/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

October prompt.
>will there be a November prompt
Good question, there should!

Drew this a long time ago, I'm not sure if I posted it here, is this fapable?
https://files.catbox.moe/wgxxlq.png
The girl on the left is monaka touwa, right is marnie.

>>4954325
disgusting

>>4954325
Have a blog?

>>4954325
Bottom left and the next are hot imo, the last one feels a bit weird.

Here you go

>>4954136
Who is she...asking for a friend of course!

what's a crab

>>4954647
Someone who hates your work and when asked to post work they lash out in jealousy.

sdfsdffds

>>4954457
check previous

>>4955128
did you draw this, it's really good

>>4954136

>>4955398
yeah I did
thanks :^)

>>4955128
Cute feet

>>4955128
I want the full pic please

god damn I love being a pedo

>>4955128
blog?

>>4954325
Always was a bit curious what's in these threads, but christ...

>>4955916
nsfw
pixiv.net/users/13914595

I try to keep the lolis simple

Bros are there any how to anime books that are actually good? That one in the Q/A isn't doing it for me.

>>4956421
Moe basics pdf google it

NOEL!!!

>>4956421
Pin2D on YouTube

>>4954136
>& Shota
lolno >>>/hm/

>>4957269
what's wrong with shota?

>>4957407
for some reason lolicons think looking at shota makes them gay.

>>4956421
anon, most of them ARE good. you just have to follow the exercises to the tee.

Is there any /lsg/ alternative but sfw only?

>>4957826
>like lolis because they're cute
>all lolicons are pedophiles i can't relate to

>>4957826
Wasn't that supposed to be the point of this whole fucking thread?

Fucking hell, even furries do a better job keeping it in their pants than you sick fucks.

>>4957928
>>4957923
Yes it was... I kinda stopped posting here due to different circumstances, but thought about coming back..
I don't really like all of the nsfw stuff, but I guess there's nothing to do about it.
I will likely post something later on if I'm able to sit to draw.
I guess we'll have to coexist

>>4957826
That’s what this thread is. Please don’t spread misinformation because you’re too ESL to read the thread macro.

>>4957826
Supposedly thats this thread but lo and behold the pedos cant help themselves. Maybe if more people post sfw stuff here itll get better but i doubt it

>>4957923
I'm sorry bro :(
those bastards shall get the rope

>>4957974
Please don't do that to Lain.

>>4957931
If this thread has become just another means to push underaged shit, then it deserves to be purged, or sent back to /b/ or /trash/.

>>4957982
There's actually not that many nsfw posts in this one, I was talking more about the previous one, since this is a general.
Also, no. Anons who break the boards rules should get banned / warned, that's it.

> Not a single shota pic
BAKA

>>4957999
i think i've only seen shota once or twice since i've started lurking here for some reason

>>4956445
>>4956671
I'll keep you asking you for a blog until you make one.

Anything?, especially if it's colouring related.

>>4958064
make them translucent enough so that we can see their figures ;)

>>4958067
This, little girls are made to be lewded

>>4958039
I have this from ages ago I rarely ever update, I only recently did but I still don't post all my drawings there. Some stuff there is when I just barely had experience drawing.
https://www.pixiv.net/en/users/37765141

>>4958067
https://a.cockfile.com/73uX4U.png

>>4958080
>Cute girl 1
>Cute girl 2
>...
>"Touko being punched"
No idea who Touko is, but it made me laugh

>>4958110
Same, and he clearly put plenty of work on that one pic.

More Pokecunny.

>>4954325
>I'm not sure if I posted it here, is this fapable
Looks okay, but the Marnie sketch rubs me the wrong way. Pun intended. Probably because her head looks flat being drawn in profile while her body isn't. And the fact that her head's being pulled way too far behind her body

>>4957981
b-but she's super hot..

dragon girl

>>4957935
Tf you guys are on about? Most of the posts on the thread are SFW with nsfw being external links
>>4958275
Cute, though her hands look a bit too small
>>4958416
Looks adorable, one thing (and I get that it's a rough sketch) hands and feet need work (especially the feet since they look bloated).

https://files.catbox.moe/kw0smm.jpg

>>4958566
what brush and program do you use?

https://files.catbox.moe/qzz7rb.png

>>4958530
>Most of the posts on the thread are SFW
Yeah because you guys keep getting your nsfw deleted. Lets not forget the OP image that got deleted for lewd too.
>with nsfw being external links
As I said, you guys can't help but be nasty pedos and refuse to stop. The nsfw is only linked off site anyways because you'd get in trouble for it.

>>4958701
Maybe let people enjoy things faggot, now stop detailing the thread and get back to drawing.

>>4958701
Based.

>>4958710
Let people hate things, faggot.

Morning sketch

>>4958797
left eye seem a bit off off from where it should be but sexy child

>>4958110
Its this annoying girl from danganronpa. Somebody asked me to draw her getting punched ages ago, I did then decided I might as well upload it.

>>4958943
Not him but made me chuckle too

>>4954139
shy, I tried to do a perspective angle for once but it just looks stiff and terrible..

>>4959061
I can't draw well into perspective myself, but I noticed some changes in angles that seem unnatural.
I understand the head could be titled, but even then idk if this is right.
What angle where you looking for? View from below?

What's better, lolis with thin legs or thicc legs?

Just a simple question, is it appealing?
If not can you say why it falls short?

>>4959275
Remove the text and it would be 50x better.

>>4959275
No, it is not appealing because you've got a simplified face with some detailed figure that looks like it belongs to a Midget. Remove the bony land marks, flatten the figure and leave behind essential forms by rendering them instead of using outline.

>>4959275
>If not can you say why it falls short?
Can you post an example of what you find appealing?
Imo there's too many lines marking the for of her body, her body shape is too curved making her look like a midget as this >>4959278 anon said, and I'm not a fan of painting the lips... if anything maybe try painting only the bottom one?

>>4958530
Thank you. I'll fix those hands.
>>4959061
In my humble opinion, I think the feet are looking at another perspective than the rest of the body. When you look from below you usually see the bottom of the whole geometry.

>>4959437
>You see the bottom of the whole geometry
>Draws the bottom of the box form for the head
>Completely negates the form and draws the flat animu face
huehuehue

>>4959437
That's some pretty good construction, I want to jump into dynamic angles one of these days.

>>4959441
I apologize. Anime faces are very mysterious to me. If I try to draw them from a low angle they look ugly.

>>4959486
I like that last one, I know I've seen that style of faces around, tho most people, myself included, prefer the simpler / plane anime face.

>>4959345
>Can you post an example of what you find appealing?
I don't normally draw this type of thing nor am I really into it, so I don't really know what is supposed to be appealing.
But I've tweeked some of the curves, narrowed the shoulders and hips, is that better.?

>>4959530
I think it's better, yes.
I'm still not 100% convinced with that head-to-body ratio, it look like the head is too large, but maybe that's what you wanted to do.
If this was my drawing, I'd probably look into the gesture next, maybe maker her boody look more relaxed.
You could try maybe moving her hip a bit to the left (her right), with her hand laying on top of it.
Unless, you want her to look pissed or something like that.

>>4959544
Yeah, it was supposed to be a bigger head to look more cartoony and with a clenched fist to look angry but looking back it was a bad idea to try to add too much detail to something with such cartoony proportions.
Thanks for the feedback I'll keep working on it.

>>4959064
>>4959437
thank you for the feedback, I tried drawing another loli in perspective, i tried to make the joints have the same angle in perspective to another like you suggested. Hopefully it looks better.

>>4959486
these heads are so cute! i would love to see a male drawn with this form of head construction

Just came by to thank everyone for thee resources to draw shota in the OP!

>>4959788
What resources in particular did you find useful?

The Vitruvian Loli

Okay, I think I understand things a little better now.

>>4959780
You draw a lot. That's great.
Do you do studies from time to time?

>>4959957
yeah I do a ton, I spent the last couple of days doing feet, legs and torso studies, but it was kinda a waste since I don't need muscles when drawing lolis.
I don't know what else to do to improve.
I'm just practicing perspective for now.

I'll take first shota post

>>4954139
vampire

>>4954139
Vampire, please critique, also how far am I from getting out of /beg/?

>>4954136
good night sketch

>>4960066
I don't know how to describe your art level you obviously know some things but you're also visibly a newer artist, I think it's how you're not afraid of drawing poses with movement when most people are, keep drawing and you'll get out of beg eventually

>>4960195
cute as fuck

>>4960066
Anatomy is wonky specially the left arm, placement of the shoulder is a bit iffy and the pose overall is stiff as a brick.

>>4960223
Thank you
Could you tell me what my weak points are?
I want to improve them.
>>4960066
>>4959780

>>4960232
Thanks, how do I make it less stiff?
I really tried bending the spine and make all the limbs independant. I'm not sure how I can make it have more gesture.
I guess the only thing I could do is tilt the ribcage back.

>>4960195
a+

>>4957262
blog?

>>4960066
It's really good that you draw so much. From experience, I would say that you are getting close. However, the jump from this level of /beg/ to /int/ isn't really an incremental one, but step-wise. It will happen when all of a sudden you see form and light in a different way from before, and become able to "feel the form". I have no idea how else to convey it in words--it's something you will know when it happens because learning will suddenly become much easier and you'll get so much more out of studies. Keep drawing (but not mindlessly) and you will get there. As for more specific things you can do, your biggest weaknesses right now are anatomy and gesture. Analyzing real life anatomy will help you understand form and gesture will help you put the pieces together in more fluid poses. You might want to work on proportions as well. Your art gives off the impression of knowing something about each body part's anatomy individually but not how to put them together. That's why the pose in your picture looks stiff. Try studying full bodies and how the body parts fit together without getting lost in the details. Anyway, your strengths are the cute faces and willingness to try drawing all sorts of ideas and poses, which I think is very soulful for a beginner. Keep going.

>>4954139
kigurumi, feels kinda simple, might do another one

>>4960378
thank you, I keep studying anatomy and keep trying to do gesture but I can't seem to make it work. I'll keep trying though.

drew this in another thread, might as well post it.

>>4960393
use reference, and i mean really use it, like if you wanna draw "cute girl pointing at camera" look at how other artists do it and think about why they did it like that, what angle did they choose, how much space does the girl take up on the canvas, how is she positioned etc, use how and why how and why, analyze, what do I like about this? how does it make me feel, what's the focal point, what's the goal of this image? etc etc etc
then you do a thumbnail, start your drawing, try to use the answers you got from analyzing your favorite artists. You can use photo reference for technical stuff, like how exactly should the hand look in perspective, or for the design of the clothes, anatomy, etc etc

>>4960393
>>4960473
cont.
What I mean is, I noticed you put effort into the anatomy and hair and design etc, but that stuff is only the cherry, you need to think about composition first, the big shapes, etc making an interesting image, the idea, the goal of the image, the main thing, the BIG PICTURE bro
If you don't know anything about composing an image just look at any of your favorite artists and analyze their work.
Here's an example from some random artist I follow on twitter to explain what I'm trying to say a little better.
You see his anatomy, rendering etc, his drawing skill is higher than yours and that can only be improved by drawing more from life and time, BUT

You can ALMOST INSTANTLY improve your work just by studying the way he composes the image.

For example, look at the way he has placed the characters, just the silhouette within the canvas. Compare it to your image, and just look at other work and pay attention to this.
This is only one part ofc, just the way the 2D shape is placed on the canvas, you can also pay attention to the way lines move your eye through the image or the movement in the image (which is what gesture is, lots of begs dont understand what gesture is, they have this misconception that its drawing poses.) Just try to find patterns that repeat throughout all the art you see, analyze every work you see and think about why you like it, and then try to incorporate what you have learned in your own work.
Like, when you see an image pay attention to where your eye "goes". Like for example on the mouse girl image my eye enters on her face, then it goes down to her ass, then if my eye goes to the sleeve, it is "stopped" and moved back to the ass, and if it goes to the tail, it is brought back to the face and the movement is repeated. You want to "trap" the eye in the image so that the viewer keeps looking for longer.

>>4959229
thin legs desu I mostly think that thick legs should be for older women

>>4960473
>>4960495
thank you, i'll try doing that

>>4960522
>>4960495
>>4960473
my only problem is to do that, I need to know perspective and how to think in 3D better both of which I'm struggling to do at the moment.

>>4960526
Don't wait for some magical moment in the future when you "know perspective and you can think amazing in 3D" or whatever, just pay attention right now
Just imagine these contour lines. And think about how exactly is he showing the form? If you think about it, there isn't REALLY a 3D form there, it's just an illusion.
For example notice how he uses the straps on the thighs to show the direction of the legs. How the leg that goes inward gets smaller.
Just "look at" these lines going over the form while drawing and you will slowly get better at it. Ofc, sketch from photos and life etc. If you want to get better at seeing form I recommend vilppu
You don't need to know anything before you can start making finished stuff or whatever it is you want to do. You start now. and learn as you go. I think the fastest way to learn is drawing whatever it is you actually want to draw, if it's a comic book start working on a comic book, if you want to do illustrations start doing finished illustrations, etc, just work on stuff and as you go, you will see what you HAVE to improve, and you will improve in the areas that actually matter for you. Like, an animator needs completely different skills compared to a concept artist for example. Just do whatever your end goal is, and you will improve as you go.
The thing is, technical skill isn't as important as /ic/ wants you to think. The idea and the message is 100 times more important. You can have the most technical advanced art, but it can be dull and boring, on the other hand you can have really amateur work that looks charming and good.
This is what soul vs souless is.
Souless is lack of idea, and message and feeling.
Technical skill is only a tool to help you get the idea out. But the idea is the main thing.

>>4960545
thank you

>>4954139
Shy, It's hard coming up with poses, I tried to make the composition and gesture with the hair and the perspective viewing down at her.

>>4960628
fixed up the eyes a bit

>>4954136
vampire, i feel like I fucked up the perspective. It was meant to be slightly top-down.

>>4960628
Don't like the proportions
Idk what age you were going for but here's some alternatives
She looks like a midget to me
short legs long torso
lolis are the opposite
the torso grows last, the legs grow first

>>4959504
Yes. That's the charm of anime faces.
>>4959787
I think you mean drawing shotas? They are not my strong point so I hope I don't disappoint you.

>>4960499
I agree, but lots of people make them thick

>>4954139
>26. Shy
warmup

>>4954136
Some boys. I want to start portraying innocent intimacy in my sketches, maybe do some full color work.

https://files.catbox.moe/8jqjgy.png

>>4960797
Thank you, I was trying foreshortening. With the lower part of the body shorter than the top.
I guess it didn't come out well

>>4960195
kawaii as heck

>>4954136
Trying to give loli style characters a go and thought I'd post. Haven't done much so far but going to practice some more.

>>4960244
Just do a ridiculous amount of gesture till it clicks and reading on about contra-posta and how the human body automatically tries to orient and balance itself

>>4961976
Monke anatomy

>>4960195
Cute but left girls head is completely flat

>>4961976
NICE MONKE

>>4960829
very cute! thank you for drawing this! i especially like the frustrated elf boy on the right!

How long were you guys /beg/?
It's been 3 years and I'm still /beg/

>>4962349
Well I've been drawing really simple cartoon busts and faces for as long as I remember but I decided to take things seriously about a year ago starting with fundementals, procrastinated a whole fucking lot but I think I'm on the right path...
https://files.catbox.moe/4a9vlp.png

>>4962349
Pyw

>>4962367
see
>>4956445
>>4956671
>>4959061
>>4959780
>>4960066
>>4960380
>>4960393
>>4960628
>>4960761
I spend literally all day, drawing and I'm not exaggerating when I say that. I just want to stop being /beg/ already. I've gotten so many great advice, and studied so much, the only problem is me.

>>4961976
This is how I approach animu legs.
I like to exaggerate a bit the arc (it's pretty common, I'm sure you've seen it), and my guess is that's what you wanted to do.
I also think her legs a bit too short, and I'm assuming her right leg (left for us) is bent forward a bit, tho I could be wrong.
Take my approach in mind if you want, I think your legs look a bit weird.
Also, and this is much more of a personal opinion, the face looks too tumblerish / western. If that's what you wanted to do then it's fine, otherwise try simplifying it a bit.

>>4962369
Post something that is “finished” to the best your abilities, ect rendering, colors, post processing type of shit and polish. It seems like you’re stuck in sketch hell drawing from imagination.

>>4962369
>I've gotten so many great advice, and studied so much, the only problem is me.
It takes time, don't get yourself down.

>>4962375
>>4962375
i have this

>>4962349
17 years and counting

>>4962375
>Post something that is “finished” to the best your abilities, ect rendering, colors, post processing type of shit and polish
As per usual, the low IQ /int/oid gives retarded advice. The worst advice you can give to a /beg/ is to tell them to polish everything and take as many drawings to completion as possible. You need to walk before you can run;it's so stupid and moronic to tell /beg/s who can barely put together a hairly lined sketch with wonky anatomy, that they need to take that hairly lined sketch with bad anatomy, and now try to color, render, and polish it.

No the correct answer is instead of making /beg/s have to do a million things at once, have them fixate on improving one thing at a time. And if you can't improve after 3,000 sketches well then you have a learning disability and no amount of anything was ever going to help you

>>4962412
that's great and all, but this is loli sketch general so it's a valid question.

>>4959818
underrated

>>4962472
The artist in question who's asking for help is a smooth brain lolicon who has been harassing /beg/ and other places, begging for art advice for over a year. They never take any advice given to them. They just continue to churn out drawings of young girls in the same 3/4 position in the same few angles in the same few poses. which is fine, but once every few weeks they come back crying about art motivation and ask why they are not improving. Any advice they get, they promptly ignore. Just dont pay attention to them.

>>4962287
If those are your faces I think they're very cute!

>>4962482
thank you

>>4962480
Wait just a second.
What are you talking about?
Yes, I do keep asking for advice but in no way do I ever ignore it.
I listen to every advice I get and it's because of that very advice I get that I'm not as shit as I was without coming to this place.

I started figure drawing, learning anatomy, practice gesture because of the advice I've gotten.
I never would've done it without it.
Even things like changing anatomy depending on the body was something I didn't think I needed until somebody here pointed out that I was doing it wrong.
I've gotten many different guides and books from this place too I've gone through a bunch of them.
Things like line weight was something I never paid attention too until somebody pointed it out to me.

I'm grateful for every single art advice I've gotten.
I'm sorry I'm not improving as fast as you'd want me too.

I'm just incredibly bad, I admit it. However I desperately want to improve, I draw every day for hours and I deeply appreciate every single critique I get no matter how harsh it is.

How the fuck do you come up with poses?
Do you take an existing one and change it around?

>>4962555
I like taking poses from photographs and coming up with scenarios for them. If you've done enough gesture drawing and anatomy studies you can take any photo and turn the original pose into any gender/age/etc you want and have some fun.

>>4962579
Mind telling me where you get japanese female models from?
Is there a special place where it's just all asian/japanese girls?

>>4962585
>Mind telling me where you get japanese female models from?
>Is there a special place where it's just all asian/japanese girls?

>>4962579
>>4962585
COOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOMMMMMMMMMMM AHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHA

>>4962585
Try searching "complete girl pose book." It should've been posted here on one of the art book threads if not already archived. If you just want Japanese women check /jp/'s threads on JAV idols.

>>4962579
>>4962585
>GUYS IM NOT A COOMER PLEASE BELIEVE ME I JUST WANT TO LOOK AT QT ASIAN REFS AND THATS IT IM INNOCENT!!@!#!@!!@@22!@@!!@??!

>>4962555
Study animation. Animators are masters at turning the figure in space.
If all you want is coom illustration then study composition.

Any critique?

Made the pose, with some help from refs and even tried the pose myself, added foreshortening on the arms and hands.
Added gesture with the torso stretching back and tried some composition like some anon suggested. I really struggled with it.

I still feel like it's wrong.

>>4962769
these look weird I guess

>>4962818
okay i see what's wrong with the feet, but what's wrong with the hair/neck/ear?

>>4962829
it's look like she is wearing a mask desu

>>4962861
Oh wow I can't believe I missed that. I kept that line in from when I constructing the face.
I'll keep these things in mind for next time.
Thank you

>>4962372
Thanks. I think I want to exaggerate the forms but my anatomy skills are good enough to do it effectively.

>>4954136

What website do I post nsfw loli/ shota? I can't find any art websites that allow it.

>>4963896
pixiv

>>4963896
https://baraag.net is where some western loli artists post their uncensored stuff

g'mornin

>>4964232
g'night

>>4962555
put down some random scribbles. use it as a rorshach test and draw what you see in the scribbles.
https://www.tv.creativetalentnetwork.com/glenn-vilppu-my-drawing-system-and-drawing-from-imagination he starts drawing at about 7 mins.

>>4964400
OOOOOOHHHHHH NICE PEDOART!!!!

>>4964400
You are actually someone with talent because you attempt challenging poses. You just need to work more on the anatomy.

>>4964232
I haven’t really seen your stuff in years. Did you rise from the dead?

>>4964401
Based

>>4964419
Thank you, could you tell me where my anatomy is wrong?
I really tried to get it right, I feel like I got maybe the foreshortening wrong but not the anatomy.

>>4964421
yeah kinda. unless you're mistaking me for someone else like in the last thread

>>4964447
>unless you're mistaking me for someone else like in the last thread
no I remember your art well

I think i may have twisted her hip too much

>>4964581
question to ask what's your favorite loli artists that make you become inspire to drew these?

>>4964595
Are you asking?
I really like Fummy, muk, tamano kedama, ichiri and recently Ekakibit (but he doesn't do exclusively loli).

>>4960195
is that a shota on the right?

>>4957269
why the fuck would shotas go on /hm/ you absolute mongaloid, they'd go on /cm/

>>4964707
There's a scale of shota. You've got the purists that say shota is visibly child-like that will go to /cm/.
Then you've got the heretics that call characters like Venti from Genshin a shota. They're closet homos that go to /hm/.

>>4964400
>>4964437
The anatomy is better than your other pictures above, but one thing you can do is instead of drawing characters floating in a void, draw a bit of an environment (at least enough to show the perspective and plane of the floor) and then you'll see how the lower body and hands aren't exactly on the same perspective or plane. Making it consistent will make the pose look better. Apart from that, you're still symbol drawing. Look at photos of hands and legs in those poses and observe the contours and details. Especially bent knees and how thighs look both when squished and normally. Even when drawing lolis you need to know somewhat detailed anatomy before you can simplify it.

>>4964667
yes

>>4960495
Link to the original pics, please

>>4965096
cute

hmm so this guy is legit good?
https://www.pixiv.net/en/artworks/85104980

>>4965501
what would suggest otherwise?

>>4965060
>you're still symbol drawing.
I studied anatomy though for feet, legs, pelvis, toros and so on. I put so much detail on them that I was told to put less from some people because it ruined that anime style.
How do I find a balance?

>>4965709>>4965060
also just to add, yeah I didn't put that much detail into that drawing but I did to certain others which ruined the style, I'm just worried about doing that again.

>>4965534
oh I think I found my answer. He's still tracing.

>>4965714
I'd still argue he's talented regardless

Any crit is appreciated, but has anyone drawn sandals / shoes on this angle? I'm also not convinced on the dress.
>>4965709
>How do I find a balance?
Imo it's a matter of preference. Take a good look at the pictures from the artists you like and see how they simplify whatever it's troubling you.
If you are slow like me, it's probably better to focus on one thing at the time (for example, see how they draw and paint (separately) legs, and compare it to your way, the try to incorporate whatever you like of them, and then move on to to other thing)
>>4965711
>I'm just worried about doing that again.
I think it's better to have fun experimenting that worrying about doing things right or not, especially since you pull like 5 drawings a day.

>>4965734
if he's talented he wouldn't need to trace.

>>4954136

Haruka!!
Are the pelvis and ribcage too close together despite the tilt bringing them together?

>>4965735
This one is really nice

>>4965770
>Are the pelvis and ribcage too close together despite the tilt bringing them together?
Not necessarily imo, it depends on how tall she is.
But I do think you can smooth the transition a bit, the angle at which the ribcage connects seems too high (I hope I'm making sense here).
Pic related is an example of a relatively tall character, but here are others
https://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=4115057
https://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=5540602
https://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=5605105
https://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=4555097

>>4965780
Sorry I'm a bit confused. Did I tit the ribcage or pelvis too much, so the angle looks too high?
I tried fixing it, I also added a slight curve for her scapula like the image you posted.

>>4965813
>Did I tit the ribcage or pelvis too much, so the angle looks too high?
Yeah I was talking about the ribcage.
> I also added a slight curve for her scapula like the image you posted.
I'm not sure about that, I think that curve works due to the angle (view from below), tho I could be wrong.

>>4965735
I really like it, I'd just like to recommend maybe adding some curvature into her right foot and sandle. It looks great already but I feel like some curves in the right places could help.
Like the front portion looks kinda flat and by curving towards the toes it looks more like footwear, just stuff like that.

>>4965827
Noted and saved

>>4965827
Just noticed the watermarks, what happened to her? I remember some assholes got mad she criticized messy lines and ended up harassing her until she took her stuff down.

>>4965817
ok thanks, I'm still a bit confused with the ribcage, I'll study it.

>>4965755
kyunte

>>4965709
>>4965711
I didn't mean that you should draw them detailed in your loli drawings, but to understand them in more detail so you can simplify in a better way to make it look more convincing. I also recommend looking at how other artists simplify body parts for their drawings. If you can, find pictures you like and compare them to photos in the same poses or even pose in front of a mirror yourself to see what it looks like in real life and how other artists stylize all the details. Take note of the parts they keep and the parts they simplify.

>>4965813
The angle is better here but now the rib cage doesn't really connect to the upper back/neck anymore. Just a small fix you can make.

>>4966037
ok, I'll look at more anime and loli artists before choosing on how to do reductions, thanks.

>now the rib cage doesn't really connect to the upper back/neck anymore.
wow I can't believe i missed that, thank you.

Have you drawn loli porn before

>>4966153
>

>>4965501
Nah, he traces bodies from photos

>>4966153
i ain't fallin for that, janny

Nobody told me how much fun shading with lasso tool is

>>4966485
forgot her scapula

>>4966485
Pretty cute.
I think the top part of her ribcage is too big / far forward.
I also think there's too many folds on her elbow compared to the rest of the top part of the dress, which causes the eye to move to that part.
But proportions and gesture seem mostly fine, which is the most important part imo

>>4966519
Thank you.
I'll try to put folds more sparingly in the future.
I kinda of fixed the ribcage a bit here>>4966516

Your lines are really beautiful btw how do lines like that?

>>4966548
actually never mind, I didn't fix it.

Has someone re-uploaded Mammoth's drawing somewhere?

>>4966597
does way back machine work?

dammit i just want to draw cute (not lewd) lolis but I'm forever /beg/

>>4966511
Nice style change

.

>>4966838
>>4966837
>photo reference
Asking for trouble.

>>4966844
agreed
just get your little sister to pose for you

>>4966548
>Your lines are really beautiful btw how do lines like that?
Are they? It's just the regular round hard brush on PS but with 1% spacing.
Also I now see i redrew the hand but made it way too small, keep that in mind.

Quick sketch that I drawfagged for someone. I don't usually draw lolies, so this was an interesting exercise.

>>4967636
Is it an oc?

>>4954136
some character i’m working on. She usually has a plump belly, but i drew her even chubbier in the top right because i wanted to see what she’d look like. I prefer her thinner, tho idk
anyways, any feedback/general advice for me to improve?

>>4967680
>dat tummy
Work on your general proportions, her torso is short but keep the tummy.

>>4966597
what's wrong with sankaku or gelbooru?

>>4967636
This is how I would do it.
I think her eyes and mouth are not properly placed on her head and also think her head is leaning too far forward. Her legs are also not quite alright imo.
When it comes to gesture, keep in mind mostly the second row. I think you did that part well enough, but I'd like to push it forward a bit.
Look at Hamptom's figure drawing book (is in the op, first link https://pastebin.com/51EwWkA9 ), and see how he plays with flow of the spine.
Again, I liked your gesture, just think you could abuse the style even further.

>>4967695
Thank you I will do that. I like prominent tummys on loli too.

>>4967680
Kek, she has no waist.

Where I can find good loli artists that also are open for commissions?

>>4967936
Nice try glow nigger.

>>4967939
What?

>>4967936
join the discords of popular hentai artists

Lolis are supposed to have somewhat prominent tummies (イカ腹) because their muscles aren't quite developed yet

>>4968260
No that's for fucking literal toddlers, which toddler =/ loli you fucking disgusting faggot.

>>4967936
what's your request?

>>4968691
a loli

>>4968691
Simple nudity and stuff like that, any place where I can contact you?
No anime stuff please

>>4968260
Absolutely fucking disgusting, nuke this pedo general

>>4969028
feds are switching to a more active gameplan for lolicon surveillance general i see.

>>4969039
If you are not going to contribute to the conversation please shut up.

>>4969043
If you’re going to commission child porn save yourself cash and buy an exit bag

>>4969043
or what, you're going to tell your supervisor on me?

>>4969039
>>4969050
>>4969051
DILATE :^), Loli threads are not going anywhere and you can't do shut about it.

>>4967860
Nice

>>4969069
Pedos should be hunted down and have their heads put on spikes.

>>4969076
>NOOOOOOOO THINK ON THE DRAWERINOS
dilate departament is calling, sweetie

>>4969084
Not trying to be that guy but if some freak looks at underage p0rn draws eventually they might want to try something irl, the media you consume can effect reality, although that can apply to most kinks it's just a little more of a problem when the kink itself is kids

>>4969076
Come hunt me down.
I'm ready whenever you are.
However, it might not end the way that you want it to.

>>4969117
source: dude I read it on reddit

>>4969117
No matter how you dress it up, your "concern" is nothing more than thinly veiled bigotry. If you're really so "concerned", then go cry about violent video games.

>>4966336
but i do

>>4967860
Thanks for the feedback, and thanks for the book recommendation, it looks really useful.

>>4969190
and me too!

another one

Last one, at least for today. It was fun experimenting with different body proportions.

Last one, at least for today. It was fun experimenting with different body proportions.

Trick or treat, /lsg/?

>>4970342
Treat.

Is there a new chart for november?

How am I supposed to take the "How to draw moe" pdf seriously when it has examples like this?

>>4969428
>>4969960
>>4969964
OOOOOOHHHHH COOM ART!

>>4970693
maybe we should make one

>>4970694
あ!可愛い!

>>4970694
I think it makes more sense to make use of this general and post your stuff alongside what you consider cute and having it discussed.
After all it should all mostly come from observation.

thoughts?

>>4970836
What style are you aiming for?

>>4970836
cute but for some reasons I feel like it's more of a "western trying japanese's anime art styls" maybe because the way you draw hair? idk

>>4970846
Based Tomoko style
>>4970860
>maybe the way you draw hair
I see. I kinda like the hair that way tho

>>4970694
this looks like those neural network generated pictures

from inktober today
i had intended for this to be more loli but it ended up like this anyway

>>4970836
Thoughts again? (Specially on the sideview please)

>>4971140
>Specially on the sideview please
I'm not sure how this accommodates to your style, but for a more traditional animu style, I'd give her a more prominent bottom half of the head.
I would also push back her eyes somewhat and keep the transition from the nose to the lip simpler.
For the front view, there's two things.
First I think the eyers are too far apart (and maybe too vertical, I like to give them a bit of a tilt following the head's shape, but it's a matter of taste).
And second, while I've seen people pull off a somewhat square head structure quite well, I think yours would look better if the head got wider as you reach the forehead.
Finally, and this is not really a crit but, seeing the way you draw eyes, have you thought of doing her bottom eye lashes the way teshima nari does them? Because i think it would look better than a single line.
Pics for examples
https://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=5494519
https://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=5167954&tags=teshima_nari

>>4965120
>>4965120
Fellow coomer, here you lazy coomer...... errrr... Well I would post them on catbox but it seems it does not work right now.

>>4957974
When will Lain learn to stay out of the glue bottle? It's not food!

>>4962349
>>4962369
Your art not not bad at all. Not master tier, obviously, but not bad. I wouldn't classify you as a beginner. You're intermediate. I recommend that you just keep at it and don't give up. You have the potential to do great work. Just keep hammering away at it. Keep studying. You're doing fine.

>>4971207
>First I think the eyers are too far apart
Absolutely agree with you there, in fact when I turned my PC on a few minutes ago and saw the drawing I cringed hard so I rushed to fix it (pic related).
I really appreciate the rest of your post, I will use it right now to improve it, gonna post it when it's done. Thanks again anon!

>>4971207
You're right about the eye lashes too, just tried it and looks way better based anon

I have a general question. What do I do if I'm not trying to draw cunny, just slim girls. How do I go about that? The loli body type seems kinda close to what I'm looking for but older and more mature, without filling out into super exaggerated curves.

>>4971667
That just sounds like the "petite teen" look that is so popular in live action porn. Maybe you could look into it for "research" purposes.

>>4971675
Huh, didnt know that was a thing. Thanks. Will look into it.

>>4971667
>What do I do if I'm not trying to draw cunny, just slim girls. How do I go about that? The loli body type seems kinda close to what I'm looking for but older and more mature
Why not try the /alt/ or /asg/ threads? wouldn't both of those be appropriate for what you need?

>>4971742
Cause with them its either normal women or titcows which isnt very helpful. Loli was the closest to what i was looking for so I asked here. I wanted something inbetween cunny and average and I think ive finally found it.

I need a november chart.
I don't know what to draw

>>4971910
God I wish that were me.

>>4971818
This is probably the best place to ask because posting even remotely flat chests in /alt/ is asking for "MODS MODS MODS" spam
And per the strict original definition of loli you should be aiming for "barely entering puberty" anyway

>>4971818
you mean this kind of woman?

>>4971910
also to j(tr)annies : pic related was 20 years old when she filmed that av.

I don't know what to draw

>>4972035
I was going to make a chart last night but I didn’t feel so good (a cold). Maybe someone else will.

>>4971910
I LIKE PETITE GIRLS AS MUCH AS I LIKE BIG BOOBAS HABBA HABBA AWOOGA

I made this one, tho idk if it's good.
Ideally we could have 2-4 of these per month, so anons have multiple choices each day.

>>4972262
Some repeats but it looks ok

>>4972262
>Spats at 29
Well its a strong way to lead to ending the month at least

>>4972304
You can just draw spats now if you want to...

>>4972305
Of course not, I have to follow the chart

>>4972262
Witch and big hat seem redundant

>>4972317
>>4972315
Better?

>>4971910
Source?

first time I enter this board
I had no idea that this general existed

>>4972323
thanks I missed the 1st of November I'll start today/.

>>4972400
dasd-236

>>4972423
>first time I enter this board
Friendly advice, the board is full of shitpost and frustrated anons trashing on other artists, don't get engaged in those threads or you'll end up wasting a surprising amount of time.
>I had no idea that this general existed
It's fairly new I think.

As for the drawing itslef, I really really like it. It's really cute and cheerful. I don't think I can really redline it, but here's something you'll hopefully find useful. I would lower down her breasts a bit and maker her torso shorter, while making her legs longer.
It's obviously a matter of preference, I like the "legs are half of the height" rule but don't expect everyone else to agree.
I also think her legs could have a more defined shape. And maybe her hair could be wider at the height of her ears, something like this.
https://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=5367882&tags=jougasaki_rika

>>4972477
>the board is full of shitpost and frustrated anons trashing on other artists
always happen

this is my recent drawing
I made several mistakes but I realize late

>>4972490
I really like your gesture

>>4972490
Momoka a cute

How do I draw faster?

>>4972538
Thats an easy one.

Just let the power of cunny flow through you(r dick)

NEW THREAD
>>4972574
>>4972574
>>4972574

>>4972578
why did it die?

>>4972603
Wait until page 9

>>4972603
>why did it die?
Read the OP
>No Porn
>please wait until page 9 or 10 to remake a new thread or let the general fall off the board entirely before making a new one.
Threads made this early are bait / troll

>>4972603
It's too early and the OP pic was too spicy

any cord?

>>4972631
Please don't... I've yet to see a single community that doesn't go to shit when they get into discord.
Plus, what for? These threads are very slow, whatever you want to discuss is gonna remain up for days.

>>4972631
fify

just draw

Cute and funny

Thoughts?

>>4972896
I repositioned her eyes, while increasing the size of her left one, and tilted her chin a tiny bit.

>>4972912
Amazing, thanks a lot based anon!
It's funny how much things improve with a few changes

>>4972931
Yeah, I'd say getting proportions and "placement" right has a bigger influence in the outcome than any other thing. I'm struggling to apply that to hair tho, I feel like I've been trying to get hair for years and I'm getting nowhere.

>>4972942
>Yeah, I'd say getting proportions and "placement" right has a bigger influence in the outcome than any other thing.
Agree completely. 3 weeks /beg/ here and I keep getting corrected in the face placement so I will have to study the "loomis ball" way harder.
>I'm struggling to apply that to hair tho
Did you read the "How to draw moe" pdf in the OP? Page 38 was insanely useful for me

>>4972950
Haven't, I guess I'll take a look tonight. Tho my struggles come, at least for the most part, from painting.
I just can't get the shadows and light to give the "form" that I want. And i have pretty much the same problem with clothing, tho I'm focusing on hair rn.

>>4972965
>that drawing
Absolute kino my man

>>4972965
Post that rendering tutorial

>>4972965
The overall impression is very nice, but the sides of the dress appear much longer than the back.

>>4973240
Yeah, the dress and the hair are killing me.
>>4973235
Not sure what you mean, I don't follow any tutorials for rendering, tho if you happen to know a good one for hair or clothes let me know.
As for the drawing, nothing is rendered yet, if I decide to finish it I will likely double the size and do the rendering afterwards.

>>4972323
I feel like I could have made this frillier.

Also any critique?>>4973338
I'm trying more dynamic posing and adding more gesture to my poses now like people suggested.

>>4973338
>>4973351
that's pretty cute. kids won't have that wide hip tho

Any advice for loli hip proportions? I try to draw them small, but it always looks like a petite adult's hips. Normal anatomy resources are all for adults.

post your twitter/pixiv account we should support each other

>>4973804
You're glowing too hard

>>4973696
>I try to draw them small, but it always looks like a petite adult's hips.
"big" or "small" are only valid in proportion to other body parts.
If your hips are looking "too big" but you can't figure out why, maybe the problem is something else. Maybe there's something else that is too small, and thus makes her hips look too big in contrast.
It's hard to point out without seeing your work, but here's an example on how the same hip size looks bigger / wider if you make the waist too narrow / small.

>>4973842
>that pic
AAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHH IM GONNA COOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOM

>>4973338
This is really cute

>>4973851
>>4973338
imagine the braps

>>4973842
Do you have another image like hat for the lelgs and arms?

I dont' know what to draw, I've drawn the loli of the day.

>>4955128
Is this porn? Please link

Can we post JCs?

>>4974123
what JC?

>>4969039
You people do realize it's not illegal in the US? The SC even ruled it protected speech. Unless this thread is exclusively Brits I don't get how there's this troupe of autists who sit here trying to make baseless legal threats.

>>4974134
You must be fun at parties

>>4974131
a bomb

>>4974158
Definitely funnier than someone who screams at you pedo if you like 17.9 year old girl

>>4973937
Make another chart please, having 2 would be great.

new thread >>4974513