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What is /ALT/?
If you're looking for a place to post your cartooning then you've found the right general. This is /ic/s 1st and only merged hub where both Eastern and Western stylization can coexist peacefully, hence the double title. However, by community demand and long history, this is favorably an Anime general.
>Rules & Guidelines
(1) Any form of cartooning is welcome; so submit and receive feedback from others. (2) Please resize your images before posting. (3) Share your knowledge and (4) Remember to not be afraid of asking for critique. Most importantly I encourage you to keep discussion at a civil level, but you're more than welcome to share your opinions.
>I came for anime. Why does the image OP say cartoons general?
To distinguish from the anime study thread (janitor supported). Please post your studies there and personal work goes here.
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>Community Resources
Hitokaku Index
>http://www.asahi-net.or.jp/~zm5s-nkmr/
List of active livestreams
>Use twitch #art
>yoshikadu2011 https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCUx5dpO6d5gQ4KWNPc24CKw
FellowBro's Book Collection
>http://mediafire.com/?i44dwzkf9j9n8
Tutorial & Reference Collection
>http://pinterest.com/characterdesigh/
Japanese Tutorials & Documentary
>http://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?id=59317 (0033)
>http://iradukai.com/
References
>http://www.onairvideo.com/croquis-cafe-photos2.html
>http://www.eggazyoutatsu.net/eng/atarichan.html
>http://senshistock.com/sketch/

>> No.4464521

>>4464511
Is people unironically attracted to midgets? I always felt repulsed and scared of them, they remind me of Chucky. There is something inherently evil about midgets.

>> No.4464527

>>4464511
Why is that the op?

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>>4464511
eeew.

>> No.4464550

>>4464511
hahhahha the one on the right
how can people cum to this LOL

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>>4464511

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>>4464558

>> No.4464574

Fuck off back to /porn/, disgusting coomer.

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uhhh ms cunny

>> No.4464584

>>4464579
MMMMMMMOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOODS!!!!!!

>> No.4464586

>>4464579
Ummm, based.

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>>4464521
>>4464527
>>4464537
>>4464550
>>4464574
Low test and cringe
>>4464579
Based

>> No.4464596
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4464596

>post refs guys
>porn
>post art that inspires you guys
>porn
>post comic pages you like guys
>porn

>I have a project in mind
>what is your project about anon? maybe we can discuss the storytelling
>it's porn

>so let's discuss art career, how do you go about entering the industry
>just draw porn lol
>draw porn! everyone loves porn! you can draw gay porn, furry porn or loli porn, there's a lot of choice

>post your figure studies guys and let's share critique
>anon posts porn
>wow nice porn omg I want to jerk off so much I can't stop jerking off
>meh tits too big
>meh tits too small
>cute omg
>qt grill!!!!
>add dick pls
>blog??
>it's not my art lol, it's by shojuchi himewada

>I think this art board is overrun with porn, it's hard to discuss art when everyone just wants to post porn and comment on porn.
>WHY ARE YOU SUCH A BIGOT REEEEEEEEEEEEEE
>THERE IS A PORN GENERAL AND NOBODY EVER POSTS PORN OUTSIDE OF IT, I PINKY SWEAR THERE IS NO PORN AT ALL ON THIS BOARD! ACTUALLY WE SHOULD JUST POST MORE PORN I WOULD LOVE TO SEE EVEN MORE PORN WHY WOULD ANYONE HATE PORN LOL ARE YOU CRAZY PORN IS GREAT OMG I LOVE PORN SO MUCH
>*soi wojak post captioned with strawman/projection*
>YOU MUST BE A CHRISTIAN /POL/ TRANNY SJW KEK ALBINO JEW ARAB!
>I MADE 5000 DOLLARS A WEEK COPE HARDER!!!!!! I NEED TO SAY THIS EVEN THOUGH IT'S IRRELEVANT BECAUSE I FEEL THREATENED!
>SO YOU DON'T MASTURBATE? EVERYONE MASTURBATES WHAT'S WITH ALL THESE NOFAP MEMERS FROM /FIT/, WHEN SOMEONE SAYS COOM I LITERALLY SHAKE WITH ANGER ALL THESE PROBLEMATIC BULLIES SHOULD GO BACK TO THEIR SAFE SPACE

>> No.4464600

>>4464579
That actually looks better than the op, lmao.

>> No.4464612

>>4464596
Seething

>> No.4464613
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>>4464592
this

>> No.4464620

>>4464613
>>4464592
>Cope

>> No.4464622

>>4464511
New Thread
>>4464616
>>4464616
>>4464616

>> No.4464625

>>4464622
Yea rather have goblin gains art as op.

>> No.4464636

migrate to the new thread this ones about to get nuked

>> No.4464642

>>4464622
Shoo shoo

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>> No.4464651

>>4464625
Honestly gobgains is improving breddy gud and not that bad when he doesn't post weird fetish porn. This op belongs in the porn thread and IS fetish art.

Both threads feel like op artists are shilling their work too hard. Great way to start off a new general.

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4464653

we mech inspo now

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>> No.4464678
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Didn't found the NSFW thread, so I'm gonna post here.

Any advice will be welcome

>> No.4464680

>>4464678
oh no now the thread will derail into retards spamming 'coomer'

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>> No.4464690

>>4464680
It's already a trash bin used for mech inspiration instead of original art

>> No.4464692

>>4464680
>oh no now the thread will derail into retards spamming “Puritan”

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>>4464596
>>4464511
Of fucking course someone had to make a thread on /ic/ specially to bitch about this.
Posters on this dogshit board with all your degenerate fetishes and generic anime obsession should be last the fucking ones to bitch about some random SJW capeshit.

WHO FUCKING GIVES A SHIT? It might be cringey as fuck, but at least this time they're making their own original characters instead than taking well known beloved characters and changing or rewriting them to he point of unfamiliarity. Let them have at it. If it fucking fails the fuck it, so be it.

SJWs and anti-SJWs are always fucking crying and bitching about each other and every single move they make.


INCEL THIS, TRANNY THAT. HAVE SEX THIS, DIALATE THAT. FUCK.
SHUT THE FUCK UP AND GO FUCKING DRAW OR PAINT SOMETHING. HOLY FUCKING SHIT.

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>>4464596
Are you arguing with yourself in your head and this is what it looks like written out?

>> No.4464726

>>4464678
it vexes my greatly that no matter how hard i work in life i will never have a big penis like that
i think the butthole on the second panel is maybe too high

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>> No.4464943

>>4464902
it looks like they are occupying too much space

>> No.4464945

>>4464596
Who are you quoting?

>> No.4464959

>>4464511
Why is this coom shit the OP

>> No.4464977

>>4464678
Dude it seems like you've been working on this comic for like 3 yrs or something are you ever going to actually finish

>> No.4465008

>>4464511
Blog?

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4465019

>>4464943
i feel like they will look propperly scaled when i add in all the monsters, but if not i'm keeping them all on their own layers so i can fidget with them

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>>4464559

>> No.4465543

>>4465320
This feels really JSRF-esque, I dig that it has that Y2K aesthetic down.

>> No.4465612

>>4465019
ahhhh gains gobo

>> No.4465659

>>4464559
>>4465320
>>4464653
>>4464649
>>4464646
>>4464643
Kino

>> No.4465712

>>4464706
wait why did you copy and past this from the Marvel SJW capeshit thread? This is coomer shit, so trying to make this a copy and paste for here doesn't really work lol

>> No.4465719
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Why are crabs and NGMI porn addicts hellbent on derailing one of the only decent draw threads left on this shitty board?

>> No.4465733

>>4465719
The pornfags are mad that no one made them a new containment thread, so they are derailing this one.

>> No.4465827

>>4465733
are these morons too fucking dumb to make a new thread themselves?

>> No.4465836

>>4465719
>NGMI porn addicts
/ic/ is filled with these bums and worse. Your expectations should be in the gutter for this board and every single thread. If you're ever disappointed in /ic/, it's because you deluded yourself into thinking it was an alright place.

>> No.4465847

>>4465836
anon literally calls it a shitty board in his post

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>>4465827
Uhh, anon...

>> No.4465865

>>4465850
what the fuck is going on with board and why are morons flocking here?

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4465879

>>4465320
We really have a lot of the same references and your pieces are very good.
The only thing that feels missing is some sense of dynamism. Original art has that wacky feel and distorted looks.
So I started doodling and got at that.
But I'm nowhere near as good as you so...

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4466008

do yall like her??????

>> No.4466009

>>4466008
Love it

>> No.4466019

>>4464902
Is he moving the shield out of the way so the enemy can attack him or is he just posing in the middle of a bridge?

>> No.4466027

>>4466019
that'll become clear when i add the monsters

>> No.4466030

>>4465733
>other thread is made by the most outrages pornfag on this board

lol...

>> No.4466034

>>4466019
Maybe he's using the shield edge to reflect sun light and temporarily blind the enemy, giving him a chance to strike. I've read a book where a character used this technique which he learned from a secret book of a martial arts sect.

>> No.4466037

>so triggered that they have to run to a whole nother thread before this one finishes
>header is GOBLIN
lmao

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4466039

>>4465879
well thank you...
i think urs is great! you really got the background down, looks totally like original art, I agree woth you, I've drawn jsr stuff a lot but rarely ever draw them in movement like that, just haven't come up with a decent pose, it is hard... I think you did great, maybe the issues with yours is her lines are too clean compared to the bg, and that takes away some of the movement? makes it a bit stiff; also the face might need some work!

posting this one agains just cuz its related

>>4466008
hote

>> No.4466043

>>4466037
Gainsgob has unironically been getting lots of gains recently and is living up to his name desu.

>> No.4466048

>>4466008
not really. the anatomy of her arms and shoulders are kind of goofy. Short stubby arms and bad use of foreshortening on the left hand.

Girls wearing slutty clothing wont distract from a bad drawing, anon.

>> No.4466051

>>4466039
>>4465320
Blog?

>> No.4466060

>>4466037
who are you responding to? and do you thing gains goblin drew the header image? are you blind?

>> No.4466061

>>4466037
>mocks a poster who's drawing skills are actively improving
>wants to indulge in thread derailment and shitposting
NGMI

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4466108

>>4466008
here's the full image.

>> No.4466394

>>4466061
>thread derailment
>when you were the ones that derailed
>goburin
>improving

>> No.4466430
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see-through waifu
want to color it but fuck if i know what an appealing palette is

>> No.4466457

>>4465865
Cool guys are drawing and have no time to create new threads

>> No.4466496

>>4464977
Maybe this quarantine help

>> No.4466550

>>4466430
you could steal one from another artwork

>> No.4466763
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4466763

Why the fuck are there 2 alt threads - pull your shit together

Perspective is shit

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4466995

>>4466763
Colored it - since it was already messed up, i tried a bunch of new color combos

>> No.4467022

>>4466995
colors look great!

>> No.4467048

petition to rename this to /SALT/
(sexual alternative) for coomer containment purposes

>> No.4467056
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what do you do if you want to marry your own OC..

>> No.4467058

>>4467056
an hero so you can join them in non-existence

>> No.4467059

>>4467056
joker's trick

>> No.4467153

>>4467056
Now animate her getting spitroasted

>> No.4467167

>>4467056
dont fuck clowns

>> No.4467228

>>4467056
coom inside her

>> No.4467293

>>4467056
are you a juggalo?

>> No.4467298
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further work

>> No.4467555

>>4464596
t.woman

>> No.4467558

>>4466430
>4464511
Did she kill someone?

>> No.4467565

>>4466430
why not just colorpick the colors from the artwork you traced this from?

>> No.4467611

>>4466995
Getting some crazy Aeonflux vibes from this pic.

>> No.4467615

>>4467558
Just the artist's integrity.

>> No.4467620

>>4466430
Nice trace

>> No.4467842
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4467842

Could I get some help/redline?
I've been trying to have a slightly curvy pose but it's not getting much better.

>> No.4467880

>>4467842
cant do redline rn tablet not on me, but really get ref as that pose you want is pretty basic you will find hundreds of refs

also google and study contrapasto ro whateevr its called, its a pose concept where the shoulders and hips are always opposite in angles in a way that even a standing figure feels dynamic, it can be used anywhere to make something interesting and seems its what youre trying to do here

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>>4467842
im anon from above, did a quick google search of what i was saying

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>> No.4468172

>>4466051
https://twitter.com/pantsu_ripper frend

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>>4467056
It happened before, and the gods made his OC come to life.

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Coronavirus got me bored as hell so i figured i'll make some doodles, back to vidya

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>> No.4468229

>>4468189
with all the weird stuff that gets posted on the internet, im surprised for the lack of self-inserts in coom art or in general desu

>> No.4468240

>>4468229
almost every faceless male hentai doujin is self insert

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>> No.4468320

>>4468240
Also why ugly fat bastard is so common.

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4468354

WIP of Sprocket from Animal Crossing. I haven't really drawn large metal objects before, especially a spherical one. I'm just kinda guessing the shading/lighting since I can't find a decent reference.

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Got no replies last thread, will try again. I have trouble finding my style, sould I just stick to messy pencil work or experiment with brush inking?

>>4467982
Very nice weight behind the movements and poses, faces look a tad wonky

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4468448

>>4467842
>>4467880

Most of my drafts with reference are stiff, lifeless and just bad. The one that suck the less is this one. Is it acceptable?

>> No.4468451

>2 /alt/ threads are up
>can't even have a single porn thread without janitors going full retard

>> No.4468460

>>4468388
I really like these. I think you should keep practicing with ink, the first two drawings have much more personality and a good flow thanks to the inking. Have you tried hatching? I think it would look really cool.

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>>4465719
sauce?

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>>4468448
if it looks stiff then the best way to solve that is practising more fluid drawing, gesture exercises are for that, try seeing videos of people doing gesture drawing and try and apply it to everything you want to draw, its easier to exagerrate then pull back a bit than to be afraid of messing up and being lifeless

what made me less stiff is watching vilppu and seeing the force figure drawing book, both available here on /ic/ threads, and apply same fluidity to everyhting with time you get more accurate and get the right line down without being stiff

and yes i enjoy this one a little better

just keep at it, dont worry about getting it "right", literally push the pose even to extreme then reel it back in, the stiffness comes from that, being afraid of "going even further beyond" Goku did it, why cant you?
hope i helped somehow

>> No.4468544

>>4468513
Based gokuposter

>> No.4468586

>>4468513
>its easier to exagerrate then pull back a bit

lol bro I posted the full drawing to get an opinion on the colour scheme a while ago.
I really pushed the pose and the reply was thus "it's completely unbalanced" (which is was)
and kind of impossible because the planes of shoulders, pelvis would not naturally stay in this position.

If anything I've understand how bad I am and how little I'm able to perceive these slight plane inclinations.
In particular I took a few photos of myself trying to do the pose, while "feeling" I was exaggerating, and on the pictures the inclinations are very subtle.
So it's really hard to perceive the structure very accurately.

Thank you for your comments, encouragement, and solid advice.

>> No.4468598

>>4468503
Jin-Roh; The Wolf Brigade

>> No.4468602

>>4467620
>>4466550
>>4467615
original sauce?

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>>4468222
So I switched to greyscale in manga studio and realized my values weren't reading at all lol. Hopefully this is a little better.

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>>4468602
Wait! Was my post that started the tracing accusations?! If that is the case, I am sorry!

I was honestly suggesting him to steal a color palete, I used "steal" as a joke, I wasn't implying anything. I guess I worded it poorly.

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>>4468820
No, he straight up traced it.

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>>4468856
Well, that is a relief, I was feeling really shitty. Thanks!

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4468895

it worked for cutesexyrobutts but can it work for me?

>> No.4468927

>>4467555
>implying women don't make the most coomer art of all

>> No.4468928

>>4466108
>dislikes alcohol spicy stuff and scary movies
Actually I don't like her at all

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4468946

02 fan art
I liked the show

>> No.4468949

>>4468946
What the fuck is going on with her face

>> No.4468953

>>4468949
I wish I could do better but I don't know how to fix it

>> No.4468976
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>>4468460
Thanks, the second drawing is pencil though not ink. I will try inking more though in the future. As for hatching, I'm a bit intimidated to be honest, the second picture (again) is my accidental attempt at a more free flowing hatching method, akin to greek orthodox paintings.

>> No.4468979

>>4468953
Not the anon you replied to
Try a smaller, less open mouth

>> No.4468989

>>4468979
I tried to make it bigger intentionally, to push the expression, it looks like maybe was a wrong choice lol

>> No.4468990

>>4468895
This looks more cute cute butts. csb's painting is what makes it all the worthwhile.

>> No.4468994

>>4468895
HOTE

>> No.4469004

>>4468895
Good enough for me to ask for a blog.
Blog?

>> No.4469005

>>4468895
Make a twitter and see. Tell us if it works.

>> No.4469018

>>4467842
>>4467885
>>4468448
its going to take you a more practice and looking at reference / life to get this

you should try to think about the distribution of weight more in your breakdown and draw your forms in 3d with construction, that will help you understand what you're doing wrong
-> leg that the weight is resting on pushes up on hip -> hip tilts in opposite direction -> ribcage tilts in opposite dir. of hips -> show compression on one side w/ C-lines and stretch on opposite with S-lines

THINK and DRAW in 3D with CONSTRUCTION

Look at the relevant sections of Hampton and Bridgman as well

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>>4469004
based https://twitter.com/SojournFantasy

>>4469005
2 new followers since I posted it, big leagues here I come.

>> No.4469138

>>4464511
I love the leaves of the fall.

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>>4464511
Piece I'm working on

>> No.4469176

>>4468976
That's really cool, i have never seen that technique before. Do you have a blog?

>> No.4469198

>>4469176
I don't but I have an insta with some older sketches, I plan on uploading more in the future.

@brontolalos

>> No.4469284

>>4464511
Porn thread is gone again and I wanted to ask them, how viable is it to get paid on amazon gift cards for your lewds if it's just something you do as a side for fun and faps and hobby money? I don't want my legit business to get knocked down in the upcoming anti-porn paypal inquisition.

>> No.4469360

>>4469284
i mean if you shop at amazon and dont mind it its better than nothing
dont know if theres a way to extract the money of the card to be used elsewhere tho

>> No.4469416

>>4468856
>>4466430
That's really the most egregious shit I've seen in a while. He even ripped of the legs motif.
He did remove a lot of details and lost a lot of the appeal in the process.
And it's something popular, so bound to be found out very quickly.

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r8 m8s

>> No.4469475
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>> No.4469477
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not my best work

>> No.4469478
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>> No.4469482

>>4469475
Make Landschnekt bebehs together.
>>4466493

>> No.4469483

>>4467048
I unironically support this, if only to bring back the containment threads for coomers.

>> No.4469509

>>4469483
Are the jannies literally retarded?
You either ban posting porn altogether or don't ban the porn threads.
These derailments about posting porn in the generals are so annoying.

>> No.4469524

>>4467048
>>4469483
I will never be caged

>> No.4469533

>>4469360
Yeah I'd just use it to buy drawing supplies, /tg/ products and computer parts on amazon, which is what I do with my hobby cash anyway. I already make a livable wage with /gd/ and don't want to risk that, but people have begged me to make them lewds for money so I've been pondering what the safest bet to get those funds in would be and the recent patreon/paypal attacks on porn convinced me there's zero way I'm taking lewd money on my work accounts.

>> No.4469554

>>4469472
>DFC furries
Uma delicia.
Jokes aside before jannies delete your post, blog?

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Hopefully the anatomy isn't too fuckey, ik the feet are going to be hard

>> No.4469752
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4469752

used xenoblade 1 concepts for reference. i know im /beg/ but still felt like posting.

>> No.4469815

>>4469554
https://twitter.com/SukkMadikk
what DFC means? btw

>> No.4470594
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4470594

So I'll try to spend a few more hours and call it done.
The pose is less dynamic than all my trials but it does not feel to wrong to me.
Any comments/critiques?

>> No.4471019

>>4470594
It looks liek she just tripped over a rock, maybe connect the metal head of the shoe to the actual shoe a little more

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>>4469815
Delicious flat chest

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there's something I just can't crack about rendering
any anons have advice?

>> No.4471325

>>4471285
literally watch videos, not only digital but also oil painters its same strokes, so that you get the idea of what your brush is supposed tobe doing, after that do thousands of studies painting, better subjects would be other artists instead of photos especially old masters, after that you can study your fav artists etc etc

but ye seeing how people are doing it and trying to replicate the strokes/mechanical movement then tons of practise

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wip, far art a game

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>> No.4471794

>>4470594
luv lodoss of war

>> No.4471869

>>4468586
actually your problem is relying on /ic/ for advise instead of masters (old and new) and your own taste.

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4471950

i feel something is off with the perspective of the crowd

>> No.4472693

>>4471950
Yeah their feet in the wrong perspective

>> No.4472700

>>4472693
Stop bumping. Just let it die

>> No.4472736

>>4471950

The crowd seems too small based on the perspective. Where they are, they should be bigger.

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>>4472736
>>4471950
I have to agree with anon, this is very clean but the girls look like giants to me.

>> No.4473201

>>4471772
>the shield
yeah, it does make more sense now.

>> No.4473219

>>4473201
everyone forgets that the shield is a weapon until it smacks them in the face

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>>4466995
Feeling lazy today

>>4467611
Probably because i had a major fuck up with the limbs

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>>4464138
thanks friend :^)

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Dummy thing

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>>4473265
The stars aligned

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added some shading, tho i think i'm going to color it instead

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>> No.4473979

>>4466430
Limp Bizkit lookin' ass
NGMI

>> No.4474010

>>4469478
Love how the ears curve into the horns on that devil girl. Legs are a little thin compared to the rest of her body, though.
The right arm on the right girl is messed up, forearm too short while the upper arm is too long.
Anyway, I'd like to see more of these characters because I think they're pretty cute. >inb4 pedo

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>>4473521
Maximum effort with weird organic mech parts

>> No.4474045

>>4473626
very cool dude

>> No.4474080

>>4474040
You ever make up little stories for your characters? Seems like a waste, otherwise.

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4474207

help me

>> No.4474219

>>4474040
Sup anon, have you ever tried to vary your lines more? try doing the character with really thin lines and the mech parts with large lines
vice versa
nice style anyways!!!!!!

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>>4464511
stupid jew mods mods banned me

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>>4474235
and the only difference from me and op's post was that my drawing didnt have huge fat tits

>> No.4474245

>>4474235
Well deserved

>> No.4474253

>>4474223
looks like she could be the next Poison skin for street fighter

>> No.4474395
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4474395

>>4474040
Did some procreate fix up

>>4474080
Not really - maybe this one can be a pissed off jester since she is forced to tell jokes all the time

>>4474219
Neat idea - I’m always interested in trying stuff with line widths. The curvy mech parts were new for me. They were a bit too scribble. Might give it another go.

>> No.4474399

>>4474395
Wouldn't be out of place in a JRPG, that one.

>Not really
That's a shame. It's always fun to place a story behind the character. For me, at least.

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>>4474399
What kind of story would you have given this one?

It was from an art mash up of these things

>> No.4474547
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>>4474478
Er, I can try. Here's a rough concept.

'
Jester of the Turning Wheel
A curious automaton never found far from a lord of the realm - whoever and wherever that may have been over the millennia. She has played the role of the eternal advisor, a brick wall to bounce ideas off, for the only thing that can bring a smile to her face is the sound of a plan doomed to fail.
Ask for a joke, and be prepared for a colorful history lesson.
'

Backstory being an automaton built for entertainment by a long dead, technologically/magically uplifted civilization. It ran out of traditional comedy material long ago, and has since perverted to find humor in human failure, especially on the large scale. Its long 'life' has granted it a near-supernatural intuition for bad ideas.
She gets frustrated when people don't laugh at her jokes (long winded historical accounts of civilization collapse)

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Think I'm finally cracking up.

>> No.4474885

What the fuck happened to pixiv? I haven't been there in a long time but I just went and it looks like a shitty mobile site on my pc plus creators are putting their shit behind paywalls what the fuck

>> No.4474907
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4474907

I need opinions on this sketch.
I don't understand my own drawings. Depending when I look at them sometimes they seem ok sometimes they appear wrong.

>> No.4474909

>>4471463
I love her

>> No.4474921

>>4474907
The line quality is pretty good. The figure is very stiff however - reminds me of one of those jointed paper dolls. I think you need to study the figure more to get a feel for weight and gesture.

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>> No.4474947

>>4474921
Thank you, I will find some resources and read some more about anatomy for drawing and then try some new poses.

>> No.4474953

>>4474907
proportions all over the place, im no expert though. Head too big, feet too small.

>> No.4474963

>>4473038
she looks stoned, though maybe that's the point.

>> No.4474969

>>4474924
based.

>> No.4475094

>>4474207
the pink light reflection feels weird
but very nice overall

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4475139

>>4474907
"sketch"
>>4474947
don't waste your time your anatomy is fine. Are you able to draw heads from lower / weirder angles? Can you draw figures from top down angles? I think the ability to push the head forward in space will help you.

Individually you did each part quite well, but as a whole it doesn't flow, that's a problem of posing. Try to do a really nice looking pose next time.

That's all you have to do really, just try do a really nice pose, but I want to type more so I will.
You could try getting a strong image for a certain pose; for example, a girl stretching her arms up, legs splayed out kneel on the floor. You probably have some idea of what this looks like already. It's a lot easier to to draw cute if you can imagine something that would look really cute.

Totally unplanned drawings aren't bad per say (it's how I draw usually), but they can often lead to static poses. It really helps to have an idea, some might say inspiration, something you can really imagine to try and draw.

If you have the choice between a pose you know and a pose you're not sure about, just do the pose you know how to do - especially when you aren't working from imagination. I admit I actually kinda just broke the rule because me trying to do what I imagined led me to have to lift arms up, and I'm not 100% sure how to lift arms like this, however when you have a strong image, it puts you in the best position to draw things you aren't quite sure how to do. This is why people are able to draw so many different angles yet do it well - they aren't doing unplanned generic work, they are working from imagination and are just doing the things they are fairly confident they can do - probably something they've seen somewhere. That, and that through practice they have already learned most general angles anyways, so it's not entirely uncertain with each part they are drawing.

anyways tl;dr, just try to do a really cute pose, and you'll do a cute one. That's it.

>> No.4475164

>>4474907
Looks good.

>> No.4475196

>>4475139
Thanks for the comment, I can draw heads and faces from diffent angles, but i need to work more to draw full figures.
I will certainly try new poses, in that drawing I improvised the pose just after doing the head and was probably a mistake.
Also recently I installed a posing software so it might help a bit, but yes I will try to reproduce more exagerated dynamic poses.

Also reading a bit about perispective applied to bodies might help me a bit.

>>4475164
Thank you! Learning from mistakes I don't see just by myself. I find it hard to judge my own stuff.

>> No.4475287

>>4474907
head way too big even for anime and weirdly shaped. try drawing hair with similar sized strands, you have some individual hairs and right next to them is a big chunk. at least feather the ends a little. feet too small

>> No.4475333
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4475333

lissen up anon

>> No.4475412

>>4475287
Ok thank you, I found it difficoult to shape the head with that hat on as well.

>> No.4475511

>>4475139
moar

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>>4475094
Thats nice to hear.
I played around with it and redrew the head. Not sure if it looks better or worse, though. I guess I should just move on.

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>> No.4475611

>>4475608
don't lewd my wife thanks

>> No.4475617

>>4475333
Delicious shapes

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>> No.4475629

>>4475624
>>>/ic/beg

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>>4475629

>> No.4475687

>>4475511
there's always a sense of dread when I get a (you) on /ic/ after making a post like that. glad you like it anon

>> No.4475760

>>4474395
It looks like a brazillian carnival outfit

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>> No.4475802

>>4475785
cute, nice poncho too

>> No.4475804

>>4475785
Don't understand the space bodysuit, but I love the revolvers

>> No.4475813
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>>4474547
I wasn’t expecting such a detailed backstory. I thought it was going to be a X does Y kind of story - thanks!

>>4474395
Warm up

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>>4475818
Do you happen to be a fan of Synecdoche?

>> No.4475857

>>4475847
big one

>> No.4475906

>>4475785
Cute girl but shit color-pallet. Get some browns in there instead of this gay space-shit.

>> No.4476013

>>4475847
ass too big

>> No.4476019

>>4475906
>no fun allowed

>> No.4476021

>>4475785
Haley-chan a cute

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rkgk

>> No.4476251

>>4475813
>I wasn’t expecting such a detailed backstory.
I can't summon a will to draw unless I have a sentimental attachment to the subject, so I have a bunch of characters with elaborate backstories, etc, to keep me entertained while I study anatomy, figure, gesture, etc.

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>>4471950
I post this because I feel sorry for you. Read any book on perspective. It will help you even if you try to get on tracing.

>> No.4476284

>>4476238
cool concept, just practise hands more and general anatomy/perspective as the arms are also kinda janky

if character was real she would be holding the orbs with arms slightly forward you have her with arms literally at 90 degree angle

>> No.4476315

>>4476279
SHIT DEPLOY THE MECHS

>> No.4476327

>>4476238
>>>/ic//beg/

>> No.4476644 [DELETED] 
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dont usually like loli but i did a quickie

>> No.4476659

>>4476644
Those boobs really look like massive testicles growing out of her chest.

>> No.4476664

>>4476659
yeah i agree one sec.

>> No.4476665

>>4476659
even better

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>>4476644

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>>4476659
here hows this

>>4476670
put me in the screencap mom get the camera

>> No.4476683

>>4476681
Better

>> No.4476695

>>4475818
gotta blog anon?

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tried a simple crude style

>> No.4476848

>>4471950
I can't imagine how you got this far into a drawing and not realized your perspective is fucked. You even drew the building amazing right.

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>>4476843

>> No.4476883

>>4475586
blog

>> No.4476885

>>4476843
uhhhh.. why they fat pussy

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4476889

>>4464977
I like do others things and sometimes I feel that I don't draw the amount of hours I should, so, I'm trying to force myself to draw everyday.

I want and I need to draw more.

Any advice before continue with this panel?

>> No.4476895

>>4476885
Why not

>> No.4476896

>>4476889
Come on bro, I need some backstory.
What's with the purple dude? Why is he PURPLE?

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>>4476896
Ok
He is an alien, because the girl was abducced to other planet so, to back again to earth she must to have sex with the three most important people there: the king or emperor (whatever), the army general, and the prince (or something like that, I've not defined) and to probe she already fucked all the guys she need to show to the pilot of the spaceship the mark of each one that is a tattoo-like in diferent part of her body.
Also, she fuck with the alien that pilot the spaceship even before they arrived

>> No.4476973

>>4475785
what's wrong with her face lol

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>>4464511
>>4464616

Now that we have reached the endgame, which thread was superior?

>> No.4477184

>>4477029
This one had a rough start but the other one has devolved into a pedophilia argument so I'm inclined to say this one

>> No.4477395

>>4467056
Blog?

>> No.4477841

>>4476695
ronmeruart on twitter

>> No.4478025

>>4469162
left arm missing. Pls add

>> No.4478029

>>4474235
but you're still posting???

>> No.4478031

>>4476934
you drew her really well in the 2nd panel

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>>4466039
Thank you.
Assuming you weren't just being polite I cleaned up a few things.
Put the bg in proper perspective, detailed a bit the lines, and cleaned up the face.

>>4473396
Really nice!

>> No.4478443

>>4478232
hey I think you totally fixed it, her lines look a lot more consistent with the bg now and you can really feel the motion now

>> No.4478675
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i guess this goes here better
>wip

>> No.4478768

>>4478675
>big tits and a cross

yeah this is looking pretty based so far

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>> No.4479083

>>4479073
If you stopped trying to improve and decided to consistently work in this style you could probably be pro.

>> No.4479207

>>4476934
One part DBZ, one part Thanos. I like it.

>> No.4479255

What is /SALT/?
If you're looking for a place to post all sexual works, from pinups with exaggerated proportions to pornography, then this is the right general for you. Both Eastern and Western stylization can coexist peacefully here.
>Rules & Guidelines
(1) Any form of cartooning is welcome; so submit and receive feedback from others. (2) Please resize your images below 1000x1000 before posting. (3) Share your knowledge and (4) Remember to not be afraid of asking for critique, 5) Remember all GB3 related content such as lolicon, shotacon, furry pornography, furry and bestiality are banned on ALL boards, including red boards, except /b and /trash.

Most importantly I encourage you to keep discussion at a civil level, but you're more than welcome to share your opinions.
>I came for anime. Why does the image OP say cartoons general?
To distinguish from the anime study thread (janitor supported). Please post your studies there and personal work goes here.

>> No.4479264

>>4479255
Good now make an actual thread for the retarded coomers.

>> No.4479266

>>4479255

Remind me to rewrite my thread macro later.

>> No.4479270

>>4479073
Bruh how do you draw so much? Are you a student rn or what

>> No.4479366

>>4479270
I don't think I draw that much, I just draw after work and get little to no sleep...

>> No.4479463

>>4479264
shouldnt you be in the other thread? :^)

>> No.4479474

>>4478675
I like where this is going

>> No.4479585
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>> No.4479595

>>4475333
I like your style

>> No.4479614

>>4478962
Cuteee blog?

>> No.4479651

>>4464511
Who'd you recommend to learn cartoon lighting/cel-shading?

>> No.4480392

>>4474207
Lighting looks consistent actually. Blog?

>> No.4480932
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>>4479073
Really did not feel inspired for a background.
Not sure it's worth the time either.

So what are we drawing tomorrow?

>> No.4480975

>>4480932
really cool! you really get that feel of da og art...

not sure, i kind of wanna draw the cute black girl but not sure i can pull dat off

>> No.4481161
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laying down flats

>> No.4481175

>>4481161
Noice

>> No.4481310 [DELETED] 

>>4481161
>Stocking a shit
Best girl coming through

>> No.4481315
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>>4481161
>stocking a shit
Best girl coming through

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4481784

Is the solid color background a good finish or look too lazy?

>> No.4481795

>>4481784
the continuity of this makes no sense
>he gets a glass out of nowhere
>at some point she drank her wine to fill the glass with cum

>> No.4481808

>>4481795
i think its meant to read from left to right like western comics, you may have gotten it wrong

>> No.4481811

>>4481784
nah not really, having a bunch of detail in backgrounds can be too distracting, if you read enough western comics or eastern manga/manwha you will see alot of simple panels only using detailed backgrounds for full body shots or multiple chaarcter scenes etc

heck most of full metal alchemist is blank backgrounds

>> No.4481812

>>4481808
it doesn't matter, it never shows her drinking the wine.

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>>4481795
Man, you're absolutely right, I need to put more atention to continuity.
I'm gonna ask for advice before inking the page.
Maybe I can make a little sense with some dialogue
Thanks!

>> No.4481830

>>4481811
Glad to read that, I think the background is unnecessary in some panels too
Thanks!

>> No.4481906

>>4481315
nah, kneesocks you cuck

>> No.4482000

>>4481997
>>4481997

no more drama pleasee

>> No.4482010

Coomers, head over here.
>>4482003
>>4482003

>> No.4483191

>>4475333
Good job. It's the one image that managed to genuinely grab my attention for more that 2 seconds without resorting to boobs.

>> No.4483194

>>4475608
God I wish that were me.

>> No.4484800

>>4478675
Blog?

>> No.4484872

>>4466108
>>Dislikes FUN
eh next!

>> No.4484874

>>4467056
draw porn of her and yourself then proceed to An hero self

>> No.4485582

Are there any recommendable tutorials on digital rendering that actually go into the different tools, why they use them, etc.?

>> No.4486550

>>4466995
Don’t know what this style of coloring or art is but I know I want to see more

>> No.4486578
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>>4467842
Here’s the thing, if the right leg is overlapping the left leg it shouldn’t be tucked behind it. It makes it look uncomfortable and disrupts the flow of the line of action. Other than that, it’s pretty good

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>> No.4487092

>>4467298
lol

>> No.4487096

>>4468895
I really dislike your art, and how much of soulless shill you are lol.

>> No.4487111

>>4474223
Blog?

>> No.4487174

>>4476681
lmao