/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

A collab of everyone's wonderful drawings from last thread.

Some 2 min gesture attempts, did the autocolor thing in CSP to make it look at bit more nice.

>>7073705
And the pose for today is male this time around. Give it a try!

>>7073587
any anons kind enough to criticise my babby's first study of loomis heads?
>>7073706
very nice, anon! one of them (the one with the arms crossed above the person) kind of has a long torso but that might just be me. the colors indeed look purty

Guys I think we need to adapt with AI and I'm not baiting or trolling. I think if we "Learn" and to everything the old traditional way, at least if we want to make it into a job, there is no way around it now. Employers don't give a flying fuck on how you do it, they only want the result, the same thing with customers SADLY. I don't like it, but it's the way it is.

From now on I will do poses with AI and backgrounds. Now I am free to chose the best composition I have in my mind, because that was the thing I was the best at anyways. I will still draw on the faces and details of clothing etc, but the raw poses and background will get generated from now on. Hate on me all you want, but maybe direct the hate towards the jews that invented the tech and not us who need to adapt.

We don't care

>>7073711
bla bla bla DRAW!!!!!!!!!!! please

>>7073707
2 mins Vilpuu's method gesture.

What's a good reference for eyes? I just want a shit ton of different eyes in various styles to practice on

>>7073735
Pinterest is good

>7073711
>need to adapt
No, you need to draw.

>>7073739
I hate that site philosophically but I guess I need to stop fighting it

>>7073732
That's really good anon, do some more.

fuck you cocksucking nigger faggot

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XV_VCKQ8mj4

Rajy and Amane.

hey guys i started drawing a week ago.

>>7073762
bait?

>>7073764
Is it that bad?

>>7073765
im sorry

>I can see deep into your puzzled eyes....

I’m so upset i can’t draw tonight those fucking republicans are still supporting a convicted rapist who tried to take over the government that fucking bigoted piece pf should still has a shot at becoming president!

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=alxI8aqgDXQ

>>7073770
I'm going to ballot harvest for Trump now so he takes New York, in hopes you never draw again

>>7073780
that anon's a no-draw.

>>7073782
Proof it.

>>7073787
he said he can't draw tonight, can you read
'NUFF SAID

>>7073788
Cant argue there

>>7073788
but that just means he hasn’t drawn tonight, and for good reason. Have you ever gone a day without drawing?

>>7073788
Yeah, and he also says he won't draw for the thread. But guess what? He says that EVERY THREAD.

>>7073795
>for good reason

>>7073795
Only practitioners count, Picasso understood this. You miss a day, and already it's waddaya done for us lately. Debaters are usually just idea guys

>>7073801
>Only practitioners count, Picasso understood this
So was he for or against it?

>>7073806
It's in the John Richardson bio, I forget the context, but he was pissing on someone. Obviously he was prolific at painting, regardless of what anyone thinks of the results.

>>7073810
Lmao I know Picasso was a genius. He was mogging masters at 14 years old.
I just didn't understand the wording and what he meant by it.

>>7073811
It's been over a decade since reading it, but
possibly someone accused him of hemorrhaging artistically, and he didn't believe in holding back pieces to improve his catalogue.

>>7073744
TY! I'll try to do more!

what kind of jet mechanical pencil should i get?

Any tutorials for jawlines?

>>7073829
https://e-hentai.org/g/1439988/6607c46407/
Tutorial for everything manga

>>7073836
beautiful, thank youuu

>>7073818
>>7073819
cute

>>7073825
Let's ask Pawell!

>>7073829

>>7073769
>>7073777
アノンさんはリアリズムを描く才能に溢れている。あなたのおちんちをしゃぶりたい!

>>7073814
The Tansu one yeah I liked the final result of.

Unfortunately I couldn't find too many pics of Gaston from a full front view (most were at a 3/4 or otherwise angled view) and used a mixture of someone's fanart and the angled pics.

How do you make a 3/4 view head "pop"? Is the only way shading? Cause I guess I could practice that as well.

>>7073809
KAKIHARAAAA SO COOL NICE JOB ANON

I haven't been able to draw since I got a new job, I would like to practice painting digitally more

>>7073928
>How do you make a 3/4 view head "pop"? Is the only way shading? Cause I guess I could practice that as well.
I'm not the best at this (I am in the /beg/ thread after all), but from what I understand, shading's only one aspect to it. Remember that the face isn't a 2D plane but a 3D form. Drawing features according to how they're located on the form (for example, properly in perspective and correctly "wrapping" around the form) is another piece of the puzzle, imo.

any harsh critique here?

I've been digitally coloring for about three months or so, does anyone know how I can improve?

>>7073963
What specifically are you looking to improve?

>>7073964
The coloring

>>7073961
Skeleton's jaw looks a bit wide otherwise np

>>7073941
Hmm I'll have to try that some other time.

I've also been working through Proko's course on mannequinization. How's this look?

>>7073963
the problem with going all in the cartoony stuff is that it's very hard to suggest changes, as there's no way for us to envision your ideal work
perhaps chose an artist to emulate colouring from, and see what you can steal from them

>>7073707
I tried... it wasn't very good. But I did try

I draw without any guidelines. Does anyone on ic do his or I have to grind morbillion of boxes

>>7074003
Pic related

>>7073963
simple styles like this dont benefit from good coloring
learn better drawing and or more appealing styles not much you can do while drawing like a retard like this, nobody will take anything you do seriously

>>7074005
>it's morbin time

Nah you don't really need guidelines or loomis heads, you are what you practice, with enough work and study you can make great artwork without guidlines but the learning curve for making things proportionally/anatomically correct will be higher.

What I really think you should focus on is line quality and more specifically, good god anon why the fuck are you draw 20 fucking lines for a single shape when 1-3 would suffice. Your work is fine but it has this sketchy un-confidence to it. Please draw slower or create quick strokes one of the two if you can't draw an arm or a leg without spending 20 strokes, study the contours using photo reference and use as few lines as possible, if you mess up just start over, it'll help you a lot more

>>7074005
Are you the guy who did God creates Adam in the other thread?

>>7073762
Learn how to draw heads anon https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2T7cDY7YDsg

Drew a lot today on the couch. I need to practice hands but don't know how to go about it. Anyway i did 2 of these with a hard round brush and ima try more of that going forward. so i dont hide behind opacity and texture as much. it looks ROUGH but eventually it should get better i'm sure.

A simple tip to make drawings more dynamic?

Trying to give more movement to my doodles.

>>7074029
gesture line + composition.
just break down the scene into 9 boxes. like with a tictac toe pattern and put the focal points where the lines intersect.
on this one i'd zoomed out a bit you kinda have a nice curve going from her head to her foot but nothing is there at the end. maybe draw whoever she is running from all small down there. like she left them in the dust. also be more intentional with why her hair is sweeping, it can convey motion and such.

>>7073707
did Proko's mannequinization exercise on that pose

that far arm is tough man

wanted to know if anything looks badly off, or if there are still major mistakes in the anatomy.

I noodled on this for longer than i should i cant really tell anymore

>>7074068
the leg furthest from us is too long. the knee goes past the closer one. even with perspective/foreshortening it wouldnt be this much of a size diff.

>>7074065
holy fucking garbage
i wasnt aware that proko is in fact a hack
youre gonna need the Reilly method, my friend

I noticed for most Loomis 3/4 head drawings the ear goes all the way to the back end of the initial circle

However whenever I draw it the ear looks too long or large

Why is that?

>>7074083
The thing about loomis is that if you follow his method exactly your heads will never look like what you're referencing.

>>7074021
The what? This is the first time I post here

>>7074017
I think the reason I can't draw limbs in one stroke is because I kept going over the same line multiple times to get line weight for I'm using a shitty stylus that has no pressure built in to it

So I've got some feedback on /a/ and they said this looks too masculine

When drawing faces, what are ways to make the shape look more feminine? I think I should have made some edges softer here.

>>7074097
her jaw is huge

>>7074097
Strong brow ridge, chin juts out, long mid face

any way I can improve the composition here before I go any deeper? the right side is supposed to be a firing range at the other side of a river and I was gonna put some clothes/bags just by the tree to give something else to look at
>>7073961
wings feel a bit small; maybe the foreshortening on the neck of the dragon needs a touch to indicate the body is farther away, I know what you are going for but it doesn't feel like the head is approaching like it should, and the helmet proportions for the Witch-king feel a bit off, specially the spike at the top. other than than that cool scene, love it

Current study, wanted to highlight the use of simple shapes on the right side for anons who might struggle to break down references they like.

>>7074079
man whenever I'm on here one guy suggests one course/method, another guy suggests another course/method

>>7074114
Don't listen nor reply to crabs.
I would recommend sticking to prokos mannequinization method if it works for you. You will anyways tweak the method to fit your personal taste and make it yours down the line.
Avoid jumping around from resource to another. You'll be stuck in tutorial hell and feel loat, trust me on this.

>>7074097
why you make her into a tranny?

>>7074123
I don't draw women much

>>7074097
Hope that helps, im no anatomy god but I think it looks female enough

>>7074131
damn that was fast

yeah I think I made the brow too jutting and the chin too forward

good practice though and lesson for the future thanks

>>7074133
its not only that, you pretty much used one line for her chin and and the check bone on her left side, also the almond eyeshape takes out the perspective of her eyes, you also missed a part of the yaw I think that is called Condyle

>>7074137
>condyle
oh, like the jaw goes down a bit from the ear?
>you pretty much used one line for her chin and and the check bone on her left side
I see, so you recommend breaking it up into smaller lines?

>almond eyeshape takes out the perspective of her eyes
I see, I totally forgot about that. Thanks!

>>7074153
>>7074153
not smaller lines, but I draw a small bump where the chin begins to give the face more form, depending on what style you try to achieve this is probably not too important I guess

>>7073744
There you go
>>7073979
>>7074065
I think that your contruction is pretty good. The other anon is way too harsh imo. Have faith in your teacher. Too many cook spoil the broth anon.
>>7073983
I think that you have the form in mind but it look very stiff, and the proportion also need some improvement.

im working on a this kind of self portrait thing in mspaint, i’ll need to try it again later since this one has some errors but i like some parts and it’s practice . Cross hatching is pretty fun but i should really be more aware of the impression the direction the lines are giving i think. I’m kind of just winging it but it is fun and just practice (cope)

>>7074156
So I was googling references for eyes in the 3/4 view

I found this but I can't figure out the difference between the right one and wrong one. What is it?

>>7074161
Thanks, I did rewatch some videos and I think I should practice the knees and elbows more. Those parts are kind of hard for me to construct, I find torsos not that bad though

>>7074065
Don't listen to the other anon, he is a crab and a faggot. It's pretty good for a beg, but you should move on to drawing more organic forms, not just boxes.

>>7073698
I was wondering if the different objects in the composition(cliffsides, plants, trees, leaves, the figures in the center, etc.) are easy to identify just with the textures I used, or if I do need to add value and keep the linework in order for the forms of each object to be recognizable.

>>7074005
There are some days where I just blitz through a drawing but today it's a slog to get any progress at all, how do I speed up?

>>7074199
it refers to the angle created by the inset of the eyeline vs the sillouette
in the top one, the indent is aligned with the bottom of the top eyelash, while on the bottom one it's aligned with the bottom eyelash
probably train your observation more if stuff like this doesn't pop out immediately to you

>>7073707

cool pose. struggled mostly with the hands, the arm in the background, and proportion of the torso.

>>7074235
OH motherfucker I thought it was the actual EYE itself that was the "right vs wrong" thing, not the part of the skull near the eye

No wonder I couldn't find any difference between the top eyes and bottom eyes

>>7074240
nice, but the head is positioned wrong.

>>7074244

yeah, I can see it now. at the end of the construction phase, I didn't push the head down far enough. I selected the head and rotated it downward. however, I didn't pull it up and to the left to compensate. also noticing the shoulder girdle area is too narrow

>>7074246
>I selected the head and rotated it downward.
>”drawing”

>>7074282
>nooo don't use tools I don't approve
Retard craboid. Stop posting.

>>7074288
nta, but using those kind of tools is fine when drawing for fun or work with deadlines
not really that good for practice/studies

>>7074288
Imagine not being able to draw if I just unplug your computer.

>>7074296
>>7074293
>>7074282

I am the artist. it's my practice, I can do what I want. call it cheating, "drawing", or whatever you want. if you are offering critique on the final product like >>7074244, thank you. otherwise your opinion is just dust in the wind.

>>7074296
Imagine drawing. You could never

>>7074302
Okay but you replied getting assmad, so clearly even your subconscious knows you're cheating and that's why you lash out.

>>7074306
Unironically post your work

>>7074309
Hang on just gonna come up with a prompt first, technology is a tool right?

How do I draw furries having sex? If that's my goal in drawing what should my roadmap look like? I feel like I already have good observation skills

>>7074306

you would say that regardless of how I replied. I am annoyed - I won't even dispute that. it's a normal human emotion. that doesn't change the fact that nitpicking about tools is kicking up dust for the sake of getting it in your eye.

>>7074312

draw people having sex and anthropomorphize them? there's not really anyone can tell you otherwise. can you post your attempts to draw what you're trying to do?

>>7074312
Roadmaps are a begtrap
>excuse to procrastinate instead of just starting
>gives false dopamine rush where you conflate achieving something with thinking about achieving something
>shit never works out like you planned it so when you have to deviate from your roadmap you risk feeling like you failed and quitting.

>>7074315
Yeah, I can see what you mean. Should I just go for it?

>>7074313
>nitpicking about tools
Exactly what ai fags say, so you're no different.

Don't reply to this retard crab >7074320 he is here only for pointless arguments that waste everybody's time. Keep drawing

>>7074031
I got half of that but thanks for the feedback.

>>7074161
>I think that you have the form in mind but it look very stiff, and the proportion also need some improvement.
Thanks! Still trying to understand how to create a fluid gesture, and I'll try being more mindful of the proportions going forward

>>7074234
Two possible methods you want to try:
- Intentionally go as fast as possible - Be as loose as possible with your lines / shapes.
- "Slow is fast" approach: Don't worry about speed, but worry about getting things right on the first try: https://gm3.medium.com/slow-is-smooth-smooth-is-fast-1c33b37a5960
idk which one will work better for you, but you should try it out. Another thing you could do is mentally time yourself on each part of the image and then see what takes the longest. Then, start trying to get faster at the longest task

I’m not going to draw today.

>>7074355
Enjoy your break!

>>7074110
Imma call this one done, the paper doesnt take ink very well so I'll keep it as a sketch

>>7074029
loomis creative illustration.

Practiced hands today

>>7074365
>loomis

Did another study. Maybe will draw another one or two heads

>>7074363
Great stuff, like everything except for the sword comes across a bit flat compared to the rest of the drawing.

>>7074372
Worded it wrong I mean I like everything about it except the sword.

>>7074370
creative illustration is not the heads and the hands is about creating illustrations, basically what >>7074031 said. I think is his best book, I don't like the loomis method for constructing the head btw.

>>7074371
Really racist giving him larger nose and mouth like that, check your privilege anon.

>>7074381
>Look at first drawing
>"Jesus christ is it fucking Quasimodo?"
>Look at the reference
Lmao.

>>7074382
pffff, yeah i'm definitely not used to doing real life subjects let alone stuff with Proko

>>7074381
Why are you being a constructoid at your level? Just draw for a bit then come back to shit like this.

>>7073698
my second ever digital drawing and my first drawing on phone what do u guys think ? was a bit hard because I had to zoom in rly much otherwise I couldn't draw the lines correctly took me like 40 mins

I thought about opening some online accounts and start doing more digital drawings as a hobby who knows maybe someday I can make some money from this..

>>7074376
I think i made it even worse trying to fix it.

>>7074388
>Why are you being a constructoid at your level?
i've been a constructoid for years (mainly just for degenerate coom drawings), i only started doing it seriously with real people cause i figured it'd be a nice skill to have.
but i will keep drawing anyways, thanks

>>7074389
Looks cool, but airbrush actively makes it worse

>>7074398
Ait know I now you're baiting would be more believable if you didn't upload /prebeg/ level stuff while claiming to have been drawing for years.

>>7074410
damn my shit's that bad?
shoulda specified i've been on and off art and not actually drawing consistently with the intent to improve, just doodles. my fault OG

>>7074354
Now that I think of it, I shouldn't have spend that much time drawing those swastikas thanks

>>7074381
I hate this place, but you guys make want to draw everyday

>>7073705
I'm sorry

>>7074381
you are drawing small and focusing on details too much, start blocking the face and its mask first make the head feel 3d first forget about the details for now.

>>7074434
>lined paper
you should be sorry

>>7073707
Any good guides on coloring?
I wanna try coloring this but no idea how to start.

>>7073707
>>7074434
First day on da job
Why is drawing so hard

>>7074442
nice, good reminder that the proportion of the top of the knee to toes (in plantar flexion) is similar to pit of the neck to the pubic bone.

>>7074442
Looks good. What's the photo pack?

>>7074454
from this one >>7073847
it's a very nice set

Can I get a critique?

>>7074471
nice ass

>>7074393
Another one

>>7074458
thanks

>>7074430
t-thanks

>>7074435
mmm okay, i'll look into doing blocking in things tomorrow

>>7073874
Beautiful. Love the inner ear. I should use the Hi-Uni more often, this was with a .7mm

>>7074026
Very nice
>>7074363
Sick

>>7074478
Anons how many heads yall recommend to draw for a day?

>>7074371
I gave it a shot. Def think the lips can be placed proportionally without looking too exaggerated

>>7074521
Lips look better than mine. For some reason i keep making lips and nose bigger than eyes

i can't find any good references for back of foot in socks. i don't know how to get the shape right and also struggling with the folds. if anybody has any references or advice its very appreciated

>>7074471
Right arm's looking a little stiff. Otherwise, great job

>>7074478
More

>>7074511
as many as you can i guess, the more you draw to better you get if you analyze for mistakes

>>7074471
you are on the right path but I would change the right arm a little
the coom is a pathway to many abilities some consider to be unnatural...
embrace it

I feel like I'm so close to getting something and leveling up but I'm just not quite there, it almost feels like an itch I can't scratch in my brain.

>>7073908
*books flight*

>>7073707
Here

>>7073979>>7074029

Needs more gesture lines

>>7074110
Cool, but its hard to tell wether the guy is facing front or backwatds, you should make the shadows harder

>>7074567
The idea is that she is lifting her dress. but yeah it does look a bit forced with that angle, im trying to come up with a more natural way for this future coomer girl to present herself.

>>7073698
this is a WIP for my job

>>7074607
might as well just use AI for stuff like this.

>>7074609
why?

>>7074610
Ignore the shitposters

I feel like I went a bit overboard with the cross hatching.

>>7074645
pay more attention to what you're seeing
some of the angles/tilts/proportions are completely off

>>7074026
>>7074585
>>7074567
Hey good shit, and based redliner. Here's what I'm working on, I'm thinking about inking it and then experimenting with watercolors or markers.

>>7074026
gimmie your secrets to drawing the booba

>>7073707

>>7074652
I know. I'm trying to get it right the first try with the hard round brush, so a lot of stuff looks off. I wonder how long it takes on average to get good at observational drawing.

can someone please redline the shading on the yellow part under her tits its been driving me fucking insane

Did about eight gestures today. I kind of liked a few of em, there's some proportional errors but overall I think I did okay for my level (bottom leg is forshortened just fyi)

>>7074665
Just think of bags of sand.

Hard brushes are hard. I'm temporally retreating to a soft brush.

>>7074763
>temporally
this nigga drawing in the sprit realm

Are most of you drawing digitally? I'm two weeks into learning to draw and I'm finding it difficult to get the lines/curves I want. Are most of you guys abusing CTRL-Z? Or is it practice? Or maybe I need to do shorter lines/curves?

>>7074790
>I'm two weeks into learning to draw
there's your problem
it's just practice and remember you can probably rotate the canvas in whatever drawing software you're using to help you with thise difficult angles

>>7074790
if you got some paper laying around, you can tape it onto the tablet, if it's screen less. gives you some friction to work with

>>7074790
that's normal, pen control takes a while to develop
you can do the drawabox autism exercises or just draw more to improve dexterity

What style of painting is this? How do I copy it?

>>7074805
It’s called the vanillaware house style you fucking weeb nigger.

>>7074805
It's called free of westoid taint

>>7074553
Why did you make him look like such a huge chad.
Also how are you drawing these. Construction or just no method whatever?

>>7074792
>>7074801
Alright I'll keep at it. I was thinking maybe there's some common noob trap when it comes to it. Like in FPS games people focus more on flicking their aim as opposed to crosshair placement or something idk. I'll just put in the time

>>7074799
I'll give this a try to see if I like it.

>>7074670
>can't draw a man that is stronger than himself. Afraid and jelous of stronger male's masculinity.
Beta male behaviour.

>>7074816
>>7074819
That's very fucking interesting but you and your boyfriend mind answering me while you're taking a break in sodomizing eachoter?

i love sodomy

>>7074841
Sir. This is a Wendy's.

>>7074843
I love sodomozing hot and juicy redheads.

>>7074805
that's just vanillaware/george kamitani's art
the artbook for odin sphere is also nice, you can find it if you search around the arbook thread

>>7074838
He did answer. He just wasn't polite about it. Which shouldn't surprise you, considering where we are. Have you considered not being so thin skinned?

>flip the image
>it looks better
Is that a sign I'm finally going to make it?

>>7074867
>how do I do this
>fuck off
>You're a fag
>UMAD THIN SKINNED WER DO U DINK WE R SEKRIT CLUBBBB???!!!
Is this board all filled with pretend middle school bullies like this faggot?

>>7074890
What exactly did you expect?

>>7074858
I know who kamitani is
The pic I used is another guy that's probably have absorbed part of kamitani style working with him at vanillaware for years
They're still somewhat similar
What kind of painting is that? I doubt that I can copy it with just an hard brush, how can I replicate it?

>>7074893
Eh, actually exactly this but I'm always too optimistic

>>7074890
Ask google next time, you won't get so butthurt when you get a direct answer there

>>7074895
apart from the smoke texture, there's nothing in the original picture that would require a fancy brush
just hard round with pressure opacity

>>7074899
Retardo

>>7074903
>It's called vanillaware style
>more buzzword meaningless shit
What answer
Vanillaware is not a style of painting
You just have no fucking idea I guess, I should had checked the images posted before talking
How fucking sad

>>7074161
picrel >>7073847
>>7074346
:)

>>7074915
Save your crying and post your attempt at trying it first, "how do I copy this?" is a silly howie question. No one here has the time or knowledge to give you step by step instructions on some specific dude's art style, we're just here to critique and give advice.
So pyw.

>>7073707
It's over

>>7074917
>>7074942
It's never over. Just watch more tutorials and practice until you get it right.Pay attention to how the artist draw their figure/gesture.
Beginners are supposed to make mistakes anon.

I'm not feeling the Loomis form.
I'll stick with it but it's way harder than the Blook said it would be.

Kinda happy with today

how do I begin with boxing in the head

>>7074945

am I gonna make it

>>7074958

>>7074958
>>7074978
good stuff. when you said it's the "villpu method" what do you mean by that? my gesture could use some work

I've been trying to practice figure drawing recently. Any advice on what I should adjust before I start drawing the clothes?

>>7074980
Go to a regular life drawing session with the longest poses you can find and try to work from observation as much as possible

>>7074978
>Vipuu's Gesture
Ask around the video course thread for the link. There should be 4-5 videos where he teaches/shows you how to draw these.
The main point is not accuracy but capturing the pose, feeling the flow of the body.
You use curvy lines to capture the flow and then use countour lines to show the form and direction of the body parts. Also, learn contrapposto(balancing the body) and a little bit of mesurement when drawing these :)

>>7074997
Meant for this >>7074979

Trying gesture for the first time with Brent. This is kinda hard. Always feel like I'm running out of space too. Maybe I should do this on printer paper too instead

>>7073963
make the eyes the brightest part, they're the focal point

>>7075041
>27
Bruh... don't tell me there's more pages of just this

I wish I could do studies faster, this took me like 4 hours to do

Anyways, I'd appreciate any advice as far as the drawing itself, the color choices, and the shading techniques, since I'm still really new to colors/shading, and i'm still not good at drawing things on their own

i notice my face shape is too short, and i made the body too long

guess i just gotta keep practicing

>>7074820
No construction
Just drew him with straights starting from hair to face

>>7075057
? It's an assignment for the first lesson anon, what else do you want me to do? They were 30 seconds each. I do think I'll switch to printer paper for this though because it's a waste of sketch book paper

>>7075087
He's a good teacher anon. Have faith in your teachers, and follow the course till the end. I love watching him drawing birds.

>>7075087
You're not doing anything wrong. Don't know what the other guy is on about. Though yes as you said, don't waste sketchbook on shit like this for practice, at least for simpler stuff like action lines. I'm pretty sure Brent himself recommends newsprint because it's cheap but printer paper works fine too

How do you fuck the snout?

>>7075111
I do not fuck snouts

>>7075083
Looking at tutorials and i see that possibly i am using wrong approach or misunderstood this one. Apparently in other tutorials where straights are used are either more visual focusing on shadow shapes or have more construction which i both lack

Came back to playing around after spending one month sick. As such I'm still incompetent and still can't draw a circle, I've come to realize that my doodles are improving bit a bit, or at least I feel more comfortable in doing so. The scorpion and centipede were the actual studies I did today.
Weirdly, the second advice from >>7069826 is important as hell. If you feel that your drawings are stiff or your hands aren't working well while studying, spend a hour or more doodling whatever your head can think of. Make your arm move without any topic at mind for a while.

>>7073707
i look like this

made this for a lady on hinge lol

Advice? Resources?

>>7075197
Your brush strokes feel tight and rigid, yet you overlap them over and over.
Be more confident- don't use 20 strokes where one is enough, and try to be more fluid (Even if you feel like this will make more mistakes)

Can I get critique please? I feel torso area is kinda weak and so is the arm, but maybe thats the lack of shading still.
Does the butt look appealing or nice?

>>7075197
Work on drawing photo figures at different speeds and at different time limits

1 or 2 a day will build up skills
Pose
https://quickposes.com/en/gestures/timed
https://www.quickposes.com/en
http://reference.sketchdaily.net/en
https://quickposes.com/en/gestures/random
https://www.characterdesigns.com/non-nude-photo-index
https://www.lovelifedrawing.com/tutorials/
https://app.posemy.art/
https://line-of-action.com/practice-tools/hands-feet-practice

>>7075199
good advice too, there's nothing wrong with rigid or scratchy lines but it should be a deliberate artistic choice rather than a bad habit made out of lack of ability to do anything else

>>7074837
You sound very homosexual
I petsonally think being a beta and getting a crumb of pussy ocasionally is better than being gay
Also I pay for hookers ocasionally since I'm like 3 years into an incel life arc

>>7075208
>>7075199

Thank you

Currently skipping around various beginners books (Fun with a pencil, How to draw comics the Marvel way etc.) and drawing whatever seems interesting. I think drawing from life will be helpful.

Rigid and scratchy lines are definitely out of bad habit (because I have to work to do otherwise) and not an intended element of style.

>>7075215
>petsonally
>crum of pussy
>calling people gay as a insult
LMAO. You do be sounding like a weak will cuck. I bet you can't even look at your dick while peeing. Unlike you I draw both men and women just like the rest of the people itt.

>>7075221
You are a homo, my gaydar is never off

>>7075224
>gaydar
Only gay man has gaydar lmao. So you are a closet homo projecting and overcorrecting by drawing female? Dang. I accept you anon. You are valid :)
be honest though, will it kill you to draw a man?

>>7075229
Yes

>>7075229
My nigdar says your a Jew.

why we angry

>>7075235
Your coomer art will be dog shit then.
>Here are my prophecies:
You will draw men with women proportions, and child-bearing hips
You will draw vague male figure as dick stand.
You will draw ugly pencil dicks
No one will pay for your garbage porn.

>>7075242
He wants good dicks. What a fag.

>>7075244
Have you heard of futanari?

>>7074963
Just keep trying anon, if you don't quit you're most likely gonna make it

>>7075244
Who doesn't want a good big beautifull juicy dick?
Every man wants to have one.
Every woman wants to suck on them.

>>7075249
Everyone likes gay porn! It transcends all demographics.
Young people, old people, gay people, straight people!
But this guy r e a l l y likes it

>>7075087
I'm not mad at the practice, I'm baffled you're wasting sketchbook paper by drawing them so big you only get 5 of them on one page. Use that printer paper.

>>7075250
I bet your GAYDAR is tingling right now. The pot calls the kettle black.

>>7075256
So you admit you're gay?
So brave

>>7075257
You are gay. gaydar man!

>>7074161
>I think that your contruction is pretty good. The other anon is way too harsh imo. Have faith in your teacher. Too many cook spoil the broth anon.
thanks

>>7074224
yeah I think I'll try drawing the actual figure now with the details

I think I'll start with a straight on pose and then trying some other poses after

Wanted to make more deliveries but barely managed to sketch out this one.
Realizing I can't make the sweater ribs follow the breast volume makes me realize how trash I am.

>>7075206
I gave it a try, but to be honest I'm not sure about this one, especially since the shoulder area feels wonky to me

really don’t understand how to draw a hood getting hard filtered by 3d space and clothing folds again I think her eyes might be too wide set as well

bros...

>>7074101
>>7074104
>>7074131
I tried the 3/4 view again

I tried pulling the brow ridge back, making the midface a little bit shorter, though I think the chin still juts out a little too much

Does this look more feminine?

>>7075314

>>7075324
Thank u anon I am once again in debt to your genius

pawell is a slacker.

>>7073707
Very much /beg/ here, I realised I fucked up the right leg, and there is some stuff to be said about the head and neck connection to the torso. However that’s all I can think of when I examine it. Anybody else have better advice? I’m looking to improve my ability to reference, so if anybody has any tips for deconstructing, or similar, please do share.

>>7075320
Where can I masturbate to more of your work?

crispy bacon, lmao.

>>7075338
huh, good point yeah I should add that little point to the lip

and the tip of nose being higher up is a good idea too

>>7075344
Answer my question anon, you wouldnt like her when she's angry.

>>7075348
there is no place you can masturbate to more of my work

I don't post it online except here

>>7074501
>>7074661
thank you guys :))
>>7074665
kinda what the other guy said. think of sandbags? or you can do kinda a heart shaped coming down from the neck you know this sorta shape <3. you can use that to start out. but also i'd suggest looking at artists who draw sexy boobs and see what they kinda do? referencing irl stuff doesnt really help for drawing boobs imo. cause the imagined boobs are way plumper and nicer than the average real life boob. like yeah there are some great boobs irl too but much rarer than finding great drawn ones ya know?

>>7074567

You have some placement issues in some of these. Most noticeably in the necks. You're moving it too far back from the pit of the clavicles. Most of your drawing is fine, I quite like the shape and overall feel of the breasts. The other problems I have with it are the placement of the breast furthest from us, her arm and the stomach.

First, that breast isn't quite hanging from the ribcage, it should be closer to her torso. This isn't a torpedo breast issue either considering raita always has the lower portion of the breast swoop back into the torso.

The arm you drew has a bit of an awkward structure to it. You've over emphasized the medial epicondyle of the humerus, this stops my eye movement briefly at that point rather than continuing down the flow of the arm. Look at some of Keane's Tarzan drawings, observe the variety of straight and curves making the arm's contour more interesting to follow.

The stomach is a difficult connection to draw. From the belly button downward, there 2 mounds, one above the abdominals and another by the crotch. This cause a curve, then a straight into another curve (outlined in blue).

>>7075394
me in the upper right

alright is there any way i can make this hand look less retarded

the top 3 lines got fucked up somehow.. rip.

idk man I don't know if copying references is helping me. I can't tell what difficulty I should be at or if I'm improving.

>>7075440
zoom zoom

learning to render

>>7075474
learn more

Why is it so hard to just draw what's in front of me?

I bet i won’t draw at all this week!

>>7075162
>>7075166
>>7075014
>>7075016
You still haven't learned appeal or how to finish an image.

>>7075410
are you going to reply all thread again

>>7075305
Thanks. looks more natural than mine, ill take some notes.

>>7075539
that wasn't me dude those were two other people arguing over a redraw of what i posted. i only replied once to thank the people who have me advice.

>>7075535
nta but how would you even learn appeal when you have poor taste?

>>7074302
>beg
>already this arrogant
ngmi

>>7074567
You ever draw anything other than that one anime girl with balloon tits? What are you a Marc Brunet student?

>>7075576
Why would you draw anything else.

>>7075474
Really nice

>>7075248
thanks I've been seeing improvement for like days and it's been motivating but I think I'm at the level that the graph mentioned, where you think You're stuck but I'm not

at the 30th day I'm gonna start inking drawings with pen

>>7075551
How do you learn good taste, then?

>>7075595
same question.

>>7075598
So it’s literally impossible for him to improve. I guess that explains things.

>>7075601
Maybe. I for sure dont have the answer, I was just wondering if someone else had.

>>7073979
feel ze forms study ze forms, learn ze forms, use ze forms, using manequins is only for NGMI's

>>7075644
Looking better!

>>7075644
Just let him finishes the damn Proko lesson. If he sees no improvement, he would change the method on his own time. You don't have to nag him.

>>7075659
fuck off Stan

>>7075667
>SAAR DO NOT REDEEM THE AI SAAR PLEASE YOU NEED TO DRAW SAAAAR

>>7073698
Using the cognitive drawing technique from Jason Brubaker that redline anon recommended. Find it interesting that you get instant feedback and long term memory of the little details, but I'm still finding it hard to get the proportions right. I keep drawing wide and the angle feels off... Also I forgot to finish the damn hat. How many attempts should I give this before trying something else do you think? What other mistakes am I not seeing?

What makes a compelling futa OC Donut?
Still working on this piece of trash...

I draw wood guy

I just ralized that coloring and appeal is 90% of what makes art looks good. Fuck gesture and anatomy desu.

>>7075783
LOL
Good luck.

>>7075783
Beauty is in the eye of the beholder.

>>7074389
Im the guy who drew this cat

Now I tried to draw diagonese the greek philosoph but I kinda messed up the face so I might make some prehistoric hunter in the jungle instead or try to draw a new face dunno no hands and feet yet couse I dont know how to draw them will learn it tomorrow and continue on this piece what do u guys think for now ? I'm proud of how I drew the muscles

>>7074567
>>7075394
Im cumming
where can I masturbate more of your work???
I'm cumming

>>7075826
You just caved in his braincage.

why the fuck do my wacom drivers just randomly stop working?

>>7075826
head seems kinda wonky, same with the right eye + nose. outside of that you did pretty good with the muscles. seeing as you just started, I'd personally recommend the books in the OP guide, especially the ones dedicated to removing symbolic drawing. Should help you get more accurate results if you do the exercises in them. There's also pic related which is basically the same as one of the exercises from the book which should help you get past symbol drawing. Hoping it goes well for you, anon!

>>7075925
>>7075925
>>7075925
new cope I mean beg
>>7075925

>>7075875
Do you have multiple drivers installed?

>>7075495
i think this is pretty good

>>7075921
Thank you for this will definitely try it out also very interesting the whole symbolic drawing thing now that I heard about it I think I do tend to think in symbols when drawing rather than shapes

>>7073698
some one help me with this and awkward pose in general