Alternative Art/Stylization General

[Anonymous No.3223653]

Last thread: >>3215369

This thread is meant for artists who might want to try to make anime works in-between their studies. It is strongly recommended that you use this thread in conjunction with learning the elements and fundamentals of art. You can also discuss the visual elements of various professional artists as well if you keep it relatively articulate and civil.

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[Anonymous No.3223759]

Reposting from the last thread

Is the face alright?

Should her left hand's fingers be longer and should I go for more of a closed fist?

[Anonymous No.3223771]

>>3223620
>Right arm perspective is a bit messed up
Could you redline for me? But if you can't then thanks for pointing it out.
Character reference sheet, not illustration. I want to draw pretty shoujo hair. I think shoujo artists put more effort into the hair and eyes than the rest of the page put together.

>>3223759
Mouth should be higher, and get reference for the left hand. The hand pose you went for is fine but it's just really messed up. Neck is not right, think of head angle from below. Just make neck an even cylinder rather than sloping, maybe not bother with changing head angle, is common to not change for angles like that with manga illustration. Not correct technically, but illustration shortcut which is acceptable.
If you move the board in the back up a bit, it makes the board look more realistic placement, and you can get the line to point to her face to help composition.
Face is very smug.

[Anonymous No.3223807]

I am 99% sure the leg perspective is fucked up. Anything else?

[Anonymous No.3223821]

>>3223771
I was thinking the right arm should be slightly higher to be on the same level as the left hand, and it should look just as bent as the left one, cause right now the right arm seems almost straight and because of that the right hand seems broken.

[Anonymous No.3223840]

>>3223807

5 second job. The pose just looks dumb in general, wtf is she doing? Perspective...the anatomy is screwed to hell, esp knees/legs. Fucking footfag.

[Anonymous No.3223858]

>finally beginning to make pretty accurate studies
>burn out
that's what I get for improving

[Anonymous No.3223885]

>5 second job
It sure looks like it because you still didn't fix the foreshortening issues dumbass
>>3223861
Pretty sure someone else said this already in previous thread but your style does remind me of Nurzhan Bekkaliyev on instagram.

[Anonymous No.3223886]

>>3223885
Oops, 4chanX was being gay
>5 second job was meant for >>3223840

[Anonymous No.3223897]

>>3223807
Make the foot BIGGER

[Anonymous No.3223898]

>>3223840
> PRACTICE GLDTURE

Jfc, moar like practice your mastery of English letters first.

[Anonymous No.3223901]

>>3223898
To be fair it looks like >>3223840
wrote that in cursive

[Anonymous No.3223904]

wip

[Anonymous No.3223909]

>>3223901
It's cursive randomly thrown into regular lettering. That's why it looks so shitty.

[Anonymous No.3223911]

>>3223840
Sorry but I don't really get why you changed the position of the legs and her left arm in the redline?
>The pose just looks dumb in general, wtf is she doing?
I thought it was pretty obvious, she is removing her shoes, although since this pic is sort of a follow up to the other pic I posted in the previous thread I see why it wouldn't be so obvious to others
>Perspective...the anatomy is screwed to hell, esp knees/legs.
Can you explain?
>Fucking footfag.
No need to be like that, m8

>>3223885
>you still didn't fix the foreshortening issues
Can you explain them? I knew it looked wrong somehow, but I wanted to finish the drawing without using ref

>>3223897
Are you joking cause it's too big, or?

[Anonymous No.3223917]

>>3223897
Actually, go to /beg/

[Anonymous No.3223928]

>>3223917
You mean the knee and calf should be higher?

[Anonymous No.3223931]

[Anonymous No.3223935]

>>3223771
Her body looks too small and the dress makes her upper body appear really short, I think because of the flare of the skirt or how it's attached or something.
The close up looks quite nice

>>3223807
I think for this pose she should be leaning back. That or bring the leg down a bit. Arms are also short and the left leg is absolutely deformed.
>>3223928
Yeah

>>3223858
>burn out
What? How?

[Anonymous No.3223962]

>>3223931
You actually have improved, i'm not praising your art but I've been watching you from the distance.
Keep up the good work.

PS: If maybe your work were cleaner it would be a lot better.

[Anonymous No.3223990]

>>3223771
Noted. Thanks a lot for the input

>Face is very smug.
Yay

[Anonymous No.3224039]

>>3223931
lazy garbage desu

[Anonymous No.3224064]

Haven't posted here in a long time.
heres something im working on.

[Anonymous No.3224070]

>>3223858
That's pretty good. You have a tumblr or instagram?

[Anonymous No.3224075]

>>3223935
>What? How?
I don't even know

>>3224070
it's Tim Lochner's work, they're just studies

[Anonymous No.3224078]

>>3223931
How do I get as good as you?

[Anonymous No.3224079]

>>3223931
blog?

[Anonymous No.3224095]

>>3224064

[Anonymous No.3224096]

>>3223858
I feel you
>>3223935
I drew legs and knees for about 7 hours a day for a month, I completely lost interest in drawing and could not draw for fun anymore for about a year and a half, and in that time of stagnation forgot everything i had learned while grinding.
DO NOT BURN OUT. Remember to draw for fun always, now I'm all the way back to pic related

[Anonymous No.3224097]

>>3224064
GREENED

[Anonymous No.3224101]

>>3224097
I was hoping people would start saying "porked"
get it????
because he's an Ork and porking is just another word for having sex haha

[Anonymous No.3224116]

finished hanekawa drawing

how bad am i

[Anonymous No.3224124]

>>3224101
First I wanted to write ORKED but I figured the point is the color of the skin so I went with GREENED

[Anonymous No.3224129]

[Anonymous No.3224132]

>>3224124
Now that you mention it, i guess it makes more sense to go with GREENED
Made some minor adjustments also

[Anonymous No.3224136]

>>3224129
hi kyle

[Anonymous No.3224141]

>>3224132
I recognize that linework
You've gotten better! Do you do studies a lot?

[Anonymous No.3224145]

>>3224141
Naw, but im trying to pay more attention whenever I do

[Anonymous No.3224154]

>>3224129
CUTE
U
T
E

[Anonymous No.3224184]

>>3224064

[Anonymous No.3224208]

[Anonymous No.3224212]

>>3224208
a new low

[Anonymous No.3224298]

>>3224184
seems a bit dead tonight.
Is everyone at church

[Anonymous No.3224316]

[Anonymous No.3224321]

>>3223653
Any idea who did right drawing in OP pic? I'd love to get their blog info, shit is practically perfect.

[Anonymous No.3224350]

>>3224321
looksl ike yev, go follow him on tumblr right NOW

[Anonymous No.3224361]

>>3224350
lmao its definitely dentist-kun

[Anonymous No.3224363]

>>3224321
>>3224350
pretty sure none of the drawings in op pic are by yev-san

[Anonymous No.3224367]

>>3224321
>>3224350
>>3224361
>>3224363
its by http://yellowmatsumoto.tumblr.com/

[Anonymous No.3224413]

>>3224116
below the average

[Anonymous No.3224415]

>>3224350
yev couldn't finish anything if that nigga tried

[Anonymous No.3224420]

>>3224415
is he black?

[Anonymous No.3224422]

>>3224413
Random question but what would be defined as average?

[Anonymous No.3224429]

>>3224422

I consider these three drawings average "anime" style stuff.
>>3223858
>>3223904
>>3223931

I don't draw but I can say that those look pretty for the untrained eye.

[Anonymous No.3224430]

>>3224429
>I don't draw
pyw

[Anonymous No.3224432]

Holy hell why is my style so unappealing? I'm really trying to go for the moe look but always end up having my shit look like pic related inconsistent abominations

[Anonymous No.3224435]

>>3224432
doesnt matter, im still fapping

[Anonymous No.3224437]

>>3224432
The cat girl with the aid bands in her vagina and nipples looks appealing

[Anonymous No.3224446]

>>3224432
Don't be afraid to push out your highlights more. You can also work on more appealing poses (see pinup art). I don't do lolis so take my shitty paintover with a grain of salt.

[Anonymous No.3224447]

>>3224446
where are the highlights lol?

[Anonymous No.3224448]

>>3224446
oh, and
>inb4 stfu dunning kruegwhatever

BTW I basically went to the extreme with the highlights to show the fullest extent of their impact so try not to go this far (unless you really want to).

[Anonymous No.3224479]

>>3224096
Hope you learned your lesson

>>3224432
They're quite cute except that dragon. Especially white cat with the wagging bell

>>3224446
lolis don't have unique highlights lmao

[Anonymous No.3224484]

>>3224432
Top right: How do you do that thing where a shadow will start off sharp but become blurry/blended in another spot? Do you make it bigger then trim it with a soft brush eraser or do you blend it?

[Anonymous No.3224496]

>>3224484
I start it out as all sharp lines and then use blur tool on certain spots

[Anonymous No.3224500]

>>3224496
Photoshop?

[Anonymous No.3224502]

Can't wait to get a tablet so I can stop having to take 50 steps to get to the painting phase.

I promised myself I wouldn't do another furfag but ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

[Anonymous No.3224506]

>>3224500
I use CSP

[Anonymous No.3224509]

>>3224506
That's why I was wondering. The blur tool in Photoshop is slow as shit.

Maybe it's high time I switch over to CSP.

[Anonymous No.3224514]

>>3224509
I think slowness more depends on how big size brush you're using and if your PC can handle the size. It would probably be just as slow in CSP if you're working in huge sizes with a PC that can't handle it.

I will say that doing lineart in CSP feels so much better than in PS imo

[Anonymous No.3224521]

>>3224514
Does CSP have integrated stabilization and perspective tools? I hate having to use Lazy Nezumi for everything.

[Anonymous No.3224525]

>>3224521
Sure does

[Pops No.3224540]

[Anonymous No.3224542]

>>3223653
How's the breast? I'm trying to get breast right. It's been a challenge so far.

[Pops No.3224543]

[Anonymous No.3224552]

>>3224543
>>3224540
Really nice, I like the poses and the faces. Looks really cunty

>>3224542
They're too far apart.

>>3224502
I think you've posted here before? If you did, it looks really nice, as usual. You do fur really well and I like the eyes.

>>3224479
Cute. I love oekaki style art with really clean, set-width lines.

>>3224432
Really nice! I think the biggest thing you can do to improve right now is keep drawing and studying the artists you look up to

>>3224316
Kewl

>>3224208
funny but i unironically love the style and colors. really appealing, but the hips are too big

>>3224132
SO nice. I love how clean it looks. Just a few improvements are needed. Also, this is just my opinion, but the orc is ugly lol

>>3224129
Use thinner lines and less chicken scratch. I like the eyes and the overall style

>>3224116
The head looks a little fucked, and make sure to try and make cleaner, more cohesive strokes. I like the colors

>>3224096
Nice! but i think you added too much light in some areas, like the stomach, arm, and leg.

>>3223931
Super nice aesthetic, really appealing, but use cleaner lines!

>>3223904
Nicely rendered. A bit too much contrast though, especially on the stomach. You should shade it more like how you shaded the legs. I LOVE the background

>>3223858
love the clean linework

>>3223807
I think people already pointed out the obvious problems. The hair looks a bit off, like she's wearing a wig and it's flying off. Love the face. Really nice face

>>3223771
Colors are absolutely gorgeous

>>3223759
Looks like a professional WIP. I like it, and I really like how cohesive the image is, and how you drew attention to her instead of the background, that can be hard to do at times. Face looks a bit out of place though. I think you should rethink the chin.

[Anonymous No.3224553]

>>3224552
pee urself bitch

[Anonymous No.3224555]

>>3224552
You are too kind jesus.

[Anonymous No.3224557]

>>3224552
Thanks Anon. I'll get those breast right if it kills me.

[Anonymous No.3224558]

>>3224552
>tfw my own self-doubt makes me unable to revel in this anon's compliments

[Anonymous No.3224566]

waif

[Pops No.3224571]

[Anonymous No.3224579]

>>3224566
Tsuyu? Post blog

[Anonymous No.3224584]

Looking for some critique on this one. Its still in progress..

[Anonymous No.3224586]

>>3224584
her boobies are different sizes

[Anonymous No.3224602]

>>3224586
like in real life

[Anonymous No.3224609]

>>3224602
Not an argument.

[Anonymous No.3224653]

What do you guys think about my pure black and white style?

[Anonymous No.3224655]

>>3223653
Can't remember if I posted in the last thread or not.

[Anonymous No.3224760]

been laying in bed all day for weeks, haven't done the shit I need to do, FUCK YEAH

[Anonymous No.3224766]

>>3224502
Tried doing a Rembrandt painting study with this guy as the subject but I'm still pretty pissed at myself for having to resort to last minute overlay layers to fix the colors. Also, I don't really know how to make anime eyes realistic.

>>3224552
Psh, u so sweet.

[Anonymous No.3224772]

>>3224760

[WoofWolfieTA No.3224783]

>>3224653
It's pretty awesome. Gives it a gritty edgy feel.

[Anonymous No.3224814]

[Anonymous No.3224815]

>>3224772
Ty lol

[Anonymous No.3224825]

>>3224772
The nose is too high

[Anonymous No.3224827]

[Anonymous No.3224846]

>>3224552
danke :0)

[Anonymous No.3224858]

>>3224827
cute snek

[Anonymous No.3224864]

>>3224827
mikufaaaaaaag
is that you baby¿

[Anonymous No.3224993]

>>3224864
no

[Anonymous No.3225087]

>>3224095
>elf is't a trap
you fooled me

[Anonymous No.3225130]

i need help with anatomy guys.

[Anonymous No.3225141]

[Anonymous No.3225145]

?
Made her boobs smaller

[Anonymous No.3225147]

>>3225141
why are they covered in boils

[Anonymous No.3225150]

>>3225147
Guess I overdue the hues

[Anonymous No.3225190]

>>3225130
holy shit that torso is fucking tiny
and she has the ass/hips of a goddamn horse. If you're going for something attractive/exaggerated make them at least look human

[Anonymous No.3225191]

>>3224502
>>3224766
You ruined the kind/cute atmosphere in your sketch senpai. Also his eyes look incredibly odd and without any shape rn.

[ドローアニメ:日本人になる No.3225213]

図難しいハーモニー

[Anonymous No.3225215]

>>3225145
progress

[Anonymous No.3225216]

Something I had made a while ago for a request.

[Anonymous No.3225218]

>>3225191
Yeah, my main goal was to do a "master study" of Rembrandt's painting style but honestly I should've used a more realistic subject. I'm still having trouble with the eyes despite working on them for so long but hopefully someone here can help out.

>>3224864
Has mikufag checked in here at all recently? I unironically missed his/her presence way back when.

[Anonymous No.3225249]

>>3225213
oh no the cancer is starting again.

[Anonymous No.3225267]

>>3225213
what am I looking at here exactly

[Anonymous No.3225323]

>>3225267
he posts this before he posts his fat autistic animu girls.

[Anonymous No.3225328]

>>3225249
i love u

>>3225267
some fucking schizo who spams his moonspeak and shit art on /i/

[Anonymous No.3225334]

Anyone got any tips/resources on digital watercolor?

[Anonymous No.3225379]

>>3225334
Corel for easy mode.

Otherwise you just have to play around with textures and brushes.

[Anonymous No.3225382]

>>3225334
that shit is so unappealing
don't bother unless your gonna do something original with it

[Anonymous No.3225391]

>>3225215
cute

[Anonymous No.3225473]

>>3224432
Blog?

[Anonymous No.3225524]

Long time since I try this style.

[Anonymous No.3225541]

>>3225215
I think her head is too big for the size of her body.

[Anonymous No.3225550]

>>3225541
Yeah, I finished fixing that just before I saw your post. Better? Had to merge all my damn layers to fix it.

[Anonymous No.3225572]

Did a request for /co/, tried to emulate Chris Sanders' style.

[Anonymous No.3225592]

Redline for this? From imagination. Hatched areas are aggressive character's leg and arm.

>>3225572
Nose too pillow shaded and low. Mouth too low. Eyes too far apart. Hairline too high. Legs are great.

[Anonymous No.3225600]

>>3225592
Do you mean that with Sanders' style in mind still or is this just a general judgement?

[Anonymous No.3225618]

color and lighting concept.

>>3225600
Don't have a ref on hand but I've seen his art, you just exaggerated a little too much.

[Anonymous No.3225620]

>>3225618
I think he didnt exaggerate enough

[Anonymous No.3225626]

>>3225620

Ugh...for fuck's sake. Well nevermind.

[Anonymous No.3225627]

>>3225620
>>3225618
The character in particular I was going for is a littler less exaggerated than his typical pin ups but yeah I don't think I really got it right.

[Anonymous No.3225630]

>>3225627
this one looks better, try studying the angle of the eyes more. Here's my take on Sanders from a while back

[Anonymous No.3225659]

>>3224825
You're mistaken. The mouth becomes too low due to the correction. The assumption is that hell raise the jaw.

[Anonymous No.3225822]

[Anonymous No.3225826]

>>3225822
nice like your style.
My only complaint is that the water colors are a bit dull/muted.

[Anonymous No.3225841]

>>3225572
>>3225627
>>3225630
Ayy Lmao

[Anonymous No.3225847]

>>3225826
thanks, I'll play around with more intense colors next time.

[Anonymous No.3225864]

>>3223840
This redline is horrible, don't redline if you need them so badly yourself.

[some yet unknown dork No.3225876]

>>3223653
these shitty ass manga sketches are the worst kind of shit
I really honestly don't understand the appeal of it, how anyone could ever be interested in adopting a shitty manga style. he have to be deranged.

these typical sketches, exaggerated tits, stupid gaze, manga stereotypical stylization ... just makes me angry.

[Anonymous No.3225880]

>>3225876
Why is everyone on /ic/ so autistic

[Anonymous No.3225884]

>>3225880
no u.

[Anonymous No.3225904]

[Anonymous No.3225912]

>>3223904
Looking pretty good. Don't know if this'll help, but if you want to emphasise on the girl's scale, you could try doing that atmospheric fading that you usually see with far away objects.

[Anonymous No.3225913]

>>3225904
Why would u put grain on a flat background and a flat character. Looks awfully tacky.

[Anonymous No.3225920]

>>3225913
not the artist but i personally find slight grain p pleasing to the eye with certain styles, this one included. it imitates a kinda analog warmth in the same way that you throw a whole buncha filters and fancy production stuff on virtual instruments to make them sound more analog cause it feels better than the pure/clean output of the VST in most cases

[Anonymous No.3225926]

>>3225913
Looks fine; I like it.

[Anonymous No.3226004]

>>3225876
>none of the crits in red in the pic are valid crit aside from maybe head posture and eye position
Saying something is shit isn't giving critique, you just make yourself look an asshat


>>3225904
Love it, blog?

[Anonymous No.3226076]

>>3225876
fuk off

[Anonymous No.3226084]

so what is everyone working on :(

[Anonymous No.3226101]

>>3225876
>fugly stylized body
you're an idiot who seriously believes anyone cares for his shitty opinions

[Anonymous No.3226143]

>>3224584
Perspective on her right leg is off.

[Anonymous No.3226146]

[Anonymous No.3226151]

[Anonymous No.3226160]

>>3225876(you)

[Anonymous No.3226171]

>>3226160
(you)
...
(you)
...
angry (you)

[Anonymous No.3226179]

>>3226151
They seem to be getting bigger...

[Anonymous No.3226181]

>>3225382
thats like ye'know, your opinion man

[Anonymous No.3226183]

>>3225876
Show us what superior taste looks like.

[Anonymous No.3226184]

>>3226183
the grills i draw are way hotter and insane

[Anonymous No.3226189]

>>3226183
and more lewd. ....

[Anonymous No.3226209]

>>3226184
>>3226189
you're the guy from the other thread, why are you such a cunt all the time?

[Anonymous No.3226213]

>>3226209
don't you like my grills?

I just hate beginners who do cheap anime / manga fanfiction shit. just my taste, sorry. I try to argue why, i'm not just saying "it sucks and you should think so too!"
it objectively sucks, as it has a shitload of flaws. if you are stylizing your drawing to look "realistic", but you get a shitload of things all wrong (lack of consistency), you can argue that these are flaws.
if your drawing style isn't bound to realism, you still need consistency.

[Anonymous No.3226225]

>>3226209
funny you should notice.
are you on /ic/ a lot?

I'm expecting to get trashed for my drawing style. .... ??

[Anonymous No.3226228]

Did this pokemon trainer in my style.

[Anonymous No.3226229]

>>3226213

[Anonymous No.3226233]

>>3226228
fairly good.

[Anonymous No.3226236]

>>3226229
how is that even bait?

want me to draw something? i take requests.

[Anonymous No.3226241]

>>3226236
literally too autistic to be taken seriously.

[Anonymous No.3226242]

>>3226184
Best in the thread

[Anonymous No.3226253]

>>3226242
thx anon

requests?

[Anonymous No.3226260]

>>3226242
why are you self shilling? do you think were that dumb or something?

[Anonymous No.3226268]

>>3226260
wtf are you talking about?

[Anonymous No.3226281]

[Anonymous No.3226283]

>>3226268

[Anonymous No.3226287]

>>3226283
nice You copy-paste, dickhead

are you jealous that someone is interested / likes the style? is it so unbelievable?

[Anonymous No.3226293]

Thoughts?

>>3226179

Yours? Cute.

[Anonymous No.3226297]

>>3226287
"I try to argue why, i'm not just saying "it sucks and you should think so too!"
it objectively sucks, as it has a shitload of flaws."
Yes because he is also a dickhead and his drawings are hilariously unattractive, adding that to his shit talk about "anime" style, it just has to be bait.
In the end he is saying my style is better than yours because I say so.
He can not be taken seriously and is not worth any further discussion.

[Anonymous No.3226298]

>>3226260
He's obviously being sarcastic cause it's a shitty drawing.

[Anonymous No.3226302]

>>3226298
and how is it shitty?
because it lacks realism? "needs more Loomis and Vilppu?"

[Anonymous No.3226305]

>>3226302
you wont stop baiting huh?

[Anonymous No.3226307]

>>3226305
I think you're the one who won't stop yelling "bait!"
having a hard time accepting anything else but die-hard realism?

[Anonymous No.3226312]

>>3226307
>having a hard time accepting anything else but die-hard realism?
> in a stylization thread

[Anonymous No.3226338]

>>3226293
Here is the counterpart (male).

[Anonymous No.3226354]

[Anonymous No.3226356]

1 year of progress

[Anonymous No.3226377]

>>3226356
>>3226354
>>3226338
>>3226293
no

[Anonymous No.3226440]

>>3226377
yes

[Anonymous No.3226445]

>>3225913
shut up fag, it looks fine.

[Anonymous No.3226452]

could someone please help me put panties on her, i can't figure it out

[Anonymous No.3226461]

>>3226452

[Anonymous No.3226485]

>>3226461
Fail

[Anonymous No.3226491]

[Anonymous No.3226500]

>>3224208
Cute style, even for thicc purposes the hips seem a little too oddly large though.

[Anonymous No.3226504]

>>3226491
I like u, comichoo

[Anonymous No.3226512]

This is a recent work which is a revamp of an older crappier work

[Anonymous No.3226538]

new to digital painting,
both his clothes and horse are white, should i use the same off white for his clothes AND the horse? will it look weird if i choose a let's say, cooler white for one large block of white and warmer for the other?
I'm trying to paint in a similar style to this,
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Cy1i0Ka6MYk&t=

[Anonymous No.3226542]

Would this look better with a close up? Left side or right side?

[Anonymous No.3226544]

>>3226542
I like right, the figure is the main focus regardless, you don't need the amenities. maybe try to frame the hair a bit better just so it doesn't get cut off so abruptly.

[Anonymous No.3226547]

>>3226542
Personally I like the right side because it doesn't look like a perfect symmetrical framing, but you need an element to depict its in a bathroom and looking in the mirror.

So if I were you I'd put like the top of a cup and a tube of toothpaste it's reflection somewhere on the bottom just too indicate the bathroom setting.

[Anonymous No.3226549]

>>3226452
>>3226461
Blog?

[Anonymous No.3226597]

head sizes are fucked
end liff

[Anonymous No.3226612]

>>3225876
>>3226213
This has to be the biggest fucking duning kruger shitpost i've come across. Even if you weren't shit hating on someone's style is just excruciatingly autistic

[Anonymous No.3226620]

>>3224814
I'm liking this, but you have to show better she's receiving the hit

[Anonymous No.3226630]

>>3226597
Those eyes on the tilted heads are messing with my head. Surely they can't be that close to the ear, can they?

[Anonymous No.3226631]

>>3226597
It's pretty coool how you can get the eyes to look symmetrical in the front view facing girl. I always struggle with getting the eyes to look symmetrical with one another.

[Anonymous No.3226633]

>>3226597
any advice on how to get the eyes to look the same?

[Anonymous No.3226638]

>>3226633
Idk man, it probably has something to do with reversing images in your brain, I honestly don't know. Getting matching eyes is something I don't remember struggling with

[Anonymous No.3226643]

>>3226633
>>3226638
...actually, now that you mention it, I usually shade a couple small spots indicating the inner corner of the upper eyelid in relation to the nose before I do the upper eyelashes. I work out from those inner cotners. That and just general knowledge of the shape of the eye probably helps

[Anonymous No.3226645]

>>3226228
look up styles you like and figure out what makes them appealing then question if your stuff would appeal to others, that way it'll get your brain wondering what works and what doesn't, you don't want to make things ugly on purpose. I mean unless your drawing for yourself

[Anonymous No.3226647]

>>3226643
You can see it more clearly in this draw

[Anonymous No.3226669]

>>3226597
Blog?

[Anonymous No.3226685]

>>3226491
suspicious looks a lot like

[Anonymous No.3226686]

[Anonymous No.3226701]

>>3226685
koki <3

[Anonymous No.3226708]

>>3226685
Koki/kaiba/metropolis(2001)/tekonkinkreet/akira toriyama
<3

[Anonymous No.3226711]

>>3225904
When adding grain, duplicate the painting to another layer (ctrl alt shift e in photoshop), add the grain and start toning down the intensity while turning the grain layer on and off until the grain is barely visible at 100% zoom. Grain is good for stylized stuff when it's barely visible and the audience can more so "feel" the texture. I think the grain is too much here and almost flattens the whole figure in a way that for example fog or atmospheric perspective would.

Just my opinion, though, I've seen a lot of great artists use heavy grain.

[Anonymous No.3226806]

>>3226669
naikonu.tumblr.com, although i dont draw much

[Anonymous No.3226808]

>>3226549
naikonu.tumblr.com

[Anonymous No.3226819]

>>3226685
They follow each other on social media, it's clear koki is an influence, this was established a couple threads back.

[Anonymous No.3226820]

>>3223840
This redline is shit holy fuck kill yourself

[Anonymous No.3226863]

>>3226491
i wonder what are you trying to accomplish being a cheap, second-rate knockoff of a far superior artist? the title is accurate, and your work, especially the faces, is extremely unappealing

[Anonymous No.3226873]

scanned line works for comics.

[Anonymous No.3226902]

>>3226873
Got a blog, senpai?

[Anonymous No.3226909]

>>3226902
where the ever loving shit are these little cartoons from?

[Anonymous No.3226922]

>>3213832
finish

[Anonymous No.3226926]

>>3226293
Thanks. Yeah, pixiv sketch was suddenly working properly so I did it real quick
Looks a bit plain compared to his counterpart

>>3226338
>(male)
But we can see that

[Anonymous No.3226931]

>>3226909
bkub

[Anonymous No.3226932]

>>3226873
blog?

[Anonymous No.3227059]

Used a reference for hands. Idk what to do with them.

[Anonymous No.3227081]

>>3226544
>>3226547
Thank you for the help anons.
I cropped it. Maybe I should make the hair smaller? I feel like the crop needs to come in more. I drew kind of an enclosed space behind him to bring it in more but maybe now its too cramped.
I'm not so good with color palletes, wondering If I picked the wrong one to begin with.

[Anonymous No.3227117]

Any advice regarding this?

The idea is to have a character in foreground, and in mid/back a terrace and coffee shop.
Which one is better? Is there a way to improve one by moving a few things? Is it even working?

Sorry if it's a bit messy.

[Anonymous No.3227149]

>>3227117
Is that a fucking bear?

[Anonymous No.3227164]

>>3226491
>>3226863
>and your work, especially the faces, is extremely unappealing
I disrespectfully disagree

[Anonymous No.3227165]

i need feedback/advice with this one

[Anonymous No.3227174]

>>3227164
It's true though. The faces are unappealing as fuck.

[Anonymous No.3227181]

>>3227174
no

[Anonymous No.3227214]

>>3227117
If the bear is your point of focus use the environment to lead the eyes to that focal point.

[Anonymous No.3227217]

>>3227164
>>3227181
really embarrassing that you can't take critique

[Anonymous No.3227225]

>>3227217

>>3227164
>>3227181
none of these are me
except this
>>3226491

[Anonymous No.3227228]

>>3227181
>>3227164

>>3227217
not the same person, but I can take it!

[Anonymous No.3227245]

>>3227059
sharpen your pencil

[Anonymous No.3227247]

been getting back into traditional and inking
>>3226873
those look great

[Anonymous No.3227250]

NUMBER ONE COP

[Anonymous No.3227252]

[Anonymous No.3227261]

>>3227252
WHERE IS YOUR FUCKING FACE

[Anonymous No.3227294]

>>3227245
It looks like it. Idk maybe it's the type of pencil. I do not know much about pencils.

[Anonymous No.3227299]

>>3227247
Fix that right eye. It's way too big.

[Anonymous No.3227305]

>>3227294
>2H

[Anonymous No.3227313]

>>3227294
>>3227305
yeah senpai, get an HB or 2B pencil, 2H is meant for light sketching or lighter shadows.

[Anonymous No.3227329]

>>3227228
ily coomie

[Anonymous No.3227347]

>>3227294
no rules just tools

[Anonymous No.3227353]

[Anonymous No.3227363]

>>3227313
Ok thanks anon!

[Anonymous No.3227370]

>>3227347
I used to use a #2 pencil but I could still see marks after erasing

[Anonymous No.3227384]

>>3227165
i dont undestand why im always ignored

[Anonymous No.3227388]

>>3227384
i've been ignored too, maybe its the pose, not much going on kinda uninteresting imo, maybe work on appeal pose wise, look at what catches your interest and question why it did.

[Anonymous No.3227402]

>>3227165
I got you darlin'

>>3227384
you're like... at that level where you're good enough that people won't point out the errors so ya just gotta keep on keepin on.

[Anonymous No.3227436]

>>3227261
w-what?

[Anonymous No.3227444]

>>3227165
I know you do those hips as a stylistic choice but cmon at least get some understanding of how the bone structure works there. Just looks like a tumor at this point. Torso could be longer too.

[Anonymous No.3227453]

>>3227353
Blog?

[Anonymous No.3227467]

>>3227402
>>3227444
thanks a lot, i gonna fix it tomorrow.

[Anonymous No.3227472]

guys i unironically cannot stop drawing furry stuff ive officially evolved into a full degenerate

[Anonymous No.3227482]

>>3227384
You're true-intermediate. Nothing either positive or negative to say. In a way, it's a good thing because at least you're better than bad.

[Anonymous No.3227485]

>>3223653
So I don't want to make my own thread to say this and I'm not 100% sure what a better thread would be, but I figure people in this one would at least be familiar with the anime/manga/webcomic enough to not mind looking it up themselves so I don't have to edit together a side by side shot.

Actual post now:
So I recently watched One Punch Man and the anime isn't complete (Another season is coming) so I was really left wanting more. I decided to see if the manga was ongoing which is where i found out about the webcomic and remembered that the artist of the original webcomic One Punch Man, One, didn't know how to draw when he started the comic.

I then jumped to chapter 42, where the anime leaves off just about, and was surprised by just how crazy the jump in quality was.

This signifies a few hings to me that anyone with an idea or a wish to create should think about
>Draw constantly. Even if it looks like shit, if the idea is good, people will still like something about it, and at the very least you should be able to. The improvement will come and at some point you'll be at a level where you'll grasp the point of studying a little better and how to apply it. I think some people aren't cut out for going LOOMIS off the bat and that's okay. Creation is more important at the end of the day because if you're a human copy machine but your work is boring, who cares?

>Even if you're a bare bones beginner, it isn't a reason not to try to make something. If you have a good idea, work on it, pursue it, make it come to life even if some parts of it are shitty at first

>Enjoying your work and making it so it's not a chore will lead you farther than stopping yourself from drawing because you're not drawing like (Insert favourite artist here) yet.


Studying is good. Studying is important So is actually liking drawing, because if you hate it, what's the fucking point?

[Anonymous No.3227499]

>>3227329

[Anonymous No.3227504]

>>3227453
http://yev-san.tumblr.com/

[Anonymous No.3227506]

>>3227499
>when senpai notices you

[Anonymous No.3227508]

How is this design? I've been trying to redesign characters from Jet Set Radio.

[Anonymous No.3227510]

>>3227081
Maybe if you made the furthest wall a darker shade, it would push back further?
Either way, I like it a lot better than the one where you included the faucets.

[Anonymous No.3227535]

Doodle, fucked up the legs and ass. I want to try getting into the swing of drawing a few fullbodies from imagination every day just to grind myself up to a decent skill level

[Anonymous No.3227573]

Kinda new to /ic/, I usually hang out in the beginner threads trying to improve.

This is something I did for fun last night. I still don't really know how to use color so this is about as far as I can go.

[Anonymous No.3227574]

>>3227573
Leave this place or else the crabs start pinching.

[Anonymous No.3227576]

>>3227573
I fucking love cowgirls

>>3227574
crabs only make you stronger

[Anonymous No.3227581]

>>3227573
if you do lewd you'll be fine, if not enjoy the crabs

[Anonymous No.3227599]

New to digital, probably the best non-traditional thing I've done. I'm worried I'm getting caught in bad habits I don't recognize yet.

[Anonymous No.3227639]

[Anonymous No.3227641]

>>3227599
I really like this. Only real problem I see is that the top one's forearm looks kinda broken on top of the other hand.

[Anonymous No.3227653]

rate me

[Anonymous No.3227671]

>>3227653
I really like the values and if you were going for bizarre unsettling monster you nailed it. Though I'll be honest, I have no clue what's going on under his feet.

[Anonymous No.3227693]

>>3227250
are you that guy that approaches figure drawing by looking at topography?

[Anonymous No.3227699]

>>3227402
this piece is not 'bad' its just not very eye catching. You have some good lines but overall its a very stale image. everything from the pose to the style are generic. Every time you make a drawing, think of ways to improve it. Your skill level rn is ez to stagnate and get trapped into since people tend to think there drawings meet the criteria for being a "good" drawings. But this drawing is lacking life and personality from the artist, along with fundamentals. Overall you have some skills but your just another common shell on the beach along with millions of other similar looking shells who dont do enough fundamentals. KEEP GOING YOU CAN DO BETTER JUST ADD SOME LIFE TO YOUR WORK

[Anonymous No.3227708]

>>3227653
Gospodee, 10/10

[Anonymous No.3227722]

[Anonymous No.3227754]

>>3227653

[Anonymous No.3227766]

Anyone got teal line/simons tumblr?

[Anonymous No.3227869]

It's been a crappy week so have a crappy sketch.

[Anonymous No.3227876]

>>3227869
>crappy sketch
true
and too lazy to scan, too.

[Anonymous No.3227881]

>>3227876
don't got no scanner so I gotta use my phone

[Anonymous No.3227887]

>>3227869
Fun With a Pencil

[Anonymous No.3227908]

I don't know how muscles and bones work but I pretend that I do

[Anonymous No.3227913]

>>3227908
nice, but stop being a pedo

[Anonymous No.3227915]

>>3227913
let the man do what he wants

[Anonymous No.3227916]

>>3227913
>stop being a pedo
What do you mean?

[Anonymous No.3227970]

>>3227916
The Anon admired the Op's skill but disapproved of the subject matter he chose to portray.

[Anonymous No.3227978]

How is my linework?

[Anonymous No.3228041]

>>3223904
A fellow boatfucker I see.

[Anonymous No.3228043]

>>3227908
who is it?

[Anonymous No.3228045]

>>3227916
"Why is he calling me a pedo for drawing a loli?"

hhhhhmmmmmmmm

[Anonymous No.3228061]

>>3227908
do you have a blog?

[Anonymous No.3228073]

>>3228045
still not getting it

[Anonymous No.3228089]

>>3227908
Nice loli butt

[Anonymous No.3228103]

What should I study if I want to draw cartoons with dimensionality to them like the late 80's to the 90's?

I want to avoid the "calarts" meme.

[Anonymous No.3228120]

>>3228045
Just curious is there an answer to this equation?

[Anonymous No.3228161]

>>3226538
good taste in boy

[Anonymous No.3228176]

>>3227908
>>3227722
>/ic/ starting to pick up good taste

impossible.

[Anonymous No.3228182]

>>3227653
This is very cool. If you were trying to make a bizzarre demon you nailed it.

>>3227671
>Though I'll be honest, I have no clue what's going on under his feet.
You mean where he is sitting on? I think he is sitting on a bent metal cross, at the top of a church dome

[Anonymous No.3228184]

>>3227869
Cool but now let us see something finished

>>3227908
Looking good man

>>3227913
That anon has every right to draw whatever he wants as does everyone else

[Anonymous No.3228188]

>>3228120
That's actually the Lagrangian of the standard model, which is just another way of saying this is how quantum force interactions are mathematically represented.

[Anonymous No.3228260]

>>3228182
Yeah, I figured it out after looking at it for awhile. It reads a lot better in the thumbnail than when looking at the picture normally. But I'm beginner-tier, so I don't really know what you would do to the values to fix that.

[Anonymous No.3228331]

>>3228188
is this actually solvable though?

[Anonymous No.3228337]

>>3228188
I mean I understand it's already solved, meaning all that is equal to the concept of the lagrangian of the standard model, but what is this even used for?

[Anonymous No.3228352]

Did this last night, does anybody have a guide to shading? I'm really nervous about trying to shade this without any real knowledge.

[Anonymous No.3228448]

>>3228352
Try to find a decent reference photo and just try to copy it. This works especially well if you use one that doesn't quite match the pose since you'll need to put more thought into it. The important thing to remember is that even if it looks awful and you end up undoing it, you still learned something.

[Anonymous No.3228462]

Did a sketch of Shantae doing the Wonder Woman pose in my style.

[Anonymous No.3228475]

>>3227508
rad

[Anonymous No.3228483]

>>3227722
want on dick

[Anonymous No.3228497]

>>3227504
>He fell for the blog meme

[Anonymous No.3228504]

How long has yev been drawing

[Anonymous No.3228528]

>>3228043
It's based off another artist's drawing of schoolkid from pokemon.

>>3228061
https://twitter.com/orenjipiiru

>>3228184
>>3228176
>>3228089
Thanks.

I'm trying to get into defining more details with shading, but I'm not sure how this one is turning out. Something about it doesn't seem right.

[Anonymous No.3228541]

>>3227908
Who's the character?

[Anonymous No.3228542]

>>3228541
From https://twitter.com/pettankon_art
Pretty sure it might be an OC

[Anonymous No.3228545]

>>3228542
nvm I just saw >>3228528
fuck my life

[Anonymous No.3228680]

>>3226542
I like the one without a close up, the other elements make it seem more like it's pov and not just an illustration of a dude

[Anonymous No.3228775]

[Anonymous No.3228799]

>>3228497
i asked for yevsans blog awhile ago on an older thread . Maybe ppl just like their art??? woah what crazy i know.

[Anonymous No.3228807]

What's a good book on character design? Please save me

[Anonymous No.3228986]

>>3227149
yes, shirokuma café fanart.

>>3227214
dunno I'm always trying to do these pieces with not such a definite focal point, which often leads to weak(er) comps

[Anonymous No.3229010]

new thread: >>3229008

new thread: >>3229008

new thread: >>3229008

[Anonymous No.3229108]

>>3228497
But I actually just like their art a lot.

[Anonymous No.3229300]

final