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Finished my 90 day grind. My main focus was on drawing figures. Anatomy and form. Obviously faces/head is trash. But I haven't drawn faces at all, that's to be expected. That is my next thing I'm going to hyper focus on.
Tips and feedback?

>> No.5148279,1 [INTERNAL] 

Cool progress for 3m anon, but before focusing on the head, follow this:

Make the body connect better, the legs look like from another drawing

Learn proportions

And keep on the good work and you will evolve a lot, anon.

>> No.5148334

>>5148279
Was your original attempt there intended on having unnatural or loli proportions? Your proporrtions for the second one there is a huge improvement if so, and I can see you're beginning to feel the form

>> No.5148342

>>5148279
follow a better book next time to be done with figure drawing in 2 weeks instead

>> No.5148365

>>5148334
Nope. That was not intentional. My proportions were a mess. These were drawn from the same reference.
>>5148342
That's not how this works.

>> No.5148366

>>5148279
The progress is sideways. Both show total lack of construction/anatomy/proportion/perspective knowledge. Back to the fundies with you, off you go.

>> No.5148369

the angle of the hips still don't seem natural on this pose, but your proportions are better now

>> No.5148377

Anon, just keep practicing. Mileage is king.

>> No.5148383

>>5148365
300+ hours is more than enough for anime figure

>> No.5148386

Huge improvement, I love seeing people get better.
Torso is a little long and you need to work on hands and feet more. You need to work more on understanding fabrics and how they fold.You should have drawn in the face. Even though the hair is still a sketch it still looks pretty novice as well.

But thats still pretty good improvement keep it up!!

>> No.5148387

>>5148279
/beg/tards is over there ->>>>>>>>>>>>>>

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5148402

>>5148279
>form
Can you rotate a box/cylinder at any angle?
Dont worry about anatomy if you can't even draw this, it's a waste of time
Master first Perspective/Construction/Form
2nd Figure Drawing
3rd Anatomy

>> No.5148413

Can we see the reference ?

>> No.5148415

>>5148279
>Good progress for 90 Days?
Still a long way to go of course, but yes.

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5148431

>>5148413
Sure. here it is.
>>5148386
Yeah those are all areas I know i'm weak in, It just takes time to practice each one. But i'm gonna to keep going!
>>5148402
I've been drawing the figure in various poses like this, But I'll try breaking it down to just the basic forms like this.

>> No.5148450

There is something wrong in your brain.

>> No.5148458

>>5148450
Elaborate.

>> No.5148585

>>5148279
Studying two anime artists might make you improve faster and you're not stuck in one style like everyone who want to shortcut through learning cartoons and anime.

>> No.5148606

>>5148585
Why two?