/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

Started throwing colors on this.
I like the direction it's going now, but still scratching my head on godrays

>>4437349
Bro...

>>4437347
blog??

>>4437333
Very nice work. Any plans for the foreground?

>>4437370
@Hakimochi1 on twitter

>>4437366
How bad did I fuck up?

>>4437386
Yeah, there was going to be a series of lights surrounding the elevated steps, similar to a performing stage.

>>4437349
This looks fake why is there a black person In space?

>>4437551
youre so good i love your stuff so much.. blog?

>>4437596
@lowres12 on twitter

>>4437607
Love this art style. Cheers.

>>4437617
appreciate it, anon

>>4437439
because you're nigger? lol

I haven't seen porn thread in a while, do people just not make them or they are just being deleted?

>>4437697
considering there's literal porn images up on this board. there's no real excuse to not make one.

These people could always just move things to porn boards where it would be accommodating, but they refuse to be reasonable, so who fucking knows, anon.

>>4437407
Sounds good, looking forward to it if you're willing to keep going. Got a blog?

>>4437730
Very nice Bruno. That's some very solid bishounen

>>4437697
Porn generals are getting deleted now for some reason.
Not that big of a deal. Entire board is nsfw anyway

>>4437765

but the chink advertising his channel stays up
I don't think there are people I have less respect for than 4chan janitors

>>4437442
Blog?

>>4437768
do you think "fuck the jannies" is a joke?

>>4437768
imagine moderating 4chan FOR FREE, you just have to be a retarded cuck to do that kinda shit

Wanted to do more with this composition wise but I'm just bored. Need to move on.

>>4437439
It's not space

>>4437723
They won’t do it because they are too retarded.

Just finished this, thoughts?

>>4437881
blog?

>>4437159
artist?

What's your ideal "hot" body type? Mine is basically OP pic, just shorter and more simplified, see pic rel. Opinions?

>>4437921
https://twitter.com/inkpleb

>>4437881
this is so fucking tight

>>4437881
wassup with the ear thing. it looks unfinished.

>>4437994
Thanks man
>>4437998
I suppose so. Just a thing I do sometimes.

Does the face work?
I'm still very uncomfortable with the faces and not sure what I even want anymore.

>>4437347
>>4437349
>>4437551
>>4437624
>>4437697
>>4437921
>>4438071
>>>/beg/
Why does this thread even exist.
It's just /beg/ part 2 except people excuse being bad by saying "it's ALTERNATIVE".

>>4438118
but this one is cute >>4437347

>>4437697
is nice too

>>4438008
blog?

>>4438118
>Why does this thread even exist.
You tell me faggot, where's your amazing masterwork?

>>4438071
The eyes should be more round and bent to perspective, the hand is too small and very angular which is inconsistent with the rest of the style.
Study more perspective, work on your lines and draw traditionally a lot.

>>4438182
Thanks for the face, this is helpful.

As for the arm she's supposed to be touching her own shoulder, not reaching towards the viewer.

>>4438118
Posts like this should be an instaban

>>4438379
lol get fucked you sensitive faggot you're on 4chan

>>4438382
(you)

Hit me

>>4436444
Finished this mashup

>>4438418
hideous

>>4437624
I love how you did this face

>>4438382

>>4438418
I think your work would look a lot better if you made your mechanical parts look more practical
It seems like you're already trying to do that a bit considering the bone-like structure of things such as the closest forearm, but it sums up as just sticks and joints overall.

also, one arm is a pole, and the other is two poles, her face is a metal mask, her stomache is a guitar, and her legs are vein-like tubing....
it's really hard to tell what's stylistic intent vs. what you didn't see was a problem

>>4438418
great colors, but you keep drawing the same body type even when you're you're using inanimate objects as inspo lol.

Switch it up dude, movie out of your comfort zone.
you draw really well an dynamically, so I see no reason why you limit yourself like this.

anon gives a good crit for that reason:
>>4438691

>>4438791
Always a treat to see your work, dude.
you got a blog or art profile?

>>4438794
Thank you.
unfortunately i do not have anything atm i just try to keep everything to myself so i can focus on my work.

>>4438799
Social media can be distracting, so I understand

>>4438791
>>4438799
please keep posting your stuff here then, im a huge fan

nothing but DOOM eternal and Witch Hat Atelier on my mind this week

>>4438516
>>4438791
really like these

>>4438382
This sort of reply to any and all criticism is cringey

Take it to Reddit

>>4438869
not nearly enough floof on that hair

>>4438405
The pose is stiff and unbalanced. If the right arm is coming forward, the left arm should be going backwards instead of awkwardly hanging by the side. The line of action isn't defined very well that it half reads like she's either running/skipping or just leaning forward slightly. The positioning for those legs is attractive in its own right but I don't think it works well for a mid-run pose. I'd recommend looking at Hampton or Vilppu for figure drawing. You've got some proportioning and anatomy issues like the torso being a bit too large and the shoulders seem off-center, but I'd focus more on gesture to nail down convincing and engaging poses. I exaggerated the pose in pic related, but I hope it can provide some insight.

The choice in colors is nice for what you're going for, though the rendering itself is very lacking and gets muddy and undefined outside of the figure. I get you're shooting for that cel shading look, but it's very inconsistent. You could stand to look into proper rendering from Robertson or Gurney's materials.

It's just a bit of a passing thought, but the red outline around the grass looks very nice up against those darks. If you incorporated that red into your palette as a darker shade for the grass and blended it a bit it could look quite nice.

>>4437697
Mad discord trannies. You can post porn anywhere you want.

>>4438869
I love the Swans.

>>4439026
What program do u use?
Really cool, good shadow shapes but I think the highlights are a bit lacking

>>4437551
Based art, looks like @miraityuuou.

>>4439034
Thanks....fisher....

>>4439034
was not expecting that dick

she's not naked janny

>>4439032
clipstudio, and it's just a quick warm-up; will take note.

>>4439034
You're so obsessed with cocks. Are you like a flaming fag irl?

>>4439073
i am practically asexual irl honestly

>>4439073
I mean the last couple of weeks he only drew sfw stuff. You gotta give him credit for that

>>4439046
if they delete your post they have to delete >>4439034 too because it is overt furry

Watchu know about that...

>>4439177
very nice

>>4438899
wow thanks for the detailed advice.
and that redraw definitely showed me i need to step up my poses

>>4439177
Nicely done

Painting is better than no painting, I guess.

>>4437738
I got a twitter, @art_mellon

>>4439177
Incredibly based

>>4439357

>>4439357
What a sloppy mess. Looks awful

>>4438869
cool stuff atelier anon, i like the clothing from atelier but i cant draw any of that clothing haha

>>4439615
also my stuff

>>4438869
cool stuff atelier anon, i like clothing from atelier but cant draw any of it haha

>>4437723
>>4437765
>>4438954
I see, although I spotted a new thread just now, but I don't have anything particular explicit to post recently, its been a little crazy. My days off are coming up so I might be able to do something about that.

>>4438124
thanks!

>>4439357
Actually the opposite is true for you. The sketch looked far better.

>>4439656
>I spotted a new thread
Ignore it, just post here

>>4433289
not yet

>>4439839
zaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaawso cute!

Working on this sketch, not sure if I'll bother finishing or inking it.

Any crits as I go along?
I'll redo the face at some point, lighten a bit the values on top behind the tree.

>>4439839
That's really cute.

>>4439656
I love your stuff, and you're consistent-posting. Still a wage-slave? I can't believe somebody as good as you isn't pro.

>>4439357
There are problems with values and blending, but the biggest problem is perspective. You need to construct a complex scene like that, you can't wing it at your level.

>>4438899
very cool

>>4438869
Very cool. Line work is really good. Only issue is the hand?

>>4439034
It is very sad that you're that good and this is the shit you draw.

>>4437675
you're one rep max

got DAMN I have no idea how this light works

>>4438869
so this is the power of fundies... not bad

>>4439993
>>4438989
>>4438898
thanks

>>4439623
the witch hat clothing isn't too complicated, its a poncho that's cut at the arms, you can picture it as a apron + a cloak combined -> then a gown underneath. Shirahama's skill at drapery makes it look more intimidating than it really is
I like your drawing, something feels a bit off about the chin/neck area but its a really cute tan cirno otherwise.

A buddy’s character

>>4439993
Trust me I’m disappointed in myself too

a buddys character

>>4439983
Unbalanced, hips are jutting out to much and makes the pose feel to tilted while her head and shoulders communicate a standing straight pose. Try making this pose yourself as reference, notice how your upper body, shoulders/head tilt when you move your hips to the left or right to balance the body? It would help the composition if she stood straighter to symbolically communicate being torn between 2 sides of background. I suggest using a reference for the figure. Left eye to far away. Flip the canvas every once in a while while working off things might become more apparent to you.

>>4440134
>the witch hat clothing isn't too complicated,

ohh yeah i meant other outfit, pic related.

>>4440438
oh yeah also im learning some thick stuff

>>4440280
Tell me, what is the secret to getting this nice with linework with the hard round?

>>4440452
Not him, but clear, deliberate intent behind each stroke is a good start.

>>4439623
I love how comfy your rendering always look

>>4440438
oh, i didnt realize we were talking about different ateliers. Never played any atelier games, always like JRPG design though.

maybe ill draw one tomorrow

>>4440519
>I love how comfy your rendering always loo

im happy you like it

i cant do anything better than simple rendering atm though

hi any critique

>>4440558
/beg/

>>4440558
Cute face but fucked up too thin waist and long ass arm.

>>4440589
>too thin waist
garbage opinion

>>4440590
garbage anon

>>4440590
Go to /beg/ where you belong, faggot.

>>4440589
i feel you on the arm but the waists is good

>>4437159
Finished this comic today.

>>4440634
>first two panels are about a creepy guy being intimidating
>last panel is close up looking into a bag that was only a secondary detail in a wider shot
there should be something to connect them and clearly indicate that the bag is important and we're about to look into it.
without the filename i wouldn't have known what was going on.

>>4440634
did the balled guy get his neck snapped or something?

>>4440675
very cool. The figures could've been more dynamic. All of them look a bit stiff. Love the composition tho.

>>4440295
Blog?

study from a photo in the reference thread

>>4440544
What are your inspirations anon?

>>4440736
Good shit anon

>>4440558
burry burry cute, pls keep posting

Commissions for doom

Before I start lining it, does anything look fucky

>>4440979

>>4440979
>>4440980
I've seen you post before. Your style and visual presentation brings to mind Naoyuki Onda and has an early 2000's weirdness to it. I really like it. Very seinen-esque.

How do you go about your outfits for characters? do you piece together curated references or are these designs you make up?

Also i've been saving everything you post do you have a blog so i can follow you formally? I'm a fan.

>>4440979
>>4440980
God damn.

>>4440248
Love your style

>>4440829
How did you learn perspective?

>>4440935
The hand of the girl looks weird, it's floating in the air instead of resting in the chair.

>>4440979
>>4440980
This looks very professional. Im impressed.

>>4437439
A black woman has already been to space, racist.

>>4437957
I love the thicc calves and thighs look, as long as it's not too exaggerated. Pretty underutilized.

>>4440980
>>4440979
Are these from fashion refs? The red outfit in particular looks familiar

>>4439993
Thanks, still a wage slave, and increasing stir crazy one. Although you are flattering me. I have been thinking about dipping my toes into the patreon thing, and then someone got suspended for sexualising characters with anime face.

>>4439758
I still prefer to post in its own thread, though I do not have some sort of principal objection that it is posted somewhere else, I just find that content separation sometimes help focus the discussion a bit better, in my opinion.

whats with the 3/4 perspective being used constantly,

>>4440935

Where is the nurse's back leg? I can't seem to see it unless it wasn't drawn.

Secondly, is the nurse supposed to be super small? If the girl sitting down were to stand up, she would tower over the nurse.

WIP on my next piece. I'm far from where I want to be, but I think I've definitely improved from about a year to a year and a half ago.

>>4441404
man, her left foot small af bro
rest is pretty g

>>4440888
I love this rendering style, very reminiscent of Akira Yasuda's work

>>4440888
>>4440980
>>4440979
Blog?

>>4440134
no offense but why do all your faces look like they have autism.

>>4441404
HOT... blog

>>4441521
if i knew the answer to that question they wouldn't look like that, now would they

>>4441516
@lunydoobles on twitter

>>4441526
I mean it's not that hard and seems to be something that can be changed with a little bit of experimentation. Your faces remind me of that guy named David whenever he attempted to draw an anime girl; aka the guy that always drew those disgusting furries .

>>4441521
art imitates life

>>4441619
then how do you explain someone like range murata drawing all those cutesy girls? Bruh total polar opposites.

>>4441629
I did that yesterday anon, and my back hurts now.

>>4441632
Get some rest anon, you've earned it.

>>4440397
Thank you for the crit.

I haven't given that much attention to anatomy/face yet as I mention in my previous post.
But yeah flipping the canvas make these flaws more apparent.
My main concern with the pose was the fact that she looks more like "gracious girl" than fierce warrior, but it's also part of the character appeal?

I'm guessing from your comments that composition/colors are okayish then.

>>4441404
for the love of god make a completely nude versions pls

>>4441404
There are pros who are far less competent than you, although I'm not sure how that works.
What's really great about your stuff is the perspective that is clearly wrong but looks cool that you can only obtain with strong fundies.
Line work is pretty basic but works well with your style and emphasize the forms and abstraction.

>>4441525
As you're there, you're another of my favourite/best artists on /ic.
You have really great scenes and great ambiences. Not always fan of your colours, sometimes the are quite strong for scenes where you could use more restraint.
The meme brush is probably killing a lot of the normie appeal you could get.
A lot of times I think the scenes would work better if you reduced the brush size? Or if you made it less aggressive by colouring your lines?

>>4441660
>>4441629

>>>/beg/

>>4441685
Anon thank you that is very flattering... I agree with you, the way I color is something I haven't improved at all since I started and i agree that it sometimes doesn't work well... i think I will try coloring the lines, I just dont do it cuz its kind of tedious...

sketchan sketchan

>>4441772
Gollum lolis are back.

>>4441792
you grew up fat and never lost that weight

>>4441770
Nooooooo
Dont do it
It would ruin your gloomy/retro style
All the details anon pointed out makes you really special.

any anatomy crits before i get to the next stage?

>>4441770
your style looks comfy

>>4441805
How did you know?

>>4441815
He didn't change shit dummy.

i can't paint
crit welcome and appreciated

>>4441636
blog please

Done, I wish animating wouldn't take so much time

>>4441926
>>4439056

>>4441940
woof woof

>>4441836
Her hand looks funny to me, but I can't pin what's up.

>>4441926
The efforts people go through to splooge a little.

>>4441926
I'm not into coom art but this is real good man, very smooth

>>4441666
>>4440397

I quite like the background actually so I didn't mention it, the awkward pose is what I notice first. Colors ok, maybe character could have more contrast as the background is more detailed then the figure, also at the top either make the transition cleaner between the forest/castle either through a smooth transition/blending from one to the other or make it super clean by having the dividing point be behind a tree branch. The way the silhouettes of the butterflies match the bats is a nice detail, appreciated.

For showing graciousness or toughness think about how her equipment can communicate her personality. A torn cape and scratched equipment could show toughness or ornate jewelry and pristine clothes can show graciousness for example. Different poses can of course also effect it so try different stuff out. Cheers

>>4441926
Take this to the porn thread. We have it for a reason.

>>4439056

>>4441944
Anon, your autism is showing.

>>4440780
sick critique anon, you surely don't sound like your underage and belong on discord.

>>4441944
That guy doesnt even post here anymore, shut the fuck up with your corny meme.

>>4441836

I like it, anon. Loving the retro feel.

Here's my two cents:

The arms/salutes feel unnatural. For accuracy, you can sell this by either turning their hands for a military salute (see pic) or give them closed fists. Adjust the length of the mech's arm, because it looks uncomfortably short. Lastly, both the mech and the girl can be reduced in size to improve the composition. Use rule of thirds to help out.

Good luck to you and your studies.

TW3K fanart

>>4442002
palm facing forward is how britbongers salute.

>>4442039
Point.

The file was listed "soviet2", and felt that Soviet poster was what he was going for.

>>4441525
oh, this is gorgeous

>>4441081
Perspective made easy is the only resource you really need. I learned from that and just sort of copied fisheye until it made sense

>>4439656
Nice. Give blog, please.

>>4440634
this got me working on a perspective piece

>>4441970
>we

>>4441952
She's saluting with her hand behind her head instead of in front of it like here>>4442039
Looks like her hand is rotated a bit towards the back of her head.

>>4441756
Requesting critique

>>4441926
This is so smooth. How long did it took you to animate? You did an amazing job

>>4441044
thank you

Anything wrong before I move on?

>>4442626
shine on you crazy diamond

>>4442626
Please no, i already have too many degenerate fetishes

>>4442626
i hate absolutely everything about this, good work.

>>4442633
Blog?

>>4442641
@explosive_art
>>4442626
Very nice work senpai, feels very clear and defined.

>>4442626
Oh my god you're still alive. I thought you vanished ages ago

>>4442636
I do my best
>>4442637
It's good to have more fetishes
>>4442638
I'm sorry
>>4442643
Thank you
>>4442660
I lurk here from time to time

>>4440774
>What are your inspirations anon?

i like lots of stuff anon, i would be here for hours if i wanted to say them all, i will talk about recent at least then, i recently liked the thick things like pic related but i also have been into 666pigeon a lot, but i just cant learn anything from him... His way of shading is very detailed and complicated

>>4442370
Wow nicely done anon.

>>4442483
Thanks, I don't know exactly, around 80 hours maybe haha. Not like I regret it, I could animate 24/7

>>4442679
artist? I think I'v already seen stuff from him

>>4442734
>artist? I think I'v already seen stuff from him
Its methonium, i like his art not because of coom but because its literally cute.. Idk why but his plump girls are legit adorable

>>4442735
drawing this isnt easy actually, its easy to mess this up, big features like pic related are hard to balance with the body

>>4442790
very good.

>>4442790
very nice

>>4441162
>>4441429
Thanks for the feedback, tried to work on those things

>>4442804
thought he was driving a car from the thumbnail

>>4442809
Do you not get bored of this same flat color get ups

>>4442804
I really enjoy the dynamism and unironic soul behind your drawings but everything looks so unrefined

I added some filler so it's not just a study

>>4442809
Rudy always looking in distress, i can relate

>>4442679
You are a man of culture, big milkers in sweaters are god holliest creations.

>>4442937
good stuff

hopefully this doesn't look too wonky, I can see I missed the perspective on some areas.

>>4442966
likewise

>>4439839

>>4443077
How can I learn to draw hair like you?

>>4442884
i really should learn how to finish pieces

>>4442804
>>4442884
What this anon said, your composition and poses are cool. I personally find your linework really ugly though. There's no sense of uniformity and the thicker black strokes don't highlight volume, they're placed randomly without any consideration (worst examle being the hat). I suggest taking the time to define shapes more, pay more attention to the edges that normally would be sharp, curves aren't needed everywhere. Everything feels too loose right now so it gives the impression that it's not coming together properly.

>>4443139
Thanks anon, appreciate it

>>4443123
I think if u made the leg facing us extended wold look better? Also i can’t tell if he’s holding meds or a card

I like the style of complete black shapes like hair and clothing.
Need to do more fashion research though lol

>>4442790
>>4442937
>>4443077
killing it

>>4443099

It just needs a bit of a touch up, but I really like your style, anon.

What can I do to improve this piece, my big dicked fellas? I supposedly finished it but it still doesn't feel $100 worthy

>>4443253
You won't listen, but clean it up.

>>4439826
you never improve do you?

>>4440280
bro do you have a blog?

>>4441671

here >>4443272

>>4443099

>>4443238
ty anon. im just tryna get the diffused lighting in at the moment before I do a lighting paint over. anything youd suggest to touch it up?

>>4442097
>he got that good with perspective with just that one book
>meanwhile some anons have gone through the entire Erik Olson, Vandruff, AND Handprint lessons
>they still have nowhere near the amount of freedom and intuition

>>4443335
something something fear not the man who has practiced 10 000 kicks, but...

>>4443343
>tfw you're a 10,000 kick trick pony but havingd one one kick 10,000 times is more fearsome

>>4443253
Did someone paid $100 for this?

>>4443361
this

>>4442966
This is amazing, blog?

>>4443327

Frankly, it depends on what you're going for. I've seen some commercial work that already captures the majority of what you have here and they just go with that without any further improvements.

That said, some things that stand out to me lighting-wise... first, I feel that the lighting on the brown animal is too bright, given how far away the flames on the crockpot are, unless there's something out of frame that is casting that much light.

Secondly, what is going on with your window? Is it weird blobby fish looking on through bright water? Is it a stained glass window? If you're not done yet, then disregard this.

I'm also not entirely sure where the white animal is looking. I presume he's looking at the brown animal, but the eyes could just as well be looking at you, the viewer.

That's all that pops off the top of my head. Do you have a blog? I'm interested to see what else you've done.

Any recommended resources or books for practicing hair textures? Would like to try a hand at some more intricate styles

Making a new oc, maybe.

Is this design too generic?

>>4443551
>>4443806
Blog?

still can't color or finish anything.

>>4443551
/beg/

>>4443874
Not that anon but you can just give critique here while you're able, can't you? I thought anyone could post any art here so long as it's stylized, and critique is to be expected.

>>4443490
all really good feedback, thank you!
Its for visual development of a small animation, im planning on using what I have as the base to some adjustment layers to show different mood lighting possibilities.
My art insta is GlutenFreeCoronaVirus

>>4443367
>>4443361
No, don't worry. But I want to make art that wouldn't surprise you if it costed that much.

>>4440736
god I'm so bad at drawing feet

>>4443960
Pops?

>>4441629
>>4441660
blog? I like these kinds of styles. keep improving, I want to see.

I recommend adding a glow effect, basically really light airbrush surrounding the skin, especially the hair, don't smother the entire thing tho. let it go above the lineart as well, and color the lineart too. That, and a little blush is always a good thing.

>>4442790
>are you not entertained!?

>>4442036
cute, I like it
>>4443077
holy crap you actually colored something
>>4442809
blog?

>>4443845
It's cool anon, kinda Trigger-esque. Not a bad thing that it resembles some other thing though, almost unavoidable really. If you're concerned about it being generic though, maybe push the shapes a bit more. I really like the one on the right, so ridiculous but in a good way. What stands out to me are the spikes, the platform shoes, and the hair; maybe play around with that, really doesn't need too much more. Hip-wait-shoulder ratio is already pushed enough imo. Overall really nice though.

>>4441636
Blog?

>>4441926
Looks great!

>>4442839
Honestly I have a less fun doing cel-shading than painting, but I love the look of flat colors so I'm trying to do more pieces with it. Most of my favorite artists do flat, simple colors so I'm trying to figure out how to do them well myself, instead of relying on painting to make stuff look decent.

>>4442948
Rudy had a rough life

>>4444164
https://twitter.com/NessieFynn

>>4444245
For what's little it's worth I too prefer your cel shaded shit.

10min-ish, little wonky

>>4444352
you are explicitly beg, how do you have 1.3k followers on twitter?

>>4444352
>>4444500
SOUL

>>4444500
He has a distictive style with a lot of appeal

>>4444352
love the gesture in the face, rest would look better in a smaller chibi style

>>4444500
Pyw

>>4442694
no u

>>4438791
There is a japanese guy on twitter that has a similar style but i don't remember the name. Can anyone help me?

>>4444503
what about someone like fisher, then? this general worships him and he has half of bongbai's size

>>4444535
Fisher draws lots of wierd stuff, and a lot of his posts are messy sketches. His work is very skillful but has less wide audience/social media appeal than art of cute girls

>>4444541
you make a good point. i guess from the perspective of an artist it's a lot easier to get wrapped up in thinking that something technically fantastic should appeal to everyone.

>>4444553
Yeah, I used to get jealous of artists with little technical ability who had lots of followers, but technically good art =/= art that people will like. Subject matter and style seem to matter more when it comes to gaining attention

>>4444500
seething

>>4443845
Are you shadman?

An attempt was made.

>>4444659
/beg/ shirt

>>4444659
You can do it season-anon, I unironically believe in you

>>4444659
i liked sketch better, coloring for sure is hard

>>4444659
I like the lineart, but I think the values are the thing holding your colors back. Even if you're working with a pinched value range, having clear value seperations between elements of the image/composition can help make it more appealing

>>4442734
>>4442735
He doesn't use the name methonium anymore to avoid being associated with his coom days. Now he goes by the name "synecdoche" (@synecdoche445 on twitter)

>>4444535
Fisher never finishes anything, and like that anon mentioned earlier, draws alot of fucked up gross shit.
Majority of people like art that's pleasing to look at or makes them feel good even. They dont autistically obsess over technical details like ic does

>>4438190
I prefer your drawing of the eyes, but it's purely personal
Hand was a bit too small maybe but keep the angles i liked it

>>4438899
Her left leg looks a bit awkward, might be too short. Other than that based post

>>4438869
>>4440134
>>4443232
Blog?

>>4444216
Thanks for the feedback, it helps a lot
>>4444566
nope, you got the first letter though

>>4443996

Cool, added you.

>>4437159
how to make skeleton man expressive and good??

>>4438942
I like this, blog?

>>4441772
you’ve degraded and can’t draw women at all

>>4441772
this is what happens when all you do is copy. Everything looks stiff as fug. No soul. Unappealing.

>>4444131
Thanks!
@marrii1n on twitter

>>4440590
>"Hi, any critique?"
>critiques
>"Nah."
newfag is never gon make it

A repost.

I'll get to work on fundamentals when I get back tonight. Want to get off to the best start possible with the animation program.

>>4445262
I just want to say that the books are out of perspective, the ones on the right are the most noticeable though

Whew, finally done.

>>4441772
I like it

>>4445248
It's not the 'thin' part that's the problem so much as the 'waist' part. Other parts of the body are screwy, like the distance between shoulders and chest and bottom of trunk don't work given the way the waist is drawn.

It looks like shit, but I had fun experimenting, I feel likee I learned someething from playing around with it.

Sketching this atm.

>>4444934
theres nothing of value to post

>>4443847
twitter is @_98fumi


My lines are so messy and muddy, it's one of the hardest parts of drawing for me to be honest..

>>4445554
Blog? This is great

>>4445248
it wasn't my drawing, and the waist can be a legitimate stylistic choice by the artist. complaining about it is dumb opinion, not critique.

>>4445552
I could have sworn you weren't this popular like a month or two ago. Crazy.

bruhs i was gonna have this so that the hunter's dream flowers blend into the moon, and the stalks blend into the shadow of the hunter but idfk what i wanna do

>>4445023
how

Theres something in colored lines

>>4441404
somethings wrong with the left calf the knee is facing inwards while the calf is facing outwards long story short the left lower limbs a cluster fuck next time use some fucking reference

>>4445734
Im expecting a plateau for a while

>>4445941
Maybe try some pantyhose or more Yomu stuff

How can i improve my artwork ?

>>4446112
she is so stiff, shapes of a board, so flat, no volume, completely inexpressive, clothes looks inflated like a baloon to hide the anatomy.

You need to work on alot of stuff man, looks like you skimmed through the fundies and didnt really pay attention.

>>4445554
soul

been a while

>>4440558
>>4440565
>>4440589
>>4440780

thx for critique on this one, i agree the arm is too long now, i like the waist small but maybe if i made the legs less big it would not look so weird, any way, i drew this now,
fug i drew the ass and legs too huge i think.

>>4446448
looks like a tranny

Does this look cute I can't tell
>>4445941
I love your art

>>4446493
finish it you lazy entitled millennial

>>4446495
I dunno how dud. I'm le eternal doodler. I only actually color things a few times per year and this is about as "finished" as my stuff ever gets
tasukete loomis-sensei

>>4446493
Blog? Super cute.

>>4445640
@lowres12

>>4446490
kino

Make new thread fags

>>4445548
-_____-
Dont be a whinner
Geez, hate when this happen.

>>4446505
Based

>>4446578
seriously you're not going to see anything there u dont already see here

@RanForestRen

>>4446490
I like this a lot! The brush strokes/texture look super nice

>>4446593
Whatever.
I like traditional and your work appeals to me, enough reasons to give u a follow.

Not as cartoony as most of this thread but still Stylized enough I hope. Thoughts on this?

Can I get tips on drawing handsome guys

>>4446713
Really good, keep it up!

>>4447032
just make them confident bro, confidence is sexy.

>>4447289

New thread

>>4445262
put that ear a little to the back. It looks like it comes out the cheek

>>4439177
hot garbage

>>4443845
Blog?