/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>trash
kys. That's a beautiful drawing

>>4803118
>someone redline this trash please. I have to win an argument.
HAHAHAHAHA, the state of pyw retards.

>trash
are you fucking blind or what?

>>4803123
>>4803132
>>4803134
didnt know this board was filled with /beg/s but i should have figured.

>>4803139
>needs help to redline
>doesn't understand the value of an artwork
>calls others begs
Go away, walking garbage.

very charming piece of work, the figure's a little wonky but it doesn't detract form the illustration. also it's against the board's rules to post work for critique that isn't yours

>>4803139
pyw OP

>>4803149
i wasn't asking for critique, i was asking for redlining for educational purposes.

>>4803118
I don't like the arm/hand stylisation (especially the left one) but it's a preference thing.

>someone redline this trash please. I have to win an argument.

>these are the types of people asking you to pyw
lmao.

>>4803139
The irony, kek

>>4803139

>>4803139
>didnt know this board was filled with /beg/s but i should have figured.
that just means you'll fit right at home lol

>>4803139
Some of them even make threads!

https://twitter.com/kaisen_tobiuo

this is the artist's twitter :)! i think OP is a little big insecure about his art abilities and thinks that proving that professional artists make mistakes will give him an ego boost.

i don't think that's healthy though :(! include <3 in your post to show OP that if he puts in work he can make it :) <3

>>4803169
now this is advanced shitposting. I tippeth my hat to ye, good sir.

>>4803169
OP is a faggot and water is wet.

>>4803172
Edit: forgot the <3

Hate to break it to you OP, but you’re clearly wrong or too /beg/ at drawing to know what the issue(S) are. Better you just relax and stop trying to be a know it all. Be more friendly and your life will be better. This is why people don’t like you as much as you want- but you can change that

OP is right, the image has horrible anatomy and anyone who thinks otherwise are certified /beg/s should really really post their work. It's so obvious, look at her hips, torso and legs.

>>4803118
>>4803139
include me in the screencap

>>4803176
TRUE. /ic/ has truly lost it when such obvious mistakes as the ones in the image in the OP makes are ignored because it's animay.

>>4803176
>>4803182
post your redlines :^)

>>4803157
That explains why the delivery rate when the challenge is issued is so abysmal

>>4803176
We already know you're not to prove that you can back up you observations with a skilled redline so you're wasting you time posting like you can.

Imagine posting as different people to agree with yourself and not realizing you’ve got a problem. This isn’t working and it’s embarrassing dude

>>4803197
>>4803183
why is it that you begs can't do anything themselves? Here OP, they're the anatomy mistakes that come to mind first. There are surely more that i didn't see.

>>4803212
>torso cant twist that way
uuuuuuuuuuuuuuh you are dumb

>>4803214
lmao here they come

>>4803212
flexible girls are sexier. If you can't distort anatomy for artistic means than then you'll be incredibly limited as an artist

>>4803212
Do you think arms are straight lines? dumbass beg. No, and I don't mean bones are curved, stupid beg.

>>4803226
>he thinks arms can curve
squid detected

>>4803212
this has to be bait

>>4803212
why did you draw the arms like that

>>4803235
because if you continue the lines from the wrist and the shoulder, they join wayy too late. So the arm "disappears".

>>4803212
Get out from thee, crab!

>>4803233
clearly, but it's a good bait thread.

It's probably more like this rather than op's fantasy.

>>4803239
i would think there's foreshortening going on like >>4803254 just posted

>>4803254
except you just dislocated her shoulder but sure beg, keep trying.

>>4803258
Ok, then do a proper redline yourself. Oh wait, you can't lmao

>>4803263
i did
>>4803212

>>4803265
lol

>>4803212
yeah this is for sure bait. This guy can't possibly be serious.

>>4803118
Here you go

>>4803272
thanks you gave me a good laugh.

one thing might be wrong, your head can't turn 90° to the side, it could be perspective, but i'm not redlining this shit to verify

>>4803272
10/10

>>4803118

>>4803283
your input is always appreciated schizocrab

>>4803285
pyw

>>4803212
You have no idea what you are doing lol. So pety.

>>4803156
Aaaaaa cute shota

>>4803118
here i redlined the trash part. hope that helps

>>4803285
>schizocrab
kek

>>4803285
>schizocrab
LMAO

>>4803118
I'm not gonna redline it but the cat is too big.

>>4803373
not seeing it anon, you better redline it.

>>4803118
if there's an issue you see, why not redline it yourself

>the arm is wrong and the torso and the neck and the yadayada
the artist 100% used reference but there's people unironically thinking the anatomy is wrong...

oh fuck I fell for it. nice bait OP great thread this was a good day out in the field thank you for this

is wrong

>>4803272
>CAT TOO BIG LOOKS LIKE DOG
gave me a chuckle

>>4803272

HAHA CAT too big +++

>>4803283

The loomis cat LOL

>>4803118
This board is a fucking parody of itself. Fuck you OP ban me mods

>>4803272

Why get rid of the spoon tho?

>>4803405

Reference my fucking ass. No real girl has a hamster face like that

>>4803118
If you don't know what you dislike about it, then why are you arguing in the first place you, fucking faggot?

>>4803405
sakimichan does too, see where i'm getting at?

>>4803506
I don't like spoons. They are to phallic and make me horny when i eat soup.

>>4803516
Are Sakimichan's references generated by an AI?

>>4803258
That line work, understanding of form and anatomy are far beyond /beg/.
You would know this if you weren't a Dunning-Kruger dunce.

>>4803517
yea, once you learn about patriarchy you realize that our entire culture is permeated by its symbols and it's terrifying. since I started on my gender studies degree I'm now horny all the time.

>>4803522
>she is an ai
t. 2077 starving artist

>>4803528
I'm asking if her references are generated by an AI, where can I find references with six fingers or inconsistently sized breasts?

>>4803525
>>4803517

Oh HAHAHAA

...you joking right?

>gender studies
wew lass

>spoon fetish
wew lad

>>4803513
Anon I...

>>4803272
I would agree with cat too big, except I own a cat that size

>>4803506
because he's redpilled. There is no spoon

>>4803118
that's a big pussy.

>>4803118
Hope this helps op. As you can see, for some reason the artist made the girl 3 1/8 heads tall for some reason. They tried to hide it, but the proportions are all fucked up, I lined it up and fixed the angle so you can see better. I don't know why they didn't add the heals like Loomis uses? I didn't even touch the perspective because they didn't bother to use one point perspective.

>>4803570
wow, didn't laugh so hard in years, I may have just woken up the neighbours...

>>4803570
Good job showing the mistakes this hack artist made, 10/10.

I have never seen so many awful redlines in my life. Jesus Christ.

>>4803592
make your own redline of the redlines then if you're so clever.

I think I have identified the biggest problem in OP's post

>>4803593
Why would I redline something to try to help win an argument for OP? This whole thread is a farce.

>>4803592

Thats the whole point of the thread and I made one of the bad ones

But please, for sake of learning, can you redline and critique our redlines? So this can turn into something useful?

>>4803603
obviously, the biggest mistake is that the cat ISN'T BIG ENOUGH!

I love this thread

>>4803139
>all these people taking the bait

>>4803118
why the top left silver spoon is floating?

>>4803606

You say? Did anyone say Liger?

for someones reference you can draw this i cant LOL

>>4803614
it's a glitch in the matrix evoking the unreality of the scene. I think it also functions as a signifier for a kind of meta-commentary about anime as an aesthetic that's still ongoing today.

t. art history major

>>4803615
well, ligers have a genetic disorder that litteraly prevents them from stopping growing, so...

but I mean come on, this cat is so big it's almost as big as a rabbit!

The biggest issue here is that it is propaganda implying that a girl's kitchen sink isn't constantly full of rotting food and week-old dishes. And there's no pictured overflowing litter box with cat turds scattered around it either. 0/10!

>>4803118
Some line choices are weird and make little sense. I guess the artist used some tracing technique for parts of the drawing. Most problems would be indeed with the figure, but >>4803212 is just plain silly, especially disregarding way more blatant bad choices/mistakes like the very badly drawn hands and feet.

It's still a pretty good drawing and nitpicking isn't "winning an argument".

>>4803214
>>4803216
>>4803217
Broken spines are soooo sexy!

>>4803779

I guess this is the /thread..

was fun tho!

>>4803570
HAHAHAH I'M FUCKING DYING

>>4803779
>the very badly drawn hands and feet.
Retard.

>>4803952
pyw

>>4803960

>>4803118

>>4803118
If you where serious, you would be more subtle in your wording and paraphrasing, obvious bait

>>4803118
? looks fine

maybe I'm blind

>>4803118
No. This is fine. Anyone and their mother would be happy to say they drew this.
With that said there are a few wonky things regarding the body in perspective but they are honestly nitpicks. please stop making stupid threads and go draw.

it's not about everything being correct,
it's about telling a narrative without fucking up so much you break the illusion by causing uncanny valley.

>>4803570

>>4803570
today the crabs won...

I wonder if OP won the argument

>>4804156
likely, he seems like such a fuck nugget he can't have any friends but imaginary ones

more of these threads pleaseeee

Today anime got canceled, based /ic/ red liners destroyed another faker

>>4804110
This is the only competent redline in the entire thread, definitely GMI

>>4803272
So, are you saying she has a big pussy?

>>4803118
its gay

>>4804110
Well personally I would have put the tits a little lower and emphasised their shapes a bit more to show that she doesn't wear a bra.

>>4803139
/Beg/s? You're the one asking for the redline :/

>>4804146
Does anyone know the name of this woman?

>>4803212
Oh no no no no...

>>4803118
You can’t even fucking redline a simple drawing you loomisshitter crab. You probably started to draw in your 20s but your brain already finished growing as a teen

>>4803283
>loomis schizo
>shit perspective and wobbly lines

>>4803570
At this moment I can’t tell if this is serious or just bait. There are loomis beginners on this that are this delusional about him. Loomis was a below average artist and a garbage teacher

>>4803139
We're reaching levels of dunning-kruger previously thought impossible.

>>4803212
never ever "red line" anything else

>>4803279
> your head can't turn 90° to the side

Anon... I'm sorry... but this might just be you.

>>4803118
I don't have time to redline but I fixed some of the major issues.

>>4803782
how fucking fat are you to not be able to look behind yourself?

as for OP, next time just post it in an inspo thread saying it’s the pinnacle of art and perfect, they’ll try to prove it sucks

>>4803622
cute abomination kitty

>>4804473
She's about to get some BPC (Big Pussy Cock)

>>4803615
Hey don't be racist, call them legroes or if they let you "ligas"

>>4803118
>trash
Says the person who grinds loomis heads

>>4803251
Amen.

Here you go. None of you notice that it was the leg that was fucked?

Removed the fucked leg and enlarged her butt.

OP is still a faggot though.

>>4803952
No u.

>>4804620
Is she farting on the cat.

>>4804110
No, you're good.

>>4804630
Looks like it. A.1.alpha thread.

>>4804630
No she's about to drop a dump on its face.

>>4804620
true japanese power stance.
how can western "women" even compete?

>>4803306

>>4803570
fucking great
>>4804364
shut up retard

>>4804654
>dat hyperrealistic picture with fucked up values
Whoever made this should seriously take the loomis pill. A fucking lot that is

>>4804669
>hyperrealistic

anon, I...

>>4804669
how do you take a lot of a pill? a pill isn't a lot you fucking moron! a pill is just a bit!

>>4803118
>can't do it yourself

>>4803615
>>4803622
there's no way in hell i'd stand anywhere near that without a fucking shotgun or something

>>4803212
peak dunning kruger

>>4804110
So the only thing you really found was the far side should is a little bit off. Nice work anon GMI

>>4804110
probably the reason why your art is stiff

>>4804786
Fuck you, my art is limp as fuck!

>>4804620
regardless if this is correct or not, it's not nearly as sexy

>>4803212
troll troll troll troll troll troll troll

>>4804873
Thanks for pretending to be me

>>4803283
best one so far, after the "cat too big looks like dog" one

>>4803212
we need to delete /ic/

>>4804921
No problem. Your red line seems spot on, no idea about how stiff your art is, and sure he doesn't either.
Will draw something now to atone for shitposting.

how did she cut the vegetables? There's no knife in the sink. Did she use....
her vagina?

>>4804165
im dying

>>4804934
there's a knife in the sink

>>4804932
Thanks. I think my art is pretty stiff, maybe too stiff. Tbh i'm pretty self-conscious about it because of a condition i have, but that's beside the point. Looking forward to your drawing anon!

>>4804910
It's way sexier, she looks like she's squatting and protruding her butt

>>4804630
yeah

>>4804963
but the silhouette is so much worse

>>4803118

>>4803212
I've never seen such quality bait

>>4804620
Remember the A.B.T.'s of art, kids.
Allgirls Be Twerking

>>4803567
Thank you

>>4804669
>hyperrealistic
>one eye is melting into the bridge of his nose

>>4804492
"It's totally anatomically possible to rotate your spine like an owl can rotate its head. I've never left my mother's basement to know this for sure, but I know for SURE this is a real human phenomenon!"

>>4805116
Fuck you. I am fat and old, and you just made me do that twist a few time to confirm that you are wrong.

Most exercise I have done in years.

>>4805146
pics or it didn't happen

>>4803118
Thank you ic..looking at all your redlines of this has truly convinced me NEVER to come here for actual critique!
You have also given me a huge ego boost, my own work is probably beg tier itself, but I am confident it is still way better than anything you all could put out!
thank you again ic...from the bottom of my heart...thank you!!!

>>4803570
>>4803570
is this one serious??! omg!

>>4803139
Faggot

>>4805116
lose weight

>>4803473
At this point I would just say it's within the margin of error

>>4805182
edit..I'll post one of mine for you...yes, she looks like she is swinging a glof club, yup, theres anatomy mistakes etc...but hey..I posted mine!!

>>4805202
Go outside boomer

>>4805210
fat

>>4804974
We can fix that by making her butt even bigger :)

>>4805146
Do you want a cookie?

>>4805202
>>4805210
>lol I have no valid counterargument so I'm just gonna call anon fat

>>4803570

>>4805349
soul

>>4803118
>anime girl doing whatever
No redline can save it, you can't redline shit taste and the absence of a brain

>>4805380
that's a cat

>>4805233
>mad fatty

>>4803139

Just because you don't like it, or its drawn in a more simplistic style, does not make it /beg/.

>>4804971

Pussy fart?

at this point you should just make a Red Line general.

>>4805774
good idea, but im too lazy, u do it

>>4803283
I've been audibly laughing like a schizo for 5 minutes, thanks for the redline chad

>>4805774
I'll make one after this one die.

>>4803212
Are you a fucking cripple? You can't turn your head? All of that is wrong and you're a /beg/.

>>4803336
Haha

>>4803212
>asked to redline
>text only
Holy hell

>>4805233
Yes please!

>>4805349
Let me do you one better.

>>4804620
Is she fucking surfing, anon?

>>4803570
>>4805349
Made me laff so hard. Thanks thread

>>4803212

>>4805349
My gamer pose

>>4803530
3D models in clip studio paint

>>4803283
kek

>>4803570
The greatest redline on /ic/

>>4803118
It's a beautiful picture, who gives a shit if the anatomy isn't right. Go check out old masters' paintings, they're full of mistakes, especially regarding perspective.

>>4803118
Flow, design, shape language matter more than tehnical anatomy accuracy. not that the anatomy is even off in this. its beautiful, i'm going to save it to my inspiration folder. you all are idiots

>>4803570
Genius

>>4803118
I can smell this picture in approximately four different very pleasing ways.
This is awesome.

its too cluttered and her body is slightly distorted. other than that I dont care for it anyway too feminine and unbalanced

but it gets and a for effort and the coloring isnt too bad

>>4807574
Jesus Christ.

>>4807600
>too feminine

The state of /ic/ critique.

>>4803570
This is the best thread on ic right now

>>4804294
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Natalia_Poklonskaya

>>4807574
So it is perfect, except you don't fancy her kitchen layout, and think her cat should step off?

>>4807725
>So it is perfect, except
so it's not perfect then, is it smart guy?

>>4807765
Are you mentally handicapped?

>>4807765
I meant it is perfect, except that you would like some arbitrary aspects of the picture different.

But you are right, it is not perfect, from your personal cat space positioning and kitchen preferences.

>>4807782
lmao, seethe harder

>>4807784
What is it you think I'm seething about, downy?