/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

New stuff.

>>6951985
blog?

>>6951958
Sauce?

>>6951985
good work, personally would pair her with her brother but I am a weirdo.

My animation I did for my commissioner ranked 88th in Pixiv day's animations :3 First time my work got ranking notification from Pixiv

>>6951985
>>6952673
>click on /salt/
>remember why I don’t look at /salt/

Shading is so fucking difficult bros, been a year and I still struggle so much with it and painting in general. Picking colors for skin and shading skin is my biggest source of stress when drawing something new and I hate using the multiply blend mode crutch

>>6952682
Sexual insecurity?

>>6952005
>>6952011

Me, I drew it in a previous general

>>6952856
sry, tagged the first anon by mistake

>>6952856
Good work

>>6952673
So now you are drawing pedo shit too?

>>6951985
i fail to understand why you post a commission here, spergatorio-kun.

>>6952926
To inspire beginners and to get some non sugar coated crits from people that can see mistakes I missed.
Any more stupid questions?

>>6951985
this is really good but I feel like the perspective is very slightly off. I could be wrong about that though

>>6952925
honey is older than haruhi lol

>>6952937
based

>>6952937
Nice and based.
You inspired me to go look up the archives for all your previous inspirations.

>>6952856
blog?

>>6952803
No - faggotry. Also
>still pushing the insecurity meme after 2 decades of it not sticking

Bros, how should I fix these boobs? Honestly I don't like how they look so unappealing. Can you help me?

>>6952673
>>6953058
>Ouran highschool host club
Talk about unrecognizable had you not said the name I wouldn't know it was them.

>>6954100
Make them show more of the movement getting fucked with either 2 phantom images of them being at their lowest and highest point in the arc or have the boob linework itself showing the boobs affected by the movement. Also you can try going for more stylized and more appealing form for them

>>6954112
But they look OK? Sorry, I didn't explain better, but my concern is if the tits are drawn correctly. I'm having problems in this angle, maybe I'm deluding myself idk. Not an initial reference but this Pic I think depicts better how the tits folds around the sides and the position of the nipple. Although my torso is slightly tilted and also I'm not sure how big should be the right boob.

>>6954124
>>6954112
Another reference

>>6954124
They look anatomically passable, like yeah, they are tits. But there's no sexual appeal in them. I would try different kind of approach in them to bring them more into focus and being the appeal factor of getting fucked like that. in your example pic the tits are put more on pedestal to be the center of the focus. In your WIP the tits are just there

>>6954100
I think the bottom of the breasts need to be higher and the line needs to be flattened out.

webcomic girl ass

>>6954106
well i'm not aiming to hit the ouran style but to draw the characters in mine

>>6952673
Honey Sempai looks ridiculously stupid

>>6955472
Guy on left has a weird pac-man mouth. There's no sense of dynamic interaction between characters, they're like stiff planks leaning against each other.

ass, its a little dull though

>>6954124
>>6954128
the torso and angle in both of these references are far different from yours. In your sketch, the torso is pushed outwards making the tits stretched and protruding. In the references, the torso is folded inwards and the angle is from a lower, closer perspective, making the tits look flacid. I think the main issue with your sketch is the torso, it's wide and long, making the tits look unproportionate. The other issue is that they're too defined, making them look too firm. Try something like this instead, personally I find it more appealing this way

i made this to fire myself from the hentai art collective i was "Working" with. I hated them man

>>6955548
Do you guys think the hand on the left is too small? I can't tell.

>>6956293
not really but rei is way too big

>>6952673
those posts always fill me with dread
this is somewhat normal looking at least

>>6956119
This is inspired art, you should join our discord

>>6952550
Thank you.
I love your work. Big fan for a few years now.

not gonna lie this board sucks. stop drawing futanari and anal shit.

>i need a brush to get that anime feel for rendering.
part 1

part 2

i don't need critique on this, just worth sharing.

>>6956641
>stop drawing futanari and anal shit.
Fuck off to some safe space, snowflake.

>>6957462
You do know you calling him snowflake is not an insult. That's his actual name.

I need a bit of help here. Like for example with the knees and I don't know If its good enough in general.
Any help is welcomed.

>>6956473
like wise, and coming from you its really humbling, I appreciate it.

>>6951958
I'm probably never ever gonna finish this, its like a year old, and i abandoned my coom account, but I wanted to post it somewhere because i'm a bit proud of how it turned out.

My initial attempt at drawing nsfw

>>6958720

Storyboard of part of my next comic update

>>6960289

Lineart question. When drawing a standing woman from the side dead-on, how do you get the hips on the far side into the picture? Normally I just draw an obtuse angle for the ilium at the top of the thigh, but I have no idea how to draw the hip meat from that angle. Trying to draw women breast-to-breast so I don't want to cheat the angle.

>>6956641
>>6957462
Behave.

>>6960188
Thanks anon! This helped me a lot

>>6955548
Very nice !
Do you have any socials or gallery ?

>>6951985
nice to see you around still. I don't know how you still draw porn, I did it for a while and made a little money then quit because I was just getting grossed out and lost all motivation to draw anything that wasnt porn.

I liked Modeseven for quite a while as well and learned to draw from him a bit. Eventually he degenerated into really nasty shit like all of the porn artists seem to after a while, it's unfortunate. Hope your brain isn't too rotten, you seem to make a nice living off of it which is good.

I miss the sizefag anons, they were all scared off after the mega crab /salt/ thread that happened

>>6961076
nice titties and all but i find the blocky style /sex/ier, nice forms and foreshortening.

>>6958837
>>6952550
hot, please share blog

>>6961377
They’d have stuck around if you weren’t such a piece of shit.

I got praised by softshikioni. But I honestly don't give a fuck anymore. And actually despise it now. Social media has made me bitter. Is this a normal reaction?

>>6961643
No. You should KYS.

>>6961661
That's not what your mom said last night... fuckhead!...

<yo momma's teeth so yellow. I can't believe it ain't butter.

I think it's alright, would try to change the lines of the floor just to match the perspective.

>>6961422
I hear ya. Trying to experiment with styles and stuff. Trying not to rely on any one thing as a crutch rn. But wanna use those simplifications of shapes in certain areas

>>6951985
I remember seeing your art when I was literally in the middle school. Now I've graduated from college and trying to become coom artist too

>>6951958
This is a drawing I started yesterday and finished today. I heavily reffed a piece by an artist called Pokkopit. This is probably my first time drawing coom in digital. Although the lineart was trad.

>>6963866

>>6963615
Good luck young friendo. Porn can be a harsh business. Try to always stay true to yourself.

>>6951958
Still early on this work, but I'm happy I gave my oc her nose back. : )

>>6956397
iaight link

Any advice on shading really fat fucking areolae and nipples?

i fuckiung love tits and women

>>6966000
Literally me If I was a woman. Also, nice trips.

>>6966000
Checked, least titpilled /ic/ poster

>>6966000
That's a great attitude anon. Now you just need to learn how to draw.

>>6966000
Based and titpilled

Need to expand my roster

>>6963866
>>6957901
Same guy?

>>6951985
enjoy burning in hell

>>6966818
Nope but appreciate goblin posting regardless

quick study

>>6966949
unhinged but well done
>>6967125
Nice. The porn you will draw will be epic

I love how everyone still calls this place /salt/

>>6967157
>control+f
>three replies mentioning old name

ok, take 2

>>6966991
kek
imagine believing in such nonsense

>>6966949
Penis attachment is usually at the same height as the bottom of a person's butt.

>>6966949
The base of the penis is at the same height as the bottom of the gluteus maximus.

>>6962707
Done I think. I don't want to obsess anymore with this drawing. Feel free to leave criticism.

>>6967328
It looks really good, honestly. Bringing the crease down on the breast tissue made them look a lot more natural. I have a humble request to increase the dilation of the pupils. Something about the (her) right pupil looks a little... soulless?

>>6967333
Sure anon. Ng, sometimes I like my girls with her eyes lost.

How do some of you guys go about draw the breasts, ass, and vagina

>>6967338
*Ngl
Whoops

>>6967333
>>6967338
This is not how you fix the scared/surprised look.
You just need to add a shadow between the pupil and the upper eyelid.

>>6967365
Oh damn, thanks anon. I didn't try it because I haven't done my eyes' reps.

>>6967338
Thank you, anon. Eyes are such a huge physiological indicator of various states of arousal, sexual or not. Historically, it even went as far as using atropa belladonna drops (now just pharmaceutical atropine) to dilate the pupils for a more striking and attractive appearance.

>>6967356
There we go. It's all in the look. There's more of a gleam of anticipation there now.
>>6967365
No, he did what I asked. It wasn't a look of fear/surprise that I meant, just specifically pupillary dilation.

>>6967365
Legit the most useful thing I read on ic in a year.

>>6966818
They’re both shit permabegs, so why not?

>>6952550
>>6958837
Only art with even an ounce of sex appeal ITT

>>6967592
You forgot about my post.

>>6967911
No I didn't.

Don't mind the weird composition. It's meant to be cropped and have an animated camera pan.
Any weird stuff going on with the anatomy? I always fuck up open crotches like this.

any advice? this just feels off
it's supposed to look like something that would be on the front of a magazine

>>6968024
Looks fine to me. I'm prebeg btw

>>6968024
Have you tried looking at magazine covers and check what might be helpful to your vision?
Kind of difficult to help with this very specific thing

>>6968039
I've used references but couldn't find one matching exactly what I wanted, I guess I was just asking if there was anything way off anatomically or if there were ways i could improve the pose, not specifically with help on how to make it look like that.

>>6968024
I would just rotate the figure a bit clockwise. She's falling on her butt.
Love the lineart btw.

>>6968023
Love the details like the bracelets around her ankles.
Give the guy a brow ridge didn't realize he was a dude at first.
Unless you wanna keep him feminine.
I'd place the vagina like pic related.
Her pushing it up a bit into his tongue.
The butthole and vagina are too close to each other imo.

>>6968055
Nice. I had the feeling the vulva should be higher up, but wasn't sure. Thanks a lot for the redline.

>>6968055
nta but this "redline" sux mad dick, no offense

>>6968012
yes, you did anon.

>>6968024
More movement in the clothes
Her left arms seem to be too long her hand comming to her knees if she extends it.

>>6968072
thank you, that helps a lot

>>6968062
>>6968073
Glad I could help lads.
>>6968066
I know but the advice is good I think.

>>6968066
Lines might be rough, but he conveyed the message perfectly imo.

>>6968023
Nice nice nice lines
I was wondering, do you draw with a screeen tablet?

>>6968023
is this bbcchan?

>>6968055
Ty again for the heads up. I think this is better, but I probably exaggerated the spread too much.
I have to sleep over it.

>>6968153
Yup.

>>6968169
Shhhh, you're going to summon the crazy guy.

Shes supposed to have 4 arms but I completely forgot that during sketching.

>>6956641
Blog? would love to see this colored, very hot

>>6968209
Another variant.

>>6968301
extremely nice expressions

>>6968301
>that Grand Canyon cleavage gap
>those patented Seinfeld man hands
>still drawing vaginal openings where a urethra belongs
>that down syndrome expression on her face
> That DisneyPlus expression on that guy's face eating that urethra up
Keep going, Corey. You truly are, the Comeback King...

>>6968209
>Shhhh, you're going to summon the crazy guy.
Called it.

>>6968403

>>6968374
PYW

>>6968374
Man I wish somebody was this critical about my work, BBC doesn't know how good he has it.

>>6968440
Do you seriously consider that to be good critique? To me it sounds like bitter BS from someone with a personal vendetta.

>>6968447
Some of his points are valid, like how the breasts are too far apart.

>>6968023
Here are my 2 cents
Love your art btw

>>6968289
Blog got discontinued due to low motivation and not enough people. I'm only posting on Patreon and Reddit now. Starting my new art career on Roblox and Fortnite. Thanks for showing interest.
>picture related...

>>6968289
Blog got discontinued due to low motivation and not enough people. I'm only posting on Patreon and Reddit now. Starting my new art career on Roblox and Fortnite. Thanks for showing interest.
>picture related...

>>6968374
Corey is being nitpicky but yeah, fix that pussy, but yah that's a hard pose.

>>6968435
>pic related
>>6968440
Show me which one's yours and I'll tell you what's wrong with it. Just don't cry like a little bitch, fix your shit and take the critique on the chin like a man. I critique from experience, I was around when Corey got his shit torn up, back when the Porn Thread had BALLS to call out the mistakes instead of handing out participation trophies like it's fucking devinatArt.
>>6968544
Corey won't fix it, he'll just harpy some 41 year old faggot excuse and keep drawing. Granted that's a hard pose, but that dumbass could have easily spread her right leg out, which would have made more sense to accommodate that pose. Bring your feet in almost sitting Indian style and tell me with a straight face your pussy pops like that.
>>6968531
And you can tell the blind LOVE leading the blind here. Atta boy kiddo, the GUY'S the problem. Jesus fucking Christ.

>>6968611
>DevinaART
Checked and self wrecked lmao

>>6968611
>Show me which one's yours
The link still works. >>6966445

>>6968611
Doesn't kill to start off on polite grounds, unless you're one of those top critics whose entire livelihood depends solely on how hypercritical you can be

Bitch

>>6968611
>>pic related
As expected.
>the blind LOVE leading the blind here
Indeed.

>>6968617
It's clear this guy is assblasted and has a personal vendetta. Expecting any politenes from the likes of him is nonsense.

>>6968625
That's not where the pussy is.

>>6968785
>That's not where the pussy is.

>>6968531
Appreciated!

>>6968374
Why would he listen to your "critique" when it's clear you have a personal agenda and vendetta against him.
For all he knows you might be justr trying to sabotage him.
That's the issue with your attitude and why people like you can't be taken seriously here.
I don't disagree on some of the points you made, but it's obvious you are nitpicking mistakes with the only intent of making him look bad.
It's to be expected that people won't listen to you smelling your own farts.

>>6969075
This. There's also been a lot of vendettafagging going around as of late.

>>6955512
>trying to give advice to the guy who famously ignores all advice
just let him stagnate

>>6969731
how about you STFU faggot

>>6968374
>>6968611
this you right?

>>6968301
I really like this version, but its more like a second image in this sequence.

>>6967592
I feel like you are trying to get me in trouble, huh.

>>6966949
its not something I am into but I thought this turn out pretty well, in particular the coloring work with line quality.

>>6969810
>>6961467
forgot, its ac120 on baraag and tumblr.

>>6951985
I wish I could draw this good in general.

>Y-you are stagnating!!1
he cries after wasting years to try stir shit in these threads.

Maybe it's you who's stagnating?

>>6969859
Touched a nerve, did I?

>>6969811
>>6969810
I barely recognized your style chief
It felt vaguely like you, but I wasn't sure

>>6969810
>I really like this version, but its more like a second image in this sequence.
These are frames for a visual novel with minimal animation. The whole game revolves around this kind of variants.
It looks lazy as it is now, but the end result is much more varied.
>>6969810
>>6969811
Sweet stuff as usual, btw.
I would just smoosh (is that even a word lol) the boobs and deform them a bit more in the first one to emphasize the softness.

>>6969797
I just wanted to draw this lol

>>6969797
>anyone criticizing ***-chan must be that one anon
>vendettafagging and trolling while claiming others are vendettafagging and trolling
Holy lmao, anon-kun
You are indeed obsessed and mentally absolutely fucking broken.

That would be one of my drawings but i am
none of those anons, though.

>>6970238
PYW

>>6970274
how about you hang yourself, discord tranny?

>>6961377
>the mega crab thread
The day long back and forward with the guy baiting the whole thread? I assumed that was a troll, I personally went to discord prior to him showing anyway but it hasn't been great for getting meaningful critiques.

Here's a recent one I'm chipping away at, I'm having trouble with the face but I'm open for a critique

>>6957901
Clean the lines. Your sketch is nice!

>>6969797
lol I remember that thread
funniest shit I ever saw until delta soiled his panties across the board lmao

>>6970301
The stomach doesn't look that bad if it was stretched out more

>>6970296
This is appealing and dynamic af. Great stuff anon.

>>6970438
Really shows off how bad the other guy is.

>>6970291
Are you a serial killer?

>>6970562
Yes.

>>6970291
pls redpill me on giantess vore
i tried to understand it, but i think i have not stared in the abyss long enough yet

>>6970217
Are you the same anon as >>6968374 ?

>>6970592
NTA but I'm quite into getting licked (and in turn licking my partner) all over so soft vore really scratches that itch for me. Not a fan of hard vore (actual chewing and digestion) though outside of the mild craving for human flesh it produces.

>>6970646
>outside of the mild craving for human flesh it produces.
Fuck.
>>6970580
At least you are sincere.

>>6970580
Cute
>>6970658
That's a different anon lol
>>6970592
Idk it's hard to say, the idea of a voluptuous woman growing huge and stomping a city just activates something weird in my brain. Same with hard vore, there's definitely a cruelty component that's just as important as the giant part. I personally don't get the kind of vore where they don't die and everyone's involved is just cool with it.

>>6968243

>>6970592
Giantess vote porn makes me feel like the woman I truly am. I want to feel the embrace of being swallowed up by a Giant woman and then finally move on from this dark world. Finding eternal peace and everloving peace within body and soul.

>me...

>>6970592

Giantess vore porn makes me feel like the woman I truly am. I want to feel the embrace of being swallowed up by a Giant woman and then finally move on from this dark world. Finding eternal peace and everloving peace within body and soul.

<me...

>>6970291
Make the head slightly bigger

>>6970646
>>6970671
>>6970780
So, it's more or less a core masochistic fetish mixed with depression or violent fantasies.
I mean, i do get bigger females to an extent, hence my curiosity.
Just the thought of being able to be rough and scale a mountain while getting off, makes me diamonds.

>>6970613
No, I'm just someone who that dude insulted

>>6971086
You probably deserved it. I bet you’re one of those assholes who draws. We don’t take kindly to your kind around here. Having all that fun with pencils. It’s unnatural!

I feel stagnated, I don't know what it is but even after going through Perspective Made Easy, almost all my drawings are from a flat on view, which leaves no feeling of size difference. Feels to beg to even post here really

>>6970291
im happy to see you getting better w each piece

>>6970841
>>6970898
more

>>6970592
I'm not really into it, but I like anything to do with feet

>>6971097
Yeah, every time I pick up a pencil and draw a kitten loses its wings

>>6970592
An explanation won't do much, you need to experience the right piece.
For me, vore is all about utter domination and cruelty. It's like extreme bondage, torture, and snuff with the added insult of being added onto the predator's body as fat or whatever

>>6970592
You can't understand it because you aren't a psycho. Vore is akin to NTR or extreme masochism/sadism.

no comment

>>6971294
> Eating someone is akin to sleeping with someone outside your relationship.
You want to try that again?

>>6971384
>average ntr bad poster

>>6971384
That's not what NTR means. NTR is basically getting off to your loved one cheating on you. It's pure emotional masochism.

>>6971413
And cheating is just sleeping with someone outside your relationship (without your partner's consent). Otherwise it's be NSR (same but with consent).

anyone know of artists that draw good feet? i must learn

>>6951958
Drawn some doodles on ms paint.
Think draw mob face/cartoony coom on future.

>>6971422

>>6971422
Lmsketch does good feet

>>6970296
Pro-level work

>>6971422 .

>>6971422
My summary of GVAAT's feet drawing guide

>>6971420
I don't get it. Are you purposefully trying to not understand what I wrote or something?
You are trying to pass it for some kind of acceptable open relationship, while in reality it's about mindbreak, making a 3rd party miserable, etc. etc. It's pure sadism. Stop pretending to be dumb jfc.

>>6971422
LMSketch, Kairunoburogu.

I thought ntr was just the polite way of saying "cucking"

>>6971497
NTA but you're really going into it too deep. You think normal people aren't involved with cheating? Relax lmfao

>>6971505
Ok, you seem to be completely oblivious of what NTR is.
NTR doesn't equal cheating.
NTR is glorification of cheating and the final goal is for the victim to find out about it.
It definitely isn't regular cheating where the cheater tries to hide the fact that it's happening.

But I understand why you are so defensive about it. You probably like it and you don't want to admit that you have a fucked up kink only psychos truly enjoy.

>>6971503
Nah, cucking is different. Cucks actually enjoy seeing their partners get railed by strangers who (usually) can satisfy them better. It's a consensual open relationship kind of thing.

>>6971440
>>6971441
>>6971443
>>6971469
>>6971499
thanks frens

>>6971361
Aside from the shading that makes her look metal this has appeal

>>6971443
I wish there were more artists who specifically focusing on drawing heels in a sexual way, and doing some concepts. I only found Yukiale, who is actually good, but he doesn't do tutorials.

>>6971513
I know what it is, please next explain how scat is more safe than NTR

>>6971547
Then stop saying what it isn't, just because you feel the need to cope with your subhuman kink.

>>6971569
this level of seethe is interesting, strange how someone else's liking lives up there rent free

>>6971178
>but I like anything to do with feet
There is also the stomping fetish, which clearly escapes my understanding.
Where do you guys even get these fetishes? Is there like a gachapon machine or something?

>>6971595
I actually do know exactly where my size enjoying comes from, but for even normal things would you be able to explain them? Why do some guys find the armpit more arousing then any other part?

>>6971598
Size is one thing, i get the contrast but being crushed to death is kind of difficult to reason.

Armpits is easy; they just look like you can thrust and grind your dick into i.e. it looks like a vagina.
And if there is titties and face accompanying the whole that's a plus.

>>6971569
NTA but did someone cheat on you? Sorry if that's why it bothers you so much, there is a difference between fantasy and irl shit. Murder porn exists ffs

>>6971413
NTR is just "girl being stolen" or "girl cheating", it's not like i'm the cuck. get these terms riight anon.

What if you cheat on a godzilla-sized gal and she eats both you and the other woman so then you digest with your new lover and get shit out together?

I don't like how everyone's taking shots at scatfags when we haven't even posted anything

>>6971691
we can take shot of furries but their autism is akin to a whole internet task force

>>6955548
I know it's you redline chad I recognize you style and the fact this looks like your rat girl pic.

Can I get your socials again?

>>6951985
Who is this? @ pls

We know it's you.

>>6972427
Yeah it's you redline chad, spill the beans.

>>6971627
Nah, I just think people that enjoy that kind of countent must have something wrong with their brains.
>>6971661
I never said people that enjoy NTR are cucks, I said they are psychopats.
>>6971691
You don't need to post that in order for people to be disgusted by your mental illness.

>>6972590
>hes this concerned about imaginary cheating
anon you should probably get that sorted out

Stop feeding the crybaby that deliberately went into a thread full of things he dislikes. Post some art, update on what you're working on, wips, literally anything other than this whining

>>6972493
sexy stuff

>>6972604
I'm concerned about peopl enjoying imaginary cheating.
Are you unironically slow?

Left or right? Which one do you guys think looks better?

>>6972700
Right if you adjust the black lines to corespondent with background colors

>>6972700
Post twitter or pixiv

>>6972700
I say left, it's more charming and eye catching, some lines are very hard to see, though, so make them colored lines slightly darker.

Good shit, by the way.

>>6972700
left, but it needs more contrast in some places
also fix the knees

>>6967277
imagine using logic and not believing in metaphysics

>>6972700
Right because I can see what's going on

>>6968614
You drawing underage children in exploitative, sexual situations doesn't deserve praise, nor does it deserve proper critique. Grow the hell up and start drawing something else. If this were a classroom (and noticing the comments after my own self wreck, it sure as hell sounds like it), no one's going to take your work seriously. Children are not sexual and your inability to see beyond your own disabling fetish only shows how immature you treat your hobby. There's your critique, that's what's wrong with your art, don't cry like a little bitch.
>>6969075
>>6969731
The only ones "vendettafagging" around here are some of you. Corey's old enough to walk his dumb ass back through his congealed art skill and fix the problems himself. That's if he chooses to, but I know he won't.
>>6968625
Yeah kid, let's put that guy standing to the right of her body and have his dick MAGICALLY wrap around the bottom of her ass cheek so that it NEATLY shelves itself into a vaginal opening that DROPS down to accommodate him. Drawing mangled animu faces doesn't excuse you from the fact that you need to draw more from reference instead of pretending to know what sex looks like.
>>6969797
Not me, vendettafag.
>pic related
>>6970217
Men don't have tits, nigger. If you're going to mock my critique, at least make the half ass effort to draw something better than what was posted, instead of trying to be an edgy drawfag's attempt at humor.

>>6973554
Why are you here? You don't draw, and you don't know how to give critique.
If all you want to do is argue with people, why don't you go to other more toxic boards?

>>6973809
This is one of the more toxic boards, retard.

>>6973809
My critiques are right on the money, kid. I'm not sorry that my words can see the flaws in your artwork better than you can draw the artwork yourself. If you can't see past your own nose and take what I say, do your own research and apply that knowledge to your work in order for you to "git gud", then you only have yourself to blame, perceiving the "argument" as nothing more than your precious little snowflake mentality being challenged by the actual state of your hobby.
Simple as.

>>6970217
PYW or keep yapping you ankle biting lil' faggot

>>6973554
>>6974004
Are you me...? You sound like me...

>>6973554
PYW or keep yapping you ankle biting lil' faggot

>>6974004
Would it kill you to apply a little critical thinking to what I say and ask yourself, why did they say that? Does it really look like that? How can I fix it, how can I improve? They're obviously not going to tell me so, I'd better go off and do some research on it myself. Okay, so that critique was right, it does look bad how I draw it. I should take some time and get better, this shit is important to me even though it's just a hobby. Hell, I should practice more and learn that the best critiques are the harshest. Holy shit that critique was right, I was drawing it wrong all this time and I was using the "muh style" excuse to validate my abhorrent inability to draw something correctly first, and THEN exaggerate it.
But no, my feelings are hurt. LE sob, LE sob. Sumwon on dah intownetz duzzent wike me. That's your crutch of an excuse.
Bitch, please.

>>6974012
Maybe. Dunno.
>>6974015
My words and critique ARE my work, kid. Your beglet brain just can't comprehend that.

>>6974016
nta but i happen to be an expert on critical thinking

All you're doing is slandering him and not actually proving him to be wrong; you're just accusing him to be wrong because of how you "feel" and are trying to justify yourself.
>no am not offended
All the things you talk about, kind of show you are.
And if he's being deliberately provocative and you reply like that, i mean, anon, that pretty much seals it, come on.

All you would need to do is to ask him to actually elaborate, because either
>they give up and show they're retarded and they lose any and all credibility
>they actually offer you helpful advice
It's a win-win.

>>6974004
>My critiques are right on the money, kid.
This is exactly what a dunning kruger beglet would say.
I'm sorry, but you can't prove you know what you are talking about. Tough luck.

>>6974027
What the fuck are you talking about, what kind of word vomit did I just read?
>just because Pluto doesn't Jupiter around the Moon Pie, that doesn't mean the dog has the keys to the fire engine. If you iron out the water, the chastity of our November has jewels in the macaroni...
That's how your fucking reply read. I'm pointing out the flaws and allowing the artists their opportunity to re-evaluate their own art skill on their own accord. THAT'S critical thinking.
>see problem
>do research
>apply knowledge
>git gud
>??????
>profit

>>6974038

>>6974004
You didn't critique any of my work lol.
You have the worst possible approach, hence why I said you are incapable of giving good critique. Anyone can spot mistakes, especially if it's other people's work. It's called having fresh eyes.
You aren't special, except for the fact that you are a massive insufferable faggot.

>>6974040
You're a fucking retard
Your so called "critique" was basically libel fueled by your insecurity of being unable to scratch out even a stick figure
Critique better or KYS

See what I did there, or do I have to encourage you to do some more critical thinking ?

>>6974042
>Anyone can spot mistakes, especially if it's other people's work. It's called having fresh eyes
>That's what a CRITIQUE IS

>>6973554
>You don't deserve proper critique because of my personal reasons
Good to know I'm on the right track then, gay bitches love "height difference" bdsm and want to be dommed by a shorter girl and due to the contrast between the two figures the work practically compliments itself.

>>6974044
It's okay kid, you can take the L. You devolving to saying "KYS" is exactly what I expected.
Rather than offer critical thought, or even your own critique on anyone's work, you'd much rather blue hair and chimp out. Typical npc.

I’d forgotten how much these threads suck.

>>6974057
What do you think you've been saying all this time lol. Or a you so scatterbrained and illiterate that you had to use speech to text conversion and forgot all the shit you've been spewing out from your mouth this past week ?

>>6974048
There are valuable critiques, where somebody helps the artist fix his mistakes by redlining or explaining how to do it, and there's your empty bullshit.

>>6974051
discord tranny, figures

Is seething anti-NTR anon the same as “I give good critiques” anon?

>critique a piece of art in :sex: /salt/
Not even once

>>6974040
Then you're illiterate and unreasonable.
If you're willing to waste time replying to anons, least you can do is autistically go into detail, not just
>this is bad
>fix it
>do research, stupid lol lmao
least you can do is not shit up generals more than they already are, epic discord troll

This crab nigger killed the thread a few threads ago too, no idea why he isn't banned for trolling outside of /b/ yet

>>6974161
How do you not see that no trolls are getting banned for the past year? Just draw and post if you want, dont rage over it, nothing we can do.

>>6974167
Just lamenting the state of the board.

>>6974167
Or we can choose not to bother with you assholes altogether.

>>6973554

>>6973554
>Critique

Magic words: PYW

>>6974354
Seeing my work doesn’t make your work any less shit.

>>6974409
Who could have seen that coming

>>6974409
Cheeky motherfucker kek.

>>6974409
You're not wrong but the fact that you wont pyw means your critique may not even be worth listening to

It's like if a blind person says your drawing is shit, I mean maybe they are correct technically but they can't even see so how correct are they really? and why should I listen to them assuming they don't even draw.

>>6972700
Ended up going with the right pic, just liked how the lineweight was making it look.

What do you guys think of the finished product?

>>6974409
Blah blah blah now post it pussy

This is why people keep fucking leaving. How hard is it to simply not respond? Honestly the only ones derailing the thread are the people that keep engaging with the criticism guy

>>6974680
People keep leaving because you faggots behave like catty vindictive little bitches. The only reason why I even came here was because I saw somebody being critical on nu-/ic/ which is an anomaly and expressed how lucky BBC was receiving feedback.

>>6974680
unironically this
>>6974684
>People keep leaving because you faggots behave like catty vindictive little bitches.
Most of /ic/ seems to be in their own little discord groups anyway and don't care for critique, unless you make a whole autstic documentary about their individual lives and read their minds and know every single work they did in all their lifetime which then should end in actually praising the work, but if you do they also call you a stalker and obsessed and a schizo.
I'll give you an example:
>"This arm is bad--- etcetera"
Should turn into
>"Friend, you are so talented, excuse me if i come off rude, even though you are extremely talented, can i make you aware of a mistake in your work, of course, this doesn't mean you made a mistake, it just happens you know <3 i can also offer to fix it for you and remake the the whole work for you, for free but it doesn't mean your work has mistakes, it's clearly amazing and you are skilled and btw i also would like to know your blog and your patreon account so i can subscribe to the highest tier and join your discord btw do you need money, do you want money and can i give you money? btw i am also a professional here's is my work which you can take and sell if you want btw do i sound offensive pls i mean no offense remember you are special and extremely talented and so valid!"
and the reply will be
>"uuuhm ok shitlord you said i made a mistake so now im offended fuck you pyw crab!"
Pointing out anything always turns into an uphill battle, shitposting and fights for dominance like we're in high school again.
This is why people leave.

I won't reply. Get fucked.

>>6974875
Maybe if you unhelpful fucks would just put your le epic angry critic LARP aside and just tell people straight these are the issue with your work and suggestions on how to fix it threads wouldn't devolve into shitty pissing matches all the damn time. There's always some loser that get mads that people aren't taking kindly to their 'brutal honestly', but in a thread where loser(s) are dropping BBC-chan's actual name and screaming about 2017 archives and 6-year-old vendettas then no, I don't your critique is worth a damn. (You) are a faggot and I wipe my ass with your critique.

>>6974875
autist

>>6974959
>>6974961
your shit looks the same as it did a year ago, you haven't even tried to improve. What's the point of posting your work on a critique board if you won't listen?

in /h I have fun making these types of requests

in /h I have fun drawing requests

sailor bitches

>>6974457
think you've lost the impression on the face, she now looks sorta 'disinterested' rather in the previous she was smug/mocking

Working on comission comic page

>>6975011
Can I have your blog, sir?

>>6974875
Nah, people simply leave because of the toxicity of other people.
People don't leave because of
>"This arm is bad--- etcetera"
People leave because of
>"This arm is bad--- you are a complete beginner fucklord that has no idea how to hold a pencil, your parents should die in their sleep, you always draw like this and never improve, KYS.
Also I won't reply. Get fucked."

>>6974984
>your shit looks the same as it did a year ago, you haven't even tried to improve. What's the point of posting your work on a critique board if you won't listen?
See, this is why people are leaving.

>>6951985
Damn you really knocked it out of the park, good shit

>>6975195
Even if it was a critique followed by unnecessary crabbing it would be borderline acceptable but it's not even that, it's just
>this is bad no i wont elaborate why and i wont post my work

>>6974409
I kneel.

>>6969930
I am experimenting with different brushes, and I don't typically draw with watercolor or airbrushes. Often times when I draw in different resolutions or different brushes it looks different because the pen felt different, if that make sense, mainly in how it reacts to pen pressure.

>>6969950
thanks! I mean it could be "squished" although I tried not too deform large breast too much when it is confined within larger shapes, because sometimes it'll loose definitions in a way that looks disturbing, so I am trying to to use shading to do that instead in this instance.

whats the best site for posting /sex/

>>6975313
Twitter, Pixiv, Furaffinity if furshit
Some people do Newgrounds
What do you mean by "best"?

>>6975337
well pixiv is mostly anime, furaffinity is furry
twitter bans you, and not many people use newgrounds

>>6975197
Only because they’re pussy assed faggots who can’t handle receiving constructive criticism. We don’t want their kind around here.

>>6975208
The "the shit sucks get Gud" ones are the only ones that are unwarranted. That and if it's an unsolicited critique in a setting where your not asking for one.

>>6974927
The insane critic troll did that at one point and it devolved into you guys saying good art is subjective. There is no scenario where you people will ever listen to any form of criticism.

>>6975535
I dunno man this whole thing reeks of some delta tier schizo shit

>>6975421
>constructive criticism
>attacking the artist instead of criticizing the art
pick one

>>6975578
Sorry it’s not the kind of faggy hugbox you discord trannies like so much.

>>6975535
>There is no scenario where you people will ever listen to any form of criticism.
This is exactly it.
>say it in a "rough tone"
>"omg why u hav to b toxic"
>point out mistakes
>"omg pyw"
>offer constructive criticism
>"omg tldr pyw pls yeah but did you know i made that on purpose because [proceeds to talk about himself and the likes and social media numbers]"
>"omg but ME like it"
>"omg ME too how is this bad pyw crab"
>"omg just let people enjoy things"
>praise the artist
>"omg thank you so much thank you thank you omg thank you omg did you know [proceeds to talk about personal life]"
>make a slight comment about how the artist hasn't improved even though they've been posting here for years in an apparent search of critique
>"omg so toxic and bad fucking schizo stalker i bet ur the one guy from my discord who hates me for no reason yeah i didn't read your wall of text but i read that you posted the word "bad", so now i feel insecure and offended. fuck you guy from my discord!"
You shat in your own plate and then proceed to complain that everyone else smells like shit when anyone points out the stinking pile of shit on your plate.

No one can express anything minimally negative, unless they have specific qualifications and even if what they say is true; they must hate you as a person for no reason, but if its mindless praise and circlejerking about porn, then it's all fine.
And no one is actually allowed to express anything that might risk offending anyone.
You're not here for critique, you're here to shill yourselves, "network" and play high school drama.
You have no humility, you have no self-awareness, you have no decency. All you care is how you feel and getting clout.
You're the cancer that killed the board and that kills any community, for that matter.

You need not wonder why no one is willing to go out their way to give you "perfect critique", when it always devolves into shitposting, whining or trying to discredit any criticism.

>>6975603
So we’re all in agreement that /sex/, /salt/, and any derivation thereof should be disbanded as artists are too thin skinned to appreciate criticism which the critiquers are incapable of providing anyway and so these threads serve no purpose whatsoever?

>>6975634
/salt/ and /sex/ were created to replace or bring back the old porn threads. Eliminating them wouldn't solve anything.

>>6975682
Got it. We need to eliminate the desire for porn. I’ve got a hammer handy. I’ll take one for the team.

>>6975634
>as artists are too thin skinned to appreciate criticism which the critiquers are incapable of providing anyway and so these threads serve no purpose whatsoever?
Basically, yes.
It's useless because this board and the anons have fostered a culture of faggotry, drama and self-service and anyone who dared try to scoop up the shit, has been chased away by shitposters, trolls and retards who are here to market themselves, do nothing but flame and bait for replies and don't have good intentions.

Mind you, why should a critic waste their time trying to give thoughtful critique when it will always be met with shitposting and whining, thus nurturing a mindset and a culture that any kind of negative comment is a "crab" and that anything is bad if it makes one feel bad and that writing more than one line of text is autistic schizocringe but will watch 5 hour tutorials on x0.75 speed about how to feel good when drawing porn and how to get social media likes?

Maybe, if anons are so scared of their discord ""friends"", they should either stay in their discords, or delete them.

>>6975737
Wouldn't they be scared of the people here more than discord? I thought the reason they ran away to discord was because it's a bigger hugbox

>>6975796
They are, because they can't know for sure who the anons are, which they think might be from their discords out for revenge, hence why they keep namedropping and demanding to post work.
A hugbox is always way more toxic behind the curtains more than your average oldfag just calling everyone a nigger and dropping some conspiracy theories about homosexual aliens.
People who are active in hugboxes, will always play the wholesome role in front of others, but will actually be the worst type of fag when no one's looking.
Why do you think this board is 90% flaming and shitposting? Because those exact people who are in the hugboxes come here to do what they can't do and say on their discords without getting instantly banned and blocked by everyone on social media.
And they always accuse others of the crimes they are themselves guilty of i.e. vendettafagging and trolling, because that is exactly what they are doing here non stop.

On one hand, it's understandable when they're on survival mode and feel threatened by every small thing.
On the other hand, what do they expect when they don't vet or carefully choose who they directly interact with on the internet?

And this is also exactly why you should never join any discords; misery always seeks company and you're only making yourself a target to someone who has everything to gain.

If you want to be truly untouchable, don't speak, don't chase social contacts to benefit your own social numbers, don't publicly interact or post just to get attention, don't join any discord communities.
But these narcissists don't get it; they just want clout and attention but then complain when they get the wrong kind of attention, which in turn dilutes the quality of any given place they infest with their faggotry, but they don't care because once the well dries up, they'll just move to greener pastures and repeat the whole process.

Mind you, this is a board about drawing and critique, yet we're at the mercy of clout chasing faggots.

>>6975871
I largely agree that cloutchasers are cancer and social media creates the illusion of success by treating numbers as a false metric of skill. I'm curious as someone who also has disdain for social media artists, why do you draw?

>>6975939
For fun and to actually learn to draw, which the state of the board kind of makes hard to pursue and seek any critique and learning without degenerating into the aforementioned issues and the anon's intent to only interact with others if there is something to be gained or someone to troll, which leaves the only reasonable option of practicing self-criticism and avoid posting work if you aren't in it to be le epic social media artist.

I don't mind if there are artists that have followings here, it's only an issue when the board as a whole gets treated like a twitter extension and generals are just there to either troll or suck each other's dicks.
I'd rather have some fag actually shit on my work and point to the mistakes which i can then either see myself and attempt to fix them or ask how to if i would not know because even if they're just taking the piss, they might have a point, unless they don't, which then i will just ignore and not make the thread revolve around me and how i gots bullied on the 4chans.

When learning, there is no room for useless pride and ego, like most here seem to be made of because everyone is beg crab, everyone hates them, everyone wants them to fail ONLY when they don't praise them or doesn't take care that their fragile snowflake ego doesn't get hurt if you don't validate them before and after any negative statement.
And god forbid you risk tarnishing their public image, anon; if you say they're not perfect, they might lose followers, you know? So of course, they have to dedicate their whole being into damage controlling anything negative towards them and policing the board for any crabs, even if there aren't then they just need to make one up, so then they can post their work and btfo the "crabs" and show how epic and wholesome they are so you subscribe to them.
Or the whole trolling where anyone with huge followings is immune to criticism because then you're a beg crab schizo jealous and they will spam whole threads with it.

>>6976043
I'm not the anon you're addressing, but are you the same anon who complained in another thread about getting kicked out of nearly every Discord server they've tried to join? Beyond a certain point, it stops being a problem with the threads or servers or mods or anyone else and it becomes a "you" problem.

>>6976144
Fuck I wish I still lurked after that one mega meltdown thread. I missed like 2 months of lore

new bread >>6976155
>>6976155
>>6976155
>>6976155
>>6976155

>>6976153
Which one?

>>6976144
Anon, i mentioned about how discords are bad because they create this drama mentality shit, how can you even assume i am the anon you mean, on what basis even? With the intent of painting me as "bad"? Why even?

This is exactly what i meant by this twisted mentality of "anyone who posts either has intent, something to gain or is someone from a discord", both you and that anon you mean.
That my whole post gets condensed to; "but are you that anon from the discord?"
come on, i just finished saying this shit is what kills the board
what the fuck

>>6968072
This is such terrible advice and bad redlining. The jacket was already fine but you twisted the hem so unnaturally and made it stiffer. What are you thinking?

>>6968079
>>6968055
Never redline anything again you're a retard who's going to dumb ppl down to your level. It's unacceptable

>>6975586
You can't be this retarded for real.

More criticism is warranted and needed here. Don't let the cancel pig culture parading around here like the karma police deter you from offering harsh, no bullshit thoughts on someone's work if and when you see glaring mistakes in their art. If you base your critique on actual facts, referenced from real life instead of just offering your shit feelings about a piece, I guarantee you there's nothing these faggots, niggers or trannies can do to mask the fact that you, can see the mistakes in their work MUCH better than they can. That in turn, makes YOU, a better student.
Don't offer any explanations on how to fix their work, either. It's not your responsibility to hold their hand and walk them back through their mistakes. That's for them to embark upon should they choose to. You'll of course, get your typical npc reply about how you should post your work. Don't. It's not your burden of proof to prove that YOU can draw (you can CLEARLY see the mistakes which gives you an edge), but THEIRS to prove. PYW? Why can't you post better work without making mistakes, faggot? Answer that.
Kindness and politeness in a critique is nothing more that political correctness hidden in plain sight. Fuck that. Orwellian pats on the ass are for the birds. The harshest critiques are the ones that stick because they psychologically challenge you to git gud. Emotionally, they'll rape you and leave you huddled in the corner hoping for the break of dawn, but it's the psychological aspect of that critique that makes you a better student of your craft. It lights the fire of innovation in your soul to ACTUALLY sit down and learn your shit correctly BEFORE you exaggerate it.
Avoid the pitfalls these clout chasers desperately seek and crave outside the confines of their precious discord crystal castles. Don't be the next generation of marmalademums, ortamaws, mcflintcocks, or Corey Feldmans.

Strive to be BETTER than them. You're at an advantage: they've had YEARS to work on their craft but have STAGNATED in the very same cesspools they created for themselves, surrounded by shills and yes men who offer nothing more than the next fentanyl fix they desperately Floyd.
>Make /ic/ Great Again.

>>6976798
Yes this thread needs teeth.

>>6976798
You niggers just want aggressive threads from a safe distance, which is why you write essays to justify not posting your fucking work. You won't prove that your critique is worth a damn so your opinion means jack shit. Simple as.

>>6975682
>>6975715
They were created to consolidate porn posts down to a few threads only.
Removing them would just have these posts be their own threads or in other draw threads.

>>6977030
Anon wants to criticize while not facing criticism himself. Cause the truth is that if he got what he wanted AND posted work he'd be raked over the fucking coals I can guarantee. Faggotry at it's finest.

>>6976798
>>6976800
The only real posts right here.
>>6977030
>>6977037
You just want to be able to get back at whoever dares to not praise you and deter anyone from actually posting unless they're part of your inner circlejerk, which contributes to the current shitty state of the board.
What even is that reasoning?
>waaaaaaah u just want to critique waaaaaah just let me critique you waaaaaah PROVE YOURSELF waaaaaah
You're the epitome of the architect meme

If you want pros shitting on you, go subscribe to their courses of some shit.
You're DEMANDING criticism from anons to be on par with professional critics, who are also better than you and they have to also doxx themselves in the process, but you're smart i'll give you that
>"hehe if they gon doxx themselves, then they won't say mean words about me work hehe checkmate and if they do then i can just sic my discord dogs on them and cancel them they just mad cuz they suck hehe double checkmate also wall of text bad"
While you fags do nothing but spam one liners and senseless adhoms 24/7 that just portray your own insecurities and craving for blood.

It's fine if YOU say anything you want to the """bad guys""", but the fun stops when someone might not worship YOU.

You absolutely hate it that someone might critique you, but you cannot get back at them by shitting on their work, that is why you have to cope this fucking hard.
Even if you got fair, honest, unbiased and polite critique, you would find flaws either with the poster or the critique.

Nigga, some e-celebrity artist with 6 million followers isn't gonna come down from twitter and take you under their wing to make you rich and famous while making you a master artist with the touch of his penis.

>>6977106
It's really odd that you think everyone is out to "cancel" you. Why is that?
Anyways, core issue I have with your crit is "you should be able to take it, this is constructive crit but fuck you if you think I should know enough to tell you how to fix it." Because the truth is you can't provide concrit. You don't have to be a pro to do it, and you obviously have no issue typing out essays to cry about how no one is as good at taking the shit as you so it's not a time issue.
I demand nothing, I just think your essays on why you're justifications are EXACTLY how YOU handle criticism. You don't post work because you'll absolutely lose your shit about getting exactly what you give other people.
No one actually HAS to take you being a faggot who screeches like a hag about "omg why are you being nice to each other HUGBOX REEEEEEE"
Anyways, I can still promise you can pyw without the context of these discussions and you'd screech if anyone gave critique. Because this is still all projection.

>>6977188
If you didn't want to get back at those criticizing you, you wouldn't insist on them posting their works and try to demean any attempt they do at critique by virtue of attacking them as a person on a base that they don't do as you want them to.
You treat posting works showing weakness, as much as you made obvious and stated multiple times thus you are essentially telling more about yourself and how you'd behave than anything else.

It is clearly a show that you lack control and narcissistic types really do hate when they can't control and manipulate someone so they have to resort to slandering and baseless accusations, even going as far as trying to demean others if they contribute or say anything.
>its exactly how you handle criticism
I'm not the one hurling insults, posting one-liners and spamming pyw when i don't get praised or give anons snark about posting more than two sentences.

I get you only have social experiences with teenagers by grooming them on discord, but gaslighting really doesn't work on the internet, especially if anyone can read the whole conversation and look up the archives and any thread for how anons usually behave when faced with any slight criticism.

If all this weren't the case, you could defend your stance and the work being criticized without degenerating into instant name calling instead of wasting whole days just spamming insults and one liners which are merely midwit's attempts to censor and damage control any threat to your hugbox where no one can challenge your authority.

Seeing others works won't discredit their criticism, if their criticism is objectively observable, thus it is true, but as more than witnessed enough, making a critic post their work is just a tactic to move the goal post and shift the attention.
If you're being this unreasonable towards anyone offending you, what sane individual would post their works just to show you that you made a mistake?

lmao
lol even

>>6977030
>>6977037
My words will always give better analysis to help paint a better picture of the mistakes your making than your half ass attempts at drawing or the cringe "redlines" you provide to each other just to cope. Stay mad and learn absolutely nothing, kids.
Leave the real critiques to those of us who have the balls and the experience to call out the bullshit for what it is, unapologetic to your coddled snowflake mentality, your self-manufactured mental dysphoria or your safe space, trigger warning nightmare you call an art skill.
Butthurt? Cry more about it.
>>6977106
Based.