/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

because the last thread was so autistic, I'm posting this again to see if anyone has anything to say about it.

>>4432232
shape on the face kinda collapses a bit anon but otherwise very comfy

>>4432232
idea seems interesting enough, but the comp is confusing. Not sure what you're trying to convey.

Also your rendering is very rough and comes off like an afterthought. Is this a sketch?

>>4432243
can you elaborate? I can't see the falling apart very clearly.

>>4432244
It's based on a song I made, basically a girl distracting you from existential dread.
It's done relatively quickly. About 2-3 hours, but I don't consider it a sketch it's very much "finished and done with".

>>4432251
disconnect between jaw and the cheek

>>4432254
ah yes. I see. thank you. I hoped people didn't notice lmao.

>>4432232
The character herself is very cute and gives off a lot of personality. Very comfy indeed. I don't understand what's supposed to be going on in the rest of the piece however. I can tell there's a sun in the background with some skulls coming out of it--it's an interesting idea that could be further developed--but idk what the rainbow is supposed to convey. I like your character design a lot but this piece seems more like a wip than a finished piece that has been fully thought through.

>>4432251
I want to hear the song

>>4432266
https://youtu.be/2mPOWxXetto
here you go

>>4432264
I see. Thank you, It is pretty quickly slapped together, I'm glad people are telling me they noticed it.

I'm trying to figure out how to draw mostly with layers of tone rather than lines. Here is an improvised piece I did a few months ago--any comments on what is and isn't working?

>>4432226
What happened to that last thread, anyway?

>>4432294
really dig it, anon. Have you tried working with ink washes?

>>4432294
very nice, blog?

>>4432298
doesn't matter. let's just move on and share really great and stylish art we've made.

BTW I like this. but your lighting and colors look so boring man lol

the action of the characters convey one thing, but the your tones and colors aren't exactly capture the same intensity. And that flat abstract art BG looks really out of place.

>>4432304
Thank you anon. I have not experimented with ink washes but I have played around with watercolor here and there. This type of pencil drawing is pretty similar to ink wash/WC so I guess it would be a good idea to try it out again. I'm more practiced in oils.

Here's another one in the same style

>>4432243
I think you should study perspective and how it effects the shape of the character. Her feet should be more horizontal and the top should be more apparent. She's pretty cute and could use a bit of concreteness to here. Pic related from loomis. Life changing imo.

>>4432294
Looks incredible dude. I would say it's working perfectly if you're aiming the skele-bros to be a bunch of worbly terror that you can't quite make up. If your aim is to make each skeleton distinct, then you didn't succeed. If you want it to look more "colossal", I would say put more details, I can't tell you how though. Not educated on that.

>>4432308
Ayy your piece is really nice too, what is yours? I'm @mpitchkites on Instagram and unseenbbq on ArtStation

snek
>>4432243
Cute! I like your color choices.
>>4432294
I think its really cool, the only thing I would suggest is maybe some more contrast? I think it could really make the piece seem more dramatic.

>>4432310
That’s really interesting and fair as a critique. Colors always seem brighter on my Cintiq and duller on my regular monitor, so I should probably calibrate it a bit better.

I think I get what you’re saying about the colors not matching the intensity. Something like a different sharper and more saturated palette would have helped, right?

>>4432319
Yeah I was trying to make all the skulls and bones melt into each other indistinctly to give the impression of a mutated Lovecraftian deer monster, so that was deliberate. But I agree it would be more effective if it looked gigantic. Had I paid more attention to perspective and maybe set the horizon line low, the monster could have looked hundreds of feet tall instead of 8 feet or whatever. Your Loomis chart is very helpful, it's reminding me that I need to brush up on my perspective fundamentals.

>>4432359
You gotta pay the troll toll

>>4432359
looks great dude. I would say on the skirt you could convey the curvature better. It looks a bit flat. Got a blog?

>>4432320
thanks brother! mine's scrodanger on instagram

>>4432314
I wasn’t feeling your other two much, but this one is really nice.the lighting seems to be on a much higher level

>>4432232
reaks of attic bedroom, fairy lights, and fucking ukelele

>>4432419
Thanks! I drew that one just a couple days ago and on smoother paper. Grainy sketchbook paper has turned out to be a major obstacle for me when making finalized drawings.

>>4432422
exactly.

It's weird to think that I was planning on deleting this as soon as I laid down the first strokes, I actually think its quite cute now ^^

>>4432452
It's about time you give me your blog you piece of shit

This is so boring huh

>>4432454
What she need is boobs and a dick

>>4432452
>>4432453
Seconded. Don't delete that drawing, Rat (also good use of perspective there)

threads are going fast, you must be enjoying your quarantines.

>>4432486
>>4432487
good. Blog?

>>4432489
@lowres12

>>4432487
I'm a sucker for anything with good perspective and construction, good job. And bonus points for the funny concept and facial expression. Can't find you on Instagram for some reason

Chernobyl: the board game

Still plodding away on this free hand sketch, now the fear of fucking up the drawing is beginning to set in.

Muh hiyayaka animu studies

>>4432486
>that gorg puffy puss

>>4432551
I like that right drawing, good sense of momentum.

My only gripe is that you seem to only draw the same looking character type over and over again.
Even when you're drawing other characters they look more or less the same.

>>4432551
I like that left drawing, good sense of momentum.

My only gripe is that you seem to only draw the same looking character type over and over again.
Even when you're drawing other characters they look more or less the same.

Heyo, i've been trying out some different shapes of eyes, i always feel like my shit never shows expression well and it ends up being boring
I hate the first one and love the second one, but people i've shown it to liked the 3rd more than the others and hated the second one
I also feel they all don't convey the same expression, but the second one is the only that actually feels like what i wanted

>>4432581
Blog?

>>4432581
really really love the way you draw bodies

Does this count as /alt/? I want to write and illustrate a comic some day. I’m open to any critiques

>>4432586
_98fumi on twitter, but i really just post pixel stuff there

>>4432587
thank you fren

>>4432584
Second one looks best with the combination of features, although the third shows emotion a bit better. It’s boring because you’re just drawing someone facing forward with very little facial expression. Are they supposed to be concerned? Nervous? Its hard to tell because theyre sitting up straight, the eyes are fully open, the mouth is neutral and the only thing conveying emotion is the eyebrows and the eyes shifting to the side. You need to study how people convey emotion and learn to exaggerate it in art.
They all read differently to me. The first looks like theyre trying to hide a smile, the second looks mildly sad, and the third looks nervous,

>>4432669
I love this a lot. Feet could use some work and bellybutton looks like it's not quite in the center of her body (push it a bit to the left), but otherwise I love your rendering

>>4432551
FaceTime studies

>>4432568
is it the faces or the bodies or the colors?

>>4432551
push the value changes, they're part of how hiyayaka makes such strong form and perspective

>>4432591
try and figure out how to convey more mood/atmosphere in your palette

also consider
http://gurneyjourney.blogspot.com/2008/06/green-problem.html
https://willkempartschool.com/is-green-ruining-your-acrylic-paintings/

>>4432232
patrician clothing style. What's with the damned souls in the background though?

>>4432684
I love this. You should do more regular drawings.

>>4432551
you were asking me once what irks me about your style. I finally know.
It's the faces, man.

a lion

>>4432684
Different anon, but maybe change up your face and body shapes a bit. Nothing too drastic, but you tend to stick to angular figures.
Could also experiment with eye shapes.

>>4432661
>You need to study how people convey emotion and learn to exaggerate it in art.
Yeah, i`m really bad at exaggerating stuff, it took me a long while to learn to do it with figure drawing, and now that i`m finally focusing on faces it's kicking me in the ass
The reference is this one, i'm thinking it's a bit too subtle for where i am right now. Do you have any tips on studying expressions and exaggeration?

>>4432452
>>4432453
hehe, it's beholdnika on instagram anon
>>4432458
You're too kind to me, anon, I won't and thank you :D

>>4432724
not >>4432661
but definitely go for images that have an exaggerated expression and easy to read,
eyebrows show the most emotion imo

>>4432690
Am >>4432591 Green is a difficult color. I have noticed that mixing my own greens always turns out better than standard greens. Other than the greens, do you like the painting? Like the composition and general subject matter?

>>4432232
Bright colors are a warning.

>>4432456
Shut up, sigourney. Get back to the mental hospital.

>>4432486
poop skin

Ofc you ignore the drawings i recommend for next op and u go ahead and put the most low effort one.

>>4432744
Why the vendetta, anon. Sigourney hasn't even posted in /alt/ in a while, calm down

>>4432746
plz anon, last thread was already derailed.
just focus on sharing art you've made and give any feedback to posters ITT.

>>4432454
this is really pretty fumi

>>4432746
Fuck off

>>4432763
Mad.

>>4432761
thank you! taking a break from it for some coom

>>4432772
do you use reference for these?

>>4432746
nobody cares about ur recommendations cunt, either make the next OP or stop bitching lmao

>>4432773
Not for this, unfortunately, I get lazy looking for the exact reference. I use ref for hands is all

>>4432781
Adorable, I like the way you draw bodies. You have a blog?

>>4432684
Doing something stupid

>>4432690
>push the value changes
Good tip, I’ll try it when i color attached pic

>>4432702
What is a regular drawing?

>>4432703
>faces
I really hate drawing faces, I made peace with coloring, but i just can’t get into faces. I’ll do my best to work on it

>>4432718
Yea i guess they are kind of angular, I’ll try some different proportions or something

>>4432774
Mad.

Why we fight

>>4432725
Your lineart has gotten really elaborate lately, the hair and lace details are very beautiful in this

>>4432787
thanks but the rest of my work is basically all green midget girls so i dont think you'd like it but in any case it's @gigawix

just trying to make some characters

Thoughts?

>>4432789
I realized that I’ve never colored in a dark person before... so there’s that to work on...

I don’t even know the formula for coloring white people

God forgive me.

>>4432838
Cute AF

>>4432547
Cute, blog?

>>4432746
Oh shut the fuck off faggot, the OP is fine

>>4432704
>>4432829
Based homolive fag

>>4432789
Maybe try out different styles of faces? If the ones you draw now just aren't clicking for you, it's the perfect time to mix it up a bit. See how the artists you like draw faces, and such.

>>4432923
Pretty hot, reminds me of Mode Seven.

>>4432923
that face is fucking gross

>>4432917
>low effort grainy piece of shit is fine

>>4432944
Keep seething and someday maybe you will get in the OP lol stupid crab

>>4432923
Blog?

>>4432939
>>4432942
I don't know how to feel about such conflicting responses.

The faces are loose sketches btw, body is the finishes lineart. Faces will probably look better when I've gone over and refined them. Probably.

>>4432950
I'm @vshtone on Twitter.

>>4432792
Thank you so much! I love the colours in this one...Nessie? :o

I haven't tried fully rendering in a while

>>4432944
How sad must your life be to be genuinely angry a small thread on a dying board didn't pick your image as OP. Nigga get some perspective, there are way more important things in life to worry about.

>>4432957
Fix her feet asap go grab some refs off google

>>4432954
I think your art is pretty awesome, keep going bro

>>4432954
Hold a sec how come you have so very little followers when your art is so cool and awesome?

>>4432959
Will do anon, thanks for pointing out

>>4432949
>>4432958
wow so hard to make!

>>4432960
Eurghhhhh thank you.

>>4432966
I haven't really utilised my Twitter much until now and I guess I don't really know how to get myself out there or market myself well. Think I'm gonna start lurking in the self promotion tips thread. Thanks a lot though.

>>4432972
Yours looks frankly worse

>>4432984
yeah and im the one thats crabbing, LOL.

>>4432972
>Can't draw
>Seething he didn't make it into OP
Lmao thanks for proving my points retarded crab

>>4432991
i can sense the jealousy in your post :).

>>4432991
explain to me what part of drawing is being involved with OP because all i see are blobs of paint.

>>4432991
>>4432984
Ignore him. He wants attention.

Can we stop having these stupid arguments every thread please?

>>4432519
this is great. Blog?

stop banning me for drawing lolis you fucking faggots
Fuck mods
Fuck trannies
Fuck jannies
Fuck loomis
and Fuck /ic/

>>4432977
You shouod post more, engage with people, post your thoughts and stuff like that, artists with 1/2 of your talent have ten times more followers just by following those little advices

>>4433019
Seethe more, kek.

>>4432878
I am a sinner

I cant collage photos together

>>4433019
>that pic
11/10

>>4433019
Based.

>>4433019
not everyone likes degenerate shit, anon.

>>4433019
based and lolipilled

>>4432869
I tried to not make any straight lines while inking, and i also ran the pen really slow, and tried to flood fill the markering. Also new faces from sbql, it got kind of uncanny and stiff

I need a few more iterations - plz be patient

>>4433120
there's NOTHING based about beating your dick to sexualized drawings of children.

>>4433019
Who the fuck is this guy? I don't know an artist here that draws like this.

>>4433144
This rounder shape language is really appealing, I like your normal style but this is nice too. Hope to see you explore it some more

>>4433026
Do you think? This is pretty encouraging, actually, I'll definitely try to engage more if you think it'll help.

>>4432517
his on twitter @lowres12

>>4432226
Working on a comic right now.

>>4432379
@lunydoobles on twitter

>>4432972
I made the op image and I genuinely like how this looks. What brush is that?

>>4432842
draw more cute boys

>>4433270
cute and powerful yokies

>>4433270
I want to draw cirno getting double pounded

>>4433019
Thats reminds me, have anyone saved a redline than one anon did few months back on a loli with a fat jannie getting it's eyes squeezing out?

Did this huge turd.... gonna scrap it..

>>4433270
go away

>>4433270
teach me, sensei

>>4432924
How did u tell both are mine

>>4433322
take a bit more extra time setting up your grid next time, it looks really awkward when you have lots of parts like the wooden boards all subtly off the perspective of each other

look at some demizu posuka stuff, they're extremely good at perspective, and keep going

>>4433270
I need to make some touhou art, cool cirno btw

Lazy today

>>4433322
you're scrapping this so it probably doesn't matter but that shelf(?) in the background right above her hand reads really weird compositionally, it looks like it's floating in the air above her hand rather than being set into the wall

>>4433367
You are totally right, I draw it small then expand it, and didn't bother to make a grid, once you make it big, it gets way harder to get things right without a guide... I at least learned from this...
>>4433382
I think it IS misplaced but should be fine with shadow (see pic related)


I tried to salvage the only good part.

Love these colors

>>4433425
nice shadow shapes

>>4433300
>double pounded

>>4432696
It makes slightly more sense in the context if the song
>>4432267

>>4433425
that helmets bout to fall off

>>4433364
Your style is very recognizable.

>>4433440
noooooooo

got to do everything my self huh

>>4433415
learning is the important part, at least! very nice shading and textures too

I hate myself for making these.

ebin

>>4432939
You need to get your eyes checked

>>4433144
>sbql
What does that stand for?

>>4432684
Top right one...Taiga?

>>4433495
>>4433497
I'm not gonna expand these thumbnails

>>4433470
>Your style is very recognizable.
Wha
I have a style?
I was sure that my every work is very different wtf.
Im glad someone took a good look at my both works though, cheers.

>>4433593
It has less to do with style and more to do with certain things you draw the same way.

>>4433593
Damn its still crazy to me how you noticed im the same person i swear both works are nothing alike when i look at them

>>4433599
This. I think there are a lot of unintentional elements to your style that you may not pick up on yourself, but are very clear markers of your work. The lineart and shape design is what gave it away for me.

>>4433634
hotie roach girl

>>4433634
blog?

>>4433037
Blog?

>>4433600
I think you have a "rounder" style if that makes sense, your drawings always look cute and squishy.

>>4433568
You can still clearly tell what's going on

>>4433634
you could easily get massively popular on twitter and at this point the only conceivable reason i can think of for you not doing that is that you're a registered sex offender

>>4433696
>you're a registered sex offender
What

>>4433011
Thank you my friend. mpitchkites on Insta

>>4432298
Flintstones, a Rubble and a Jenny.

I'm shitting my soul out on this one, tell me it's not for nothing. Obviously wip

>>4433823
It’s not for nothing. Keep at it.

>>4432942
Are you happy now.

>>4434032
lol it even worse

>>4434036
REEEEEEE LEAVE ME ALONE YOU FUCK-KNUCKLE WEEB

>>4433823
Well tell your soul to plan a sketch first, then paint later.

Just finished this freehand sketch, on to something else now.

>>4434166
That's what I did

>>4434201
here's the sketch itself

>>4434032
just one wing?

>>4433161
heh

>>4434271
"tobacco" would be written in katakana due to it being a foreign word.

>>4433144
Do you guys have any good western faces to study? Just giving some things a try

Also, i can’t into flesh tones, and my faces are super uncanny, do i just need to do like 300 more?

>>4433165
Yea experimenting a lot over here, but it’s just monkeys at typewriters

>>4433548
Idk some dudes twitter https://twitter.com/niaunclefan

>>4433549
I dont think it is, isn’t she more pouty?

>>4434341
Yeesh...yeah, grind as many faces as you can. It'll do you good.

>>4434312

Yes, you're right. I was confused about the way of writing it. I had been researching and I found this page

https://www.quora.com/Why-is-tobacco-normally-written-with-hiragana-%E2%80%9C%E3%81%9F%E3%81%B0%E3%81%93%E2%80%9D-instead-of-katakana-%E2%80%9C%E3%82%BF%E3%83%90%E3%82%B3%E2%80%9D

>>4434359
>>4434271
Fun fact: linguistically, in Japanese you don't "smoke" cigarettes, you "suck" them.

タバコを吸っている。

well

>>4434388
HOTE

>>4432781
took this pic of my bf helping me build a base in minecraft ! : D

>>4433037
comfy

made sure to erase the feet so I don't forget to redraw them lol

>>4434432
we are reaching levels of flatness no renderfag has reached before
im convinced u are braindead

>>4434341
stopppp westernizinggg you have this mangaka-like warped perspective&flow going on in a few of your pieces that could be exemplified with properly stylized heads & figures instead of whatever this trash is supposed 2 be,, that center right is straight up asukafag material

>>4434448
I'm convinced I am too, anon. Back to studies for me I guess

>>4434455
Experimentation is good. Nothing is perfect from the first go.

>>4434341
I’m well on my way of getting sent back to /beg/ - didn’t even bother coloring because they’re going to get much worse

How is the placement of features SO difficult, if its off by a single stroke width its basically a disaster.

>>4434346
>>4434455
I dunno guys, I can’t even find facial refs that I want to study. I dont find any of them cool or aesthetic

>>4434455
>complains about the homogenized look of "western art"
>proceeds to implore artist to conform to a specific style without ever exploring outside their boundaries
what the fuck is this

>>4434471
Remember your planes. Humans aren't just a series of gradients. Sometimes a surface has a hard shadow with little transition, and others will be more gradual.

Mixing these two helps your paintings feel more real.

>>4434448
not the artist but can you elaborate more so I can stop thinking that you're just shitposting? How is it flat?

>>4434522
I’ll put off the painting for now and try drawing from life tonight + squeeze in some form studies, hopefully it should help >:0 thank you for advice anon
>>4434523
I saw what they meant as soon as I looked back at the painting :’) everything feels like it’s on the same plane, I’m subconsciously afraid of foreshortening for some reason

>>4434519
It's growing pains. A big thing with stylized artwork is that once you've found a certain combination of shapes that work, anything that veers from that can seem off. You're discovering the limits of your design philosophy and finding ways to work with it.

What facial refs have you been studying?

Morrigan fan-art?

>>4434536
you should probably focus on increasing the contrast of your shit to give it more depth. If you think it looks flat it's probably because your shit lacks the necessary information to let us know the form.

>>4434519
Sounds like you should keep looking for inspiration first, faces are going to be hard for you if there's nothing inspiring you to draw them

I wanted to keep it cel shaded but it look more lewd like this

>>4434632
The cel shaded version for comparion

>>4434632
>>4434635
this look really cheap and uninspired.
like cheap flash art from a shitty porno browser game.
I don't understand why so many amateur coomer shit do the bare minimum effort when it comes to capturing solid anatomy, despite having good human form being fundamental to how good and sexy the art will look.

>>4434635
>>4434632
my man looking like it walked straight out of a 2007 newgrounds meet n fuck flash game

>>4434714
>purple shading
>jank-huge lines with jank line width
>pure black lineart
>can tell where one stroke ends and another stroke begins

>>4434519
I think i like long pointy faces, then I have enough space to fit the facial features in

anyone have any artist recs?

>>4434539
>What facial refs have you been studying?
One sec, will post a few

>>4434564
Cool poses are easy because you look at it and immediately can tell that it looks awesome. Faces are more about capturing a mood. I never really feel anything when i look at faces. I don’t think I have empathy, it’s just a face. I’d rather look at a cool mask than even the most inspirational face.

>>4434689
Because anatomy is difficult and often requires you to draw naked males, which the typical coomer artist doesn't want to do.

>>4434743
Is it a bad thing I find males easier to draw than females?

>>4434751
Could always be from drawing more men than women. I genuinely don't recall which artist I'm thinking of, but I remember hearing a professional comic book artist (DC?) saying he sucks at drawing women in comparison.

>>4434539
>>4434736
Can’t find the other ones, lost in the sea of Pinterest. I can’t find sauce on the bottom 2

>>4434689
Glad to have met bare minimum this time
Last time i posted something some anon just told me to kys lol

>>4434714
Lmao

>>4434735
Oof

>>4433299
Thanks lad

>>4433300
Though I don't condone it, what's stopping you?

>>4433343
Will do!

>>4433345
I can't teach you any better than learning fundies and copying your favorite artists will

>>4433372
Thanks! Go for it; could always use more

>>4434714
GOAT post kek

>>4433206
I like the aesthetic you're going for. I like the expression you have in the first panel but the eyes are very uneven in size and placement, the nose and ear lack definition. Also hands. I'd also suggest having your hatching follow the form it's describing rather than placing it flat. You do it correctly along the hair on both panels and that lip on the opening in the third, for example, but then don't along the neck and some patches of the robe.

>>4434781
Nargyle is a great one for you to study,for you particular style.

>>4434844
*Nargyle is the bottom right

Sketches

>>4434857
very nice sketches

>>4434853
spanks, I guess I had a few of her poses saved as refs. It's pretty close, the faces are nice and loose, but they could use a little more detail. I'll try a few

>>4434857
Do you post your art anywhere else? I like you proportions and rendering. Ever considered making comics?

>>4434424
what is the psychology behind this type of crap

>>4435048
Low testosterone

>>4435048
Good taste

>>4435048
Mental illness

>>4435226
you wish

>>4434424
if you actually committed and made the furry character in the style of minecraft model it would be more creative and interesting if done well. right now it clashes so hard with the BG and comes off tacky.

>>4434857
Solid forms

>>4434791
Blog?

>>4434736
>I think i like long pointy faces
>anyone have any artist recs?
sycra lmao

>t.struggling to figure out how lighting and godrays work
I'm having fun trying to figure out a fun pose.

>>4435339
It’s obviously meant to be ironic you autist. He should commit to not drawing gay furry shit.

>>4432043
lol

>>4435432
>DOOD it's suppose to like like shit
HAHAHA. DOOD IRONY AHAHAHAHAHA GET IT? HAHAHA
kys

>>4435447
this is what's at the forefront of your mind? some dying cringe feminist podcast? seriously?

>>4435409
>struggling to figure out how lighting and godrays work
Learn perspective, that's what made light and shadows really make sense to me.

>>4435409
Here:
>>4435313

I posted this in some inspo thread. Maybe it might be of use to you idk

>>4435379
Saved. This is so cool.

>>4435658
Thanks, this really helps

>>4435656
Yeah I've been doing that too.
I found a guy on youtube with really good perspective videos, but have also been meaning to pick up a book like perspective made easy to help out.

>>4435658
Since you liked the Digimon movies...did you watch Summer Wars?

>>4435363
I like it.

>>4432298
pornCHADS vs discordtrannies

>>4435855
thank you friend

>>4432454
>shark snout profile

Always hated this. Noses are cute why do anime people go to such lengths to destroy them?

>>4434632
I bet you have like 1000 followers on twitter

>>4434424
I'm not a furry but this is admittedly very well made. Good job, anon

Fourth girl done - three more to go.

the chad illustrator profile vs the virgin doodle sideface

>>4436001
Don't use pop's art to shitpost

>>4436016
ill shame people into being a better artist

>>4436019
Negativity breeds only suffering
Sufferug breeds hate
Hate breeds anger
Anger breeds destruction

>>4436021
goood goooooood

The shadows are getting a bit better now, still need to look at more godray references though, for now I'm going with this really simplified version of them.

>>4435996
I really love this anon, your linework is especially attractive.
I don't know what it is, but I like how thin the lines are.
Your style's really cool too, it's a nice blend of anime aesthetics with a slightly westernized linework and coloring.
You have a twitter?

>>4435933
Lol i don't even have a twitter

>>4435403
@ardent_knight

>>4435500
Drawing is solid, though it seems unfinished judging from the lines and composition. Could stand to use more variations in line weight to make it pop out more.

>>4436137
Thanks! I'm new ish to twitter, but I'm @malintfalch

wip

>>4436256
Looking really nice so far, my only suggestion would be to up the value contrast as it is rather difficult to read right now

>>4436259
Thank you, yeah; I will do that, still blocking in the shadows atm

>>4434736
I really need to read that color and light book, tried some stuff with different colors

How do you make the line work pop after coloring? Do i need more line width variation? I’m still a sucker for just plain B&W

>>4436256
done desu ef it

>>4436256
done desu f it

>>4436359
Nice
How did you get that sky gradient by the way?

>>4436376
the gradient tool, pick white and sky-blue... then click on canvas

>>4436380
Wow, didn't think it would be that easy.
I was trying to blend it by hand a few days ago.

>>4436389
bruh... even powerpoint does it

>>4436256
Best one ITT

>>4435850
>did you watch Summer Wars?
of course! Great animation and character designs by Yoshiyuki Sadamoto

>>4436389
>>4436376

lol there's been a gradient tool in just about every digital software since forever. how is this possible, have you never tried to google the solution?

>>4436423
is there a gradient in procreate? I always use a giant soft round brush, but its a pain in the ass

>>4436262
Some mash up thing i found on twitter, time to color

>>4436402
>>4436423
I've barely explored the technical side of photoshop.
I've just been sticking to hard round, soft round, and a handful of custom brushes I made.
Occasionally I use the lasso tool to cut an move stuff but that's as deep as I get into it.
I still have much to learn.

>>4436433
dude, again just google the solution lol , you'll most likely find dozens on youtube.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hoYx4isVvgo

you really need to be more proactive in solving your creative problems

>>4434388
your anatomy is not following forms

>>4436475
did you honestly draw a male body builder's body and slapped high heels and anime girl face onto him?

the fuck lol

>>4436530
i remade his drawing, so basically yes

>>4436541
I mean at least draw a female body builder with the fake bimbo tits. this just looks weird lol

>>4436612
there's barely any difference between a jacked female bodybuilder and a `slim´ male one. also the whole point of the redrawn was the anatomy, the tits would just get in the way

>>4436625
>there's barely any difference between a jacked female bodybuilder and a `slim´ male one.

Not that one you replied to, but tell me. What is bone structure?

>>4436640
>muh wide hips at 5%bf and 200 pounds of muscle
lmao-ing @ (you)

Maybe unfortunate timing to start posting here, especially with my kind of image but anyway.
Looking for some feedback here, what did I fuck up the most? What should I work on?

>>4436742
you forgot to give her a penis locked nice and tight in a cock cage.

>>4436750
Not really into futa bro..

>>4434857
Blog?

>>4436684
this entire ordeal is revolting, and you should all be ashmed of yourselves. the muscles give it some v, but her pelvis is still squareish with collarbone

>>4436753
you might as well be, if you're jerk off to shit like this desu

>>4436852
Rude..

>>4432226
heyo fisher

>>4436898
whats up

>>4436742
blog?

>>4436928
existing. how you handling the carooner virus?

>>4436939
Don't have something like that, I'm just a random trying to improve.

>>4436742
LOOMIS NOW

>>4436989
Look I can handle the banter, I know my drawing is kind of shit.
But if you guys don't tell me what exactly makes it shit I can't work on it.

>>4436947
our city is ground zero and we still haven't locked down. I ride the train every day so im probably fucked

>>4437038
Wash your hands cover your mouth and eat ur vegetles

>>4437046
Stay safe yourself

>>4437025
There's no point in being specific at this level. It's fundamentally fucked. Specific critiques are for people that have grinded more and are struggling with more things that aren't easily solvable by studying fundies. Now scram.

>>4432226
GO GO GO >>4437159

>>4437160
Already?

>>4436852
This guy wasnt me btw

I love muscle women.

>>4436870

>>4436359
soul. although i dont know if the smooth gradient sky goes well with blocky coloring in everything else