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Post your nsfw, critique work and so on.
Furry is allowed, however do not over indulge on the subject of furries or their culture. Unnecessarily reporting these anons are strongly discouraged. This thread is dedicated to helping anons improve their erotic drawings and paintings.
Do not start flame wars.
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>> No.2183682
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1/4

>> No.2183683

LeEpicTroll-chan.deviantart.com

>> No.2183685
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>>2183682
You cheeky cunt

>> No.2183692

>>2183682
and????

>> No.2183711

>>2183682
Instead of wasting your time with this shit, go learn how to draw properly. If it was funny, maybe people would overlook the shitty art, but believe me, it's not funny.

>> No.2183716

>>2183682
oh wow you again?
please post the rest of this pile of shit so i can laugh at you

>> No.2183719

>>2183716
Chile is that you? Stop bullying people.

>> No.2183728

First time I got one of my pieces used as OP. Thats cool.

>> No.2183782
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so how much did I fuck up?

I just wanted to draw a big butt, and all I could imagine with this pose is round circles. I always get to a point where I start something, get stuck, leave it for some time to figure it out - but I never do.

I've never used any refs.

>> No.2183784

>>2183782
>hipbox is the key bro

>> No.2183791

>>2183784
Is that like pussybox but for hips?

>> No.2183793

>>2183728
5.5/10, it's pretty okay.

>>2183782
I don't see an immediate problem. Maybe check out what the left leg is doing just to be sure. Also zoom it way in so that ass feels as close as it looks.

>> No.2183808

>>2183784
Who are you quoting?

>> No.2183836

Are Japanese h-manga artists making those on the side, or is that their actual job?

>> No.2183850

>>2183836
Theyre mostly anonymous mangaka assistants.

>> No.2183865

>>2183836
>those

those what?

>> No.2183868

>>2183836
Serialized ones on comic magazines usually do it as a full job, doujinshi only artists are mostly always hobbyists except of the very rare cases.

>> No.2183870

>>2183865
Hentai manga, you retard.

>> No.2183871

>>2183808
Loomis

>> No.2183872

>>2183870
so you are asking if an actual hentai jobs exist? now im confused

>> No.2183897

>>2183872
>Are hentai-manga artists making those on the side (of their actual jobs)
>or is that (hentai-manga artist) their actual job

What this anon asks is if "Hentai-manga artists" is an actual job (actual job means something you get money for doing, and I'll go as far as say that anon asks if they can live from the money the make on it), or if doing that (again, I am referring to having "hentai-manga artist" as your occupation (occupation means job)) does not give enough pay-off (read: you don't earn enough) to make a living out of it, and thus, have to take on a different job (This means that you do not have "hentai-manga artist" as your main job) in order to sustain yourself, and doing the "hentai-manga artist" on the side (on the side here means that even though you have a different "main" job, you draw "hentai-manga" when you're not at work).

I hope this cleared up your confusion, anon!

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>>2183676
So, before I continue:

Any critiques before I go over it in pen and marker? Was also gonna try and draw over it in Photoshop and give her different kinds of skimpy outfits.

If there are any glaring mistakes, like with anatomy or shadows or anything, I'd like to fix them to make the best possible result, rather than discover a mistake later and regret it. Thanks, guys.

>> No.2184010

>>2184007
The eye on the right is offcentered. Tail is also.

>> No.2184011

>>2184010
Right "figure" or right "eye"?

>> No.2184075
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You guys helped alot last night This one is tougher for me.

Somebody commissioned me for a 4some picture, which is kinda difficult because of the specific poses they wanted. Here is my very roughs for it, I would appreciate help to make it decent.

I'm thinking about shuffling things and moving people around to make it work. At this stage even moving major stuff wouldnt be a problem but yeah, very tough for me this picture is.

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>>2184075
Whoooooa that anatomy.

>> No.2184092

>>2184077
yeeaahh, my anatomy gets really crazy when im roughing things out, and when im doing posing im not 100% familiar with and have to use multiple references

>> No.2184107

>>2184011
Right eye, sorry.

>> No.2184113
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fixed at least one thing, made the middle one larger, but like I said, any help would be appreciated, i know its looking pretty crappy so far

>> No.2184146
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2184146

dunno if monsters count as furry

>> No.2184149
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2184149

have a brown half elf

>> No.2184152

>>2184146
Nice sergal.

>> No.2184153

>>2184152
what's a sergal?

>> No.2184157

>>2183682
are you going to post the rest of this

>> No.2184160

>>2184153
Kek just teasing you over the whole
>dunno if furry
considering it looks similar to a popular species
http://en.wikifur.com/wiki/Sergal

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>>2184160
oh shit, i didn't know about these, i actually tend to stay away from the vastness of the furry fandom, Fameroh there and my infamous nuzlocke are the closest i get to it

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>all of these /fur/

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>> No.2184224
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>>2184223

>> No.2184231
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>> No.2184234
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I've read fun with pencils, but I'm not getting a good grasp on proper proportions and anatomy.

>> No.2184237

>>2184231
>>2184231
Your animu expressions are lacking compared to some really fucking OK anatomy I notice here and there.

Especially that latter one, there's not a lot to tell us if the one being fucked is a male or female from the face, but if part of that is intentional like anoki's durga then that might work out.

Still, work on your faces. You have a tumblr or something where I can observe your progress?

>> No.2184240

>>2184237
http://kiahlsart.tumblr.com/
thanks dude, yeah, my expressions tend more towards anime, and i gave her a less feminine face than some of my stuff

>> No.2184248
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i suck yo

>> No.2184249

>>2184248
those are some giant tits

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>>2184007
the smaller figure has the face turned to the side but the back of the head does not match that, since ou can see both ears.
the face and skull of the bigger one are a bit wonky, but i can't put my finger on a single issue. best judge by yourself in flip-mode if it warants to fix it.

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for comparison the original and flipchecked versions of this sketch.
still need to redraw one of the feet or come up with a non-flat terrain for him to stand on.
Also still needs some more slight freeform-selection+transformation toll on the heads.

i know you don't have that luxury with your fully traditional work. maybe get a transparent sheet with a grid on it to lay on top of it to check? most printers should be able to print on transparent plastic.

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>>2184007
on the small figure the face and back of the head are not on the same angle, face look like it is seen form the side but we can see the back of the head.

on the ig figure the face is still a bit wonky but dunno what is wrong exactly, would have to experiment. maybe look at the flipped image yourself and see if you can spot it.

>> No.2184273

>>2184265
what the fuck is up with those legs? Looks seriously retarded. Draw plantigrade feet you fucking autist.

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>>2184234
>that stupid anime reaction face

stop.

>> No.2184276

>>2183682
This is a porn thread. If youre going to only post the SFW page, --->alt thread

>>2183782
left knee seems missing

>>2184075
perspective and anatomy is wayyy off

>>2184149
practice your pencils and stop line petting

>>2184234
from the thumbnail it looks like shes missing 3 quarters of her left thigh

>>2184248
fix those balloon tits

And im not going to reply to furshit that are ruining these threads.

>> No.2184280

>>2184275
Sorry?

>> No.2184286

>>2184280
That's right. The picture is better without that shit.

>> No.2184288
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>>2184286
Well shit dude I'm not all that good at drawing, I just wanted to convey what the guy was feeling.

>> No.2184289

>>2184223
I love the subject, but this anatomy needs some work...

>> No.2184291

>>2184288
ignore that asshole it's cute keep it, in fact do it just to spite him

>> No.2184292

>>2184288
I thought the face was a nice touch. I say keep it.

>> No.2184299

>>2184234
>>2184288

His abs are way off, they look really weird. Her pose if stiff as fuck, bent the neck, it looks like she's forcing herself to touch the deek while going "nopenopenopenope". Is she lying on the bed? If so you did a poor job. If not, you should put the guy further out towards the edge, because right now, her torso is too long. And her weight has to go somewhere, when she leans over like that. That should be the elbows which she uses to support herself, or the stomach if she lies down. Hope some of this helps.

Also, don't think because you draw sexual intercourse, it's erotic. Try to exaggerate more. Camera angle, poses, fluids and perspective. By altering such elements you can make the picture pop more and get that erotic feel.

And practise anatomy. A lot.

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>>2184299
Thanks for actual criticism, yeah they're on a "bed".
I can't into camera angles and shit and my anatomy is penis.

>> No.2184333

I want to draw furry to get commission money, what is the best way to achieve this? Gay fur?

>> No.2184337

>>2184311
look at hamptons anatomy book, it should give you a rough idea on anatomy.

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>>2184276
whoa nigga who made you the king of all autism

>> No.2184369

>>2184360
heres ur reply lol
:^D

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I got around to coloring this one. I changed up a few things.
>At least tell me I can color. That I'm as good as a small child

>> No.2184386

>>2184223
>>2184231
>possible cum inflation/BE
Yesssss

>> No.2184387

>>2184375
You know what we've said, dude. Learn to draw first. You shouldn't spend time on fully rendering shitty pieces, but try and get your fundamentals and atleast anatomy right before you start doing that.

Only thing I'd compliment you for, is the gradient background. That's a nice background.

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>>2184276
i'll work on it harder before i post again. I apologize

>> No.2184400

>>2184375
Stop wasting your and our time with this pathetic troll attempts. Are you autistic or something?

>> No.2184403

all this garbage pictures itt..

>> No.2184404
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>>2184276
took what you said and tried something alittle different, im still very new to perspective and anatomy. so maybe if you could go into alittle more detail it would be appreciated.

That being said, I adjusted the scale and size of some of the characters and added a grid

>> No.2184406

>>2184404
>very new to anatomy and perspective
>draws a fucking 4 figures interaction pose

yes this is going to end up well.

>> No.2184409

>>2184404
Looks better but fucking finish it anyway
Youll learn something new and realize your mistakes

>> No.2184415

>>2183836
They make them on the side for the money, the guy who does tu love ru has been pretty much confirmed as producing tlr porn.

There are some really good doujin artists though, often better than normal manga artists.

>> No.2184420
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>>2184288
The face bubble in itself was never a bad idea, but the facial expression is somewhat chibi and anime stock face for pleasure. If you tried to do the face anatomy like the other character, you'd keep the message, but it would more like that there is no lack of effort in detail, even for a small bubble. I liked your drawing though anon, don't let your self get smashed out of the field when asshole's show up. As a matter of fact, fuck what are hazing you about, but learn to force a new perspective in order to critique your own art. And then see what you could do different next time.

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figured I'd line that sketch from earlier

>> No.2184434

>>2184423
Expression/face is non appealing, anatomy is garbage, coloring is mediocre.

>> No.2184436

>>2184423
eeeeehhhhhh

she look like cyclops
tits are hanging from collarbone

fug i not want use proper gramer to talk 2 u

rd the fucking sticky

>> No.2184441

>>2184434
Subjective critique doesn't help, be more like the other anon

>> No.2184455

>>2184386
>possible
deffinate

>> No.2184489

>>2184441
My critique may be vague, but it's nowhere near being subjective.

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>>2184423

>> No.2184499

>>2183897
it did, thanks. so whats the answer?

>> No.2184502

>>2184499
That you apparently can't go through the trouble of going through the thread for your own answers.

>> No.2184516

>Furry is allowed
>"all this fur shit" complaints
haha jesus christ

>> No.2184521

>>2184516
Saying something in the OP doesn't make it true, even if it gets on my nerves in general, controversial subject matters will always attract shitposting, at least make sure to sage.

>> No.2184523

>>2184493
Bad idea to add those line in the cleavage. it looks like chest-hair. it works in the thumbnail, but not when opened.

>> No.2184566

Posted last thread after bump limit

>>2183587
What would you be willing to pay for something like this?

>> No.2184568

>>2184516
>furry is allowed
It's not.

>> No.2184576

>>2184566
Nothing, it looks like a drawing of a cheap tattoo artist.

>> No.2184580

>>2184276

left knee is missing because there are arms and hands still not drawn that would hide the knee

>> No.2184599

>>2184400
>Implying I'm not giving my fullest effort
If you don't think it's worth your time, don't bother saying anything.

>> No.2184601

>>2184568

Furries should be permabanned from /ic/.

>> No.2184603

>>2183676
that better be a trap he's fucking

>> No.2184610

>>2183676
>Furry is allowed, however do not over indulge on the subject of furries or their culture.
End of.

>> No.2184616

>All this furry autism

You faggots would do good to shut up and learn to not be shit at drawing. All this time you're wasting bitching and moaning, because they triggered you, could be spent learning how to draw worth a damn.

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>>2184333
I also want to know this. I need extra cash.

>> No.2184629

>>2184620
>>2184333
My straight stuff gets more attention in the long run

The furry twink market is pretty flooded, so you could do bara or fat gay stuff

>> No.2184647

>>2184599
I know who you are and what you are trying to do. Stop being fucking autistic and get a life.

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>>2184647
>What you're trying to do
Mind layin' that one on me?

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The 2D is a good name for a double-ended dildo, right?

>> No.2184693

>>2184652
He's a troll. I'm pretty sure he's the same guy as the one that was drawing those retarded "anatomy studies" with square-faced people 2 threads ago or so. After we realized he was a troll, he stopped posting until now.
He's trying to draw like a total noob/retard, just like last time, but he's unable to hide the fact that he has good basic knowledge + he has the same clueless posting style. I'm totally positive it is him.

>> No.2184696

>>2184681
It is also a good name for your illustrations.

>> No.2184703

>>2184603
Its whatever your fap desires.

>> No.2184705
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How can I be like my hero?

>> No.2184706

>>2184705
>Someone with good taste.

>> No.2184708
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>>2184706
>Implications
I could've posted Shadman

>> No.2184715

>>2184708
I wonder how much he makes drawing commissions

>> No.2184719

>>2184715
He has his rates listed on his blog.

>> No.2184720

>>2184406
>>2184409
well, not much help there But I'll continue anyways.

>> No.2184722

>>2184708
One of these days, I'll buy a commission from one of these two. Another one of these days, I'll have people commissioning me.

>The dream will live forever.

>> No.2184734

>>2184696
It's a curse.

I should probably start adding shadows, yeah?

>> No.2184738

>>2184734
I think it's the faces

>> No.2184743

>>2184489
"non-appealing, garbage, and mediocre" are all subjective terms until you elaborate on them to give them objectivity
The other guy definitely gave me more to work with even if they were a dick about it

>>2184493
She looks softer but at the same time, too "moe" and "generic" for my taste. I dunno what you were trying to go for here

>> No.2184747

>>2184333
>>2184620
Fetish shit makes it easy to stand out because most of it is awful, but the clients are shit.

Currently there's a slight shortage of bara, almost-loli or just chicks with tasteful boobs, muscle shota and humorous erotica. There might not be the demand but I know quite a few people prefer it. You can make a killing with traditional art just because no one does it and it stands out and the same is true for full blown digital painting. The real trick is just to make your thumbails stand out with good values, dynamic poses and avoiding the color palette everyone else is using.

>> No.2184758

>>2184738
Ah. Too anime? Or just badly constructed?

>> No.2184759

>>2184705
>>2184708
Why do they look so bored?

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>>2184759
Trying to be apathetic I guess.

>> No.2184866

>>2184696
ohhhhhhh

>> No.2184904

>>2184734
Tbh I think you need to redo some basic anatomy. Lots of things wrong with it, like:
Shoulders of the girl on top, anatomy of the arms (identical, whereas we are supposed to see the inside of one, outside of one), boob and ribcage, neck. The foreshortening on her leg is all wrong (it doesn't taper off that way).
Too tired to do the other one but there are some things wrong too.

>> No.2184924

Anyone got or know of some nice Cum and pre-fluid like Tutorials.
all i got is the doxy one saved, need some variation.

can't seem to get the shape looking right or make the clear fluid juicy looking :(

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>>2184924

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>>2184924
favorite

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>>2184924

>> No.2185041
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2185041

I'm going to be borderline obsessed with eating giant insect ass until I die

>> No.2185087

>>2185041
Fuck off Sunibee.

>> No.2185096

>>2185087
that's gaben, newfag

>> No.2185098

>>2185096
You mean donut assholes #3349?

>> No.2185117

>>2184743
Maybe non-appealing can be subjective. The other terms are objective critique, because your fundamentals are a pile of mediocre garbage. And no, I have no intention of going into details, since your picture is so bad.
Please keep getting offended instead of improving your art. That's the best way of dealing with critique (no matter how shitty it is).

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I managed to improve the bg, but the values are still all over the place. I am happy with the background and the characters as stand alone elements. Put together everything is too chaotic and unreadable I guess.
Ehh, I should spend more time in the construction phase and develop my composition better.

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>>2185123
Also, hi-res detail.

>> No.2185129

>>2185123
>>2185125
He looks like he has retard face.

>> No.2185130

>>2185117
>I have no intention of going into detail
You just did

>> No.2185134

>>2185130
Are you retarded or just very autistic?

>> No.2185136

>>2185129
You should have seen the Javier Bardem version I did. This is nothing compared to that.

>> No.2185138

>>2185123
This is pretty damn fine, technically speaking.

Maybe this is subjective, but that cum/pussyjuice is pretty unsexy. Looks like cottage cheese.

>> No.2185140

>>2185138
Hm. Maybe it's still too thick. Oh well, at least it doesn't look like concrete anymore.

>> No.2185141

>>2185134
Saying something is garbage on a fundamental level is more objective than just saying it's garbage

>> No.2185158

>>2185140
Although, If I were you, I wouldn't bother fixing it or anything. It's fine. aint nobody got time for that shit

>> No.2185163 [DELETED] 

>>2185129
Gee, I wonder how *you're* face looks when you cum. Probably not retarded at all..

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>>2185163
Stoic. I'm stoic when I cum.

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doodled this one during my lunchbreak

>> No.2185281
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2185281

Daily sketch.

>> No.2185290
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2185290

Sketch kinda

>> No.2185293
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2185293

>>2184924

>> No.2185302
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2185302

is this boner inducing at all

>> No.2185303

>>2185302
that hip to tit ratio certainly is

>> No.2185305

>>2185302
Your lines are shaky, work on that line confidence

>> No.2185308

>>2185293
Looks more like pancake batter.

Not that authenticity is the goal here.

>> No.2185345

>>2185225
Better, kind of see some Khota in your style. Still waaaaay to pregnant though.

Try doing nothing but faces on a study page and then try to draw entirely different features on the next. You want to avoid heading down saem-face lane.

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>>2185345
she'd deliberately that pregnant, she's a fertility god, but thanks for the advice on faces, will do

>> No.2185384

>>2184248
aah her arms.
Make them bigger. Arms usually end mid thigh, hands included.

>> No.2185482

>>2185038
some weeaboo that can translate this?

>> No.2185512

>>2185302
>dat belly
Could improve but I chubbed up/10

>> No.2185578
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2185578

Trying to do the pose with full body, is her head bit off or is it just me? Also what to change?

>> No.2185579

>>2185578
It needs to be resting on something and have the hair displaced or it looks uncomfortable, but so does the reference. The only thing to actually change is to work on that left foot. That's not the line an ankle should follow. And the right one has either too narrow an ankle or too large a heel.

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2185747

Anyone know who made this from the last thread? A name or Tumblr?

>> No.2185755
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2185755

Well, I tried to make a loli and somehow ended up making a fucking Adonis.

Bottom left is another try at a loli-ish body-type. Also her haircut and forearms are kind of retarded. Probably some other stuff. Would appreciate some direction on how to get good at this shit. Maybe just a link.

>> No.2185772

>>2185755
The right one's shoulders should be narrower, head a bit smaller, arms longer, thighs and butt (slightly) fatter, calves less pointy. Would red line but tfw no tablet

>> No.2185779

>>2185747
that anon doesn't have a gallery

>> No.2185784

>>2185125
it's awsome
is she pregnant?

>> No.2185785

>>2185772
Oh aye - I got so caught up in the idea of adding a faux-hourglass figure I didn't stop to think whether or not I should. Like to think I sort of addressed it with the one on the left (less curves, more glorified plank) even if it is just a sketch.

>> No.2185793

>>2185784
It's suposed to be cum inflation. But based on her fantasy background, where she represents fertility and nature, I wouldn't mind thinking that she's pregnant. I think it would suit her a lot.

>> No.2185795

>>2184603
Shoulders are broader than hips so yes.

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>> No.2185851

>>2185123
>>2185125
I like to nitpick.

I can't nitpick on anything.

Good job anon.

>> No.2185855

>>2185803
keep going...

>> No.2185858

>>2185803
I, uh...


Got a tumblr or something?

>> No.2185863

>>2185803
Ayy.
Lmao.
That's good shit, anon.

>> No.2185893

>>2185803
Fantastic gesture!
got a tumblr or something? Would instafollow.

>> No.2185898

>>2185858
>>2185893
http://fdssn3411.tumblr.com/

>> No.2185904

>>2185898
>that gallery

I already know where this is going. I'ma pass on following. Legit work tho.

>> No.2185918

>>2185898
damn, you should post more
i love your art

>> No.2185921

>>2185578
head too big

>> No.2185922

>>2185125
My only gripe is the hidden side of his face. The cheek bone is far too flat for what I suspect the edge of his face to be in comparison to the cheek bone we see. Also not showing the hints of his right eye makes it look unfinished.
You can still get away with not showing more detail on that right sliver of his face if you raise his brow arch higher and just have the eye socket get lost behind the profile of his nose. And then just have a peek of the top of his cheek bone.

>> No.2185924

>>2185898
nice style, too bad about the content

>> No.2185926

>>2185281
Nothing to critique on. Only thing I've often seen about your art in these threads is that you make the same kind of female faces. Very small, cute noses, very full lips. I know it is for sexy purposes but it might be something you could work on.

>> No.2185932

>>2185125
>>2185922
Actually, I do have one more gripe. I wanna see some of that cock head. I mean, its kinda giving me the inclination that you're purposely making his dick so super huge it goes off the canvas and you don't have to put any detail into it. Its like when artists who can't into feet and hands push the feet and hands off the page.
So don't push that cock head off the page, anon. Draw that cock head. Hell, it could still be curving slightly upward and help frames the whole image.

>> No.2185936

>>2185924
what the fuck do you have against his content u faglord.

>>2185926
every fucking artist has his own perfect face that everyone likes. fuck off its noting wrong. dindu noffin.

>> No.2185939

>>2184288
It's just a matter of taste, anon. I find silly reaction faces like that quite amusing. Just don't over use it in all your art and it's fine.

>> No.2185942

>>2185936
they went there expecting more eyy lmaos but got lolis instead.

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>>2185904
>>2185924
>getting triggered by loli
oh boy

>> No.2185944

>>2185942
fuck them.

>> No.2185949

>>2184333
Make a Furaffinity account. Post your stuff, but don't dump more then one drawing every 6 hours if you have a batch to post. Start by doing requests. Keep it fast and simple, sketches with or without some fast loose coloring, but make sure anatomy and gesture and shit is good. Make personal work and post to show off more refined stuff. Hold a raffle after gaining some followers where the winner gets a free refined/max quality drawing. After an okay bunch of watchers, it's time to open commissions! Make a nice price sheet and write a detailed TOS that all clients must read and agree on. Best of luck.

>> No.2185953

>>2185898
You know where I can find more loli anon? Or the artists who inspire your loli stuff?

>> No.2185954

>>2185936
>what the fuck do you have against his content u faglord.

Not that anon, but 2D or 3D, I don't give a fuck, child porn is gross. Just because you're ok with it doesn't mean everyone has to be m8. I'm just going to leave it at that. His draftsmanship is nice, just don't care for the content.

Makes me laugh when lolicons get defensive as fuck when people express they don't care for the fetish. Reminds me a furries.

>> No.2185958

>>2185954
>Reminds me a

"of" rather.

>> No.2185960

>>2185936
>every fucking artist has his own perfect face that everyone likes.
Ignore this idiot. Incase worked so hard to reduce his problems with sameface and it was really only a problem with being put in a neiche where he's unable to adapt to improve for a while when he was the trapmaster.

Its like being mad at Legoman/LM, yeah he isn't perfect but the reason why he isn't getting better is because what he's doing now has enough demand and praise he doesn't even get any productive complaints that tell him to improve.

Don't settle into sameface.

BUT, I'm also pretty sure the reason why that face keeps coming around is because its the same character. Short hair, glasses, tit size; but I haven't been stalking BBC regularly.

>> No.2185963

>>2185954
>Just because you're ok with it doesn't mean everyone has to be
>I don't care
Yet you had to post the fact you don't like it, then post a response to someone who similarly complained about your opinion, to cry about how someone doesn't agree with you.

Its almost like you do care but feign disinterest to seem cool and hide the face you're a drama white knight faggot who has to parade his opinions around.

Fuck off.

>> No.2185967

>>2185954
you are retarded. Theres not a single loli porn there. Im not lolicon but I appreciate cute girls.
>>2185960

NO ignore THIS faggot. Incase worked hard for sameface "problem: but nobody give a fuck about new faces. I actually think they look bad and some unappealing. The case of incase tho is a bit different since hes a western style artist and they need more details to the faces. Literal all eastern style is sameface and everybody loves it shut your trap.

>> No.2185969

>>2185954
tumblr fuck off

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>>2185963
>Yet you had to post the fact you don't like it

No shit, because I can express that on this board. I don't like what you do and bothered to say it. Too bad, so sad. Stay defensive.

>> No.2185980

>>2185967
You and you alone thing sameface isn't a problem. Meanwhile, people with taste do.

>ALL ANIMU IS SAME FACE
Bad anime is, and the fact they do shitty faces is one of the most universal complaints. Stop using your shitty standards to justify subpar talent.

>>2185970
>stay defensive
You literally don't even know the definition of that word. Try celebrating your superior opinion less faggot. My entire point was that saying "I don't care" while trying to advertize how much better you are is pretty clearly you being a self important crybaby.

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>>2185980
>still mad because I don't like what you like

You done?

>> No.2185993

>>2185980
nobody complains beside the artists who dont buy anything therefore dosent matter.

>> No.2186012

>>2185993
>same face is fine because anime does it

Kill yourself.

>> No.2186016

>>2186012
drink bleach bitch.

>> No.2186017

>>2185991
Not him but do you really expect to randomly insult any kind of fetish and not start a shitposting feast?
Go to /a/ on a sadpanda thread and try saying that you don't like literally any kind of fetish and see what happens,
people naturally want to defend their taste, what you are doing is unnecessarily announcing your tastes and promote shitposting.
Later in the thread we had the same shit because someone insulting furry, i seriously don't understand why you feel like you have to announce your taste
even if you know that you are going to attract shitposting, maybe you do it willingly.

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>>2186017
>maybe you do it willingly

>> No.2186022

>>2185991
>>2186017
I AM that guy, and basically the latter post said it perfectly.

I don't even like loli that much, 90% actual curves are better. But the problem is that you came here, made a little dance of how you're too good for something, all while saying how it doesn't matter to you.

If you came here complaining about furries the result is the same, you getting called a faggot for white knight attention whoring.

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>>2186017
>people naturally want to defend their tastes
>to randoms on an anonymous board

>> No.2186024

>>2186023
it seem you know a lot about people.

>> No.2186026

>>2186023
You better believe it because it happens literally every thread for any fetish.

>> No.2186027

>>2184007

please draw some flies around her, that way we know she's a stinky animal who needs a nice wash before she gets the sperma

>> No.2186028

>>2185898
I'd definitely follow you, but the RCMP would stomp my head in

>> No.2186030

>>2185932
You realize you are commenting a cropped version of this -> >>2185123
picture? I'm sure bbc posted it only to better show their expressions and facial features.

>> No.2186035

>>2186028
I can agree with being safe but to be fair, the only reason he isn't being stomped by tumblr staff and maybe law enforcement in his own country is that it isn't explicit enough for there to be legal concerns. All of it is clothed and not explicit or sexual in nature, as far as I can see.

>> No.2186036

>>2185898
>So little content on pixiv.
Why did you wait so much to post anything publicly? i always wonder how people open galleries when the become really good and not before,
did you had old galleries and deleted them?

>> No.2186045

>>2185922
Yeah, I see it too now. The right antler has the same problem I think.Thanks for noticing it!

>>2185926
Hm. Yeah, I realize I am doing a lot of sameface characters, but I'm trying to develop a recognizable personal style, plus in these daily sketches I'm trying to depict what I think comes closest to my perfect woman.
But I will definitely try to vary my characters more in the future. Don't want to be a sameface artist.

>>2185932
Uhm. I didn't really pay much attention to the composition here. I just wanted to show some of the characters details which are lost in the bigger version.

>>2185942
I wanted to get his gallery to see more of his art, period. I am only sorry there isn't MORE of his art. He's got a really awesome style.

>> No.2186046

>>2186036
I usually purge old pics if it starts looking retarded and not too many people bookmarked it.
definitely need to work on my output though, 2-3 pics a month is just really bad.

>> No.2186053

>>2186046
I really get it, but i also wish people wouldn't do it, i get sad when art is just gone, a lot of pixiv artists purge old art
and with it some pretty good drawings sometimes, so i just archive everything out of paranoia.

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When the director of the institute walked in, Caroline knew her career in advanced robotics was finished.

I'm tempted to just rage quit and start this again. Also, this is my first time trying to start with a greyscale image to colour later and I gotta say, I'm finding it harder than just painting colour in the first place.

>> No.2186070

>>2186027
That's a good idea, Anon, I'll have to keep that in mind for later. But for now, I'll abstain.

Definitely gave me some inspiration, here, thank you.

>> No.2186085

>>2186070
Ignore that gross foreigner please. In addition to grossness being a terrible fetish its also against the idea of a cat-person.

Cats are clean animals if they're in a suitable enviroment.

>> No.2186196

>>2185281

Waiting on video. Also...
>...and then she farts!

>> No.2186212

>>2185747
>>2185747
He was going with the name " D. " on the /co/ and /v/ drawthreads. He will never make a blog/site.

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Beginner here. I know this isn't good but the last time I drew figure was a few years ago and this is also my first erotic drawing. What's wrong with his body?

>> No.2186385

>>2186377
>What's wrong with his body?
At first glance I would say the problem is that YOU drew it.

>> No.2186386

>>2186377
Do you ever check poses in a mirror before you draw them?

>> No.2186390

>>2186385
Somebody needs a hug.

>> No.2186391 [DELETED] 

>>2186390
someone needs to kill himself
who?
it's you XD

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>>2186377

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>>2185018
>>2185020
>>2185038
>>2185293

Thanks a bunch, think they're helping me grasp it a lot better than i was i think.

What about clear fluids like vaginal juice and lube.
Is it like the same deal but less white buildup and just highlighting the edges?

>> No.2186480
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First time really trying to draw a character inside a car seat, so if you want I can also post the references I attempted to use? Any crits or any redlines would be appreciated.

I had a very hard time getting her to look like shes actually on the seat, and even now i'm not convinced

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>>2186402

>> No.2186511

>>2186480
How do I into grids via paint sai?

>> No.2186512

>>2186391
You know, anon, you're pretty funny.

If being an immature moron doesn't work out, you should consider a career in comedy.

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>>2186377
yeah theres a few things wrong, 1her clitoris is huge and 2 she has no tits...

>> No.2186524
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>>2186511
im using Clip Studio Paint. But the grid I'm using is actually just a picture of a grid
so it'll work for you

>> No.2186559

>>2186512
And you should consider a career in bleach drinking competitions
Be the first to televise it lol

>> No.2186759

>>2186054
For a second I thought the robot on the far right had a second dick instead of a broken spine. I like that idea better.

>> No.2186857
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in progress, but any opinion or critique is welcome

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>> No.2186938

>>2184248
Arms and head too small compared to the rest of her body. But I quite like your colorful style, anon.

>> No.2186942

>>2185302
Yes, but the hip tilt is a little too exaggerated and makes her look like she's tipping over.

>> No.2186951

>>2186857
I'm afraid
(a) the pic is huge holy fuck that size
(b) there are a LOT of things wrong with the anatomy. Her arms, her waist, her boobs, her hips and the absence of left foot. Well actually there isn't some part of the anatomy where I think it should be improved, safe maybe her left hand. I'm sorry anon, but you really need to work on that before you attempt more.

>> No.2186953

>>2186951
*There isn't some part of the anatomy where I don't think it should be improved

Pardon my double negative, I lost myself there. Basically, every part should be anatomically improved.

>> No.2187039
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>mfw warosu blocked in Russia right now
>>>/ic/thread/1978341#p1978827
Looks like even rats don't like shit art

>> No.2187072

>>2187039
>implying russians dont have standards when it comes to art
nigga you dont know what russians are capable of. their art school literally teaches first year students to draw like frazetta otherwise they are send to gulag

>> No.2187115
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>> No.2187120

>>2187115
yeah i gonna ur tumblr and ur pixiv

>> No.2187123
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>>2187115
I approve

>> No.2187135
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>>2187115
just a tip
the perfect breast actually has more fat above the nipple than below

look it up

>> No.2187148

>>2187135
not everyone likes the look of bolt-ons.

if they aren't overly-sagging and misshapen/uneven, then more "loose" breasts look fine

probably more erotic, especially in 2d.

>> No.2187149

>>2187135
shut the fuck up faggot shes perfect the way she is

>> No.2187152
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ive changed a few things, I noticed before her lower leg was shorter than her thigh so I changed the position and elongated it

Any other critiques or redlines would be appreciated.

and yes, she has bolted on tits, because thats my fetish

>> No.2187156

>>2187115
would put my tiny cock on top of the screen and cum on her hard.

>> No.2187173

>>2187135
>the perfect breast
This must be the most subjective thing if read in a while, i like moderately saggy breasts with big areola, taste in breasts differ greatly.

>> No.2187180

>>2187173
You have objectively the best taste and you don't even realize it. Man up and start imposing your taste onto others.

>> No.2187263

>>2187152
looks good overall cept for the baloon tits, too small hand (cigarette one) the leg doesnt look like it has a hip structure to it and the eyes look painted on, ears a bit too small too

>> No.2187270

>>2186377

At first glance:

Left forearm's fuckhuge
Lower trunk of the torso's fuckhuge
Left hand wrist is tiny, also thumb is a claw
Left foot looks puny
Spines don't work like that

>> No.2187284

>>2187270
this

>> No.2187286
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>>2187263
i love balloon tits. perf for hookers
and yes, i had a hard time making hips in this pose...

everything else i'll fix

>> No.2187324

>>2187173
shittaste
whats next likening granny tits ?

>>2187135
whos that artist ?

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>>2187324
>sag is bad

Sag implies weight. What's the point of big tits if there is no sense of weight to them?

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>low test weeners not liking fat old milf J-tiddies

leave the hall

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Help me improve my gay shit.

>> No.2187348

>>2187334
>Just fapped to maeshima ryou's lolis and now to this.
How can you not like everything? you are missing out.

>> No.2187357

>>2187348
>maeshima ryou
Not that I hate some dfc or even boipussy but shit taste tbh.

>> No.2187382

>>2187357
How can you hate his little nymphomaniac girl series, she is the best.

>> No.2187389
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why the fuck is the 3ds so painful to draw on ;-;
anybody else here aminate?

>> No.2187405
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squid commission
some of the colors got weird when I messed with them, so I gotta fix it.

>> No.2187412

>>2187405
you gotta study how the dick connect to the body more. go stare at some hip diagrams an pay attention to the pelvic floor muscles and how those connect to the pubic bone an where the pubic bone is in relation to the abdomen

>> No.2187435

>>2187334
I posted the feline milf furry earlier. Also, hey, I do like larger women and older chicks, but they have to look right. Breasts can't be too saggy, and the fat chicks can't be obese or wrinkly.

>> No.2187437

>>2187135
sirokurokuma

>> No.2187453
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2187453

you know the deal /ic/

let me have it

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>>2187453
You really got hat smile right

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>>2187473

>> No.2187594

>>2187389
I animate but I haven't done anything in a bit

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>>2187334

>> No.2187696

>>2184248
I like what you have going there with the color, push yourself and experiment on it, and you'll have something really interesting.
If you work on anatomy & perspective, & how color & light works it'll become less frustrating in the long run.

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>>2185755
One more go at getting a loli body type down before I try something a little more ambitious.

I'm sure there's some anatomical problems, but I don't really care. Apart from the foot, anyway. Most of my concerns are in regards to eroticism.

Anyone got a link to drawing and painting liquids? I've never been any good at it.

>> No.2187744

>>2187453
thats very nice, anon, but I dont think we can pitch what you are willing to catch

>giant zit tits
>~3 inch radial difference in the girth
>mantle of the head is significantly larger than the head itself even if the head is convex
>urethra points towards the far edge of the mantle, more so than it would be
>the bulbous head is damn near spherical
That shit dont look comfy, but it has nice form, source?

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>>2187744
I got bored and drew this so I could ask a question
>what makes a cock look comfy?

also fill this in
fill it in with normal cocks too

>> No.2187786

>>2187768
>comfy no foreskin
>neutral hack foreskin pulled back
>evil have foreskin pulled forward

>natural is properly proportioned erect
>neutral is flaccid
>mechanical is disproportionate fursona shit
if you are going to do LNC x GNE grid have evil be the bottom row

>> No.2187813

>>2187786
>disliking foreskin
Get out of here, Goldstein.

>> No.2187844

>>2187716
The anatomy problems is mostly that you somehow draw a male body, its like a shota with a pussy.

>> No.2187853

>>2187768
>comfy

>>>/v/

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>>2187405

>> No.2187895

>>2187857
Stop posting this shit. This is really one of the worst tutorials I've ever seen.

>> No.2187898

>>2187857
was this made by a woman?

>> No.2187907

>>2187857
So which one are you, /ic/is?

>> No.2187912

>>2187744

I don't understand this post at all

>> No.2187914

>>2187453
Your gesture is unnatural and pretty shit tier. You try to mask this with lineart, which doesn't improve the sketch, and it only makes it look more sterile.
Work on your fundamentals and develop better gesture.

>> No.2187922

>>2187844
Well I didn't prepare for that response. Only way I could think to fix it is by giving her narrower shoulders or something.

>> No.2187925

>>2187914

this isn't actually helpful in any way at all

>> No.2187926

>>2187922
I think that's the problem, she has broader shoulders than her hips and also the way
you drew and painted the chest makes it seem like it is muscle rather than a flat chest because
it looks like its higher, like it has muscle so it looks like a boys chest.

>> No.2187928

>>2187926
Fair points that. It appears the line between DFC and MERE PECTORALS in thinner than I thought. I certainly don't give enough of a fuck to redraw that image so I'll just keep it in mind for next time. It's a relatively minor point anyway.

Thanks for pointing it out, bruv. I always like to improve.

>> No.2187940

>>2187928
No problem, i've been struggling to draw the right dfc as well for some time, people think that because it's basically
no tits it sould be easy, but it's actually very delicate and easy to mess up.

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How can i improve?
Does anyone have good info pictures on faces for people and/or furries?

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gonna add in big burg that she takes bites of for each increase in bulge, along with some more ambient upper body movement, probably have her rub her tummy after the button bursts

>>2187594
any programs that have a similar simplicity to flipnote studio 3d on the pc? 3ds is nice if i'm on the go or like lyin in bed but the device itself gets in my way a lot, along with any part of my hand touching the screen fuckin up my line

>> No.2188010

>>2187992

His dick needs to be harder. Also precum

>> No.2188053
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This is my latest one. Want more?

>> No.2188055

>>2188053
No.

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>>2188055

>> No.2188070

>>2188053
looks pretty cool dude. But her butthole looks a little offset?

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>>2188070
Could be so. Im not experienced paiting buttholes. They dont show it at normal model painting classes.

>> No.2188106

>>2188077
hmm, something about that angle really tugs my collar. You've got a nice feel with your wrinkles and lighting, but it looks like someone tied a very thing string to that dong and pulled up a bit

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>>2188106

Ty for your critique. My artteacher keeps telling me that its not enough to make 4x4 grid and copy photo through it. I should understand and rely more on anatomy theories than photos.

>> No.2188122

>>2188007
EasyToon is probably the closest you'll get and even then it might feel more limiting in ways

>> No.2188429 [DELETED] 

w

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Yep, I'm still working on this, I did some major fixages and tried to keep their legs within proportion of their bodies. Moved things around and just tried to improve it.

Let me know what you think, I'll probably have another update for you guys as I try something alittle different for the purple one while I read your opinions on my giant mess of a picture

>> No.2188440

>>2187925
Ok, let me explain this a little better.
His lineart lacks depth and weight. That's because he doesn't have the fundamental knowledge about how to construct and place elements into space. His gesture lacks that. He tries to repair to that with lineweight, but it doesn't help him, because that causes the lineart to become less spontaneous and thus more sterile.

>> No.2188442

>>2188116
I really dig the depth on her face. I think you should apply the same amount of modeling and details to her knee too. That part is really flat where it should pop out a lot more.
Otherwise, top notch stuff man!

>> No.2188456

>>2187152
right arm that is holding the cigarette looks very uncomfortable because it is floating. try to lower the elbow and place the wrist somewhere so it looks like it is resting and not being raised.

>> No.2188499

>>2188437
dicks are too small

>> No.2188509

>>2188437
As simple as this is, slap down some perspective lines and see where it gets you. At this point everything's a different size and facing different directions. Try and have some sort of idea of an environment even if it doesn't make it into the final picture.

For example, Blue is resting her hand on something, assuming it's a wall, where does that leave Yellows right arm. In my honest opinion you're overreaching for your current skill level, but if you insist on following this through try shrinking it down to thumbnail size and seeing how it reads while retooling from there.

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>>2188509
>in my honest opinion you're overreaching for your current skill level,

That may be true. But I apply my gaming skills to art. Play on hard for better rewards. I am gonna insist on working on this.

if it doesnt turn out as well as I wanted well.. at least I did it and tried my best. I might not fuck the prom queen but who knows.

Thanks for the advice, i'll try and add more perspective work into it.

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>>2188442
Good and useful feedback again. Thanks! Rewardin one more pic of mine.

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back to work on this

>> No.2188552

>>2187857
>modified
>split in two
Jesus Christ...

>> No.2188554

>>2187334
>low test
HTAM reportan
breh
8x6
>>2187435
>I do like larger women and older chicks... Breasts can't be too saggy, and the fat chicks can't be obese or wrinkly.
We're brothers you and I.

>> No.2188555

>>2185038
>tfw you will never have sparkling jizz

>> No.2188630

New thread, please?

>> No.2188918

>>2188053
>>2188077
>>2188116
>>2188530
wow i really like your style but this isnt arousing at all

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>> No.2191003

>>2184708
those arms bother me so much