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Previous thread >>4860779

What is /SALT/?
If you're looking for a place to post all sexual works, from pinups with exaggerated proportions to pornography, then this is the right general for you. Both Eastern and Western stylization can coexist peacefully here.
>Rules & Guidelines
(1) Any form of cartooning is welcome; so submit and receive feedback from others. (2) Please resize your images below 1000x1000 before posting. (3) Share your knowledge and (4) Remember to not be afraid of asking for critique, 5) Remember all GB3 related content such as lolicon, shotacon, furry pornography, furry and bestiality are banned on ALL boards, including red boards, except /b and /trash.

Most importantly I encourage you to keep discussion at a civil level, but you're more than welcome to share your opinions.

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>Community Resources
Hitokaku Index
>http://www.asahi-net.or.jp/~zm5s-nkmr/
List of active livestreams
>Use twitch #art
>yoshikadu2011https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCUx5dpO6d5gQ4KWNPc24CKw
FellowBro's Book Collection
>http://mediafire.com/?i44dwzkf9j9n8
Tutorial & Reference Collection
>http://pinterest.com/characterdesigh/
Japanese Tutorials & Documentary
>http://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?id=59317(0033)
>http://iradukai.com/
References
>http://www.onairvideo.com/croquis-cafe-photos2.html
>http://www.eggazyoutatsu.net/eng/atarichan.html
>http://senshistock.com/sketch/

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>> No.4883775

>>4883774
were you waiting to pounce on the new thread

>> No.4883777

>>4883775
right place at right time

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trad hentai makes me Uber horny
give me some TradChad artists

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>>4883967
Thinking of doing more stuff in this style. What think?

>> No.4883978

i am going to be furious if that op stays up

>> No.4883984

Is furry porn allowed here now?

>> No.4883985

>>4883970
Seems kinda weird but so is a lot of things people like I guess.

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Yeah

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>>4883772
Here's a Princess Bubblegum I was working on.
Does anyone have any ideas on how to improve my line quality? Cause I'm not feeling it.

>> No.4884080 [DELETED] 

>>4883772
Fucking fur fag, stop shilling you shitty art.

>> No.4884092

>>4884080
Ops a real nigga he gave me helpful advice

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4884094

wip

>> No.4884103

>Furries unironically starting to post their shit porn in the board
I want to go back to pre-Covid era

>> No.4884115

>>4884092
I don't care, go to /trash/ with that repulsive shit

>> No.4884121

>>4884115
Based

>> No.4884126

>>4883967
I really like this ohmahgawd

>>4883970
this is good too

do you have a twitter or something to follow?

>> No.4884152

>>4884126
Thank you, glad to hear it. I don't have a blog or social media. As of now I'm just the Bimbo tranny guy on /ic/

>> No.4884189

>Post once asking for advice
>Post gets deleted because supposedly it was furry (it wasn't)
>Meanwhile shit like OP its ok
I just wanted advice

>> No.4884279

>>4884152
post moar plz

>>4884189
yeah mods are super triple double gay, it's the same everywhere

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>>4883774

>> No.4884357

>>4884080
>>4884115
You know people who make these threads aren't necessarily the same people that make the art.

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>>4884340

>> No.4884467

>>4883967
>>4883970
Have you ever seen a dick? I knew that this board is like 90% females but holy fuck

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Just finished this bicorn before going to sleep.
My anatomy is still lacking, if there's any glaring mistake feel free to tell me.

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>>4884470
Face in detail

>> No.4884510

>>4884115
Why do we hate furries again? Asking for a friend.

>> No.4884741

>>4884510
Because the sexually repressed incels here need to think they're better than at least some underclass, or their psyches will collapse under the mental pressure of being a reactionary with degenerate fetishes. Furries are just an easy target because the internet has historically picked on them for being weird.

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>>4884470
Imagine the smell

>> No.4884838

>>4884094
Cool lighting, work it some more and give it harder, more defined edges.

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>>4883984
Why don't you find out

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>>4884470
replying before it's deleted.
Overall, you need to work on your line economy, there's lots of little unecessary lines all round, specially in the butt area and in the gooch/balls.

Also, I know you're going for a pony type of feel/proportions, but you should really practice your proportions more, the upper body compared to the horse part looks very off and, I think you'd benefit a lot from (I know) drawing some boxes/manequins in perspective to practice your 3D imagination. Also, I you're gonna be drawing horses, it's never too much to brush up on some more horse anatomy. Look at how it sits down, how it's weight it's distributed along the ground, and I'm not saying copy it to your drawing, but understand it and apply it effectively.

>> No.4885145

>>4884470
I dont understand the dick sock thing. The dick isn't always out, it only comes out of the sheath to piss or fuck. Does the sock stay on when the dick retreats? How? Does it only go on for sex time? If so it has to come off anyways at some point. Pointless.

>> No.4885161

>>4885145
Also horses have a dick bone just fyi, it cannot bend that way, that is mega ouch

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>> No.4885197

>>4884470
really hot nice job

>> No.4885223

Hey Ortamaw how you achieve that crisp and clean lineart? your brush seems to have the oppacity turned on but each time I do that my lineart looks like shit, any tips?

>> No.4885226

>>4885183
why is everyone drawing gay shit?

>> No.4885236

hey janny why did you delete my drawing but keep the OP up?
makes no fucking sense

>> No.4885243

>>4885236
Because yours is shit

>> No.4885245

>>4885243
it's not though

>> No.4885291

>>4885129
Man, thanks for all that. I was supposed to go back to drawing boxes instead of new art, but my free time is quite sparse, so I either draw boxes and get bored or try to draw something new. I'm gonna cram boxes in my daily drawing, even it's only 15 minutes of it since I'm really terrible at perspective and it's one study that I skipped completely.
>>4885145
Eh, I know it's dumb, but it's a fantasy thing so I didn't rationalized that far. The bicorn in question wouldn't use his dick to fuck anyway, he's the one that would get fucked, so the sock is there just as ridiculous frilly detail.
>>4885236
If it's worth anything, I saved your art and really liked it. Would like to draw a femboy as good as you did someday. Got a blog?

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4885349

doing digital since this is a slow month to sell trad

>> No.4885545

>>4884510
Janitors are furries now.

>> No.4885565

>>4884510
Legit, I would like to know this too.

I know the internet thing has always been "haha fucking furries, gas the yiffs lol", but I've never had a single negative experience with a furry. Whenever I've accepted a commission from a furry they are always the most patient and respectful I've ever had to deal with. And you know what else they do? They fucking tip! I had one guy tip me an additional 50% on top of the final payment all because I offhand mentioned that I had to study muzzles a bit more for their piece.

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>>4885349
i wish i knew how to color stuff

>> No.4885574

>>4885565
Furries are pretty chill degenerates, at difference with weebs that are also degenerates, but they are unsuffereable faggots, they never tip, they complain a lot, they rush you and ask for a lower price because they a dirty poor or cheapstakes, its true, furries are patient, generous and very easy going, well 99% of the, the other 1% are the lunatics im guessing give them a bad name, in a nutshell people hate on them because its a "funny" meme, but theres is no real reason,

>> No.4885613

>>4885574
I have accepted a coom commission from a legitimate celebrity with a Wikipedia page and not even they tipped me. Furries are based and the life blood of the coom community. The coomunity if you would.

>> No.4885622

>>4883984
yes

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feedback?

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>>4884439

>> No.4885981

>>4885613
Do furry artists do normal commissions?
What I see on FA is all YCH auctions
Also, is it accepteble by furries if the artist is not really a furry?

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4885991

first digital porno drawing ive made

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Is her hips to waist ratio too much?

>> No.4886240

>>4885981
I'm not a furry artist and take commissions from them. I don't think they care so long as they like your art and you have a demonstrable history of being able to produce proper furry art (it can be trickier than it looks)

>> No.4886246

>>4885981
the majority of furries do normal commissions, you're obviously more likely to be commissioned by furries if you draw furry because that's how you get furries to follow you in the first place

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How 2 render?

>> No.4886502

>>4883772
>) Remember all GB3 related content such as lolicon, shotacon, furry pornography, furry and bestiality are banned on ALL boards, including red boards, except /b and /trash.
>op is literally furry porn
bruh

>> No.4886509

>>4886494
You're just asking for that Hard Round Brush, are you anon?

>> No.4886605

>>4886099
Stylized as it is, I think she looks good.
Blog?

>> No.4886616

did we seriously have to unban furry AFTER a great furry artist was banned from here?

that is the only thing im disgusted about.

the image used as op is amazing btw<3 dont let the negative comments get you down, i'd love to see more stuff by ya

>> No.4886620

>>4886616
who was banned?

>> No.4886662

>>4886605
twitter.com/Stuffted1

>> No.4886721

>>4886616
we should keep furries banned i agree. yiff in hell furfags

>> No.4887383

>>4885875
Too much to salvage it. Archive it and start something new after doing more anatomy study

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>>4886616
>best artists on /ic/ are furries
>constant threads from shitter weebs considering doing furry for money
>have to "go furry" cuz they suck so no shit they suck at furry too
>forced to do fetish art or get a real job
>meanwhile furries draw for fun and gettin gains
Why is this so common, it brings me great joy. Furries stay winning I guess

>> No.4887400

>>4887391
>best artists on /ic/ are [HEADCANON]
Maybe in your artificially produced bubble. Every good lolichad has been banned at least once while most furrows post with reckless abandon. It only takes a few hours, sometimes even just minutes, for janiggers to jump on a censored loli drawing but furshit stays up for days.
You can't claim to be the best of the best when the competition is literally forced to either handicap themselves or not compete because everyone FEARS them.
Done.

>> No.4887440

>>4887400
We get banned too whenever crab mods/jannies get jealous, so...

>> No.4887441

>>4884470
>>4885129
What this anon said. Work on your line economy. Your art looks like carving instead of ink.

>> No.4887448

>>4887391
>>4887400
>best artists on /ic/ don't post anymore
>only begs are still here
Fixed that for you guys.

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>> No.4887609

>>4887606
bloggu?

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>>4883772
If OP is the artist I'd love to know how you do construction, Everything looks very 3 dimentional, awesome work.

>>4884094
I really love this, awesome lighting and very cute

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How does art gain soul? What makes it appealing?
I've been staring at picrelated for half an hour now just feeling warm inside. I'm not even aroused. I'm not even a furry. I think I'm just straight up falling in love. This is the same feeling I used to get many years ago looking at my then-gf.
What is it?

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First post here, no need to be nice tho.
>>4887606
I know you from Twitter, keep it up ! Dope shit king

>> No.4887940

>>4887609
he's tatara

>> No.4887966

>>4887940
no, I'M tatara lol

>> No.4887971

>>4887966
Why are you asking for you own blog?

>> No.4887974

>>4887971
anon....

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Could I get some critique for this? I’ve only blocked in colors for most of it but I’m not sure if it looks alright

>> No.4887984

>>4887400
>[HEADCANON]

is this a new meme from reddit? similar to "coom"?

>> No.4887986

>>4887889
You just like art thots, I see that pic and to me it's soulless so there's your answer

>> No.4888103

>>4887889
looks gud anon

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Some dumb meme shit. Think I'm gonna change that hair, it's not really working for me.

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>>4887929
thanks dude
>>4887609
http://twitter.com/chrggggg

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Let me guess - you are a FURRY artist and want to git gud? Do you want to make a living drawing furry pron, or would just like to learn/improve your furry art? Do you want to post your porn and get crit without being banned from /ic/? Then today's your lucky day, my friend. Meet the Anthro Artist Community: https://discord.gg/r3JTXTZ
>sfw/nsfw crit/feedback rooms, art resource sharing and discussion
>daily figure drawing sessions, weekly study projects
>art stream VCs
>no rolefagging
>no circlejerking, a serious community focused on art
>50+ members from /ic/ and /trash/ (and counting)
JOIN TODAY!

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I'm trying to get a hookup on Tinder so I can understand drawing the vagina better. I don't even care about my virginity at this point. What is wrong with me?

>> No.4888688

>>4888609
there is free, hd photos and video of vaginas online.

>> No.4888795

>>4888609
>doesn’t ask mom to spread her vagina for study purposes
NGMI

>> No.4888812

>>4888795
>>doesn’t ask mom to spread her vagina for study purposes
>NGMI
based.
ask a family member. I used to ask my niece back when my brother and his family were living with us, just be professional about it and nobody cares.

>> No.4888816

>>4888688
I still can't seem to make sense of the thing

>> No.4888835

>>4888245
I'll never understand why people like lactation related shit in their porn its so gross and weird.
your arts alright tho, im just sayin

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>>4888812

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>>4888816

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>>4888855

>> No.4888896

>>4885349
Her femurs are broken! Her neck is broken! Her belly button is falling off!

>>4885569
Her neck is also broken! Her hips are broken! Pay attention to the structure! I know you can draw well, you just don't care. If you got rid of your self-sabatoging habits, you could be really successful. That's the saddening part.

>> No.4888954

>>4884510
>>4884741
>>4885565
>>4885981
>>4885574
People hate you because you're overly obsessive and exhibitionistic. It isn't enough to jack off to cartoon animals and then move on with your day. Your entire life and personality must revolve around it. You spend most of your free time participating in a community of people that also like to jack off to cartoon animals. You find as many ways as possible to shove it in peoples faces that you jack off to cartoon animals. Any community you're a part of that isn't discussing jacking off to cartoon animals you intentionally try to subvert into a furry community.

>> No.4889037

>>4888858
Absolutely disgusting, and people are wondering why would anyone like lolies

>> No.4889056

>>4889037
> pussies are disgusting
> why am I still a virgin?!

>> No.4889130

>>4888245
nice handwriting

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>>4883772
Is this any good?

>> No.4889285

>>4889037
Just admit you're a gay virgin already

>> No.4889395

>>4889037
Yeah, only one of those is appealing, a woman's body is round, smooth and soft, it's a shame the pussy isn't.

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>>4888954
>anybody who doesn't hate furries is a furry
I don't hate them because they're polite and actually tip me when they could just take the art and run.

As a female NSFW artist I'll say that yes, furries are degenerate, but you know who're actually 10x more degenerate than them? Fucking men. Male degeneracy is the absolute fucking worst, and what's worse is that you've normalised it. You fuckers have actually managed to convince yourselves that tickling your baby batter is a lifestyle. At least the furries are honest about their degeneracy, unlike you who hide behind their 10tb coom folder of 50% blacked loli Samus getting her guts dug out by misc. 90's cartoon characters wielding 12" dongers, and pretend it's normal.

Rope, scrote.

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how do you make lines look like this? looks delicate and traditional

>> No.4889507

>>4889503
Line weight x line economy x good flow.

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Is furry allowed? =p

>> No.4889511

>>4889507
do u think they use a cintiq tablet or a regular one?

>> No.4889516

>>4889502
Kek, stupid roastie.
>NOOOO WE ARE BETTER THAN MEN, WE ARE GODDESSES, PRAISE WAGOOO!

I saw you seething, so here I am. Projecting one retarded manlet on the whole population is not working. And I can speak truly, that this degeneracy is caused by women.
Also I can say that all females are in some way sluts, and that would be true. All that women have been doing through the history is trying to look pretty and give birth. And of course to pick up the most successful man, to be safe and all.
The history is made by men, all the tech is invented by men, the wars are waged by men. You have nothing to do with this. Even feminizing young generations won't work. Because they are MEN, and not women.
Brace yourself, for the storm is gathering.

>> No.4889517

>>4889516
screencaped

>> No.4889525

>>4889511
Screen tablets aren't necessarily better than regular tablets, it's just a different tool that some feel fits them better, like how some people prefer mechanical pencils over normal pencils. Many industry professionals still prefer screenless tablets, and I'd bet money that that lineart was created with a screenless tablet.

>>4889516
I ain't falling for this bait, scrote, but I'll give it a 7/10 because I bet somebody will and I'm looking forward to the replies.

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>>4888210
Hey man, really cool. What brush do you use for line work? I really haven’t found one that “glides” nice and doesn’t look like trash...

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>>4889529
imo the key to getting a nice flow in your lineart is high stabilisation. I paint with S-2 in Sai, which is only 5 steps down from the highest setting. I think low or no stabilisation doesn't accurately reproduce the way I draw irl—it's too quick, scratchy and erratic for me. There's a lot of artists that benefit from this too, like Yoji Shinkawa for example, but it's all personal preference. You can create good art with either.

Anyway, idk what software you use, but here's my brush settings in Sai. Nothing fancy, just a simple airbrush. You could probably easily reproduce it in whatever you're using.

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>>4889603
Thanks man, I’m using procreate on a tablet. I’ll try your suggestion... anyways, love your work, it’s really hot :)

>> No.4889639

>>4889622
Oh hey, you're the dude that did the two political bimbos pressed ass-to-ass right? And thanks. I need to learn to render more like you are. Unfortunately I'm a line-babby and can't seem to shake the habit.

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dump

>> No.4889662

>>4889639
I have more fun doing line drawings but I’m getting a lot out of the “painting” to learn better rendering... I’d recommend Matt korr/Ctrl+paint’s digital painting courses for rendering, it really helped me. Can’t wait to see your finished piece...

>> No.4890296

>>4888850
Have you really never seen bait before?

>> No.4890309

>>4889525
>>4889502
wew lad

>> No.4890325

>>4889654
Is that lube or silly string in a squeeze bottle?

>> No.4890898
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4890898

Still wip, but I'm kind of happy with it so far. My values are all fucked though, I can never get the contrast right. If anybody can give me some simple tips to bear in mind whilst doing this kind of rendering it'd be appreciated.

>> No.4890914

>>4890898
Love the shiny tummy.

>> No.4890952

>>4890898
I think your anatomy is too bubbly and loose. Try adding some straight lines here and there for contrast.

>> No.4890966

>>4890952
> Try adding some straight lines here and there for contrast
Not OP, but i don’t get this advice. The homogeneity of the lines is what makes the drawing consistent. Adding contrasting line work would make the drawing feel cluttered and noisy.

I’ve been told similar things, that i have too many straight lines, and I need more curves, but i feel like this makes my drawing feel schizophrenic.

Got any good examples of heterogeneous form language?

>> No.4891011

>>4890898
I love it, just soften the edges of the values more with a soft brush eraser (like on the legs). Very minor problem, dude.

>> No.4891020

>>4890898
From a value standpoint, when I squint I'm getting like 100% darks and midtones (with highlights).

I thnk some lighter tones in the skin on the closer elements (the close boob, leg, shoulder) etc. will pop them a little more and add depth.

The OTHER option (or do both) is to add some back lighting, i.e. rim lighting - something just popping on the furthest point of the close leg (so that there's a thin bright passage between it and the back leg). It could hit the rear boob and pop it out from the glove, the far edge of the face to pop it from the hair and glove, the glass to give it more gloss etc.

>> No.4891099
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4891099

>>4890966
I'm not >>4890952 but I agree with that anon. the drawing while having strong expression feels too 'noodly' overall. adding straight lines in the correct places won't make the drawing less consistent but more dynamic and interesting.

pic related. Although the character is skinny you can see the neck, arms and (possibly) the legs could be straighter with the overall pose still being curvy

>> No.4891230
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4891230

How do I get less shit

>> No.4891505

>>4891230
Hey! I did one similar to this the other day, lol. Keep going, you've got some foreshortening that's working, some structure, I'm vibing on your sense of design. So far so good.

I'd use this as your rough and go back and try to hit a cleaner version with tighter line work, but if you feel good about it how it is you can move on to the next one.

You can't cheat mileage, just takes time to get there.

For specific crit, careful with your boobs (cleavage doesn't exist without a bra on), the right leg feels like it isn't foreshortened enough and the left lower leg feels particularly short.

>> No.4891850
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4891850

>>4890898
it looks solid overall
i think you could get away with less value range on the forms shadows on her skin, but it's a personal taste. The only part that bothers me is her left leg/hip area, I don't see a reason for that deep shadow with such a hard edge on the connection with the pelvis. Maybe it's a cast shadow from her left arm (?) but it doesn't read like that, so i'd get some refference and also try to be more aware about the form planes in that particular region

also the gesture is pretty good

>> No.4892087

>>4890325
it was originally dick but now you can think that goo as what ever your heart desires

>> No.4892145

>>4888858
>t.virgin

>> No.4892152

>>4890898
Is this the female from cum zone 3

>> No.4892220
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4892220

Whew, this is a lot of feedback.

>>4890914
Thank you! A search fat"oily fat girl" pulls up some good refs.

>>4890952
>>4891099
I think you're right, but I'm wondering if I'm too far gone to go back and alter things too much. I'd like to get it online tonight. Maybe I should shave down the thighs and hips.

>>4891011
>>4891020
>>4891850
Thanks for this feedback guys. It's still wip so a lot of the shading is stuff I blocked in quick before logging off for the night, but I agree there's too much range on some of the forms and the fact that it looks better under a filter from my phone proves that. I'll correct the problems highlighted, cheers.

>>4892152
That's the one.

>> No.4892225

>>4892220
>I think you're right, but I'm wondering if I'm too far gone to go back and alter things too much. I'd like to get it online tonight. Maybe I should shave down the thighs and hips.
I'm >>4890952
I was speaking in general. You improved a ton in the last months, but I think you take loose anatomy a tad too far. The dynamic stuff is great and all, but in some aspects you push it as fas as making it a bit broken.
Here in this particular artwork, I would point out especially her right forearm and fingers. I think this is the only part that really needs to be addressed. And while you are at it, I would also make her left upper arm a tad longer.

>> No.4892294

>>4892225
Ahh, I noticed the t-rex arm after posting too. Thanks for the feedback, and it's neat that somebody recognises my art enough to notice that I'm improving a little.

>> No.4892303

>>4888609
https://e-hentai.org/g/1719210/33cd79a05d/

>> No.4892530

>>4889037
Please say sike

>> No.4892559
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4892559

.

>> No.4892563

>>4892559
>*shlick shlick* "Mmmh, I wish I didn't have acne, nnngh~"

>> No.4892812

>>4884340
You draw like a girl that was molested

>> No.4892846

>>4886620
nellipher

>> No.4892854
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>> No.4892867

>>4892846
fuck.

>> No.4892947
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>> No.4893033
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4893033

>tfw even pro porn artists use references for simple poses like this
is shamelessly using references the final redpill

>> No.4893050

>>4893033
>jujunaught
>pro
pick one

>> No.4893063

>>4884467
>this board is like 90% females
source

>> No.4893082

>>4893063
girl here teehee ;))
send me 0.1 BTC for boob pics ;)

>> No.4893086

there's females?

>> No.4893093

>>4893082
>send me 0.1 BTC for boob pics
i'm a misogynist actually

>> No.4894066
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4894066

I tried to practice painting for once, critique?

>> No.4894122

>>4894066
is that friezas sister or you forgot how real skin color looks like

>> No.4894127

>>4894122
maybe the colour is stylized?

>> No.4894278

>>4894066
actual painting is not that bad.
however i have to agree the color is strange. did you use a reference for this? the left(her right) forearm feels like its lacking depth due to shading that may have been from copying a reference or lack of

>> No.4894316

>>4893050
He'll never be mainstream because the girls he draws are too thick and stacked for that, but he is popular enough to be posted on /d/ every day.

Small potatoes in the grand scheme of things, but still more recognition than most artists will ever get.

>> No.4894842

>>4892563
kek underrated

>> No.4895864

>>4894066
I actually love it. What brush are you using for the lines?

>> No.4895926

>>4893033
>pro porn artist
/beg/tard detected

>> No.4896359
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4896359

>> No.4896463

>>4888896
>Her femurs are broken! Her neck is broken! Her belly button is falling off!
How are femurs and neck "broken"? You keep throwing this word around, im not sure you know what it means

>> No.4896468

>>4887383
His anatomy is more or les fine, there are other areas in which he needs to improve. Stop giving advices if you dont know shit begnigger

>> No.4896478

>>4896468
Hi, not that guy you are responding to:
That anatomy is so far from fine that I am flabbergasted that anyone would ever defend it. The only rational explanation I can think of for why you would respond this way is if you are the artist yourself being dedensive.

>> No.4896485 [DELETED] 

>>4892846
I kept talling him to stop posting stuff that is against the rules, but noooo. I guess you can't help people with mental issues.

>> No.4896488

>>4892846
I kept telling him to stop posting stuff that is against the rules, but noooo. I guess you can't help people with mental issues.

>> No.4896503
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4896503

>>4889502
>Male degeneracy is the absolute fucking worst
Fellow femfag to say you're full of shit

>> No.4896509
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4896509

>> No.4896515
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4896515

>>4896509

>> No.4896601

>>4896509
>>4896515
Great stuff.
Just a typo -> "EVERY DAY, EVERY HOUR*" not "HOURS".

Keep it up man, I love your stuff.

>> No.4896614

>>4896478
besides feet, can you name muscles, tendons or bones that are put inaccurately in his drawing?

>> No.4896626

>>4896614
not him, but unironically all of them

>> No.4896649

>>4896614
"Put"?
What is that supposed to mean? Absolutely everything is drawn wrong.

>> No.4896650

>>4896614
that belly is all sorts of fucked up for one

>> No.4896653

>>4896614
If you can't recognize the mistakes people are talking about, then no amount of explanation can help you.

>> No.4896740

>>4890966
You need contrast otherwise it gets boring to look at. Contrast provides balance. It's like you wouldn't color one thing in the same value so why would you draw with the same of type of line?

>Got any good examples of heterogeneous form language?
You can just read the Force series or check out the videos online. For examples one good example would be to look at Disney.

>> No.4896771
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4896771

>>4896601
Thanks for the tip, I will do my best.

>> No.4896931

>>4896771
The fuck is going on with that right boob?

>> No.4896934

>>4893033
>is shamelessly using references the final redpill
Yes. You combine multiple references so it cannot be proven, and you just trace it.

>> No.4896939

>>4889525
Do roasties really?

>> No.4896940
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4896940

>>4889502
>rope,scrote
That's fucking gay
Tits or gtfo, hoe

>> No.4896957

>>4889502
based

>> No.4897031

>>4896626
>>4896649
>>4896626
so you can't name anything. Gotcha

>>4896650
that line on the belly does look off but overall it seems that he knows how muscles, bones, tendons and fat in body connect (assuming he wasn't using a reference) so him going and studying anatomy will not help him improve much. The main problems I see is that the pose looks stiff, he needs to study gesture more and lineart/rendering looks unappealing too imo

>> No.4897101
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4897101

I give you pumpkin

>> No.4897307
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4897307

Honk honk.

>> No.4897454

>>4897031
Pick any fucking body part- it's drawn wrong.
Cranium? Wrong.
Jaw? Wrong.
Lips, nose, eyes, neck, clavicle, biceps abdominal muscles, obliques, etc. etc. etc.
Everything is wrong, you retard.

>> No.4897692 [DELETED] 
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4897692

>OP is a bandicoot with giant cock aflap
>no problem here
>I post a tasteful, censored Michiru erotica
>banned for 2 days on all boards
FUCK this nigger website and FUCK MODS
Actually seriously slit your wrists and die you rancid faggot

>> No.4897711

>>4897692
I'm sorry, I don't know why I'm not banned desu :(

Your Michiru is cute, even if BNA sucked wet ass.

>> No.4898197
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4898197

>>4897307
Fin.

>> No.4898228

>>4889502
There’s no way this is a serious post. Do you know where you are?

>> No.4898292
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4898292

Up to my usual antics. It as an unproductive weekend.

>> No.4898475
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4898475

sketchin

>> No.4898574

>>4897454
ok big guy, why don't you redline how the cranium should be then?

>> No.4898593

>>4898475
only part detailed are the dicks

based

>> No.4898650

>>4898197
Awesome

>> No.4898703
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4898703

>>4898650
Thanks!

>> No.4898732

>>4898475
>>4898292
Aha, both of these are great.

>> No.4898761

>>4898574
Oh just fuck off already, you blind waste of space.

>> No.4898850

>>4898761
Joke's on you! If he was blind, how could he type? Bet you feel stupid now!

>> No.4898861

>>4898850
Speech to text.

>> No.4898867
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4898867

>> No.4899380

>>4898197
Those goblina ears are really weird
Also, add some eyelashes

>> No.4899562
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4899562

i like stripes

>> No.4899646

>>4898292
Post more stuff disney fag

>> No.4899702
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4899702

>>4892846
fuck jannies!

>> No.4899758
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4899758

Thoughts so far? Haven't been drawing for months, depresso strong...

>> No.4899765

>>4899702
fuck people that don't follow rules. it's his own fault.

>> No.4899822

>>4883984
>now

>> No.4899840

>>4899646
Thanks. But I need to actually start completing stuff.

>> No.4899872

>>4899758
the blonde girl's head is in a different plane of perspective and the tentacle around her left arm and the arm itself have no volume. the girl on the right is lopsided and looks flat. flip your canvas.

>> No.4899900

>>4899380
It's a wee bit late for that now m8.

>> No.4899938

>>4883984
No.

>> No.4900039

>>4897307
Do u have a blog?

>> No.4900065

>>4900039
I'm on Twitter at https://twitter.com/ortamaw

>> No.4900077
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4900077

My first attempt at NSFW

>> No.4900087

>>4900077
Cute :D

>> No.4900104

>>4900077
got potential but get better legs
cotton hill lookin ass

>> No.4900108

>>4898703
I love your work, dude, post more...

>> No.4900130
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4900130

>>4900077
This is actually fun

>>4900087
Thank you anon! You're cute aswell

>>4900104
But i like thick legs :'(

>> No.4900132
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4900132

>>4900108
This is the only thing I did today, but it's probably not very sexy (for people with zero taste).

>> No.4900135

>>4900130
Gimme dat blog.

>> No.4900175
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4900175

>>4900130
Ok, that's is enough for tonight

>>4900135
I'm glad you like it, but I have to make you know I dont have a NSFW blog. I post regular sfw stuff here tho

https://www.instagram.com/jordi_milian/

>> No.4900177

>>4900175
Aw, I'm not on Instagram. You should make a Twitter and start crossposting, only post NSFW on the Twitter account.

>> No.4900402

>>4900132
Still pretty cool... could you draw an old school Lara Croft? would look awesome in your style...

>> No.4900474

>>4893033
>>4896934
Draw what you can draw yourself. Check it against references and adjust your drawing without direct tracing. Eventually your visual library will improve and you'll need less references. No artist knows everything especially when starting out. Almost all of the popular artists cheat in some way either copying or using 3D, but mileage makes the difference and they can adjust things to suit their needs and 99.9% of people can't tell how they cheated.

>> No.4900702

>>4900402
This has given me an amazing idea, I'll definitely draw it. I'll probably post it in the next thread, thanks!

>> No.4900705

>>4883772
When did the angry/evil face become the stock shorthand expression for "horny"??

>> No.4900753

>>4900702
Awesome, I can’t wait!... :)

>> No.4901272

>>4900705
Because sex is inherently sinful, which is why it should be associated with an evil look.

>> No.4901302

>>4900705
sex is evil

>> No.4901480
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4901480

Heavy use of references. Bonus points if you can recognise the original model it's based on. Clue: Her name sounds a lot like an aquatic sea mammal.

Not really sure where I'm going with this. Hair is just filler on a separate level while I figure out what I'm feeling like. Did originally attempt a "seductive" mouth but ehh.

Any thoughts?

>> No.4901536

>>4901272
I'm imagining the evil-horny look being applied to food.

>> No.4901667
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4901667

>>4898197
Hey there clownbro!

>>4901480
Bella Dolphin?

>> No.4901688

>>>4901480
>Bella Dolphin?

Who? Google gives nothing but auto correct to Delphine lol. Also no.

>> No.4901788
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4901788

>>4883772
you fucing furfags and coomers GET THE FUCK OFF MY ARTBOARD REEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

>> No.4901842

>>4901788
This is our board now.

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>> No.4902518

>>4901788
Dumb fucking Redditor.

>> No.4902538
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4902538

Is he regressing to /beg/ tier?

>> No.4902609
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4902609

>>4896359
is that meiya? if so based taste

don't ask me wat this pose is I don't know

>> No.4902660

>>4902538
literally who

>> No.4902669

>>4902538
idgi, that's good info in that image, what are you trying to say?

>> No.4902672

>>4889037
>https://twitter.com/ortamaw
lolies are like that too you dumb idiot

>> No.4902704

>>4900132
The best thing about your work is the lineart. When it comes to appeal you still have a ton to learn, so you better drop that attitude.

>> No.4902706
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4902706

>>4902538
Oh look, a jelly retard that tries to steer drama by cherry picking literal rough sketches.

>> No.4902880

>>4902669
>can't see her pussy
>generic skimichanclone composition

>> No.4902900

>>4902704
>When it comes to appeal you still have a ton to learn
Not him, but what do you mean?

>> No.4902990
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>> No.4903009

>>4902900
Not him either, but personally I think as smut his work is an utter failure. The style is fantastic, it just doesn't fit for the prurient.

>> No.4903022

>>4902704
Oh my god, you couldn't tell that I was joking. You think I'm actually mad that people don't want to suck donglander's dong? I'm tickled, anon.

>> No.4903023

>>4903022
Is this one of those "I was only pretending to be retarded" things?

>> No.4903027

>>4903009
I'm not a he, which probably factors into it. I'm not drawing art from the perspective of male sexuality, and I'm not trying to get people to jack it to them either. I just want to sit and have fun with my tablet, and maybe in the process I'll get a little better. I'm completely fine with people not liking my stuff, I don't need to be validated, because it doesn't have to be subjectively "good", but I would like it to be "objectively sound" in its elements. I'm fortunate that there's a lot of people here who're significantly accomplished who're also willing to toss me a bone on fixing my problems when I ask.

>>4903023
>"oh em gee I need his psycho Kiwi dick in me RIGHT. FUCKING, NOW."
>Is this one of those "I was only pretending to be retarded" things?

YES.

>> No.4903091
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>>4903027

>> No.4903111

>>4903009
I was just curious... I just love his lines, very smooth and liquidy

>> No.4903122

>>4903027
you will never be a real woman

>> No.4903143

>>4883967
Is that fucking Ojama Yellow

>> No.4903176
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4903176

>>4901788
No

>> No.4903263

>>4901788
"your" artboard?

>> No.4903276

>>4903027
fwiw i enjoy your stuff, even if the subject matter is not my jam your lineart and rendering and such is pleasing to look at

>> No.4903279

>>4888835
Some of us aren't gay anon

>> No.4903280
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4903280

>>4903027

>> No.4903325

>>4883787
Pic source?

>> No.4903326

>>4892846
Does he have any sites where he posts? Twitter, newgrounds, etc.

>> No.4903468

>>4903325
https://twitter.com/nmkranker?s=09

>> No.4903476

>>4903326
They have a Twitter with the same name. @nellipher

>> No.4903518
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>>4902990

>> No.4903567
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4903567

>>4887441
>>4885129
Alright, followed what you guys said and tried to make something simple for once.
Chubby Apsaras femboy, feel free to criticize. Tried to make the colors stand out and make him look like a in-game CG.

>> No.4903649
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4903649

can I become a pro-coomer artist?

>> No.4903653

>>4903649
Yes, but kys now because I don’t like seeing people better than me succeed, also you fucked up left girl’s mouth but I guess it’s passable

>> No.4903729

>>4889502
Based farmerstacy

>> No.4903740

>>4903729
>>4889502
Why are women and their simps such niggers?

>> No.4903810

>>4903740
Go jerk off to some more cartoon futa furry shota loli bbc hyperflation bondage porn.

>> No.4904054

>>4903468
Thanks

>> No.4904274
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More of my crap drawings, be nice please...

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>>4904274

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>>4904277

>> No.4904281

>>4904274
>>4904277
>>4904279
more

>> No.4904286

>>4904281
These and
>>4889622
>>4889529
Are about it rn... :)

>> No.4904298

>>4902880
you either don't draw, or can't draw a box to save your life

>> No.4904312

>>4903476
Thanks!

>> No.4904315

>>4904274
>>4904277
>>4904279
Good job, leaf anon
Keep it up

>> No.4904328

>>4904277
Who is the middle?

>> No.4904330

>>4904328
tomi lahren i think. leaf anon can confirm...

>> No.4904332
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>>4904277
these have potential but i have a few pointers that might help you out
the colors feel kinda muddy and the overall piece feels flat mostly because the values are in the wrong places. It's almost like she's being lit by 5 different light sources, but it doesn't read like that since the light direction is pretty obvious in some regions (like their arms)

remember your planes and keep the lights consistent, hope it helps

>> No.4904333

>>4904332
kek i forgot to use the cast shadow and reflected light captions, but you got the point

>> No.4904354

>>4888812
Same. I would ask my sister to pose for me but with a bathing suit on. She would have this disgusted look on her face but she agreed to do it anyways. Now that my art has improved so much(I do oil) she lets me paint her in the nude with the same disgusted look.

>> No.4904358

>>4904330
Yeah it’s tomi
>>4904332
This is awesome, thanks man. I haven’t had a lot of time this summer to really work on my rendering/planes/lighting, but I’m collecting books and vids and gonna really get to work soon. Thanks again, love your redline

>> No.4904379

>>4904358
np anon
try watching sam nielson's course on light and color
or dorian iten's course, they're both really good and complete

>> No.4904385

>>4883772

Kek party hat

>> No.4904391

>>4904379
I will, thanks a lot. I planned on starting with Robertson’s rendering book, is that any good?

>> No.4904404

>>4904391
i only flipped through it, i know it teaches form but i'm not sure if it's any good for understanding how color works irl

>> No.4904465

>>4894122
>>4894278
I was going to do a background that would have made the colour fit in better but I was lazy and don't know how to edit the colour after painting it
>>4895864
chalk brush in sai2

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4904487

Is anything off so far? How is the coochie placement looking to you?

>> No.4904524

>>4904487
the hair bangs and the third eye might look better if they were moved over to the right a little. The right ear could also be adjust by scaling down vertically a little.
The vagina maybe change the angle slightly to be more towards the viewer so like instead of a 45 maybe more of a 35 around there.
Maybe adjust the left breast probably see what it looks like moving it down vertically just a tad.

Would most likely still look good without these adjustments, try em out see what they look like. Would do it myself but can't atm

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>>4904524

Bless you, anon.
I copy-pasted the hand/vagina from an older version of the sketch then cleaned it up. Does it look awkward to you?

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>>4883772
i did this one recently but it seems kinda off to me, the anatomy that is, i tried my best but still feels weird af

>> No.4905355

>>4902609
it is very cute my friend

>> No.4905377

Do you guys jerk off while you draw? I'm asking cause i'm left handed in both so I'm wondering if I should start relearning how to jerk righty.

>> No.4905404

>>4902538
Only a brainlet furry could make such a terrible tutorial.

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>> No.4905451

>>4905445
I like it

>> No.4905485

How important would you guys say color is for sexual art? I can't bring myself to learn shit about color and value, but I can work on anatomy, line, composition, form, and perspective all day.
Is it possible to make it as a porn artist and make all of your work in black and white or is that just not a reality?

>> No.4905487

>>4905485
That's pretty much every doujinshi artist. There are some b/w artists with like 100k followers. Color helps but it's not the main thing.

>> No.4905528

>>4905487
yea that is true. idk I guess I need to figure out what my work is lacking then. If I'm not getting a decent amount of likes and follows per drawing, and if color doesn't matter as much as I think it does, I guess I really need to brush up on some other fundamentals instead. "sigh" back to the grind. I hope this pays off one day.

>> No.4905584

>>4905445
Blog?

>> No.4905722

>>4905528
Can you share a link to your work?

>> No.4905776

new thread
>>4905772
>>4905772
>>4905772

>> No.4905782

>>4904274
>>4904277
>>4904279

still looks like fairground spray painted women.
i suggest turning off pen pressure and experimenting with that for a bit.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BTYGWfiZnMA
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nnhj5efzN_w
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=g2fZdGZKP1k


also it feels painfully obvious that you color picked from reference images, or that you are used to the colors that color picking gives you. there's plenty of reason to eyeball colors, one being that the colors don't end up all muddy.

to help with colors, you can try making flats underneath the sketch and then adding hints of color as you build up the painting. but that doesn't always work for everyone

another suggestion is to try out anything with lineart and flats, whether is be comic books, anime, cartoons. whatever suits you. that's what i ended up liking to do, but it really did help me with color choice.

your anatomy, 3d and use of little hints of color is nice though :)

you don't have to take into account everything i said, but i really recommend less color picking and more eyeballing, and then working on strong shapes in your shadows

>> No.4905790

>>4905355
thanks brah
>>4905445
awesome. reminds me of koki

>> No.4905892

>>4905782
Thanks, a lot of great suggestions.
> you color picked from reference images
Yeah pretty much. I recently started laying flats then build up on top of lines with shadow first... I had zero confidence when I started painting but I’m kinda getting it a bit more. Thanks for the videos and the advice :)

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cat pin up, let me know what you think

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>>4883772
top sus

>> No.4907549

>>4905445
Golb?