800
damn dude I know you from long time ago. How many years have you been drawing?

[Anonymous No.3268806]

>>3268795
Ah, makes sense. I thought I could just neglect the more complex stuff because fat, but I guess it's time to hit the studies again.

[boxman No.3268807]

>>3268802

well im 25 so yeah

7 years to get my bfa though
1 semester 2 go
im almust pro yo

[Anonymous No.3268809]

>>3268806
Or be more feminine with the distribution. Fat sits right on the front and is much lighter outside the rectus abdominus and only looks fat on the sides because of the obliques and hips.

Good god, even rubens babies are fucking cut. This nigga was crazy.

[boxman No.3268810]

>>3268807

i like this one to

jus dun tell nobody

[Anonymous No.3268813]

>>3268807
You go to art school?? WTF Do they even allow u to draw manga there?

[boxman No.3268820]

>>3268813

dude i am not just manga
its just a phase

i mean i drew this shit in highschool

[boxman No.3268822]

>>3268820

and this

[boxman No.3268823]

>>3268822

and then i took acid and failed out of the university of texas at austin so am i in art schol? kinda

[boxman No.3268825]

>>3268823

no but i am finishing a bfa at a non major university satellite campus in pennsylvania atm

[Anonymous No.3268826]

>>3268809
Ohhh, that's what you meant by Rubens. I kept thinking of the sandwich because fatty food -> bigger belly... I'll show myself out now.

[boxman No.3268827]

>>3268826

BTTSDDA sdfdsd

omg thats gold

rebunesque is its wn word for da thickness

still lold

[Anonymous No.3268830]

>>3268823
ohhh shieet. I'm about to fail university too. Just gotta slap my life back together before I go into the gutter. Still have more than a week before I finalize my second semester choices. But honestly I just wanna draw instead of study. Aside from that, I think you have quite a bit of skill there drawing more realistic art. I mean I'd think you'd make it out to be a pretty good realistic artist if you just stuck to it more.

[Anonymous No.3268832]

>>3268827
See, this is why I needa get an art degree.

[boxman No.3268838]

>>3268830

here watch this
this is boxman in his prime
im at the end of the video
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oYZOsOnSWgg

[Anonymous No.3268847]

>>3268838
I shouldn't have checked the comment section.

[Anonymous No.3268888]

[Anonymous No.3268892]

>>3268888
Ayy the mouth is an appropriate size. But now she's missing an upper ribcage.

[Anonymous No.3268899]

>>3268892
GET BACK HERE FIREZ, YOU CAN'T RUN FOREVER

[Anonymous No.3268901]

>>3268562
I used PaintTool Sai, crayon's brush.

[Anonymous No.3268903]

>>3268562
I used PaintTool Sai's crayon brush.

[Anonymous No.3268935]

>>3268892
>>3268899
I thought it was ok due to the size of her boobs

[Anonymous No.3268937]

>>3268935
Cute!

[Anonymous No.3268978]

>>3256965
I'm kind of stuck on this. Also its really unnerving how much sharper this looks/less blendy when its resized to be smaller.

[Anonymous No.3268999]

>>3268838
what was it like getting interviewed by infowars?

[Anonymous No.3269001]

>>3268838
>all those answer
keks just as expected
>that one guy who is able to answer them
4.0+ GPA.

Even the previous generation before don't know the BoR anyways.

[Anonymous No.3269005]

>>3268847
Based on your post, I thought it would be much more serious, but it was really nothing.

[Anonymous No.3269007]

>>3268838
I like how it cuts off. Like what the fuck were you talking about boxman? Were you ranting on about shit for so long? How did you go from remind me to information?

[Anonymous No.3269084]

>>3260883
your furry characters are just so unlikable to be honest

[Anonymous No.3269090]

>>3268577
Critique??

[Anonymous No.3269173]

>>3269084
How2make them likable?

[Anonymous No.3269398]

new bread
>>3269397
>>3269397
>>3269397

[Anonymous No.3270138]

>>3269173
I don't know, maybe study from artists like ovopack and similar jap artists. Your face/expression always makes me want to punch them. Really obnoxious

[Anonymous No.3270706]

>>3268275
>>3268286
Thanks for the tips anons